Viva Gta San Andreas. Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 (edited) hi Edited November 29, 2011 by Viva Gta San Andreas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akdealer Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 What the f*ck is this? You should make a kid or teen book outta that or something. because it sure doesent fit in here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 akdealer: Who are you to talk about stories, you havn't posted a story as far as I know Viva Gta San Andreas: Not bad, keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 akdealer: Who are you to talk about stories, you havn't posted a story as far as I know Viva Gta San Andreas: Not bad, keep going pwned Viva, its a good story, like not all story's are related to GTA in here, You could become a professinal writer with practice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viva Gta San Andreas. Posted November 21, 2006 Author Share Posted November 21, 2006 (edited) Uh sorry akdealer, I didn't know you had to post about GTA related things in a non GTA related section. Sorry if it's not one of those GTA fanfics - I'm not so good at writing about things I can't really relate to? Catch my drift? I might continue writing it tomorrow. Edit: Sorry akdealer, I had no idea you only had 5 posts. Edited November 21, 2006 by Viva Gta San Andreas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Oooh double pwned! Anyway, is that the opening scene? Or is it like halfway through the story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viva Gta San Andreas. Posted November 21, 2006 Author Share Posted November 21, 2006 (edited) hi Edited November 29, 2011 by Viva Gta San Andreas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Ok, waiting for Chapter 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akdealer Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 What the f*ck! You want a war you pedophilic children story writer? Ill f*ck yo ass up so bad they need to chock your chest a 100 times to even make you start breathing properly. I dont think you should bring that sh*t up here,cuz everyone knows that punks like you jump up to get beat down. Dont post a reply to this,because then Ill really pity your sorry ass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 You want a war you pedophilic children story writer? How do you know he isn's a kid himself to say that? I hope you stfu before a moderator show you the exit. @Viva: I like the way you started the story. The first sentence really misled me, I thought there ight have been a duel going on or something. I am expecting Chapter 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Definitely worth continuing. It's something totally different to pretty much all things on here, so it's refreshing and original to see. I like the way you're telling it, too: it flows really well, so even the small part you've written so far has been enjoyable to read. Continue! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moth Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 good begining man you should write the first chapter man peace out Formerly known as The General Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 It sounds cool dude! Can't wait for Chapter 1 and good Opening. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akdealer Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 Verbal warning or no verbal warning,I still think your writing is rubbish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rashon. Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 Verbal warning or no verbal warning,I still think your writing is rubbish. Would you shut your dumbass up? If you don't like the story, don't post in this topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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