TonyZimmzy Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 (edited) THIS STORY/SCRIPT IS FINISHED. IT IS COMPLETED. IF YOU ARE NEW HERE, PLEASE FEEL FREE TO READ AND REPLY TO IT, AND HAVE FUN. Heart City Stories has been released on Febuary 17TH 2007. The Game: To everyone who has read or is still currently reading this, It's time to play the game of "Guess the Protagonist for Heart City Stories." Current List: Cubanwhip has picked Loki. EmoPat has picked David Cross. blackadder18 has picked Gary Strohmeyer. LuigiEspadachin has picked Roberto Sucré. ya mum has picked Will Townsend. I figured everyone who is gonna guess has guessed. It's still a pretty nice list, so I'm greatful. But you all got your guesses wrong. _______________________________________________________________ This isn't exactly a regular FanFic, and I'm not going to stop writing GTA: Old Times, but this is a project I've been thinking of doing for a few weeks, and I was bored today and got around to writing it. It is a script like story of what I would like Grand Theft Auto IV to be. GRAND THEFT AUTO IV: HEART CITY BOXART. CLICK HERE TO VIEW. From Left to Right: Helicopter, Yakuza Thug & Car. Roberto Sucré, Japanese Dojo (Behind GTAIV Logo), Close-up Hitman Eyes, Protagonist Sean Wood. Derek Doherty, Carter Raimi, Gary Strohmeyer. GRAND THEFT AUTO IV: HEART CITY BOXART (BACK). CLICK HERE TO VIEW. From Left to Right: David Cross, Bridget Marshall, Joanne Sucré. Ruby McAllester, Jamie Vega, Cari Xu. Ryan Saint. GRAND THEFT AUTO IV: HEART CITY MAP (SO FAR). CLICK HERE TO VIEW. --- GRAND THEFT AUTO IV: HEART CITY BOXART (DEMO). CLICK HERE TO VIEW. From Left to Right: Helicopter, Irish logo, Yakuza logo, Close-up of a Hitman's eyes, Mike Toreno. Motorway at Night, Cars, Roberto (Behind GTAIV logo), Joanne, Gary. Evening News Arena in Gadebridge City, Protagonist Sean Wood. GRAND THEFT AUTO IV: HEART CITY BOXART (BACK) (DEMO). CLICK HERE TO VIEW. From Left to Right: Heart City, Rejects gang logo, Downtown Grant Gilmoore, Ruby McAllester, David Cross, Ryan Saint SUPPORT SECTIONSlap this snazzy design in your sig to show your support: CODE: [img=http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/3695/hcsigsupportvr3.jpg] More coming soon! UPDATES SECTIONFeb. 17: The Final Update: Heart City Stories has been released, and can be found HERE Feb. 15: Added "The Aftermath", depicting what happened to Sean after the storyline ended. One more update to take place in the near future, and that's it. Feb. 11: Finished the story. Thanks for reading for the past four months. Feb. 09: Finished adding all characters to the list + Added New Mission: "Celebrity Snatcher" Feb. 08: Updated Radio to fit 2007 closer now that new songs are out + Added New Mission: "White Wash". There are currently three missions left of this script, two Casino missions, and the Final mission. Feb. 07: ADDED MAP! Although close to end of the script, it's never too late for a map. Jan. 30: Added New Characters + Added New Mission: "Get Carter" Jan. 23: Added New Characters + Updated List + Added New Mission: "A Woman Scorn" Jan. 18: Added New Boxarts!! Jan. 17: Added Donny Jackson to Character List + A New Mission: "H 25 GO" Jan. 16: Added Johnny Krenz + Biff "Arty" Archeuson to Character List + A New Mission: "Shakedown" Jan. 12: Added Ryan Saint to Character List + Updated List + A New Mission: "Gas Panic!" Jan. 08: Added A Pissload of New Characters! + A New Mission: "The Longshot" Jan. 05: Added Many New Characters! Jan. 05: Added New Mission: "Last Call" Dec. 28: Added Characters Section Dec. 28: Added New Mission: "The Sellout" Dec. 28: Added Updates Section GRAND THEFT AUTO IV Heart City Heart City is the capital of Green State in England. Green State consists of Six Major Sites. Heart City, Gadebridge City, Downtown, New Stanford, The Wasteland, Saint Jacob's Prison. Heart City is based on London. It equals the size of Los Santos & San Fierro in San Andreas. Gadebridge City is based on Manchester. It equals the size of Las Venturas in San Andreas & Staunton Island in Liberty City Downtown is based on Detroit in America. It is the roughest area of Green State, equaling the size of Las Venturas in San Andreas New Stanford is based on the richer parts of London, connecting to Heart City. It is the size of Shoreside Vale in Liberty City The Wasteland is based upon nothing. It used to be a part of Gadebridge City. It links to Gadebridge City. The entire area is full of broken buildings, heavy polution, and It's where you will start your first main set of missions at. Saint Jacob's Prison is loosely based on Alcatraz prison. It is on a large stationed boat outside of The Wasteland area and Gadebridge City. It is where you will be starting the game from, and It is also re-accessible once you complete a certain mission, or you will be shot at by guards inside of a tower with M4's ___________________ RADIO STATIONS Sunshine FM Rock Revamp 98.7 Classic Test Radio Techno Slumber FM Melodies Heart2Heart Chat J Whack 106.6 Rap Mini FM Pop Sideline Light Rock ___________________ Sunshine FM - Hosted by Ted Ransom "Because Sunshine isn't always as light as it seems" Playlist: Motorhead - Trigger Alexisonfire - Crisis Iron Maiden - Different World Finch - Insomniatic Meat Rammstein - Mann Gegen Mann He Is Legend - China White II Underoath - In Regards To Myself Enter Shikari - Anything Can Happen... In Flames - Dead End Maylene & The Sons of Disaster - Dry The River Revamp 98.7 - Hosted by Lucas "Music is like a fine wine, With age it always becomes better" Playlist: Faith No More - Epic Failure - Sergeant Politeness The Breakfast Club - Don't You Forget About Me Depeche Mode - Enjoy The Silence Oasis - Wonderwall Kylie Minogue - Can't Get You Out Of My Head Billy Joel - Uptown Girl Limp Bizkit - Rollin' A - Starbucks The Police - Don't Stand So Close To Me Test Radio - Hosted by DJ Kat Kream "Glowsticks Will Never Die!" Playlist: Art Of Noise - Beatbox Kano - It's A War Carl Craig - No More Words Coffee Shop Mike - Musik Flash - Fix Soul Designer - Emotional Dave Angel - Airborne Gus Gus - Your Moves Are Mine Liquid Bass - In Fall Effect Alien Factory - Tomorrow Slumber FM - Hosted by Kelly Church "For those lazy Sunday mornings" Playlist: Failure - Saturday Saviour Peeping Tom - Caipirinha Lionel Richie - Easy Joni Mitchell - Both Sides Now Katie Price & Peter Andre - A Whole New World Radiohead - Karma Police Gary Jules - Mad World The Corrs - Goodbye Clay Aiken - Lonely No More Coldplay - Speed Of Sound J Whack 106.6 - Hosted by Jay Whack "Roll Through The Four Eight Six in Downtown, An' get blasted, Nigga!" Playlist: Jay Z - Oh My God 50 Cent - Hustler's Ambition Chingy - Ridin' Wit' Me Planet Asia - All The Names J Dilla - Geek Down Snoop Dogg - Candy (Drippin' Like Water) Busta Rhymes - New York sh*t Dr. Dre - A Nigga Witta Gun Tupac - Got My Mind Made Up Eminem - Lose Yourself Heart2Heart - Hosted by Fernando Martinez "Have a heart to heart with me, Fernando Martinez!" Mini FM - Hosted by Mini McAllester "All The Hits, All The Time with Mini" Playlist: Shakira - Hips Don't Lie Robbie Williams - Lovelight Beyonce - Deja Vu The Pussycat Dolls - I Don't Need A Man Westlife - The Rose All Saints - Rock Steady McFly - Star Girl Matt Willis - Hey, Kid Lily Allen - LDN Fergie - London Bridge Sideline - Hosted by James Vega & Sammy "Suicidal" Wattson "For the College kids who think they're making a difference in the world" Playlist: Fightstar - Hazy Eyes Aiden - Knife Blood Nightmare From First To Last - The Latest Plague Rise Against - Ready To Fall Senses Fail - The Priest And The Matador Story Of The Year - We Don't Care Anymore Brand New - Sowing Season (Yeah) Thursday - The Other Side Of The Crash (Over & Out) Good Charlotte - Keep Your Hands Off My Girl Yellowcard - City Of Devils ___________________ STORYLINE The Year is 2007, January. Sean Wood (Voiced by Wentworth Miller) is a 20 year old in-mate who lived in Liberty City, America and moved to Capitol City in 2006, and has been wrongly accused of assassinating The President's Brother. He was sent over sea's to Green State, England, where he will be executed by Lethal Injection in 2008. There is no easy way out of Saint Jacob's Prison, stationed almost one thousand feet away from land, and stuck on Death Row. But Sean Wood realizes he has to get out, find out who set him up, and kill him. Gaining respect on the streets of Green State won't be easy. The Saint's Gang residing in Downtown despise everything American, so you had better try and make some allies somewhere down the road or prepare to be killed long before the year 2008. ___________________ GANGS The Saint's - The Saint's own the Downtown Area, they are an all black gang. There is no other gang that can stand up to them in that area. The leader is Ryan Saint, born and raised in Downtown and is 35 years old. He always wears a Grey Hooded sweatshirt and jeans LIKES: Everything English, The food, The beer, The football games DISLIKES: Everything not English LEVEL: Very High The Reject's - The Reject's are a bunch of wasted youths, run away from home because they had no where else to go. The leader is Joanne, a 23 year old ex-army lieutenant. She is female but the rest of the gang consists of Male's. She is noticably psychopathic when she doesn't take her medication. She usually wears a black tank top and black trousers, and she has an eye patch over her left eye after losing it in combat LIKES: Anyone in trouble, always ready to help someone out if they need it aslong as they can return the favour DISLIKES: The Saint's Gang for taking over the Downtown Area LEVEL: Medium The Ace of Heart's - The Ace of Heart's are a street gang in Heart City, taking up the west side of the city. They all wear red & white, nothing else. The leader is Johnny, most of the time he wears a red hockey-goalie mask when going out to rob places, or commit other crimes LIKES: Killing Black Heart's members DISLIKES: The Black Hearts LEVEL: High The Black Hearts - The Black Hearts Gang are a street gang in Heart City, taking up the east side of the city. They all wear red & black, nothing else. The leader is Vince. He usually wears a black wool hat with a dark red heart logo on it LIKES: Killing Ace of Heart's members DISLIKES: The Ace of Heart's LEVEL: High The Yakuza - The Yakuza is a well organized gang in Gadebridge City. They wear black suits, and the important members wear white suits. The leader is Cari. He is well trained in Martial Arts, and believes that without honor a man is nothing. He is half Japanese and half English, and it causes alot of controversy with the Yakuza in other parts of the world, who are all full blooded Japanese LIKES: Street raceing, Modding cars, Collecting cars DISLIKES: The Saint's LEVEL: High The Fox Gang - The Fox Gang is a small gang of all women. They are based in Gadebridge City. The leader is Bridget, and is often mistaken for her blonde hair and blue eyes as being a goody two-shoes girl, being only 21 years old. They usually perform bank heists throughout Green State, and are under-rated as being a dangerous gang LIKES: Heavy weapons, Cute guys and fast bikes, The Saint's DISLIKES: The Yakuza, The Reject's LEVEL: Low The Turf Gang - The Turf Gang are lead by Turf, a 41 year old black man, and the gang is all black. They were part of The Saint's, but in jail they are known only as The Turf's, named after Turf LIKES: Everything English DISLIKES: Everything LEVEL: High The Rick Gang - The Rick Gang are lead by Rick, a 30 year old man. Rick got sick of being pushed around by The Turf's in prison, and pulled together a bunch of inmates who were also sick of them LIKES: Everything, very friendly but dangerous DISLIKES: The Turf's LEVEL: Low The Renegade's - The Renegade's are based in New Stanford. The leader is 15 year old boy Carlton, who is usually dressed in his school clothes, which is a navy blue sweater vest and grey pants. The Renegade's are a small gang of rich kids who are sick of their life-style and want to have some fun with the fistfull's of money their parents hand to them as their allowance each week LIKES: The Fox Gang, Spending money on trash DISLIKES: Their lifestyle LEVEL: Low Toreno's Men - There is a gang wandering around in black suits and shades all over Green State. They are Toreno's men sent to kill you LIKES: Nothing DISLIKES: You LEVEL: Low ___________________ CHARACTERS WARNING: THIS SECTION CONTAINS HEAVY SPOILERS Name: Sean Wood [Protagonist] Introduced In: Intro Killed In: Character Information: Sean Wood is 20 years old from Capitol City, America, sent to prison for a murder he didn't commit. After breaking out, he was betrayed by the two in-mate's who broke out also, and left him for dead in The Wasteland's. Sean survives and exact's revenge on them both, and continues to avoid going back to Death Row in Prison, where he will be killed by Leathal Injection in 2008. Character Picture: Click Here Name: William "Will" Townsend Introduced In: Death Row Killed In: The Boldest Swing Earliest Character Information: Will is your cellmate in Saint Jacob's Prison. He gives you some missions at the start of the game, and is killed by Turf in a Riot. Character Picture: Click Here Name: David Cross Introduced In: Handyman Killed In: Gas Panic! Character Information: David helps you break out of prison, only to betray you shortly after, and he worked with The President to try and find Sean after learning he's alive. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Rick Armstrong Introduced In: Assassin Killed In: Last Call Character Information: Rick is the leader of his own gang in prison, and breaks out along with you and David, only to also betray you. He is being protected by The President, giving him information on Sean Character Picture: Click Here Name: Theodore "Turf" Gates Introduced In: The Boldest Swing Earliest Killed In: The Last Temptation Character Information: Turf leads his own gang in Prison, once believed to be a trusted and loyal member of The Saint's gang, possibly even the leader at one point. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Trey "T-Stone" Saint Introduced In: Prison Break Killed In: Prison Break Character Information: Little is known about T-Stone, only that he is Saint's Gang leader Ryan Saint's younger brother. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Joanne Sucré Introduced In: Prison Break Killed In: Toreno's Last Flight Character Information: Joanne is the co-leader of the Reject's gang in the Wasteland's. She is an ex-Army Lieutenant who served in the war in Tokyo for four years. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Roberto Sucré Introduced In: Waste Of Space Killed In: Toreno's Last Flight Character Information: Roberto is Joanne's younger brother, and the other half of the Reject's gang leader. He becomes a good friend to Sean, and loans him a Cellphone and Clothes when he gets out of Prison Character Picture: Click Here Name: Gary Strohmeyer Introduced In: Bang, Bang Killed In: Toreno's Last Flight (Supposedly) Character Information: Gary is Joanne's ex-boyfriend, a head member of the Reject's gang. Talks about his brother alot, and how The Saint's killed him, and he goes out of his way to try and exact revenge on them for it. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Mike Toreno [Antagonist] Introduced In: Cutscene; Waste Of Space Killed In: Toreno's Last Flight Character Information: Mike Toreno is the President of the United States. Set you up as the fall-guy for killing his brother in Capitol City. Finds out Sean has escaped, and decides to come after Sean Wood in England instead of Roberto Garcia in America, thinking he will be the easier of the two. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Hector Délieri Introduced In: Call To Arms Killed In: Betrayed Character Information: Hector is one of Gary's henchmen, who tries to cash in on the bounty over your head. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Mindy Addams Introduced In: Date Expectations Killed In: Deformation Character Information: Mindy works for Bridget in the Fox Gang, a ruthless gang of Lesbians. Joanne captures her and tries to make her squeel on the Fox Gang's new location. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Ruby McAllester Introduced In: Salvation Killed In: Final Destination Character Information: Ruby is the first person you meet in Gadebridge City. She helps you out, and helps organize a robbery, only to betray you at the last miniute, leading to her death. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Ray Machowski Introduced In: Hand In The Cookie Jar Killed In: Innocent Man Character Information: Ray is the corrupt cop from GTA3, here in England to help you out and exact revenge on the man who forced him out of Liberty in 2001, Mike Toreno. Sean, after learning that Ray has been selling him out to Toreno for Toreno to "erase his file", kills him. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Vincent "Vince" Apollo Introduced In: Truck Stop Killed In: Demolition Derby Character Information: Vince leads The Black Heart Gang in Heart City. He rips you off early on in the game, only to try and call a truce later on. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Robby McAllester Introduced In: Drive Me Crazy Killed In: Going Downtown (Supposedly) Character Information: Robby is Ruby's brother. He works a front at the Evening News Arena to gain useful information, and plans a heist with you. He betrays you following orders from Ruby and is run over by a car. It is unknown if he died or not. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Grant Gilmoore Introduced In: Drive Me Crazy Killed In: Early Retirement Character Information: Grant Gilmoore owns a Nightclub in Gadebridge City. You begin working for him to pay off debt to his club that you 'damaged'. It is then revealed that Grant is just managing the club for the silent bosses, The Yakuza. The Yakuza send someone over with Sean and he kills Grant, giving Sean the club for The Yakuza. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Suni Xu Introduced In: Grand Theft Auto 2 Killed In: Character Information: Suni is the nephew of the Yakuza Waka-gashira. Sean saves Suni's life, and Suni repays him by giving him Grant Gilmoore's club. Later, Sean is forced to kill Suni, but risks his own life to warn Suni, and Suni escapes to Liberty City. Suni finds out that Sean killed Cari, and swears vengeance on Sean. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Loki Introduced In: Communication Issues Killed In: Character Information: Nothing is known about Loki, other than that he is an Influential member of The Yakuza. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Nate Barcalow Introduced In: Early Retirement Killed In: Character Information: Little is known about Nate, other than that he is a personal friend of Suni's and kills Grant Gilmoore as a personal favour to Suni, for Sean to take over the club. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Cari Xu Introduced In: Early Retirement Killed In: The Last Straw Character Information: Cari is current Waka-gashira of The Yakuza based in England. He takes a shine to Sean after Sean saves Suni's life, but once Suni is not around anymore, he begins to resent Sean. He has problems with other Yakuza in the world, as he's not full blooded Japanese Character Picture: Click Here Name: Bridget Marshall Introduced In: Behind Closed Doors Killed In: A Woman Scorn Character Information: Bridget is the leader of the Lesbian Girl Gang, The Fox Gang. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Brian Massaro Introduced In: Power Trip Killed In: Character Information: Little is known about Brian, other than that he is a close friend to The Reject's, and Gary's cousin. He lives in the Downtown area and has been fighting The Saint's since Gary's brother was killed by them. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Marc Allen Introduced In: The Longshot Killed In: Gas Panic! Character Information: Marc Allen owns The Sandle & Pond Nightclub Downtown, but his business is failing and recieves help from Sean. After giving up hope, he tries to sell it to The Saint's, and he gets Sean to watch over the deal. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Contel Porter Introduced In: The Longshot Killed In: Character Information: Contel owns a Bombshop Downtown, and helps Sean out from time to time. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Ryan Saint [Antagonist] Introduced In: Gas Panic! Killed In: Toreno's Last Flight Character Information: Ryan Saint leads The Saint's gang which reside in the Downtown area. He is one of the main Antagonist's of the game. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Lieutenant Billy Miller Introduced In: Miller Lite Killed In: Miller Lite Character Information: Billy Miller is a Lieutenant for the Army Base in The Wastelands. He blabs on Sean's location (Downtown Area) and is shortly therefore after killed by Sean. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Biff "Arty" Archeuson Introduced In: Leak Killed In: Character Information: Arty owns a Mansion in Heart City and is very rich by using Computers to hack into powerful data & information. Always wears a turtle-neck sweater. He owns the rival Casino to the Protagonist aswell. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Johnny Krenz Introduced In: Shakedown Killed In: Demolition Derby Character Information: Johnny leads The Ace of Heart's gang in Heart City. He approaches Sean by telephone to try and recruit him into his gang. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Donny Jackson Introduced In: H 25 GO Killed In: Character Information: Donny Jackson started the largest race in Green State history, and is an excellent driver, who loves narcotic drugs. Has plans of becoming a big shot in the world. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Chad Prinston Introduced In: Chad Prinston Killed In: Character Information: Chad is the co-leader of The Renegade's gang. He is 15 years old, and is always jumpy and nervous. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Carlton Prinston Introduced In: Drugs, Drugs, Drugs... Killed In: Character Information: Carlton is Chad's twin brother, older by a few miniutes, and much calmer and more collective. Also co-leads The Renegade's. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Jamie Vega Introduced In: Drugs, Drugs, Drugs... Killed In: Character Information: Jamie Vega is a heroin addict business tycoon, and he owns a Shopping Complex in Heart City which is going out of business because of his addictions. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Sir Aaron Prinston Introduced In: A Woman Scorn Killed In: Character Information: Sir Aaron Prinston is the father of Chad & Carlton, and is a powerful government figure who is working with Mike Toreno on Sean Wood's capture. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Carter Raimi Introduced In: Chopped Killed In: Character Information: Carter works in the Chop Shop and is considered to be the leader of the workers, someone who has been there the longest. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Derek Doherty Introduced In: Chopped Killed In: Scorpio Character Information: Derek works in the Chop Shop and is Carter's friend. He is gunned down by police on a breakout of Carter's 'Scorpio' car. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Heath Hunter Introduced In: White Wash Killed In: Character Information: Heath owns the rival Shopping Complex in Heart City to that of our Protagonist, Sean Wood. Sean, with the information given to him by Jamie Vega, takes down his Complex. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Dick Rogers Introduced In: Celebrity Snatcher Killed In: Character Information: Dick Roger's works in the Casino which Sean Wood buys. He advises him on how to run a sucessful Casino. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Louise Hammill Introduced In: Celebrity Snatcher Killed In: Character Information: Louise is a pop sensation, and is booked to play at the Grand Opening of Sean's rival Casino, which was baught by Arty. Sean muscles her into coming to his Casino instead. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Bradley Churchill Introduced In: Celebrity Snatcher Killed In: Character Information: Bradley is a famous author booked to read a Chapter of his latest book, Did I really kill my 97 year old wife for her fortune? at Arty's Casino, but Sean muscles him into coming to his Casino instead. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Dustin Steidman Introduced In: Celebrity Snatcher Killed In: Character Information: Dustin is a daredevil stuntman booked to put on a show at Arty's Casino, but Sean chases him around the city and muscles him into coming to his Casino instead. Character Picture: Click Here Name: Gary Strohmeyer's Brother Introduced In: ??? Killed In: Before 2007 Character Information: Absolutly nothing is known about Gary's older brother. Character Picture: ??? ___________________ WEAPONS Pistols 9MM (Gadebridge City) Magnum (Downtown) .357 (Heart City) Shotguns Shotgun (Gadebridge City) Sawn-off Shotgun (Downtown) SPAS-12 Shotgun (Heart City) Automatic Tec 9 (Gadebridge City) Uzi (Downtown) MP5 (Heart City) Assault AK-47 (Gadebridge City) M79 Rifle (Downtown) M4 (Heart City) Rifles Laser (Gadebridge City) PSG1 (Downtown) Dragunov (Heart City) Other (Find Only OR Buy Outside Of Ammunation) Knife, Sword, Katana Sword, Baseball Bat, Nightstick, Knuckle Dusters, Hatchet, Screwdriver, Mace (Spray), Mace (Weapon), Spray Paint, Skateboard, Steel Chain, Dustbin Lid, Grenades, Molotiv Cocktails, Auto-Target Bazooka, Rocket Launcher, Minigun. ______________________________________________________________________________________ Edited February 21, 2007 by TonyZimmzy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greene Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 Its interesting and well thought out but unfortunetly i don't think it would work very well. But great effort Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 20, 2006 Author Share Posted November 20, 2006 (edited) Its interesting and well thought out but unfortunetly i don't think it would work very well. But great effort Ouch. Well, I'm posting it anyway lol. Here's the Intro and First mission. --- CUTSCENE A large SWAT boat pulls up outside of a large entrance, surrounded by barbed wire fences on each side of a long stretch of rocks, the rocks are being used as a path. The waves of the oceon are crashing into the rocks, and it's raining heavy. Two officers armed with M4's exit the boat, as the player exits the boat cuffed at the feet and hands in an orange jumpsuit. The player has a shaved head with some stubble on top of it where it's growing back, and hasn't shaved in a few days. Two more officers exit the boat behind the player and all four officers begin walking him along the rocks. They arrive at the entrance of the prison, and a royal guard opens the large gates and the four officers walk the player into the prison and they approach a sign in desk Officer Behind the Desk: Is this him? SWAT Member: This is him. Sean Wood The camera focuses on Sean's face as his thoughts are played outloud in a Narration for the player to hear Sean: My name is Sean Wood. I know what you're thinking, just another convicted drug dealer, rapist, killer or whatever else your mind can come up with. Well, I'm not. I'm on Death Row for a crime I didn't commit. The SWAT members walk him through the halls as his thoughts continue for the player to hear Sean: They say I murdered the President of the United States' brother, sure I've killed a few people in the past and I've been in and out of Juvy since I was 13, but this time, It was a crime I didn't commit, and yet because of my background...no one listens to me The SWAT members take him upstairs and continue walking as his narration continues for the player to hear Sean: The evidence was cooked, and someone out there wanted me out of the country, and out of their lives for good. And I'm going to find out why and who. The SWAT members take him into a cell, with two prison guards outside of the cell watching. They cautiously un-cuff him and exit the cell, as the guards shut and lock the cell, and Sean lays on the bottom bunk of the bed and continues his narration for the player to hear Sean: All I know for sure, is that one way or another, I'm not getting out of here in a bodybag. FADE TO BLACK "Death Row" CUTSCENE The sun is shining through the bars in the player's cell, as he's laying in bed. A guard patrol's the area banging his nightstick against the bars, waking everybody up. The gates unlock, as many guards are patroling the area's and a voice comes through the speakers on the walls of the prison Voice: Breakfast time, everyone up Sean gets out of bed. END OF CUTSCENE The player is standing in the cell which is now open, and you can now control him. The radar map begins flashing with an upside down blue triangle. Text comes on the screen: "This is your radar map. You can use this to get around easier" "Follow the marker on the map to get to your destination" "If the marker is pointing downwards, that means it is below your current standing position" "If the marker is a circle, It means you are standing on level with the marker" "If the marker is pointing upwards, that means it is above your current standing position" "Make your way down the stairs and follow the marker to continue". The player now has a chance to test out the controls, running, fighting, jumping, etc. The health bar flashes as you begin walking down the stairs of the prison: "This is your health bar. When it is empty you will be taken to the nearest hospital" "The hospital will bill you for your stay unless it is the Prison Hospital". The player makes his way to the caféteria and walks into the blue floating marker, which is still the same as previous GTA games CUTSCENE The player sits down with his tray of food, as a group of Turf's come over to him and steal his tray. The player stands up and gets face to face with one of the members, and from behind him a Turf member hits him over the head with a Nightstick, and he falls unconcious. FADE TO BLACK CUTSCENE The camera is through the player's eyes now. And he begins waking up, and the vision becomes less blurry. The player stands up and is looking around, it is the nurses office, and a female Doctor walks over to the player Female Doctor: Are you feeling better, Sean? Sean: (Rubs the back of his head) Yeah, a little... Female Doctor: If you're feeling good enough, I can discharge you back to your cell Sean: Yeah, I'm feeling good enough...Thanks, what's your name? Female Doctor: My name is Laura Sean: Nice to meet you Laura. Two guards come into the office and lead Sean back to his cell. His cellmate has just come back from solitary confinement and is laying on the top bunk of the bed. Will: Hey, my name's Will. I heard about what happened to you earlier today Sean: Who were they anyway? Will: Those were members of The Turf Gang, we have an on going fued with them in here Sean: Wait, we? Will: That's right, Rick leads The Rick Gang, and Rick is one of my closest friends in here Will gets off the top bunk and reaches under his matress and takes out a knife and gives it to the player Will: In here, you don't ever let anyone disrespect you like that and get away with it. I wan't you to show The Turf Gang that you mean business Sean looks the knife over as the cell doors open END OF CUTSCENE The player can control the character once again, as Will walks infront of you and says: "I wan't you to take out two Turf members, you show them that you're with the Rick gang, and you ain't to be f*cked with again". 2 Markers on the map appear, each of which are random Turf members around the place, as everyone is walking around to stretch their legs in the prison, people talking to each other and others jogging around the place, a voice comes over the speakers: "Five miniutes, then back in your holes maggots" The player must then make his way to a marker still holding the knife. As you enter the marker a cutscene plays CUTSCENE The player is standing where you left him by the marker, and the camera focuses on a Turf member selling drugs to a random in-mate. Text comes along the screen saying: "Waste him with the knife then move onto the next one". END OF CUTSCENE The player must then walk jog or run over to the Turf member, who has his back turned to the player, and press the Circle button when behind him. You will stab him once, and he will turn around to face you. You must then lock on using R1 and press the Circle button to give a rib shot with the knife, and a Triangle button to give a headshot with the knife, and block with the Square button, as he will fight back. When he's dead text appears saying: "Kill the next Turf member!" You get to the marker on the map and get inside. CUTSCENE The Turf member notices you carrying a knife and begins running END OF CUTSCENE You must run after the Turf Member, and when you catch him, kill him just like the previous one. Mission Passed! £50 + Respect +! --- Hope someone enjoyed the beginning, It's pretty fun writing this out so I won't discontinue it or anything, and hopefully you enjoy reading it, too. So far I've written out about 10 storyline missions, and some other things. I'll work on a rough map soon enough of Green State, but I'm bad at making maps. Edited November 20, 2006 by TonyZimmzy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted November 20, 2006 Share Posted November 20, 2006 It's an interesting idea I think, so if you keep at it, the story may become pretty interesting. It's original the way you are telling it strictly as a game, and it makes it easy to read, too. The only thing I think is a little pointless is a list of the songs on the radio stations: was there any point in adding that? It all seems a bit irrelevant. Nice job, though. It could turn out pretty good if you carry it on. Oh, one more thing though, how/why would he get £50 for doing something in prison? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 20, 2006 Author Share Posted November 20, 2006 It's an interesting idea I think, so if you keep at it, the story may become pretty interesting. It's original the way you are telling it strictly as a game, and it makes it easy to read, too. The only thing I think is a little pointless is a list of the songs on the radio stations: was there any point in adding that? It all seems a bit irrelevant. Nice job, though. It could turn out pretty good if you carry it on. Oh, one more thing though, how/why would he get £50 for doing something in prison? There's money in Prison, there are also Cigarettes, which will be Introduced in a later mission, which you can exchange for money You don't get alot of cash in Prison, though. Nothing more than like £50 a mission, because It's all so poor, and you need money in there for food to heal your health in the caféteria. Thanks for taking an Interest in the story, I'll post a mission every day for a little while to get things moving Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted November 20, 2006 Share Posted November 20, 2006 Fair enough. I was just pointing it out, because from a standpoint similar to the other GTA games, I didn't think it seemed very realistic to be earning money while on the inside. My example is the beginning of San Andreas - in the Grove there isn't money to share around initially, and for the first few missions the only reward is respect, which I think would have fitted perfectly with the situation the character faces at the start of this plot. I like the idea of the other items smuggled inside though, sounds cool. Looking forward to seeing more of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Nice one Zimmzy, rated it good Sean Wood - the next GTA protagonist Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 21, 2006 Author Share Posted November 21, 2006 Thanks for the replies dudes, means alot to me. This next part happens straight after you finish the previous mission. --- CUTSCENE The player walks back to his cell and text appears at the bottom of the screen reading: "You are now a part of The Rick Gang. The Turf Gang will try to attack you during breakfast, lunch, dinner and excercise time." A floating cell-phone appears next to the toilet in your cell and text appears at the bottom of your screen: "You may now save your game here when not on a mission. Save your game to continue" END OF CUTSCENE Walk into the cell-phone and save your game. When you return six hours have passed, and your cell is now always open, along with everyone elses (This is to make the game more fun for the beginning part, not being able to free-roam when not on a mission would be boring). You will see a big "W" on your map, and Will is downstairs in someone elses cell. You can either free-roam or go do the next mission. Free roaming in the prison isn't easy, as Turf members will randomly try to attack you. You can make your way to the caféteria and buy some food to heal on if you get attacked, or if you feel like killing some random prisoners and taking what little money they have. You can also go out to the excercise yard and lift weights to build up your fighting power, or use the excercise bike to build up your running and swimming stamina. It is recommended that you do that because you will need about 50% stamina for a mission soon. The player walks down to the big "W" and walks inside of the marker "Getting Even" CUTSCENE Sean walks into the cell and see's Will with another man who looks to be Indian trying to help a stab victim, who is screaming in pain, with blood all over his ribs Sean: Jesus, what happened, Will!? Will: Those bastard Turf members won't quit, they found out what you did and they're pissed!, they took their anger out on David here. Charlie, get some more towels! Sean: Do you know who did it? Will: Yeah, it was Dominic, he always has his bitch with him, some skinny little white boy Sean: That's all I needed to know Sean walks out of the cell. END OF CUTSCENE A blip appears on the radar, As you approach it, It constantly fades in and out and you can't let the trail go cold, so you have to constantly keep up, and about 10% stamina would help. After following the blip for about a miniute and avoiding Turf members, a cutscene rolls CUTSCENE Dominic has arrived back at his cell with his bitch, and begins hanging a sheet over the cell and he turns around and licks his lips at his bitch. END OF CUTSCENE You must kill two Turf members who try to attack you, then use your knife to rip through the sheet, and walk inside where Dominic is now in his underwear Dominic: Hey man! What the f*ck!? Kill Dominic with your knife, or your bare fists. He won't fight back much. CUTSCENE Dominic's prison wife stands up in his underwear and quickly runs away screaming as Sean laughs END OF CUTSCENE Mission Passed! Respect +! The player then can roam around freely still. If you wan't to make some extra cash you can go to the lunch room and enter a marker and serve prisoners food. You must run around the large caféteria carrying food for prisoners, and there is a COLD meter and a PRISONER meter, when one drops to zero your run is over. If you finish all 15 levels, with a checkpoint at each 5 levels, then you will get free food from the caféteria to heal. Save the game and now there are two names on the map. a D for David, and a W for Will We're going to continue with Will's missions for now, then move onto David's. This time Will's marker is right in your cell, next to the sink. Walk into it "Dealer" CUTSCENE Will is shaving by the sink as you're standing next to him with your arms crossed Will: I need you to push some product for Rick. He's in solitary confinement for the day for killing Dominic's prison bitch haha, somehow they havn't caught you...yet Sean: I've spent time in solitary confinement before, so don't sweat it Will: Must be some feat...you know, killin the president's brother Sean: I didn't do it, the evidence was cooked. Don't bring this up again. Will: Right, right, and I'm not in here for mass murder with explosives, haha! (Washes his face) Anyway, I need you to peddle some of this merch with me, and we've gotta be careful, The Turf's will be around Will lifts up his matress and takes out some plastic bags and hands Sean some Will: Come on, lets go, we don't have much time END OF CUTSCENE The player then has a timer of 2 Miniutes to get to the five markers on the map before The Turf's realize what you're doing. Once the timer runs out you should still have about two markers left, and Turf's will be after you. Once you've got one remaining marker left you will have to beat The Turf's to the buyer or they will kill him. A health bar for the buyer starts slowly declining. Once you get there, kill the two Turf members and sell the prisoner the drugs CUTSCENE A cutscene rolls, and Will approaches you and slaps you on the back Will: We made some good profit today, Sean. Rick will be pleased, I'm pretty sure he'll be wanting to meet you soon, Here's something for your trouble END OF CUTSCENE Mission Passed! 50 Cigarettes + Respect +! --- So that's three missions done now, the cigarette's get explained in good detail in tomorrow's part of the game. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 Cool ideas! I can picture this as a game already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 22, 2006 Author Share Posted November 22, 2006 Text will appear on screen: "You can sell cigarette's for money, or if you can find a light, they can be used as a weapon for a brief period of time". There will be lighters in most cell's. Usually on tables. You can approach one and be offered the choice of lighting a cigarette by pressing the Triangle button. The cigarette will appear as a weapon, and you will be holding it. If you punch someone with it, it will do the same amount of damage as a knife. If you wan't to sell them, select them as your weapon (A carton of cigerettes will appear in the weapon slot) And walk around to prisoners. Approach them and you should get an option saying on screen: "Press Triangle to try and sell a cigarette". If he want's to buy one, you will get £5 per cigarette, If he doesn't want to buy one you will be attacked by him, you can either run or fight him. Go and save the game, and now there is an "R" for Rick and a "D" for David. We're going to do David's missions next. Enter the blue marker for David for his mission to begin. "Handyman" CUTSCENE Sean walks into David's cell and see's him working on something with a Screwdriver on his bunk Sean: You feeling better, David? David: (Jumps off the bed shocked and breathing heavy) Jesus, dude, Don't jump up on people like that, OK? Sean: Sure, what you working on back there? David: It's nothing Will walks into David's cell and pats Sean on the shoulder Will: David, he's trustable David: Alright, If you wan't in on this, then I need for you to do something for me Sean: I don't even know what it is, but I don't mind. What needs to be done, David? David: I need batteries, and only guards carry those in their flash lights, so, what I need you to do is get to the power generator without being spotted, shut it off, and then steal a flash light Sean walks out of the cell END OF CUTSCENE A marker on the map shows where the power generator is located at, and if it was day time it is now night time, and if it was night time when you started the mission, it is still night time. You have a timer to get to the generator before daylight, and you need to move around without being spotted by guards or Turf members. There will be markers all over the map, pointing which way they are faceing. Guards will be Cyan, Turf members will be Red. Once you get to the generator, just hit it a few times with your knife or fists. CUTSCENE The power goes off all over the Prison, and it cuts to the Warden in his office Warden: Aw sh*t, what now!?, go check it out Guard: Yes sir! END OF CUTSCENE The player must now make his way back around in the dark, it is very annoying not knowing where you are going, and you will run into things alot, and need to back track and take different routes. Once you reach a certain point a marker will appear, it is the guard with the flashlight. You must run around untill you are behind him, when he is walking fowards and you are behind him, attack him with your knife or your fists. Once he's dead a cutscene rolls. CUTSCENE The lights are starting to come on again as Sean reaches David's cell, Sean gives David the flashlight and he takes out the batteries and tosses the flashlight away. Sean: So, what are you working on? David: A way to get out of here, and you're in kid. END OF CUTSCENE Mission Passed! Respect +! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greene Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 Im impressed by the missions. Good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted November 23, 2006 Share Posted November 23, 2006 Nice one yet again Zimmzy. Cant wait for the next mission/mission's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vanilla Shake Posted November 23, 2006 Share Posted November 23, 2006 I like it. Keep it up! Vanilla Shake rates topic good TC718 / <629 / CF5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick Papagiorgio Posted November 23, 2006 Share Posted November 23, 2006 It's a cool story, TZimmz Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 Not bad, Tony, Not bad. Of course, now I have to keep up with, what? 4 Fanfics? GTA: The Conclusion, SAS-1987, GTA: Old Times, and of course, mine (Say Cheese). Ah well, keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 24, 2006 Author Share Posted November 24, 2006 (edited) The player is prompted by text on the screen: "If you wan't to build up your stamina, you should check out the excercise yard". This is a hint as to build up some stamina, as you will need it soon. Go and save your game. Now there is still a "D" and a "R". This time we're going to go with Rick's mission. The player walks downstairs and into Rick's marker. "Assassin" CUTSCENE Sean walks into Rick's cell, and Rick stands up and opens his arms up Rick: There he is!, Come here you! Rick proceeds to hug Sean Rick: You've really done a number on them tw*t's, and I like it. But we're not out of the water with them yet. What we need to do, is take out their best Assassin, and that's no easy feat. You see, he has a 9MM, and those are very rare to find in this place, I'm thinking one of the guards is paid off, and what we're going to need to do is find the guard, so I wan't you to stay on the lookout, OK? Sean exits the cell END OF CUTSCENE A message appears on screen: "Go and look around, see If you can find anything suspicious". You will find one in a trashcan in the caféteria. It's a screwed up note with the words "Bob, call me later, need some more pieces." on it. You can also pick up the trashcan lid to use as a weapon. Take the piece of paper back to Rick CUTSCENE Sean walks in with the piece of paper Sean: I found a piece of paper with the name Bob on it (Passes the piece of paper to Rick) Rick: There's a security guard named Bob Sean: I'm on it END OF CUTSCENE You must make your way to the marker on the map where Bob is. He is outside talking to two Turf members. Waste them. Bob will start running inside to press the alarm. You now have to keep up with him and make sure he doesn't quite make it. Once you catch up to him, knock him in the head once and he'll fall over. About 20% Stamina is needed to keep up with Bob. CUTSCENE Bob is getting to his feet as Sean stands over him Bob: You son of a bitch, I'll have you killed! Sean: I'm on Death Row anyway Sean leans down and picks Bob up and looks around to make sure no one is there Sean: I know it was you who smuggled in a nine for The Turf boys, and I'm asking you now, where's my nine? Bob: I, I, I dunno what you're talking about! Sean: I'm not going to ask you again (Presses his hand into the guards throat) Bob: Alright! Alright!, I did! Sean: What you're going to do, is alert the Warden that said Turf member has an automatic weapon in his cell Bob: I can't do that I'll be whacked!! Sean: I'll take care of you, things are changing around here or havn't you noticed? Bob: Alright, Alright I'll do it! Sean loosens his grip and puts his knife back in his pocket as Bob starts running away END OF CUTSCENE Mission Passed! £100 + Respect +! Edited January 5, 2007 by TonyZimmzy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 25, 2006 Author Share Posted November 25, 2006 (edited) The player is once again prompted with a message saying: "The excercise yard is always open, and the bikes are usually free" hinting you should build up your stamina before going further. Go and save the game, the "R" mission has disapeared and there is only a "D" mission remains. Walk into David's marker. "Organ Grinder" CUTSCENE Sean walks into David's cell, and David is working on what looks like a home made gun Sean: What you workin on, Dave? David: I'm not working on anything anymore. (Stands up and faces Sean) I'm faced with a minor problem in our little plan, you see, A man in here smuggles in bullets for a gun every Tuesday afternoon. He smuggles in four bullets by swallowing them, and he sells them to Turf gang members who have automatic weapons. Today is the day he comes back with a stomach full of bullets, and I need them If we're ever going to make it out of here alive Sean: So, you're working on a gun? David: I used to build guns with my father, I can make a 9mm by using gum, paperclips, elastic and batteries...of course, a little sunlight helps, too Sean: Err, ok... David: I need you to get the guy whose smuggling the bullets in, and I wan't you to take him back to my cell, and I wan't you to rip his stomach open, and take them out of him If need be Sean: What's he look like? David: Medium build, brown hair Sean exits the cell END OF CUTSCENE The player must make their way to the outside of the visiting area, and wait for men to come through the door. A guard will leave the spot everytime a new prisoner comes back through the doors. Everytime a man who you think could be the bullet smuggler comes through the doors you need to knock him unconcious with a punch, kick, or if you picked up the dustbin lid over the knife, you may use that aswell. Once you've knocked a man out, a cutscene rolls CUTSCENE Sean drags the body back to David's cell which is now empty, and waits for the man to regain conciousness Man: What happened? (Grabs his head) My head hurts Sean: I need to buy some bullets, I'll pay £500 per bullet Man: What? Are you on drugs? Sean runs back out of the cell END OF CUTSCENE The player must run back over to the door and wait for another man. When he comes in, knock him out again CUTSCENE The player drags him back to David's cell and waits for the man to regain conciousness once again Man: (Wakes up) Did you hit me? Sean: Yes. I need to buy some bullets, I'll pay £500 per bullet Man: I've got bullets! (Pats his stomach) Sean: Good Sean picks up a knife from the desk and stabs him in the stomach, as the man kicks Sean in the face and starts running out the cell. END OF CUTSCENE The player must chase the man, and watch out for Turf members, as many spawn up along the way. Once you catch him, a cutscene rolls CUTSCENE The man realizes he can't keep running and crashes into a random cell and falls over and crawls inside of the cell as Sean walks into the cell. The man starts throwing up into the toilet, and Sean kicks him in the back of the neck, killing him. The man's head falls off the toilet and bangs off the floor, as Sean looks over in the toilet, and the camera's eye rolls through the inside of the toilet looking up as Sean reaches into the toilet and the screen goes black FADE TO BLACK FADE IN: GAME PLAY Mission Passed! Respect +! --- The Prison will be ending very soon, and the real stuff kicks off in The Wasteland Thanks for the replies everyone Edited November 25, 2006 by TonyZimmzy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 27, 2006 Author Share Posted November 27, 2006 The player should go and save the game now. There is now only a "R" logo on the map. Go there to do Rick's mission, or, go and free roam, doing whatever you want. Walk into the marker "The Boldest Swing Earliest" CUTSCENE Sean walks into Rick's cell, as a voice echo's through the speaker box: "Excercise time, maggots" Rick: (Stands up and opens his arms up wide) There you are! Rick proceeds to hug Sean once again Rick: You hear what happen to that Turf boy? Sean: What? Rick: He got found with it, and got thrown into solitary confinement Sean: Good Sean and Rick head through the halls as a prisoner screams "Riot!" Rick: (Looks around) sh*t, this isn't good Sean Sean: (Looking around) I don't see any-- A dead flaming cops body is thrown from the fourth floor rails landing next to Sean and Rick Rick: Let's go round up some of the boys, and quick! END OF CUTSCENE Four blips on the map appear, one blip for each floor. You have to run around going to each marker and getting each Rick Gang member to follow you to the next one, fighting off Turf gang members along the way, and avoiding fire and random trouble makers who wan't to fight you for the hell of it. Try not to let any of the Rick Gang members die or you lose Respect. Once you have collected all four, make your way back down to the bottom floor and go to the marker. Walk inside CUTSCENE Rick and Will are fist fighting with some Turf members, as Turf comes from a second floor cell with a 9MM gun and starts fireing down. He shoots Will in the chest, and Will dies Rick: Turf you mother f*cker! This is it for you! (Looks at Sean) Get him before he gets to anymore of his boys! END OF CUTSCENE A blip appears for Turf. There is no timer, and you should probaly go to the caféteria first to heal up. Follow the blip and make sure you don't lose much health from Turf members. Make your way to the blip which is outside of a random cell CUTSCENE Sean arrives at the Cell and gets shot at by Turf but Sean dives out of the way, as Turf runs out of the cell and begins running again END OF CUTSCENE You once again have to run after him, avoiding Turf members and Guards this time. If you kill a Guard in green you will get a Nightstick, and If you kill a Guard in blue you get Armour. Keep chasing him after collecting an Armour, killing or avoiding Turf members and when you get very close to Turf a cutscene plays CUTSCENE Turf gets surrounded by Rick Gang members as you approach him and stand behind him. He fires a random shot at you and misses once again, and runs out of ammo and throws the gun as the Rick Gang members close in on him, tons of SWAT members with Tazers and Mace Foam attack every member of the Rick Gang, including Turf. FADE TO BLACK FADE IN: CUTSCENE Rick and Sean are sitting in his cell. Rick's eyes are swollen from the Mace Foam Rick: We almost had him, this proves that he's getting weaker. Go get some rest, and we'll finish him off tomorrow Sean exits Rick's cell END OF CUTSCENE Mission Passed! £200 + Respect +! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted November 27, 2006 Share Posted November 27, 2006 Nice work Tonny, verry very nice work , you must be tired have somme and a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davo the Assassin Posted November 28, 2006 Share Posted November 28, 2006 Well, to be quite honest, this is the first time I've looked at this part of the Forum in a while, and what I see here I like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 28, 2006 Author Share Posted November 28, 2006 Go and save the game. only a "R" mission is available again. Go back to it "The Last Temptation" CUTSCENE Rick: This is it, Sean! Sean continues walking into Rick's cell Rick: (Hands a 9MM to Sean) We've got the guards in our pockets! We're taking Turf down right now, the Turf gang is down to around 20 members, while we have a strong 25, we're now stronger than them, and they know it! Sean: Alright, lets do it Sean and Rick walk out of Rick's cell carrying 9MM's END OF CUTSCENE A blip appears on the screen, It is Turf. He's in the excercise yard. While you both jog there some messages of how to use a gun appears on the screen, but we all know how to use one of them so no point in writing it out. The only new thing is if you target with R1 and press Triangle, you can hit someone with the handle of the gun. When you get to the marker, go inside CUTSCENE Turf is working out over at the barbells and he sees Sean and Rick walking towards him with the 9MM's in their hands. He laughs as his boys stop working out and get up, most of which have 9MM's strapped to their waists, or Knuckle Dusters. Turf stands well back behind them all END OF CUTSCENE Rick has a health meter which cannot drop to zero or you fail the mission. A big Blue arrow appears over Turf's head, and a message appears on the screen: "Kill Turf!". You must kill the Turf Gang members and it would really help if you have Armour, because this is a very hard mission with only a 9MM. When you kill half of the Turf Members, some Rick Gang members come to help out, and the mission gets a little easier. You should have about half health left if you started with armour, and if Rick has enough health you can quickly go to the caféteria and get some food to heal. Once you finish the Turf Members off, Turf will start running, and Rick says: "Go after him!, I'm hurt!". You must chase Turf through the prison shooting at him, he's wearing body armour and is very hard to kill, and the sound of gunfire begins attracting guards. When Turf dies a cutscene rolls CUTSCENE Rick limps over to Sean, as they're both standing above Turf's body. Turf is still alive, barely. Rick: Heh...heh...we did it, you did it. You did what I spent three years trying to do Sean lifts up his gun and points it at Turf, as the camera rolls through Turf's eyes. The camera is tinted red, from the blood running down his head Rick: Any last words? Turf: Y..You're both f*cking dead A gunshot goes off and the screen goes black, as you hear Sean and Rick's footsteps walking, getting quieter and quieter every step FADE IN: GAMEPLAY Mission Passed! £200 + Respect +! Go and save the game, when you wake up a note will be on your pillow, press Triangle to read it when standing near it: "The excercise yard is now closed because of the events that took place yesterday. The guards are on to you, so be careful - Rick." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat Posted November 28, 2006 Share Posted November 28, 2006 Bada ba ba ba, I'm lovin it! Sorry, couldn't resist. Good work, Tony! Can't wait for the next chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 29, 2006 Author Share Posted November 29, 2006 This is the last Prison mission before you begin missions on the outside, where you can jack cars and play regularly and stuff. This is also a very hard mission and will probaly take a few tries --- Text appears on the screen: "The guards are planning something against you, so watch your back. Rick Gang members keep dieing." There are now many many more guards patroling the area's looking for the man who keeps killing all these prisoners. Go and save your game and when you wake up another piece of paper will appear on your cell room's pillow. Walk over to it and press triangle once again, it reads: "We're finished, meet at David's cell at 10PM, and make sure you have a piece! because we're busting out! - Ryan". The player now probaly has some time to kill till 10PM, unless you've just come out of a save at 9.50PM or something. So either save the game till 10PM, or free-roam, then go to the "D" icon outside of David's cell. "Prison Break" CUTSCENE Sean enters into the cell, where Rick and David are. David holds up a self made gun David: Ta-da! Sean: Cool, so, what's so special about it? David: It's three times the strength of a 9MM, when we're getting out of here, we're gonna need something heavy against M4's Sean: That reminds me, I've got us a boat Rick: How'd you get that? Sean: Don't worry about it, just hope that he pulls through Rick: ...Alright, me and David are going to go to the power generators and f*ck it up, you take these Rick hands a pair of scopes to Sean Rick: Put 'em on, and you can see in the dark. They're home made, but they work well David: I know, I'm a genious Rick and David head out of the cell walking and talking Rick: Sean's been killing the boys, I can feel it... David: I can feel it, too Rick: He's been in contact with someone from The Saint's, possibly even Ryan himself David: What are we gonna do? Rick: I'll handle it... FADE TO BLACK FADE IN: CUTSCENE Sean walks over to the payphone and picks it up and dials the number, as the voice answers on the other end Ryan (OS): Yes? Sean: This Ryan? Ryan (OS): Ah, Sean my yank-buddy, my little-yanky boy-hitman, so tell me, Turf's definatly dead and I don't need to worry about him getting out in 6 months and taking over The Saint's again, right? Sean: He's dead. I need that boat out by the nearest bouy to Saint Jacob's tonight Ryan (OS): No problem. I'll have my brother T-Stone pick you up, stay safe, mate. Sean hangs up the phone as the lights cut out. Sean starts putting the scopes on as the cutscene ends END OF CUTSCENE A brief tutorial explains how to use the scopes. Run to Rick's cell and get a 9MM. The alarm begins sounding, and as you exit the cell, all cell doors close, and a voice echo's over the speakers: "This is a code red. This is not a drill. I repeat this is not a drill. We have a breakout in progress" Sean: What the hell, they're leaving without me!? The player must make their way through the map, killing guards along the way to the marker on the fourth floor by the large steel bars. When you get there, David and Rick are already there attaching dynamite to the bars Rick: About time! Sean: I had to sort that boat out!, I hope it hurrys the f*ck up!, What are you doing anyway!? David: Take cover!!! Run away from the steel bars a bit, as the home made C4 explosives take the bars out. David and Rick exit first, then more guards begin coming. Kill them all CUTSCENE Sean makes his way out of the window and sees alot more guards down below on the ground, with the Waves crashing into the side of the rocks. Sean follows David and Rick along the edge of the prison as David fires down at the guards, they reach a large pipe and climb down it. When they reach the bottom more guards come, each carrying M4's END OF CUTSCENE David and Rick both get a health meter each, and you have to make sure that neither of them die. You also have to make sure you don't die. David is a good shooter with his homemade 9MM, so you don't have to worry about being heavily out numbered like most AI partners. If you manage to kill a guard or two grab the M4 ammo, It'll help you take out the rest. An arrow appears over Rick's head once you've killed all the guards Rick: Follow me! Follow Rick and David as you make your way to the entrance. Avoid M4 fire from the guard towers (They aim very poorly), and when you reach the entrance gate, David begins setting up more C4 as more light blue guard blips appear on the map behind you. Turn around and waste em, they shouldn't be too hard with an M4. Another load of guards will come, waste em aswell. David: Stand back! Move back a little bit, as the gates explode off. Follow Rick once again across the rocks to the end, as David sets up the next part of the C4, more light blue blips appear behind you Rick: Sean, Take them out! The player must shoot them dead, collect the M4 ammo if you want. More guards will come out, kill them and collect the M4 ammo David: Fire in the hole! You should be far enough back to not get hit by the explosion. The gates are blown off. This is where the Stamina comes in place! CUTSCENE David, Rick and Sean dive into the water from the rocks END OF CUTSCENE A brief guide pops up on how to swim and dive. You will have a COLD meter, it will slowly rise as the water is freezing cold, so you can't slow down much. You must rapidly tap X to swim fast. A marker will appear soon of where the boat is located at. About half way there a boat full of police will be after you with a search light. Make sure to use some diving to avoid it. Once you make it to the marker, go into the marker CUTSCENE Sean, David and Rick climb onto the boat where T-Stone is driving it. T-Stone: Quick, get in! T-Stone starts driving the boat away faster, as Sean positions himself at the end of the boat. END OF CUTSCENE The camera is through the eyes of Sean. You must shoot out any police boats that come your way as T-Stone drives the boat around, avoiding police blocks along the way, and you having to take them out. The boat will have a Damage Meter, so be careful. Once you've wiped out many boats, and after a long drive CUTSCENE Sean hears a gunshot and the boat swerves a little bit. Sean turns around and the camera focuses on T-Stone's dead body Sean: (Looks at David holding the homemade 9MM) What did you do that for!? Rick: (Stops the boat) You betrayed us, Sean (Shakes his head) Sean: Come on!, I've never betrayed anyone in my life! David: Charlie was a good friend to us Sean: What are you talking about!?! David aims the gun at Sean and shoots him. FADE TO BLACK FADE IN: CUTSCENE Sean has been washed up on the shore. The waves crashing into him as he lay face down. A dark figure walks over to him and stands above him FADE IN: THROUGH THE PLAYER'S EYES [CUTSCENE] Sean: (The camera's vision is hazy, blurrey and moving from side to side) Wh..where am I? The camera moves off of Sean's view, as Sean sits up with a large bandage on his stomach. He's wearing a pair of dark blue jeans. He sits up in a bed, in a dark room, broken furniture, and the only thing that looks stable is the bed, as a rat crawls along the floor, a woman comes into the room Joanne: Oh, you're awake. About time Sean: Where am I? (Rubs his head) Joanne: I found you by the shoreline, a huge wound on your ribs. I saw you were in an orange jumpsuit, so I'm guessing you escaped from the prison? Sean: Those assholes...Yeah, I got out of there Joanne: I knew you looked familiar. I saw you on the news later in the day, as one of three to escape. My name's Joanne, by the way. Sean: Sean Wood (Lays back down) Joanne: You can borrow one of my brother's shirts, just a black buttoned shirt, It's on the chair. Take it easy for a while first though, OK? Joanne walks out of the room. FADE TO BLACK FADE IN: GAMEPLAY Mission Passed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greene Posted November 30, 2006 Share Posted November 30, 2006 T-Stone, why does that sound familiar? . Great chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 Very nice , let's see what Heart City has to offer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 1, 2006 Author Share Posted December 1, 2006 T-Stone, why does that sound familiar? . Great chapter It was the first "Gangsta" name that popped into my head while I was writing, so I dunno where you've heard it from Anyway, onto the next mission! I got some writing done yesterday and so far I've done 22 storyline missions, I think this is the 10th I've posted. --- You're now standing inside of Joanne's house, in a black buttoned up shirt and dark blue jeans and white trainers. A save icon is next to the bed. Save your game and resume the game. You should get a phone call. Press the Triangle button to answer it Sean: Hello?? Joanne: It's Joanne, my brother was kind enough to give you his old cell phone. I may need your help later today If you're feeling up to it Sean: Sure thing, anything to pay you back for your hospitality Sean hangs up the phone. A "J" icon now appears on the map. Now that you're outside of Saint Jacob's Prison, you're in the Wasteland part of Green State. This area is full of junkies, bums and rejects, the gang Joanne leads with her younger brother. If you bring up your stat menu (L1) You will notice that your Stamina meter has gone back to zero, where you have a major Injury on your ribs, you cannot run for long. Also your weapons are gone, too. Go outside of Joanne's house and you'll find a beat down Romero, all wrecked looking and already light smoke coming from the bonnet. Get in and start driving around, look around the Wasteland area for a while to get to know your surroundings. There is a small Hospital, no Police station, and no Fire department. In the West corner there is a large Military base blocking any entrance to the water to just swim across to Gadebridge City. In the North East corner of the Wasteland you will find a huge Industrial area, full of factory's poluting the air. The small bridge leading to Gadebridge City is being blocked by Rejects on one side and Protestors on the other. You cannot run them over, as they are purposly set there. If you're done looking around the Wasteland, go to Joanne's marker and walk inside to start her mission. "Waste Of Space" CUTSCENE Joanne is outside of her brother's house, helping him fix his car. Her brother comes up from the car and notices you Roberto: Eh holmes, you Sean right? Sean: That's right Roberto: I'm Roberto, Joanne's brother (Shakes Sean's hand) That shirt looks good on you, y'know? Sean: Thanks Joanne stands up and wipes the oil from her hands on a rag Joanne: We have a problem that maybe you can help us with. You see, we're a peaceful colony. Ran away from the troubles inside of the cities in Green State. Back in 2004 this place was a part of Gadebridge City, which is right (Looks and points to some large buildings) over there. But it was nuked, and now this is all that's left of South Gadebridge City, most people call it a Wasteland. We call it home. Roberto: I fought long and hard holmes, to try and save this place, my moms and pops were killed in that blast Joanne: I wish I was here when it happened, I feel I could of helped out. But now this is what we live in, and we're happy with that. For the past three years we've built this place into a home for tear-away's. The rejected part of Green State. Sean: So what do you need me to do? Joanne: Some builders are coming in today to start construction on a radio tower. They're trying to add alot of radio towers and cellphone towers down here, as they see it as just wasted space Roberto reaches down under the car and pulls out a Tec 9 Roberto: Make sure that they get the point esé, that we don't want our homes and places of work being destroyed for radio towers Sean walks away. END OF CUTSCENE The player must jack a car, or get back into the Romero and drive to the marker on the radar. As you're driving along you will notice that Central Wasteland is much more damaged than the other parts surrounding it. The streets are all cracked and broken, and the sepia-tone fog is very thick. Once there, get out and walk into the marker. CUTSCENE Some construction vans pull up to a large red steel structure and workers get out and start walking towards it END OF CUTSCENE A message appears on the screen: "Teach them a lesson, by any means necessary!". Shoot at the construction workers, kill them all If you want. Some will run away, you can let them go or chase them down and kill them If you wish. Your cellphone will ring, and you answer it by pressing triangle Joanne (OS): The cops are coming, good work Sean, but you better lay low now Sean hangs up the phone. A two star wanted level has appeared, and there is no pay 'n' spray in the Wasteland. You must get back into your car, or jack a new car from the road and drive around the Wasteland untill you find a floating star. Collect it so that your wanted level drops down to one star. Now you can either drive around and look for another star, or just drive around and wait for your one star level to go. When it goes, the mission is done. Mission Passed! Respect +! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 T-Stone, why does that sound familiar? . Great chapter It was the first "Gangsta" name that popped into my head while I was writing, so I dunno where you've heard it from I think he means that T-Stone rembembers T-Bone from SA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 2, 2006 Author Share Posted December 2, 2006 (edited) T-Stone, why does that sound familiar? . Great chapter It was the first "Gangsta" name that popped into my head while I was writing, so I dunno where you've heard it from I think he means that T-Stone rembembers T-Bone from SA Ah, that would explain it. T-Stone Mendez! Onto the next mission, and after this mission I'll be slowing the pace down a bit, or I'm going to end up over-lapping myself and having to write out a mission then post it each time, instead of copying and pasting it from a saved file . This next part explains to the player who is after you and why, but Sean the protagonist doesn't know it, yet. --- As you're driving or walking, after about 10 seconds a cutscene will play. CUTSCENE "Capitol City, America" is seen across the bottom right hand corner of the screen. as it fades in from black, some men in suits are talking to each other, as the President of the United States walks into the room. The President is Mike Toreno. Mike sits down with bodyguards around him Mike: As most of you are aware by now, Sean Wood has escaped from Green State prison in England. Now, him on the loose is not so much of the problem here, but it is if he manages to get back to the United States. We cannot let him come back to the United States, I've worked too hard to attain this position, and I will not let up for some punk kid. I've got men down there working on his capture, and he will be killed, because that's what happens to scapegoats in my life. They do not continue to be a thorn in my side, much like Carl Johnson was. And we all remember exactly what happened to him. Now, I wan't all of you (Points at all the men at the desk) to go down to Green State, and find him along with the already stationed men down there, got it? END OF CUTSCENE The game comes back in, and you're continuing what you were doing before the cutscene rolled. Make your way back to the safehouse at Joanne's and save. The player now knows that Mike Toreno was behind trying to put Sean Wood into the ground, and It's not a personal vendetta. Sean was just the right guy at the right time to take the fall of something you will find out later. And no one asked questions because of his background, so he was an easy target. Once you've saved the game you will have a "J" icon back at the construction site you were just at, and you also have an "R" icon at Roberto's house. We're going to go do Joanne's mission first. Make your way back to the construction site you were just at and enter the marker. "Fight For Your Rights" CUTSCENE Joanne and a few Reject gang members are sitting, chained to the large red steel structure. As Sean approaches Joanne she notices him Joanne: Sean!, Those bastards won't quit, we're putting some time in for an old fashioned sit-in! Sean: So what can I help with? Joanne: With me being here and my brother off working I'm not able to get my med's. I need you to drive down to the Pharmacy Warehouse and get some for me Sean walks away as it fades to black END OF CUTSCENE The player has a blip on the map where the Pharmacy Warehouse is located at. Jack a car and drive to it, as It's across the other side of town. As you start getting close to it a message will appear on screen: "The van is taking the medicine to Gadebridge City, stop it!". You now have a moving marker of a large white van. You must chase it down and ram into it, do drive-by's on it too if you still have Tec-9 ammo. There will be a damage meter and when it fills half way up you will get a two star wanted level, but it will take the cops a little while to get here as there is no police station in the Wastelands, so you better hurry and damage the van, you will probaly need to jack a new car by now If you've been ramming. Once you've finished ramming the van the driver will get out , scream, then just run away. Get out of the car and get into the van and start driving to the blip which is back at the Construction site. Avoid the cops and try not to take too much damage, as the van is already smashed up. When you arrive at the blue marker CUTSCENE The van pulls to a stop, and Sean gets out and opens the back up and see's tons of boxes of medication Joanne: They should be in a pink box Sean takes out a pink box and walks over to Joanne Joanne: Thanks, Sean! FADE TO BLACK FADE IN: GAMEPLAY Mission Passed! £100 + Respect +! Edited December 25, 2006 by TonyZimmzy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 I agree, put more time in the later chapters, and make them better By the way nice chapters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 4, 2006 Author Share Posted December 4, 2006 So far now I've written out 29 Storyline missions in a Notepad, and It's become much more fun writing it as the missions have become more complex, so here's another Mission. It Involves the Introduction of Skateboards into the game. --- A message appears on your screen: "You can now do jobs for Reject gang members!, Open your stat menu (L1) and press the joypad to the right to bring up your gang stat meter!, this is how much respect you have from each gang!, you can gain respect for each gang by either killing their enemies, stealing cars for the gang and parking them in their storage warehouses, or you can do missions for the gang members!". Another message will appear: "You can now recruit one reject member! to do so, target (R1) and press the Up button on the joypad!". Once you've read the writing on the screen, you will have a "J" icon back at Joanne's house, an "R" icon for Roberto, and a Broken Home icon at a warehouse near the Industrial Area. To do the Reject (Broken Home) missions, you must enter the warehouse and approach a gang member, who will give you a job. You will have 15 jobs to do, which range from Stealing a car, Robbing a store, Assassinating someone, Stealing a drugs shipment, and Getaway Driver. Once you complete all 15 jobs for The Reject's you will get alot of Respect +, you will generate money outside of the Warehouse. The Reject's only generates the maximum of £250, but as you get further into the game and do more gang missions, they will begin to get bigger. There is also a checkpoint after each Three jobs you do. For the next mission we're going to go and see Roberto at his house. So jack a car and make your way through the decaying streets of the Wasteland to Roberto's house, and enter the marker "Bailed" CUTSCENE Roberto is wiping his hands on a rag as Sean approaches him Roberto: (Looks up) Hey ese, What you been up too? Staying out of trouble? Sean: Of course Roberto: Hehehe, you wanna grab a beer or something? Sean: Sure Roberto: Come inside holmes, my sister left her six pack in the fridge, her loss is our gain Sean and Roberto laugh and go inside, as Sean looks around at the house which is pretty old fashioned looking, and not too broken down Sean: This is a nice place you've got here, Roberto Roberto: Thanks, my dad built it with his bare hands back in the seventies Sean picks up a skateboard from the floor of the living room as Roberto comes in from the kitchen with a beer can Sean: You skate? Roberto: Not me holmes, that's Joanne's Sean: I used to be good on one of these Sean puts it on the floor and stands on it, getting the feel of it, as Roberto hears tires screeching outside and runs over to the window Roberto: Oh sh*t, no!, My car! Roberto and Sean run outside and see Roberto's car start speeding away Roberto: sh*t holmes!, Use that thing to go after it! Quick! FADE TO BLACK END OF CUTSCENE FADE IN: GAME PLAY The player is standing with one foot on the Skateboard, and the car is getting away. A brief description comes up on how to use the skateboard. Hold X to ride it, and tap Triangle when near a car to grab onto it. Once you go after the car and get near it grab ahold of it, and you will have a Balance meter as the text appears across the bottom of the screen saying: "Don't let go!, keep ahold of Roberto's car!". You must use the Left and Right joypad arrows to keep the balance meter in the middle, don't let it tilt too far to the left or too far to the right or you will bail and fail the mission. After you hold onto the car for about a miniute of crazy wreckless driving a cutscene will roll CUTSCENE The car stops and a junkie gets out of the car and starts screaming and running away END OF CUTSCENE Text appears across the screen: "Kill the junkie!". He isn't hard to kill, two shots or a few punches will have him done. Once you've killed him text appears: "Take the car back to Roberto!". Get back into the car and drive it back to Roberto's house, and park it in the blue marker CUTSCENE Sean gets out of the car and Roberto runs his hands over the car Roberto: My baby, I thought I'd never see you again!, thanks alot Sean Sean: No problem Sean walks away. END OF CUTSCENE Mission Passed! Respect +! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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