Agninoter Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 (edited) Vice City Introduction Chapter 1-State Prison-Pike Creek-Shoreside Vale,Liberty City June 5,1986 2:30 pm Prisoner:"So exactly how you got into prison?" Tommy:"Again,guys,i told that same story thousands of times and you keep insisting on me repeating it." Prisoner:"Some of the new guys been dissing you.And I was saying how you was the Harwood bucher,Tommy." Tommy:"Okay,you guys know Sonny Forelli?" Prisoner:"Who doesn't know about Sonny?cars,houses,women,and power ever since u went behind bars." Tommy:"If it wasn't for me,that asshole would have nothing.NOTHING!!"reaches for a knife. Prisoner:laughing"Ain't my fault that your in jail.You killed like 11 men." Tommy:pushes him againist the wall"I was sent to kill one man,ONE MAN!They knew I was coming like if someone told them." Prisoner:laughing"Hey,i can guess the Forellis screwed you..hehehehe" Tommy:"No one screwed Tommy Vercetti.luaghs on you,f*cking queeb"puts the knife in his stomach and watch as the guy was bleeding.Everyone else was staring"You want some,pricks"they continued on eating.An prison guard enters the cafetaria. Guard:"Mr.Vercetti,the parole warden would like to speak of you of the end of your sentence."looks at the bleeding body"What the hell happened?" Tommy:"Some asshole trying to be funny to me.Don't worry,he isn't dead,just wounded." Guard:"Jesus Christ,Tommy,this is the fifth guy this month you done this to..."checks the body"Medics,wounded man here"medics come here with a stretcher and leave."You ready,Tommy" Tommy:"Sure" Vic's apartment-Little Havanna,Mainland,Vice City,Florida June 8,1986 8:20 pm Vic Vance,the most powerful drug kingpin in Vice City ever since two years ago,he took out Martinez and the Mendez brothers in venegance.Vic and his brother Pete was just watching TV. Pete:"Damn,that Candy Suxx sure can get it on"laughs Victor:"Shut up,god now you're sounding like that prick Martinez." Pete:"Who's Martinez?" Victor:"Don't you remeber.When I was back in the army,he was my superior officer" Pete:"Oh,good thing you killed that little prick along with the Mendezes." Victor:"He deserved worse than what I gave him."Lance bursts through the door." Lance:"Hey,bro.I got us a buyer for our cocaine." Victor:angered"again,Lance,i told you. I want out of the drug business"Pete meanwhile watches the porno. Lance:"Oh whatever man, you always bein' saying sh*t like that and look at you,Mr. Big.Just hear me out." Victor:"Okay" Lance:"There's some guys up north named the Forillis wanting to make a deal." Victor:"Go on" Lance:'They offering a million dollars for 25,000 kilos of coke.What do you say?One last hooray as the Lance brothers" Victor:sacrastically"As much as I don't want to spoil your parade,but no" Lance:"Ahhh..f*ck you,bro"looks at Pete"hey bro,you want to make a litle money Pete:turns off the Tv"Okay,I do it" Lance:"At least there is one other Vance brother that ain't no pussy."Pete bust out laughing Victor:"Nigga,f*ck you"Lance and Vic leave the apartment Pete:laughs"So who set up the deal" Lance:"Some lawyer named Rosenburg who has his offices near washington beach." Pete:"Lets check it out" Lance:"We poppin'" "Leafy Links Club-Leafy Links,Vice City,Florida June 9,1986 12:00 pm Two of Ricardo Diaz's men were near Leafy Links on a boat throwing he dead body of a traitor filled with cement into the harbor. Mendez:"So holmes,why Diaz ordered us to kill the guy?" Serrano:"How the hell should I know?" Mendez:"Becuase you do know about these things." Serrano:sighs"Diaz said something that this guy taking some of his money and cocaine." Mendez:"How much he stole?" Serrano:"Maybe like 1 percent of the profits and coke,but Diaz was agro and that why he had to kill him." Mendez:"I heard that the Vance brothers are making a deal with Forelli up north.said it was gonna cost 3 million for 100 ks." Serrano:"Damn,with that money,i can buy myself a yacht and head to San Andreas.Ricardo Diaz would like to hear this." Mendez:"Yo' Luis,help me push this body ino the water." Serrano:pushes it to the water"sh*t,that guy must have weigheda ton" Mendez:"Hey,you heard Kent Paul running out the Biker Bar downtown in his birthday suit?" Serrano:laughing"Oh my god,ain't he the manager of some Scottish rock band named Love Fist." Mendez:"damn if I were that Paul guy,i would kill myself after that episode." Serrano:interrupts"Hey TB,we gotta leave,it may be midnight but the VCPD are patrolling the area" Mendez:"Ok"drives the boat and heads back to Diaz Vercetti Printing Press-Fort Stauton,Stauton Island,Liberty City June 9,1986 Tommy Vercetti,after 15 years in state prison and nearly went to death row,was given parole.Taking a taxi to his father's old shop to check up on him.Liberty City had changed in these fifteen years with the Forellis the most powerful organization in Liberty.It seems a lot has changed." Tommy:"Hello?Anyone here"was walking around." Tommy:"Damn it,where the hell is everybody?'somebody with a shotgun points in Vercetti butv he manages o grab the shotgun before he was shot"Mr. Harrison that you?' Mr.Harrison:"Who the hell are you?"grabs the shotgun Tommy:"It's me,Tommy" Mr. Harrison:looks a Tommy carefully with his glasses"Tommy,that you"knows that it is Tommy"TOMMY!ITS YOU!HOW LONG HAS IT BEEN!" Tommy:"It's been 15 years,Mr. Harrison,things have sure changed."sits on one of the printing machines Mr.Harrison:"It's too bad your parents couldnt see you now ,a adult" Tommy:"Yeah,they raised me from the day I was born to the day I was sent to prison." Mr.Harrison:"After your parents died,in their will,they gave me ownership of the press.By the way,now that you're free,what you going to be on doing." Tommy:"I dont know,i was guessing to rejoin the Forellis but I thinking about it.Any good places to eat here?" Mr.Harrison:"You try this resturant in Chinatown owned by Giovanni Casa" Tommy:"See ya,Mr.Harrison,mine if I use your Jester" M.r Harrison:"I dont mind,say hi to Sonny for me" Tommy:"I think I will" Edited November 24, 2006 by Agninoter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GM Dude Posted November 13, 2006 Share Posted November 13, 2006 Tommy may be a tough guy, but I don't think he's crazy. Still, not bad though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greene Posted November 13, 2006 Share Posted November 13, 2006 No offence but not great. You made Tommy seem like a complete Physcopath and the dialogue wasn't great. But the next chapter will probably be better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agninoter Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 (edited) Chapter 2-Ken Rosenburg's Office's,Washington Beach,Vice City,Florida June 9,1986 12:30 pm Ken Rosenburg was the lawyer representing the Forelli family based in Liberty City.He had established his law offices in 1984 after cheating in his law tests with the help of Giogorio.He was agrueing with people in a case in 1984 where Giorgio attempted to murder Phil Collins in a concert. Rosenburg:"This case is not doing so well" Giorgio:"what do you mean it's no going well" Rosenburg:"I can't get these damn jurors to change their minds" Giorgio:"I made you,you piece of Jewish sh*t!" Rosenburg:"You know that I can't intimidate these people.I can't even take candy from a baby" Giorgio:"Look,my cousin Sonny is the Don of the most powerful criminal organization in Liberty." Rosenburg:"f*ck Sonny,im tired of you guys up norh making fun of me" Giorgio:'You are an idiot,you could never win a case without our help" Rosenburg:"Look,Giogrio,I'm sorry,I had a lot of stress today.I had to help make a deal with some Vance brothers." Giorgio:'You better hope the deal or the case goes in your favor or the next day,you be sleeping with the fishes"hangs up Rosenburg:"Damn it"walks around his table"I'm in deep sh*t" Lance:he and Pete enter the office"Hello,hello"looks at Rosenburg"You Rosenburg?" Rosenburg:"It depends,are you Lance?" Lance:"Yea" Rosenburg:"Wheres Victor?' Lance:"He decided to return to the Dominican Republic,heres my other brother Pete." Pete:"Hello,Mr. Rosenburg" Rosenburg:'So you must be the other Vance brother with asthma problems" Pete:"I used to,but I had an operation 2 years ago.Thats beside the point,whats the point of this deal." Rosenburg:"Let's see,you are selling your drugs to the people i represent,the Forellis" Pete:"Why mobsters up north want a piece of the action of the action down south" Rosenburg:"The Forellis always want to expand their opeartions outside of Liberty.So we cool?" Lance:"Yea, we cool Ken,go have a nice day"leaves with his brother into the office" Pete:"Sure we can trust these guys?" Lance:"This isn't abou trust,its business as long as we getting the cash,there will be no stopping us" Pete:"Want to hit the Malibu?" Lance:"Sure,bro,let's pop" Casa's Resturant,Chinatown,Portland,Liberty City June 9,1986 2:00 pm Casa:"What do you want,sir?" Tommy:"Just give me two canolis and a Sprunk" Casa:hands the bag of food and soda"That will be fifteen bucks" Tommy:"What the hell,when i was 20,i would buy this thing for three dollars." Casa:"Times have changed,and I need to make a living." Tommy:gives Casa the money and gets his food"Motherf*cking Casa,thank god,he doesnt remember me"laughs and heads for an alley to eat his food" Robina Cafe-Little Havanna,Mainland,Vice City,Florida June 9,1986 2:10 pm Umberto Robina,head of the Cuban gang is celebrating with his best friends Rico and Pepe,his father,and many others.They were celebrating the day with the help of Vic Vance 2 years ago destroying the Cholo drug factory uniting the rival Cuban factions. Umberto:in a drunken stupor"Drink,eat my amigos, today is a grea day" Rico:"What is today?" Umberto:pushes Rico"My compadre,you don't know what today is?" Pepe:"Then tell us" Umberto:"Today the day 2 years ago,we showed them Cholo pendejos which gang had the bigest cajones" Cuban gangsters:"Us,we have the cajones!" Umberto:"Now my friends,show everyone here your cajones to see how brave you are" Pepe:"I dont think so,holmes,we ain't gay here" Umberto:"What you men are afraid to show ur balls?You just a bunch of gurls?" Rico:"Umberto, I can speak for all of us,is that we look like fags if we do,jus forget it.." Umberto:"Where the hell you guys going" Rico:"We going to drink in the streets,talk"they go outside" Pepe:"You heard that hot reporter Michelle Mountainus is sueing that dick Maurice Chavez" Rico:"For real?that sh*t was about to happen anyway" Umberto:"That man Maurice is a hero,f*ckin all the girls he can" Rico:"That guy ain't cool,he didnt help take care of the baby."while they continued talking,two Voodoos drive past-by and shoot some of the Cubans Pepe:'Oh sh*t,i'm hit"is shot in the chest and is bleeding" Rico:hides in a car and gets his Uzi"I ain't going down like this"shoots a the Voodoo killing the Haitians"Take that,mothaf*cking Haitians" Umberto:goes to Pepe"Damn,you ok?" Pepe:"what does it look like,you f*cking idiot" Umberto:points to two Cubans'Hey,Luis and Herbert,go get a ambulance.Hurry!"gets an M4"Kiss my ass,Haitians"one of the Voodoos explode while the other one escapes luckily." Rico:"Yo,Umberto,you ok?" Umberto:'We need to take down these Haitians" Rico:"What we going to do?we got our asses nealry capped" Umberto:"Don't worry,I assure you even Pepe and the others who were shot,that we will take the fight to them"goes into his car with some Cubans and drives off. Alley-Chinatown,Portland,Liberty City June 9,1986 2:50 pm Tommy Vercetti entered to an alleyway in Chinatown just a couple of blocks from Casa's.He sat down. Tommy:"Looks like a good place to eat some canoli"goes through the bag"there you are"he starts eating the canoli"That prick Casa may be expensive and a weirdo,but he can make a good canoli"He keeps eating his canoli and sees three triad men armed with pistols"What the hell you guys want?"he drops the canoli Triad:"Welcome back,Tommy how long has i been?10,no fiteen years" Tommy:"Who the hell told you I was here?" Triad:carrying two pistols"A little birdie,i been waiting to do this for a long time,Tommy." Tommy:'That was fifteen years ago,I'm clean.I'm trying to get a new life" Triad:'You really expect us to believe thus bullsh*t.Are you calling me an idiot?" Tommy:laughs"Wow,you finally found out that you are,good for you!" Triad:loads his pistol"Cho and Sui,surround the place,im going to have a little fun with Mr. Vercetti" Tommy:"You dont have to do this,can you forgive and forget?"I dont want to kill you" Triad:" You kill me?That's funny? You dont have that guy Sonny to save your ass now.I'm going to get you for killing my brother all those years ago" Tommy:"please,dont make me have to" Triad:"Boys give it to him"they come up surounding Tommy and pin him down the floor punching him.He is bleeding"No one can save you" Tommy:"Get the hell off me"tries to struggle and kicks one Triad in the balls and get the gun out of him"Gun meet Traid,Triad meet Gun"shoots one of them and hits another with the barrel Triad:"Don't let him escape"joins in the fray Tommy:beats the crap out of the Traid leader"You shouldn't have messed with the Harwood Butcher"shoots him in the heart."right behind him,a Triad attemped to shoot him in his chest bu is shot by someone Tommy:"Whos there?anser me?You want some more"a familiar figure comes out from the shadows." Sonny;'No hello Tommy?I guess fifteen years sure gave you an excuse to not have manners" Tommy:tired"what do you want Sonny,I handled it?" Sonny:"yea rite,if it wasn for me and my Ruger,you would be dead rite now" Tommy:'Well thank you"looks a him"What you doing here?" Sonny:"What an old buddy cant say hi to another?" Tommy:"Who told you I was here?" Sonny:"Don't you remeber,Mr. Harrison,the guy who works in your dad's print shop?" Tommy:"Yea" Sonny:"Tommy,walk with me,talk with me,I have this idea you would like.............." Diaz Mansion-Starfish Island,Vice City,Florida June 9,1986 4:00 pm Diaz:smells the cocaine"What is this sh*t you guys make?" Araujo:"It some homemade stuff me and Santiago do in my house when the wife aint home." Diaz:"You dickheads made better sh*t then this." Santiago:"Give us a break,processing coke isn't easy especially with the rival gangs trying to get a piece of the action>" Diaz:throws the table with the coke"You dicks better make better coke or you end up like that fatass Rivera ." Araujo:"Damn,Diaz relax,we get started tomorrow." Diaz:laughs"hahahahaha.Me chill out.I;'m the most calmest person in Florida."kicks the TV"Get started now"they run as T Bone enter Diaz's office.:" T Bone:looks at them leaving"Wasup,Diaz" Diaz:"At last,someone who can get the job done unlike all you assholes." T Bone:laughs"Thank you,Diaz.By the way,your donkey porn is great." Diaz:'You Like?" T Bone:"That Candy Suxx can ride up in my lap anytime" Diaz:"I hear you brother,want to have her with you for a night?" T Bone:"holmes,you can do that for me?" Diaz:"Of course,you helped me a lot and you deserve a porn star being boned by you" T Bone:"Isnt she Alex Shrub's ho?" Diaz:"Dont worry,i helped Alex Shrub become a Florida senator so he owes me.So you want her?" T bone:"Nah,boss this is my job after all." Diaz:'You loss,holmes.What happen to that guy I told you to kill?" T Bone:"You meant Jose Rivera?He sleeping with the fishes." Diaz:"Good job,anything new?" T Bone:"My friend,Luis Serrano found out about this big deal going on" Diaz:"From where?" T Bone:"Luis was in the Malibu and this guy named Kent Paul was drunk talking about some deal so i beat the crap out of him and found out about the deal." Diaz:"And?" T Bone:"Some Columbian guys,they are a two man-team." Diaz:" I bet they are wannabees waning a cut of my action!MY ACTION!" T Bone:"They making a deal with some mob family up north for 100,000 kilos for 3 million." Edited November 26, 2006 by Agninoter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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