San Andreas of the Living Dead

[Maddok]

I know what some of you are gonna say. That its unrealistic, and all that crap...IF YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THE STORY THEN SCREW YOU, YOUR NOT WRITING!!!

 

Chapter 1 The Awakening

 

10:43 AM

 

CJ and Sweet were chilling down at Grove Street havin' a 40 and listenin' to the radio.

 

Sweet: (yawns) Awww, nice mornin' CJ, no sounds of choppers, no sounds of gun shots poppin'. Just quiet and peaceful.

 

CJ: Yeah, think I'm gonna hang up my guns and just chill wit' you big bro.

 

CJ: No more Tenpenny, no more Smoke, Ryder, or any of the Vagos or Ballas. Gotta feelin' its gonna be peaceful and quiet now...But HELLA BORING!!!

 

Sweet: HAHAHAhahaha, yeah. Well, so long nigga, im gonna go take me a nap.

 

CJ: Aww Sweet we just got up.

 

Sweet: Thats the point.

 

Sweet walked to his house from CJ's and went to go take his nap like he said. CJ went inside and sat on the couch and watch TV see whats on. After he flipped a few channels he found a good Hood movie and watched it, but after a few minutes he fell asleep.

 

Mean while down in Hell

 

Ryder: Man I didn't wanna die yet mutha f*cka!!!

 

Big Smoke: I know what you mean nigga.

 

Ryder: Hey I got an Idea.

 

Smoke: Spit it out nigga.

 

Ryder: Hows about we ditch this sh*t hole and go back to earth.

 

Smoke: I dont know if the boss is gonna like that.

 

Ryder: What you scared about nigga? F*ck that red horn dog Asshole, I'm leaving and I'm bringin' everyone here with me.

 

Ryder climbed up ontop of a near by rock and yelled everyone...

 

Ryder: IF ANYBODY DONT WANNA STAY HERE AND GO BACK, COME FOLLOW ME.

 

[Crowd cheering]

 

Satan: WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING?!

 

Ryder: WE'RE LEAVIN' SO F*CK YOU!!!

 

Satan: WELL FINE! BUT I WARN YOU, YOU ARE NOT GOING AS YOUR OLD SELVES BUT AS BLOOD THIRSTY ZOMBIES.

 

Ryder: ...Thats fine wit' me nigga. See yah later.

 

Satan opened a portal from the their world, into the real world. Everyone lined up. Ryder and Smoke could see Polaski and Tenpenny walking towards the portal aswell. The both smiled at eachother and continued on into the real world.

 

Back at Earth a couple hours later...

 

CJ: (yawning) Aww, I feel re-energized...WHAT THE F*CK?!

 

CJ was looking on the TV at the footage that the local news station, showing brutal footage of whats going on outside.

 

News reporter: In local news, the people who are recently deceased are returning back to life, and destroying everything and killing everyone. Stay inside at all costs do whatever you can to stay alive. If you know anyone who has been injured by one of the dead you are to eliminate him or her immediatly. You are to shoot them in the head.

 

[sounds of banging and screaming at the News]

 

News reporter: No they've broken in, NO NO AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH........

 

The dead have broken in the news station and killed everyone there as well.

 

CJ: Oh sh*t....Kendl, Sweet!!!

 

CJ quickly grabbed whatever he could carry and jetted out the door. Once he was outside all he could see was a red sky and the total carnage of dead bodies and the dead walking. CJ got out his guns and was ready for yet another killing.

 

[sounds of screaming]

 

Sweet: [shooting at the zombies] CJ!!! GET OVER HERE!

 

CJ ran to Sweet and both were shooting down as many zombies as they can.

 

CJ: We need to get to Kendl.

 

Sweet and CJ ran to Sweet's glendale and sped off to Cesars place. As they were driving they both looked out and saw a all the zombies killing and eating all the people.

 

Sweet: Sh*t...how could all this happen?

 

CJ: I dont know Sweet it just did.

 

Sweet: I was just sleepin' and all of a sudden I heard a loud crash sound. I got my gun and out of nowhere one of my homies tried to kill me.

 

CJ: That wasn't your homie Sweet. It was a Zombie.

 

Sweet: You mean that those scary movies that we watched when we were little is actually happening?

 

CJ: Guess so.

 

Sweet: DAMMNIT!!! Someone has definatly broke the reality rules.

 

They finally got to Cesars house and saw Cesar shooting down zombies. CJ and Sweet ran to Cesar...

 

CJ: CESAR, wheres Kendl?!

 

Cesar: Shes inside homles.

 

CJ: Is she hurt is she bit or scratched?!

 

Cesar: No she's fine, one of these f*cks almost got her and me, but we're ok.

 

Sweet: Ok get her in the car we gotta go.

[CJ, Sweet, and Cesar shooting]

 

Cesar ran inside to get Kendl and ran out.

 

Kendl: CJ whats goin' on I'm scared!

 

CJ: Dont worry Kendl we'll be safe, now get inside the car.

 

They all got inside and sped off

 

Meanwhile down by the cemetary...

 

Ryder: Aww, good to be back.

 

Smoke: what are we gonna do now?

 

Ryder: Revenge mutha f*cka

 

Tenpenny: Hold on a sec midget, I'll let me join yah.

 

Ryder: Ok cool nigga.

 

Ryder, Smoke, Tenpenny, Polaski, and all the other enemies CJ and his crew killed are now back.

[Maddok]

Chapter 2 regroup

 

They all were driving around avoiding any zombies that wanted their blood.

 

Cesar: So what are we gonna do holmes?

 

Sweet: I dont know nigga, we need some back up. How about Woozie, he may be blind but he can shoot, remember CJ?

 

CJ: Yeah yeah, what about your guys Cesar?

 

Cesar: I dont know ese some of my homies are pretty banged up bad. My cousin Hecter lives in San Fierro though, He's got alot of guns and ammo too holmes. So he might be alive.

 

CJ: Ok coo'.

 

Kendl looking outside the car window started to cry knowing that friends are being eating and turned into one of them.

 

Kendl: How can this happen? This is just wrong.

 

Sweet: I dont know Kendl, We need to get help.

 

CJ: Hey I just remembered, Zero has a few things that we could use. I remember taking his remote controled plane to blow up Berkley's delivery stuff, we could use that and the mini gun too ontop of his roof.

 

They were on the free-way driving to San Fierro, They were coming by passing Angel Pine and noticed that the same thing happened there, but it looks like its fine there. They stopped and looked that the people of Angel Pine had it undercontrol.

 

Sweet: Wanna pick up a few people?

 

CJ: Nah nigga, a bunch of f*ckin' rednecks is the last thing we need, other then zombies.

 

Cesar: Then keep goin holmes.

 

They continued on, but as they drove Kendl look at Mt. Chilliad and saw a big tall Gorilla like figure was being attacked by zombies also.

 

Kendl: Hey you all see that?

 

CJ & Sweet: Where?

 

Kendl: Up in Mt. Chilliad.

 

Cesar: Looks like a f*cking big ass gorilla.

 

CJ: Well whatever it is its dead.

 

After of high speed getting to San Fierro they made it. They first went to Zero's shop, Once they got there they saw a fleet of remote controled planes defending his place, Zero was on the roof.

 

Zero: Hey you guys up here, They door is open hurry come in.

 

They all rushed inside and headed towards the roof.

 

CJ: Damn Zero your a f*ckin nerd.

 

Zero: Nerd? I am no nerd. I just happen to be very smart.

 

Sweet: Yeah yeah whatever nigga, how the hell did you get those little planes to do guard your place like that?

 

Zero: I never give away my secrets.

 

CJ: Yeah whatever lets go.

 

Zero: Just let me grab a few of my things and we will be off.

 

Kendl: We won't have enough room in the car for him.

 

Zero: It is ok, I have my own vehicle to drive.

 

Sweet: A'ight then, lets go.

 

CJ,Sweet,Kendl, and Cesar quickly and quietly rushed back to the car and and waited for Zero. Zero came out in a sports car.

 

CJ: Damn where he get a fine piece of machinery like that from?

 

Zero stopped his car next to CJ's to say...

 

Zero: Oh this is a Banshee I stole from Berkley, I dont think he will be needing it anymore though.

 

Cesar: Don't stop holmes lets get outta here.

 

It got dark very quickly as they drove.

 

Cesar: Ok ese my cousin Hecter should be about a couple more miles away.

 

They stopped for a second because Zero still didn't know how to control the Banshee.

 

CJ: What the hell nigga?

 

Zero: I'm sorry it stalled.

 

Sweet: Damn a nerd can't even handle a sports car.

 

After about a minute of trying to start the car Zero managed to restart it. And when it started, Zero and the others turned on their headlights and saw a mob of zombies coming at them!

 

Kendl: F*CKING RAM THEM!!!

 

They all zoomed out at the zombies and killed most of them but some were missed.

 

Zero: HAH, TEN POINTS!

 

About a few minutes went by and they were upon their destination to Cesars cousin.

 

Cesar: A'ight holmes its the next house down.

 

CJ stopped and let Cesar out.

 

Cesar: Circle around the corner and do a couple drive bys with these f*ckers. Gimme a minute to talk to my cousin.

 

CJ: A'ight homie see you in a minute.

 

CJ drove off, and Cesar pulled out his gun and crept to Hecters house.

 

[sounds of gunshots from the backyard]

 

Cesar: Sh*t.

 

Cesar ran to the backyard and shooting down zombies on the way. As he got there he saw his cousin blasting away zombies with some unknown gun.

 

Hecter: CESAR! Good to see you again holmes, hows it been hows it goin?

 

Cesar: Goin' good ese just get in your car and we'll be outta here with a couple of our friends.

 

Hecter: Horale, see you in a minute.

 

Cesar waited for his cousin and was shooting down zombies while he waited.

 

Hecter: Get in the car holmes.

 

Cesar jumped in and they both drove off. CJ and the rest were right behind them as they drove. Hecter looked in his rear view mirror and saw that they were being followed.

 

Hecter: Are those your friends?

 

Cesar: Yeah, Hey stop at this parking lot right here.

 

Hecter parked his car in the hospitol parking lot and was eager to meet Cesars friends. CJ parked his car next to Hecters and saw that he had a sh*t load of weapons inside his car.

 

CJ: You getting ready for a war?

 

Hecter: [laughs] It is a war holmes, and I'm the Army.

 

CJ: A'ight then lets go and gather some more of our friends.

 

Hecter: Ok holmes where to next?

 

CJ: I know a friend, He a hippie but he's pretty useful.

 

Meanwhile....

 

Smoke: Where we goin' nigga?

 

Ryder: C'mon homie, lets go get some friends of ours and go pay a visit to our OLD friends.

 

 

 

 

 

Comments please, I will not continue if you all dont give comments. and just for the record I know this chapter is a little dull, so give me some hints to make this one better. Cya.

[silvermanblue]

I dont mean to offend but i'm LMAO great story!

[Maddok]

I dont mean to offend but i'm LMAO great story!

Your not offending no one, I put some parts in the story to make people laugh. Good Looking out.

[Maddok]

Chapter 3 Down the Dirt Road

 

CJ, and the crew continued on to recruite for of their friends. They went down to Truth's ridge to see what he has to offer.

 

Sweet: So, you think Truth is reliable for us?

 

CJ: Oh yeah, he may be a man of peace, but when he high he goes psycho [laughs]

 

They were on their way to The Truth going through Back O' Beyond, but also on their way passing by they see a old beat up glendale drifting down a slope with no one inside.

 

Kendl: Uhhh, can we please hurry up, I'm gettin' kinda scared here.

 

CJ: Yeah yeah sure.

 

CJ sped up a little bit to get the hell out of Back O' Beyond. For some reason they felt something unnerving about Back O' Beyond, They definately don't want to go back.

 

On their way, they stopped for a potty break for the crew. apparently they stopped right by the Damned Lake. They all went to seperate bushes distances from eachother and did their business. As when they all went to go back to the car and leave, the same Glendale that they saw drifting down the slope, sort of drove down the dirt road and towards the Damned Lake.

 

CJ, Sweet, Kendl, and Cesar: What the f*ck?

 

the beat up glendale just drove right into the lake.

 

They all hurried to see if anyone was there but once they could see the car has just disappeared.

 

Sweet: F*ck this sh*t, lets GO!

 

Cesar: Right behind you.

 

They all bolted to their cars and darted out of there like crazy.

 

Sweet: Hey CJ, I noticed that we're goin' the wrong way. Can you get us THE F*CK OUTTA HERE?!

 

CJ: You wanna leave? FINE!

 

CJ sharply turned his car onto a hill and continued on to The Truth, but taking a shortcut. After a few minutes of driving through trees they finally saw Truth's Ridge.

 

Kendl: Finally, I need to rest.

 

Sweet: Yeah, I can't feel my ass anymore, sh*t.

 

CJ drove down slowely a steep slope and continued on to Truth. As they arrived CJ, and the rest noticed it was somewhat quiet. Everyone got out of their cars and looked around. CJ, Sweet, Cesar, and Hecter all got their guns and were somewhat patrolling the area.

 

CJ: YO TRUTH...TRUTH

 

Truth: OOHHHHHH SHHHIIIIIIT...

 

Truth appeared around the corner of his farm house running away like crazy, he had half a dozen zombies on his tail.

 

Hecter: F*ckin' A.

 

CJ, Cesar, Sweet, and Hecter got out their guns and...

 

BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG

 

They all continually shot the zombies chasing Truth.

 

Truth: F*ck man, I'm trippin' balls man. Is it me or are the dead comin' back man? Or is it cuz I'm really f*ckin' high man?

 

CJ and Sweet: Both.

 

Truth: Oh ok man, I thought it was just me. So what you guys doin' here?

 

CJ: Here to get you to join us.

 

Truth: Join you wit' what man?

 

Sweet: We gatherin' all our homies and gonna cause a f*ckin' massacre.

 

Truth: Oh ok...What were we talkin' about again?... Oh yeah now I remember, Lets go.

 

They all gwalked towards their cars, but before anyone got in, Truth rushed to the back of the Mothership to get some things. After a minute of grabbing some things from the Mothership Truth rushed back to give them some of his secret stuff.

 

CJ: What the f*ck is it?

 

Truth: It's my secret stuff man. I call it, Truth's Medicine.

 

Sweet: Ugh...Whats it do?

 

Truth: It gives you a good buzz man, when you feelin' tired or groggy, you'll be all wound up for hours man. Also it heals up your wounds real good man. Now lets go!

 

They all got in their cars and left.

 

Kendl: Where to next CJ?

 

CJ: I know this oriental guy, he blind but he sure can drive AND shoot.

 

Kendl: A'ight.

 

Meanwhile...

 

Ryder was ontop of the bridge over Grove Street looking down at his hordes of zombies. seeing what has become of them. He also noticed all the people CJ killed, which are Ballas and some Vagos.

 

Smoke: Hey man, you sure 'bout this?

 

Ryder: Fo' Sho' homie, I f*ckin' started all this man.

 

Tenpenny: You better know what you doin' midget.

 

Ryder: Shut up you white acting pecker head. I know what I'm doin'

 

Ryder pulled out a gun to get all his zombies attention. He raised it in the air and BANG shot in the sky. All the zombies looked at Ryder giving him their attention.

 

Ryder: LISTEN UP YA'LL I'M YOUR F*CKIN' LEADER, AND YOU FOLLOW MY ORDERS!!! FIRST THINGS FIRST, I BROUGHT YOU ALL BACK FOR A REASON, FOR YOU TO GET BACK AT WHOEVER KILLED YOU, AND DO ALL THE SH*T YOU WISH YOU COULD DO. TO YOU ALL YOUR ENEMIE'S ARE DEAD, AND WE WILL PUT A END TO THE F*CKIN' LIVIN'. WE GONNA TAKE DOWN LOS SANTOS SAN FIERRO, AND LAS VENTURAS. PRETTY SOON IT'S GONNA BE OUR WORLD, ITS OUR F*CKIN TIME. NOW LETS GET STARTIN'!!!

 

All the zombies let out a low zombie cheer for Ryder and spread out to the rest of Los Santos and headed to San Fierro.

 

 

Comments about this Chapter please. Oh and sorry about double post.

[Berrern]

He he, great story, I like it!

 

Keep it up, I'm looking forward to more chapters

[Maddok]

Chapter 4 Time to go Huntin'

 

The zombie horde of Ryders' has swept across Los Santos and was on their way to San Fierro. Another horde that Smoke was in control of was on their way to Las Venturas. CJ and the crew were on the Gant Bridge going towards Las Venturas. Nearing Tierra Robada, Kendl looks to the side of her window and stares at the ocean, admiring how beautiful it looks even though how terrible things are.

 

Kendl: How do things like this happen?

 

Truth: I dont know man, everything happens for a reason. But the reason for whats happening now is a mystery man.

 

Kendl: Yeah.

 

As they enter Tierra Robada, they see that it looks all vacant. They stop for a minute to look for any movement. Zero stops by CJ's car...

 

Zero: CJ, why did you stop?

 

CJ: See if anythin's poppin' up here.

 

Zero was a little impatient at the moment and reving his car a few times. And with all the noise Zero made a bunch of eyes opened with really scary glare. Everyone looked for a moment. and saw heads, arms, and legs popping up from everywhere slowely walking to their prey.

 

Cesar: F*cking get moving!!!

 

CJ: Thanks alot Zero, you dumbass.

 

CJ and the rest quickly sped off to get the hell out of there. But because how much CJ was putting pressure to the engine, the car broke down in the middle of Bayside Tunnel.

 

Sweet: Dont tell me the car broke down.

 

CJ: The car broke down.

 

Sweet: Damn.

 

Sweet: Kendl you stay in the car.

 

Kendl: I wont get out.

 

Zero, Hecter, and Cesar stopped by CJ and the rest to see what happened.

 

Cesar: Hey holmes, what happen?

 

CJ: The Car broke down, and we need something to fix this thing.

 

Sweet: I dont know man the engine is pretty banged up bad man.

 

Truth: If I came in my Mothership we'd be outta here but damn man.

 

After a few minutes of trying to fix the car Hecter noticed shadows coming in the entrance of Bayside Tunnel.

 

Hecter: Ugh fellas, somethings comin' in.

 

Kendl: f*ck sitting in the car I'm hidin' behind Cesar.

 

Hecter and Zero parked their cars around CJ's to make a barricade. Waiting, and loading up their guns, they saw a crowd of zombies approaching them and made horrible moaning sounds that would chill you to the bone.

 

Truth: God man, this sucks.

 

Sweet: GET YOUR GUNS AND RAISE HELL!!!

 

Hecter: It already rised!

 

B-B-B-B-B--B-B-BB-B-B-B-B-BANG

 

Everyone shot out at the zombies dropping another, another, and another. But slowley they kept on coming like they never ended. Zero on the other hand got out a remot control car.

 

Zero: This is my new creation.

 

Zero got his little remote and drove the car to the zombies. As the Remote controlled car set it self infront of the zombies. it let out a roares bust fire of flying bullets at the zombies. Literally shooting them to pieces. But even though so many bullets were hitting them they kept on coming.

 

[others still shooting]

 

Hecter: F*ck this Sh*t.

 

Hecter ran to his car and got out 2 gernades. He took out 2 pins of them and threw them at the Zombies.

 

BOOOOOM

 

Hecters gernade put a big dent in the zombies, but still kept on coming. Everyone saw that the roofing of the tunnel cracked and was getting ready to collapse. Everyone ran back to the exit of the tunnel, running as fast as they can the tunnel finally collapsed. Big chunks of concrecte fell right on top of all the remaining zombies. Everyone jumped out the exit of Bayside Tunnel,

 

Their weapons are gone in their cars. All that they have now are a few ammo and a couple guns.

 

Sweet: Well this sucks.

 

CJ: lets just try to get to Las Venturas.

 

Hecter: Well its time to go huntin.

[Maddok]

Sorry I disappeared for a while and forgot about the story I'm continuing it now.

 

 

Chapter 5 Foot Patrol

 

After their little mishap in Bayside Tunnel Their cars, and the rest of their weapons were destroyed under the rubble of the tunnel. Now the rest of their journey is on foot.

 

Truth: Well this is f*cked up man.

 

CJ: Well lets try to find some cover, its startin' to get dark.

 

Zero: You know, I researched a couple days ago that there was a small abandoned town near of where we are, follow me.

 

An hour and thiry minutes went by as they were almost there. It was just about to get dark now and they would barely see a thing, and would not know what would be out there.

 

Zero: Hey, I think I see something...Yes I found it!

 

Everyone Hurried to the abandoned town.

 

Cesar: Hey, I remember this town. Yeah Las Brujas, If I can remember theres a small cemetary here too.

 

Kendl: Oh Cesar I'm scared.

 

Hecter: Oh yeah, I got a flash light in my pocket, I almost forgot about it.

 

CJ: Give it here, everyone stick together and find somethin' that can be used as a light.

 

CJ lead everyone to a small hut, while in there Sweet found a lighter, and another flash light. At the other end of the hut Hecter found a shotgun and two 9mm guns and a couple boxes of rounds for the 9mm and the shotgun.

 

Hecter: Seems like there we a couple people here before us fellas.

 

CJ: Well lets hope they dont come back. Ok everyone cover the windows with something, and block any openings that anything can get in. Stay away from the windows, and keep guns loaded.

 

Cesar and Hecter nailed in the windows with some wood and some nails that they found near by. Sweet and Kendl, blocked in holes, and other opening with sand bags, and big rocks.

 

CJ: Ok we'll stay here for the night, lets hope nothing tries to get in.

 

While in the night, everyone slept while Cesar, Hecter, and CJ, took turns at keeping watch for everyone. It was Hecters turn to keep watch, and as he gaurded everyone He started to hear noises, tapping sounds started to form outside the walls. The sound made its way to the wall behind Hecter, and it started to scratch. It scratched, and scratched, It knows that Hecter is there.

Hecter took out a silencer he had and attached it to his gun.

 

He saw a small hole near his head, and took a look outside. Right there he saw three dark figures outside just roaming around aimlessly.

 

Hecter [whispers]: Hey, hey get up CJ, get up there are zombies outside.

 

CJ got up and got his gun out and was prepared for a killin.

 

CJ [whisper]: Where are they?

 

Hecter [whisper]: right behind this wall ese.

 

CJ: [whisper]: Shoot the wall.

 

Hecter and CJ shot their guns at the wall and were hopefully droppin' some zombies. At the bullet holes they caused, Hecter and CJ looked outside. It seemed that they did take down the zombies outside, but were too scared to see if they were zombies or not, so they had to wait 'til daylight. comes.

 

It was now morning, and it looked like everyone seemed to be fine. CJ looked out the bullet holes from last night, and it looked like they didn't shoot zombies, but the people that have last been in the hut.

 

CJ[talks to himeself]: F*ckin' A, sh*t.

 

CJ: Ok ya'll time to get up and lets head out.

 

Everyone got up and headed out, while outside they saw holes in the small cemetary near by.

 

Hecter: Hey ese, something not in its hole anymore.

 

Sweet: Lets get the f*ck outta here.

 

as they were leave a dozen of zombies surrounded them. Will they live?

[Maddok]

I'm startin' to lose it all, I see my chapters slowley going to CRAP. but not this one.

 

Chapter 6 Extra Help

 

Hecter: CJ, how much ammo you got left?

 

CJ: about half a mag in this gun.

 

Hecter: Damn, and I left the box of bullets inside. How 'bout you Sweet?

 

Sweet: 2 f*ckin' bullets.

 

CJ: Its been good wit' ya'll, see you when we zombies.

 

A zombie: RRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH

 

BANG

 

CJ shot that zombie down but when he did they all started to attack at the same time.

 

BANG BANG B-BANG B-B-BANG

 

It's a hell fire everywhere, Sweet just ran out of bullets, cause he only had two bullets in it. He threw his gun like a throwin' knife at a zombie and it got stuck in its head. Sweet grabbed a exceptionally sharp rock and started stabben them.

Cesar, Hecter, CJ, and the rest saw an opening back inside the hut and ran inside. CJ, Cesar, and Sweet shut the door, and kept on trying to push it back as the zombies were trying to get inside. All of a sudden they hear a ATV and a jeep sound.

 

B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-BANG

 

Sweet: What the f*ck was that?!

 

CJ: Do I have to know f*ckin' everything? But it sounded like gun shots. And I dont hear any moaning and groaning anymore.

 

Mysterious voice: ARE YOU OK IN THERE? CAN YOU HEAR ME?

 

Cesar: Yeah, we're ok man.

 

They opened the door, and saw soldiers standing before them.

 

Sgt. Callahan: I'm Sergeant Callahan, the two soldiers behind me a Hell Hound and Fury. We heard multiple gun shots from here while we were on patrol near by. And well here we are. Is anyone wounded?

 

Zero: I am wounded, I dont think that any zombies bit or scratched me I fell and cut myself on this here corner of the table.

 

Sgt. Callahan: Well I guess we can bring you to the base for refuge for now. to get your four eyed friend to a docter.

 

Zero: Hey I resent that.

 

So Sgt. Callahan took them to Area 69, and as they got there they approached the front gaurds.

 

Gaurd: How you doin' Sergeant?

 

Sgt. Callahan: Doing good killing zombies and what not.

 

Gaurd: thats good, who are they?

 

Sgt. Callahan: They are just refugee's we just saved.

 

Gaurd: I guess they can come in just dont tell the General I let them in ok?

 

Sgt. Callahan: Ok.

 

Sgt. Callahan took them inside the base of Area 69

 

CJ [whispers]: Hey I been in here before, I stole that jet pack from this place.

 

Cesar [whispers]: that was you man? damn.

 

CJ [whispers]: It was me but I hope the dont remember me though.

 

Sgt. Callahan: Hey what you talkin' about back there?

 

CJ: Nothing just tellin' them how lucky we are that you found us.

 

Sgt. Callahan: Oh ok.

 

So Sgt. Callahan, Hell Hound, and Fury took them to a small building to rest for a while.

 

Sgt. Callahan: We will let you stay for the night. But the next day You'll have to go.

 

CJ: Can we atleast bring some ammunition with us? we're totally out of ammo, and wer wouldn't last 30 minutes out there.

 

Sgt. Callahan, Hell Hound, and Fury talked it out for a moment and came to an agreement but until then you WILL help us build more defenses.

 

Sgt. Callahan: Agreed, we will let you take some weapons and ammo.

 

Truth: I can't believe that the government is helping us man.

 

Hell Hound: Shut up hippie dont forget, the government helped you.

 

So CJ, Sweet, Cesar, Hecter, Truth, and Zero helped the military build up more defenses.

 

Zero, with his nerdy intelligence showed the workers on the computers how to operate the gun turrets more efficiently.

Cesar, Sweet, and CJ with their strength helped the other workers put up more defenses. And Hecter showed the soldiers how to fully operate their rifles to make them killing machines. Truth stayed and did the lady work with Kendl.

It was nightfall, CJ and the rest got sleep, while the watchful eye of Sgt. Callahan and his unit gaurded them. In the middle of the night groaning sounds started to appear, they started to get louder, while the groaning sounds got louder, roaring sounds started. The sounds got louder, and louder, and louder. A gaurd in a watch tower turned on his night vision and saw hundreds of zombies coming their way from all directions. The gaurd sounded the alarm and all the soldiers came out with their rifles.

The Zombies came closer and closer and CLOSER, they stopped when they were a hundred feet from the base.

 

Area 69 is completely surrounded, Will the Base survive? Will CJ, and the rest escape? find out next chapter.

 

 

and please give your comments PLEASE.

[Maddok]

Chapter 7 Zombie Retaliation

Area 69 was completely surrounded by an army of zombies. The only way that everyone ALIVE can survive, is to fight, fight to the death, and next death.

All the Zombies let out a loud roar. The soldiers, so scared not sure if they'll even live got everything they could carry, and waited for evil to arrive.

 

BOOOOOOOOOM BANG BANG B-B-B-B-BANG

 

Once the soldiers heard that sound they started shooting. The zombies went to the gate breaking it down. The soldiers were taking them down one by one, but it was no good. No matter how many redie, more come at them.

 

A Soldier: COME TO ME MOTHER F*CKERS!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

A soldier took out a missle launcher and shot it at a group of zombies. But, he also blew open the fences, and plainly let all the zombies in. All the zombies scattered through out the whole area.

People being eaten left and right, blood squirting everywhere, heads, arms, and legs scattered everywhere and being eaten. Everyone struggled to live killing off zombies before THEY die. Zero was inside the base enabling the missle turrets to shoot the zombies.

 

Base Computer Worker: The missle turrets can't hit the ground only sky! What can we do?!

 

Zero: I got it shoot them in the sky and they'll fall and explode on the zombies.

 

Base Computer Worker: Yes that'll work, set the missles to the SKY.

 

Zero and the workers set the missles to shoot at the sky and fall, to kill all the zombies. Cesar, Kendl, and Truth ran inside the base and hid themselves. CJ, Sweet, and Hecter were ontop of one of the Barreks, Shooting down zombies. At a glance of an eye at a distance CJ, saw a figure which looked like Ryder.

 

CJ: No, it can't be.

 

The figure of what seemed to be Ryder walked back into the dark and was disappeared.

 

Sweet: CJ, we need to get outta here man.

 

CJ: I'm thinking while I'm shooting now let me think some more.

 

While shooting down zombies Hecter saw Cesar ontop of the Main building that He, Kendl, and Truth were in.

Cesar took out some kind of gun with an ancher and rope and shot it towards CJ and the rest. it the ancher set itself in a corner and CJ, Hecter, and Sweet hanged on the rope and climped to the main building.

 

Cesar: Hurry guys get inside, the missle turrets are rigged to blow up this place to hell.

 

Sweet: We in hell, lets go!

 

Everyone ran inside the main building headed for cover as the missles were about to go. CJ went to Zero and was looking at what he's doing.

 

CJ: Zero what are you doin'?

 

Zero: I am rigging the missle turrets to shoot straight up in the air, and come down.

 

Sweet, Hecter, Cesar, Truth, and Kendl were at the moniters watching the carnage of blood and guts being spreaded and eaten everywhere.

 

Zero: OK, I got it. missles set in 3, 2, 1, 0 ignition.

 

All the missle turrets pointed up in the air and shot at the same time.

It all went silent a couple moments went by with silents as the missles were coming down. in a flash everyone saw the flames of the missles in the sky coming down.

 

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM

 

a great big flash of light filled the whole area. A explosion so big it created a crater through the whole base.

 

Hecter: Is everyone ok?

 

CJ: I'm good.

 

Sweet: Yeah I'm a'ight.

 

Zero: I am fine.

 

Kendl: same here.

 

Truth: I guess im alright man.

 

Zero: we are 500 feet below the surface we should be fine.

 

Truth: But ughhh, how do we get out the place above us is probably demolished.

 

Everyone sat down for almost an hour until Kendl said something.

 

Kendl: I got something to say to everyone...I'm pregnant.

 

CJ, and Sweet: WHAT!!!

 

CJ: Well thats good I'll have a nephew.

 

Sweet: NO f*ck THAT MAN, I DONT WANT THAT sh*t!!!

 

Cesar: Aww, man are you still hatin' that your sister is with a mexican man.

This is no time to be a cabron man.

 

Kendl: This is MY BABY SWEET! And I'm having it.

 

Truth: Well thats terrific man, having a baby is a beautiful thing man. thats it until you have it 'cause its gonna hurt like hell man.

 

Kendl: Well thanks for pointing THAT OUT!

 

CJ: Hey I just remember something, Theres a vent in this area when I stole the black project.

 

Hecter: Holy sheep sh*t that was you?! F*ck man you were all over the news. They said some black guy but I didn't know it was you. Thats hella tight.

 

CJ: Well c'mon lets go.

 

CJ and the rest headed to the air vent that CJ first went through in the black project mission, and everyone was back outside of what USE to be area 69.

 

Hopefull there will be no Zombies outside because all their weapons are gone.

[Blackadder.]

I just read the first couple of chapters, and its seems pretty good, just wondering, Is english your first language, there was a few mistaes that I saw, but you are probably better in later chapters

[Maddok]

I just read the first couple of chapters, and its seems pretty good, just wondering, Is english your first language, there was a few mistaes that I saw, but you are probably better in later chapters

Tell me the mistake and I'll fix'em...

 

Oh you mean Cesar and Hecter when they say "Ese, Horale, and Cabron."

 

Ese = Fella, or guy

 

Horale = Alright

 

Cabron = Asshole

 

Those are spanish words. Cuz Cesar and Hecter are Mexican. (Which also I am Mexican too)

 

And yes my language is English, Cause I know that you wouldn't understand spanish.

[Maddok]

Ok I got really unrealistic with this chapter but thats what I wanted, So dont complain, you didn't belly ache with the other chapters so dont give me sh*t on this on ok?

 

Chapter 8 Someone really broke the reality rules

 

Area 69 is now nothing but a crater. But fortunately CJ, and the rest were ok, and were outside to view the ugly remains of the soldiers, and the zombies.

 

Cesar: Finally ese, its over.

 

Truth: STUPID f*ckING ZOMBIES GO BACK TO HELL BITCHES!!!

 

CJ: Whoa, what happen there Truth [chuckles].

 

Truth: Sorry man, the heat of the moment and stuff got to me, I ugh was ugh...I went overboard on that huh?

 

Sweet: Yeah, you sure did.

 

Zero: Well lets go home I'm hungry, tired, my feet hurt, my back hurts lets GO.

 

Hecter: Yeah man I'm with you there.

 

All of a sudden...

 

RAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH

 

A zombies popped up from the ground and bit off the flesh of Zeros arm.

 

Zero: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...MY F*CKING ARM!!!!

 

Zero grabbed a holstered gun Hecter was carrying and...

 

BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG...

 

Zero: DIE MOTHER f*ckA DIE!!!!!

 

Zero put so many holes in the zombies face you could see right through it. After Zero was losing too much money and was feeling very dizzy, and tired.

 

Sweet: Damn man he losin too much blood.

 

Hecter tore of a large piece of his shirt and tied it to the large gash in his arm.

 

Zero: AAHHHHH, AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH....

 

Truth: Oh yeah man I got a little bit of Truth Medicine let me see if this'll help.

 

Truth spreaded the gooey substance on the bloody arm and they just waited after that.

 

Zero: [breathing heavily] It's ok guys, I'm not afraid to die. I have lived a good life,I have accomplished many things, and deafeted Berkley with CJ's help. Alas I die...

 

Zero slowley closed his eyes and breathed his last breaths, and death took him in his arms.

 

Kendl cried, CJ, Sweet, Cesar, and Hecter started to have tears in there eyes but did not cry. But, all of a sudden.

 

Zero: Aww, take me to the light oh blessed ghosts.

 

CJ: [gasp] Zero.

 

Zero: That deep voice...Oh no I'm in hell.

 

CJ: Nah man, you alive.

 

Zero: Oh CJ is that you?

 

CJ: Yeah man I think Truths Medicine really helped you.

 

Zero: I saw a light, and then my mom came to me with a pan of freshly baked cookies.

 

CJ: [laughs] Well you can have some cookies later man we gotta go.

 

Everyone laughed in joy that Zero was alive again. The all got up and looked around for a vehicle to get out of there. But all of a sudden, the earth started to shake, all the scattered limbs of the dead bodies started to move, and twitched. They all formed a giant Skeleton shaped super zombie.

 

Sweet: Aww, man that is REALLY F*CKED UP!!!

 

Truth: Haha, yeah man someone seriously f*cked up the reality rules man.

 

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Back in Hell...

 

Demon: What the f*ck Saten?

 

Saten: What? I wanted to get creative, I was tired of watching so I wanted to do something. YOU GOT A PROBLEM?!

 

Demon: No, No man its cool.

 

Saten: GOOD!

 

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Back on Earth...

 

Everyone ran for cover as the Giant Zombie was not noticing them. CJ, Sweet, Hecter, and Cesar ran to whats left of the Armory and saw that there were still undamaged weapons. CJ grabbed the Bazooka and a Carbine assault rifle, Cesar and Hecter grabbed gernades and a M16, and Sweet also took a bazooka, and carbine assault rifle.

 

CJ: Ok fellas, this is it. It's been nice knowing you all and I'll see you in the after life.

 

Sweet: Yeah brotha, see you after this.

 

Cesar: I dont wanna die man, cuz I'm gonna have a baby to take care of.

 

Hecter: And I'll help you, but first lets kill this ugly son of a b*tch.

 

Zero, Kendl, and Truth ran behind a near by demolished barraks, but was still enough to keep them out of the giants eyes.

The Monsterous giant banged on the ground letting out loud roars that can be heard all across San Andreas. CJ, Sweet, Cesar, and Hecter. walked right infront of it getting its attention. they all pointed their weapons at it and

 

B-B-B-B-BANG BOOOOOOOM BANG BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM

 

To be Continued

[-/TNT\-]

Quite an awesome story. Best B movie ever!

[B Rob]

Very good story. Unique and funny.

[Maddok]

I was kinda going for scary and funny. Also in earlier chapters where they saw bigfoot being attacked, the ghost glendales, and stuff like that. I just wanted to bring those in the story for an extra feature. Next chapter coming up soon.

Edited February 8, 2007 by Maddok

[Maddok]

HI IM BACK, k I'm back sorry I got a little tired of writing and took a long break from writing but now I'm back and ready to write again. Ok this chapter might not be good but tell me what you think. if you think well about the story rate it up and reply plz.

 

Chapter 9 Twists

 

CJ and the rest were puzzled at that who shot the Giant Zombies. The giant let out a a really loud roar holding a nub of what use to be its arm. Looking around at who shot at it.

CJ and the rest look behind the giant and noticed that three figures walking towards them and the giant.

 

Hecter: Hey, who that ese?

 

Cesar: I think...Yeah its that Sargeant guy.

 

Sweet: Sgt. Callahan.

 

CJ: And his crew.

 

Sgt. Callahan: We Couldn't let you all have the fun.

 

Hell Hound: Yeah save some for us.

 

Fury: BRING IT ON MOTHER F*CKA!!!

 

B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-BANG BOOOOOOM BOOOOOOOOOOM

 

Sgt. Callahan and his unit shot at the Giant Zombie once more and shot off its leg.

 

RRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....

 

The giant let out a loud roar at Sgt. Callahan and his unit. They laughed at it while it crawled to grab its leg. Once it grabbed its leg it wobbled its way back to stance. It looked at its nubbed leg and arm, and back to to Sgt. Callahan and his unit, showed the most evil grin, and laughed. As it laughed blood started to show and formed another arm and leg.

 

Fury: Thats f*cked up.

 

As It held its leg, the Giant pointed it at its shot off arm, the leg pointed at the arm both formed a chained spike ball.

 

RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...

 

The Giant waved its weapons around and ran towards Sgt. Callahans unit.

 

CJ: GUYS SHOOT!!!

 

B-B-B-B-B-B-B-B-BANG... BOOOOOOOOOM BOOOOOOM

 

CJ and his crew shot at the Giant zombie. While shooting at it. small fragments of its body came apart and formed more zombies.

 

Sweet: F*CK!!!

 

CJ and his crew shot the little zombies that were coming at them.

 

The giant zombie lifted up his weapon and swung at Sgt. Callahan and his unit.

 

WAM

 

Sgt. Callahan and his unit jumped out of the way when the giants weapon was coming for them.

 

Fury: AHHH... YOU MOTHER F*CKER!!!

 

The giant's weapon hit Fury's leg, thus crushing his bones. The Giant seeing that Fury wasn't going to go anywhere it went for Sgt. Callahan and Hell Hound.

 

Cesar: Hector lets get Fury.

 

Hector: Ok.

 

Hector and Cesar ran towards Fury and dragged him to Kendl and Zero. As they brought Fury near them Truth snuck out somewhere.

 

Zero: Hey, where is Truth going?

 

Kendl: I dont know lets just help this guy.

 

Fury: Ahhh... f*ck, you guys this it'll heal?

 

Cesar: I dont know man, Kendl Zero drag him to safety. C'mon Hector lets go kick some ass.

 

Cesar and Hector ran back to find that CJ,Sweet, Sgt. Callahan, and Hell Hound are all lying on their backs. They also saw that the Giant Zombie wasn't in sight either. Cesar and Hector ran towards CJ and Sweet seeing if they are alright.

 

Hector: You alright ese?

 

Sweet: We are, ok we just playin' dead. It's over there on top of the hill, it looks like its just sitting there wit' its head down so it might be tired or something.

 

Cesar: Ok, and Callahan and Hell Hound?

 

CJ: I dont know about Sergeant but that f*ckin' thing out there ripped Hell Hound in two peices.

 

Hector: Damn, ok get up and follow us to the armoury.

 

Sweet, CJ, Cesar, and Hector went to the armoury and grabbed the rest of the ammo for the bazookas and grabbed the bazookas themselves. They walked towards the Giant Zombies.

 

CJ: HEY YOU UGLY SON OF A B*TCH, TIME TO KILL YOU.

 

Giant Zombie: HAHAHAHAHA, you cannot kill me, HAHAHAHA...

 

Sgt. Callahan: Trust me we will.

 

Sgt. Callahan joined CJ and the rest holding an automatic bazooka with and attached napalm launcher.

 

Hector: When we're done I want that thing your holding man.

 

They lifted their weapons to the Giant and...

 

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM

 

Will CJ and his crew finally kill the Giant zombie? Will the they be able to escape the monsterous evil zombie? Well stay tuned and find out in San Andreas of the Living Dead.

[Penne Pasta]

I just read the first couple of chapters, and its seems pretty good, just wondering, Is english your first language, there was a few mistaes that I saw, but you are probably better in later chapters

You moan at him for mistakes when you said *mistaes*. How contradictory.

[Maddok]

Chapter 10 Final Stand of the Beast Pt. 1

 

RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH...

 

The giant let out a loud roar as it was squirming around as it lost both its arms and legs. CJ and the rest watched as it worming its way around. Sgt. Callahan raised his bazooka, as did CJ and his crew. The giant stopped and stared at them, it smiled. Sgt. Callahan shot at it once, it did not scream it continued to smile.

After that it started to regenerate itself, and quickly it dissappeared itself into the ground.

 

Sweet: What the f*ck?

 

Cesar: E-eh man, thats not right. F*ckin' thing is getting away.

 

Hecter: I dont think it's tryin' to run. Shh, shut up guys, listen.

 

They all ran quiet, looking around as to find out where will the giant be next.

Out of nowhere, it quietly rose up behind them with its legs and arms fully rejuvinated. It raised its new fully formed weapon up in the air going to swing at them, then...

 

BOOOOOOOOOOM

 

Fury shot the giant with a bazooka that truth gave him. After shooting the Giant in the back Fury noticed what looks like theres something in Truths pocket.

 

Fury: Hey Truth, whats that in your pocket?

 

Truth: Oh its nothing, nothing at all.

 

What ever that was in Truth's pocket was glowing a small blue color. CJ and his crew Looked behind them and saw Fury waving at them and the Giant getting more angry then it was before ripped of its other arm, and formed another weapon and arm. With two weapons the Giant gave off a smirk and out of nowhere it used its newly formed weapon to split it in two to form two Giant Zombies.

 

Hector: Oh dude super weak.

 

Truth shocked in the sight of two giant zombies, he took out what was in his pocket. It was glowing a bright blue in a small tube.

 

Truth: I found this back inside the base, It said Project Armed Strength on the label so I'm gonna drink it.

 

Fury:You know what you gettin' in to right?

 

Truth: Yeah.

 

Truth drank down the tube of Project Armed Strength, nothing happened right after he drank it. But after a few seconds he started to get the urge. The urge to KILL!!!

 

Truth: RRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH...

 

Truth was feeling a horrible pain in his gut, but it started to go away, and as if went he grew. He grew as big as the Giant Zombie, with such immense power, it felt good drinking PAS.

 

Truth: Whoa Psychedelic man.

 

As the two zombies fully formed themselves they saw The Truth. Clutching their weapons, they were ready to attack.

 

RAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH...

 

Truth and both the zombies roared as they rushed at eachother.

 

BAAAAAM

 

Both zombies raised their weapons and swung at Truth, Truth countered them by grabbing their arms and flipped them over to their backs. One got up and tripped Truth to fall. But Truth was quick and got up as he fell. The other Giant grabbed its weapon at Truth, Out of nowhere in a flash Truth made a giant Axe appear in his hands.

 

Truth: Hehehe.

 

Truth pointed the sharp end at the weapon thrown at him and broke it in two. Truth then threw the axe he had at the zombie. But as the axe was flying through the air it turned into a glowing blue sword. It pinned down the Giant, and Truth had his palm wide open then slowley closed it. As Truth's hand formed a fist...

 

BOOOOOOOOOOOM

 

The sword exploded and put the Giant into millions of pieces.

 

Truth: ONE DOWN WHO'S NEXT?!

 

 

 

Well I dont think I did good this chapter can you all PLEASE reply to see if this is good or not, and also can you tell me why you all dont reply to MY story as others?

[JGJONES]

Are you still doing this great story? I liked the last chapter a lot.

I'm wondering though, what happened to Ryder , Smoke and Tenpenny

 

Hope you are still doing this.

 

Keep it up.

[Maddok]

Yeah im doing the story still. I havn't givin' up. I'm still thinking what Ryder,Smoke and the rest of the bad guys are gonna do. thanks for comment.

[Maddok]

Chapter 11 Final Stand of the Beast pt. 2

 

Truth turned his head around to see the other Giant Zombie. To Truth the giant looked afriad this time and not confident.

 

Truth: Your gonna get it now BITCH!!!

 

The giant officially lost its confidence and started to back away.

 

Fury: Wow PAS has seriously got into his system now.

 

Sweet: Yeah, no doubt.

 

Truth: RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH...

 

Truth charged towards the zombie and sacked it to the ground.

 

RRAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH...

 

The giant roared as it was fighting to kill Truth, but Truth didn't let in he gave it a reall big head butt and kept on repeating it until he was tired. When Truth got up he saw that the Giant was twitching all over and saw that it's face is battered in black blood.

 

Truth: You done yet?

 

Giant zombie: F*ck you.

 

Truth: So be it.... EEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRHHH...

 

Truth squated all the way down and jumped up real high in the air where anyone can barely see him. then... it was silent for a moment, everyone looked up in the sky trying to look for Truth until, Kendl saw a faint moving star that looks like its falling.

 

Kendl: Hey, its Truth.

 

Everyone saw Truth coming down in a diving position with his fists clear out in front of him. He was going so fast that nothing could measure. Truth was entering the earths atmosphere he turned into a great ball of fire aiming his fists at the giant zombie.

 

Truth: Owhow man this startin' to burn man.

 

Truth came down at an alarming rate everyone barely saw him as he came down then, at a blink of an eye.

 

WAAAAAAAAAAMMMMM...

 

Truth landed right on that Giant and turned it into nothing.

 

CJ: Whoa did you guys see that? Truth came outta nowhere.

 

Everyone saw that there was yet another crater infront of them, but they didn't care because they're finally rid of the zombie menace, or so they thought.

A few moments passed and everyone saw Truth was okay and he was walking out of the crater.

 

Truth: Hey, god's gonna be happy I did this one.

 

Cesar: Heh, maybe man.

 

CJ: well im glad its over.

 

Sweet: Hey wait, I think I see somethin'

 

Sweet pointed to the far left and everyone saw a dark figure walking towards them. They all raised their weapons towards the dark figure until.

 

CJ: Mom?

 

Kendl: It is mom.

 

Sweet: C'mon CJ Kendl I'll bring mom over here.

 

CJ ran towards his mom, Beverly Johnson.

 

Beverly: Come here Carl, give your momma a hug.

 

CJ gave his mom a hug.

 

CJ: Mom how'd you get here?

 

Beverly: Oh God let me come down and visit you.

 

Sweet: CJ, I'm comin'

 

CJ: Sweet come on over here and hug mom.

 

While CJ was looking towards Sweet, Beverly put her right arm behind her back, then when CJ went to look at his mom...

 

CHIIING...

 

[groaning]

 

CJ was starting to drool out blood! He looked down and saw that his mom stabbed him in his stomach.

 

CJ: W-why?

 

Kendl: NOOO...

 

Beverly: 'Cause I ain't your mom Mo' F*cka.

 

CJ:....

 

Beverly, roughly took out the blade she was carrying, Beverly simply pushed CJ to the ground and watched him die.

 

Sweet: What the f*ck? NOOOO...

 

Everyone saw that Beverly was starting to change shape and she started to laugh,

 

So called Beverly: HAHAHA, you Mo' f*ckas can't stop me nigga.

 

Sweet: No, it CAN'T be!

 

 

 

 

Stay tuned to see who the so called Beverly Johnson really is.

 

 

[Coral_City]

Wow. Very original work! I actually laughed...the concept of the living dead in San Andreas is pretty funny

[SoF]

I gotta say, this is really, really, really, badly written.

 

But at the same time its f*cking brilliant.

 

Excellent man, im enjoying this hahahahaha

[Maddok]

Well thank your SoF thats a nice mean thing to say . also at the end with some of the words Mo' and F*cka, say those to yourself and tell me who talked like that in the game. And if your wondering what the word "CHING" meant. It meant a sound of a blade.

[SoF]

Hey man, i meant it in a good way

[SoF]

I get the feeling its intentionally bad anyway

[speekers]

Ryder: What you scared about nigga? F*ck that red horn dog Asshole, I'm leaving and I'm bringin' everyone here with me.

 

 

hahahhaha

[Maddok]

Chapter 12 The Living and the Dead

 

Mysterious zombie: Hahaha, you dont know how long I been wantin' to do somethin' like this nigga... Why so surprised? Nigga I told you, that you cant stop me.

 

The mysterious zombie that killed CJ was now finally taking its form. Now everyone know who it is.

 

Mysterious zombie: Yeah, thats right its ryda nigga and I'm back and I'm gonna kill all of you.

 

Sweet: Ryder, you low down f*ckin' bitch, your MINE!!!

 

Meanwhile in heaven...

 

CJ: [groans] Where am I?

 

Mysterious voice: You are safe now my son.

 

CJ: Dad is that you?

 

God: No it's me, God. I saw the things you have done in the past, how many lives you took. But Also I have saw some of the good things you have done. I am willing to give you a chance. Give you a chance to make things right.

 

CJ: Ok, I'll do whatever I can.

 

God: I am going to revive you once more...Oh and before I revive you, there is someone I want you to meet.

 

CJ saw that a figure of a woman was walking towards him from a light.

 

CJ: Mom?

 

Beverly: Yes my boy, I never had a chance to say goodbye to you before I died, but now I can. Go get them Carl, and remember I will always love you, and I'll be watching.

 

God: Here, This orb is when your in dire need of help.

 

God handed CJ the orb, and revived him.

 

Now, back on earth...

 

 

Ryder approaches everyone.

 

Ryder: So, whos next?

 

CJ: No one...RAAAHHH

 

CJ came from behind Ryder and landed a blow to the back of his head, also made Ryder drop his blade. Ryder got up immediately and threw dirt at CJ, then tackled him down, then while ontop of CJ he continually punched CJ in his face. While being punched CJ quickly grabbed Ryder's arm and threw him off.

CJ kicked Ryder while he was down and ran for his blade after, but Ryder tripped him then climbed ontop of CJ and shoved his head in the dirt.

 

Ryder: Can't stop me bitch I'm invincible.

 

CJ: No your not.

 

CJ out strengthed Ryder and threw him off his back.

 

Ryder: No matter what you do CJ, I ain't gonna die just give it up!!! I'm f*cking untouchable, invincible, NOT EVEN GOD HIMSELF CAN STOP ME!!!

 

CRASH

 

A powerful lightningbult came down from the heavens and stopped Ryder in his tracks.

 

God: That is enough of that, I am seriously tired of him.

 

CJ: Thanks God.

 

Back in hell...

 

Ryder arrives in hell and saw all the other zombies.

 

Satan: So how was it? ( he said cocky)

 

Ryder: YOU KNOW WHAT? F*CK YOU SATAN YOU RED PUSSY BITCH MOTHER F*CKER!!! I CANT BELIEVE A fa**ot ASS LIKE YOU IS RUNNING HELL!!!

 

Satan: That is ENOUGH!!!

 

Satan quickly grabbed Ryder and threw him in the river of fire.

 

Meanwhile back on earth...

 

CJ: Lets go home.

 

God: Wait CJ, the orb you have to use it and quickly you have to find the highest peak of San Andreas and break it. The effect of the orbs power will destroy every zombie in it's path. Hurry go now!

 

CJ: A'ight c'mon guys lets go.

 

Cesar: I dont know man I mean Fury's leg is broken and the rest of us isn't really doin' so good man.

 

Hecter: He's right man, Sweet and Truth I think you two should go with CJ, here take my Glock 18 and MP7.

 

Truth: You know, you could've used these while we were fighting.

 

Hecter: I know but I wasn't thinking of them most of the time. Anyways take'em anyway.

 

CJ, Sweet, and Truth took hecter's weapon. But CJ kept the blade just incase something were to happen.

 

Cesar: I'll stay here and watch over Kendl and Fury.

 

Fury: Ok hurry up my leg isn't getting better you know just go no drama sh*t.

 

Sweet: Heh, hes right lets go fellas.

 

CJ, Sweet, and Truth walked away as Daylight was upon them. While walking Sweet was thinking for a minute.

 

Sweet: Hey, were we gonna go?

 

Truth: How about Mount Chilliad?

 

CJ: Yeah, yeah the perfect spot.

 

 

 

 

I think I relativly did good this Chapter But I wanna know everyone elses opinions please.

[jake whitehead]

keep it up dude, it rocks