Gaja 90 Posted November 12, 2006 Share Posted November 12, 2006 (edited) GTA - EVO - Intro The year is 2006. A lot has changed in Liberty, Vice City and San Andreas in the past years. I’m going to keep you informed on the changes and other important things as the story continues. I also apologize for any spelling errors, since English is not my native language. Anyway let’s begin with the story, but first a quick intro on the 2 main characters and their best friends. - Mike Baker - born in Vice City in 1980. Son of Big Mitch Baker, former NAVY SEAL (3 years), lives in Tommy’s house in El Swanko. Owns a gym downtown next to Ammunation. All his life he has been riding bikes and now owns a midnight blue 2006 Yamaha R-1, and he and his friends Dom and Max started their own motorcycle club – INF control(the club now has 15 members, but the best riders are G (a rider from Liberty City), Todd, Max, Dom and Mike himself). - G - Moved from LC to VC in 2001, because of the petition for banning bikes. He does runs for Tommy, and lives in a mansion next to the Vercetti estate. If you have played Tekken you know his fighting style (while unharmed of course, or with a catana) Hwoarang. He is a pretty mysterious character, and only Tommy seems to know something about him. - Dominic – But everybody call him Dom, relaxed guy, runs the MR motorcycle shop, right across Mitch’s bar, also has a garage next to the shop. Lives with Max in a house across the north point mall. - Max (Russian Arnold Schwarzenegger) – probably the strongest, rides a custom bike, and works with Dom in the MR shop. When he isn’t working he’s at the gym. - Todd - owner of the Love Fist recording studio, and has a house across Avery’s building in Vice Point. He rides a green 2006 Kawasaki ZX-10R - Chapter 1 June 10th 2006, Saturday 10:00 AM - Starfish island, Vice City Mike is speeding on his bike across starfish island at 250kp/h. Suddenly another bike passes him with well over 300km/h. He tries to follow him but doesn’t stand a chance. He losses him and heads to the MR shop to see Dom. June 10th 2006, Saturday 09:58 AM – Vercetti estate, Starfish island, Vice City Junior is walking down the grand stairs of the Vercetti Estate, and gets in front of his fathers mansion. He takes a deep breath. Junior: I’m hungry (hears the sound of Mikes Yamaha, and turns his head towards vice point) Come on Mike!!! What the … (sees a black Hayabusa passing Mike, without a problem) “Who the f*ck is that? Things never get boring around here.” (He turns towards the Mansion and sees Tommy standing and smoking a cuban cigar) Hey dad, they’re fast aren’t they? Tommy: They sure are. “So it’s not a problem for him to beet Mike … I’m going to test him again, just to be sure. But first I need something to eat“(turns around and goes in). Junior: (Follows Tommy inside) June 10th 2006, Saturday 10:02 AM - MR motorcycle shop, Downtown, Vice City A seriously tuned black Hayabusa with a red dragon on its right side pulls by the MR shop. The rider gets of the bike and takes his helmet and leather jacket of, and puts them on the bike. G: Hey Max! Dom: (Gets out of the shop) He’s not here, but what do we have here? (Shakes G’s hand and takes a closer look at the bike) G: You like? Dom: It’s … man this is unbelievable, how much did this thing cost you? G: 100 G’s (smiles). Dom: Holy sh*t! G: Yeah, but it was worth it. Dom: How fast does it go? G: … June 10th 2006, Saturday 10:06 AM – MR motorcycle shop, Downtown, Vice City Mike is arriving at the shop and sees Max and Todd coming from the opposite direction in a white Yosemite. They great each other, and notice G’s Hayabusa. Mike’s phone rings. Mike (answers): Hey junkman, what’s going on. Junkman: You wanna race tonight? Mike: Why not, when? Junkman: Tonight at 8, but listen this guy here wants a team race. Your team against his. Mike: Really? Junkman: Yeah at least 5 of you guys against 5 of them. Mike: I sure hope that his pockets are full. Junkman: Yeah, I also have the parts for your bike here. Mike: Great, I’ll drop by the “junkyard” in an hour. Junkman: I’ll see you then (hangs up). Mike hangs up and joins Max and Todd as they observe G’s bike. Max: Look at back tire, it’s a 240. Todd: Yeah G really likes to show off. Dom exits the garage next to the shop and interrupts them Dom: It’s not just for show, Mike should know he’s seen it in action. Mike: That was G?! Dom: Yeah, you look surprised we all know that when he rides he turns into a devil or a dragon as the paint job shows. June 10th 2006, Saturday 11:30 AM – Tommy’s office, Vercetti estate, Starfish island, Vice City Tommy and Junior are sitting in Tommy’s office and are discussing business. Tommy: How’s everything at the Malibu? Junior: Great, since the tourist season has started the clubs and the hotels are full. Tommy (seriously): Ok then. Since we have finished that there is something I want to talk to you about. Junior: What’s up? Tommy: As you know son I’m 52 now. Junior: So? Tommy: Please let me finish. A friend of mine taught me that when you reach the age over 50 you should prepare for something’s. Junior: What’s his name? Tommy: Avery Carrington. Anyway you are 20 now. Two years ago I putt you in charge of the Malibu to see if you can handle running the most popular club in town. Junior: Why? Tommy: Because if you can’t handle a club how are you going to run the whole city. Junior: And have I proven myself worthy. Tommy: More then that, I would say outstanding, but you are not the problem. Junior: I’m not sure I understand. Tommy: I’m going to tell you a something, and I want you to promise me to remember it when I’m dead. Junior (doesn’t say anything) Tommy: Don’t trust anybody, and I mean anybody! June 10th 2006, Saturday 11:14 AM – Outside the “Junkyard”, Little Cuba, Vice City Little Cuba is originally been divvied into little Haiti and little Havana, together Tommy, Umberto Robina (the leader of the Cubans), Big Mitch Baker and Phil Cassidy killed all the Haitians and Auntie Poulet their leader in 1988 because the Haitians didn’t stop their attacks and they even tried to kill Tommy. Since the war Tommy helped Umberto to rebuilt and unite the two destroyed district’s into little Cuba. Little Cuba is now a nice place to live with lots of small houses a few basketball courts along with some other interesting things, but more to that later. The “Junkyard” is a tuning shop. It was originally a Junkyard until 1999. Since then it has turned into the biggest accessory shop in Vice City for cars and motorcycles. Mike, G and two INF crew members have stopped next to the “Junkyard” on their bikes, and are going in. They see a couple tuned sultans and a stock 1986 Deluxo, they just look at the cars for a second and start laughing as they go into the shop. Just as they wanted to go in a man exits one of the sultans and starts to approach them. Man (angry): What the hell so funny? G ignores the man and continues walking. Mike stops and turns around as well as the two crew members. The man pushes one of the crew members to the side and goes straight at G. G turns around and is now face to face with the man. The man tries to hit G in the face, but G avoids the attack. He tries it a few more times but fails. G: Pathetic. (He kicks the man in the stomach, and causes the man to lose his breath, G hits him in the face, and the man falls on the floor unconscious. Mike and the others are stunned for a few seconds and then finally come to them selves.) Crew member #1: So much for him. Mike: You two stay with the bikes just in case. Ok? Crew member #2: No problem. Mike, let’s go. G: Shall we? Mike: Yeah. June 10th 2006, Saturday 11:20 AM, Inside the “Junkyard”, Little Cuba, Vice City Mike and G are inside the junkyard, while G is looking at the stock Mike is just standing. After a few seconds a Cuban around 30 wearing a white T-shirt and black pants approaches them. Junkman: Hey Mike, how you doing (shakes his hand) Mike: I’m good, but I need those parts on my bike ASAP. Junkman: Hey not a problem. Go outside and get your bike in the garage on the right of the shop. You know where it is right. Mike: Yeah, yeah I know. Il be there in a minute. (Turns around and heads to the exit) Junkman: Hey G how’s the 500hp Hayabusa. - End of chapter 1 - Edited November 29, 2006 by Gaja 90 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 13, 2006 Share Posted November 13, 2006 Not bad. You said your english is bad. It's fine Chapter's are nice and lengthy (unlike mine ) but get some weapons in Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3933653 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted November 20, 2006 Author Share Posted November 20, 2006 (edited) Thanks for rating the topic good bro and for the reply to. Here chapter two. - Chapter 2 June 10th 2006, Saturday 19:55 PM, outside Mike’s gym, Downtown, Vice City The whole INF control team is in front of the gym in a pretty relaxed mud. They are waiting for their opponents to show up. Since it’s going to be a 5 vs. 5 race they’ve decided who is going to race. Mike: So it’s decided G, Todd, Dom, Max and me are going to race. A couple of minutes pass as the spectator number increases and the competition arrives. G is getting ready to race as he observes one of their opponents. Among all the bikes he sees a completely black NRG - 750. G: “So he changed the exhaust and he has NOS. This is going to be interesting”. Mike: (Approaches G in his full leather suit) So no problem for us tonight. G: “At least not for me” June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:18 PM, outside Mike’s gym, Downtown, Vice City A man wearing black pants and a black leather jacket around 35 is approaching Mike and G. Man: “The guy on the Hayabusa must be their leader” (He stops next to G) You Mike Baker? Mike: I’m Mike Baker. And who the f*ck are you? Man: I’m Carter. So you are the leader of the fastest motorcycle club in Vice City. Mike: Yeah and in about five minutes you’ll see why. Carter: Oh yeah? G: What’s wrong with you two, are we racing or are what? Carter: We’re here to race. Mike: Ok here is how it’s going down. Were all starting here (points at the beginning of the longest straight in VC), the road is pretty much straight, we race all the way to the docks. Carter: So where exactly is the finish line? Mike: You’ll se it when you get there. Carter: Just one more thing, how much money are you putting on the table. Mike: Since it’s a team race 500.000 $. Carter: Half-million it is. G: Let’s race. June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:33 PM, outside Mike’s gym, Downtown, Vice City All ten riders are on their bikes and are ready to race. There are five start row’s each of them has two bikes in it. Almost every bike has a unique paint job and is moded. Kate (the daughter of Candy SuXXX) walks in the middle of the front row to start the race. She raises her hands, and holds them in that position as all bikes start to rev the bikes. G turns the turbo on 1.5 bar and the NOS from wet to direct port. Kate sees that everybody is ready so she lowers her hands. At that moment every single motorcycle start’s accelerating and the pack of screaming machines heads to the docks. June 10th 2006, Saturday 18:15 PM, Leone Mansion, Saint Mark’s, Portland, Liberty City After a terrorist attack on Liberty city in 2004, a gang war started between the Leone’s, the Yakuza, the Triads and every other criminal organization in town. Every smaller gang in the city was destroyed during the war. Portland is now under Leone control, Staunton is under the control of the Yakuza, while Shore side wale is the territory of the Columbian Cartel. Only a small part of the city hasn’t been touched by the destruction of exploding cars, bombs, fights and other things. After the death of Salvatore Leone by the hand of Claude Speed in 2001, his son Joey Leone took control of the Leone family and led by anger hunted Claude tirelessly for over 2 years who has been protected by the Yakuza. At this very moment Joey is sitting in what used to be Salvatore’s favorite chair and thinking about the past five years. Joey: “I can’t believe that it’s been five years since that f*ck killed dad, but he paid for that.” (a Leone gang member comes in the room) What? Gang member: Don I got news. Joey: Well spell it out. Gang member: Well… it’s strange it seems that both the Yakuza and the Cartel have left Liberty. Joey: What!? Gang member: That’s not all. You know the guy that killed Don Salvatore, Claude Speed. He’s alive, he didn’t die in the car bomb three years ago. Joey: WHAT!!! Where is he? Gang member: He’s somewhere in San Andreas one of our guys saw him leaving with some blonde chick. Joey: Call every body. Tell them that Joey called a meting. NOW!!! Gang member: Right away. (He runs out) Joey: Oh I’m going to get you, so help me god. I’m going to get you Speed! June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:02 PM, Hyman Condo, Downtown, Vice City Junior exits one of the garages of Hyman Condo driving a black bulletproof Sabre Turbo with a golden V on the driver’s door. He heads to see the start of the race, but doesn’t notice that he is being watched. June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:03 PM, Area around the Hyman Condo, Downtown, Vice City A red Admiral is in the area near the Hyman Condo. Two rather large men are sitting in the front while a bold man in the back is dialing on his cell phone. Man: Mr. Vasquez. Yeah he just left. Vasquez: Ok, kill him but Rick. Rick: Yes? Vasquez: This is his town watch out. Don’t disappoint me like Catalina in Liberty. Rick: Don’t worry boss. I’ll get him. Vasquez: You better (Hangs up). Rick: (Takes out his Uzi) Ok boys, let’s follow him until we have a clean shot. The red Admiral starts slowly accelerating and takes the same route as the Sabre Turbo. June 10th 2006, Saturday 19:22 PM, Escobar International Airport, Vice City Three black bulletproof Patriots are leaving the Escobar International Airport area and are driving thru Little Cuba. Driver of the Patriot in the middle of the convoy: Where to General? General: The Malibu. Driver: Yes Sir. General: “We have to find him”. June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:34 PM, outside Mike’s gym, Downtown, Vice City Junior has seen the start of the race and is going back to his car. He notices the red Admiral about 5 meters from his car. He enters the Sabre, and starts the car. Junior: “Who are those guys, they are not the police, that’s for sure. Better be ready.” (Junior opens the glow compartment and takes a sawn-off shotgun). “Just in case.” He heads to the Malibu and sees that the car is still following him. When he enters Prawn Island he hears shots from the car behind, and immediately hits the pedal to the floor. Junior: Oh sh*t! Here we go again. - End of chapter 2 - Edited December 25, 2006 by Gaja 90 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3941278 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 20, 2006 Share Posted November 20, 2006 Nice chapter, It was me who rated the topic good the other day Because I liked the first chapter Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3941391 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted November 20, 2006 Author Share Posted November 20, 2006 Oh my bad , then my thanks goes to you to. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3941411 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted November 25, 2006 Author Share Posted November 25, 2006 (edited) Ok here's the next chapter. - Chapter 3 June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:38 PM, Inside the Malibu, Vice Point, Vice City The General who was riding in one of the Patriots is inside of the Malibu and seems to have lost his patience. He heads to the 3 parked patriots outside and speaks to one of the soldiers. General: Get everything ready were going to... (Looks at a small note in his hand) El Swanko. Soldier: Yes sir. They hear screams and gunshots from behind the club. General: Get those guns ready boys! June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:37 PM, Vice point, Vice City Junior is running from his pursier, or at least that’s what they think. Junior drifts around one of the turns. Junior: The KW suspension really does the job, (He takes his Sawn-of shotgun from the passenger seat and sticks it out of the window. He has about 100 meters till the next turn so he aims as best as he can. He shots the two bullets and kills the passenger) Bull’s-eye. (He makes a right and is now a couple hundred meters from the Malibu). June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:38 PM, Outside the Malibu, Vice Point, Vice City General: Get those guns ready boys! Soldier: Yes sir. Every of the 6 army clothed men, took an M-16, and aimed towards the source of the screams and gunshots. First Juniors Black Sabre Turbo appeared, the soldiers still waited until the red Admiral appeared in front of them. General: Fire!!! After that word all 6 soldiers opened fire on the already smoking red car, and after a few seconds and a couple dozen bullets the car exploded. June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:34 PM, Little Cuba, Vice City All ten bikes are accelerating to their very max. The first group of three riders enters the Little Cuba area. It is made of: - G - Carter - Mike The second group of five riders enters the area after two seconds, the group is made of Todd, Dominic and 3 other bikes. The third group is made of Max and 1 opponent rider. Back to the front G is in control of the race, he is riding at about 60% of his maximal bike power while Mike is just a couple meters in front of Carter. Carter: “I can’t beet the guy on the Hayabusa but I won’t let Baker slide (He shifts to 6th gear and presses a small button which activated the nitro and gave him the power boost he needed. At this point he is just 1 meter behind G). “Maybe I can still come first”. G: (He notices that Carter is just behind him, and decides to see what his bike can really do) “Come on baby, let’s go now”. (G twists the throttle to the very end as the bike utilizes all 500 horses, and shoots the speed needle from 280/290 to 350 km/h in a second or two. Carter and Mike can’t believe what they see, but they still keep accelerating hard. Mike also fires his Nitro as his bike is now level with Carter’s. Mike: (Looks into the distance, and doesn’t even see G) “Man that guy’s fast”. In the second group Todd is leading in front of Dom and the 3 opponent’s. While in the third group Max has used Nitro and is now in touch with the second group. While the battle in the second group is still waging G is passing the finish line and is starting to brake. Behind him Mike and Carter are neck in neck for the second place. They go over the white finish line, after 5 seconds the second group passes the finish line with Todd and Dom in front of the 3 riders closely followed by Max. The last over the finish line was one of INF control’s opponents and with that result INF control has won the race. June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:39 PM, Outside the Malibu, Vice Point, Vice City Junior stop’s a couple meters away from the patriots and is now approaching the General. Junior: Thanks for your help Mr…Uh? General: Ice, General Ice. You ok boy. Junior: Yeah, my car is bulletproof so they hade nothing on me. One of the soldiers approaches the general and junior. Soldier: Sir we checked the vehicle, there were two people in it, and they are dead. Junior: You sure about that soldier? Soldier: Yes why? Junior: Because I’m sure I saw 3 men in the Admiral. Soldier: We only found the 2 over there (points at 2 bodies that look like they’ve been on the grill all day). Ice: Anyway we have to go now. We need to find Baker. Junior: Mike Baker? Ice: Yeah, you know him. Junior: Yeah I’ll get him on the phone right now. Ice: I appreciate that. Junior: No problem (Junior takes out his phone and dials Mike’s number, and after a few seconds Mike answers). Mike: Yeah. Junior: Hey Mike, its junior. Mike: Hey watts up. Junior: Do you know a General Ice? Mike: Yeah, he was my commander when I was a seal. Great man, why? Junior: He’s in Vice and he wants to met you. He’s at the Malibu. Mike: I’ll be there in 10 minutes. All right? Junior: Hey I’m out of here, but you can find the general by the 3 parked patriots just by the entrance, you can’t miss them. Mike: Ok thanks I’ll se you soon. Junior: All right (Hangs up). He’ll be here in about teen minutes. Bye and thanks for your help back there. Ice: Don’t mention it (Junior turns around and heads to his sabre, he’s about to enter his car when Ice asks him) By the way watts your name?! Junior: Tommy Vercetti Junior. I’ll see you around. Ice: Goodbye. Junior gets into his car and speeds away towards Starfish Island. Ice slowly walks towards the 3 parked patriots and suddenly makes a surprised face. Ice: “So that’s Tommy’s boy, he looks just like his father”. June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:37 PM, the docks, Vice City Since the race is over the whole INF control club is celebrating, while their opponents are well let’s just say not in such a good mud. Carter is approaching G. Carter: Hey G right? If you ever find yourself in San Fierro give me a ring, maybe we get to kick it again. G: (Takes his cell phone out of his pocket and writes Carter’s number into the phonebook) Yeah maybe. Carter: Ok I hope we meet again (They shake hands and after a minute or two Carter’s whole team gets on their way leaving the INF control team to their partying. Not even a minute passes as Mike’s phone rings and he leaves in a rush). Max: Hey Mike where you going?! Mike: I have to meet up whit an old friend. Max: All right I’ll see you around (Mike gets on his Yamaha and heads towards the Malibu). The whole crew continues their celebration as suddenly police sirens are heard in the distance. Man: COPS!!! Every body starts running to their vehicles to escape the police. G starts his engine and starts going straight at the police car. As he goes by the police car he shows the driver the middle finger. The car does a 180 and starts chasing G. G: This will be easy (He checks his back to see if the car is directly behind him). Yes they’re right in my range (He stands up, and then jumps from the foot pegs to the tank. He then turns around and is now face to face with the police car. G takes out two 9mm pistols and opens fire on the cops. After five or six bullets he kills the police officers inside the vehicle, and then he drops the 2 pistols and turns forward and jumps from the tank to the seat, and speeds off. That was Chapter 3, hope you enjoyed it. Edited November 29, 2006 by Gaja 90 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3947813 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted November 25, 2006 Share Posted November 25, 2006 Good Story and Chapters! I rate this a definite GOOD. Here are some cookies, but don't eat them all at once or this will happen. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3947852 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 Oh man too many cookies ooh Now that's better, thanks man. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3948498 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 I'm loving this story, It's so original and well-written out Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3948635 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 I'm boostin' this up for my homie Gaja! Plz continue this story man its good! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3958756 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 Thanks man thats what I needed, I also apologize for the long delay, but thanks to GSF membuf's comment I wrote the whole chapter today. Fell free to comment. This chapter isn't really the action chapter but it explains a part of the story, enjoy. - Chapter 4 June 10th 2006, Saturday 22:02 PM, Somewhere in Vice City Rick the man who tried to kill Junior enters a recently build mansion. His clothes are dirty and ragged while Rick himself has a couple scratches over his body mostly on the arms. Rick: “Good thing I jumped out of the car before it exploded or I wouldn’t be here now, but when I think about it… nah Alvaro wouldn’t do kill me I’m his best man”. Rick enters a big dining room where his boss Mr. Vasquez is having diner while two in brown suits clothed men are standing behind him. Rick tries to speak with his boss. Rick: Mr. Vasquez? Vasquez ignores Rick and resumes his meal. Rick tries again. Rick: Um… Mr. Vasquez? Vasquez stops eating and puts his silver fork and knife on the big table next to the plate. Vasquez: Ah lobsters my favorite (Vasquez turns his head towards Rick). What happened out there? Rick: Well um… Vasquez: You failed. Rick: It wasn’t my fault Alvaro? Vasquez: Only my family calls me Alvaro, you little piece of sh*t. You’re not fit to kiss my shoes let alone call me by my first name. Rick: I apologize Mr. Vasquez. Vasquez calms down and takes out an old 355. Revolver and takes all six bullets out, and puts one bullet back in the gun, he then spins the barrel and puts it back in the gun. Vasquez: Say, Rick have you ever played Russian rulet? Rick: (nervous) No sir. Vasquez: You see Rick before I took you in you were nothing, and look at you now. You work for the Columbian Cartel as my number 1 man, but since you failed me I should kill you now. Rick doesn’t say a word, but it shows that he is scared. Vasquez: Rick I like you, so I’m going to give you a fair chance to live. You see this gun in my hand is going to decide if you are going to live or die. Vasquez: (aims at Rick’s chest) Goodbye Rick (he pulls the trigger, but the gun doesn’t fire). Rick’s breath has stopped for a second as he thought that his life was over. Rick looks at Vasquez as he still stands at entrance to the dining room. Vasquez: Hey Rick! Vasquez pulls the trigger of the gun again, but to his surprise the gun doesn’t fire. Vasquez: Oh f*ck it (as he still aims at Rick chest he pulls the trigger yet again, but the gun doesn’t fire). Unbelievable you have more luck then you disserve. Rick sit, sit next to me. Rick: “I think my heart stopped” (as he stands he’s thoughts are disturbed, he doesn’t move for almost a minute and then he slowly walks towards the table and takes a sit). Vasquez: Rick let me explain you a thing or two. Rick listens carefully. Vasquez: The Columbian Cartel isn’t as strong as he used to because of the tragedy with SPANK and the gang war we can’t afford to lose again. Rick: SPANK??? Vasquez: Yes, you see Rick SPANK was my idea but because of that incompetent bitch Catalina, our influence in Liberty was almost destroyed. Rick: Why? Vasquez: Because one guy, one single guy has killed over 50 of our men in 10 minutes, and over 400 during only that year. Rick: That’s impossible. Vasquez: It is very possible, can you imagine me at the moment when my phone rang and I was told that someone has ruined my 100 million dollar plan. Rick notices that Vasquez is getting upset and quickly changes the subject. Rick: That’s the past now we have to look into the future boss. Vasquez: We have to take over Vice, so that we control the flow of over 70% of the drugs in North America. But first we have to destroy Vercetti’s organization. Rick: How are we going to do that Mr. Vasquez? Vasquez: Plain and simple, we kill them all, but first go and change your clothes and clean your self up. We’ll fight our war tomorrow. Rick is about to exit the room as Vasquez tells him. Vasquez: Rick the next time you disappoint me, run, run and hope I never find you. Rick: I apologize again (he turns around and leaves the room). Vasquez: Now back to my… ah sh*t now my lobster is cold, f*ck. Vasquez takes the old 355. Revolver and spins the gun barrel again and aims at the bodyguard on his right. He pulls the trigger and the gun fires and kills the man. Vasquez: You there! Bodyguard: Yes boss. Vasquez: Clean this up, I’m going to bed. Vasquez stands up and leaves the room leaving the bodyguard to clean the mess. June 10th 2006, Saturday 20:50 PM, Outside the Malibu, Vice Point, Vice City Mike arrives at place noticing that police car is at the place as well as the fire fighters. Mike: “What the hell happened here”? He parks his bike next to the 3 Patriots and gets of and heads to see why there are so many police man around. But after a couple steps someone grabs him from behind. Mike grabs the arm of his attacker and twists it but then he notices that the “attacker” is General Ice. Mike let’s Ice’s arm go and they greet each other. Ice: You’re quicker since we last meet. Mike: Maybe, anyway how are you Ice? Ice: Ah not so good Mike. Mike: Why, watts wrong? Ice: Not here, let’s go somewhere quiet I’ll explain everything. Mike: Sure, I know just the spot. The two men go into the Malibu and then into Junior’s new office upstairs. Ice: Is it OK for us to be here. Mike: Yeah, my buddy Junior owns the place, so we’re cool. They get in a separate room from Junior’s office and each one of them sits on a black leather chair. Mike: So Ice what’s the big deal? Ice: Mike are you familiar with Area 69? Mike: No. Ice: Area 69 was a research lab during the 90es, but in 2000. They stopped designing jetpacks and other sh*t, and started designing and producing weapons. Mike: So, we got weapons here to. Ice: Not that kind of weapons Mike. Mike: No. Ice: No, weapons of mass destruction and weapons of next generation. Mike: What kind of weapons? Ice: That’s top secret. Mike: Wait a minute, so what’s the problem? Ice: Mike, Area 69 has been taken by terrorists, and the army and the US government needs your help with this one. Mike: What kind of terrorists? Ice: That strange, the security footage that we have shows that they don’t move like terrorists, more like gang bangers. Mike: That’s strange, anyway who am I working with? Ice: Wolf is going to work with you. Mike: When do we leave? Ice: Tomorrow morning 09:00 AM, and Mike you have to go in silently or they might do some sh*t and blow San Andreas into bits. Mike: Don’t worry, I can handle it. - End of Chapter 4 Hope you enjoyed. 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TonyZimmzy Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 Nice chapter, Gaja Hopefully Mike runs into Grove Street, am I right? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3959553 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 Great chapter homie! Really cool and actiony IMO. Can't wait for the next chapter! Heres some cookies for energy! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3959997 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted December 6, 2006 Author Share Posted December 6, 2006 Thanks for the replies, and the cookies as well. Groove street, I aint saying nothing, maybe, we'll see. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3960243 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted December 16, 2006 Author Share Posted December 16, 2006 - Chapter 5 June 10th 2006, Saturday 21:00 PM, Leone Mansion, Saint Mark’s, Portland, Liberty City Don Joey Leone is in his office sitting in is leather chair, and in front of him is his mahogany desk and on it a couple folders and a notebook. Along side Joey are Tony Cipriani, Luigi Goterelli, Mario and Fabricio. They are discussing current events. Joey: Liberty City is ours, we just have to establish our position in Staunton Island and Shore side whale. Luigi you will handle Staunton, and Fabricio you take care of Shore side wale. Tony I want to ask you a question When you planted the bomb on Speed’s car you saw him going in the car, and then you pushed the button and the car exploded right? Tony: I was exactly like that Joey. I just can’t figure out how he survived. Joey: Yeah, if this is how an assassination by Tony Cipriani looks like, I wonder is that piece of sh*t from Los Santos really dead. Tony: Joey I made a mistake once with Speed, but that guy is definitely dead. Joey: Enough! Tony: (sees that Joey is close to edge to do something stupid, according to his face) I apologize to you Joey, I’ll get that mother f*cking piece of sh*t. Joey: (Sits down and thinks for a second) “I’ll do it myself”. Ok listen up Mario take your best men and tell them to get ready, were going after Speed tomorrow morning. As for you Tony, you will take care of the family here in Portland. June 10th 2006, Saturday 21:45 PM, Crime scene in the middle of the road, Little Cuba, Vice City The place where G killed the 2 cops is under police investigation, the police have blocked the road, while investigators are trying to find some clues relating to the murder. Head inspector Zimmzy has arrived at scene. He walks up to his partner Groovy. Zimmzy: What do we got? Groovy: Two dead VCPD, shoot right in the chest three times, each of them. Zimmzy: Do we have the murder weapon. Groovy: Yeah as a mater of fact we do. We found two 9mm’s a little down the road. Zimmzy: Ok great bring them to the lab, lets se if we can get some prints. Oh yeah are there any eye witnesses? Groovy: No man, no witnesses and no prints. Nothing. Zimmzy: sh*t. Are you sure? Groovy: Absolutely. We checked the prints and also for potential witnesses, but nothing not even the smallest clue. Zimmzy: What’s going on in this town? First illegal races are held across the town, Our contact’s say that a gang war is at our door steep, and on top of that the Army is going crazy because some big ass general is coming to Vice for a inspection or something. Groovy: It seems that hell is going to break lose in Vice really soon. Zimmzy: Yeah, it seems that way. “We really don’t need another 86 massacre”. - End of chapter 5 Post your comments. Plz. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3973770 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 What kind of a gay last name is Zimmzy!? That's the gayest name ever!... Oh wait Just messin, nice chapter, a little short Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3973780 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted December 17, 2006 Author Share Posted December 17, 2006 Thanks for the reply dude. Yeah the chapter is a bit short, because I wanted to try something new it the story but it sounded terible so I deleted that part, and posted the short version. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3974911 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nur56 Posted December 27, 2006 Share Posted December 27, 2006 any new chapters Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3987272 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted December 27, 2006 Author Share Posted December 27, 2006 Soon. School's a bit*h probablly after new year. Did you like the story so far? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/260854-gta-evo/#findComment-3987517 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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