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GTA: Old Times

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•  OLD TIMES

•  The Rise & Fall

•  Aftermath

 

•  THE CHANGING OF TIMES

•  Escape From Hell

•  Pagan Assault

 

In 2002, three men are working in a garage in San Fierro. Alan Wood, the manager, recieves a phone call from his old friend in Los Santos, Mark Mansell, with startling news about the Ballas reforming and waging war against their nemesis', the GSF - Grove Street Families. Without hesitation, he informs his cousin, Jake Wood, who was part of the notorious gang before moving on - and Tony Zimmzy, his childhood best friend and co-manager. After spiralling back into the all-too-familiar world of crime, vendettas and truth unfold, forcing all four men to fight for survival in their own way...

 

The story began in 1995, where Alan Wood recieved news that his parents were brutally murdered in London, England. Without a family, he's forced to move to his distant cousin's family home in Los Santos, San Andreas, where he quickly becomes acquainted in a world of street gang banging and robberies. After past wars come back to haunt the family, the Leone mafia syndicate from Liberty City wage war upon the small street gang - and devising a plan to counter their efforts, friendships and allies are formed, as enemies and bad blood stir, too. Witness how the four rose to power - and remained in thrones of power - at least until the year 2002...

 

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UPDATES

Oct. 05: Happy 2nd Birthday. Chapter 91 released. The story is now finished. Thank you all for reading, and I hope you've enjoyed it. Over & Out.

 

Sep. 28: Chapter 90 released. Next chapter ends the story.

Sep. 17: Chapter 89 released.

Sep. 06: Chapter 88 released.

Aug. 18: Chapter 87 released.

Aug. 13: Chapter 86 released. Pagan Assault begins.

Aug. 04: Chapter 85 released. Escape From Hell ends.

Aug. 01: Chapter 84 released.

Jul. 15: Chapter 83 released.

Jul. 09: MAKEOVER.

Jul. 07: Chapter 82 released.

Jun. 28: Chapter 81 released.

Jun. 20: Chapter 80 released.

Jun. 09: Chapter 79 released.

May. 03: Chapter 78 released.

Apr. 27: Chapter 76-77 released.

Apr. 13: Escape From Hell has begun. 74-75 released.

Mar. 12: Chapter 73 is released. The final chapter of The Changing of Times.

Mar. 04: Chapter 72 is released.

Feb. 29: Chapter 71 is released.

Feb. 25: Chapter 70 is released.

Feb. 19: Chapter 69 is released & updated profiles.

Feb. 12: Welcome back to life. Chapter 68 is released.

Dec. 24: Added Chapter 67 -- Merry Joulua! Last X-mas, I added c. 28. Not bad for a year.

Dec. 13: Added Chapter 66

Nov. 30: Added Chapter 65

Nov. 22: Added Chapter 64

Nov. 14: Added Chapter 63

Oct. 06: Added Chapter 62

Oct. 05: Happy Birthday GTA: Old Times!

Sep. 17: Added Chapter 61 + Added Character Picture for Nate Walken.

Sep. 07: Updated the front page synopsis for new readers.

Sep. 02: Sorry...it's been a while. Added Chapter 60

Jun. 05: Updated Character's List + Added Character Picture for Gary 'GT' Taylor

Jun. 05: Added Chapter 59

May 24: Added Chapter 58

May 15: Added Chapter 57, the end of Aftermath

May 09: Added Chapter 56

May 03: Added Chapter 55

Apr. 27: Added Chapter 54

Apr. 21: Added Chapter 53

Apr. 16: Added Chapter 52

Apr. 12: Added Chapter 51, beginning of the third, and short saga.

Apr. 04: Added Chapter 50, the end of The Rise & Fall. Next up, Aftermath.

Apr. 01: Added Chapter 49

Mar. 27: Added Chapter 48

Mar. 27: Added Character Picture for 'Red'

Mar: 22: Added Chapter 47

Mar. 18: Added Chapter 46

Mar. 13: Added Chapter 45

Mar. 08: Added Character Descriptions!

Mar. 08: Added Character Picture for Marci Merquite

Mar. 07: Added Chapter 44

Feb. 27: Added Chapter 43

Feb. 23: Added Chapter 42

Feb. 21: Added Chapter 41

Feb. 21: Added Character Picture for Damien Robina

Feb. 17: Added Chapter 40

Feb. 13: Added Chapter 39

Feb. 10: Added Character Picture for Carlito Colón

Feb. 10: Added Chapter 38

Feb. 04: Added Chapter 37

Feb. 01: Added Chapter 36

Jan. 29: Added Chapter 35

Jan. 25: Added Chapter 34

Jan. 22: Added Chapter 33

Jan. 18: Added Chapter 32

Jan. 09: Added Chapter 31

Jan. 05: Added Character Picture for Julia Mendez

Jan. 05: Added Character Picture for Christian Mendez

Jan. 05: Added Chapter 30

Dec. 31: Added Chapter 29

Dec. 31: Continuing the story, as Palaric said he would stop now. Shortest break in history?

Dec. 24: Added Chapter 28 -- Merry Christmas

Dec. 23: Added A Fresh, New Synopsis

Dec. 23: Added Chapter 27

Dec. 20: Two Stars Achieved!

Dec. 18: Added Chapter 26

Dec. 13: Added Character Picture for The Romani Family

Dec. 13: Added Character Picture for Roman Harris

Dec. 13: Added Chapter 25

Dec. 09: Added Chapter 24

Dec. 06: Added Character Picture for Kimber Mendez

Dec. 06: Added Character Picture for Julio Mendez

Dec. 06: Added Chapter 23

Nov. 28: Added an Updates section.

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OLD TIMES

Chapter 1: The Introduction (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335)

Chapter 2: Grove Street United (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=0entry3896331)

Chapter 3: Ambush (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=0entry3897683)

Chapter 4: The Santa Maria Massacre (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=0entry3899191)

Chapter 5: Satoshi Zoo (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=0entry3901401)

Chapter 6: On The Run (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=0entry3902687)

Chapter 7: King In Exile (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=0entry3903480)

Chapter 8: Vice City Blues (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=0entry3905946)

Chapter 9: Quiet Summer Afternoons... (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=20entry3907273)

Chapter 10: 'Crazy' Jack Cassidy (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=20entry3909706)

Chapter 11: The Hunt Begins (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=20&do=findComment&comment=3911840)

Chapter 12: The Waka-Gashira Wipeout (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=20entry3914756)

Chapter 13: Can You Run Forever? (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=20entry3915574)

THE RISE & FALL

Chapter 14: Tying Up The Loose Ends (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=40&do=findComment&comment=3921244)

Chapter 15: Set Up (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=40&do=findComment&comment=3923889)

Chapter 16: Unknown Enemies (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=40entry3928436)

Chapter 17: The Need For Speed (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=40&do=findComment&comment=3931335)

Chapter 18: Suicide? (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=60&do=findComment&comment=3934333)

Chapter 19: Midlife Crisis (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=60entry3938806)

Chapter 20: Elimination (1) (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=60entry3943315)

Chapter 21: Revolution (2) (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=60&do=findComment&comment=3947790)

Chapter 22: My Guardian Angel (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=60entry3951157)

Chapter 23: Rogues (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=60entry3960706)

Chapter 24: The King's Men (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=80entry3965467)

Chapter 25: The Inside Man (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=80&do=findComment&comment=3970066)

Chapter 26: The Losing Side (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=80entry3976449)

Chapter 27: Your Funeral (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=80&do=findComment&comment=3983085)

Chapter 28: The Vatican Street War Of '03 (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=80&do=findComment&comment=3983690)

Chapter 29: Say Hello To Sunshine (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=100entry3993742)

Chapter 30: Welcome To The Family (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=100&do=findComment&comment=4003037)

Chapter 31: Beginning Of The End (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=100entry4008644)

Chapter 32: Reunion (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=100&do=findComment&comment=4021263)

Chapter 33: En Route (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=100&do=findComment&comment=4025156)

Chapter 34: It's Been One Hell Of A Ride (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=100entry4029109)

Chapter 35: Little White Lies (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=100entry4033792)

Chapter 36: Anywhere City But Here (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=120entry4037027)

Chapter 37: Walking Through Walls (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=120&do=findComment&comment=4039942)

Chapter 38: Grand Unification (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=120entry4046142)

Chapter 39: Downpour (1) (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=120entry4050339)

Chapter 40: Red Sky (2) (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=120entry4057035)

Chapter 41: Dead Or Alive? (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=140entry4062004)

Chapter 42: Ghosts (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=140entry4066476)

Chapter 43: One Last Goodbye... (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=140entry4072575)

Chapter 44: Dangerous Allies (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=140&do=findComment&comment=4083308)

Chapter 45: Last Words? (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=140entry4093162)

Chapter 46: Plague (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=140entry4102378)

Chapter 47: Last Chance (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=160entry4108375)

Chapter 48: The Red Masquerade (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=160entry4116299)

Chapter 49: Cold War (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=160entry4134166)

Chapter 50: The Rapture (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=160entry4147953)

AFTERMATH

Chapter 51: Crimson Royale (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=160entry4173741)

Chapter 52: Last Requests (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=160entry4187173)

Chapter 53: Where The Heart Is (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=160&do=findComment&comment=4196587)

Chapter 54: The Last Romani (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=180&do=findComment&comment=4207831)

Chapter 55: Impatience (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=180entry4219047)

Chapter 56: Tony Zimmzy (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=180entry4229582)

Chapter 57: Alan Wood (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=180entry4239153)

THE CHANGING OF TIMES

Chapter 58: Growing Pains (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=180&do=findComment&comment=4255426)

Chapter 59: Downward Spiral (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=180entry4279622)

Chapter 60: Wrong Side Of The Tracks (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=180entry4515911)

Chapter 61: Hitting Empire (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=180entry1057175792)

Chapter 62: Still Searching (1) (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=200entry1057207050)

Chapter 63: Crisis (2) (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=200entry1057260398)

Chapter 64: Travel Hymn (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=200entry1057274680)

Chapter 65: The Plan (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=200entry1057288489)

Chapter 66: Test (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=200&do=findComment&comment=1057325462)

Chapter 67: Viva Las Venturas! (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=220entry1057352751)

Chapter 68: Back To Business (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=220entry1057499942)

Chapter 69: Air/Earth (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=220&do=findComment&comment=1057526689)

Chapter 70: Vanishing Act (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=220entry1057547135)

Chapter 71: Hit (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=220entry1057561754)

Chapter 72: Storm (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=220entry1057572818)

Chapter 73: The Encounter (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=220&do=findComment&comment=1057602059)

ESCAPE FROM HELL

Chapter 74: Our Lord Has Left Us (1) (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&view=findpost&p=1057787987)

Chapter 75: Flame Deluge (2) (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&view=findpost&p=1057787987)

Chapter 76: Et Aliae (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&view=findpost&p=1057859545)

Chapter 77: Desperation (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=240&do=findComment&comment=1057955110)

Chapter 78: Daylight (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=240entry1058013446)

Chapter 79: The World Is Watching (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=240&do=findComment&comment=1058228900)

Chapter 80: Firespin (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=240entry1058273521)

Chapter 81: Wanted (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=240entry1058300191)

Chapter 82: The Exchange (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=260entry1058331249)

Chapter 83: Deliverance (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=260&do=findComment&comment=1058358126)

Chapter 84: The Age of Reason (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=260&do=findComment&comment=1058411603)

Chapter 85: Takedown (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=260&do=findComment&comment=1058421627)

PAGAN ASSAULT

Chapter 86: Take Cover, Run (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=78&t=258335&st=260&do=findComment&comment=1058453810)

Chapter 87: Ravenous (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=280entry1058470330)

Chapter 88: Reduced To This (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=280entry1058521103)

Chapter 89: Requiem (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=280entry1058543271)

Chapter 90: Fire/Water (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=280entry1058565843)

Chapter 91: Gangster (http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=258335&st=280entry1058577866)

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Because not too many people can really picture a character through text, I decided to add photographs of actors who resemble each character in the story. As the story progresses I'll add new characters' photographs.

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Cast

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Alan Wood Protagonist

Description: Alan Wood is the main protagonist of The Changing of Times. He's around the 6 foot mark and is of average body weight. He's easily influenced by his older brother which leads him into all kinds of trouble. He was killed in Chapter 57, where the story ends. In 1995, the current story, he's just moved to San Andreas and is beginning his life over there.

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Jake Wood

Description: Jake Wood is Alan Wood's cousin, and is part of GSF. He's around the 5 foot 8 mark and is very skinny. He was always looked down on as being a "wannabe gangsta", and got on people's nerves alot. The last time he was seen was in 2002, and hasn't been seen or heard from since. He was being chased by Vincent Sean, and he boarded a helicopter, in which he realized he was not alone in the helicopter.

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Tony Zimmzy Protagonist

Description: Tony Zimmzy is Alan Wood's best friend, and he's the protagonist of Old Times. When he got out of prison doing a two month sentence, with no where to go, he joined Alan in San Andreas. He's around the 5 foot 10 marker, and of average body weight. He and Nate mastermind the destruction of Caligula's casino in 1995.

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Mark Mansell

Description: Mark Mansell was and still is a Grove OG. He was betrayed and left for dead in 2004, but survived, extracting his revenge and murdering the ones he thought to be friends. He's around the 6 foot marker and is well toned.

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Gary 'GT' Taylor Antagonist

Description: GT is a GSF OG. He's first introduced as a thug, attempting to intimidate Alan, but then putting Alan's mind at ease revealing he's a friend. As CJ and Sweet both aren't around, GT, Roman and Nate take care of the current GSF. After betraying his friends, he becomes the main antagonist in The Changing of Times.

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Caine Antagonist

Description: First name unknown, Caine is Mike Toreno's personal assassin - long before Vincent Sean entered the scene in Old Times. He is introduced during the Escape From Hell saga in The Changing of Times - and begins to persue and hunt Tony Zimmzy.

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Angelo Munas

Description: Angelo Munas is a dangerous assassin that works for Salvatore Leone and is sent his orders to hunt Alan Wood down in London, England along with Toni Cipriani.

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Charlie Cohen

Description: The man who blackmails Alan in to working for him - he is a dangerous ex-London mobster, and carries a revolver on him at all times. In trouble with a bigger mafia firm, he forces Alan to work for him - or he'll turn him back in to the police - which will result him to be sent back to prison.

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Johnny

Description: Last name unknown, he's Charlie's top man; revealing to Alan he fled Vice City due to a large-scale attack, he has no where else to turn.

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Terrance Wood

Description: Terrance Wood is Alan Wood's older brother, introduced in 2003. He depends on Alan a lot and has a slight cocaine problem. He's around the 6 foot 2 marker and of average build. He was killed, along with Christian Mendez in one of the final chapters of the story.

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Roman Harris

Description: Roman Harris was a Grove OG back in '95. He is around the 6 foot 5 marker and very built. He was accidently killed by CJ whilst chasing Claude around Vice City. In 1995, he co-runs the current GSF, along with GT and Nate.

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Chris Wood

Description: Chris Wood is Alan Wood's cousin and Jake Wood's younger brother. When he was first introduced in '95, he had a twin and they were both 13-years-old. He is around the 6 foot 1 marker and is well toned. The last time he was seen he was helping Alan, Terrance and Claude to take down the Liberty City Yakuza. Everyone believed he was dead, but when they came back, he was gone and hasn't been seen or heard of since.

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Vincent Sean

Description: Vincent Sean is Mike Toreno's top hitman since Tony stopped working for him. He's around the 6 foot marker and of normal body type. He's constantly searching for Tony Zimmzy in the later years. He also almost killed Jake Wood before he narrowly escaped in a helicopter, leaving Vincent frustrated.

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Julio Mendez

Description: Julio Mendez is the true Colombian Cartel leader, ever since the year 2000. He put Catalina in charge, and when Catalina was 'unable to continue' after the events in 2001, he put Cesar Vialpando in charge. He's around the 5 foot 8 marker, and is of skinny build. He was taken down by Alan Wood in the final chapter of the story in a gunfight within his estate.

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Danny Romani

Description: Danny Romani is the youngest of the four Romani brothers, and the most dangerous. Spent almost his entire life bouncing from one jail to another, and he's currently hiding in Austrailia. He's around the 6 foot 2 marker and is well toned. In the final chapter of the story, Danny does a drive-by on Alan Wood, killing him.

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Ryan Romani

Description: Ryan Romani owns the largest cocaine business in London history and is always at war with Julio Mendez. He's around the 6 foot marker and is of average build.

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Christian Mendez

Description: Christian Mendez is the eldest son of Julio Mendez. He's around the 6 foot marker and is of skinny build. He was Tony Zimmzy's main antagonist in the later years, and was taken down in one of the final chapters.

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Damien Robina

Description: Damien Robina is the god-son of Umberto Robina. Damien and Umberto were secretly working with Mike Toreno on helping kill Tony Zimmzy and Tommy Vercetti. He's around the 6 foot 4 marker and very built. He's only 17-years-old, and is a part-time Taxi driver.

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Marci Merquite

Description: Marci Merquite is the pregnant wife of Tony Zimmzy, introduced in 1999.

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'Red'

Description: 'Red' is a master detective from Kanto, Japan, who has taken a special interest in the on-going war in Vice City as of late. Although not featured much in 'The Rise & Fall' part of 'Old Times', he was a major character before and after it. He has an unknown history with Tony Zimmzy that will see light sooner or later.

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Nate Walken

Description: Nate is the current under-boss of GSF. Although his skin may be fair, CJ and Sweet put him in charge for keeping the gang close-knit, and making sure no problems occur until they return. He's loyal and would never stab a friend in need in the back.

 

 

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Old Times

 

 

Chapter 1: The Introduction

November 30TH 2001: Liberty City, America [5.55pm]

Salvatore Leone's death by the hands of Claude Speed spread through Liberty City and the better parts of the United States, As every gang pushed foward and put the muscle on the Leone crime family, Joey Leone went into hiding shortly after the death of Salvatore, Toni Cipriani took over untill Joey could sort himself out, But Toni Cipriani failed to keep the power in the hands of the Leones and The Yakuza who were working with Claude Speed took over shortly after Claude Speed killed Catalina, The head of the Columbian Cartel. The Forelli's struck a deal with The Yakuza not long after the events that perspired on Cochrane Dam in Shoreside Vale, The Columbians were left without a leader and therefore disbanded, The Forelli's took over power of Portland whilst Staunton & Shoreside Vale were firmly under the grasp of The Yakuza, Who at this time was being headed by Waka-gashira Satoshi Zoo, Cousin of Asuka Kasen, Previous waka-gashira of The Yakuza. The lower gangs in Liberty City were all trying to put muscle onto one another in attempt to be "the" gang to overthrone the Yakuza & Forelli's, New gangs were forming and Gangs from out of state were trying to get into a piece of the crime ring inside of Liberty City. Today was the day of Salvatore's burial and It was raided by Yakuza, Luigi Goterelli - A loyal & good friend of Salvatore's was gunned down by Yakuza while Toni Cipriani, Don Joey Leone & Mickey Hamfists, Bodyguard for Luigi Goterelli made it away, They got back to Toni's restraunt which had been torched, They decided it was then and there that they had to leave Liberty.

 

Toni: (Smoking a cigar looking out the window of the Sentinel) Joey theres no place left for us here kid, We've gotta go

 

Joey: How can we let my dad down like this Toni

 

Toni: Would you rather be dead along with Luigi right now?

 

Mickey: (Looks at a junction upahead) Where do we go?

 

Toni: Vice City

 

Joey: Vice City?

 

Toni: Vice City. (Throws his cigar out the window and rolls it up and looks over at Joey) Vice City has a small power struggle down there, Theres no Mafia influence in the city anymore - I say we go down there, We send some men down there and take over, Most of the Cubans down there came to Liberty City

 

Joey: Alright, Lets do it then, Lets go south, Lets go to Vice City

 

Joey is looking outside the window at Liberty City as Mickey is driving them towards the airport

 

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July 8TH 2002: San Fierro, San Andreas [1.12pm]

Back in December of 2000, Alan Wood killed 2 of Salvatore's men in London, England -- Angelo was one of Salvatore & Toni's favourite gunmen, A top hitman who trained in the military, and Diego was a close friend to Toni's mother. In Pagan City, Rome, Alan Wood's best friend Tony Zimmzy and Alan Wood's Cousin Jake Wood had a contract on they're head by Salvatore, but Salvatore failed to have them killed, As Catalina - head of the Columbian Cartel held Jake hostage in order to get Miguel to blackmail Tony for his freedom, Tony did so by killing Mario Di'angelo, A Made Man in the Leone's -- But Catalina didn't stay true to her promise, And backstabbed Tony by handing him over to Mike Toreno, Who has wanted Tony, Alan, Jake & Their friend, Mark, dead since 1996 after failing to perform an Assassination on Tommy Vercetti. In 1999 Tommy Vercetti found out that it was Mike Toreno who set him up and tried to have him killed, And Tommy teamed up with Tony Alan & Jake to take down an enemy from Grove Street, In Los Santos of San Andreas, When it was all over however, Tommy disapeared and hasn't been seen or heard from since. One of Tommy's oldest friends, Powel Merquite, Was killed by Claude Speed in 2000 while he protected his Daughter, Marci & Tony from being killed inside of a Shopping Mall Tony had purchased in Pagan City, Rome. Mike Toreno tried to get away still holding the money he promised Catalina for Tony & Jake, but Miguel shot him and wounded him, As Police covered the spot, Catalina, Miguel & Claude made it away with the money, Tony & Jake narrowly made it away and got back to England to find Alan inside of his club, Having just killed Angelo, Alan, Tony & Jake left London, England and went back to San Andreas, Which has been a peaceful state ever since in 2000 Salvatore's men wiped all gangs out in Los Santos, There is currently no power struggle in any parts of San Andreas. Alan, Tony & Jake have been laying low, And with the little money Alan had left from England in his Cocaine business he forcefully took over, They bought a run-down Garage in Doherty which once belonged to their friend, Carl Johnson. 2 Years have passed.

 

Tony: (Sitting down reading the newspaper and talking to Jake) Says here their still on the hunt for the murderer of Salvatore

 

Jake: (Gets a wrench out the toolbox and begins working on a car) Man, You've gotta give up reading about that sh*t, It'll wreck yo brain

 

Tony: (Puts the paper down) Yeah I guess, I'm still glad he's gone though

 

Jake: And we havn't had any lil' 'unexpected' visits from his goons either

 

Tony: (Starts laughing) Probaly none left

 

The phone begins to ring and Alan comes out of the back office and answers it

 

Alan: Good afternoon, Doherty Auto Garage, Manager speaking how can I help you?...

 

Alan stays silent for a moment then looks over towards Tony & Jake

 

Alan: Alright

 

Alan hangs the phone up and runs over to Tony & Jake

 

Alan: We've gotta go

 

Tony: What?

 

Alan: I'll explain along the way but we've gotta get down to Los Santos, Mark just phoned me (Picks up a custom Micro SMG and looks over to the mechanics working on a Black Infernus) Dwaine close up after we leave

 

Jake: (Drops the wrench onto a bunch of cloths) Mark's alive!?

 

Alan: Yeah, He needs help (Alan grabs his leather jacket off a chair)

 

Tony: With what?

 

Alan: It's the Ballas, They're back.

 

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July 8TH 2002: Vice City, Florida [2.39pm]

Don Joey Leone is sitting in a large office with a brandy in his hand, He's been stirring it for the past 5 miniutes pondering with his thoughts as Toni Cipriani bursts in through the office doors along with Mickey Hamfists

 

Toni: (Throws his bloodstained jacket over a coathanger) Thats the last of those Yakuza f*cks to come down to Vice

 

Mickey: We lost 3 men boss, But we killed 12 Yakuza

 

Joey: (Throws his glass into the fireplace and stands up) 3 Men!?, We've got how many men left now Mickey, How f*ckin many?

 

Mickey: (Steps back from an angered Joey) Well..About 2 dozen I'd say

 

Joey: The Yakuza are going to run us into the f*ckin ground at this rate, Toni, What the f*ck am I suppose to do here?

 

Toni: Joey just relax. You know I'd do anything for this family

 

Toni walks over to Joey and puts his hands on his shoulders and calms him down as Joey sits back down and lets his head fall into his hands

 

Toni: We've done good in Vice, We've set shop up here for the future. Now It's time to move on, We've gotta go somewhere where no Yakuza and no Triad mother f*cker will bother us

 

Joey: (Stays silent for a moment) Where do we go?

 

Toni: The quietest place in America at this present time. San Andreas.

 

Joey: San Andreas...

 

Toni: Back in the 90's your pop had business down there

 

Joey: Do I need reminding of how that turned out?

 

Toni: Theres nothing but business to be made down there now, Since your pops cleaned it up. We go to Las Venturas, We start out small, Put a stake in a Casino, Keep our heads down and don't attract any attention to ourselves

 

Joey: Do you know anyone who owns a Casino down there?

 

Toni: As a matter of fact...

 

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July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [6.27pm]

Tony, Alan & Jake sped down to Los Santos in Tony's dark green Rodeo, Alan recieved a phone call on the way there from Mark telling him to meet him at Santa Maria beach, As they reach closer to they're destination, They see stores have boarded up the windows, Alot of the cars have been turned over and the city has a black cloud of smog hovering over it. Tony pulls up into the car park of the Santa Maria beach and get out to see Mark sitting on a bench, Mark waves them to come over

 

Tony: (Gets out the car and locks the door) Hey Mark, How you doin man?

 

Tony Alan & Jake walk over and sit next to Mark and see he's bleeding pretty heavily from the chest

 

Jake: sh*t! We need to get you to tha hospital

 

Mark: (Stops Jake from going back to the car) No juss listen, I'll be juss fine, I got sum people on the way down here wi' some meds

 

Alan: Wheres the nearest Ammunation from here? This place looks so diffrent

 

Jake: Dere's no Ammunation dow' here no more

 

Mark: Go to Seville Temple Blvd, Get sum' heat from Emmet n' Take as many Ballas out as you can, N'ill be in tha Santa Maria Motel, Room 4D

 

Mark hands a keycard to Jake as some Idaho's drive into the carpark and some Grove homies come over and tend to Mark

 

Alan: Alright, Lets go, We'll be seein you again soon Mark

 

Tony Alan & Jake walk back over to the Rodeo and they hop in and Tony starts it up and drives away towards Emmet's.

 

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Alright, Well theres the first chapter done and I'll probaly get #2 up pretty soon, I know It's sometimes a bitch to read new stories and especially ones where theres alot of history which you don't know of, So If you liked the first chapter atall, Stick around, This story will be around for a long long time

 

Leave feedback Positive or Negative please, And thank you. I see a whole bunch of views but no replies so I'm guessing not many people liked it biggrin.gif Ah well, Heres Chapter 2, I'll probaly post a Chapter every day untill about Chapter 10 just to get things moving a little bit, Enjoy.

 

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Chapter 2: Grove Street United

July 8TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [7.13pm]

Toni, Joey & Mickey have just landed in Las Venturas from Vice City, After exiting the plane Joey & Mickey were looking around while Toni went inside the Airport, He went over to a payphone and put a quarter in and picked up the reciever and dialed it

 

Toni: (Breathing heavy looking around while waiting for an answer) ...Come on...sh*t

 

Toni hangs the phone up and goes over to Joey & Mickey who are talking to some girls outside of the Sandwhich Bar

 

Toni: We've got a slight problem

 

Joey: What kind of problem Toni?

 

Toni: Well, There was no answer from The Casino, I guess we're gonna have to go down there un-announced

 

Joey: Alright, Hey while we're here maybe we should you know, Play the slots?

 

Toni: There will be plenty of time for that later Joey, Now come on, Lets get going

 

Toni takes a cigar out from his pocket and lights it up as Him, Joey & Mickey exit Las Venturas Airport and get into a taxi along the newly extended entrance to the Airport

 

Driver: Where to?

 

Toni: (Takes out a piece of paper with the address on it and hands it to the driver) Take us here

 

Driver: Caligula's Casino? You know people say that place is cursed

 

Toni: Yeah yeah, I've heard the stories now just drive us there

 

Driver: You got it pal

 

The driver pulls away from the Airport and starts driving to Caligula's Casino.

 

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July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [7.16pm]

Tony, Alan & Jake are cruising through Willowfield looking at the carnage that the city has been put under by the Re-rise of the Ballas, Alot of the stores have been looted, And ever since 2001 there has been no Ammunation's in the city, The nearest Ammunation was in Las Venturas. Los Santos was the most peaceful of the 3 States of San Andreas untill now. Tony, Alan & Jake pull into Seville Temple and go around the back of a garage and find a run down corner full of aiming dummies and dumpsters, With some car parts around the place, And the walls full of graffiti, Mostly Balla tags. Tony, Alan & Jake get out of the Rodeo

 

Jake: (Quietly shuts the back door and tries not to make too much noise as he talks) Ay, Emmet?...Anyone roun' here?

 

An old black man peeps out of a dumpster and notices 2 White guys in suits but 1 Black guy in a Green shirt

 

Emmet: Y..You Grove Street son?

 

Jake: (Looks over towards Emmet) Yea', Ay Emmet, You recognize me atall man?

 

Emmet: W..Well not really..No

 

Jake: Alright man, Lissen', We need ta get some guns

 

Emmet: Ballas raided the spot, They made off with almost ever'thing

 

Tony: sh*t, Well...What have you got left?

 

Emmet: Whatevers in here boys, Take what you nee'

 

Alan: I've got all that I need (Flashes the SMG in the direction of Emmet)

 

Tony & Jake walk over to the dumpster as Emmet climbs out and they start rummaging through the junk in the there

 

Tony: Man how old is all of this?

 

Emmet: Well suma' it is pretty new, But alot of it is 80's and maybe 70's

 

Jake: Aww sh*t, This will have ta do me then (Jake pulls out a rusty looking held together by gum 9MM)

 

Tony: Well lucky for you, Your a good shot, Because I think I'm gonna take (Tony pulls out a Tec9) this

 

Jake: Aww dayum'! How you get that!?

 

Tony: Dig a little deeper next time

 

Emmet: So what do you boys plan on doin' now then?

 

Alan: Take as many Ballas out as possible in a night

 

Emmet: Well, If it's any help to ya, I know a guy whose an ace shooter, Tell him Emmet sent ya (Emmet takes out a piece of paper with an Address on it and hands it to Jake) An' goodluck boys

 

Jake: Thanks

 

Tony, Alan & Jake get back into the Rodeo and look over their weapons as Tony sharply pulls away, Jake is looking over the Address on the paper and doesn't seem to recognize it since he was last here

 

Jake: Stop off at a garage n' get a map

 

Tony: Sure, Where we goin'?

 

Jake: Hollow Park.

 

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July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [7.23pm]

Tony, Alan & Jake have been driving around the Ganton area for a few miniutes seeing if theres any Grove Street boys around but they can't see any, They go over the bridge and a Gas station comes into view, But theres a Balla posse hanging around the spot

 

Jake: sh*t, Theres about 5 there

 

Tony: Should I try run em over?

 

Jake: Aight, Duck down tho'

 

Tony puts his foot on the gas pedal as Alan & Jake duck down and he picks up speed as the Ballas notice as it gets nearer to them and they start opening fire on the Rodeo as the Hood of the car begins to smoke

 

Tony: sh*t (Ducks down) The hoods smoking

 

Tony hears a loud bump on the front of the car as a Balla goes over the top of the Rodeo and lands on the pavement behind it as the other Ballas dive out the way, The car smashes through the door of the Gas station and rolls over through isle's of Soda & Snacks as the Rodeo catches fire, And the Ballas get up and begin shooting at it as it explodes and wipes 2 of the Ballas near it out

 

Balla: Shiiiit, Ain't no nigga survivin 'dat

 

A hail of bullets hits the remaining Ballas from behind a hedge across the street, As another hail of bullets hits them from behind, and Alan stands up from the hedge, While Tony is taking cover behind a Fire hydrant on the street corner

 

Alan: (Stops shooting) You seen Jake?

 

Tony: (Stops shooting) No, I thought he dived out with you

 

Jake climbs over a smashed wall from the Gas station with a cut over his eye as he walks over to Tony

 

Jake: Nex' time, Tell me when we gonna dive ou'

 

Tony walks over to Alan & Jake as they look over at the wreckage and they hear a siren in the distance

 

Alan: sh*t, How do we get a Map now?

 

Jake: (Reaches into his back pocket) Got one from inside (Takes the map out and hands it to Alan)

 

Alan: (Looks over the Map) Ah right here, Hollow Park, Formally Glen Park

Jake: sh*t, All tha' for that, I know where tha' is, Come on, S'time to Unite the Grove

 

Tony, Alan & Jake run round the corner and see a parked Dark Blue Sentinel and smash the window and get in and Tony hotwires it and speeds away with the alarm on the car going crazy.

 

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July 8TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [7.32pm]

The taxi just pulls up outside of Caligula's Casino which is having alot of work done to it, It was shut down for a long time because of a "Terrorist" attack in 1995, But it was bought by someone from Liberty City in 2001, And he decided to start fixing it up. Toni, Joey & Mickey get out of the Taxi and pay the driver and stand outside looking at workmen lifting up a new sign for the Casino inside of a crane.

 

Toni: Come on, Lets go inside, I'm sure he won't mind if he's out we wait around in the suite or the office

 

Joey: (Starts chuckling) Yeah, Maybe theres some broads up in here

 

Toni: (Sarcasticly) Yeah, Maybe

 

Mickey opens the door for Toni & Joey as they go inside and look around and see a board guiding workmen where to and where not to go, They see that theres an elevator to the left of the entrance

 

Toni: Right here (Hovers his finger over a point on the board) Here's the office, Lets go

 

Toni leads the way for Mickey & Joey to the elevator and they go in. Toni selects a number as the doors close but the elevator isn't moving

 

Mickey: I think theres uh..Some work being done to the elevator

 

Toni: What makes you say that?

 

Mickey: Well theres a sign here (Mickey points to a sign behind Toni which says It's out of order)

 

Toni: (Sighs) Alright, Lets find some stairs

 

Toni, Joey & Mickey exit the elevator and go back to the board and pinpoint out where a flight of stairs is to take them to the office of Caligula's Casino, After a long walk up the flight of stairs they reach the top floor and walk down the hall till they reach the last room on the right, A few workmen are coming out the door as Toni holds it open for them making sure it doesn't lock behind them

 

Workman: Thank you

 

Toni: Your welcome

 

Toni waits untill the Workmen leave and Joey & Mickey walk inside the office shortly followed by Toni, And they see that It's empty

 

Joey: Can I make myself comfortable?

 

Toni: I know what that means, And no

 

Joey: Your no fun Toni you know that? (Slaps Mickey on the shoulder) Lets go see If we can't find a lil' entertainment big guy, Lets leave Toni to his moody self

 

Toni: Hey, Don't get into trouble

 

Joey: I'm not a kid, I can take care of myself Toni

 

Joey & Mickey head out of the office as Toni sits down in the chair and puts his feet on the table and takes out a cigar from his pocket and lights it up and he begins looking through the photos on the desk and rummaging through the draws, After about 4 or 5 miniutes A man walks into the office and stops in his tracks like he just saw a ghost

 

Toni: Ah, You look good, How have you been Donald?

 

Donald: (Still in shock) W... (Shakes his head) Antonio! What are you doing here my old friend?

 

Toni: Funny you should ask...

 

Donald closes the door to the Office and walks over and sits down and starts talking with Toni.

 

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Thats the end of Chapter 2, Leave feedback & comments If you read it, I hope you enjoyed it and Chapter 3 should be on It's way tomorrow.

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Thanks for the reply dude, Good to know someone enjoyed the first 2 chapters biggrin.gif. Here's Chapter 3, I think their starting to get a little longer now, I usually have a slow start at things sometimes.

 

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Chapter 3: Ambush

July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [7.38pm]

Tony, Alan & Jake are still on their way to Hollow Park, Formally known as Glen Park. The alarm on the Sentinel finally wore out just as they approached Hollow Park, The bridge in Hollow Park had collapsed, And under the bridge lay many Grove Street boys, Most of whom are dead or badly injured

 

Tony: (Puts the handbrake on and sharply stops when he sees the wreck) What the

 

Jake: sh*t, Ballas hit this spot

 

They get out the car and run over looking through the wreckage as they find a homie whose not too Injured

 

Jake: (Lifting some concrete off his legs) Ay man, You OK?

 

Homie: Naw man, Can't feel ma legs homie

 

Tony: Don't worry, I'll get you to a hospital, Alan, Jake you 2 go on ahead and I'll take this guy to a Hospital

 

Tony removes any concrete near him out the way and picks him up and throws him over his shoulder and runs over to the car as a Majestic speeds up the hill with a couple of bikes far behind it and a Nebula pretty far behind the bikes, All of which has Ballas in them

 

Tony: sh*t, guys we've got company

 

Alan and Jake look over and see the cars and bikes coming up

 

Alan: Theres like 7 Ballas comin

 

Homie: Pu' me dow' man, I can shoot

 

Tony: No you stay low, Your in no condition to do anything

 

Tony puts the Grove Street member in the back of the car as the Majestic sharply pulls up and 2 Ballas get out and start opening fire on Alan and Jake as they duck down and take cover in the huge hole where a river once was

 

Homie: Well take 'dis a'least

 

The Grove Street member slowly sits up and reaches behind his back and takes out a Micro SMG and hands it to Tony

 

Tony: Alright Thanks, Now keep your head down

 

Tony shuts the door of the Sentinel and the Ballas see it and start shooting at Tony, Tony runs around the front of the car and takes cover as he takes out the Tec 9 & Micro SMG, Alan and Jake shoot out the first 2 Ballas as the Ballas on the Bikes speed past them shooting

 

Tony: (Shouting) Jake, Toss me that 9

 

Jake: (Shouting) Bu' thats all I got

 

Jake hears the Ballas on the bikes coming back as a Tec 9 lands on the grass near him

 

Tony: (Shouting) Take that

 

The Ballas see Tony on the way back as he runs around to the back of the car whilst a hail of bullets is trashing the Sentinel

 

Tony: (Looks round) "sh*t, The cars smoking already"

 

Tony leans out from the back and shoots out the front tires of the Ballas Bikes, One swerves out of control and crashes into the empty river as Alan and Jake shoot him before he has a chance to hit the ground, The other one re-gains control and speeds past Tony as he looks back and starts shooting at Tony and clips him in the shoulder and the bullet hits the back of the car as the car begins leaking oil heavily as Tony keeps shooting at the Balla untill he speeds around the corner

 

Tony: (Drops the Micro SMG and clamps his shoulder) "f*ck!" (Shouting) I got hit in the shoulder

 

Alan and Jake run over as they see the Nebula speed around the corner doing a drive-by as it turns away but only hits the car

 

Alan: (Sees the leaking oil) sh*t!, We've gotta get that Grove member outta that car right now

 

Jake: I got him

 

Jake opens the door and takes him out as the Nebula swerves back around and starts coming up the hill as the 2 Ballas are leaning out the windows shooting at them and the car

 

Alan: (Shooting at the car) We gotta move, come on

 

Tony and Alan run over to the empty river and dive into the soil along with Jake holding the Grove member as they hear an explosion and they look up and see the Sentinel has exploded and the Nebula has flipped over and the Ballas are getting out

 

Alan: (Runs up the river) Nows our chance!

 

Tony and Alan run up the hard soil and start shooting at the Ballas as the car explodes and knocks Tony and Alan back into the empty river

 

Jake: You guys OK?

 

Alan: (Sits up) Yeah

 

Tony: (Sits up) How do we get this guy to the hospital now?, Is he concious?

 

Jake: (Looks him over) Naw'

 

They all stand up and walk out of the riverbed and look around and see a parked Rancher in a drive way across the street

 

Tony: Alright, I'll do it

 

Tony runs back down the riverbed and runs up the other side and runs across the road and knocks on the door of the house

 

Tony: I need to borrow this car, I'll bring it back

 

Tony hears a man yell from inside

 

Man: J..Just take it, Leave us alone

 

Tony jumps off the porch and smashes the window of the Rancher and climbs in and hotwires it as he looks in the rear-view mirror and sees the Balla Bike speeding up the hill

 

Tony: "sh*t!" (Puts it into reverse and pulls out the drive way)

 

Tony speeds across the grass and sees the Ballas Bike notice people in the empty river as the Ballas Bike drives down and starts shooting at Alan and Jake who are shooting back, and Tony speeds down the soil and rams into the side of the bike and knocks the Balla off and runs him over as he goes under the wheel

 

Tony: (Opens the door) Get him in quick

 

Jake picks up the Grove member and puts him in the car as Tony speeds away

 

Tony: "Now I've gotta find a hospital for the both of us" (Looks at the shoulder wound as It starts bleeding more).

 

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July 8TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [7.46pm]

Toni and Donald are laughing and talking about old times in Donalds office of Caligula's Casino as they both finish they're glass of shandy, Donald gets up and refills his glass

 

Donald: Another? (Tips the bottle in Toni's direction)

 

Toni: (Laughing) Nah, nah...Thats it for me

 

Donald: So you wan't to expand down to Las Venturas and put your 2 cents into my Casino huh?

 

Toni: Thats about the jist of it..Yeah

 

Donald: I see no problem with that my friend, Aslong as I may still change the name of this Casino to 'Love's Casino'

 

Toni: (Laughing) Sure Donald, I see no harm in that

 

Donald: Well then Antonio, I believe a toast is in hand (Picks up a bottle of wine) Shall we?

 

Toni: I usually don't but...Alright, this is a celebration afterall

 

Donald: (Laughing) Thats more like it

 

Toni: (Takes out a cigar and lights it) Heck, Maybe when all of this calms down a little bit you can come back to Vice with us for a while

 

Donald: (Stares out the window drinking his wine) I don't think that will be possible Toni

 

Toni: What? Whys that?

 

Donald: Too many bad memories down there

 

Toni: Should I ask what?

 

Donald: I'd rather If you didn't

 

Toni's cell phone begins to ring as he gets up off of Donald's chair and takes it out of his pocket and looks at the Caller ID

 

Toni: Ah this is Joey now, I'll tell him the good news

 

Donald: Shame about Salvatore...

 

Toni: Yeah I know (Answers the phone) Hey Joey, Joey?...What?...Turn on Channel 2? (Puts his hand over the phone and looks at Donald) Donald you got a TV in here?

 

Donald: (Walks over to the table and presses a button and the wall across the room slides open) Of course

 

Toni: Put Channel 2 on

 

Donald picks up a remote and presses it and sits down in his chair as Toni sits on the table and a news report is on the Television

 

Reporter: Los Santos is in ruins tonight, As a local gang has taken over the city. Many residents are fleeing the city in fear of they're personal well-being. Just moments ago, Amatuer footage was sent to us by a man with a Camera outside of his window in Hollow Park, Where it seems a rival gang was under attack, And the bridge overpassing the old river collapsed on them. It is not known as to how many survived, Many were on the bridge at the time and some were underneath it. The video footage cuts off just as the gang flee the spot.

 

Toni: For the love of christ, I told Joey this place was quiet

 

Toni hears a whole bunch of yelling on the other end of the phone

 

Toni: Oh yeah, Joey (Puts the phone to his ear) Yes Joey, I know Joey, I can see it...Listen don't worry about it, Come back to the Casino...Alright (Hangs the phone up)

 

Donald: Hmm this is no good, This is no good atall

 

Toni: Whats the matter?

 

Donald: I have business to conduct down there tomorrow (Puts his empty glass on the table) Very, very important business....... Toni, Can I ask of you a favor?

 

Toni: I'm done doing small jobs for people Donald. I'm fat, rich and retired

 

Donald: (Gets on his knees) Antonio, Please?

 

Toni: (Sighs) It depends. What do I have to do?

 

Donald: Be my personal bodyguard, Make sure I don't get caught up in some (Waving his hands around in the air) Thug level street car jacking in the ghetto parts of Los Santos (Clenches his hands together) Please?

 

Toni: Alright, Just get up, You look like a fool

 

Donald: (Stands up) Thank you Antonio (Sits down in his chair) It'll be just like old times

 

Toni: Yeah, Fantastic...

 

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July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [7.46pm]

Tony sped through Idlewood and sharply braked outside of Jefferson County Central Hospital and got out the car and ran inside

 

Tony: I need help, My friend in the car is badly hurt and I've been shot

 

The waiting room of the hospital is filled with seriously injured people and theres only 1 nurse on the ground floor

 

Nurse: (Blows the hair out of her face and is breathing heavy) Take a seat sir

 

Tony goes and sits down next to some guy with a medicated eye-patch on while hes holding a bag of ice against his head and watches the Nurse make a phonecall at the front desk and shortly after a couple of medics go outside and come back in with the Grove member on a stretcher

 

Tony: (Gets up) Hey where are you takin him?

 

Nurse: We're taking him in sir, Can I get you to fill out these forms for the both of you?

 

Tony: (Takes the forms and a pen) Yeah I guess...

 

Tony looks over the forms and sees alot of personal detail questions

 

Tony: (Looking it up and down) "I don't even know his name let alone anymore of this sh*t"

 

Tony looks at the guy beside him and the guy looks back at him

 

Tony: .....How you doin?

 

Guy: I've been better

 

Tony: Oh yeah?.......

 

Tony turns his attentions back to the medical forms and starts writing his one out.

 

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July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [7.46pm]

Jake: sh*t, where the f*cks this nigga at?

 

Jake continues banging on a door just outside of Hollow Park but no one is answering

 

Alan: Are you certain this is the Address Emmet gave you?

 

Jake: (Stops knocking and looks at Alan) Do I look like a idiot?

 

Alan: (Stares at Jake for a second then starts knocking on the door) Hey, Open up, Emmet sent us, Come on

 

Jake: sh*t, Maybe 'e dead, Wi' the others

 

Alan: Alright where do we go now, Hospital?

 

Jake: Ye'...I guess

 

Alan and Jake walk away from the porch as the door slowly begins to open and a young girl peeks her head around

 

Alan: (Looking around) Can't see any cars around

 

Jake: We walkin huh?

 

Alan: Yup

 

The girl watches Alan and Jake as they walk away.

 

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July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [8.09pm]

Alan and Jake walk through the hospital doors and see Tony filling out some forms with a bandage wrapped around his shoulder

 

Jake: Ay Tone'

 

Tony: (Looks up) Hey, Did you go to the house Emmet told you to go to?

Alan: (Sits down) Yeah but no one answered

 

Jake: Ay man, can I ha' this seat?

 

Guy: Get outta here kid

 

Jake: Punk ass.... (Sits down on the floor by Tony)

 

The nurse comes over

 

Nurse: Have you finished the forms for your friend yet?

 

Tony: Uh...Yeah (Hands the clipboard to the nurse)

 

Nurse: (Looking it over) Ok your friends in a stable condition, You can go and see him now

 

Tony: Thanks

 

Tony, Alan & Jake get up and walk down the hall and see alot of Injured people as they're peeking in rooms looking for the Grove Street member

 

Jake: Ay, I foun' him

 

Tony and Alan walk over to Jake and go into the room and see the Grove Street member hooked up to an I.V and sitting up in the bed looking pretty beat up and tired, The room is poorly lit, and the window is boarded up

 

Homie: Ay guys...

 

Jake: Ay dude, How you doin man

 

Homie: Righ' now....I'm tire', Real tire'...bu' tomorro' I'll be goo'

 

Jake: Aiight, You take it easy for now then man

 

Alan: Come on, We need to go out and take down as many Ballas as possible, And meet up with Mark down at Santa Maria

 

Homie: Mark Mansell?

 

Jake: Ye'

 

Homie: He basicly brun' tha Grove back roun' wiv' Sweet n' CJ tonigh'

 

Tony: CJ!?...You know where he is?

 

Homie: Nawh bro, I ain't see' him since tha bridge collaps't

 

Jake: Ay man, Whats your name?

 

Homie: Names Barry, Barry Thorne, but ma frien's call me Big Bear

 

Jake: Aiight Big Bear, We'll come check on ya tomorro'

 

Tony, Alan & Jake head out the hospital room as Big Bear closes his eyes and tries to get some rest

 

Alan: We need to find CJ, And we need to find out where the Ballas are hanging out at, Where they're nesting at, And gather as many Grove Street members together as possible, and call an Ambush on them

 

Jake: Well den', Lets get that Info'mation

 

Tony, Alan & Jake head out of the hospital and see an Ambulance pull into the carpark as some medics take a man out the back and open the stretchers wheels and cart him up the ramp into the hospital

 

Tony: Hey Jake, You still got that Tec 9?

 

Jake: (Takes the Tec 9 out his trousers) Ye'

 

Tony: You and Alan hop into the back of the Ambulance, I'll drive

 

Tony hops into the front of the Ambulance as Alan and Jake climb up into the back and close the doors

 

Tony: (Starts the Ambulance up and looks in the mirror) Open the doors back up

 

Jake: Huh?, Why?

 

Tony: (Laughing) We're gonna do some 'drive-bys'

 

Tony pulls the Ambulance out of the parking lot as some paramedics run out of the building and start chasing after it but stop after a few feet as the Ambulance picks up speed.

 

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Thats the end of Chapter 3. I might get Chapter 4 up tomorrow or Monday or latest, Tuesday. Enjoy.

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Very nice ones, I really enjoyed reading them. Looking forward to next chapter smile.gif

 

Would be nice to see this story in SA too biggrin.gif

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Cool, Thank you for enjoying the story so far, I'm glad you like it colgate.gif

 

Here's Chapter 4

 

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Chapter 4: The Santa Maria Massacre

July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [9.17pm]

Mark and some Grove Street OG's booked seperate rooms in the Santa Maria Beach Motel a little while ago. Mark's been resting up in bed and he's still pretty injured from an attack earlier in the night by Ballas. He hears loud banging on his room door

 

Mark: (Stops rubbing gauze on his wounds) ...Who ther'?

 

The knocking gets louder as Mark cautiously goes over to the door and looks through the peephole

 

Mark: Aw' sh--

 

The top half of the door is knocked down as Mark gets knocked back onto the bed, 2 Ballas push the broken wood out of the way and start stepping over the broken bottom half of the door

 

Mark: (Picks up the bottle of gauze) You pick't the wrong room foo's

 

The Ballas smash through the remains of the door as Mark throws the bottle of Gauze at ones face and it shatters over his forehead, He screams in pain as the Gauze drips into his eyes and he stumbles backwards and falls over the remaining door pieces into the hallway where a bunch of Grove OG's are in a shootout war with a group of Ballas which have raided in on the spot

 

Balla: Yo' gon' pay for 'dat Grove Bitch

 

The Balla aims a Tec 9 at Mark's head as a Grove OG in a zipped up hooded jacket shoots him in the back of the head from behind

 

Grove OG: You goo'?

 

Mark: Ye', Thanks Sweet

 

Sweet: Dun' even mention it, Come on

 

Sweet & Mark make their way through the hallway where a bunch of dead Ballas and Grove boys lay dead, They exit the Motel and see cars filled with Ballas outside, Along with Ballas sitting on the hoods of the cars

 

Balla: Gro' street is dead

 

The Balla cocks his Tec9 and aims it at Sweet's head

 

Balla: Drop da' piece

 

Sweet drops his 9MM

 

Balla: Kick it her'

 

Sweet kicks it over to the Balla and he firmly keeps the gun aimed at Sweet as another Balla bends down and picks it up

 

Balla: You rollin' wi' sum' 9's? (Laughs) Look a' dis...It's comple' sh*t nigga

 

The Ballas start laughing as sweat drops down the face of Mark

 

Sweet: Don' worry.

 

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July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [8.42pm]

Tony's been driving around the Idlewood & Ganton areas for the past 30 miniutes while Jake & Alan shoot out the back of the Ambulance at any Ballas they come across. They've killed about 14 Ballas so far.

 

Tony: (Yelling over the sound of the siren) See any Ballas?

 

Jake: (Yelling) Naw', Head down to Market

 

Tony: (Yelling) Alright

 

Tony does a 180 and starts driving through Glen Park and sees a whole bunch of Police and Paramedics dead, Along with alot of Police cars tipped over, Torched, and smoking

 

Tony: (Looking around) "What the hell?" (Yelling) Hey, You see this?

 

Alan: (Yelling) See what?

 

Tony: (Yelling) Look round the side

 

Alan & Jake poke they're heads around the sides of the Ambulance doors and see all the wreckage

 

Jake: sh*t! (Yelling) Drive! Drive! Drive!

 

Tony: (Looks in his mirror and sees 3 Balla cars behind the Ambulance) "f*ck" (Yelling) Try and take all of em out

 

Jake: (Yelling) We low on ammo

 

Tony: (Yelling) Here take this

 

Tony grabs the Micro SMG from the passenger seat and opens up the slide door compartment and shoves it through and Jake leans back and picks it up while Alan sheilds him by closing the door

 

Jake: (Picks it up and cocks it) Aiight, Now I'm straight

 

Alan: You ready?

 

Jake: Ready

 

Alan kicks the back door open as Jake starts fireing at the Ballas leaning out the windows shooting at them and hits all of them as they fall out the windows and graze along the floor. The cars start ramming into the back of the Ambulance and knocking Alan off balance

 

Alan: sh*t, I'm gonna fall!

 

Alan falls out the back of the Ambulance and lands on the front of the Ballas car and grabs ahold of the sides of the bonnet as the car starts swerving from side to side to get him off

 

Alan: (Looks behind at Jake and yells) Shoot the window out

 

Jake: (Tries to fire) sh*t's jammed! (Keeps trying to fire)

 

Alan: (Yelling) Come on Jake!

 

Jake: (Trying to un-jam it) sh*t!

 

Tony: (Yelling) Whats going on back there?

 

Jake: (Yelling) Tha' piece is jammed!

 

Tony: (Yelling) Take this back then

 

Tony slides the haggard old 9MM through the compartment and it lands on the floor, Jake crawls over and picks it up and turns around and cocks it, and sees Alan is still hanging onto the car as the Balla driving is leaning out the window trying to ungrip his hand

 

Jake: (Yelling) Let ya righ' hand go!

 

Alan releases the grip of his right hand and Jake shoots the Ballas arm as the car swerves into a lamp post, The other Balla cars speed off past the Ambulance as Tony slows it down to a halt

 

Jake: (Jumps out the back of the Ambulance once it stops) Ay...Alan? You OK man?

 

Alan stands up and shakes the glass from his jacket off onto the floor and opens the car door to the Ballas car

 

Alan: (Grabs the Balla) Where the f*ck are all of you scum nestling at?

 

Balla: (Spits a bloody tooth into Alan's face) f*ck you cracka'

 

Alan grabs the guys head and slams it into the broken window of the car as shareds of glass go into his face

 

Balla: (Screaming in pain) Ah, Ah, Alrigh' my homies are at Santa Maria

 

Jake: (Yelling) Oh sh*t!, Tony start up!

 

Tony starts the Ambulance up as Jake runs back over and jumps into the back, Alan picks up a shard of glass and cuts the Balla's throat and runs back over to the Ambulance and gets in

 

Alan: (Yelling) The Balla's are in Santa Maria, Mark's down there with some Grove boys so we'd better hurry.

 

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July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [8.58pm]

After getting the Information from the Balla that they were at Santa Maria, Tony's been speeding through the streets of Los Santos and is nearing Santa Maria when they see some Grove Street members hiding behind some cars shooting at Ballas on the opposite side behind cars

 

Tony: (Brakes sharply) We gotta help them

 

Alan: We've got to get to Mark

 

Jake: Naw' Tony's righ' (Cocks the haggard 9MM) Less' go

 

Tony gets out the front of the Ambulance while Alan & Jake hop out the back. Tony's un-armed as he slowly and quietly sneaks behind Alan & Jake who have a Micro SMG and 9MM as they reach the Grove OG's shooting at the Ballas

 

Jake: (Crouches down by a Grove member) Ay man, You guys nee' help?

 

Grove Member: Ye' We losin homie

 

Tony: You got a piece?

 

Grove Member: Me? Nawh' (Continues fireing at the Ballas in the distance then looks back at Tony) Go try Sweet over 'dere

 

Tony crawls on the floor with his elbows over to some Grove Members that have been shot

 

Tony: You guys OK?

 

Grove Member: Naw' I'm done fo'

 

Tony: Yeah your right... Gimme that (Grabs the Tec9 off his bloody lap)

 

Sweet: You ain' Grove whiteboy

 

Tony: Relax, I'm here to help

 

Sweet: We don' need yo help cracka'. Get tha' f*ck outta her'

 

Tony: I'm a friend of Mark Mansell's

 

Sweet continues opening fire on the Ballas on the other side of the street along with Tony and take the remaining ones out

 

Sweet: Yo bustin' was aiight...Fo' a white boy

 

Tony: (Sits down by the wheel of a car) Thanks

 

Alan and Jake come over to Tony and Sweet as all the other Grove Members lay dead on the sidewalk outside of the Pay 'N' Spray

 

Sweet: sh*t, Here come anotha' load, Ge' ready

 

More Balla cars approach the spot as they all start shooting at them, One of the cars blows up as the remaining three park behind the dead Ballas and get out the car and start opening fire back as 2 Ballas get shot dead right away by Alan

 

Sweet: (Still shooting) How you know Mark?

 

Tony: (Reloading clip) Is now the time?

 

Sweet: (Takes out 2 Balla's and starts reloading) Yeah...Now's thuh' time

 

Tony: (Begins opening fire again) I met him briefly in San Andreas in 1995, Then we became friends in 1996

 

Sweet: (Begins shooting again) Oh, Now I kno 'xactly who yo' are. You Alan

 

Tony: (Reloading) I'm Tony. Alan's the other one

 

Sweet: (Hits another 2 Balla's) Aiight, Sorry I was such a asshole befo'

 

Tony: Don't even sweat it

 

Tony takes out the last Balla and throws the dead clip on the sidewalk as Sweet stands up

 

Sweet: We gotta get to San'a Maria Motel, The homies there will be un'er attack any miniute now

 

Jake: We outta guns, All I got is dis' (Waves the haggard 9MM towards Sweet)

 

Sweet: Aiight look, I'll take dat'. You go get heated, We got'a storage garage North, Can't miss it...S'green

 

Jake hands the 9MM to Sweet as Sweet gets into his Greenwood which is smoking at the bonnet and drives off towards the Motel at the beach while Tony, Alan & Jake get back into the Ambulance and speed off towards the Grove Storage Garage.

 

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July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [9.08pm]

Tony's slowly driving around North of the spot they were at earlier looking for the storage garage

 

Tony: (Looks up ahead) I can see it

 

Tony picks up his speed and climbs the small hill and sees a couple of Grove Street boys dead and Ballas are taking the crates of guns out of the Storage Garage

 

Tony: sh*t!, Balla's have hit the spot...

 

Tony parks the Ambulance across the street of the Storage Garage and gets out quietly and sneaks around to the side of the Garage

 

Alan: sh*t, What's he doin?

 

A Balla loads a crate of guns into the trunk of his car and turns around and goes back inside of the Garage as Tony sneaks over to the trunk of the car and opens it up and picks up the crate of guns and sneaks back over to the Ambulance and throws it into the back

 

Jake: (Opens the crate) Lets see what we got her'

 

Tony: (Hops into the back of the Ambulance and closes the doors) What'd we score?

 

Jake: Ho-lee sh*t

 

Jake moves some small guns aside and reaches into the bottom of the crate and picks up a Combat Shotgun

 

Jake: Lets try this badboy out

 

Alan: What the f*ck do you mean 'try it out'?

 

Jake boots the doors of the Ambulance open as the Ballas hear it and come out of the Garage

 

Balla: Thuh f*cks 'dis?

 

Jake jumps out the back of the Ambulance and starts pumping rounds into the Ballas coming out of the Garage

 

Jake: (Tries to fire and it won't) sh*t, only 7 roun's!?

 

The Balla's start running at Jake who throws the Shotgun at them and hits one in the face as Tony and Alan jump out the back of the Ambulance holding AK-47's and start shooting the Ballas off like flies one by one untill none are left

 

Tony: Get in, Grab a 47, And lets go

 

Jake and Alan hop back into the Ambulance and close the door as Tony gets into the front and speeds up the hill and does a 180 and comes back down.

 

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July 8TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [9.17pm]

Tony's sped down through Santa Maria and made it down to the beach where a few dead Balla's are laying face down in the sand as Tony stops in the parking lot and they get out the Ambulance and stealthully make they're way to the back of the Motel and look inside and see a whole bunch of Ballas

 

Tony: (Climbs through the window and whispers out to Alan and Jake) Be quiet, Theres about 5 Ballas down the hall

 

Alan and Jake carefully climb through the window and make their way down the Motel looking in and out of open rooms and see Mark & Sweet come out of a room

 

Jake: (Yells) A--

 

Tony grabs Jake's mouth

 

Tony: The Balla's will hear and they'll turn around come back and kill Mark 'n Sweet

 

Tony releases his grip and Jake rubs his mouth

 

Tony: (Creeps down the hallway and looks round the corner and see some Grove OG's fireing at Balla's as they all eventually die) Damn, They put up a hell of a fight, Come on

 

Tony leads infront of Alan and Jake who are close behind as they make their way round some more hallways and see a bunch of dead Grove boys and Balla's and make it to the entrance of the Motel and see Mark and Sweet being held up by a whole bunch of Ballas

 

Tony: (Whispering) sh*t...We're gonna have to storm em, You ready?

 

Jake: Ye'

 

Alan: Yeah

 

Tony, Alan & Jake come out from behind the doors

 

Sweet: Don' worry

 

A hail of bullets pass by Mark and Sweet as Mark ducks down and Sweet begins laughing and ducks down while the Balla standing infront of Sweet gets shot in the head along with all the other Balla's around the spot

 

Sweet: (Stands up) I saw you tailin us, Yo' bad at stealth

 

Jake: Come on, Lets get outta her' befo' Five-o show

 

Sweet: (Looks over at his Greenwood) Aw, Mother f*ckers torched my baby!

 

Tony: Come round back, We got an Ambulance we can all fit into

 

Sweet: Aiight. We gonna go up to Vinewood

 

Alan: Whats up there?

 

Sweet: A hous'. Rest.

 

They make their way to the parking lot and get into the Ambulance

 

Sweet: I'll drive, Look's like Mark her's gon' be sick (Starts Laughing)

 

Sweet gets into the front of the Ambulance and Tony & Alan help Mark into the back of the Ambulance

 

Tony: Theres probaly some sh*t to treat those wounds back here

 

Mark: Ay guys...Thanks, This ain' thuh' firs' time you saved my ass

 

Jake: Dun' mention it, Lets go

 

Sweet pulls away and starts driving off towards Vinewood

 

Sweet: Tonight we re-group. I'ma call down sum' friends, We re-group all Grove boys n' tomorrow we storm the Balla's outta Los Santos once 'n fo' all

 

Sirens are heard in the distance as the Ambulance speeds away, As cops are arriving at Santa Maria beach.

 

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Thats the end of Chapter 4, Hope you enjoyed reading it and Chapter 5 will be coming some time soon, Possibly Tomorrow.

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Thanks for the replies guys. I was going to write a little more in this chapter but If I did then It'd be way too long so I decided to stop where I did, Not a whole lot of action in this Chapter, It's mainly just setting up for the next Chapter and future Chapters after. Enjoy!

 

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Chapter 5: Satoshi Zoo

July 8TH 2002: Liberty City, America [5.14pm]

Waka-gashira of the Yakuza, Satoshi Zoo, has called a meeting at his Cousin's Casino, Now under the name of Satoshi's Casino. Yakuza Stingers have just come out of Newport and into Torrington as they park outside of the Casino and go inside. The Yakuza members go through the lobby and into the elevator and reach the top floor, Where they go into Satoshi's office, Where they see Satoshi sitting at the head of the desk along with Claude Speed sitting on the other end of the desk. The room is covered with lavender and red, The curtains are slightly closed because It's still sunny outside. Satoshi waves for the Yakuza members to sit down and they do. Satoshi is wearing a white blazer jacket and white pants with a red buttoned shirt without a tie. All of the Yakuza members are dressed in Black blazer outfits with red shirts, and Claude is in his usual outfit.

 

Satoshi: (Waves more Yakuza members to come in and sit down) Ok. Gentlemen it has come to my attention that Don Joey Leone is in San Andreas somewhere, Possibly in hiding. Tomorrow, Everyone pack they're bags, We're going to find and kill him, Putting an end to The Leone's once and for all.

 

The Yakuza members stand up as does Satoshi and they bow and leave the office

 

Satoshi: (Turns and faces Claude who stands up) Claude-san. Do you wish to go with us tomorrow?

 

Claude: (Nods)

 

Satoshi: (Clenches his fist) The Leone's will curse the day they were born

 

Claude bows to Satoshi and leaves his office.

 

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July 9TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [7.32am]

Last night Sweet drove everyone back to the Mansion in Vinewood, Which once belonged to Madd Dogg, Now owned by his brother Carl. Sweet and Jake helped take care of Mark's gunshot wound while Tony and Alan pretty much fell asleep on the floor in the lounge area the moment they got back

 

Sweet: (Opens the curtains in the Lounge) C'mon, Time tuh' ged'up

 

Alan: (Rubbing his eyes) ...Time is it?

 

Sweet: S'time, To go deal with this Balla pro'lem once 'n for all

 

Sweet charges out the room while Tony and Alan sit up and start rubbing their eyes

 

Sweet: (Picks up the phone and dials it) Ay bro. S'me...Yeah I got 'em her' wi' me now...Aiight (Hangs up and charges back into the room) C'mon, We meetin CJ dow' in the Grove, He got some Grove OG's wi' him and we gonna hit Santa Maria right quick

 

Jake: (Walks in putting his shirt on) I'ma go grab sum' eats

 

Sweet: No you ain't nigguh - We goin now, C'mon

 

Sweet leads the way out while Tony and Alan are slowly following and yawning, They get into a Greenwood and pull away

 

Tony: I thought your car got wrecked last night

 

Sweet: I got mo' than one fool

 

Tony: Alright, Relax, You got my 47?

 

Sweet: Ye'...S'in the trunk, We'll pop it when we get to tha Grove

 

Alan: Hows Mark doin?

 

Jake: He's goo'

 

Tony: Oh sh*t that reminds me!, last night we helped some guy called Big Bear to the Hospital

 

Sweet: Big Bear!?, He aiight?

 

Tony: Yeah, Just hit up pretty bad

 

Sweet: Aiight we'll swing by there later see how he doin

 

Sweet arrived at Grove Street and saw a bunch of Grove OG's sitting on the sidewalk outside of his house, Along with CJ talking on his cell phone

 

Sweet: (Rolls down the window) Ever'one heated?

 

Grove OG's: Ye'

 

Sweet: (Notices Carl talking on the cell phone) Carl!, Get over here ya idiot

 

CJ: (Walks over and leans down) Ay Tony, Alan, Jake, Bin' a while (Slaps hands with each of them) You ready Sweet?

 

Sweet: Me?, Am I ready?, Nigguh f*ck you yappin away on yo' cell phone, Get in yo car an' follow us

 

CJ: Aiight cool (Turns around and waves some Grove OG's over and they get into a dark green low rider outside of CJ's house)

 

Sweet: Aiight, Get yo K's

 

Tony, Alan & Jake get out the car and Sweet pops the trunk open and they grab they're AK47's and a bunch of clips and hop back into the car

 

Sweet: Aiight, Less' roll

 

Sweet pulls away and CJ starts to follow while the remaining Grove OG's go back inside of Sweet's house.

 

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July 9TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [7.35am]

Donald Love's private plane from Las Venturas has just landed in Los Santos International Airport. Toni Cipriani steps out of the plane and looks around for a bit then starts to walk down the steel steps, Donald cautiously comes out and looks nervous and walks down the steps.

 

Donald: This place smells awfull. It reminds me of that distinct fragrence only a dead fish left untouched for 72 hours could provide

 

Toni: (Takes out a cigar) Where do we go from here then Donald?

 

Donald: We need to go and meet up with an old oriental friend of mine. It's at this address in a place called Las Colinas (Hands Toni a piece of paper)

 

Toni: We got a vehicle?

 

Donald: I had someone park a Limousine in my private hanger (Starts Laughing) Although I doubt I'll ever come back to this retched place

 

Donald leads Toni over to the Hanger and opens the large metal doors and theres a Limo inside of it, Toni gets into the front and Donald gets into the back and drives away

 

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July 9TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [8.03am]

Sweet pulls up just outside of the Santa Maria beach and sees a whole bunch of cops on the spot, Talking to surfers and pedestrians

 

Tony: I don't think It's a good idea to do anything with dozens of cops around

 

Sweet: Pssh, Local police ain't got sh*t on Grove Stree'

 

Sweet gets out of his Greenwood and slams the door and walks over to a police officer who has his back turned and sticks a Tec9 against the back of the cops head

 

Sweet: Scream an' you dea' partner

 

Officer: (Sticks his hands up) What do you want?

 

Sweet: (Looks him over) I wan't yo draws nigga

 

Sweet bashes him over the head with the blunt bottom of the Tec9 as the Officer falls over, Sweet drags him behind a wall and takes his Uniform off and puts it on and comes back over to the car

 

Sweet: (Throws the Tec9 into the car) I'ma get sum' info'mation off thees' bitches, You cruise roun' lookin for any Balla's

 

Tony: (Climbs into the drivers seat and pulls away) Alright

 

Sweet watches the car drive away into the distance along with CJ's low rider and he goes over to the crime scene and starts talking with cops

 

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July 9TH 2002: San Fierro, San Andreas [8.10am]

The Yakuza arrived in San Fierro very early in the morning and have been looking around for any Information on which state Joey Leone may be in, And have found nothing of any use yet. Satoshi Zoo has just arrived in San Fierro in his private helicopter along with Claude Speed and some very high powered Yakuza members, Of which Include his 3 Cousins; Takeshi Zoo, Ichigo Zoo and Jonny Zoo. A Yakuza Stinger approaches the Airport where Satoshi has just landed and 2 Yakuza members get out and wait for Satoshi to exit the chopper

 

Satoshi: (Steps out of the helicopter) Have you found the where abouts of Joey Leone yet?

 

Yakuza Member: (Bows) Sorry master. We have been unable to find anything relating to The Leone's in San Fierro

 

Satoshi: I'm entrusting you to lead a dozen men down to Los Santos. See If you can find anything out down there, And be careful - That place is in some petty street thug war, Don't get caught up in anything that will draw attention to us

 

Yakuza Member: Yes master (Bows)

 

The Yakuza members get back into the Stinger and drive away as Satoshi gets back into the helicopter and he makes a phonecall

 

Satoshi: Takeshi, Take us to Las Venturas

 

Takeshi: Yes boss

 

The helicopter picks up height as Satoshi looks down and sees the Yakuza Stingers heading towards the Freeway

 

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July 9TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [8.32am]

Toni has been driving the Limo through Los Santos trying to evade any form of physical contact with any street violence along the way. They finally arrive at a big house in Las Colinas and Toni parks outside

 

Donald: I wasn't being totally honest with you Toni. This isn't exactly a business trip

 

Toni: What do you mean Donald?

 

Donald: Well, I mean, I...

 

Toni: Come on, Out with it

 

Donald: An old friend of mine wronged me back in Liberty City. He found out that I paid off a Hitman to begin a gang war between The Yakuza and The Cartel. He placed a hit on my head and I fled the city, He threatened to tell The Yakuza what had happened but I held a nasty little secret about him myself, And with me in hiding, He didn't dare touch the subject.

 

Toni: And thats this guy in here right?

 

Donald: Well..Yes, We're going to how do you Mafia Gorilla's say it?...'Rub him out, Silence him, Make him sleep with the fis'--

 

Toni: Hold on, We?

 

Donald: Well mostly you

 

Toni: Donald...

 

Donald: I can pay you 100,000 dollars If you do this for me Antonio

 

Toni: (Sighs) I need a piece

 

Donald: A piece of what?

 

Toni: A weapon you moron

 

Donald: Oh, open the trunk and take your pick, and Thank you

 

Toni steps out the Limo and goes around the back and opens up the trunk and sees a wide range of weapons and picks up a Shotgun

 

Toni: (Slams the trunk shut) And It's just him in here right?

 

Donald: (Climbs through the window into the drivers seat) I should think so

 

Donald starts driving away

 

Toni: Hey!

 

Donald: The best of luck Antonio! See you back in Las Venturas!

 

Toni: (Watches the limo drive away in the distance) Goddamnit

 

Toni looks at the huge house infront of him and climbs up the front steps and looks through the windows and sees Nobody around the place and goes around the back and sees an open window and climbs through it and starts sneaking around the house as he hears a voice

 

Voice: So'one, Jus' make big mistake

 

A bunch of loud footsteps are heard running around upstairs and coming downstairs

 

Toni: Ah crap (Cocks the shotgun).

 

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July 9TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [8.32am]

Tony has been cruising through the Santa Maria area looking for Ballas for half an hour and hasn't seen anyone or anything and stops back off at the beach and waits for Sweet to come out, CJ pulls up behind Tony and Sweet comes out of the Motel eating a donut and drinking a cup of coffee

 

Tony: You take this cop thing seriously huh?

 

Sweet: (Throws the donut and coffee on the floor) I foun' out where The Balla's are hidin, They ain't in Santa Maria, They all in Saints Boulevard. Lets go take these foo's out, Moo' over, I'm drivin

 

Tony moves over and Sweet gets in and drives away with CJ following towards Saints Boulevard.

 

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July 9TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [9.48am]

Satoshi's helicopter has just passed over the strip of Las Venturas as Takeshi lands on top of a Casino

 

Satoshi: Triad scum once owned this Casino. Now It's under the Influence of a close personal friend of mine, His name is Sado-kun. Lets go

 

Satoshi gets out of the chopper along with Claude and his cousins and make they're way to the roof door and reach an elevator and go down to the ground floor, They pass through the people gambling and go over to an Office and Satoshi knocks on the door

 

Satoshi: Sado-kun, It's Satoshi Zoo, I called you earlier old friend

 

A man opens the door and bows to Satoshi

 

Sado-kun: Please come in Satoshi, Have a seat. I doubt you'll be here for very long because I have Important and crucial news

 

Satoshi: (Sits down) Go on

 

Sado-kun: Caligula's Casino is changing It's name (Sits down in his chair) It's changing It's name to Love's Casino. I did my homework and found out that a Donald Love purchased it. Donald Love has ties or once had ties with the Mafia, and Joey Leone is there right now, Completly un-armed, And bodyguardless

 

Satoshi: (Stands up and bows) Thank you old friend, I shall not forget this

 

Satoshi leaves the office while his 3 cousins follow suit and Claude stares at Sado-kun for a moment, Then follows Satoshi out of the Casino.

 

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Thats the end of Chapter 5, A little messy but It'll even out come next Chapter where everything kind of falls into place, It'll be up tomorrow I should hope lol.gif

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Thanks for taking Interest in my Fan Fic, Here's Chapter 6, Just to note before reading is that in my last Fan Fic which I havn't released yet, Set in 2000, Toni knows who Alan is, But doesn't know who Tony, Jake or any other people are. So after this story is done I'll back-track and post that one.

 

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Chapter 6: On The Run

July 9TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [8.45am]

Toni Cipriani is making his way through the large estate in Las Colinas, He's gotten through the first floor and wasted a whole bunch of Bodyguards, He picked up a Micro SMG from one of the guards and now has that and a Shotgun as he makes his way upstairs of the estate as bodyguards are at the top of the stairs, Toni shoots them out and makes his way into a room and reloads behind a bed

 

Toni: One f*ckin guy he says (Reloads the Micro SMG) I'm gettin too old for this crap

 

Toni reloads and exits the room and sees the Oriental man run across from one room to another and creeps down the hall and looks into the room and sees a bunch of bodyguards

 

Bodyguard: There he is, Get him

 

The bodyguards start shooting at the doorframe as Toni brings his head back round and holds his shotgun aiming it pretty high and waits for a bodyguard to come out of the room

 

Bodyguard: Go after him!

 

A bodyguard runs out of the room and gets a hole blown into his chest as another bodyguard runs out of the room and gets his head blown off

 

Bodyguard: Boss, where are you going?

 

Toni hears the bodyguard and jumps round the doorframe and shoots out the remaining bodyguards and sees the Oriental man climbing out the window and grabbing ahold of a wireladder

 

Toni: sh*t! (Runs over to the window and sees the man run into a car) This guys fast

 

Toni slowly runs out the room and back down the stairs and out the front door where 2 bodyguards are waiting for him holding pistols pointed at Toni

 

Toni: (Puts his hands up) I guess you got me fellas

 

Toni drops the shotgun and while the bodyguards focus on it Toni shoots them with the Micro SMG and runs out into the street and jumps infront of a car and grabs the driver out and gets in and speeds off after the man Donald wants dead

 

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July 9TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [10.12am]

Satoshi, Claude & his cousins made their way over to Love's Casino as workmen instructed them not to go in, They wasted them and broke through the locked entrance doors and looked around inside, While upstairs Don Joey Leone and Mickey Hamfists were laughing and talking in Donald's office

 

Satoshi (OS): Joey Leone, I've come to end you once and for all

 

Joey: (Stands up from Donald's chair) Did you just hear that Mick?

 

Mickey: Yeah, We'd better get outta here

 

Satoshi (OS): Where are you hiding scum?

 

Joey: Thats the f*cking Yakuza boss, How the f*ck did he find me here, Come on, Lets get outta here

 

Joey and Mickey run out the room and look around and see a fire exit and make they're way down the stairs and look out the back door and see It's clear and run out the Casino

 

Joey: Get us a f*ckin car, Quick

 

Mickey runs out onto the strip and steals a bike and drives it round and Joey hops on the back

 

Joey: Get us out of Las Venturas, Get to Los Santos

 

Mickey pulls the bike away and onto the strip as Claude sees outside of the window and runs over to Satoshi and grabs him by the arm and points at the door as everyone runs out and sees Joey on the back of the bike speeding away

 

Satoshi: Ichigo, Round up all Yakuza cars from Los Santos, San Fierro and Las Venturas

 

Satoshi gets into a Stinger and Claude gets into the passenger seat and they speed away after Joey while Ichigo is making the phonecall.

 

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July 9TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [8.59am]

Toni's been speeding through the streets of Los Santos after the man for the past 15 miniutes, Toni's caught up and is fireing at the Rancher the man is in as they speed through Saint's Boulevard

 

Cop: (Sees the Rancher speed by with bullets flying at it and picks up his radio) Dispatch all units to Saints Boulevard, We've found the stolen vehicle and he's opening fire on another vehicle, over.

 

The cop speeds out of the alleyway after them and turns the siren on as Toni looks behind him and sees him

 

Toni: f*ck off, This don't concern you

 

Toni starts opening fire on the cop car and he runs out of ammo of the Micro SMG and turns his focus back onto the Rancher ahead of him and he starts ramming into it as the cop starts ramming into him

 

Toni: (Leans out the window and faces the cop) I said this doesn't concern you!

 

The cop leans out his window and shoots at Toni with a Desert Eagle as Toni tucks his head back in and rolls up the window as the Rancher does a 180 and speeds back up Saints Boulevard and Toni follows as the cop car smashes into the big Saints Boulevard signpost and Toni pivots the Rancher and it comes to a halt as the Old man gets out of the car and starts making a run for it but Toni reverses his car and drives after him, And hits him as he rolls over the bonnet and Toni stops the car and gets out and stands over the dieing man

 

Toni: Donald Love sends his regards (Leans down)

 

Toni puts his hands over the Old man's mouth and nose as he puts up no struggle and dies

 

Toni: (Stands back up and takes out his phone and dials Donald) Donald, I took care of it, But I'm gonna need 200,000...Alright, I'll come back to Venturas

 

Toni hangs up his phone and sees 2 cars speed around the corner of Saints Boulevard as a bunch of Ballas come out of an apartment complex across the street from Toni

 

Toni: sh*t, It's that gang war thats going on, I'd better get outta here

 

Toni opens the door of the Rancher the Old man was driving and watches the people park the cars and get out and start wipeing the Ballas out

 

Toni: What the f*ck

 

Toni looks at Alan whose opening fire on a Balla with an AK47

 

Toni: I don't believe my f*cking eyes

 

Toni stands there, stunned for a few seconds and gets into the Rancher and speeds off, nearly hitting one of the shooters

 

Toni: (Takes out his phone and dials) ...Come on pick up...Joey!, You ain't goin to believe this

 

Toni speeds off in the Rancher heading towards Los Santos INTL Airport.

 

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July 9TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [9.10am]

Sweet: We ready tuh' do 'dis thing?

 

Alan: Alright, Lets go

 

Sweet driving the Greenwood and CJ driving the Lowrider following behind Sweet speed up the steps of the beach where they were staying quiet and speed round the corner and speed into Saint's Boulevard as they see a bunch of Ballas on the roof of an apartment complex fireing at them, A Grove boy is hit in CJ's lowrider as they stop and barricade the street off with the cars and get out and start exchanging fire with the Ballas on the roof as more Ballas come out of the building

 

Sweet: CJ get ovuh' her'

 

CJ creeps over to Sweet

 

Sweet: Covuh' me, M'goin in

 

After all the Balla's outside and on the roof are taken out Sweet creeps over to the door of the apartment as more Ballas come up on the roof and CJ shoots them down while the others are shooting the Ballas fireing out the windows

 

CJ: Homies, over here

 

The 2 remaining Grove OG's sneak over to CJ

 

CJ: Go in and make sure my brother don' get himself killed

 

The homies sneak over to the entrance and go inside

 

CJ: Tony, We go roun' back

 

A Rancher speeds past and almost hits Tony as it speeds round the corner and drives away

 

Tony: (Looks at the Rancher before it disapears) Some fat white guy in there, Not a Balla

 

Tony and CJ sneak round the back of the apartment whilst Alan and Jake continue opening fire on any Balla that appears in the windows and on the roof, CJ leads the way inside the back way with Tony following and they see 3 Ballas wearing body armor by some stairs leading up

 

CJ: (Whispering) Run pass' em, When they distracted I'll shoot em

 

Tony runs past the hall and the Ballas run down the stairs and see Tony run round the corner as they start opening fire, CJ blows the head of the middle Balla clean off and shoots the other 2 all over in a hail of bullets from his 2 Tec9's, Tony comes back round the corner and him and CJ go upstairs and look around and see that It's empty, They go up another floor and see Sweet and a Grove member shooting out with 4 Ballas

 

CJ: (Sneaks over to Sweet and starts opening fire on the Ballas who are ducking in and out of walls) Where the other boy at?

 

Sweet: Dea'

 

CJ: Man!

 

Tony hides on the stairs leading up to the next floor and sees 2 Ballas run out of a back room and are about to open fire on CJ, Sweet & the homie and blasts one in the head as the other turns around CJ hears it and sees him, And shoots him in the leg as Tony shoots him in the chest

 

Tony: (Looks behind the door) All clear over here

 

CJ: All clear her' too

 

Sweet: We already been on top floo', There ain't none leff', Less' get outta here

 

They all run down the stairs and out the front door and see Alan and Jake shooting out the one remaining Balla on the roof, And he falls and lands on the floor, bouncing off the open window panels as he falls to his death. They all hop back into they're cars and speed away and see a Police car by the Saints Boulevard sign with a badly hurt Officer inside

 

Sweet: sh*t, He a witness, I'll take care'a him (Cocks his gun and slows the car down)

 

Alan: (Grabs Sweet's arm) Don't man, Leave him, He ain't gonna tell anybody

 

Sweet: ...Aiight man, Aiight

 

Sweet speeds away with CJ following behind.

 

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July 9TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [11.46am]

Mickey and Joey have been on the run from Yakuza all over Las Venturas, They've been speeding down Harry Gold Parkway and got onto the Julius Thruway South and are heading down to Los Santos, But when they reach Red County they run into a whole bunch of Yakuza, waiting for them

 

Joey: (Sees them all upahead) sh*t!, Mick backtrack

 

Mickey continues to speed foward as he jumps off the bike

 

Joey: (Slams into the Thruway wall and flys off the bike) You son of a bitch Mickey

 

Mickey gets up and shakes the dust off his Suit Jacket

 

Mickey: It's just business Joe

 

Satoshi and Claude walk over with many Yakuza in the distance, Satoshi is holding a Silencer in his left hand and Joey is on his knees, bleeding from the lip and eyebrow, Mickey walks over and stands beside Claude

 

Satoshi: (Turns and faces Mickey) You did the right thing

 

Mickey: (Turns and faces Satoshi as Claude steps aside) Thank you Satoshi (Bows)

 

Claude steps behind Mickey and slips a knife down from his Jacket sleeve and grabs Mickey by the back of his hair, as Satoshi grabs his hands, and Claude cuts the throat of Mickey and they let go, He falls to the floor

 

Satoshi: Betrayl tells you something about a man's character, and a man's honour

 

Claude throws the bloodyknife on the floor and walks around the other side of Satoshi as Joey looks up at them both

 

Satoshi: I think you should do the honour Claude-san. The old saying goes, Like father, Like son. And that's no truer than this situation here.

 

Satoshi hands Claude the Silencer and Claude aims it at Joey Leone's head

 

Satoshi: Say goodnight to The Leone's once and f--

 

A Rancher slams into the back of Satoshi as he flys off the hood of the car and lands on the Thruway Wall as Claude shoots at the Rancher, The door opens and Joey climbs in as Claude goes to fire at Joey and is out of Ammo. The Rancher speeds off as Yakuza cars start speeding away after it and Claude slams the Silencer on the floor and turns around and looks over at Takeshi

 

Takeshi: He came out of nowhere, Claude. We didn't even see it!

 

Ichigo: (Runs over to Satoshi) Boss, Are you OK?

 

Ichigo rolls Satoshi over and sees his neck is snapped, With a cold hard glaze on his eyes and is not moving

 

Ichigo: (Bows his head down) I'm so sorry Boss...Cousin

 

Ichigo stands up and walks over to Takeshi and Claude

 

Ichigo: I'm afraid Satoshi is dead

 

Claude turns around and gets into a Yakuza Stinger and speeds away after The Rancher

 

Takeshi: Boss, What do we do now?

 

Ichigo looks at Takeshi and realizes that he is now Waka-gashira of The Yakuza being the oldest of the Three cousins

 

Ichigo: We go after that Rancher, and take Revenge for our fallen leader

 

Ichigo and Takeshi get into a Yakuza Stinger and speed off North after The Rancher.

 

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July 9TH 2002: ???, ??? [9.52am]

It's raining heavily. A man in a Brown Trenchcoat and Brown Hat has just finished talking on a payphone. He puts the Reciever down, Then he picks it back up and puts some money into it and dials a number.

 

Man: ...Tony. When the f*ck were you planning on telling me, One of my best and oldest friends Powel was killed ... DON'T f*ckING TELL ME YOUR BUSY ... Hello? ..HELLO!? (Slams the Reciever on the box) Prick!, f*cking Prick!

 

The Man storms away from the Payphone and gets into a taxi cab which speeds away.

 

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Thats the end of Chapter 6. Leave some comments If you enjoyed it or If you didn't tounge2.gif

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Wow, thanks for saying that biggrin.gif That means alot to me. Here's Chapter 7 and I will probaly be slowing down the Chapter's to every 3 or 4 days soon because I'll be getting busier come next week.

 

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Chapter 7: King In Exile

July 9TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [10.18am]

Donald Love is back at his Casino in Las Venturas and is nervously paceing back and forth with a cell phone to his ear, As he stands over a broken vase in the hall of his Casino, Stepping back and forth over the broken shareds of porcelain as finally he gets an answer on his phone

 

Donald: Toni!, No time to chit-chat, I think Joey's in trouble, He's no where to be found in the Casino and theres a Priceless Broken Vase in the hallway, And I found a white lighter with a red Yakuza logo on the bottom. Please get back here ASAP, Where are you now? ... Thats too far, Get on the Thruway and come straight up

 

Donald hangs the phone up and bends down and picks up a shared of the broken vase and looks it over, Then drops it back on the floor.

 

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July 9TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [9.45am]

Sweet, Alan, Tony & Jake are all celebrating in Sweet's Greenwood over the sucess of the hit on the Balla's turf earlier in the morning, They stopped off and got some Taco's before heading back to The Grove, CJ went off ahead in his Lowrider and made it home first, They all finished their food and headed back to The Grove

 

Sweet: (Pulls round the corner) Jake, You see 'dat gym back ther'?

 

Jake: (Looks out the window) Ye'

 

Sweet: Go in there sumtime, N' get a Gangster's physique, You lookin too skinny

 

Jake: Ay!

 

Alan: (Laughing) Yeah the least you can do is get some muscle, Your like five foot six

 

Jake: Ay! What I tell you man, I'm five seven nigga

 

Everyone's laughing and joking around with each other as Sweet pulls into an alleyway as a shortcut back to his house and sees CJ behind his lowrider shooting out with a ton of Balla's

 

Sweet: sh*t! Wha' the f*ck is this!?

 

Sweet slams the handbrake on by CJ's lowrider and everyone gets out on the left side, The Balla's are all around the upperside of The Grove, And alot are in Sweet's house

 

Sweet: (Crawls over to CJ) Ay bruh', The f*cks goin on her'?

 

CJ: (Reloading) Whole buncha Balla's try Ambushin us while we were alrea'y away

 

Sweet: (Notices a huge gash through CJ's White T-shirt) Ay man, you hit

 

CJ: (Fireing) Ye'...I noticed, Now help me ou'

 

Everyone crawls over to the trunk of the Greenwood and get out their AK47's and start opening fire on The Balla's

 

Sweet: Ther's bou 50 of these nigga's

 

Tony: Don't count, Just shoot

 

Tony shoots 2 Ballas off of Sweet's roof as his phone starts ringing

 

Tony: sh*t! What the hells this now

 

Tony slams his AK47 down to the floor and takes his suit jacket off and takes the cell phone out

 

Tony: Unknown f*ckin number? (Answers the phone) What! ... (Puts his hand over the phone) "sh*t!" (Yells over to Alan) Tommy's on the phone

 

Alan: (Stops fireing) f*ck, Alright just deal with him quickly (Starts fireing again)

 

Tony: (Takes his hand off the phone) I know but Tommy listen I'm in the middle of something right now, I'm really busy, Listen just call me back tonight (Hangs up the phone)

 

Everyone continues opening fire on The Balla's.

 

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July 9TH 2002: Red County, San Andreas [11.54am]

Earlier, Donald Love phoned Toni Cipriani and told him not to go to the Airport but to as quickly as possible get up the Thruway to Las Venturas, Along the way he noticed Yakuza Cars blocking the Western and Eastern Entrance/Exits to the Thruway and ran over Satoshi Zoo, Who along with Claude Speed had Joey Leone on his knees on the brink of death. Toni pulled Joey into the Rancher and they sped off with Yakuza all over they're asses

 

Toni: (Handbrake skids round a corner) So your really telling me that Mickey back-stabbed you?

 

Joey: (Rubbing his arms which took some punishment from the fall off the bike) Yes Toni, and Claude stabbed him in the throat or cut it or something I don't remember

 

Toni: Son of a bitch, I never liked him Joey, I always knew he couldn't be trusted. Why do you think your pop never had him do anything other than be a bodyguard for Luigi, He was unreliable and a tool, Joe

 

Joey: None of that matters now, We've got Yakuza all over our ass Toni

 

Toni: Alright just stay calm

 

A Yakuza stinger speeds up and a man leans out of a Stinger and begins opening fire on the already battered and worn Rancher

 

Toni: Just stay f*ckin clam (Toni picks up his cell phone and calls Donald)

Donald, I've got Joey with me, We need to get back to the strip and we've got Yakuza all over the place, We've gotta take off ... Alright (Hangs up the phone)

 

Joey: What'd he say?

 

Toni: Donald said he can take us in his chopper (Handbrake turns a corner and heads for the strip) Now all we've gotta do is lose this one asshole thats been on us non-stop

 

Joey: (Looks out the window and sees the driver keeping calm control of the Stinger whilst leaning out the window fireing at the Rancher) Toni, That ain't just anybody

 

Toni: (Looks through the rear view mirror) Aw sh*t, It's Speed

 

Claude continues opening fire on the Rancher, All the windows have been shot out except the windscreen and the side window on Toni's side, as the Stinger picks up speed and is driving alongside to the Rancher

 

Joey: We got a piece?

 

Toni: Yeah I snatched this out of a cops hand earlier, Think I might of broke my thumb in the process, Things killing me

 

Toni takes out the Desert Eagle from the glove compartment and hands it to Joey

 

Joey: (Leaning out the open window of the Rancher with the Desert Eagle) Speed your gonna f*ckin pay

 

Claude sees Joey has the Desert Eagle and swiftly drops his speed and pulls back in behind the Rancher

 

Toni: Alright f*ck it, This is a risk but brace yourself for Impact Joe

 

Toni slams the handbrake on as Claude swerves not to ram into the back of it and the Stinger hits a ledge at an angle and flips out of control and keeps flipping and spinning untill it shatters the glass of a store window and comes to a halt in the store

 

Toni: (Speeds away) Lets get back to Love's before we get into anymore sh*t

 

Joey: You think he died?

 

Toni: What the f*ck do you think Joe?

 

Claude Speed climbs out the Stinger and sees the oil leaking all over the place as he gets up and walks out the store as stunned pedestrians watch on in horror as the store explodes and goes up in flames, as Claude continues walking and watches the Rancher speeding away in the far distance.

 

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July 9TH 2002: Los Santos, San Andreas [9.55am]

Alan, Tony and the others have been shooting out with The Balla's in Grove Street for the past 10 miniutes, more Balla's have come over the walls and theres no end in sight from them

 

Sweet: (Wipes the sweat from his forehead and reloads) Ho' many f*ckin more are ther'!?

 

Tony: (Shoots another Balla in CJ's window) We must've killed 3 dozen, Where did all these Balla's come from?

 

Sweet: (Hits a Balla in the legs as he watches him fall over) I'unno, but this sh*ts organized, I've never seen this many Balla's in ma life, Not even in thuh' 80's

 

CJ: Swee'!, M'out!, Cover me!

 

Sweet: Aiight!

 

CJ runs a long way out into the line of fire as he picks up 3 dead Balla's Micro SMG's while Sweet is shooting any Balla's out that look like they might be a threat

 

CJ: (Starts running back over) Aiight I'm goo--

 

CJ is hit in the shoulder as he grabs it in pain and jumps over the bonnet of Sweet's Greenwood and lands on the floor

 

Sweet: CJ!

 

CJ: I'm aiight, Juss' take em out Swee'

 

Sweet: Aiight bro just hang in there (Stands up) f*ckin pussys, I'm takin all yo' down

 

Sweet starts opening fire all over the place as a few Ballas get hit from the windows of his house

 

Jake: Ay wher' all those Grove OG's from earlier?

 

Sweet: Shi, They were in ma hous'

 

A Balla in a SWAT outfit gets up on Sweet's roof carrying an RPG

 

Sweet: Oh...sh*t...

 

Everyone notices him and starts opening fire on him but he takes it all in and loads up the Rocket Launcher and aims it at Sweet's Greenwood

 

Sweet: sh*t, Look ou'!

 

Everyone helps CJ up and they start running away as the Balla member fires a Rocket and it blows up Sweet's Greenwood, and Everyone is knocked back by the explosion but get up right afterwards

 

Tony: He's reloading, Nows our chance!

 

More Ballas are fireing from behind house walls, Windows and Roofs as the Balla member with the RPG is reloading, Everyone begins opening fire on him but he ducks down the otherside of the roof and can't be seen, He stands back up, Reloaded, and aims it at CJ's Lowrider

 

CJ: Aww nooo!

 

He fires and the Lowrider blows up as the Balla begins reloading, Everyone once again was knocked down from the impact but got right back up, as a car speeds down Ganton

 

Sweet: (Looks behind) Shi', we got company

 

4 guys jump out the car and skid along the grass, which was going at 115mph as the car crashes into Sweet's house and completly destroys half of the house, as the Balla with the RPG loses his balance and his SWAT helmet falls off

 

Jake: Ay It's Mark!

 

Mark stands up and picks up a Sawn-off Shotgun and runs past everyone and starts climbing up Sweet's house

 

Tony: Mark! What the f*ck are you doin! (Shoots out a Balla aiming at Mark)

 

Mark climbs up as the Balla runs to the other side of the roof and picks up his Tec9 and as he turns around his nose hits the end of the Sawn-off Shotgun and Mark blasts his head off, he runs back over and jumps off the roof and takes cover behind the burnt, wrecked vehicles

 

Mark: I feel ten years younga' now that I'm all healedup'

 

CJ: Ay, Big Bear!

 

The other 3 Grove OG's come over and take cover by the burnt cars

 

Big Bear: Hey CJ man, you good?

 

CJ: Ye' I'm coo

 

Big Bear: Then lets take these mother f*ckers down

 

Big Bear takes out a 9MM and starts fireing at the few remaining Balla's left, As does everyone else, Untill finally there are none left, and Everyone sits down leaning against the fences on CJ's house

 

CJ: Man, can't believe I wrecked Cesar's lowrider man, Thats all he left behin' befo' he disapeared

 

Sweet: I kno bro, I kno

 

Everyone breathes a sigh of relief knowing that It's over, and that Los Santos is once again rid of Balla's.

 

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July 9TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [12.07pm]

Toni & Joey arrived at Love's Casino and went in and found Donald in his office making a phone call, After they were done they quickly went up to the roof of the Casino where a chopper, and a Pilot outside of it was waiting for them

 

Donald: Alright, Where do you guys wish to go too?

 

Toni: Thanks Donald (Faces the Pilot) Take us too--

 

Joey: Take us back to Vice City

 

Toni: What?

 

Joey: They wouldn't expect us to go back there, we can buy ourselves some time, round up some men and take on the Yakuza

 

Toni: Alright, your the boss, Vice City it is

 

Toni & Joey get into the chopper as does the pilot and it takes off, Overlooking the city as Yakuza Stingers are speeding along the strip and stop outside of Love's Casino

 

Ichigo: (Sees the Chopper speeding away in the sky) They're running south.

 

Takeshi: They must think we're idiots...Let's go

 

The Stingers continue speeding off down the strip but one stays outside of Love's Casino. Claude Speed gets out of the passenger seat and goes inside, as Donald Love is coming back to his floor office

 

Claude: (Grabs Donald's shoulder as Donald turns around)

 

Donald: Oh, It's you. What do you wan't?

 

Claude: (Grabs Donald by the throat and shoves him into the door)

 

Donald: (Choking) Your still mad about that?

 

Claude: (Lets go and stares into Donald's eyes)

 

Donald: Listen, we both know your not going to kill me. You need me alive, Just as much as I need you alive. Now unless you wan't to make things bad for both of us Mister Speed. (Straightens his collar out) I suggest you follow Toni and Joey to Vice City, and kill them both. Now get outta here

 

Claude: (Stares into Donald's eyes for another couple of seconds then zips up his jacket and leaves)

 

Donald: (Breathes a sigh of relief and takes his phone out and dials it) ... Mr. Machowski, It's Donald...So hows Florida treating you?, Because an old friend will be stopping in to visit you soon (Walks into his office and closes the door).

 

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July 9TH 2002: ???, ??? [1.32pm]

Tommy Vercetti walks inside out of the rain, Into a small hideout house and drops an M60 on the couch and takes his brown coat off

 

Tommy: Ken get in here

 

Ken Rosenburg walks into the room carrying a tray with a hot drink on it

 

Ken: Here, relax, I made you some cocoa

 

Tommy: ...Cocoa!? (Slaps the tray out of Ken's hand) Start the f*cking car up, We're going to San Andreas. We've got business to take care of

 

Ken: No, Tommy, Please don't get me involved anymore. I'm done helping you out, You take over my house and scare my wife and kids into going to they're mothers, And you still show me no respect

 

Tommy: You know what, fine. I'm sorry for involving you with this again, Have your boring little life here in the middle of f*ckin no where

 

Tommy gets up and picks up the M60 and goes outside and around the back to a garage and unlocks it and opens it and gets into a black Infernus and speeds away.

 

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Thats the end of Chapter 7, The story will be moving out of the Grove Street VS Balla's now. And the main storyline can begin, Vice City here we come tounge2.gif. Leave some comments If you enjoyed or If you didn't enjoy it biggrin.gif Chapter 8 will be up before you know it.

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I WANT TO HEAR MORE!!!!!

 

MORE MORE MORE!!

 

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY MAN... DON'T KNOW WHY... MAYBE IT'S BECAUSE I HAVE A WIDE IMAGINATIION... AND I CAN VISUALIZE EVERY EVENT!!

 

WELL GOOD JOB ON IT THOUGH! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST OF THE STORY TO BE OUT!

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I WANT TO HEAR MORE!!!!!

 

MORE MORE MORE!!

 

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY MAN... DON'T KNOW WHY... MAYBE IT'S BECAUSE I HAVE A WIDE IMAGINATIION... AND I CAN VISUALIZE EVERY EVENT!!

 

WELL GOOD JOB ON IT THOUGH! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST OF THE STORY TO BE OUT!

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I WANT TO HEAR MORE!!!!!

 

MORE MORE MORE!!

 

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY MAN... DON'T KNOW WHY... MAYBE IT'S BECAUSE I HAVE A WIDE IMAGINATIION... AND I CAN VISUALIZE EVERY EVENT!!

 

WELL GOOD JOB ON IT THOUGH! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST OF THE STORY TO BE OUT!

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Great chapter, Zimmzy. cookie.gifcookie.gif

lol sorry.. couldn't help it..

 

but great story... i'm waiting for the next chapter Zimmy!

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Woo! Thanks for such great comments guys biggrin.gif It means alot to me that your enjoying my FanFic with such enthusiasm, I started writing Chapter 8 yesterday and finished it just now so I'm ready to post biggrin.gif here it is and enjoy, the main storyline has kicked off and will have alot of action next chapter.

 

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Chapter 8: Vice City Blues

July 17TH 2002: San Fierro, San Andreas [9.28am]

Tony, Alan & Jake left Los Santos a couple of days after they helped Grove Street put The Balla's out of commission, and any that survived went into hiding. Los Santos was once again safe, with that being done, Sweet & CJ figured they deserved a little vacation, and headed to Vice City for 2 weeks. Vice City is still the place to go when you need to escape away for a little while, The '80s may be over, but Vice City is still as ever popular, with bars, parties, and caine still spreading through the streets like wildfire straight from the underground circuits of Columbia. After a relaxing week back working at the garage in San Fierro, sh*t was about to hit the fan, because peace never lasts.

 

Tony: (On the phone standing infront of the counter at Burger Shot) Yeah, they don't do breakfast anymore, You wan't a burger for breakfast? ... Alright (Laughing and hangs up the phone) Alright, Gimme 3 Cheeseburgers, Hold the onion's on one and on another give it a whole lotta sauce

 

The woman packs the burgers in a brown bag and hands them to Tony as he leaves the fast food restraunt and starts walking through Garcia as his phone rings

 

Tony: (Answers) Hey, whats up?

 

Alan (OS): It's Alan, listen, we've just got a really banged up Banshee come rolling in, said his uncle wrecked his in Foster Valley and asked if you could go and check it out

 

Tony: Alright, what about breakfast?

 

Alan (OS): Don't worry about it

 

The phone hangs up and Tony puts his phone back in his pocket and takes out his cheeseburger and takes a bite then throws the bag in a trashcan and walks down to Foster Valley and can't see a broken Banshee anywhere

 

Tony: (Shouting) Hello?, anybody down here?

 

Tony's phone starts ringing and he's looking around the Valley but still can't see anything

 

Tony: (Looks at caller ID and answers) What now Alan?

 

Alan (OS): What?

 

Tony: Theres no broken down Banshee in Foster Valley

 

Alan (OS): What are you talkin about? Hurry back with the food, we're starving

 

Alan hangs the phone up

 

Tony: (Looking at his phone) What the f*ck's goin on?

 

All of a sudden an Infernus speeds down the Valley and Tony turns around and sees it, and jumps out the way just in time as it slams the handbrake on and does a 180 and speeds over to Tony as the door opens and an arm reaches out and grabs him into the car and slams him against the dashboard as Tony lands upside down in the passenger seat

 

Tony: (Fadeing in and out of conciousness) What's going on?

 

Voice: Just shut up and sleep already

 

The man slams a gun into Tony's head and it knocks him unconcious, as the Infernus speeds out of the Valley and through Doherty past the Garage.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Vice City, Florida [12.13pm]

Toni Cipriani and Don Joey Leone fled San Andreas from almost being killed by The Yakuza and Claude Speed after Mickey Hamfists betrayed Joey and set him up to be assassinated by Claude, but, Claude killed Mickey under the orders of Satoshi Zoo, at the time, Waka-gashira of The Yakuza. Toni saved Joey just in time and killed Satoshi Zoo. They arrived at Vice City, where they set up base throughout Late 2001 and Early 2002. Don Joey Leone put word through some Leone Chiefs that he was in Vice City and all The Leone's that were left from Liberty City, trying to redeem it as their own, left and went to Vice City. Since then, Yakuza have been trying to take down The Leone's who had a couple of days head start to prepare for them, but The Yakuza have been on the losing end. Ichigo cleared out an old abandoned mansion on Starfish Island and claimed it as his own, setting up Yakuza all around Starfish Island, on the other hand Don Joey Leone has set up The Leone's all over Prawn Island, and turned it into something more than just a run down bad neighborhood full of homeless junkies just looking for they're next fix. A Leone member has just sped through Prawn Island in a Mafia Sentinel and stopped outside of Joey's large estate.

 

Leone Member: (Gets out of the Sentinel and rushes into the house, bleeding) Don Joey!, Don Joey!

 

Joey comes rushing down the stairs and sees The Leone member bleeding

 

Joey: What happened to you, who did this? those bastard Yakuza?

 

Leone Member: Yeah, it was that f*ckin maniac Johnny (Takes his hand off the wound and screams in pain) The bastard held me down and poured salt all over it

 

Joey: f*ck sake, Roman, I need some help in here

 

A large black man walks into the room in blue jeans and a black tank top

 

Roman: Yes boss?

 

Roman takes a look at the huge wound on The Leone member

 

Roman: OK boss, leave it with me

 

Roman leads The Leone member through to the living room as the member sits down still in alot of pain as Joey walks back upstairs where Toni is jogging on a machine in Joey's office

 

Toni: Are you sure we can trust that Roman guy?

 

Joey: Not everyone is a back stabbing f*ck, like Mickey

 

Toni: Whatever you say, boss. Hand me that towel right there

 

Joey: (Passes the towel to Toni and watches him wipe the sweat off his face) So you are taking this getting back into shape thing seriously then?

 

Toni: I told you I would, that dog Claude won't even stand a chance in any way shape or form against me

 

Joey: Yeah well hurry it up then, It probaly won't be long before The Yakuza send everyone they've got onto our front door step

 

Toni: Not gonna happen, The Yakuza know they can't take us all down as we stand right now. Soon, we'll be the one's on their front door steps

 

Toni turns the machine onto high and begins running as Joey goes around the desk and starts looking through some stuff on his computer

 

Joey: Says here The Malibu is up for sale again, should we put our fingers in?

 

Toni: (Breathing heavy) I don't see...why not

 

Joey: Alright, I'll look into it.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [2.15pm]

The Infernus has been parked for about five miniutes in a random parking lot, after speeding through San Fierro and into Las Venturas. Tony is still kind of slumped upside down in the passenger seat, as he finally starts coming to, and holding the front of his head as he opens his eyes and sees a man sitting in the drivers seat, rubbing the stubble on his chin, with an open long sleeve black shirt on with a white vest underneath and Jeans which look like they wen't out of style 15 years ago

 

Tony: What the f*ck is wrong with you, your f*cked in the head mate

 

Tommy: About time your awake kid, now sit up

 

Tony spins around and sits up looking out the windows of the Infernus

 

Tony: Where are we?

 

Tommy: Las Venturas

 

Tony: Why are we here? And why'd you knock me out man

 

Tommy: I think you deserve alot worse than that for being a little prick to me for the past 2 years

 

Tony: (Points his hand at Tommy) Listen man, I'm sorry about your friend Powel but what did you want me to do? Tell you over the phone?!

 

Tommy: (Smacks Tony in the face) It's better than finding out by an unknown f*ckin tip on an answering machine

 

Tony: (Puts his head down) ...Alright, I'm sorry, I f*cked up big time, I f*cked everything up with You, and with Marci

 

Tommy: Marci's doing OK, It was atleast a half decent move by your part to give her the shopping complex over in Pagan

 

Tony: Have you talked to her recently? (Lifts his head up and looks at Tommy)

 

Tommy: ...Yeah, a little, she asked about you

 

Tony: She should just stay away from me, I just cause her nothing but trouble

 

Tommy: Your probaly right there

 

Tony's phone begins to ring

 

Tony: (Takes the phone out and looks at the caller ID) It's Alan

 

Tommy: Gimme the phone

 

Tommy grabs the phone out of Tony's hand and opens the door up and throws it

 

Tony: What the f*cks your problem man!? Damn!

 

Tommy: I don't want you talkin to that prick on my time

 

Tony: Man, let it go

 

Tommy: If you remember correctly he killed someone very very close to me, Johnny's father

 

Tony: (Thinks for a moment) ...Where is Johnny?

 

Tommy: (Pauses for a second and looks out the window) Johnny's dead

 

Tony looks stunned for a second then snaps out of it and looks at Tommy in a "I wan't to rip your head off" kind of way

 

Tony: Johnny helped me out so much and you didn't even think to tell me he died?

 

Tommy: (Snaps back) Just like you didn't tell me about Powel?!

 

Tony: (Pauses for a moment) ...Who killed him?

 

Tommy: Do you remember when that prick Toreno manipulated you and your little friends into doing his dirty work?

 

Tony: Yeah

 

Tommy: Well, Toreno found someone new, all I know is a name

 

Tony: Who?

 

Tommy: Some guy called Vincent Sean

 

Tony: (Thinks for a moment) I'm sure I've heard that name before

 

Tommy: Anyway listen, It's time for me to go home

 

Tony: And wheres home to you anymore? Infact where the hell have you been for the last (Thinks) 3 years? all I ever got from you were notes passed from hand to hand telling me a contact number to reach you, once every couple of months

 

Tommy: I've been around, now, the least thing you could do for me right now is to help me go home

 

Tony: ..Wait what do you mean 'help'

 

Tommy: (Starts the Infernus up and drives away) Have you heard about whats going on in Vice City right now?

 

Tony: No, what?

 

Tommy: Leone's

 

Tony: (Looks out the window) sh*t, not these clowns again

 

Tommy: Leone's and Yakuza, in a power struggle over my turf (Turns round a corner and slows down) The prick's are even in my house, buying out my property, and taking my town over piece by piece (Stops the car) Right, we're here

 

Tony: (Looks out the window) This is a psychiatric ward, Tommy.

 

Tommy: (Looks at Tony) I know that you freakin idiot, get out the car and pop the trunk

 

Tony looks at Tommy for a moment then opens the door and steps out and looks around and walks around to the back of the Infernus and opens the trunk and sees 2 M60's in the trunk

 

Tony: (Yelling to Tommy) What do we need these for?

 

Tommy: (Comes out the car and walks over and picks them up and hands one to Tony) Do you really think I'd just need you to help me take my home back? ... We're going to bust a friend out of the psych ward, and take him with us

 

Tony: Can't believe I'm caught up in this sh*t again

 

Tommy: (Slams the trunk) Go and jack a 4 door car, and catch up with me in there

 

Tony looks around as Tommy walks up the steps of the psych ward and sees a dark blue Kuruma parked on the side walk outside of a newly opened Ammunation.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Vice City, Florida [3.32pm]

Waka-gashira Ichigo Zoo of the Yakuza has just returned to his mansion on Starfish Island, which has now been upgraded to very heavy protection, the outside almost looks like a prison, with razorwire all over high walls, fences and steel gates 15 feet high. He gets out of his Yakuza Stinger with Claude Speed as they go inside the mansion and Takeshi approaches Ichigo

 

Takeshi: Boss (Bows) How did it go out there?

 

Ichigo: (Paceing back and forth) The Leone's have an incredible will to claim this place as their own. I can't understand how we're losing men and their doing so well in the city

 

Takeshi: Well, a couple of Yakuza boys went down to the Ammunation 30 miniutes ago, and said they saw Leone's around the place and came back. We think that The Leone's are buying out businesses left and right of this city, and we need to get in on the action aswell. Shall I request more men to be sent from Liberty City?

 

Ichigo: (Stops and sits down on the stairs) No, I still wan't that being taken care of. I sent Johnny back to Liberty to take care of things down there

 

Takeshi: (Looks stunned) But, boss, I could of done that for you

 

Ichigo: Listen, I need you here

 

Takeshi: ...Very well boss. I recieved word that Club Malibu was on the Market. I've asked for a meeting with the current manager of the place, and I think we may be able to set up some more base around there

 

Ichigo: You see, this is why I need you here. When is the meeting?

 

Takeshi: Five PM today

 

Ichigo: Very well. (Ichigo faces Claude) I wan't you to go with Takeshi, you make SURE that we buy this place, got it?

 

Claude nods as Ichigo goes upstairs into his office.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Vice City, Florida [3.37pm]

Joey hangs up the phone in his office as Toni is laying on the giant leather couch completly out of breath and sweating all over. He's lost about 25lbs in just a few days

 

Joey: Bastards

 

Toni: (Sits up) Whats up Joe?

 

Joey: A guy has offered to buy the Malibu for full price at 5PM today. The contracts will be signed on the dotted line

 

Toni: Is it Yakuza?

 

Joey: I don't think so, but I wan't you and Roman to take some men and go make sure that the contract signing does not happen, we need this club alright?

 

Toni: You got it, but do I need to take Roman with me?

 

Joey: Roman's helped us alot over the past week, And if theres trouble he can do a world of good, now don't argue alright?

 

Toni: Sure thing Joe

 

Toni leaves Joey's office as Joey puts his feet up on the table and looks through some more stuff on his computer, looking for more business oppurtunitys.

 

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Thats the end of Chapter 8, not the longest chapter in the world but I'm pretty certain Chapter 9 will make up for it biggrin.gif I'll get round to writing it up soon, If you enjoyed or dis-enjoyed the Chapter, leave a comment colgate.gif

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Actually, that chapter was nice and long for me.

 

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Thanks for the replies guys. I stayed up like half an hour more to finish this Chapter off before tomorrow so I could post it before I went to bed, It's one of the most action-jammed Chapter's I've written recently, so enjoy biggrin.gif.

 

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Chapter 9: Quiet Summer Afternoon's...

July 17TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [2.32pm]

Tony parks the Kuruma outside of the entrance of the psych ward and gets out carrying the M60 in his hand and makes his way up the stairs of the large building. Screams are already heard inside as Tommy went in Five miniutes earlier than Tony. Tony goes inside and sees 2 men franticly running around at the reception desk and blows holes all over they're chests and makes his way downstairs where a blue light is flashing all over the rooms

 

Tommy (OS): In here

 

Tony: (Walks into a room with a closed door) Whats with this blue light thing?

 

Tommy: What do you think it is ya idiot, follow my lead

 

Tommy leads Tony into the next room where guards are awaiting them as they open fire on the guards who had no chance with just pistols, they make they're way into a hallway and start going up some stairs

 

Tony: You know where we're goin right?

 

Tommy: Johnny owned and built it so, yes

 

Tony: Where are we goin then?

 

Tommy: he's on the second to last floor...and his brother (Turns a corner at the top of the stairs and sees guards coming and Tommy and Tony shoot through them all and keep running through the building) as I was saying, and as for his brother, I'm guessing that maniac is locked on the very bottom floor

 

Tony: Why ain't we goin to the bottom floor first then (Runs around another corner)

 

Guards are coming out of a door and start opening fire on them with pistols but Tommy shoots them all out with his M60

 

Tommy: (Continues running and reloading at the same time) Because his brother will get us caught

 

They run up another flight of stairs as a few more guards are coming towards them and start opening fire and Tommy gets hit in the chest

 

Tommy: (Stops and shoots the guard in the head while Tony takes the other ones out) That hurt a little

 

Tommy unbuttons his black shirt and lifts up his vest revealing body armour

 

Tony: (Runs infront of him and looks) Hey! How come I don't get any body armour!?

 

Tommy: (Pulls his vest back down) Because your not that important, now come on, follow my lead

 

Tony: (Watches Tommy jog off) ...Asshole

 

Tony then continues running behind Tommy and catches up as they reach one of many heavily padded doors

 

Tommy: This is it (Shoots the locks on the door untill they turn black and fall off and pulls the large door open)

 

Tony: (Walks in and sees a guy in a straight jacket laying on the floor and looks back to Tommy who enters the room) This him?

 

Tommy: Yeah, this is him alright

 

The guy in the straight jacket slowly gets to his feet

 

Tommy: Come on, we're getting you outta here Phil

 

Phil: Well I'll be day'med

 

Tommy loosens up the straight jacket and takes it off while Tony looks a little puzzled stareing at him

 

Phil: (Notices Tony stareing at him) .....You got a problem boy?

 

Tony: Yeah, I do

 

Phil: (Gets face to face with Tony) Then you better speak up boy

 

Tony: .....(Looks over Phil's shoulder at Tommy who has a cocky grin on his face) Are you kiddin me Tommy?

 

Tommy: Would I kid you Tony? Now come on, lets go

 

Tony: (Pushes Phil out the way and gets up to Tommy's face) This guy has no f*ckin arms, how is he of any use to us

 

Tommy: What he lacks in limbs, he makes up for in something that you obviously don't have -- brains

 

Phil: (Laughing) Where did you find this one Tommy?

 

Tommy: (Starts walking out the door) He's not a lacky, but he is a pain in my ass

 

Phil: (Laughing loudly) Is this kid a brit!?

 

Tony: (Stops) f*ck you amputee

 

Phil stops and turns around and headbutt's Tony in the face

 

Tony: (Stumbles back and grabs his nose then looks at Phil) Your f*ckin dead!

 

Tony lunges at Phil as Tommy steps infront of him and pushes Tony's face to the side and turns around and looks at Phil

 

Tommy: No sh*t. Now lets go. It won't be long before the cops show up and we have to go get your brother

 

Phil: Yee-haw!, We're gonna have ourselves a real party tonight!

 

Tommy and Phil continue walking down the hall with Tony following slightly behind holding his bloody nose.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Vice City, Florida [4.54pm]

A Yakuza Stinger pulls up in the parking lot with another 3 following shortly behind. They park and Claude & Takeshi get out of the first Stinger while some more Yakuza members get out of the other Stingers

 

Takeshi: (Faces Claude) I want you to wait outside untill I call you in, you got it Claude?

 

Claude nods at Takeshi

 

Takeshi: Great

 

Takeshi leads while the Yakuza members and Claude tag shortly behind as they go into The Malibu, which still looks relativly the same ever since the 80's, except it looks a little more ravaged over time. Inside is a little diffrent but still holds the same feel as it always did. They make their way into the back area of The Malibu and walk up to an Office door with a gold sign over the door reading 'Kent Paul, Manager' and knock on it. After a few moments a man in a black suit and sandy blonde spiked up hair with a grey streak along the left side opens the door

 

Takeshi: Mr. Kent Paul?

 

Paul: That's me sunshine, come on in, make yaself at home lad's

 

Takeshi stands outside the door for a brief moment looking baffled by what Kent Paul has just said

 

Paul: Oh (Coughs) Sorry...Come on in, sir

 

Takeshi comes in and gives a brief nod to Claude as he turns around and waits outside the door and Takeshi closes it and him & Kent Paul sit down at a desk.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Vice City, Florida [5.03pm]

Toni & Roman are in the back seats of a Mafia Sentinel as they pull into the carpark of The Malibu, with a few Sentinels behind them aswell

 

Toni: Ah christ, It was the Yakuza afterall. Call Joe

 

A Leone member calls Joey's phone and tells him that Yakuza are here, he hangs up and turns around and faces Toni

 

Leone Member: Joey said make sure the deal doesn't go down, Take out all Yakuza

 

Toni: Right (Faces Roman) You ready?

 

Roman: (Smiles) Are you?

 

Roman steps out the car along with Toni on the opposite side. They go to the trunk and pop it open

 

Toni: (Picks up a Silencer and an M4) This will do me

 

Roman: (Picks up a Silencer and a Mac10) I'm good

 

The Leone members take out some weapons aswell and walk around to the front of the club and go inside and see 2 Yakuza members standing and guarding the door to the back

 

Yakuza Member: (Shouts) Leone's!

 

Meanwhile back in the Office, Takeshi is sitting and laughing having a drink while in the corner Claude has Kent Paul held up against the wall by his throat

 

Yakuza Member (OS): Leone's!

 

Takeshi: (Stands up) Bastards!, Claude come on!

 

Claude drops Kent Paul to the floor and follows Takeshi out the room

 

Paul: (Coughing and grabbing his throat) Pleasure doin business with ya...Pillocks

 

Claude is carrying a Combat Shotgun while Takeshi has a Silencer, they enter into the front of the Malibu and see Yakuza Members gunning it out with Leone Members, using anything they can as shields on opposite sides of the dance floor and bar areas

 

Toni: (Looks over at Claude) There you are you f*ckin dog!

 

Toni starts opening fire on Claude but he dives behind the bar

 

Toni: Son of a bitch! (Ducks down behind a steel booth and shouts) Claude I'm comin for you and you alone

 

Members of each side are slowly dieing as each side shows no sign of ever running out of clips. Takeshi makes his way over to Claude whose been picking off Leone's with his Combat Shotgun

 

Takeshi: (Breathing Heavy) Still got enough ammo?

 

Claude nods his head and continues aiming for Leone members

Roman jumps over a table and opens fire on some Yakuza Members and runs over to the stage area and dives behind the curtain and gets flat on his stomach and pokes the Mac10 through the curtains

 

Takeshi: The Leone's out numbered us here

 

Claude finally runs out of ammo as he stands up and makes a run for an SMG over by the front doors as Toni Cipriani jumps out from behind a steel booth and tackles him to the ground and pins him down as Takeshi stands up and aims for Toni, Roman starts fireing at him as he ducks back down

 

Toni: (Leaning over Claude whose franticly trying to get the SMG) Look into my eyes

 

Claude is keeping his head turned to the side while hes trying to fight a much bigger Toni Cipriani off, as Yakuza Members are being gunned down while trying to shoot Toni

 

Toni: I SAID LOOK INTO MY EYES YOU DOG

 

Claude looks dead into Toni's eyes and gives up reaching for the SMG

 

Toni: Enough running, Enough bullsh*t, Your time is up

 

Claude continues looking into Toni's eyes as Roman steps out from the curtains and shoots off the last Yakuza Member left. Takeshi is moving along behind steel booths while looking at where Roman is going

 

Roman: (Goes over to where Takeshi was) Theres one left somewhere Toni

 

Toni ignores what Roman says and continues looking at Claude

 

Toni: Any last words Claude? (Pushes the Silencer into Claude's neck)

 

Claude continues looking into Toni's eyes

 

Roman: (Walking around looking for Takeshi and looks back over at Toni and sees Takeshi on top of the rafters) sh*t!

 

Roman starts opening fire on Takeshi who jumps down and lands behind a steel booth and Toni turns around and looks, and Claude reaches into his pocket lightning quick and pulls out a knife and stabs it into Toni's stomach and pushes the silencer away as Toni fires it and shoots Roman in the shoulder, making him drop his Mac10

 

Toni: (Lets out a gargle and his eyes are watering from the shock) Y..You dog

 

Claude smirks at Toni and shoves him off and stands up and bends over to pick up the SMG as Roman picks up the Mac10 and starts shooting at Claude, Claude quickly dives out the front door as Takeshi makes a run for the back

 

Roman: (Starts chasing after him and looks behind) Toni, you OK?

 

Toni is laying on his back holding his stab wound

 

Toni: Yeah I'm alright (Tensing the muscles in his face) Forget the jap, get Claude

 

Roman looks at the back area and sees a fire exit door open with wind blowing it against the wall. He hears a car speeding away outside and runs over to the front doors and goes outside and sees a stinger speeding away towards Starfish Island

 

Roman: sh*t (Starts fireing at the Stinger which is fadeing out in the distance and out of range)

 

Roman runs back around and gets into a Sentinel and starts it up and sees another Stinger speed round the corner of the parking lot and he looks at the window and Claude stares back at him and speeds round the corner, as Roman reverses and starts speeding off towards the Stinger.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [2.56pm]

Tony, Tommy & Phil have been making their way to the bottom floor of the psych ward where Phil's younger brother, Jack is being held. They've made it back down to ground floor and finally police and SWAT have showed up and are outside the building, with a helicopter circling above

 

Phil: (Listening to the helicopter above) Never a dull moment with you is ther' Tommyboy

 

Tony: (Picking dry particles of blood from under his nose) We're screwed, I can just feel it right now

 

Tommy: We're not screwed, but we are f*cked

 

Tony: That doesn't even make sense

 

Tommy: ...So when'd you lose the other arm?

 

Tony: Great

 

Phil: I don't...quite...(Squint's his eyes) remember

 

Tommy: Figures (Boots a door open)

 

Tony, Tommy & Phil make they're way down some stairs untill they reach the bottom of the psych ward, which is damp, dark and the pipes are dripping, there is only one room, and it's right at the end of the room

 

Tony: (Runs ahead of Tommy and Phil and is looking and feeling the door) This is gonna take more than a few rounds

 

Tommy and Phil approach the door and look it over

 

Phil: I say you 2 draw straws

 

Tommy: (Lifts up his vest and takes off his body armour and hands it to Tony) Your goin

 

Tony: What? Where am I goin?

 

Phil: Your goin to go down the street to Caligula's Casino and tell a man named Donald to give you a Minigun, thas what yer' gonna do boy

 

Tony: ...(Starts laughing) Your jokin me right? This is just some kind of joke

 

Tommy & Phil keep straight faces the entire time Tony is laughing

 

Tommy: Get goin then

 

Tony: Mother f*cker!

 

Tony puts the body armour on and goes back upstairs

 

Officer Through Megaphone (OS): Come out with your hands up and drop all weapons

 

Tony climbs up the window frame and shoots out the small patch of glass and starts shooting cops out who can't fire back because of the small gap. SWAT teams are making their way down the building as Tony takes out more cops and jumps down off the window frame and runs out the door and dives behind the Kuruma while cops start opening fire on it, Tony shoots out their ankles from underneath the car and makes his way around and shoots out a few remaining cops, as sirens are heard in the near distance he runs across the street while SWAT members are shooting at him from the helicopter above the psych ward building

 

Tony: (Dives behind a wall) sh*t, don't these clowns ever give up

 

Tony reloads his M60 and runs back out from behind the wall as a cop car is speeding through the upper street of where the psych ward is located, which in the 90's was the Starfish Casino. Tony crawls into a bush and shoots out the gas tank in the cop car as it explodes and slams into Tommy's Infernus, as Tony lets out a little smirk and makes his way over to Caligula's Casino and looks around the outside area

 

Tony: I'm sure this is where it is, Although it has been a while....Maybe (Looks at the sign and see's 'Love') Oh, renamed

 

Tony runs into the Casino as Sirens can still be heard in the near distance.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Vice City, Florida [5.29pm]

Local cops and reporters are all over the scene at The Malibu. Kent Paul is talking to reporters about everything that happened as a Yakuza Stinger speeds round the corner and knocks over a female reporter, Cops begin running for their cars as a Mafia Sentinel speeds round the same corner and hits the 3 police officers as it keeps speeding up after the Stinger

 

Roman: (Picks up the phone and dials Joey) Come on...Come on...Pick up...Damn!

 

Roman speeds over a bridge after Claude as they speed through the streets of Vice City

 

Claude: (Looks into his mirror and sees the Sentinel keeping up and he lets out a grunt and speeds around a corner)

 

Roman speeds round the corner on a long straight empty piece of road and leans out the window and starts fireing at the Stinger

 

Claude: (Looking at Roman shooting the car and handbrake turns into an Industrial Field)

 

Roman: Where the f*cks this cat goin

 

Roman speeds off into the Industrial Area as workmen are operating heavy machinery and doing other things inside of it

 

Roman: (Dodging objects still following Claude as his phone rings) Yeah?

 

Joey (OS): Roman, where are you

 

Roman: I'm chasing Claude through an Industry Area

 

Joey (OS): Wheres Toni

 

Roman: Claude stabbed him, I think the cops got him

 

Joey (OS): sh*t, alright, kill Claude, any means necessary

 

Roman: Got it.

 

Roman hangs the phone up and watches the Stinger speed into an empty building and break the glass and start driving through

 

Roman: sh*t, this guy can drive a car. Alright, lets see what you've really got

 

Roman picks his speed up and shifts gear and sees a large ramp upahead and speeds up it and smashes through the second floor window and starts driving along the soon-to-be-finished building, as he picks up his speed further the wood starts to splinter underneath the car, he smashes out the glass of the other side and the car starts nose-diveing as it lands on the bumper and Claude speeds past it, and clips it with the back of the Stinger and starts loseing control

 

Roman: (Trying to re-start the car up after stalling it) sh*t! He's gonna get away

 

The Stinger continues losing control and eventually spins over and lands on top of a bunch of barells as the car starts smoking

 

Roman: (Grabs his Mac10 and gets out the Sentinel) Your done Claude

 

Roman starts opening fire on the Stinger and a bullet hits a barrell as oil explodes out of it and the car and barells explode, and the impact knocks Roman back and he falls over. Roman gets up and looks at the flameing wreck as workmen start rushing over, Roman runs over to a high wall and jumps over it and starts running away.

 

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Thats the end of Chapter 9, now I'm tired as hell and gonna sleep colgate.gif Hope you enjoyed it, I'll get Chapter 10 up sometime soon.

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this chapter was crazy nice job yet agian Zimmy.

 

hey i was wonderin... i don't remeber a Claude Speed in any GTA's even though the name sounds familiar... Is he a fictional character that you made up? or is he from GTA?

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this chapter was crazy nice job yet agian Zimmy.

 

hey i was wonderin... i don't remeber a Claude Speed in any GTA's even though the name sounds familiar... Is he a fictional character that you made up? or is he from GTA?

Claude is the silent protagonist (main player) from GTA III, set in 2001

 

R* never game him a name untill he was mentioned as being "Claude" in GTA San Andreas (where catalina would phone CJ and brag about Claude's manhood being bigger than his or something)

 

the full name (Claude Speed) was the name of the silent protagonist in GTA 2 which was set in 2013. Some people believe he is the same person (he looks very much the same) and I'm one of the people who do believe he is the same person, so instead of just calling him Claude I call him Claude Speed

 

Some people like to call him "Fido" because Maria always called him that as a pet-name in GTA III

 

Hope that clears things up for you and thanks for the reply biggrin.gif

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I havent read all the chapters but that last chapter was good nice work.

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this chapter was crazy nice job yet agian Zimmy.

 

hey i was wonderin... i don't remeber a Claude Speed in any GTA's even though the name sounds familiar... Is he a fictional character that you made up? or is he from GTA?

Claude is the silent protagonist (main player) from GTA III, set in 2001

 

R* never game him a name untill he was mentioned as being "Claude" in GTA San Andreas (where catalina would phone CJ and brag about Claude's manhood being bigger than his or something)

 

the full name (Claude Speed) was the name of the silent protagonist in GTA 2 which was set in 2013. Some people believe he is the same person (he looks very much the same) and I'm one of the people who do believe he is the same person, so instead of just calling him Claude I call him Claude Speed

 

Some people like to call him "Fido" because Maria always called him that as a pet-name in GTA III

 

Hope that clears things up for you and thanks for the reply biggrin.gif

ohhhh... wow, that cleared up a lot of things for me now!! wow.gif lol i thought the main character in GTA 3 is Tommy Vercetti... but now that you've told me, I agree with you Zimmy. Thanks man appreciate it cookie.gifcookie.gif

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Thanks for the replies biggrin.gif I'm glad people are beginning to hate Claude, he's on the "bad side" of the story colgate.gif Here's Chapter 10. I've gone back and started re-writing some of the previous FanFic's I wrote 1 and 2 years ago so I can post them after this one is done, It's the same characters just diffrent times and diffrent places.

 

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Chapter 10: 'Crazy' Jack Cassidy

July 17TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [3.18pm]

Tony runs into the Casino as Sirens can still be heard in the near distance, he looks around the place and remembers all the sh*t that went down here with him & Alan in 1995. He starts wandering around and sees the place is having work done to it, but it looks like the place has been untouched for a while and some vases are on the floor, broken along with some back windows smashed out. Tony makes his way to an elevator and presses the button with a paper label over it saying 'Office'. He goes up to the top floor and gets out the elevator and walks down the corridoor and sees the a door slightly open and pushes it open and looks around inside

 

Tony: (Looking around) Hello?...Anybody here?...I'm looking for a man named Donald

 

Donald: (Cowering behind the bookcase) W..Who are you?

 

Donald slowly comes out from behind the bookcase and looks like he hasn't washed or shaved in a week

 

Tony: A man named Phil sent me to get a Minigun from you

 

Donald: I don't know anyone named Phil

 

Tony: Well he knows you, now can I get a Minigun and be on my way?

 

Donald: Are you Mafia?

 

Tony: No

 

Donald: What are you then?

 

Tony: I'm a guy, sent here by a guy named Phil and Tommy Vercetti to g--

 

Donald: Tommy Vercetti!? You are Mafia! Get out of here!

 

Donald panics and rushes over to his desk and shakingly rumages through a draw and finds a pistol as Tony walks over while Donald is trying to load it

 

Tony: (Pushes Donald's arms down) Listen, I'm not Mafia - I'm just on a job from Tommy and Phil to get a Minigun to break out Phil's brother...What was his name...(Thinks)...Jake...No, Jack, thats it

 

Donald: P..Phil & Jack?

 

Tony: Yeah

 

Donald: 'Crazy' Jack Cassidy!?

 

Tony: I dunno, his brother has no arms though

 

Donald: Come with me

 

Donald drops the gun and leads Tony out the office as they walk down some stairs untill about the 4TH floor and come to a vault like you'd see in a bank

 

Donald: I have a Minigun in here (Donald hears a chopper above the building) ...Are you in trouble?

 

Tony: Breaking Phil & Jack out the psych ward

 

Donald: (Spins the vault handle and opens the vault) Maybe you can help me when your done with this

 

Tony: I don't think so pal

 

Tony and Donald enter into the vault and Donald moves some empty boxes aside where a Minigun is resting against a steel shelf

 

Tony: (Bends over and picks it up) I'll be on my way now

 

Tony leaves the Vault and begins walking down the corridoor as he sees 3 men at the end carrying silencers

 

Tony: "What the f*ck" (Hides behind the corner of the wall and watches them moveing around)

 

Donald: (Approaches Tony) I thought you were leaving

 

Tony: (Whispering) Theres 3 people with silencers down there

 

Donald: (Starts paceing back and forth) It seems they've come back for me, I'm so screwed

 

Donald slumps against the wall and slowly slides down the wall and sits down

 

Tony: Whose come for you?

 

Donald: The Yakuza. I've been betrayed by an ex-client and a bent cop

 

Voice (OS): I see him!

 

Donald: You've gotta help me...please

 

Tony: ...Tsk, alright

 

The Yakuza members run down the corridoor and turn round the corner as Tony is standing there holding the Minigun at waist level and he starts opening fire on them as blood and bone explode all over the walls and all over Tony and Donald

 

Tony: (Wipes the blood from his eyes) Anyone else coming?

 

Donald: I should think so (Wipes the blood from his already dirty green T-shirt)

 

Tony: Tsk, alright - come with me, and take this

 

Tony unstraps the M60 from his back and hands it to Donald

 

Tony: You ever use one of these?

 

Donald: No, don't be silly

 

Tony: Well your about to

 

Tony starts jogging down the corridoor carrying the Minigun with Donald shortly behind with the M60 as more Yakuza are entering the casino.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Vice City, Florida [6.04pm]

Roman escaped from the flaming wreck in the Industrial Area and stole a car and quickly made his way back to Prawn Island and parked outside of Joey's estate and ran inside, and sees a bunch of Leone members laying dead on the floor

 

Roman: Oh man, what happened here

 

Roman starts looking through rooms and sees no one in sight so he runs back out of the estate and sees some Yakuza Stingers in the distance approaching Prawn Island

 

Roman: sh*t, this cayn' be good

 

Roman runs back down the steps and gets into the car and speeds off the other way as The Yakuza cars reach Prawn Island.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Vice City, Florida [6.04pm]

Police and Firemen are all over the Industrial Area trying to put out the huge fire caused by Claude Speed's Stinger, as Officer's are talking to workmen about what they saw, The wood in the half built building collapses and the building caves in crushing many workmen, officers and firemen in it's path

 

Officer: Ho-lee sh*t, call for back up, we need ambulances here, now!

 

A young officer runs over to his car radio

 

Officer: Calling a--

 

The officer notices a man crawl out from the wreckage of the collapsed building and he looks almost un-scratched as he stands to his feet and looks around

 

Officer #2: Thats the suspect! Get him!

 

Claude makes a run for it but the cops get in their cars and circle him in and get out their cars and slowly box him in, as he has no weapon he's forced to try and fight his way out, but after a few officers take a beating they tackle him to the ground and handcuff him

 

Officer #2: Ray, get over here, we got him

 

Ray Machowski approaches the officer, smoking a cigerette and wearing a brown suit with a badge on the left pocket reading 'Detective Ray Machowski VCPD'

 

Ray: Good work, now hand him over, I'll take him in myself

 

Officer #2: But sir, I can--

 

Ray: I said I'll take him in myself...now hand him over

 

Officer #2: ...Yes sir

 

The officer picks up Claude who puts up no struggle and passes him to Machowski as he pushes him over to his squad car and shoves him into the passenger seat in the front, while he gets into the front seat and drives off

 

Ray: (Throws his dead cigerette out the window and lights up a new one) What were you thinking kid!?, I thought you were a good driver

 

Claude turns his head to the side and looks out the window

 

Ray: Alright, come here

 

Ray stops the car and uncuffs Claude as Claude flexes his arms and moves his neck around

 

Ray: Now listen, no more of that carelessness bullsh*t, you got it?, I talked to Waka-gashira Ichigo earlier this morning for you about having Donald whacked, he gave it the greenlight and Donald should be leaving Las Venturas in a bodybag as we speak

 

Claude turns his head and faces Ray and smirks

 

Ray: Now get outta here and make sure you take that fat f*ck Toni down, that guy deserves everything he has coming to him

 

Claude nods and gets out the police car and runs off as Ray drives away as Claude's phone starts ringing and Claude picks it up

 

Ichigo (OS): Get to Prawn Island, I've sent some men over there. Toni's out of the picture, nows our best chance to strike on Joey Leone

 

Claude hangs the phone up and runs into a street and jumps infront of a car and yanks the door open and grabs the guy inside and he pulls a gun on Claude

 

Guy: You bess' know who you jackin foo', Now get tha' f*ck outta her' befo' I cap yo ass

 

Claude grabs the guys arm and hyper extends it against the edge of the door untill he drops the gun and he screams in pain as Claude bends over and picks it up and aims it at the guys head and nods for him to get out the car

 

Guy: Aiight..Aiight fine, take i'

 

The guy steps out the car and Claude gets in and speeds off.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Vice City, Florida [6.10pm]

Sweet & CJ have been relaxing in sunny Vice City ever since taking back The Grove, and Los Santos as their own. They know no one has the balls to try any sh*t against them anymore, as they've proved that they are the true kings of Los Santos for the past 10 years.

 

CJ: (Relaxing on a waterbed in a pool at the hotel) Ay Swee', we outta drinks and thees' lovely ladies are gettin' mighty thirsty

 

The ladies resting on the sunbeds at the pool giggle as Sweet comes out in his swimming trunks and a towel over his shoulder

 

Sweet: Well we cayn' have thees' fine ladies goin thirsty, CJ, go get some drinks

 

CJ: (Pulls up his shades) Nawh homie, S'yo turn to go

 

Sweet: Ah man, aiight, aiight, I'm goin (Looks at the ladies) I'll be back ina bit ladies

 

Sweet heads out the back of the hotel and gets into his rented car -- a Greenwood, and pulls away and starts driving towards the liquor store

 

Sweet: (Pulls up to the store and sees It's closed) Aw man, sh*t

 

Sweet reverses and pulls away

 

Sweet: Now I gotta fine' anotha' sto'

 

Sweet continues driving down a street and turns a corner as a guy jumps infront of his car

 

Sweet: (Brakes) What tha f*ck crazy nigguh'!!??

 

The man comes round and grabs the door handle and Sweet grabs the Pistol from the passenger seat as the man opens the door and Sweet aims at his head

 

Sweet: You bess' know who you jackin foo', Now get tha' f*ck outta her' befo' I cap yo ass

 

The man grabs Sweet's arm and bends it against the edge of the door

 

Sweet: (Hears his bone break) ARGH! (Grabs his arm)

 

The man bends over and grabs Sweet's pistol and aims it at his head

 

Sweet: ...Aiight..Aiight fine, take i'

 

Sweet steps out the car and the man gets into the Greenwood and speeds off

 

Sweet: (Holding his arm) Son ova' bitch

 

Sweet releases his arm and reaches into his pocket and takes out his cellphone and dials CJ

 

Sweet: Bro I juss' got jacked, I think he broke ma' arm...Aiight...Ye' see you 'den

 

Sweet hangs the phone up and walks over to the curb and sits down.

 

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July 17TH 2002: Las Venturas, San Andreas [3.44pm]

Tony & Donald have made they're way down to the Second Floor of Love's Casino as they have heard Yakuza running around the place for the past 10 miniutes, they've been trying to stay safe and silent as they moved around

 

Donald: (Breathing Heavy) So thats basicly my story in a nutshell

 

Tony: (Peeks round the corner of a wall and sees It's clear and continue walking) So, this ex-client of yours killed the head of the Yakuza under your orders, and now he's working so closely with them, and they don't suspect a thing?

 

Donald: Thats right, and he and this bent cop wan't my head on a stick so that I don't blow whatever gig they're trying to perform in Vice

 

Tony: Alright man, after hearing that, I'll help you out as much as I can, (Stops and peeks round another corner and sees 2 Yakuza standing guard at the staircase) Now's your chance to test out your shooting skills, go for it

 

Donald: Wh..But...Ok

 

Donald peeks round the corner and sees 2 Yakuza members faceing away from each other at the Staircase leading to ground-level and jumps out and starts fireing at them but his aim goes astray and he starts hitting the lights out as the Yakuza members dive out the way

 

Tony: Nice going, now we're in the dark

 

Donald: Sorry

 

Tony walks out and hears the Yakuza members blindly running towards them down the hallway and he starts blindly fireing with the minigun at them. He stops fireing and the movements have stopped as he and Donald continue making they're way to the staircase, they tread over limbs, bones & blood along the way. They make their way down the stairs and into the casino floor and see a couple of Yakuza's standing guard at the door, as Tony sits down for a second and reloads the Minigun

 

Tony: You take em out while I reload for any that might be outside, oh, and sorry there is probaly a bunch of SWAT members waiting for us aswell

 

Donald: Maybe it wasn't such a good idea to go with you

 

Tony: (Laughs) Now hurry it up

 

Donald runs out and starts fireing at the Yakuza members and hits them all before they have a chance to counter-fire

 

Donald: Aha! Did you see that! (Turns and faces Tony) I'm a natural born killer!

 

Tony: (Sees some Yakuza men coming in through the door) Then kill them too, then

 

Donald: Ahh! (Runs back behind the wall)

 

Tony stands up and picks the Minigun up and comes out from behind the wall and fires at them all, wasting them away within a second

 

Tony: Stay here for a second, OK?

 

Donald: Whatever you say!

 

Tony runs over to the big double doors and looks out the windows and sees 3 Yakuza cars with members waiting outside carrying Pistols and Katana's. Tony hoists the Minigun up to chest level and blows out the windows, as he starts fireing at the cars and blowing them up in the blink of an eye, sending all the Yakuza members flying as Tony hears fireing behind him

 

Tony: (Turns around) sh*t! Donald!

 

Tony runs back over to the wall and sees Donald standing over 2 Yakuza bodies holding his M60 over his shoulder

 

Donald: I'm a certified 'badass'...Is that a cool moto?

 

Tony: Yeah, whatever...lets go

 

Tony and Donald run out the Casino and see a bunch of dead SWAT members across the street, and Tommy is standing outside the psych ward fireing at 2 SWAT choppers with his M60, as Tony and Donald run over

 

Tony: (Starts opening fire on the choppers with the Minigun) Sorry It took so long

 

Tommy: (Shouting over the gun fire) Don't worry about it, Shoot these pricks down and move it

 

Tony and Tommy continue shooting at the SWAT choppers which are returning fire but to no avail, as they both begin to smoke and spin out of control

 

Tommy: Lets go get Jack, and get outta here

 

Donald: We can use one of my choppers

 

Tommy: Alright, you Donald?

 

Donald: Yes, nice to meet you

 

Tony: (Runs into the building) Come on, I can hear sirens all over

 

Tommy and Donald run into the building along with Tony as they make their way back down to the bottom of the place where Phil is sitting against the wall near the entrance door, he gets up and follows them as they make their way to the door, and Tony hoists the Minigun up and aims it at the huge locks and fires it, as it turns black and Tony stops fireing, Phil boots the door twice and it comes up and they go inside

 

Phil: Crazy Jack! Yeah heh!

 

Jack is chained to the wall with a bag over his head, and a nose hole to breath. Tommy shoots the chains off as Jack stands up and Tony undoes the straight jacket as Jack's arms come free and he takes the bag off

 

Jack: I was in ther' too long

 

Jack tucks his long blonde hair behind his ears and hugs Phil

 

Tommy: Sorry to spoil the reunion, but we've gotta get outta here. Now.

 

Jack lets go of Phil as Tommy and Tony lead Donald, Phil and Jack out of the psych ward and outside, as sirens begin to get closer they run over to the Casino

 

Tony: Theres still Yakuza on some floors, so watch out as you go

 

Donald: No, we can take the Chopper out in the hanger, we don't have to run all the way to the top

 

Tommy: Well what are you waiting for, lead us to it

 

Donald: Ah, right!

 

Donald leads everyone out back as they all enter into a small hanger which has no roof, and they get inside the chopper

 

Donald: Does anyone know how to fly?

 

Tony: My friend Carl taught me a little, so I'll give it a whirl

 

Tony gets into the front seat and after pressing a bunch of wrong buttons finally takes off into the sky, moving a little uneasy and joggy, but on they're way to Vice City.

 

Tony: Hey, how come they call you 'Crazy' Jack?

 

Jack: (Grins) Ever eat a man's heart?

 

Tony: Oh god

 

Donald: Actually, yes!.

 

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Thats the end of Chapter 10, hope you enjoyed it. The rest of the story will all be in Vice City starting from 11, and I think this part of the story will come to an end at around Chapter 13-15, and I'll move onto the next part. Thanks for reading!.

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