Blackadder. Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 (edited) With the partial success of my GTA based story I thought I might make something not based on GTA in anyway. I call it Wall Rider Synopsis Aaron Parkson, a young adult is looking to make it big in life. He see’s his opportunity, and his only skill, Tagging. But the problem lies, gangs, his family and police will all try to stop him achieving his ultimate goal Aaron will take on street thugs and police officers in his rise to become the best tagger in the world. Hope you enjoy this story as it comes as much as my other story And this is a 1 Part story, not like my other one, although this one will be longer Edited October 26, 2006 by blackadder18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gouveia Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 hurray! i like your stories B18... hope this comes good! i like the synopsis... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Nice I'll read it when you post it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted October 27, 2006 Author Share Posted October 27, 2006 I wonder when that will be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 3, 2006 Share Posted November 3, 2006 I got here through your sig, the title "Wall Rider" was quite misleading, made me think about what perverted ideas you might have had I expect even better than Vercetti revenge (I might make some art for this too nothing promised though) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 4, 2006 Author Share Posted November 4, 2006 No you perverted freak! Anyway I've written chapter 1 but I'm seriously considering rewriting it, seems to absurd atm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 11, 2006 Author Share Posted November 11, 2006 Well Chapter 1 is here! (finally ) Chapter 1: The Birth Aaron is sitting on the couch at home drinking a soda Mum: So what you doing today? Aaron: I was gonna see some friends, you know Mum: What are you doing with your friends? Aaron: Dunno Mum: Fine, you do whatever you want Aaron: Fine, Cya Aaron gets off the couch and walks over to the bin. He drops his soda in. He then walks outside and down the street to meet his friends Tom: Hey Aaron: Hey, Sup? Anthony: Not much, you know, same old sh*t Aaron: Yeh I getcha Tom: So what you been doing? Aaron: Not much, just chores Tom: sh*t man you gotta get out of that sh*t, you gotta represent yourself! Aaron: Exactly how do I do that? Tom: Like this Tom runs across the street and sprays some writing on a wall. He then runs back across the street Anthony: Tom, when were you going to tell me about this? Tom: Well, uhm, I was going to, but I thought I would tell you both at the same time Aaron: So what’s good about tagging? Tom: Its the best way to represent yourself! Aaron: Ok Tom throws the spraycan over to Aaron Tom: I have to go, I’ll be back in a hour. When I get back I want to see some some of your art! Anthony: Cya Aaron: Catch you later 1 hour later Tom’s car pulls up into the street Aaron: There he is Tom: Yo, so have you done it? Aaron: Check it out for yourself Tom looks around Tom: Holy sh*t Every house in the street has the word Eddie scrawled all over it Tom: Didn’t think you had it in you! Aaron: This is just the beginning Anthony: What you mean by that? Aaron: Maybe this is where I belong, tagging Tom: HA! You make me laugh Aaron: Will you be laughing when I do my next tag? Tom: And where will that be? Aaron: The Police Station… Seems someone rated my topic down Chapter 1 isn't very long, or very good, but like I said, my head is messed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 11, 2006 Author Share Posted November 11, 2006 (edited) Laggy Server Edited November 11, 2006 by blackadder18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 12, 2006 Share Posted November 12, 2006 I enjoy reading your other story but this first chapter has put me off, alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 12, 2006 Author Share Posted November 12, 2006 Actually I think it's pretty sh*t, I think I will ditch this story until I have finished my other story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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