-/TNT\- Posted November 27, 2006 Share Posted November 27, 2006 Thats a pretty nice trailer b18! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 27, 2006 Author Share Posted November 27, 2006 Sinful: It's GTA anything can happen! Also they didn't "find" the boat, they stole it TNT: Thanks Everyone: Should I do chapter 11, or try Chapter 1 video? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewaytahgo2 Posted November 28, 2006 Share Posted November 28, 2006 Sinful: It's GTA anything can happen! Also they didn't "find" the boat, they stole it TNT: Thanks Everyone: Should I do chapter 11, or try Chapter 1 video? go in order or it wont make too much sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted November 28, 2006 Share Posted November 28, 2006 Chap 1 vid!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 28, 2006 Author Share Posted November 28, 2006 Will do after school, sitting through a class of Computing atm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenc938 Posted November 28, 2006 Share Posted November 28, 2006 Damn. I stop reading for a couple days and there is a new chapter and two new videos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 28, 2006 Author Share Posted November 28, 2006 Damnit, I can't get rid of the speedometer Any suggestions? TNT: Num 3 don't work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick Papagiorgio Posted November 28, 2006 Share Posted November 28, 2006 Great story/videos B18. Masterpiece! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 28, 2006 Author Share Posted November 28, 2006 I wouldn't go as far as a masterpiece, and about Chapter 10 everyone, I havn't seen a James Bond movie Don't stop your story Gman91! @everyone: I can't continue until i can get rid of damn speedometer, so I will continue typing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted November 28, 2006 Share Posted November 28, 2006 Dunno about 3.0, but in 2.8 you just gotta go to Text Output and disable everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 29, 2006 Author Share Posted November 29, 2006 (edited) Ok, I took a rest from the fancy stuff, gone back to my roots Chapter 11: Tarkers They land at the Mericaion International Airport Cesar: We here! Tim: So where to? Cesar: Well we have to be careful, there is a gang called the Tarkers. They were here back in 1990, but not many were, but there might be more now. Claude: Let’s just go find a hotel Cesar: Ok ese They walk on to the street and look for a taxi. After five minutes they still don’t see one Tim: f*ck this Tim walks over to a Clover. He opens the door Tim: Out now! Man: ¿Qué? Tim: What? Cesar: He is speaking Spanish! Let me handle this Cesar walks up to him Cesar: Fuera del pendejo del coche! The man gets out and runs off Tim: I should get to a hospital and get my arm checked out Cesar: I’ll drive you, everyone else, meet at this Hotel Cesar hands them a small card Cesar: Here’s a map so you don’t get lost Vic: Ok, stop treating us like you’re our mother! Vic takes the map and starts walking down the street Cesar: Let’s go ese! Cesar and Tim hop in the Clover and drive off Meanwhile… Vic: You guys coming? Claude: I would prefer a car A Rumpo drives past Vic: Fine Vic runs up and pulls the driver out Driver: Hey man, get lost! Vic: You speak English? Driver: If you haven’t noticed Vic: Well this is a jacking Vic knocks him out Vic: Claude, are you happy? Claude: Is anyone happy? Claude, Tommy and Woozie walk over and hop in the back of the Rumpo Vic pulls out a map Vic: It would help if I had a navigator! Tommy gets out and sits in the front with Vic. Tommy takes the map from Vic Tommy: Just head up this street and… around that corner Tommy points at an intersection Vic: I have a better way Vic accelerates towards a small ramp next to a park Tommy: What the f*ck are you doing? They hit the ramp and go flying through the park. A Tarker notices this Tarker: Trespassers! The Tarker opens fire with his Ak-47 Tommy: sh*t! The Rumpo lands on the ground and rolls onto it’s roof Vic: We have to hurry They crawl out of the Rumpo and stand up. Tommy is staring straight down the barrel of a Colt Python Tommy: Son of a bitch! Tarker 1: Don’t move! Claude kicks the back door open. He looks up at what is happening Claude: sh*t! Tarker 2: Come with us! The Tarkers walk over to two white admirals Tarker 1: You 3 in the car! The Tarker points at Claude, Tommy and Woozie Tommy: Fine Claude, Tommy and Woozie hop into the admiral Vic: What about me? Tarker 1: You’re going somewhere else! Vic: Like where? Tarker 2: Interrogation! Vic: Where are they going? Tarker 1: To be executed! Vic: What did they do? It was my fault that we came on your “property” Tarker 2: Shutup! The Tarker hits him over the head with his gun Vic: Son of a bit… Vic falls onto the floor Back in the Clover… Tim: How far away is this damn hospital? Cesar: Not too far now ese! Just alittle longer! Cesar slides the Clover round the corner Tim: So this is where you were born? Cesar: Yeh, also where I made a bomb Tim: You made a bomb? Cesar: Yeh! An Old friend helped me, he moved to Liberty City in 1997 Tim: Who was it? Cesar handbrakes around another corner Cesar: His name was 8 Ball Tim: So why were you at his place when I first met you? Cesar: He went on vacation! I was just there because he asked me to look after the place Tim: Ok then, did you ever use the bomb? Cesar: No, It’s still hidden in the sewer somewhere Tim: Oh great, the sewer The car slides to a stop Cesar: Were here! Tim: Finally! Tim kicks the door open and runs out holding his arm Medic: ¿Es usted aceptable? Tim: Shutup! Tim runs into the hospital 30 minutes later Tim: Finally! Tim walks back out the door of the hospital Cesar: So what happened? Tim: How would I know? They used gas! Cesar: Well, let’s go then ese! Cesar reaches for the door when he hears a loud noise Tim: Oh great! They see a black cheetah speed down the road Cesar: Who is this pendejo? The car stops and a uzi is pointed out the window Tim: f*ck! They both dive behind the clover as the driver sprays lead at them Tim: sh*t! Cesar: This is where I come in handy! Cesar pulls a small sphere out of his pocket Tim: What’s that? Cesar: It’s a bomb ese! Cesar rolls it under the car. The driver notices it Driver: sh*t! The driver drops his guns onto the road and speeds off Tim: Well that worked well! Cesar: Take cover! Tim: Wh… The bomb goes off and throws the car right above Tim’s and Cesar’s heads Tim: sh*t! The car flies over them and lands right outside the hospital door Medic: Qué la cogida? Tim and Cesar get up off the floor Medic: Eso es él que estoy llamando a policía! Cesar: sh*t, let’s go! Tim: What did he say? Cesar: He’s calling the police! Tim: f*ck! Let’s go then They run across the street and look around for a vehicle Cesar: Over there! That motorbike! They run over to the motorbike and look at it Tim: Rager, what the f*ck is that? Cesar: It’s a motorbike, it's pretty speedy too! Tim: I’ll drive Cesar: Ok! They hop on the bike and accelerate as two police cars swerve around the corner Tim: This will be great!... Edited November 29, 2006 by blackadder18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted November 29, 2006 Share Posted November 29, 2006 Good chapter B18! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted November 29, 2006 Share Posted November 29, 2006 Despite some weird *translator* spanish errors, I liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 29, 2006 Author Share Posted November 29, 2006 Thanks, expect a few more chapters before I close off Part 2! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 29, 2006 Share Posted November 29, 2006 Nice chapter blackadder! Nice bombs too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 29, 2006 Share Posted November 29, 2006 Nice chapter B18, Those Tarker's seem like assholes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 29, 2006 Author Share Posted November 29, 2006 Lol, There will be a couple more chapters in Mericaion Then off to San Andreas! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serafim Posted November 30, 2006 Share Posted November 30, 2006 Rofl blackadder, I can't understand the spanish from the medic xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 1, 2006 Author Share Posted December 1, 2006 Yeh, stupid translator Anyway, for the Machinma, I'm gonna need voices Jobs: Voice Actors: If you sound like ANY of the original GTA Characters, send me a sample! Interiour Designer: As you know, many scenes take place in interiours that we never saw so I need someone to do them and get them ingame (Places like Inside the hospital and inside 8Balls/Cesar's House) IF you can do any of these, PM me or post in this topic, Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 My voice suck. 'tho I could make some gang member or medic For the interiors, you could use lots of unused SA ones (e.g.: for Cesar's house, use B-Dup's [maybe modified] house...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 1, 2006 Author Share Posted December 1, 2006 Cesar's House is 8'Balls though, thats what I meant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 If you need a British accent, I'm sure I could lend you my pipes, I need to buy a new microphone first, old one is busted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 2, 2006 Author Share Posted December 2, 2006 Tony: Can you imitate any of the characters roughly? Everyone: I'm making a skin foir Tommy, one for Tim, and one for Tommy, Tim has darker hair a Black shirt and dark jeans. I havn't done Tommy yet, but he will probably be the Mr Vercetti Model Re-tex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewaytahgo2 Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 Tony: Can you imitate any of the characters roughly? Everyone: I'm making a skin foir Tommy, one for Tim, and one for Tommy, Tim has darker hair a Black shirt and dark jeans. I havn't done Tommy yet, but he will probably be the Mr Vercetti Model Re-tex i think you should only have him in the suit wen he being buisness-like, when he's in action he should have some kind of street clothes, like his original clothes from VC. but you should give him an updated look, i always thought tommy would look cool in a red hawaii shirt.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 3, 2006 Author Share Posted December 3, 2006 What a coincidence, I made Tim have a red hawaiin shirt I will post Flashback 4 and pictures of Tim soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewaytahgo2 Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 hey, can u get on msn? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 3, 2006 Author Share Posted December 3, 2006 Flashback 4: The Hit 1993, Liberty City Toni walks into Salvatore’s Office Salvatore: Toni! Toni: Mr Leone! They shake hands and both sit down Salvatore: So how is everything, how’s your mother? Toni: She’s fine Salvatore: Ok, enough chit chat, I have more important stuff to talk about Toni: Like what Mr Leone? Salvatore holds up a photo of a man Salvatore: He’s the president, Mr A.Crack, I want him dead! Toni: Woah, Mr Leone, don’t you think that’s a little to dangerous? And why do you want him dead Salvatore: He’s been threatening to put me on death row, I can’t believe it, after what I have done for this city! Toni: You don’t need to kill him though do you? Salvatore: Yes I do Toni Salvatore holds a match to the photo, it burns slowly Salvatore: Don’t come back until he is dead, good news for you, he is arriving in a few hours to discuss my fate to the press Toni: See you later Toni stands up and walks out the room Salvatore: I knew I could trust him Toni walks outside. He hesitates before getting into a Leone Sentinel. He then heads for the Ferry station Toni arrives at the Ferry Station. He gets out his car and walks over to the booth Toni: One ticket to Staunton Island Booth Operator: That will be 10 dollars Toni hands the booth operator some money Booth Operator: Enjoy your ride Toni gets back in his car and drives over to the ferry Ferry Operator: Everyone on board! The ferry slowly moves away from land Meanwhile… Onboard a Shamal Crack: How much longer? Pilot: We are nearly there sir! Crack: About time! Crack sits down Crack: This Salvatore figure, he must go! Bodyguard: Yes Sir! Crack: So While I’m on my way to the press meeting, you head to his house! Bodyguard: I’m a bodyguard, not a hitman Crack pulls out a pistol Crack: You want to die? Bodyguard: No Crack: Then kill him! Crack shoves the pistol in his pocket Pilot: Were here! The Shamal touches down at the airport In the Leone Sentinel… Toni: Damn red lights, will be the death of me one day! Just then the car door opens Toni: Who the f*ck? Yardie: Get out fool! Toni is dragged out of his car and thrown onto the road Toni: I knew I should have driven something else Yardie: This is our property fool! The Yardie points a pistol at Toni Toni: Point that thing away from me! Just then a man grabs the Yardie from behind. Toni gets off the road Toni: Who are you? Man: I’m your average Joe Toni: And what are you wearing? Man: I’m a member of Avenging Angel, The Avenging Angels are coming! Toni: Yeh whatever, thanks, here… Avenging Angel: No need to pay me, my services are free The Avenging Angel knocks out the man and walks away Toni: I owe them Toni hails a taxi and hops in Toni: Francis International! Taxi Driver: Ok! The Taxi driver speeds off towards the airport Toni: So how much will this cost? Taxi Driver: Ooh about 6 dollars! Toni: Ok They reach the Staunton/Shoreside Lift Bridge Taxi Driver: This is ridiculous, they shouldn’t of put a bridge here in the first place! Toni: I’m in a hurry here Taxi Driver: Well, theres a small ramp over there, if you pay me $20 I’ll do it for you Toni hands him 30 dollars Taxi Driver: Thanks! The taxi driver reverses and lines up Taxi Driver: Ready? Toni: Just go! The Taxi driver pushes down on the gas. The Taxi lurches forward towards the ramp Taxi Driver: Hold on! They hit the ramp and go flying across. They land right behind a Yakuza Stinger Taxi Driver: That was close! The Taxi Driver continues towards the airport Outside the Shamal... Crack: Put it in the car damnit, I’m supposed to be there in 5 minutes! Bodyguard: I’m going as fast as I can sir! Crack: Well it ain’t fast enough! The Bodyguard continues to load the car Outside the airport... Taxi Driver: That will be 6 dollars Toni opens the door and gets out Taxi Driver: You didn’t pay! Toni: I already did! The taxi driver looks at the 30 dollars Toni gave him Taxi Driver: Ohhh Toni runs towards the carpark Toni: I hope I’m not too late Just before he reaches the carpark, he sees a Patriot driving towards him Toni: Mr President! The Patriot stops. Toni walks up to the patriot Toni: Hello Mr President Crack: Well hello citizen of Liberty City! Toni: Let me drive you, I will show you the city Crack: Well… Ok, I’ll do it Bodyguard: What do you want me to do about Salvatore? Crack: Kill him! Crack steps out of the Patriot Crack: So, What’s your name? Toni: It’s Joe The Patriot drives off Crack: So where’s your car? Toni: I don’t have one Crack: I thought you sai… Toni grabs Crack Crack: You asshole! I’m the president Toni: I have two words for you Crack: What are they? Toni: Salvatore Leone! Crack: Ha! My Bodyguard is on his way to kill him now! Toni: You asshead! Toni shoots Crack in the back three times Toni: sh*t! I have to hurry! Toni runs into the carpark and looks for a car. He spots a Yakuza Stinger and runs up to it. A Gang member is sleeping in the passenger seat Toni: Damnit! Toni shoots the gang member through the windshield. He climbs in through the broken windshield and sits in the driver seat Toni: I hope no cops see me Toni speeds off out of the carpark. He drives across the Staunton/Shoreside Lift bridge. A police officer notices the dead Yakuza Member Police Officer: Freeze right there! Toni keeps driving. The Police officer gets in his car and turns on his siren Toni: Damnit! Toni drives to the Ferry Station and gets out of his car. He sprints over to the booth Toni: One ticket please! The booth operator hands him a ticket Booth Operator: The Ferry just left, it will be back in a few minutes. That will be 10 dollars Toni: I don’t have that time! Toni hands the ticket back and runs towards the ocean. He notices a Speeder Toni: Excellent He jumps off the edge and lands on it Toni: I don’t have much time The Speeder rushes across the ocean. He heads towards Salvatore’s house Toni: Nearly there Toni beaches his boat and jumps off the Speeder. He runs across the beach and up the steep slope towards Salvatore’s house. He reaches the top and see’s the Patriot Toni: sh*t I’m too late! Toni runs inside Salvatore’s house to see the Bodyguard holding a pistol to Salvatore’s head Bodyguard: Your going down! Salvatore: I have sent one of my men to kill the president! Bodyguard: Crap! Where is he? Salvatore: He’s right behind you! The bodyguard turns around to see Toni holding a pistol at his head Toni: Don’t move Bodyguard: sh*t! It’s you! From the airport! Toni: That’s right Bodyguard: You’ve killed him already? Toni: As soon as you left him Bodyguard: sh*t! Toni: And now, so no one knows, I have to shoot you! The Bodyguard drops his gun Bodyguard: Please don’t kill me! I Don’t wanna die! Toni: That’s what they all say Tnoi fires his four bullets into the bodyguard. The Bodyguard collapses onto the floor Salvatore: I can’t thankyou anymore for this Toni, your like a son to me Toni: Thankyou Mr Leone Salvatore: I suggest you get away from here, a lot of people will think it was the Leone’s, you know how this city thinks Toni: Yes I do Mr Leone Salvatore: So leave this city until everything cools down alittle Toni: Ok Mr Leone. See you around sometime Salvatore: Bye Toni walks out the door Salvatore: That kid has a future around here... I'm not really happy about this chapter, but I don't want to write it again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rashon. Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 Lol. Mr. Crack. Great chapter, blackadder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 I liked the Flashback. You should have improved the ending, but it's ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 3, 2006 Author Share Posted December 3, 2006 I thought about R.C Hole from LCS then thought about a ass joke Anyway, I'm still working on Chapter 1 Video, but don't expect it very soon, I have no voice actors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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