KillaCalli Posted January 30, 2007 Share Posted January 30, 2007 damn Tony I'm hyped up till the next 4 days. Looks like things are really gonna start to pick up. Best fanfic ever, that's for sure. much respect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted February 2, 2007 Author Share Posted February 2, 2007 Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you're still reading this. Means alot to me. Will you still be around 100+ Chapters from now? --- Chapter 36: Anywhere City But HereJanuary 13TH 2004: Pagan City, Rome [1.09pm] Tony and the Grove Street Homie's have split up into pairs, and have been looking around on the streets for the Diablo's for the past few hours. So far, they haven't found anyone Lawrence: Shi'... (Sits down on the curb) I'm thirsty, nigguh Tony: Come on, there's no time for rests. I thought you guys had all the stamina in the world, you know, robberies and stuff Lawrence: Grove Stree' dun' do robberies n' sh*t anymo' Tony: Well, come on anyway. I'm carrying the M4 (Loads it onto his shoulder) You're carrying a light little Colt Lawrence: I'll catch ya up, I'ma rest here fo' now Tony: Whatever Tony walks away, as Lawrence lays on his back on the curb and shuts his eyes, when a Diablo car makes a left around the corner and stops next to Lawrence, and two Diablo members step out. One is carrying a bat, and the other, a 9MM pistol Diablo Member: Well well, look who we gots here. It's one of them Los Santos gringo's Lawrence opens his eyes as the Diablo Member swings his bat and smashes Lawrence on the bridge of his nose, knocking him unconcious Diablo Member #2: Load his carcas in the boot, n' lets go get sum' f*ckin' beer. --- January 13TH 2004: Anywhere City, America [9.52am] Alarms are going off, as a bank door is booted open, and Claude runs out, carrying a sack of money over his shoulder, as Alan follows him out, shooting at two cops in the distance with a Stubby Shotgun, and then continues following Claude round to the front, where a car is sitting beside the alleyway Alan: (Jumps into the backseat) We made a killin', now let's go! Claude jumps into the front seat and starts the car up and quickly speeds away and makes a sharp right, as cops speed by Claude: (Looks in the mirror and sees nothing but blue and red flashing lights and tosses Alan a Mac) Alan: (Shoots out the back window and proceeds to shoot at the cops) Come on, pick up the pace, Claude Claude puts his foot down as they go down a small hill, and the wheels get a few feet of air time before crashing into the concrete Alan: (Grabs the back of his neck) Come on, atleast be a little careful Claude sharply makes a left into a garage on the corner of a street and gets out of the car, as Alan does the same, as police cars rush by, and they walk through to a kitchen Maria: (Puts down a pan she was washing) Finally! How was our taking! Am I gonna get to go on a shoppin' spree, because I'm dying to get these n-- Claude fires a shot into the air with his 9MM, abruptly puting an end to Maria's high-pitched speech Maria: I really wish you'd use something else than a gunshot to get me to shut up... (Looks up at the hole in the ceiling and pouts) Alan: Load the bags onto the table and lets have a look Maria: You got a phonecall earlier, Fido Claude continues counting the money, and eventually looks up at Maria Maria: Not you, I'm talkin to Alan Alan: (Looks up) Who was it? Maria: Err.. was it... John... no... maybe he didn't leave a name. Oh wait, I wrote it down in the den. He said it was important anyhow Alan: (Turns his head and faces Claude) Sideburns Claude looks up at Alan Alan: Keep counting, I'll be right back Alan drops an un-sorted wad of cash and walks through to the den and picks up the piece of paper, looks over it, and sees a scribbled 'Vince' on the paper, with a number under it. He puts the pad down, and picks up the phone from the wall, and dials the number, and awaits a response Vincent (OS): Alan? Alan: Yeah... Vincent (OS): So, Toreno was correct afterall. You are in Anywhere City. Good to know Alan: Whoever you are, I'm warning you; leave me alone Vincent (OS): I'll leave you alone alright, but your brother on the other hand... well, he comes back to New Stanford later. Me and him, we're working for Christian, except, well, I'm not actually working with them, more along the lines of against them Alan: Leave my brother alone, he hasn't done anything to you Vincent (OS): Well, neither did your cousin, but (Laughs) that didn't stop me Alan: (Clenches his fist so tight that blood begins to seep down the side of his hand) You son of a bitch Vincent (OS): Good! You're angry! I like that. Maybe your buddy Tony went on the same ride as Jake! Alan: (Puts the phone closer to his mouth as his voice starts crackling from anger) I'm gonna kill you. Do you understand me? Alan slams the phone back onto the wall with such brute force, that the wall begins cracking, and Maria comes in to see what happened Maria: You okay, Fido? Alan: No... I'm not... Alan walks out of the den and up a small flight of stairs and walks through an opened green door and lays on the bed in his room Alan: "If that guy was telling the truth... it would make sense as to why I can't find Tony in Vice City, or Jake anywhere else..." --- January 13TH 2004: Pagan City, Rome [1.57pm] Sweet and Mark have been playing dice with a couple of the locals outside of a small wooden street corner store for the past half an hour, as Sweet rolls again and him and Mark begin cheering Sweet: Pay up, mother f*ckers! A man shakes his head and slaps some bills into Sweet's extended open palm and walks away, as Tony turns the corner and approaches them Tony: You seen Lawrence anywhere? Mark: Wasn't he wi' you? Tony: Yeah, he was, but now he's vanished. I left him to get some rest on a curb step for like ten miniutes, I come back, and he's gone Sweet: (Laughs) He's always wanderin' off. Come on, you might aswell stick wi' us while yo' here. Maybe we'll run into sum' more of the OG's Just a few blocks away, Big Bear and a Grove OG are beating down on a couple of Diablo's in an alley Big Bear: (Throws a punch into the Diablo's left cheek) Come on, spit it out, where's yo base nigguh Diablo Member: (Spits out his tooth, as blood covers Big Bear's right shoe) Puh... like I'd tell you, pendejo mother fu-- The Grove OG stomps on his head, as the Diablo member passes out, and the other one is also passed out Big Bear: You a big boy. Throw one over yer' shoulder, n' lets take him back to tha' crib. Grove OG: Whutevuh' ya say, Bear The Grove OG bends down and picks him up and just like a ragdoll, tosses him over his shoulder, as he follows Big Bear out of the alley. --- January 13TH 2004: Anywhere City, America [10.31am] The back door of the house Claude and Alan went into earlier to lose the cops is opened, as a man walks in and walks over to a desk and throws his keys on them, as Maria comes out and greets him, and shuts the door at the same time Maria: You've got to learn to close the door when you come in, Woozie. It's freezing out there Woozie: Sorry, Maria. Is Claude around? Maria: Yeah, he's in the kitchen, still counting money from a score earlier Woozie takes a black scarf off from around his neck, and wipes the rain from his black glasses and guides his way into the kitchen and puts his hand on Claude's maroon colored leather jacket Woozie: Claude, good to see you again. Ace is organizing a new race soon, just thought I'd mention it to you Claude's attention sways from the money, and onto Woozie Woozie: Grand prize will be fifty. I know you've been out of the race scene for a while, but I remember those races me and you had back in 'Fierro, and I think you could score big off of this Claude looks at Woozie for a moment, then goes back to counting his money, as Alan comes downstairs in a dark green army jacket, with a black hooded sweatshirt underneath, with the hood pulled over the top of his head. He grabs a handfull of cash from the table without saying a word and continues walking towards the door Woozie: Whose that? (Walks over to the sound of Alan's footsteps and grabs his arm) Alan: (Pulls away) Get the f*ck off me Woozie: No need to be so rude. You sound familiar, but, I can't put my finger on it... Alan: We've met once, briefly. You're probaly thinking of Tony Woozie: Oh yeah, you both sound alike to me (Laughs) sorry... Alan: Yeah? Well, all of you look the same to me... Woozie: Alright, I guess I deserved that. Stop and have a drink with me for a second Alan: No, I've gotta get back to England. My brother's life is in danger Maria: I thought you came here because you didn't care about your brother... Alan: I did, but... he's my brother, I can't just let him die like my cousin, Jake and my best friend, Tony Woozie: Wait, Tony's dead? When did this happen? Alan: I don't know. Look, I've gotta go, and I'm gonna have a hard enough time getting back into England. God knows I had a hard enough time getting out. It was good to see you again, Claude. Take it easy. Maria: The doors always open, Fido... Alan walks out of the door and Maria walks over to it and closes it, as rain heavily pours down on Alan, as he gets into a Black Manana, with the keys still in the ignition, and he starts it up and floors it outta there, only to stop half way down the road and begin reversing back. --- January 13TH 2004: Pagan City, Rome [2.45pm] Big Bear has gone into the kitchen and grabbed a chair and set it up in the middle of the living room, while the Grove OG has moved the couch out of the way and put the unconcious Diablo member on the chair, and Big Bear begins tying him up with some rope, as the Diablo member starts coming round Diablo Member: 'Ey man, get off me, puto! Big Bear: (Ties the final knot) Aiight, you ready to talk yet, 'chu son of a bitch!? At that moment, the Diablo's cellphone starts ringing in his pants pocket. The Grove OG reaches in and pulls it out and answers it, as Big Bear takes out a 9MM from the back of his pants and puts it to the Diablo's head, and The Grove OG puts the phone next to the Diablo members ear Big Bear: (Whispering) You're gonna lead a couple of ya boys down here... Diablo Member: Algunos pendejo me tienen atado para arriba en la avenida de parque trece ochenta cinco. Enviar el respaldo pesado, y aprisa. ¡Hay solamente dos de ellos! The Grove OG pulls the phone away and hangs it up Big Bear: Y'know, I took a little Spanish in highschool... Apart from being poorly phrased, I think ya kno' what happens now, nigguh Big Bear pushes the 9MM hard into the temple of the Diablo member, who screams, and then Big Bear pulls the hammer back and pulls the trigger, blowing the Diablo's brains all over the Grove OG standing opposite him Big Bear: Call sum' homies back here, now! Big Bear runs into the kitchen and starts taking out all the wooden draws and splitting them apart. He runs over to a closet and opens the door and takes out a hammer and some nails and runs over to the front door and begins closing it up, as the Grove OG is on the phone. --- January 13TH 2004: Pagan City, Rome [2.55pm] Tony's phone begins ringing as he's walking with Sweet & Mark around a corner. He takes it out and answers it as Sweet spots a Diablo member, which spots them back, and turns around and starts running away. Tony hangs the phone up before he had a chance to listen and starts chasing after the Diablo member along with Sweet & Mark Sweet: Who was on tha' phone!? Tony: Don't know! Come on! Tony overtakes Sweet & Mark and continues running after the Diablo member who runs into a house and slams the door, only to have the door kicked open shortly after by Tony, as the Diablo member runs through the house and begins climbing out the back window, Tony grabs him before he has a chance to get all the way out Diablo Member: Get off me pendejo! The Diablo member kicks at Tony's face, as Tony loosens his grip, and the Diablo member punches out the glass of the opened window infront of him and grabs a piece and turns around as Tony tightens his grip and pulls him back into the room, and the Diablo member swings the glass at Tony, as it scrapes down his forehead, and blood starts pouring out, and the Diablo member pulls away and begins running back out of the house, only to be cut off by Sweet, who throws a punch, catching the Diablo member in the nose, and breaking it. The Diablo member falls backwards into a portable lamp, and onto the ground, as Tony comes through and stomps on his face twice, knocking him unconcious Tony: (Wiping the blood from his eyes) What should we do with him? Take him home? Sweet: Ye', an' ya' should get that cut checked out, homie Tony wipes the constant stream of blood on his forehead one more time and walks over to a mirror in the kitchen and looks at a huge gash going verticaly downwards, over his left eye, going all the way to his hairline, and stopping just under his eyebrow Tony: (Wipes it once more) Don't worry about it... Tony then remembers his cellphone, and takes it back out and checks it, and re-dials the number, with no answer after a few tries Sweet: (Comes in with the Diablo member over his shoulder) Who was it? Tony: Unknown number Just as Tony was putting his cellphone away, it rings again, and he answers it Tony: Yeah? Lawrence (OS): Tony! I nee' help! Tony: What? Lawrence? Where are you? Tony hears a muffling sound, then the signal goes dead, as Tony looks at his phone to check the battery signal, which is still full. He puts the phone back into his pocket and looks over at Sweet, with a concerned look covering his face. 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KillaCalli Posted February 2, 2007 Share Posted February 2, 2007 yeah i'm definately going to stick around for this Zimmzy. Youi should keep posting and postin I"m never gonna stop readin this... I told some of my friends to check this out but they don't have the attention span to read all of this... but its all good you still have ppl reading this. Hey how far away are you in the story from the end of this part? Because this is a long section, ever since Vince came into the story and Jake dissapeared it's been a long time.... And I smell that something really big is gonna happen.... can't wait for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted February 2, 2007 Author Share Posted February 2, 2007 yeah i'm definately going to stick around for this Zimmzy. Youi should keep posting and postin I"m never gonna stop readin this... I told some of my friends to check this out but they don't have the attention span to read all of this... but its all good you still have ppl reading this. Hey how far away are you in the story from the end of this part? Because this is a long section, ever since Vince came into the story and Jake dissapeared it's been a long time.... And I smell that something really big is gonna happen.... can't wait for more. This all comes to a very harsh end at Chapter 57, October 30TH 2004, and then it's back to 1995 to see where it all began. And yes, something very big begins happening at around Chapter 39, this Pagan City trip is only to build up to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rashon. Posted February 2, 2007 Share Posted February 2, 2007 That chapter went global and it looks like you've really pre-written these chapters fast. I wonder what happened to Larry (Lawrence ). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillaCalli Posted February 3, 2007 Share Posted February 3, 2007 chapter 57? wow.... that's a long way to go bro... but i guess you got this planned out which is amazing because that's A LOT of writing... ...But I"m definately sticking around for this. much respect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted February 4, 2007 Author Share Posted February 4, 2007 (edited) Chapter 37: Walking Through WallsJanuary 13TH 2004: Pagan City, Rome [3.36pm] Mark: Bear! Big bear! Wake up homie! C'mon!! Mark is leaning over Big Bear, who is unconcious on the floor with two bullet wounds in his stomach, as Sweet gets up from checking on the Grove OG that was with him Sweet: (Turns to Mark who looks up at him) He's dead! Mark: (Stands up) Bear too... Sweet: (Walks over to Tony) This is all your fault, nigga! You had the chance to an'sa tha' phone earlier, an' you let Bear get ambushed like this! Tony is looking down at the blood-covered floorboards, too ashamed to look either Sweet or Mark in the eyes Sweet: An'sa me, you f*ckin sherm-head asshole. What hav' you got to say for yo'self!? Tony: (Continuing to look downwards) I'm sorry... Sweet: You sorry!?... You sorry!?... That doesn't bring Big Bear back ta' life, does it!? (Shoves Tony in the chest, causing him to fall over) I'm through helpin' yo' ass out. We came ova' here fo' Mark, fo' a lil' bit of fun, and this sh*t happens!? You get us into some petty gang war with the f*ckin' Diablo's!? Mark: Come on, ease up, Sweet (Grabs his arm) Sweet: (Pulls away) The f*ck off'a me, nigguh (Turns and looks down at Tony, who is yet to stand back to his feet) I see you again, I break yo' f*ckin' neck, nigguh Sweet walks past Tony as Mark begins following him, and he stops by Tony and offers his hand to help him up, but Tony doesn't reach out and accept the gesture, and Mark continues walking by, following Sweet, as Tony closes his eyes and rests his head on the floor Sweet: (Looking back at Tony as he continues walking with nothing but anger on his face) Man, can you believe his sh*t!? Mark: Come on, Sweet... Sweet: Nawh, don't gimme this sh*t... (Gets into his parked Remington as Mark follows him in) I should put a f*ckin' bullet in his head righ' now for this! Sweet takes out his 9MM Pistol from his waist and gets out of the Remington, as Mark rushes out to try and stop him Mark: Whoawhoawhoawhoa, stopstopstopstop! (Grabs Sweet's chest and pulls him backwards) You're angry, you just need to calm d-- Sweet lashes out, and turns around, and punches Mark in the face, knocking him unconcious instantly, as he falls onto the grass, and the water from the sprinklers start covering his shirt Sweet: (Kicks the slightly open door wide open) Tony! You're f*ckin' d-- Sweet looks down, and Tony has disappeared. He puts his gun back into his pants and starts looking around each room, but finds no sign of him Sweet: sh*t!... Sweet runs back out of the house, and sees Mark begin waking up Sweet: (Helps pick Mark up) Lissen', it was yo' f*ckin' fault that Bear's dead. You brung us out here. You're gonna fine' Lawrence, an' anyone else, and bring 'em back to 'Santos on your own, you got me!? Sweet lets go of Mark, still woozy he stumbles around a bit, as Sweet gets into the car and speeds away. Once he's picked up some speed and turns around a corner and out of Park Avenue, he takes out his cellphone and dials a number, then puts it to his ear Sweet: CJ! No time ta' talk, bro. Juss' lissen'... --- January 13TH 2004: Pagan City, Rome [3.54pm] Tony is walking down the street with his hands in the pockets of CJ's jeans, as he walks into a bar and sits down on a stool and orders a beer. The bartender brings over a rich, frosty, ice cold beer in a tall glass over to him and sets it down on the red placemat, and Tony starts drinking it -- heavily. Just then, a couple of Diablo thugs walk into the bar Diablo Thug: And 'den he was like 'Help me, help me!' (Laughs) Diablo Thug #2: (Laughs) Stupid puto's got no chance in our town! Tony clenches the glass by the handle and stands up, walking over to the Diablo thugs and slams the glass over one's head, and he falls to the floor, as the few people in the bar jump back in horror, and the other Diablo thug picks up a pool cue and swings it at Tony, who ducks, then sweeps the Diablo thug's leg, and he falls to the floor Tony: (Grabs him by the throat) You're talking about the Grove Street boys, aren't you? Diablo Thug: (Coughing) What's it to you, pendejo!? Tony: (Releases his grip and punches him in the nose, then resumes his tight grip on his throat) Well? Diablo Thug: (Coughing) I think you broke my nose, esé Tony releases his grip once again, which startles the Diablo thug Diablo Thug: Stop! Don't hit me again! I'll talk, I'll talk! Tony stops his fist from coming down mid-way and lets the Diablo thug begin to speak Diablo Thug: Boss has got a Grove Street boy locked up at headquarters Tony: (Stands up) That's all I needed to hear, thanks for your time Tony turns around to walk away, and he's staring down the barrel of a loaded shotgun of the bartender Tony: (Laughs at the bartender's shaking hands) Go ahead... Bartender: I don't want any trouble! So.. I think.. It's best you just got the hell outta here, kid! Tony: I was going anyway, but I'll be taking that weapon you're wielding, now come on (Extends his hand causing the bartender to jump back) hand it over Bartender: You think I'm crazy!? Tony: Just hand it over, and I'm outta here... Tony grabs the shotgun and points it away from himself, as the bartender fires a shot, and shoots the Diablo thug in the chest, as he drops to the floor, and the bartender lets go of the gun, screaming in horror, as Tony takes it and walks over to the remaining Diablo member, who is unconcious on the floor Tony: (Nudging him with the shotgun) Wake up Diablo Thug #2: (Wipes the blood from his head) Urgh... what? Tony: Where's your headquarters at? Diablo Thug #2: Industrial Way... urgh (Passes out) Tony walks out of the bar, walking down the street carrying a shotgun in his right hand, with bloodstains all over CJ's white vest, causing pedestrians to run off in terror. --- January 13TH 2004: Pagan City, Rome [5.02pm] Tony's been walking for over an hour, down the busy streets and secluded neighborhoods of Pagan City, wielding a shotgun in his right hand. Suprisingly, no one has phoned the police yet, and Tony has arrived at Industrial Way, where two major buildings stand, one has Diablo members outside of it inside of a Lowrider, listening to music and bouncing up and down Diablo Member: See, it's all about suspension in these things these days, esé Tony walks closer to the Lowrider, as the Diablo members look at him, and he aims the shotgun at the gas tank, as they begin screaming in terror, each franticly trying to climb out of the open-top Lowrider, and Tony fires a shot at it, causing it to explode instantly, as Diablo members rush over to the windows of the building, looking down at the carnage. Their friends down below, burned to a crisp, dead. Diablo Member: Someone go tell the boss theres a maniac with a shotgun down here Diablo Member #2: (Laughs) He's just one man (Reaches over onto a table and picks up an Uzi) I'll pop his head off, watch rookie The Diablo member starts firing down at Tony, who calmly looks up at him, as he misses all shots, then he begins reloading, as Tony aims the shotgun up at the window and blasts a hole in his neck, sending him flying backwards, while his head is torn off and lands on the floor next to a couple of Diablo members Diablo Member: sh*t, (Yells) we gonna need some back-up over here! Tony walks over to the doors entrance, and opens the scratched up brown door, one more chip of broken paint falling off of the door as he does so, and walks inside, only to find a dull, empty room, with a woman sitting at a desk behind a computer Tony: (Looks over at the woman) Where's the Grove boy being held at in this place? Woman: (Looks up at Tony) Ugh, deal with the men upstairs, I'm just here to make this place look like a legit hospital Tony: (Looking around at the room) Hospital?... You're doing a top notch job there Tony aims the shotgun at the woman's computer and blows it up, causing sparks to coat her chest and lap, severly burning her as she screams in agony, and Tony walks up to the second floor, seeing two Diablo members listening to music from a CD player, one holding a metal baseball bat Diablo Member: (Looks over at Tony) 'Ay yo, who said you could be up here Tony (Aims the shotgun at the Diablo member) Where's the Grove boy at? Diablo Member: Yo dude, sh*t, chill, chill. He's on the next floor... Tony walks over to the Diablo member and grabs the bat out of his hands and continues walking, and goes up to the next floor, and sees only the headless dead body, and he hears tires screech outside Tony (Runs over to the window and looks down) Son of a bitch... Tony aims the shotgun down at a couple of Diablo cars and begins firing rounds at them, hitting one, causing it to swerve and crash into a tree stump. Tony tries to fire the shotgun down at it again, but realizes it's out of ammo, and chucks it on the floor, picking up the Uzi from the hand of the dead body, and he climbs out the window and uses each broken brick as a ladder untill he gets about ten feet down then lets go, and jumps down to the floor. He catches his balance and begins walking to the Diablo car and reaches it, and sees a dead Diablo member hanging out the passenger door, with heavy noises from inside of the trunk. Tony: (Walks over to the trunk and pops it open, seeing Lawrence inside) Lawrence! You okay? (Rips the tape off of his mouth and begins un-tying him) Lawrence: Man, am I glad ta' see you, snowflake Tony: (Begins un-tying his ankles) You gonna be okay on getting back to Los Santos? Lawrence: Back ta' 'Santos? I thought we was out here tryin' ta' have a vacation, n' raid sum' military base A Diablo car speeds back around the corner, and Tony looks over and notices it Tony: sh*t, they went around to come back for this one Tony takes the Uzi out of his pants and starts walking towards the Diablo car, which is picking up speed, heading right for Tony, as Tony starts shooting at it constantly, bullets hailing down all over it. The car continues gaining speed, getting closer and closer to Tony, untill Tony finally jumps out the way, and the car slams the handbrake on, and starts skidding to a stop from going at 140mph, and Lawrence sees the car coming right for him, as he starts trying to hop out of the Diablo car trunk, his ankles still roped together Lawrence: Shít... sh*t!! (Screams) Tony!! Lawrence manages to get onto his knees, as the Diablo car slams into the trunk of the car, sending Lawrence flying into the air, and landing on the top of the Diablo car's roof Lawrence: Aww.. sh*t... (Grabbing his neck) Tony, I think I broke sumin' El Burro steps out of the car, wielding a Stubby Shotgun. He slams the door shut, and wipes the blood from his nose onto his grubby white vest El Burro: Broke my nose. You gonna pay for that El Burro looks at Lawrence on the roof, as Tony begins firing at him, and he takes cover behind the car, slowly reaching up and pulling Lawrence down, and punching him in the face as he does so Tony: The hell are you so afraid of you fat greaseball. Get the f*ck out here Tony continues firing at the car, then stops and he realizes he only has a few bullets left El Burro: You want me tough guy!? You want the Burro himself!? El Burro steps out from behind the car, using Lawrence as a shield, and Tony instinctivly fires at him, shooting Lawrence in the chest twice Lawrence: (Grabs his chest, gasping for breath) T..Tony... you... son of a... bitch... El Burro tosses him down to the floor, lifting the Stubby Shotgun up in his left hand and aiming at Tony, and fires at him, grazing his shoulder, as he fires the one final bullet of the Uzi at El Burro, and hits him right between the eyes. El Burro drops his Stubby Shotgun and falls backwards and Tony drops his Uzi and falls on to his knees, and clamps his left shoulder to stop the bloodloss Tony: (Searching through his pocket untill he finds his cellphone and takes it out and dials it) ...Tommy, I need you to pick me up from Pagan City Tommy (OS): (Getting angry) What am I, your personal Taxi service or something? Tony: I'm shot... Tommy (OS): (Calms down) Alright, but listen; Umberto called-- Tony: (Notices Mark walking towards him) sh*t... (Stands up) What the hell are you doin' here... Tommy (OS): Whatever you're doin', stop it and listen! Tony: I'll call you back, Tommy (Hangs the phone up) If you've come to rescue Lawrence, you're a little late (Looks over at Lawrence's dead body) Mark: CJ really was right bout'chu then... I didn't wanna believe it Tony: Wait, what? CJ? What's CJ gotta do with anything? Mark: (Bends down and picks up the Uzi) CJ said you were Mafioso, say you dun' care 'bout us anymo'. Big shot, tough guy, big mobster in Vice City Tony: If I didn't care, why would I of come to you for help with this? We're still friends, just because we come from different worlds these days-- Mark: (Aims the Uzi at Tony) CJ was gettin' a lil' paranoid, so that's why you didn't see him when you got back over there Tony: CJ, paranoid... of me? Mark: Paranoid of the Mafia, you know why Tony: These guys ain't the Leone's, okay? The Leone's have been dead for two years. Someone killed their Don in 2001, and I killed the Don in 2002, you've got-- Mark: I ain't gotta do anythin', CJ been makin' moves, makin friends. They're comin' down ta' Vice. Makin' sure there ain't gonna be anymore Mafioso aroun' him Tony: We ain't gonna start anything with you, Sweet, or CJ. You're just chasing ghosts, starting a war on false grounds... Mark: Ma' brother was killed by that Cipriani guy, or don't you f*ckin' rememba' that!? Tony: ...Fine, do what you gotta do, man. Put a bullet in me if it'll make you feel better. But I'm warning you now; you go to Vice, you're gonna get killed Mark: (Laughs) Na'. Not wiv' tha' friends we've been makin'. I ain't gonna shoot'chu (Tosses the gun on the floor) I'm just givin' you fair warnin'; Get outta Vice, or join us Tony: I can't do that, Mark. Mark: Whatever ya say, man. We'll be seein' you real soon then... Mark turns around and walks away, as Tony stands there, staring a hole in his back, watching him walk away, as the sun begins to set in the saturated orange evening sky. Edited February 4, 2007 by TonyZimmzy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillaCalli Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 real dramatic... nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gtafreak_2004 Posted February 6, 2007 Share Posted February 6, 2007 oh man, nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rashon. Posted February 8, 2007 Share Posted February 8, 2007 What a chapter that was. Too bad, Larry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crip_Killah Posted February 8, 2007 Share Posted February 8, 2007 oh man, nice job! Same here Tony! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted February 10, 2007 Author Share Posted February 10, 2007 Thanks for the replies, I think that's the most i've ever had . --- Chapter 38: Grand UnificationJanuary 14TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [6.18am] Reporter: Breaking news for Florida today, as Immigrants, up to five hundred and fifty, have all broken the boarder, and believed to of entered the Tampa and Miami area's. We fear some may have come in through South Beach, and some may have come in through Vice City. (Images of boats stationed at ports whilst Immigrants are stepping off appear on the screen, carrying AK-47's) We fear that rumoured Mob Boss Tommy Vercetti may have made a deal for drugs and or money with the Internationaly feared organizations, The Colombian Cartel and The Caribbean Cartel. We fear this may just be the first few shipments in the coming weeks and months, of Immigrants to breach our state. The City where America goes to die, is once again becoming; The City where Immigrants come to live. Tommy: (Turns the television off with the remote on his desk and stands up) Why the f*ck are they pointing the blame on me for this? (Tosses a vodka glass across the room) This is the last thing I need right now, a bunch of gangs entering the city... Tony walks into the office, with a large bandage on his neck, still dressed in CJ's white tanktop and jeans Tony: What's all the commotion? I heard a glass smash in here Tommy: The media thinks I cut a deal over sea's with the Colombian Cartel, to import five hundred Immigrants into Florida Tony: The Colombian Cartel? They were based in Liberty City. They disbanded because all their leaders were getting cut down Tommy: And you're one hundred percent certain the Colombian Cartel is finished in Liberty City? Tony: I'm one hundred and ten percent certain, Tommy. Everything over in Liberty City is finished, there's no power struggle going on over there, I checked it all over a year ago, you've got nothing to worry about, no one's gonna try and pull a fast one on you... Tommy: ...Yeah, yeah you're probaly right... the last thing I wanna do is get paranoid and start making careless mistakes to my business. You can take the rest of the day off, go out with what's her name, take her to lunch or something Tony: Alright. I'll see you later, Tommy Tony walks back out of the office and closes the door behind him and takes a deep breath, thinking about what Mark said to him last night in Pagan City, and he goes downstairs and picks up the phone in the cramped lounge area, waving all the Vercetti gang members to leave, as he dials a number. --- January 14TH 2004: New Stanford, England [11.16am] Julio and his son, Christian are in the living room of Christian's mansion, catching up on old times. Vincent Sean is with them in a brand new black suit and cream coloured shirt underneath, sipping on a glass of red wine, jumping in and out of the conversation at random points. Julia is in the corner, looking bored, talking on the phone to one of her friends, as Julio opens another bottle of wine and pours a glass for himself and Christian Christian: (Laughing) So he says to the guy; 'You'd better quit while you're behind, or I'm gonna blow a hole in your foot' Everyone cracks up, as Julio wipes the tears from his eyes Julio: I forgot how funny jour jokes can be, my son... gosh (Wipes the tears from his eyes a little more) Vincent: (Slows down his laughing pattern and looks over at the doorknob turning) Terrance walks in the door, wearing his black jacket and jeans with a black shirt underneath, and his dogtags on, as Julio stands up Julio: Terrance! How was jour flight back my friend!? Terrance: Never been so glad to be home in my f*ckin' life. This old hippie dude wouldn't stop buggin me Julio: So jou iced him, am I right!? Haha!! Terrance: Oh, err, yeah, sure. Iced him, in cold blood! Julio: (Hugs him then stands back and takes a good look at him) It's good to see jou again, especially now that all of us are on the same page, eh? Christian: (Stands up) It's good to see you, Terrance. Have a seat, meet our new friend here Vincent Sean stands up and offers a handshake to Terrance, who complie's Vincent: Call me Vincent Terrance: Terrance (Pulls his hand away) So, how come you're with us? Vincent: I-- Julio: This man right here, jou know what he did to earn our respect mang?... He cut the head from Matt Romani (Makes a cut throat gesture with his thumb over his neck) Terrance: (Looks at Vincent dead in the eyes) Impressive, I've gotta say... Vincent: You're Alan Wood's brother, aren't you? Terrance: Yeah, I am... Vincent: Well, I've got a suprise for you then. I know where Alan is, and I'd probaly say he'll be on his way back home anytime soon Julio: It's true jou know, this kid, he know everything! Vincent: And don't worry -- we'll personally take Richard down, the miniute he comes back here Julia: Err, what the... hold on, Samantha, I've got another call on the other line. (Presses the button to transfer calls) Hello? Tony (OS): Julia, it's Richard. Could you put Christian on? Julia: Hey, Christian, it's Richard on the phone Christian quickly runs over and grabs the phone and puts his finger on his lips, signaling for everybody to be quiet, as he puts the phone to his ear and clears his throat Christian: Ah, Richard my old friend... How is Pagan City treating you and Terrance? Tony (OS): Listen -- I'll be away a little longer than I expected. I don't know what happened to Terrance, I think he's OK, but I've got some sh*t to take care of, you understand? Christian: (Tensing the grip on the phone to the point where he can't stop his hand shaking, trying to stay calm) Yes, Richard... I understand... The phoneline goes dead, and Christian slams the phone into the floor and starts screaming and yelling Julio: Christian! Calm down! What happened!? Christian: Richard said he's staying away for a little while... sh*t!, Do you think he knows!? Julio: Nah, just calm down... he'll be back, eh?... 'Til then, let's rejoice in the fact that Alan is coming home shortly Terrance: I'm so damn excited... about everything, y'know? Vincent: Yeah. Me too. Vincent casually smiles at Terrance, untill he turns his head away, then a psychotic stare overcomes his face. --- January 14TH 2004: London, England [11.27am] Security, police, and a SWAT team are standing inside of London National Airport. A camera crew is also on hand. The SWAT members are carrying M4 assault rifles, while the police are carrying 9MM pistols, and the security have pepper spray. One of the SWAT members stands up on a wooden box, as a plane outside comes in view, descending SWAT Leader: Alright troops. We all know why we are here, and what is expected of us all today. Now, International Criminal Alan Wood is on that plane, and will be here any miniute. He was spotted leaving Anywhere City, America. (Watches the plane land) You know the drill. He's wanted dead or alive, so if you have to, use what you've been given. Now let's lock and load, and make sure of the safety of everyone else aboard the plane. As the plane comes to a stop, the SWAT members lead the Police and Security out to it, as the ladders are positioned by the plane SWAT Leader: Alright, now, the pedestrians will probaly be getting off of the plane, be warey of them, and make sure not to shoot them. When we see Alan, we'll know! Nobody exits the plane for about two miniutes. The SWAT team are still in position, as the leader is beginning to get a little nervous, and sweat rolls off of his forehead SWAT Leader: Alright... we'll have to move in... come on... follow me... The SWAT move closer to the plane, and the leader begins walking up the steps, aiming his gun fowards, with his men shortly behind him. They get about half way up the plane when a bunch of Yakuza men step out wielding Uzi's and start firing at the SWAT members SWAT Leader: It's an ambush! Look ou-- Claude shoots out one of the far windows with an AK-47 and pops the SWAT Leader through the glass screen on his helmet, putting a bullet in his left eye, as more Yakuza members and SWAT members each gun the other down, and the Police and Security are easily then wiped out by Claude with his AK-47, then a door opens up under the plane, and Alan jumps out, wielding an M-60, and quickly begins firing at everyone outside, untill there are none left. Sirens are heard in the closing distance Alan: (Runs over to the steps and yells) Everyone good!? Maria comes off of the plane, carefully trying not to step in any blood on her heels, and Woozie follows behind, as Claude comes away from the window and makes his way down the aisle and follows them down aswell as a few Yakuza and Triad members Maria: I can't believe these new heels are gonna be ruined before I even had a chance to show them off to this fashion starved city! Woozie: So where exactly are we supposed to stay at before we can find your brother? Alan: I dunno. I guess... you can stay at my old house, I think it just got turned into a party hang out, maybe used as a tour on Halloween, where the cops were murdered at. But thanks for your help guys, I couldn't of done this without you Woozie: It's alright. We'll help you find that guy who threatened to kill your brother, then find your brother, and we can finally rest for a little while Alan: Claude, you OK? You seem a bit distant Claude: (Looking around as rain begins to pour, and he starts breathing heavily) Maria: What is it baby... (Looking around) I can't see anything wrong with this place Alan: Come on, let's get outta here before the back-up arrives Alan, Claude, Woozie and Maria begin running away, as cops arrive outside of the airport, only to miss them by a few seconds. --- January 14TH 2004: Los Santos, San Andreas [5.28pm] Sweet and Mark are sitting around in CJ's house on Grove Street, when CJ comes through the door with a cheesy grin on his face, and Sweet stands up and hugs him, as Mark stands up and slaps palms with him, and he walks through to the kitchen and starts fixing himself up a drink Sweet: So, bro, how'd it go? CJ: S'on Sweet: Aiight, coo'. Me an' Mark are a hundred percent behin' this. S'time we took down tha' only Mafia family left in America. Make sure there's no favors called in us CJ: (Stirs his drink then turns around facing Mark and Sweet) Gentlemen, we're in business. Tha' Vagos, Tha' Ballas, 'n Grove Stree', togev'a at last in peace 'n harmony Sweet: Ahmen ta' that, bro. Mark, go get us a couple of beers from the seven eleven... take a couple of the new boys wiv' ya aswell Mark: Ye'... coo'... Mark hesitantly walks out of CJ's house, seeing Grove Street boys mixing it up with the remaining Ballas and the few Vagos like they've been life-long friends. He shakes his head and gets into Sweet's Greenwood and drives away. Sweet: (Watches him leave out the window along with CJ beside him) Aiight, he's gone CJ: That nigguh has ta' pay for Big Bear's death. Not to mention all the otha' Grove Boy's that died to that 'Mobster' asshole. Can't ba'lieve me 'n him were friends at one point Sweet: It's aiight bro, everyone makes mistakes. How was you sa'posed to know he'd end up batting for the other team. Let's just kill him, 'n kill Tony, 'n get on wiv' sh*t CJ: Aiight. You definatly think I did tha' right thing tho' right? Makin' peace wi' Kane and tha' Ballas Sweet: (Laughs) Pssh, sh*t. If Kane could'a su'vived that hail ov' bullets in '92 and again in '95 and '02, this cat deserves to be on side when we go ta' Vice CJ: Yeah, aiight, i got'chu bro (Slaps palms with Sweet as they go back through to the kitchen). --- January 14TH 2004: New Stanford, England [12.49pm] Terrance is hanging out with some of the Mendez Cartel members downstairs while Christian and Julio are still talking in the lounge area. Vincent is in the kitchen along with Julia, who is making a sandwhich for him and her. The phone begins to ring and Christian picks it up Christian: Yeah? Voice (OS): We're back in business Christian: (Stands up from the leather chair and starts walking around the room, as Julio begins following him) Are you sure? The time is right for everything? Voice (OS): The time is perfect, esé. I was waiting for this day for a long time, holmes. It's time for the Colombian Cartel to start over Christian: Hold on, I'm gonna put you on speaker phone, so Julio can hear this aswell Christian walks across the room and puts the phone onto the machine and presses a button, and the slight distorted noise in the background comes over the system Julio: How're jou doin', Cesar? Cesar (OS): I'm doin' good, esé. Listen; I wen't over to Liberty City with a few of the Cartel members last week, check things over, you know. That place isn't right for the Cartel anymore, esé. We gotta move Julio: Well, that's why I put Cisco and Miguel in charge, they should of known Liberty City was garbage. Even when the Leone's were at their weakest, eh? Cesar (OS): Yeah, esé. My familia made their mistake and it cost her alot, holmes. Which is why I think we should move over to Vice City Julio: Now that jou mention it mang, there's a cat down that way, goes by the name of Tommy Vercetti Cesar (OS): Yeah, know all about him, don't sweat it though. No Mafia is stronger than Cesar Vialpando, The Cartel, and The Azteca's, holmes Julio: Alright, jou're in charge now, don't screw it up. My brothers would look down on me with shame if they knew it wen't bust for three years. There's just one thing I wan't jou to do for me, Julio Mendez, if jou're definatly relocating to Vice City, eh? Cesar (OS): Name it, holmes Julio: A hit on Tommy Vercetti, and a hit on his head Caporegime, Tony Zimmzy Cesar (OS): Tony Zimmzy, holmes?, sh*t, didn't know that kid had ties with Vercetti. S'no problem, esé. Consider it done. No power struggle in the city in a few days. The phoneline goes dead as Julio smiles and looks over at Christian, who already has a smile on his face Julio: The Columbian Cartel is back in business, Alan's comin' home, Tony's as good as dead, and Richard is as good as dead when he gets back. sh*t's going our way Christian: It's our time, pops. There isn't anything that can f*ck this up for us. --- January 14TH 2004: Tampa, Florida [6.17pm] A dark haired man, in his early thirties is sitting on a leather desk chair inside of a small, dark cramped motel room. He's wearing an orange buttoned short sleeved shirt, and baige pants, aswell as white shoes. He's in great physical shape, and has an interesting afro-like hairstyle. He's facing outside, watching the sun slowly setting in the red sky, behind the black clouds over Tampa, as a couple of men in Orange Hawaiian shirts enter the motel room, each of whom are carrying AK-47's. Man: Hey, Carlito, another three hundred are on their way Carlito: (Spins around in his chair) Eh, good, good. But don't ever call me Carlito again. It's boss to you, got it? Man: Yes, boss. Sorry... Carlito spins back around in his chair as the men begin leaving, and Carlito quickly spins back around Carlito: Wait, wait, come here for a second... The men look at each other then walk over, and Carlito spins back around, looking out the window Carlito: Tampa isn't as good as it's hyped up to be. You see where the sun is setting? That's the place we need to set up base Man: Boss, where's the place you're talking about? Carlito: (Grins) I'm talking about Vice City. Largest drug capital in all of America, and we need to go down there, and form'ally introduce ourselves, and take over the produce Man #2: The Vercetti Family Mafia operate down there... have done for around fifteen years or so, boss... Carlito: (Laughs) Mafia's, Mafia's, Mafia's..... Mafia's should never go into the drug trade. That's what we do. I see that as an insult Man: Tommy Vercetti's been running that place for about seventeen years now, up's and down's along the way, though Carlito: How many men would we need to send down there? Man #2: Fifty? One hundred maybe... Carlito: We'll need to head out anyway... teach this Tommy Vercetti and his 'organization' the true meaning of power. (Stands up, looking out the window) The Caribbean Cartel is gonna set up shop in Vice City, this Tommy guy has been there past his expiration date. Let's get set up down there in a few days, when everyone else arrives off of the boats Man #2: Yes, boss. The men leave the motel room as Carlito, head of the Caribbean Cartel, continues to look out the window, following the sun dipping in and out of the clouds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillaCalli Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 this is getting more intresting, i can't wait to see how things are gonna go down in Vice City. hey Tony, is this Carlito guy from the Carribean Cartel a character that you made, or somebody that you're seen on TV, lol. because theres a wrestler named Carlito and he's gona an afro to lol and basically his disriptions match what you wrote in the story... just wonderin.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King_Vercetti Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 this is getting more intresting, i can't wait to see how things are gonna go down in Vice City. hey Tony, is this Carlito guy from the Carribean Cartel a character that you made, or somebody that you're seen on TV, lol. because theres a wrestler named Carlito and he's gona an afro to lol and basically his disriptions match what you wrote in the story... just wonderin.. Yeah Carlito Carribean Cool. He's one of my favorites wrestlers. Anyways nice chapters Tony! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted February 11, 2007 Author Share Posted February 11, 2007 this is getting more intresting, i can't wait to see how things are gonna go down in Vice City. hey Tony, is this Carlito guy from the Carribean Cartel a character that you made, or somebody that you're seen on TV, lol. because theres a wrestler named Carlito and he's gona an afro to lol and basically his disriptions match what you wrote in the story... just wonderin.. Yeah, I based him on Carlito from WWE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillaCalli Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 lol i knew it!!! that's cool... lol. ye carlito is a great wrestler indeed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted February 14, 2007 Author Share Posted February 14, 2007 Chapter 39: Downpour (1)January 16TH 2004: London, England [11.44am] Julio and Christian are back in Julio's mansion in London, where Christian's men have relocated to. Vincent Sean is in the lounge, flicking through the newspaper, with Terrance sitting opposite him on the other couch, sitting next to Julia. Julio and Christian both walk into the room and Christian stands over Vincent Christian: You said he'd be back... so where is he then? Vincent: (Stops reading and looks up at Christian) Haven't you watched the news in the past two days? Terrance: (Interupts before Christian can reply) Alan's already back, he came into England two days ago, but we have no idea where he is Julio: Then why the hell wouldn't he come back here, eh? I gave that kid everything! And this is how he repays me!? f*ck! Vincent: (Tries to continue reading but Christian grabs the paper from his hands) What do you want me to do, go and look for him? Christian: Yeah, and take Terrance with you Vincent gets up as does Terrance and they walk out of the lounge and out of the mansions front doors, leaving them open as they leave Vincent: (Gets into the Silver Kuruma) Any ideas where to look for him? Terrance: (Gets in and straps his seat-belt in) Not really. Just cruise around for a little while. --- January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [1.13pm] Tommy is sitting in the office of his mansion as he eats a pasta meal from a silver plate, and with his free hand he's flicking through the channels of the TV, unable to find anything to watch whilst he eats his pasta. He decides to leave it on the news, and see if anything is mentioned about the status of the immigration, and Tony walks into the office with a bottle of beer in his hand Tommy: (Puts his fork down and looks up at Tony) What the hell do you want? I'm trying to eat here Tony: I just got off the phone with one of your watchmen in England, and they say that there are news reports all over the place that Alan-- Tommy: You know what? I don't care. Now shut up, and get out, and let me finish my god damned lunch, OK? Tony: I'm outta here for a couple of days, just figured I'd let you know Tommy: No, not right now. You're not going anywhere. You're meant to be here, in Vice City, with me and my organization, with your bitch that's seven months along Tony: It'll just be for a couple of days while I look for Alan Tommy: You've had months to look for your friend, give it up. I'm putting a stop to it Tony: (Puts the bottle down) Tommy, come on. Why do you need me here, this place is peaceful, and you've got plenty of other bodyguards Tommy: That's it (Slams his hands into the desk and stands up) You go, you ain't welcome back here again. And if I ever see you in Vice City again, I'll cut your dick off and shove it in the mailbox of your marital home so your wife can have a good cry Tony: ...Goodbye, Tommy Tony turns around and exits the office, and as he does so, he hears the silver plate full of pasta crash against the door he just closed, and he makes his way down the stairs at the tip of the office, and exits the house. --- January 16TH 2004: London, England [12.16pm] Maria is in the kitchen of Alan's old house, trying to fix the kitchen up with some paint and decorations, as Woozie is sitting in the lounge, listening to radio reports of the incidents that occured two days ago Reporter: ...Still unclear as to how many people were with him, and we have no known witnesses, so it's crucial that we find these men and bring them in for questioning... Claude pulls up on a PCJ-720 outside and parks it and gets off, un-zipping his leather jacket and taking it off, revealing a plain black shirt underneath. He walks up the small steps and opens the door of the house and goes inside, closing the door behind him, as Woozie stands up Woozie: The heat hasn't died down, atall Maria: (Comes in from the kitchen) Oh, it's you. I was expecting Alan to of come home by now, he's been gone all mo'ning. Did he say where he was going to you? Claude lightly shakes his head and puts the keys to the bike on the table and goes out into the cramped hallway and walks up the stairs Woozie: Is it just me, or is Claude acting a little weirdly? Maria: Weirder than usual, anyway. I don't know what's wrong with him, if anything Woozie: The only thing I can really think of is when he came to London in '94, or five. He was here with Catalina for about three months Maria: Well with that bitch, who would ever act normally again? Woozie: Yeah, true... (Shouts up to Claude) I'm gonna go out for a while. --- January 16TH 2004: London, England [12.56pm] Alan's been sitting in a car, just outside of Aspfield Avenue for the past hour, keeping his eye on Julio's mansion, unsure of wether to go in or not. After another few miniutes of staring into the blank, and unusually empty street of Aspfield Avenue, he gets out of the car and makes his way over to Julio's mansion, as he cocks a 9MM and puts it in the back pocket of his jeans, and makes his way through the open gate and up the steps and knocks on the door, and after a few seconds it opens, and he enters into the mansion Julia: (Hugs Alan at the entrance of the door) I knew you'd come back eventually Alan: Julia? (Pulls away) What are you doing here? I thought you-- (Looks up at the top of the stairs, seeing Christian and Julio) Christian: It's about time we saw you again (Laughs) Julio: My boy! (Starts walking down the stairs) It's been too long. Where have jou been? Alan: Where's Terrance (Walks past Julia and into the lounge) Christian: He's out, looking for you Alan: (Comes back into the hallway) And you just let him go out? When Romani's are all over the place?! Christian: The Romani empire crumbled, there's only Ryan left, and Danny. But he's probaly dead Alan: Well where's my brother at now? Where abouts in London? Julio: Well... where ever he thinks jou might be, is probaly where he is, mang. Just come in, have a drink, catch up on old times, eh? He'll be back soon Christian: He'll give up searching (Laughs) he always was a quitter, you know that yourself. You're his brother afterall Alan: I'd rather go out and look for him... thanks anyway Julio: Eh, If jou go out looking for him, he'll probaly be back any miniute and jou'll miss him Alan: ...Alright, I'll come in for a little while. So, I've gotta ask... what's with you two on the same page? (Walks through to the lounge) Christian begins laughing and talking, as does Julio, while Alan's train of though is focused elsewhere than listening to them Alan: (Sits down) "Gotta keep 'em sweet, find Terrance and get outta here once and for all..." --- January 16TH 2004: London, England [1.30pm] Vincent stops the car outside of a parking space, where a PCJ-720 lay infront of them. They are outside of Alan and Terrance's old family house. Terrance takes his feet off of the dashboard and unbuckles his seat-belt and opens the door and gets out, as does Vincent, and Terrance shoves the PCJ-720 over and looks back to Vincent Terrance: This piece'a sh*t is in our old parking space. What a f*cking disgrace Vincent: Hold on, if it's in your old parking space... then (Looks up at the house) is someone in the house? Terrance: This place has been abandoned for years. It's probaly just some drunk highschoolers that are lounging around in there Vincent: Then you can wait in the car Terrance: Come on, I ain't gonna wait in the car if my brothers-- Vincent: I said (Points his 9MM at Terrance) wait in the car, got it? Terrance: ...Yeah, alright, I got it... relax... (Walks back over to the car) f*ckin' psychopath... Vincent walks up the steps and knocks on the door, to which there is no reply. He knocks once again, but nobody answers the door, and he decides to try the knob, and it turns Vincent: "Alright..." (Calmly moving around with his gun pointed infront of him at all times) "My guts telling me that he's here..." Vincent cautiously walks through the livingroom, still listening to the movements upstairs, but he ignores it, incase there are two people in here and the crooked, broken staircase will expose him. He starts hearing small movements from the kitchen Vincent: (Slowly walks in with his gun pointed infront of him and sees Maria smoking a cigarette and putting some food in the fridge, and he lowers his gun) And who the f*ck are you? Maria: (Jumps, dropping her cigarette, and turns around) Oh my god... (Looks at the gun) who are you? Vincent: I asked first. What the hell are you doing in this place? Maria: This is my house! Vincent: (Looks over at the shopping on the table then at the open back door) Maria: (Starts slowly walking towards the knife cabinet) I don't know... who you are... but I think you should leave Vincent: (Grins) You haven't been here long, have you? (Puts his gun away) It's alright; I'm not gonna hurt you. But I do ask that you come with me, though Maria: (Starts slowly reaching for the knob on the cabinet) Okay, let me just get my-- Vincent grabs her arm and smiles then tosses her by the wrist across the kitchen and she lands on the table Vincent: Do you think I'm an idiot? Do you even think I'm some kind of cop? FBI even? Maria: I don't know what'chu're talking about, I'm just an innocent housewife... Vincent: Yeah, I'm sure you are (Grabs her by the hair) now you're going to tell me where Alan Wood is, you got it? Vincent raises his fist and tenses it, as Claude runs into the kitchen and jumps on him, taking him to the ground, and he punches him in the face, as Maria jumps off of the table Maria: He's got a gun in his coat pocket! Claude looks at Maria which distracts him, and Vincent kicks him off of him, and pulls the 9MM from his coat and aims it at Claude and fires, as Claude dives out of the way, and the bullet ruptures the burnt, yellow stove Claude: (Gets up and runs at Vincent before he has a chance to shoot him again and tackles him into the fridge) Vincent: (Hitting Claude in the head with the handle of his gun, trying to aim it at him and get a clear shot of him) Get the f*ck off'a me! (Yells) Terrance! Get the f*ck in here! Claude punches Vincent in the face, which causes him to drop his gun, and Maria quickly bends down and grabs it and points it at Vincent, who wipes the blood from his lip and steps back away from the fridge and laughs, as Claude takes a few steps back, looking at Vincent, when Terrance comes in with his 9MM pointed at Maria Terrance: (Looks at Claude) What the hell are you doing here!? Claude: (Turns around and faces Terrance) Vincent: (Grabs Maria's arm and twists it, causing her to drop the gun, and he wraps his right arm around her and pulls her close into his chest, with her facing Claude) What're you waiting for, shoot him already Terrance: (Trying to stop his hand trembling) Why are you here!? Vincent: Kill him! Terrance: (Sweat pouring from his forehead) Answer me already! Maria: (Struggling to breathe) You idiot! Terrance: (Screams) ANSWER ME! Vincent: (Tightens his grip on Maria and smirks at Claude) Now I recognize you Claude: (Turns around, now facing Vincent) Vincent: You're the kid who got his tongue snatched out by Toreno, aren't you? At that moment, Woozie punches Terrance in the back of the head, causing him to fall unconcious, and he picks up his 9MM and starts pointing it at random directions in the room, as Vincent is still smirking at Claude, who has his fists clenched tightly, breathing heavily Woozie: Who's there? Show yourself! Vincent: Go ahead and shoot me Woozie points the gun in the direction of Vincent's voice, as he cocks it, and Claude quickly runs over to Woozie, and knocks the gun out of his hand Vincent: Haha, this is classic. (Tightens his grip on Maria) Now, me and she, are gonna take a little trip. Have fun... Clive?... Claude... now I remember (Smirks) Vincent quickly drags a screaming Maria out of the kitchen and through the house and throws her into the Silver Kuruma, as Claude bends down and picks the 9MM up, hearing the tires screech outside of the Kuruma, and Vincent speeds away Terrance: (Begins waking up and then stands up) What the hell is going on? --- January 16TH 2004: London, England [2.07pm] Vincent harshly slams the brakes on outside of Julio's mansion in Aspfield Avenue and drags Maria out of the car by her hair, 9MM in hand and walks up the steps, gripping his keys in the same hand as his 9MM, and he opens the door and shoves it wide open, only to be staring down the barrel of a 9MM Alan: It was only a matter of time before I ended up seeing you. Now drop her Vincent: (Laughs) Drop your gun, what're you gonna do? Shoot me? Alan: Let her go Julio and Christian come through to the hallway and witness what's going on, as Christian snaps Christian: What the hell are you two doing!? (Looks down at Maria in Vincent's hand) And who the f*ck is that!? Vincent: Alan here has an ulterior motive on his return to London, don't you? Christian: What's he talking about!? Vincent: He only came to get his brother back, with amid fears that you were going to kill him, then he was gonna bolt on you, again. Julio: (Reaches into his back pocket and pulls out a 9MM and points it at Alan) Jou know what, I'm starting to like Vincent alot more than I ever liked jou, jou whiny little bitch Alan: You're making a big mistake, Julio. Now put it down Julio: Not this time, Alan. I trusted jou, and jou let me down, time and time again Vincent: You heard the boss, now put the gun down Maria: (Screaming) Would you let me go!? You're ruining my hair! As Julio has his gun firmly pointed at Alan, and Alan's gun is firmly pointed at Vincent, who also has his gun firmly pointed at Alan, a downpour of rain begins hammering into the empty streets outside, not a single car, pedestrian or gang member can be caught in sight, and a single gunshot is heard going off inside the mansion, as female screams follow the shot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillaCalli Posted February 14, 2007 Share Posted February 14, 2007 holy crap man... i love the last sentence zimmzy... now, i definately can't wait to read what happens next... WHOOO!!! great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DemonKing Posted February 16, 2007 Share Posted February 16, 2007 dude awesome as story nice work tommy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted February 18, 2007 Author Share Posted February 18, 2007 (edited) Chapter 40: Red Sky (2)January 16TH 2004: London, England [2.11pm] As Julio has his gun firmly pointed at Alan, and Alan's gun is firmly pointed at Vincent, who also has his gun firmly pointed at Alan, a downpour of rain begins hammering into the empty streets outside, not a single car, pedestrian or gang member can be caught in sight, and a single gunshot is heard going off inside the mansion, and Maria begins screaming in terror Julio: (Drops his gun and falls to his knees, then onto his stomach) Julia: Dad! (Runs over to him and leans down, checking his pulse) Alan stares in shock at Vincent, who just fired a shot point-blank right at Julio Mendez Vincent: (Aims his 9MM back at Alan) Now, I came here to do a job, and that job is as good as finished. Just drop your gun and take it like a man already Christian: You son of a bitch! How could you do this!? Vincent: Be quiet! Vincent points his gun at Christian, as Alan shoots at Vincent, clipping him in the arm, causing him to drop his gun Christian: Finish him off, quick! Alan continues aiming the gun at Vincent Christian: Come on! What're you waiting for!? Alan: Where's Mike Toreno? Vincent: (Lifts up Maria by her hair, using her as a shield) Sure, why not, I'll tell you. It's not like you're going to live past this... Toreno's in San Andreas Alan: San Andreas? What's he doing in San Andreas? Vincent: Why is that any concern of yours? (Starts walking away with Maria in his grasp) Christian: (Grabs Alan's gun) Gimme that! I'll finish the f*ckin' job! Alan: (Lunges at Christian) Stop it! You'll kill Maria! Christian: I don't care! He's killed my dad! Alan tackles Christian to the floor and punches him in the face a few times untill he drops the gun, as Vincent begins to bend down and pick up his gun whilst Alan and Christian are fighting on the floor, Maria bites his hand and flicks her heel backwards, clipping Vincent in the balls Vincent: (Releases Maria who starts running away) Argh! f*ckin' bitch! (Falls to one knee) Alan quickly gets off of Christian and punches Vincent in the face, causing his nose to bust and blood to rain down his face, pouring over the floor below Alan: (Stands up and kicks the gun out the door) I've got a plane to catch. (Turns around looking down at Julia and Christian) I'm sorry it had to be this way Alan runs out of the house as Julia is crying next to her father, and Vincent slowly begins standing up, as does Christian Christian: (Grabs Vincent by the collar and throws him into the window next to the door, and he falls over as glass shatters down upon his head) You're gonna pay for what you've done to my father Christian turns around and bends down and reaches for the gun and picks it up and turns around, only to see Vincent half way out of the shattered window Christian: (Fires a shot at his leg and clips it, watching him fall out of the window) Get back in here, where do you think you're gonna run off to? Vincent is crawling on his hands and knees on the white doorstep outside of the mansion, as Christian walks over to the door and kicks the half open door out of his way and walks outside and over to Vincent, the blood leaving a trail on the cloudy white doorstep Christian: (Aims his gun at Vincent, still crawling, now half way down the steps) Where do you think you're going?! Vincent: (Looks up and sees Alan speed away in a Black Kuruma) "Son of a bitch..." Christian: (Pulls the hammer back, still aiming the gun at Vincent) You're gonna pay dearly for this Christian slowly walks down the steps and stands infront of a bloody Vincent Sean, looking down at him, as Vincent slowly looks up at him, and grabs ahold of Christian's belt, trying desperatly to pull himself up. The blood and glass shardes all over his hands now spread across onto Christian's trousers Christian: (Kicks his left hand off of him, causing Vincent to slip and fall back down) What was your motive for me? Top me after or before Alan? Vincent: I never... had a motive for you... you were just my way in Christian: (Still firmly pointing the gun to the back of Vincent's head, standing over him) First Richard, now you Vincent: (Coughing) You idiot, you don't even know who Richard is, do you? Christian: A cop! Vincent: No, he's Tony Zimmzy (Looks up at Christian) he came back to look for Alan... I guess he never found him... Christian: You're lying! I've seen Tony's picture, and he ain't Tony! Vincent: All those times he was going... to do 'business'... he was going back to Vice City, and I've got photos to prove it aswell Julia (OS): Christian! Dad is coming round! He isn't dead! Christian: (Points the gun to Vincent's back) Looks like your plan failed, doesn't it? Christian puts a bullet into Vincent's back, as Vincent stops trying to crawl back up Christian's trousers, and he rests his head onto the concrete Christian: (Runs back up the steps and inside to see Julio coughing on the floor) Dad! Julia, go phone for an Ambulance, quick! (Leans down to Julio) You're gonna be alright, dad. Some shmuck isn't going to put you six feet under Vincent: (Coughing) "Urgh, f*ckin' asshole..." (Slowly begins standing up and walks into the drive way and gets into a parked Black Kuruma and takes a deep breath) Christian: (Looks back outside) Mother f*cker! Where'd he go!? I put a bullet in his f*ckin' back! Christian notices the Black Kuruma speed away as he starts firing random shots at it from just outside the Mansion untill he's out of ammunition, then tosses the gun on the floor and runs back into the hallway to tend to his father, as the rain almost instantly stops, and Vincent speeds round a corner Vincent: (Takes his suit jacket off and unbuttons his shirt, still keeping one hand firmly on the steering wheel, his eyes still hazy, revealing dark blue bodyarmor on underneath) "You ain't even gonna make it to the Airport, let alone San Andreas..." --- January 16TH 2004: London, England [2.28pm] Alan skids the Black Kuruma to a stop outside of his old house and quickly gets out and rapidly runs up to the house, seeing the door completly busted off the hinges. He runs through the living room and into the kitchen, only seeing some dry blood on the dark blue carpet Alan: (Screams) Maria!?, Woozie!?... Claude!?... sh*t!... Alan walks back through to the living room and sits down on the burnt couch, pushing the broken springs down as he sits on it and he closes his eyes Terrance: (Walks through the living room door) What the hell is going on? Alan: (Jumps up from the chair, turning around to see Terrance) Terrance, what the hell are you doing here? Terrance: I should be asking you the same thing Alan walks over to Terrance and gives him a quick hug then steps backwards, seeing Maria slowly walking up the steps outside of the house, masscarre running down her cheeks, and her hair all frizzy and bent out of shape as she walks through the door and into the living room, crying Alan: You OK? Maria: (Jumps back) Oh god... I can't take anymore of this. I just wanted a little vacation and I end up in World War 3... I just wanna go home Alan: Where's Claude and Woozie at? (Looks at Terrance) Terrance: (Turns and looks at Maria) They wen't out looking for her. I think Vincent grabbed her and ran, left me there for dead... asshole Alan: You're finally starting to see the light aren't you? That this place is no good, and you're as good as dead if you stay Terrance: Julio will sort Vincent out Alan: Julio's laying on the floor of his mansion with a bullet hole in his chest, dead Terrance: Shít... what about Christian? Alan: I don't know, I got outta there as fast as I could -- We've gotta get to San Andreas and find Toreno Maria: (Wipes the snot from her nose) When you see Claude, tell him I'm using his card at a five star hotel! (Starts whimpering as she walks away) Alan: (Turns his focus back to Terrance) Vincent killed Julio, and he said that Toreno was in San Andreas, for whatever reason Terrance: Then there truly is only one thing left to do Alan: We go back to Julio's, cautiously grab some cash and fly out to San Andreas. Meet up with CJ and go after Toreno Terrance: No, we avenge Julio's death and go after Vincent Alan: You idiot. Julio wanted you dead, and Vincent was going to kill you any day before I showed up -- Toreno found out I was in Anywhere City and Vincent gave me a friendly little phonecall to remind me of it all Terrance: Julio never wanted me dead! Why does everyone keep saying that to me! Alan: Face the facts damnit, he wanted you and me both dead after The Romani's were out of the equasion Terrance: That ain't true! Ryan is still out there somewhere... f*ck! Vincent knew where he was but didn't mention the location to Julio, Christian or Me Alan: We ain't going after Vincent Sean! Listen, he's probaly already dead, he was left there while Christian had the gun, after Julio was killed Terrance: I never needed your help, you just show up here and expect everything to be cool with us? Especially after you pussyed out and ran away Alan: Just come back with me and Claude to Anywhere City so we can lay low for a little while... I'm begging you Terrance: (Walks out of the living room with Alan following him) I'm staying untill I find out Vincent is definatly dead Alan: Damnit why don't you ever listen to me? Terrance: Because I'm the older brother, I know what's right and what isn't right. Now come on, are you with me or not? Alan: Like I have any other choice right now Alan gets into the back seat of the Kuruma as Terrance gets into the drivers seat and starts it up, reversing it and slowly begins driving out of the confined parking lot, as the sun begins to shine in the sky, causing a small rainbow, and the sky itself turning pink. --- January 16TH 2004: London, England [2.58pm] Julio is being slowly taken down the steps of his mansion on a stretcher by two paramedics, and he is breathing through an oxygen mask. Julia is holding his hand and walking by his side with tears running down her cheeks whilst Christian stands at the top of the steps, leaning against the doorframe with his arms crossed, and he sees a Black Kuruma pulling into the garages down at the parking lot, and he lets his arms fall down to his sides and he begins walking down the steps, seeing Alan and Terrance both get out of the Kuruma, and start walking over to him, as Julio is loaded into the Ambulance, the paramedics get into the front and begin driving away Alan: Julio survived then, that's good. (Stops at the bottom of the stairs, looking up at Christian) What happened to Vince? Christian: I shot him, and he got away when my back was turned (Turns around and slowly begins walking up the steps) Terrance: We've come back to kill him, so where the hell is he then? Christian: I don't know (Walks inside of the Mansion as Alan and Terrance walk up the steps and follow him in) Alan: Where do me and you stand. I want the truth right now, no bullsh*t, no lies Christian: I don't know (Walks through to the Lounge and pours himself a Brandy) Terrance: We'll wait here with you, incase Vincent comes back... where are all the Mendez gang members? Christian: (Downs the Brandy and drops the glass on the floor, causing it to crack) I don't know (Leans back in the chair as Julia comes in, still crying) Julia: They wouldn't let me go with him. They said he needs to get some rest... (Looks at Alan) How could you let my dad get shot? Alan: It wasn't my fault. He pulled a gun on me Julia: Atleast tell me you're going to get vengeance for my father Terrance: (Hugs Julia, who pulls away) ...We're gonna get vengeance for Julio, you can trust my word on that Alan: (Sits down next to Christian and starts drinking the Brandy right from the bottle then puts it on the floor) Vincent thinks I'm going to San Andreas to confront Mike, so I doubt he'll be back Terrance: We're staying anyway. It's not an option Alan: (Looks at Christian) No more bullsh*t from you or your father... if he lives that is, and I'll stay here, and make sure this sh*t doesn't happen again, got it? Christian: I'm sorry. You've got my word, Alan... and you aswell, Terrance Julia and Terrance both sit on the couch opposite Alan and Christian, and everybody sits in silence as the sky darkens outside, and turns blood red as the rainbow fades, and rain begins to downpour once again. --- January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [2.09pm] Tony is standing in-line at Escobar International, holding a one-way ticket to London, England and he's humming along to the cliché intercom music while he awaits everyone to pass through the metal detectors. He sets his bag onto the machine and it slowly begins taking it in as he walks through the metal detector and it begins bleeping Officer: I'm gonna have to ask you to step out of line, remove anything you may be holding and or wearing that may cause the machine to bleep then try again Tony: (Reaches into his pocket and takes out his wallet and removes the metal key-chain of a picture of his pregnant wife and walks back in-line) No problem Tony walks back through and it doesn't bleep, and the Officer hands him the key-chain back and smiles and nods him to go through, as Officer's behind the machines are looking closely at the X-ray of Tony's bag, seeing alot of jelly-based substances in it Officer: Excuse me, sir; could you please tell me what's in your bag? Tony: Squid. Tons and tons of Squid. I'm a fisherman, and you can't get Squid anywhere else in the world like at the Docks here in Vice City One of the Officers begin whispering something into the head Officer's ear, and he nods his head and looks back over to Tony Officer: It's probaly nothing, but we have been hearing rumors that people are using alot of weird stuff these days to cover up Illegal objects, such as: guns and in extreme cases even grenades and cocaine Tony: I see. Well, you may look through the bag if you wish... The Officers take the bag out of the tray at the end of the machine and the Head Officer begins unzipping it, and seeing a white liquid substance inside Head Officer: There's no Squid in he-- Black Smoke & White Liquid is blown into the Officers faces as Tony quickly grabs the bag and begins running back through the Airport Officer: (Coughing) Stop that guy! Tony: "Who would of thought that these f*ckers would have gotten smarter. Now I've gotta find a new way to get my SMG through customs..." (Quickly jumps into a parked Taxi) Driver: Where to? Tony: You'd better be a good driver you son of a whore (Hears Sirens in the distance) I'll pay you two thousand to lose the cops and get me back to Starfish Island Driver: (Puts his foot on the clutch and shifts it into gear and peels outta there) First day on the damn job, 'You'll make a great Taxi driver, son.' Thanks alot, mom The Driver takes a sharp left, throwing Tony into the door as he continues driving and is approaching Sunshine Autos Tony: Actually stop here, pull in here, park your Taxi and take my Stinger. You drive, I shoot Driver: Just great (Pulls into Sunshine Autos and speeds down the small hill and stops by the first Garage as Tony gets out) Tony: (Still hearing Sirens in the distance) Yep, I'll definatly need this (Puts a number into the number-pad of the Garage and it opens, revealing a dark red Stinger and a wooden box at the foot of it) Come on, what are you waiting for? Get out and get in the Stinger The Taxi driver gets out of the Taxi and walks into the Garage and jumps into the Stinger and starts it up, as Tony opens the wooden box, revealing an M4 and some AH-79 Grenades, and he grabs the M4 with his free hand and opens the trunk of the Stinger and dumps the bag into it and slams it shut, then grabs a couple of the grenades and gets into the passenger seat of the Stinger Driver: What the f*ck are you doing!? Am I gonna die here today? Tony: Not if you drive good you won't. I've never been much for escaping cops whilst driving, so I'm depending on you... Driver: Damien Tony: Alright, Damien... the f*ck are you waiting for!? Drive! (Loads up the M4 as he hears Sirens right outside) Officer (OS): We have you partially surrounded. Come out with your hands up! Officer #2 (OS): You idiot, rookie! You don't say partially! It gives him hope he can escape! Officer (OS): Oh, oh yeah, right. We have you totally surrounded! Come out with your hands up! Tony: (Grabs a grenade and he begins standing up in the car, looking down at Damien) Reverse outta here. What are you waiting for? It's go-time. Edited February 18, 2007 by TonyZimmzy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillaCalli Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 and i thought it was the end for Vincent... a really suspenseful chapter Zimmzy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted February 21, 2007 Author Share Posted February 21, 2007 Thanks for the reply. I'm glad you still like this story --- Chapter 41: Dead Or Alive?January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [2.24pm] Tony is standing up in the car, looking down at Damien as Damien is looking around inside of the garage, and the cops are still talking through the megaphone outside Damien: (Looks up at Tony) The cops think we're in the Taxi outside, can't you use that as an advantage? Tony: You gonna be a wise ass about this or what? Damien: I'm just saying... Tony: Alright. You did actually give me quite a good idea, I'll give you credit where credit is due on that one... Tony hops out of the car and slightly re-opens the Garage door and gets onto his hands and knees, looking out underneath, and seeing four cop cars out there and six cops, slowly approaching the Taxi with their guns aimed at it. Tony grabs the Grenade and bites the pin off and spits it out and rolls the Grenade under the Garage door, as it rolls underneath the Taxi, he rapidly closes the door back up and runs across the large garage and jumps back into the Stinger Officer: We're giving you the count of five... one... t-- The Taxi explodes, knocking all six cops flying backwards, either dying on impact or getting badly injured and burned, as Damien reverses into the Garage door, causing it to dent. He does it again and the Garage door falls down as a few remaining cops begin opening fire on the Stinger. Tony stands up with another Grenade and launches it at the cops causing them to run away, only to get caught in the wake of the explosion anyway, as Damien does a 180 and speeds back up the hill Tony: (Grabbing onto the back of his seat, still standing up) Kid what the hell are you doin'!? There ain't any cops around, slow down and let me sit back down Damien: (Puts the handbrake on and skids past the Sunshine Autos sign, scraping the back tire off of it and continues driving) You wanna escape, I want two grand Tony: You put two grand infront of a Cuban's nose and that's it, he's suddenly Dale Earnhardt Jr Damien: I've been driving since I was eleven. Street races mostly, but then I got thrown in jail Tony: I don't want your life story, bud (Sees a cop car speed around the corner) Damnit (Stands up with the M4 in hand and starts firing at it untill it explodes) Damien: Where'd you learn to shoot like that? Tony: Bolt a left here; I don't wanna lead the cops back to Tommy's place -- plus he's probaly still pissed at me Damien: Vercetti, huh? Tony: Yeah. I'd ask how you know but it's pretty obvious how you know. Who doesn't these days? Damien: Nah you've got it wrong (Sharply speeds around a corner, seeing a police bike ahead) Shoot it, quick! Tony: (Grips the M4 tightly and takes aim and pops the cop in the back before he even knew what was going on) What have I got wrong? Damien: (Takes a sharp right) My Godfather knows him, Umberto Robina Tony: Get outta town, you're Damien Robina? Haha, why are you working as a f*ckin' Taxi driver? Damien: Mom wanted to set me straight after I got out of jail -- there ain't too many career options open for-- Tony: (Grabs Damien's neck and pulls him close) Slow the car down, now. To a stop... Damien: (Slows down and stops) What the hell man!? Tony watches Two Blue Cruisers speed around the corner with Police all over them Tony: Alright, keep goin' Damien: You f*ckin' loony or sumin', dude? Next time you see cops coming just tell me Tony: (Watches another cop car speed around the corner and pass right by) I guess those guys have more heat on them than me... the hell you waitin' for? Go Damien puts his foot back down and takes a right and continues driving Damien: We can stop by Umberto's café and lay low... and you can pay me that two grand you promised me Tony: Yeah yeah, you'll get your money. --- January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [2.50pm] Umberto is behind the bar in his café serving a woman coffee and she's talking on her cellphone. The place has been re-done, and looks much more like an expensive restaurant in where you try and book tickets, and the place would be full all month. She takes a sip of her coffee as the door swings open, the bell above it playing a small chime as Damien and Tony walk in Umberto: Boy what'd I tell jou about coming here during the day! Jou need to pace yourself for the fine senorita's like this mamacita righ' here, ain't tha' right, baby? Woman: (Stands up and spits her coffee at Umberto) Asshole Umberto: (Laughs) The jokes on jou, bitch! I'll make sure jour husband, he get his balls stappled together, 'den jou come back to ol' Umberto! Tony: (Sits down at a stool) Still the same old Umberto, I see Umberto: Wha'jou want, Tony -- Jou know I only see jou whenever jou or Tommy are in some trouble. Little men, little cojones Tony: Just letting the heat cool down for a while before I fly back out to England. Don't suppose you could give Tommy a quick ring? Try and calm him down Damien: (Sits down next to Tony) He said he'd pay me two thousand bucks to drive him away from the cops Umberto: And jou shoul' of known better. Jou already been in prison once, jou wanna see it again? Tony: (Reaches into his pocket and pulls out a wad of screwed up cash, most of it stuck together by blood and he slams it on the counter) There, that should cover it Damien: (Grabs it) Everyone likes to get paid from time to time. You ever need a driver again, you know where I'll be! Tony: Yeah, whatever you say (Looks back at Umberto) While I'm here, cook me up some bacon or something Two more Blue Cruisers speed around the corner of the café, as seven police convoy's follow it around the corner, and one crashes into the street post outside Umberto: I dunno what the f*ck's been goin' on aroun' here today. Too many police aroun' for my tastebuds to swallow Tony: Yeah, that's pretty strange... I wonder if it's the same two? Umberto: So, jou find Alan yet? Tony: (Turns his attention back to Umberto) Nah, but I know he's in London... I dunno where he was before, though Umberto: Jou still want that bacon, mang? Tony: ...Nah, f*ck it. Gimme an orange juice and I'll be on my way. Gotta face the wrath sometime (Laughs) Umberto: Well when jou find him, tell him I still think he scum Tony: Yeah, yeah. Whatever you say Umberto Damien: (Counting the money) Why's he scum to you, Umberto? Tony: Alan killed Umberto's pops in '96 Damien: (Tenses his grip on the money) Oh, that Alan... son of a f*ckin' bitch Tony: (Grabs the orange juice Umberto put on the counter and takes a mouthful and gets up) Yeah, that one. I'll be seeing you around Tony walks out the door as Damien looks up at Umberto Umberto: Why jou look at me like tha'? Damien: You always talk about Alan like you wanna find him and castrate him, but you're friends with his pal? That's messed up, even for you Umberto: S'not Tony's fault his friends a piece of trash. Jou gotta understan' that Papi lost his life because of a fued between Tommy and Toreno, les' just drop it at that. --- January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [3.03pm] Tony walks past the print works still sipping on the orange juice he got from Umberto's café and continues walking down the street. He tosses the plastic cup into a bin standing on the corner of the street and hears sirens approaching, and he turns around and runs back down the street and up the steps of the print works and goes inside and slams the door behind him, as the cop cars pass by outside. Tony takes a deep breath then wipes the sweat from his beard and forehead and reaches for the lightswitch and flicks it on, as one by one the lights in the place turn on Tony: (Yells) Earny, you in here? Tony gets no replies and he walks through the print works and to the back room, where Earnest has fallen from his wheelchair and is laying dead on the floor, with a large bloodclot on his head, slowly seeping blood from it. Tony bends down and checks his pulse to be sure Tony: "sh*t, it's completly gone and his body is still warm... who would of done this?..." Tony stands up from one knee and looks around then runs over to a desk and opens the top draw and begins searching through it Tony: "Wish I hadn't left my damn bag in the kids trunk... this'll do" Tony pulls out a Desert Eagle and checks it over and sees it's completly full and he slams the draw shut and cocks it and starts looking around the print works, finding nothing very quickly and hearing another set of sirens go past, this time an ambulance. He runs over to the windows and looks outside, seeing men in blue and white hawaiian shirts and brown cargo pants, holding M16's guarding the area Tony: "Who the f*ck are these guys..." (Looks at the Blue Cruisers parked near them) "Those are the same cars as earlier..." Tony's cellphone begins ringing and it startles him. He quickly fumbles through his pockets and takes the phone out and puts it to his ear and presses the call button Tony: (Breathing heavily) Yeah? Umberto (OS): Where are jou!? Jou gotta get back here, we under attack! Tony: f*ck, what's going on!? (Hangs the phone up and puts it away then runs through the print works and goes out the back door to see a Fire Enginge turned on it's side outside and on fire) What the-- A Blue Cruiser speeds around the corner and a Colombian Cartel member leans out the window and starts shooting at Tony with an M16 and hits him in the stomach and he dives backwards into some piled up trash bags and takes cover as the Cartel member continues shooting, blowing the bags apart, untill he's out of range and keeps driving Tony: (Clenching his stomach with his hands) "I can't believe how much this hurts" (Bites his teeth together and lifts up his shirt, revealing a blackened hole in his body armor. He hears the Cruiser coming back around) "Crap, gotta get up... come on... get up" (Tries to stand up) "Jesus, this hurts so much, I can barely breathe let alone stand" The Cartel Cruiser stops and two Cartel members get out of the Cruiser, one holding an M16 and one holding an AK47 and they begin approaching the bags Cartel Member: Jou sure it was him, mang? Cartel Member #2: I dun' forget the face 'deh boss show us, s'why he sent me with jou The Cartel members start picking the ripped and tattered garbage bags apart with their guns, but find nothing Cartel Member #2: Jou idiot (Slaps the base of his gun into his partners head) Was 'dere even a guy here!? Tony is crawling through the print works untill he finally manages to stand on two feet, but quickly loses his balance and crashes into a printing machine, causing a metal hanger to fall from it and land on the floor, echoing the sound all around the large room Cartel Member: He's gone inside! The Cartel members run inside and start looking around, not finding anything. Tony is hiding in a closet, peeking out the keyhole at the Cartel members who are looking around the place. He gently takes out his phone and begins to dial a number and presses the call button and puts it to his ear Tony: "Come on... pick up, hurry the f*ck up..." The Cartel members open the front door up and look outside at a few members outside who are guarding the streets then close the door back up Cartel Member #2: No way he could of gone from 'deh building The Cartel members simultaneously look at the closet door and look back at each other and grin, as one of the members takes off his hat and wipes the sweat from his forehead and they both begin slowly approaching the closet door, with their guns aimed at it Tony: (Looking out the keyhole, still no response on his cellphone) "sh*t, guess I'm on my own" (Puts the cellphone down on the floor and takes out his Desert Eagle) The Cartel members slowly reach the closet door and one reaches for the doorknob, and the other one stops him Cartel Member #2: Waitwaitwait, what if he's packin' heat, eh? The Cartel member laughs and pulls his hand away and grabs the doorknob and slowly begins twisting it, making little to no noise as he does so, when suddenly the closet door across the room is booted open and Tony comes out with the Desert Eagle in hand and shoots at both Cartel members, who don't react quick enough to turn around and counter fire. Tony limps over and grabs the Cartel members AK47 and looks out the window at the Cartel members who begin walking over to the print works after hearing the shots, and he begins looking around for anything to help him escape Tony: "f*ck... gotta think of something, this isn't just some small time street gang..." Tony is looking around the print works as the Cartel members get closer and closer to the front door of the print works, untill one of the members opens the door. --- January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [3.17pm] Umberto is talking to two women who entered the café, and suprisingly they are laughing at his corny jokes, as one of the women approach Damien, who is eating a bacon sandwhich and reading a magazine with a beer infront of his plate Woman: You know, I've always had a thing for the younger men (Slips him her number) How about you call me sometime, maybe you can take me to your local gym, because looking at you, I can tell you must work out... alot (Squeezes his right arm as he pulls away and picks up the beer) Damien: (Takes a mouthfull and puts it back down and gulps it down) Thanks but I'm not interested Umberto: Ladies, don't worry, eh? Umberto here, he got plenty enough for two, haha! Woman: Urgh you're a fat, disgusting pig and I only wanted to get to know him (Strokes her fingers through his short hair) a little more The women walk across the café and open the front door, only to be gunned down instantly. Their dead bodies hitting the broken concreate outside, and both Damien and Umberto duck and take cover as a hail of bullets enter into the café Umberto: Holy f*ck, the chicas! (Crawls over to Damien) Jou gotta get outta here! Jour mother woul' never forgive me if something happens to ya! Damien: (Screaming over the gunfire) No! Follow me around back! Damien shuffles along the floor with Umberto following closely behind, as they enter into the back room and both stand up, and Damien begins running towards the back door Umberto: (Yells) Keep goin'! I'll call Tony, tell him to get the f*ck back here 'n quick! Damien gets outside and runs over to the trunk of Tony's Stinger and rips it open with his bare hands and grabs Tony's bag and pulls his SMG out and runs around front and starts opening fire on the Cartel members and their Cruisers Cartel Member: (Taking cover behind his car) Eh! Get that kid! Damien runs out of ammo and quickly runs back to to the Stinger and grabs a clip and starts reloading as Cartel members start running around, and open fire at him Damien: f*ck! (Runs back inside and closes the door behind him, avoiding any bullets) Umberto: I rang Tony, he seemed distressed! Damien: You'd better give a call to Tommy, see if you can't get some of his men down here Umberto: Quick thinkin' but jou gotta get outta here before it's too late! Damien: I ain't gonna run away from this, it's you that should be running away. Do you even have a gun in this place!? The door is shot down by Cartel members wielding M16's, and Damien and Umberto run back through the café as they begin reloading, and walking through the back of the café. The front is being weakly guarded by two members and their cars, trying to block the exit off Damien: (Shoots both of the members and runs outside with Umberto following him and jumps into a Cartel Cruiser and starts it up and speeds away) What the hell's going on around here today!? Umberto: I've seen these cars before. these guys aren't friendly, Damien. These are Colombian gang cars -- look at this interior, mang. Damien: Colombians!? What the hell are Colombians doin' in Vice City!? Is it the Cartel? Umberto: I think so (Takes his black vest off and wipes the sweat from his forehead with it then chucks it out the open window then rolls it up) S'a hundred degrees in here, ugh! Damien: (Swerves around a corner and begins heading for the bridge) You think we can take silence at Tommy's place? Umberto: I sure hope so, chico -- atleast he'll have sum' air-con in that big place of his! Damien swerves to the right and starts driving over the bridge and soon enters into Starfish Island, where dozens of Cartel Cruisers lay parked in the streets, some burnt and a few tipped over on their sides and roofs Damien: sh*t, this isn't good (Continues speeding past them, being unrecognized by the few Cartel members thanks to the black-tinted windows) Umberto: It's this one! Damien quickly handbrake turns right and speeds along the driveway of Tommy's mansion. Cartel Cruisers lay blown up by the steps, and Cartel members are in a gunwar with Vercetti's men Umberto: This place ain't safe either. Reverse outta here, Damien! The last Vercetti gang member is killed as Damien reverses the Cruiser and starts speeding out of there, as two more Cruisers come in and block it off Damien: Shít, what do I do!? They know we ain't with them! Umberto: Like jou have any choice other than to fight jour way out, like a man! (Turns around and reaches into the back, picking up an AK47 that lay dorment on the backseat) Let's hope I can still use one'a these! The Cartel members get out of the Cruiser and begin opening fire on Damien's Cruiser, as the windows are blown out and Damien and Umberto slouch down avoiding fire, and firing back themselves, almost blindly wasting a few Cartel members Umberto: I'm da man! Yeeaah!! (Reloads the AK47) Umberto shoots the last Cartel member, as more begin running towards them from behind, with Uzi's in hand Damien: (Looks in the mirror) sh*t, more are comin'! (Puts his foot down and peels out of the drive way, ramming into the two Cruiser's blocking his way and back onto the bridge, seeing more Cartel members coming for them at all angles) Where the f*ck am I supposed to go!? They're everywhere! (Starts firing at Cartel members who fire back) Tommy (OS): (Screaming) You've gotta do better than that you greaseball pricks! A Rocket is launched at a Cartel Cruiser, sending Cartel members flying left and right as Damien and Umberto get out of their Cruiser before the impact turns it over, and they run back up the drive way and see Tommy standing on the roof of his mansion with a Rocket Launcher over his shoulder and an M4 in his other hand, firing down at Cartel members on the bridge, and the few left on his drive way below the steps Umberto: (Screams up to him) Tommy! What's going on!? Tommy: (Stops firing and looks down to see Umberto and Damien on the drive way) Quick! Get inside! (Waves his hand for them to come inside and sees more Cartel members running in through the drive way) Damien: (Turns around and starts firing at them whilst walking backwards towards the steps) Umberto, get inside! Umberto: Don't gotta tell me twice! (Runs up the steps and runs through the mansion doors) Tommy: (Stops firing and screams) Kid! You ain't exempt from doing that either! (Continues firing at the Cartel members below) Get inside! Damien runs out of ammo and runs up the steps and inside, where a dozen Vercetti and Cartel members lay dead at the foot of Tommy's Grand Staircase Umberto: (Half way up the stairs) Come on! We gotta get up to the roof and help him out! Damien and Umberto run up the stairs and down the hallway and Damien begins running up the stairs while Umberto is out of breath and heads for the elevator. Damien reaches the top floor before Umberto and runs out to see Tommy out of breath reloading the Rocket Launcher Damien: (Runs over and reaches down for the M4 but Tommy stops him) Come on! You're exhausted! How long has this been going on for!? Tommy: (Coughing) I don't remember, but they just keep coming. Who the hell are these guys? Damien: The Colombian Cartel Tommy: (Stands up with Rocket Launcher in hand) God, they really picked the best time to come down to Vice City, didn't they!? (Fires a Rocket down below at the Cartel members) Where are all the Cuban's at, don't tell me they were all killed!? Damien: I don't know, all I know is we had to get out of Little Cuba before it was too late... sh*t, where's Umberto (Looks back around) Umberto: (Runs through the open door, still out of breath) More are coming in the back yard, Tommy! Tommy: Where the hell are all my men at (Tosses the M4 to Umberto) You take the backyard Damien: Where's your weapon stash, I'll go get something aswell Tommy: Right at the bottom floor in the elevator you'll find an M60 I left down there, hurry the hell up though Damien begins running back through the mansion as he hears another explosion outside. He jumps down each small flight of stairs untill he finally reaches the elevator and grabs the M60 and walks out, only to see Cartel members storming in from the outside, each carrying M16's, and he begins opening firing on them and running back upstairs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red_Jacks&Purple_Nines Posted February 21, 2007 Share Posted February 21, 2007 I've only read a couple chapters, but I must say that this is a reall cool story man! I hope I catch up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillaCalli Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 can't wait to read what happens next... hope Damien and Tommy and Umberto survive this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcole25 Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 I just started to read this the other day from the link in the sig, and I have to say, it's bloody awesome. Although, why did you have to leave it there? WHY?!?!?!?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted February 23, 2007 Author Share Posted February 23, 2007 Three replies? ...WHOAAA New chapter coming early. --- Chapter 42: GhostsJanuary 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [3.19pm] A Cartel member leads a few more Cartel members up to the Print Works and opens the door, seeing three bodies laying on the floor. Two are wearing Cartel gang clothes and one is wearing a white tanktop, and the Cartel members aim the gun at the man in the white tanktop, cautiously approaching him Cartel Member: 'Deh other two are dead. One of you (Looks around to the two Cartel members with him) turn him over. Lay him on his back, eh? One of the Cartel members leans down and turns him over, revealing Earnest Kelly laying there, with a bloodclot on his forehead just above his left eye Cartel Member: Eh, something ain't righ' here... Tony is limping outside of the Print Works with Desert Eagle in one hand and AK47 in the other, wearing Earnest's dark red hawaiian shirt, unbuttoned, revealing the wound that was marked onto his ribs through his body armor Tony: (Slowly opens a Cartel Cruisers door and climbs inside and slams the door and starts it up) "Gotta make it back to Tommy's before it's too late..." The Cartel Member's come outside and see one of the Cruisers peeling outta there, and they begin opening fire on it Cartel Member: (Watches it speed around the corner) sh*t! Get after it jou fools! The two Cartel members get into seperate Cruisers and start speeding after Tony's Cruiser, and he's trying to maintain control of the car, breathing heavily, whilst the two Cartel members catch up and lean out as they drive, shooting at the Cruiser, and they burst both back tires Tony: (Swerves around a corner, scratching a postbox with his bumper) Come on... Tony swerves around another corner as the Cruiser begins tipping on two wheels, but he maintains control and lands it safely back on four wheels as the Cartel members come round the corner and lean back out the window, firing at it, as the back window smashes out Cartel Member: (Gets level with the other members Cruiser and rolls down his window) Lemme finish 'dis! Cartel Member #2: A'right! The other Cruiser slows down and does a three point turn and begins driving away in the other direction, as Tony turns left and crashes into the wall of a building Tony: (Stops the Cruiser before it tips over) Crap (Looks in the mirror at the Cartel member stop his Cruiser, getting out of it. He's still breathing heavily) Huh? Only one? Tony grips his Desert Eagle and looks out the back window and aims at the Cartel member and shoots him in the forehead, causing him to fall over, dead. Tony: (Gets out of the Cruiser and walks over, picking up his Uzi as he sees another two Cruisers speeding down the road) "I've seen a take over before, and this can't be one... they're destroying the entire city" Tony starts firing the Uzi at the Cruisers but realizes that isn't doing anything to slow them down. He gets into the dead Cartel members Cruiser, only to see the keys aren't already in the ignition Tony: "Oh you mother f*cker..." The Cartel Cruisers come to a hault a few feet away from Tony and they begin getting out, each with M16's and M4's, aimed directly at the Cruiser, as Tony looks in the mirror, seeing them approaching the Cruiser, and behind them a couple of bikes speeding down towards them Tony: (Sits up and gets a closer look in the mirror and adjusts it slightly) "Is that?..." The Biker's begin firing at the Cartel members who drop down dead, and they stop by Tony inside of the Cruiser, as Mitch Baker steps off of his Angel and gets into the Cruiser Mitch: Looks like you could use some help Tony: I've never been more pleased to see a pack of Bikers in my life (Shakes his hand) What's going on in the city? (Pulls his hand away) Mitch: (Looks out to his friends) Boys, you get over to the 'Chopper and make sure everything stays locked down. (Watches the Biker's speed away and looks at Tony) I'm not sure what's going on, Tony. Other than the obvious fact that these aren't men who are here to throw the usual sh*t down. No, these guys are here for an elimination Tony: (Grips his stomach in pain) We've gotta get to Tommy's place Mitch: Alright (Looks at the ignition) Where's the keys? Tony: The dead guy has 'em Mitch gets out of the Cruiser and bends down to the dead Cartel member and searches his pockets until he finds a set of keys, and he also finds a passport on the guy Mitch: (Gets back into the car and checks the passport) Dominik Estrada, from Colombia? Tony: (Takes the keys and starts the Cruiser up and puts his foot down) Colombia? He doesn't look Colombian. And I've been around a few Colombian's recently Mitch: (Tosses the passport out the window) You get shot? (Looks at Tony's wound) Tony: Yeah. These guys aren't using the usual bull sh*t. They've got powerful weapons... like they've just raided a military base or something Mitch: These Cruisers, the clothes, the hats... only one thing these guys could be... --- January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [3.37pm] Damien has fought his way back up to the roof, wasting a few Colombian Cartel members that have made it into the mansion along the way, and he runs over to Umberto and starts helping him fire down at Colombian's who are coming in from the back, as Tommy sees a lone Cartel Cruiser speeding down the Starfish Island strip Mitch: (Looks up and sees Tommy with a Rocket Launcher propped up on his shoulder, taking aim at their car) Oh sh*t... Tony: (Looking at all the Cartel Cruisers blown up) You don't have to say it... Tommy fires a Rocket down towards it, as Tony picks up his speed and avoids it, as Tommy quickly reloads another Rocket and fires at it again, but Tony drives the Cruiser past the gates of the mansion opposite Tommy's, and Tommy misses Tony: (Stops the Cruiser and gets out along with Mitch Baker and they jump over the walls) Tommy: (Looks down and sees Tony and Mitch Baker) sh*t! I almost blew 'em sky high (Drops the Rocket Launcher and waves them to come over) Damien: More and more are coming in through the back. We need some help over here! Tony and Mitch Baker walk into the drive way and start walking up it, as they see a few Cartel members walking around to the back, trying to play stealthy, and Tony aims the AK47 at the closest one and shoots him in the back, as the others begin running away. Mitch Baker shoots at them with his Stubby Shotgun, blowing their limbs off, and killing them instantly. Tony: (Walks over to the mansion steps and walks up them and goes inside with Mitch) You head to the top, I'm gonna go get an icepack and ring my wife, tell her to get outta town before it's too late Mitch: Don't worry; we already went to Marci's house, she was fine. We took her back to the Greasy Chopper and nobodies gonna get near her, you can trust me on that Tony: She's gotta get outta here, this place is gonna burn to the ground at this rate Mitch: I'll call Bonez, tell him to take her to Carcer City Tony: Alright. Be careful up there (Walks through to the kitchen and opens the freezer door and pulls out an icepack and shoves it onto his ribs and notices Cartel members coming in through the back) "sh*t, again?..." The Cartel members walk through the back door, only to be stared down by Tony, with his AK47 aimed at them, and he begins pumping rounds all over their bodies untill none are left standing, and he walks over to them and puts the icepack down as he begins reloading with their ammo, and he picks it back up and begins jogging through the house untill he's back at the Grand Staircase, and he goes up, seeing dead Cartel and Vercetti members everywhere. Umberto: (Looks around) Mitch! Wha' happened to you, you OK? Mitch: I'm alright. (Walks over to Umberto and starts firing down at the Cartel members) Where the hell are all these bastards coming from!? Tommy: (Walks over with the Rocket Launcher in his hand) That's the last of them at the front, for now anyway. Either of you three watch the news recently? About the Immigration that's been taking place all over Florida? Mitch: Shít, I did catch something about that the other day but I just shrugged it off. Do you think these are the same guys? Tommy: I think it's pretty obvious that it is. (Hoists the Rocket Launcher up and fires down at a few Cartel members) Where's Tony? Tony: (Walks through the door, closing it behind him) I'm right here Tommy: (Turns around) What happened to running off to England? Tony: None of that matters now man, you're gonna get my help wether you want it or not. Now come on! (Stands at the edge of the roof and begins firing down at Cartel members) You go and take the front, Damien! There's less coming in that way! Tommy: (Runs back over with Damien shortly behind him and looks down) Actually, you're wrong about that... (Takes aim with the Rocket Launcher) More are coming this way! Damien: (Breathing heavily) How many are there for crying out loud!? Tony, Mitch and Umberto continue firing down at the Cartel members coming in from the sides and back as Damien and Tommy take out the Cartel members coming in over the bridge and from behind the mansions, as Tony sees dozens of speed boats coming in the distance Tony: (Yells) Tommy, get over here! Now! --- January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [3.52pm] Cesar Vialpando is sitting in the back of a Maverick over the ocean with a black unzipped leather jacket on over his white tanktop, ending at the start of his dark blue jeans. His hair is shaved to stubble and he is smoking a cigarette as he's tapping the heel of his black lowtops into the helicopter's floor. Cartel members around him looking anxious, as his phone begins to ring. He takes his hands out of the leather jacket's pockets and he reaches into his jeans and takes it out and answers it Cesar: Yeah?... Send 'em in Cesar hangs the phone up and looks at the Cartel members then opens the door of the chopper, as they each stand up, one by one dropping down a rope to speed boats laying stationary right below the helicopter Cesar: You guys catch up wiv' the others and make sure you leave Vercetti alive. I wanna personally take his jabroni ass back to Julio Mendez, you got that? Cartel Member: Yes, sir The remaining Cartel members drop down the rope and into the boats below and start speeding off, catching up with the others, as Cesar leans over to the pilot Cesar: Take me to The Mendez building, and step on it As Cesar closes the door and the helicopter turns around and starts flying towards the Mendez building, the Cartel members are blown up by Tommy in the boats Tommy: (Drops the Rocket Launcher and starts coughing up blood) Damnit... Tony: What's wrong!? (Bends down and picks up the Rocket Launcher and hands the AK47 to Tommy) You good? Tommy: (Takes off his black jacket revealing a large red stain on the shoulder, soaking through the purple shirt he had on underneath) I don't know how long ago I got hit Mitch: (Stops firing and looks over at Tommy) That looks bad. We're gonna have to get you to the hospital Tommy drops the AK47 and Tony starts walking with him along the roof Tony: I'll be as fast as possible. We'll get to the hospital, get bandaged up, and be back in no time flat... (Sees his SMG on the floor by Damiens foot) Hey! Damien: (Turns around and looks at Tony, and sees him walking towards the SMG on the floor) It's outta ammo Tony: I'll get some from Tommy's office on the way down (Bends down and picks it up) You guys stay safe... actually someone get over here and help this kid Tony runs back over to Tommy and puts his icepack on his shoulder and Tony opens the door and starts walking down through the mansion Umberto: (Walks over to Damien) Come on, we've gotta keep this place lock'down! --- January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [4.14pm] Tony has just arrived at the hospital in Tommy's Banshee, and he stops outside of it as Tommy slowly gets out as does Tony and they walk into the hospital, and see dozens of nurses and doctors rushing around, with hundreds of injured people all over the hospital. Tony pushes past everyone with Tommy behind him and he goes over to the check-in desk and shoves some clipboards off of it and grabs the nurse by the collar and pulls her up to his level Tony: You're going to admit this man now, or I will kill you if I have to. Understood? Nurse: (Gulps) U..understood Tony drops her and she falls back into her seat, only to quickly get up and run around to Tommy and grip his arm and start rushing off to the back as angry pedestrians surround Tony, who loads up his SMG and starts firing it in the air until they back off Tony: People with guns get treated earlier than people who don't. How about you all remember that next time you wanna play hero? A black woman in a red bandana and white tanktop, showing off her midriff and jeans pushes past everyone, slowly walking towards Tony Woman: (Pulls out a handgun and aims it at Tony) Well why am I not admitted yet then? Tony: If you're gonna shoot me, you'd better do it quickly, because I've got somewhere else to be right now Woman: (Walks towards Tony and pushes the gun into his forehead) Ma' frien' is laying dea' somewhere in the streets of Old Lil' Haiti cos'a those bastards Tony: (Pushes his SMG into the woman's gut) I'm sorry for your loss, but there's nothing I can do now Woman: You got tha' gun, so why you ain' tryin' ta' stop them? Tony: (Sees Bikers speed by outside with Cartel Cruisers all over them, shooting at them) Gotta run! Tony tries to get past the woman but the woman blocks him off Tony: (Stops and stands still for a moment) Alright, fine. You know what I'm doing? I'm going after them you idiot Woman: Then I'm joinin' ya' aswell! Tony: With that? And that (Grabs a gash on her forearm, making her tense her neck from the pain) I don't think you're gonna be much help to me really Woman: I kno' where their base is located at! Tony: (Walks past her and grabs her arm as he does so) Fine, you can come along then. Aslong as you don't get in the way and just get killed straight away (Walks out the hospitals entrance and into the banshee along with the woman and starts it up and speeds off after the Cruisers) You got a name anyway? Woman: Denise. --- January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [4.16pm] The Chopper lands on the Helipad of the Mendez building and Cesar steps out and makes his way to the doors as the blades come to a stop, and he goes inside and down the stairs, making his way to the top floor of the building, where some Cartel members are with some Azteca's members, as Cesar approaches a group of them together in the corner by the windows, they notice him coming Cesar: Hazer, Sunny! How you two been!? (Hugs Sunny and then Hazer) Sunny: We've been good, holmes. S'been a while since we've seen you Cesar's phone begins ringing and he quickly takes it out and puts it to his ear, and nods his head and smiles then laughs and puts it away Cesar: Vercetti's checked into the hospital (Takes out his cigarette pack and puts a cigarette into his mouth and lights it) S'time to go an' pay him a visit Cesar leads Sunny and Hazer down the corridor as a few Colombian Cartel members begin following him, each armed with M16's, and Cesar takes a 9MM from a desk in the corridor and puts it in the back of his jeans, tightly pressed against his tailbone by his belt and he takes a drag of the cigarette and takes out a pair of brown tinted glasses and puts them on and smiles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillaCalli Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 this is getting more and more interesting... although i am wondering how come you havent continued on Alan's side of the story??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted February 25, 2007 Author Share Posted February 25, 2007 this is getting more and more interesting... although i am wondering how come you havent continued on Alan's side of the story??? I usually jump back and foward between Tony and Alan. Usually I skip it a few months then bring it back to the other one, and this time everything will kind of "link-up" after this Vice City take-over saga is over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillaCalli Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 ooo sweet sounds good then... i was just wondering. can't wait for the next chapter!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted February 28, 2007 Author Share Posted February 28, 2007 Chapter 43: One Last Goodbye...January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [4.26pm] Snow begins lightly falling from the sky above Vice City, as Tony is speeding down the long stretched road alongside the river bank, slowly moving in and out of traffic of cars desperatly trying to get to the Airport, using both roads to go in either direction to get to Escobar International, as he catches up with two Cartel Cruisers that are hot on the Biker's tails, and he stands up slightly in the Banshee and begins firing at them, as Denise takes the wheel Tony: Left a little more! No, too far! (Continues firing at the Cartel Cruisers and they soon lean out the back and retaliate) Drop back a little bit, they're using Uzi's The Banshee slows down a little and the Cartel members give up trying to shoot from the long range, as Tony continues firing with the SMG until one swerves into the wall of the river, and Denise slams the brakes on the Banshee, causing Tony to go over the windscreen and land on the bonnet, and he quickly rolls off and looks round to Denise Tony: What the hell is the matter with you!? Denise grabs Tony's Desert Eagle and jumps out of the Banshee and runs over to the Cruiser and sees two Cartel members crawling out, and she shoots them in the head at point blank range Tony: (Jumps back in the car) Come on! They were useless anyway! Denise: (Runs back over) I like ta' be sure that we ain' gonna be chased! Tony puts his footdown, blowing Denise's bandana clean off into the chilling winter air as she rapidly tries to reach for it Denise: Ma' new boyfrien' bought me that! What's he gonna say when he next see me!? Tony: He'll probaly thank god that I did it, because that bandana was horrible (Catches up with the remaining Cruiser and starts firing at it) Tony swerves around the right corner and continues after the Cruiser until he sees the Greasy Chopper and he slams the brakes on and opens the Banshee door Denise: Where tha' hell you goin'!? Tony: Just wait here! (Runs inside of the Chopper to see Biker's armed with 9MM's everywhere) Don't shoot (Puts his hands into the air) I'm just looking for Marci... A woman in a white dress and white cardigan comes out from the back room and smiles when she sees Tony, and Tony smiles back Tony: (Runs over to her) I just had to see if you and Videl were alright (Rubs her large stomach) Marci: I'm OK, but what's going on? I'm scared and nobody will tell me anything Tony: I'm not sure what's going on, all I know is the Colombian Cartel are invading the city (Looks over at a Biker) Where's Bonez? Biker: He wen't to the hospital to get an Air Ambulance! Tony: (Looks around) Alright, (Looks back at the Biker) come with us (Grabs Marci's wrist and starts walking out of the Greasy Chopper) Denise: (Notices Tony coming with Marci and a Biker out of the bar) There ain' enuff' room for the whale! Marci: What the f*ck did you just say to me you old whore!? Tony: (Watches a Cartel Cruiser come around the corner and starts firing at it as Marci screams and gets into the Banshee) Denise, start the car up! Biker: (Starts shooting at the Cruiser but gets shot in the leg) Argh! I'm hit! Tony shoots the window of the Cruiser out and shoots the driver in the head which causes the Cruiser to slow to a stop and lightly crash into a Bike outside the bar Tony: Get to the hospital and take this! (Grabs the Desert Eagle from Denise and tosses it to the Biker) Make sure you get treated up. And while you're there, check on Tommy Vercetti (Runs over to the Banshee then suddenly stops and grips his stomach in pain) Marci: (Looks at the wound on his open hawaiian shirt) What happened!? Tony: (Squeezes into the Banshee and Denise starts speeding away) Nothing, don't worry about it. Denise, get us to Starfish Island and I'll watch our six (Turns around and loads up his SMG as another Cruiser comes around the corner and Denise picks up her speed as Tony starts firing at it). --- January 16TH 2004: Los Santos, San Andreas [4.31pm] CJ, Sweet, Mark and Kane have arrived at Los Santos International Airport in Sweet's Greenwood. Kane is still wearing a purple hooded sweatshirt with Bodyarmor on underneath, and CJ is wearing a green wifebeater with jeans, while Sweet has a black shirt and green jeans on, and Mark is sitting in a black wifebeater and black pants. They get out of the Greenwood and make their way into the Airport, with Grove Street, Ballas, and Vago's following suit, still dressed in their respective gang colors. CJ leads everyone through the Airport and out the Terminal and onto the Airstrip, where a Shamal lays in wait for them CJ: Aiight, we got about seventy strong, we good ta' go Sweet: Take care'a that back-stabbin' piece'a sh*t once n' for all. (Hands a Tec9 to Kane) We good tuh' go They all board the plane and CJ gets into the cockpit along with Sweet and Kane, and Mark makes his way through the aisle and sits down next to a Ballas member Balla: You got any crack? A homie needs sumthink' fo what we 'bout to do Mark: No. (Looks at the Balla with a disgusted look on his face) I ain't got any f*ckin' crack, nigga. (Stands up and makes his way further down the aisle and sees a Grove OG laughing with a Balla sitting next to him) Man, what the f*ck? Grove OG: Yo, Mark! Take a seat, du'. We got sum' beer over here Mark: (Grabs the Balla by his purple sweater and tosses him into the aisle and sits down next to the Grove OG) I can't believe you bein' so coo' about this, Vin Vin: Ah sh*t not this again. CJ know's what he doin', and I'm down wi' CJ. Ain' you? Mark: You know I'm always down for tha' Grove, but man... I don't like this... The Shamal begins taking off as Mark grabs the beer can from Vin's hand and takes a mouthfull, looking around at all the Ballas, Vagos and Grove members getting along, as he takes another mouthfull, emptying the can and tossing it down the aisle. --- January 16TH 2004: Tampa, Florida [4.40pm] Carlito has his bags packed as he walks out of the Motel and into the street, with Caribbean Cartel members following close behind, and he gets into a black Cruiser along with a couple of Caribbean Cartel members, which are wearing orange and white hawaiian shirts, almost exactly the same as the Colombian Cartel's, and wearing the same hats, but with white pants. They are each carrying AK47's as one of the members starts the Cruiser up and pulls out of the parking lot. Carlito: When we get down there, I'll check into the Ocean View hotel. You and Carlos lead the twenty men onto Starfish Island, where Vercetti's mansion is Cartel Member: Yes, sir. And what would you like us to do with Mr. Vercetti once we've taken control? Carlito: Kill him. I'm not one to want to get my han's dirty if I don't need to. The Cruiser speeds past Tampa Beach, heading for the seaport. They arrive after a five miniute drive, and they drive onto the large boat which is stationary. After all the Cruisers are on the boat, it begins slowly moving, as Carlito gets out of the Cruiser and walks along deck to one of the Boat Captains Carlito: How long until we dock in Vice City? Boat Captain: (Looks at his chart) Err, well, it's snowing so we had to take precausions, so sometime tomorrow, sir. Carlito: That's good (Pats him on the back) You do a good job to ensure our journey is safe and pleasant. And for that, I thank you Boat Captain: Thank you, sir. Carlito takes out an apple from the left pocket of his baige pants and rubs it clean on his sunny orange shirt and takes a bite into it and walks along the deck with a smile on his face, as a Caribbean Cartel member hands him an AK47 and he takes it Carlito: (Swallows the apple) You (Looks at the Cartel member) keep lookout for any cops that will try and take us down. I'm gonna go take a nap. Carlito pats the Cartel member on the shoulder as he walks past him and takes another bite of the apple and makes his way up the stairs of the boat and sits on a deckchair and closes his eyes, looking out the window at the snow begin to fall down heavier. --- January 16TH 2004: Vice City, Florida [4.45pm] Denise slams her foot on the brakes as Tony jumps out of the car, standing infront of the hospital. He runs inside with his SMG still in hand, and shoves his way past the injured people on the ground floor, as nurses and doctors try to restrain him from going any further. Denise pulls away and starts driving towards the bridge to Starfish Island, as blue Lowriders and Cartel Cruisers begin coming down the way they just came. Marci: (Looks in the mirror at the Cruisers) sh*t, there are more comin'. Put your foot down already, we've gotta get to the mansion! Denise: Little gurl (Starts picking up her speed) I ain' doin' sh*t you tell me to... I was gonna do it anyway. Tony makes his way through the hospital until he reaches a room on the second floor and goes inside to see Tommy with a bandage on his shoulder, and an AK47 in his hand, as he begins putting on a clean, light blue hawaiian shirt Tommy: (Looks round to Tony) What do you think? Is it still me? Tony: Sure whatever, come on lets go. Marci's on her way back to the mansion and I'm gonna get Bonez to fly her outta here. He should be back at the mansion with the Air Ambulance now, if everything that Biker said was true Tommy: Alright (Stops buttoning up his shirt) We on foot or did you have anything else in mind? Tony: (Starts walking out of the room with Tommy following him) We're on foot, but it's only a five miniute walk. I'm pretty sure nothing's gonna happen. Cesar parks his blue Lowrider and gets out and closes the door and takes his shades off, and puts another cigarette in his mouth and lights it, as Hazer and Sunny get out of the back and close the doors and they walk into the hospital, as Cartel members get out of their Cruisers and follow them in. Nurse: (Looks at the men then down at their guns) Umm.. Hazer: It's probaly a good idea if you get outta here, senõrita (Puts his arm around her) Because, something's about to happen, and we're not quite sure what yet Sunny: (Laughs) Why don't you go back to my place, chica? Get f*cked up The Nurse runs away as Cesar, Hazer and Sunny along with the Cartel members start walking through the hospital, when security comes by and tries to stop them. Cesar takes his 9MM out from behind his back and shoots the guards in the head, and Tony and Tommy hear it from the second floor. Tony: (Looks at Tommy and stops walking) You hear that? Tommy: Yeah... Cesar, Hazer and Sunny along with the Cartel members make their way to the second floor and begin looking around the rooms. The Cartel members are shooting at all of the patients in each room, wether they be asleep or awake, innocent or not, it doesn't matter to them. Hazer opens the door of the room Tommy was in and looks in it, seeing it's empty, and only a bloodstained purple shirt lay on the bed Cesar: (Barges past him and laughs) He's made a break for it! (Tosses his cigarette into the room and closes the door and starts picking up his pace) Tony: (Laying down in a Laundry shoot, looking out at Tommy, who is laying in the other one opposite his, and he notices Cesar and the others coming their way) Psst, Tommy, they're comin', get ready Cesar walks past the Laundry shoots with Hazer and Sunny by his side, and Tony and Tommy both start firing at the Colombian Cartel members, then drop down the shoots Cesar: (Turns around and starts firing at the Laundry shoots, hearing echoing laughter from Tony getting fainter) Can't belie' this sh*t! Get after 'em! Hazer and Sunny each climb into a Laundry shoot and slide down them as Cesar runs through a door to the stairs and starts running down them, with 9MM in hand. Hazer arrives at the bottom of the Laundry shoot only to be stared down by Tommy with an AK47 Tommy: Last words? Hazer: Yeah; f*ck you, puto Tommy shoots a hole in Hazer's chest as Hazer falls down, dead on a pile of dirty bedsheets, and he begins running towards the door, and goes through, finding himself in a large boiler room, as he hears a gunshot go off in the other Laundry room, and moments later Tony comes out with SMG in hand and starts walking over to Tommy Tommy: The greaseball dickhead laying face down in a puddle of red or what? Tony: Yours? Tommy: Yeah Tony: (Looking around) Looks like we're good to go (Takes a clip from his pocket and tosses it to Tommy who starts reloading his AK47, and Tony takes out a clip and starts reloading his SMG, as a few remaining Cartel members come through the Laundry room doors, with AK47's aimed at them) Crap (Puts his hands up and drops the SMG, and Tommy does the same with his AK47) Cesar: (Walks through the door with the 9MM pointed infront of him, and he takes a cigarette out of his jacket pocket and puts it in his mouth and smirks) Y'know, you two had me worried for a moment there, but only briefly. Now come on, we're takin a lil' drive... Tony: (Starts walking as three Cartel members dig their AK47's into his spine) So, who are you? Their leader? Cesar: Cesar Vialpando. Cousin of Catalina Vialpando, Son of Rose and Cliffton Vialpando, Leader of Varrios Los Azteca's, and a leader of the Colombian Cartel! Tony: (Laughs) Cesar Vialpando? I remember hearing of you...from CJ... Cesar: (Stops in his tracks and lowers his gun a little) "Gotta play it dumb..." Carl Johnson? From San Andreas? Tony: Yeah. Told me a little story about you aswell, but you ain't ever gonna hear about it Cesar: Eh, why? Tony: (Elbows a Cartel member and grabs his AK47, quickly aiming it down at him and looking at Cesar) Because you're going to be dead in less than a miniute Cesar: (Chuckles) Nice going, holmes. But I don't care about one Cartel member Tony: (Shoots the remaining two standing in the head, causing them to rapidly fire wildly, as Tony and Tommy take cover. They hit the other two Cartel members, and Cesar steps back as Tony and Tommy stand back up) Cesar makes a break for it and runs past a pipe, which Tony shoots at, and it explodes, sending Cesar flying through the air, and landing on his feet a few metres away, and he continues running, as Tony and Tommy are trying to get through the steam coming from it Tommy: Forget it, we ain't getting through there. (Looks back at the Cartel member) What should we do with him? (Watches him start crawling away and walks over to him, putting his foot on his back and weighing him down) Tony: Do whatever the hell you want with him. I'm going back to get my SMG. I've had it for nine years, I ain't about to let it go now. Cesar finds a fire exit door and runs through it and calms his breathing pattern, as he takes out another cigarette and lights it and runs round to the front of the hospital and gets into his blue Lowrider and speeds out of the entrance, and he takes out his phone and dials a number and puts it to his ear Cesar: (Breathing heavily trying to calm down as he gets an answer) 'Dey got away again, and Mendez is gonna be furious if I don't finish the job. You remember how bezerk he wen't in '01 when the SPANK boat got blown to sh*t by your maricon asshole boyfriend Woman (OS): (Sighs) Alright, I'll be down there in 'deh morning. Until 'den just lay low, imbocile. Mendez isn't goin' to go crazy if he thinks Vercetti is dead already Cesar: I can handle this already! I ain't a little kid anymore, Catalina. I don't need you to bail me out of this! Catalina (OS): I'll be seeing jou tomorrow. The phoneline goes dead as rage coats Cesar's face, and he tosses the cellphone into the air, causing it to land in the snow on the road as he picks up his speed, heading back towards the Mendez building. Tony and Tommy make their way out of the hospital and see him in the far distance, and they start running towards the bridge leading over to Starfish Island. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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