Brutuz Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 Brutuz sees Anarcheons car park in front of the GTAF building He'll be happy, neyways Good Chapter, but If I was tommy when Lance called, I woulda ran out, killed the sniper and lance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serafim Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 but If I was tommy when Lance called, I woulda ran out, killed the sniper and lance He teh l33t Forelli sniperz, 100% accurate lol . I wouldn't :x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 Brutuz sees Anarcheons car park in front of the GTAF building CAn you get his name right for once? Yay, stupid Stan died! Not Tommy! Can't wait for last chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 Brutuz sees Anarcheons car park in front of the GTAF building CAn you get his name right for once? Yay, stupid Stan died! Not Tommy! Can't wait for last chapter I know that Tommy lives.... I was meaning that we are goiung to have to party because Tommy survived Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serafim Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 Epilogue - The Vance Family Chapter VI – Making The Name Vance Lance parked the Cuban Hermes in front of the Cafe and got in. Phil, Vic, and Umberto were there, waiting for Lance. -Lance! How was it? –asked Vic, a bit worried. -You explained everything to him? -Well, not exactly… -said Lance, sitting on a chair near Phil. -A hitman was going to kill Tommy when I got there, but I called him earlier and saved his ass… So, we’re good. -That’s the best thing we could hear from you, Lance! Now we’re totally clean! -Yes, but how are we gonna live? We have a bad reputation on everything! -You mean YOU have a bad reputation, but I don’t. I have excellent news for you! -What? -You remember what Martinez did to Vic back in ‘84? –asked Phil. -Of course I do! Me an’ Vic whacked him for that! -Well, the General found out about the truth, and he’s glad that I took Martinez out! –said Vic. -Good! But… Why’s that excellent for me?! -I’m not talking about that! We’re moving to Las Venturas, bro! -For real? You know, I always wanted to be in there! –said Lance, smiling. -But that’s not the best part; the general wants me in a secret operation. I’m gonna work on the Area 69, isn’t that amazing? -Really? How? You were just a soldier! -I know, but he saw that I have potential to do this work. I’m gonna protect that place and take care of everything that passes through their gates. -We’re all glad at you Vic, you’re a real man! –said Phil. -It’s nice to see you back in the service. -Yeah! You got big cojones! -said Umberto. -And now you’re gonna show the army you got big cojones and then you can rebuild your life! -And when we’re moving? -asked Lance. -Right now! I’m gonna start working in a week! I’ll have to take a good rest first.-said Vic. -And it’s all thanks to you, guys! If it wasn’t for you, I’d be dead! Literally! -What about me, bro? -asked Lance. -Well, even though you’re always getting us into sh*t, you’re still my brother, and I gotta look after you. -And remember, you Cuban! You can count with us for everything, amigos! –said Umberto. -Thanks for everything guys, see you one day! –said Lance. -See you, guys. -said Vic. -Bye, Vance brothers! –said Phil. -See you around, chicas! -said Umberto. Vic and Lance flew to Las Venturas, where they started living in a small house. Vic started to earn a lot of money with his work on Area 69, while Lance started to work as a model. They think Lance would be a good model for marketing of suits. He agreed with the deal and started working on it. Lance got famous and became a celebrity, starring a lot of movies and working on commercials, earning a lot of money too. In 1992, a project of 60 billion of dollars was stolen from Area 69 by a black poor-looking guy, and the Base started to go on decadence. Then Vic was moved to the San Fierro Marine Corps. Even though Lance was already famous everywhere, he agreed to move with Vic to San Fierro. Vic ended his career as a General in 1998, and Lance continued to make movies and jobs as model until 2002. The Vance brothers were on the top. The End -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hope you guys liked my epilogue, as a good New Year present Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted January 2, 2007 Author Share Posted January 2, 2007 Great, Serafim, absolutely great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 Extremely good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 BRAVO!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forelli_Boy Posted February 8, 2007 Share Posted February 8, 2007 (edited) Just started reading this. Looks like Lance has learned a LOT since he first got there. I'll be sure to track this one. SWAT Officer Jack Thompson. I can't believe nobody noticed that. Edited February 8, 2007 by Forelli_Boy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted February 14, 2007 Author Share Posted February 14, 2007 Hey, Forelli Boy, nice to see at least someone's still reading L.A.N.C.E. Hope you enjoy it... If you haven't finished it yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted March 2, 2007 Share Posted March 2, 2007 Read the first 2 chapters; so far so wicked. I'll read the rest later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted March 2, 2007 Author Share Posted March 2, 2007 Thanks for the support. PS: Topic rating @56% lmfao. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raptomex Posted March 7, 2007 Share Posted March 7, 2007 Um, wow. That's cool. I never thought that deeply about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gouveia Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 aaaaw come on? 57%? Just some jealous dudes, because this is f*cking awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted March 8, 2007 Author Share Posted March 8, 2007 It was that wimp palaric8 that did it to everybody's rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HERDIST Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 (edited) I like it damn much! Thanks a lot!! But im wrongly rate the topic bad :S :'( im sorry! Edited March 20, 2007 by HERDIST Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coral_City Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 ^ I offset your mistake with my rating of good, no worries Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted March 20, 2007 Author Share Posted March 20, 2007 Heh, nice. I'm glad HERDIST liked it and that Coral rated it good. Thanks fella! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lili_86 Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 Hi, I'm new here, but rather old GTA:VC player. I read yo story 'bout Lance. That was fascinating, excellent, u're GENIUS! Really, that's true. I'm not sure how many girls are playing GTA series, but I'm the one of them. I've searched rooms in Tommy's mansion, but there are no any other rooms except the office and the bar, and the room in which were Tommy's weapons, health and armor icons. BUT THE STORIES WERE REALLY EXCELLENT!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrfreeman Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 i like your ideas man ! Good work ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 *faceplam* Bumping old-ass topics is a big no-no, babe. Don't do it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergi Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 *faceplam* Bumping old-ass topics is a big no-no, babe. Don't do it again. Lol who are you exactly to tell him don't do it again? Anyways yeah this was kind of pointless to bump this thread especially when it's quite obvious the writer is done with the story and won't continue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 Hmm... I don't know... maybe it's because I know a little more about things that you should and should not do on this forum, because I've been here since March, while you've been here since two weeks ago or whatever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 And I've been here for years. Next time something like this happens, simply report the post and do nothing more; there's no need to create a chain of replies in a dead thread, keeping it at the top of the index. Report and move on, and it'll be sorted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 Hmm... err... yes, I will remember that next time, Phillip or at least I hope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergi Posted August 22, 2008 Share Posted August 22, 2008 Hmm... I don't know... maybe it's because I know a little more about things that you should and should not do on this forum, because I've been here since March, while you've been here since two weeks ago or whatever. And that still doesn't give you any type of authority over the guy who bummped the thread. Oh wow you've been here since March lol 5 months. I doubt anyone would say you have any authority what so ever to tell someone else what they can do and not do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickstick Posted August 22, 2008 Share Posted August 22, 2008 And that still doesn't give you any type of authority over the guy who bummped the thread. Did you not read Eminence's reply? Next time something like this happens, simply report the post and do nothing more; there's no need to create a chain of replies in a dead thread, keeping it at the top of the index. Report and move on, and it'll be sorted. And yes, I know. I've replied, thus continuing the chain of replies, but Danni meant nothing by what he posted- he was simply advising mrfreeman to do such a thing again. I'm afraid I really can't see how you can get on your high horse about that. It's an unwritten rule of WD that dead topocs should only be bumped for a valid reason, and even then only by the author really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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