San Andreas of the Living Dead

[HawaiianHardHitter]

I laugh at your opinion that that was the only foul chapter of this story.

Well it pretty much was, it caused you and that other guy to speak your minds about that one chapter.

No. See, that was the only chapter we read of the story - we hadn't been keeping tabs on any of it until that point, and then used that chapter to form the basis of our criticism of the entire story. Several of the things we mentioned - in quotes - came from earlier chapters. We simply used that chapter heavily as it was the most recent ... the rest of the story was the same. If I could be bothered backtracking to read it from the beginning, I could probably come up with even harsher - more foul, if you will - comments.

I enjoyed reading your story Maddok. True GTA originality to me. The ending was good, and a suitable one to this story. I respect stpries for how it goes, not how it's written. You can't judge a story by how it's written. It's the story that is being written. This has kept me entertained. No matter it is written in narrative-form or Script-Style. Before, this forum was chalk full of script-style stories and I read them even before I joined up with GTAF. Eminence, just lay off Maddok brah. No need to bring back an arguement that started like one or two months ago.

[Maddok]

 

I laugh at your opinion that that was the only foul chapter of this story.

Well it pretty much was, it caused you and that other guy to speak your minds about that one chapter.

No. See, that was the only chapter we read of the story - we hadn't been keeping tabs on any of it until that point, and then used that chapter to form the basis of our criticism of the entire story. Several of the things we mentioned - in quotes - came from earlier chapters. We simply used that chapter heavily as it was the most recent ... the rest of the story was the same. If I could be bothered backtracking to read it from the beginning, I could probably come up with even harsher - more foul, if you will - comments.

I enjoyed reading your story Maddok. True GTA originality to me. The ending was good, and a suitable one to this story. I respect stpries for how it goes, not how it's written. You can't judge a story by how it's written. It's the story that is being written. This has kept me entertained. No matter it is written in narrative-form or Script-Style. Before, this forum was chalk full of script-style stories and I read them even before I joined up with GTAF. Eminence, just lay off Maddok brah. No need to bring back an arguement that started like one or two months ago.

This guy pretty much said it for me eminence.

 

 

Edited: I'm announcing a new story thats been stuck in my head since before I started SA of the living dead. It's going to be called Knee Deep it wont be script written as this one.

Edited August 18, 2007 by Maddok