Blackadder. Posted November 21, 2006 Author Share Posted November 21, 2006 I want it to, but I'm facing the same problem with Chapter 7, I keep writing, then not liking it, and deleting massive chunks, those 2 chapters should tide you over though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Bah, just post it no matter what, we won't kill you. much..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 I like both, real cool way of making Claude audible (Claudible lol). Don't listen to Brutuz he really has a motive to kill yuo if the chapter ain't good. If you are deleting chunks of it all the time, why not thinking of writing the whole chapter over? Tis usually the best way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 22, 2006 Author Share Posted November 22, 2006 I will hopefully have Chapter 10 done b the end of the week, I have alot of school sh*t happening, and I'm falling behind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 I will hopefully have Chapter 10 done b the end of the week, I have alot of school sh*t happening, and I'm falling behind Don't let the forum take over your life, that is a rule. Take school seriously, the whole forum will still be here, you career wont lol. By the way, I am falling behind on school work too and it is exams season. We will wait at the beaches... PS: I think you should get Wall Rider going man, it might turn out even better than this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 23, 2006 Author Share Posted November 23, 2006 Phew, got the science thing done, but now I have another thing Don't expect Chapter 10 until Weekend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted November 23, 2006 Share Posted November 23, 2006 I helped you with that Health thing, so you get a mew chapter ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 23, 2006 Author Share Posted November 23, 2006 More than one page I have to do like, 5 more pages Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 Hurry up with the next chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 24, 2006 Author Share Posted November 24, 2006 (edited) It's shorter than others, but I havn't been feeling very well latley, anyway, this will do Chapter 10: Flight to Mericaion They are sitting in the Shamal Cesar: Shouldn’t one of us be in cockpit? Claude: Relax, I put it on autopilot Just then the aircraft shakes violently Tim: What the f*ck was that? Cesar walks over to the window and looks out Cesar: sh*t, we got two pendejos chasing us! Tim: Get some weapons Vic: From where? They blew up the bus! Tim: Oh sh*t Tim looks through the bathroom. He opens a cabinet and finds a small grapple gun Tim walks out of the bathroom Tim: I’ll be back soon Tim opens the door of the Shamal Cesar: What are you doing ese? Tim: Saving us Tim shoots the grapple gun at one of the Rustlers Cesar: See you soon! Tim presses the retract button and goes flying up towards the Rustler. He grabs onto the wing of the Rustler and climbs up to the cockpit Tim: Guess who! He smashes the cockpit open with his gun Carl: Someone will be sleeping with the fishes! Tim: What the fu… Carl climbs up and kicks Tim. Tim falls backwards but manages to grab onto the wing Tim: Motherf*cker! Tim climbs up again Carl: I should of finished your father! Tim: You attacked him? Carl: Yes! I wanted to kill him personally Tim: Why? Carl: He was the owner of Vice City! I needed him out for control! Tim: Well you’re not getting that control! Tim kicks Carl in the chest. Carl slides over the side and hangs on Carl: Asshole! Tim stomps on Carl’s hand Carl: Motherf*cker! Carl lands in the ocean Tim: Now I have to get to Mericaion Tim fires his grapple gun at the Shamal. He presses the retract button and is on his way back when he hears a loud noise Tim: What the f*ck? He looks to his left and sees a Migo loaded with one missile. Vic opens the door for Tim Tim: Vic, get everyone off the plane now! Vic: Why? Tim: Just do it! Vic: Fine Vic walks back into the plane. The rocket fires it’s missile Tim: NOW VIC! Tim looks at the door and sees everyone jump out of the plane into the ocean Tim: I’ll be there in a second! Tim lets his line go slack and swings around the Shamal. He then detaches the cord and flies upwards in the air. The missile hits the Shamal and blows it up Cesar: What is he doing? Vic: Why you asking me? Tim then fires his grapple gun at the Migo. He retracts the line and climbs onto the Migo Tim: Surprise! The pilot suddenly makes a hard left turn. Tim grabs onto the cockpit Tim: sh*t! He pulls out his gun and aims it at the pilot. He is just about to fire when he recognizes who is the Pilot. It is John Wilson Tim: John you bastard! The cockpit is pierced as John shoots at Tim John: You are tricked so easy! Tim: You weren’t dead in that seat? John: No! John laughs at Tim Tim: Well you’re gonna die in this seat! John: Oh really John looks forward again and sees a Hydra heading straight for them John: What the f*ck? Tim shoots at the controls and jumps off John: You bastard! Tim freefalls into the ocean John: I ain’t dieng like this! John jumps out after Tim Tim: sh*t! Tim lands in the ocean Tim: f*ck its cold! A boat then stops next to Tim Cesar: Hop aboard ese! Tim climbs onto the boat Vic: Is that your friend? Tim: No let’s ditch him, and you do realize there are five boats following us? Vic turns around and looks at the five boats Vic: Cesar, Go! Go! Go! Cesar: Ok ese! Cesar accelerates while Tim looks for any heavy weapons Vic: Can this thing go any faster? Cesar: I think this is top speed! Tim comes back with two M4’s Tim: This is all I could find Vic: I’ll take one Tommy: I’ll take the other They both take their guns and sit down at the back of the boat Tommy: Ready? Vic: Ready They hold up their guns at the following boats. Tim pulls out his pistol Claude: You are going to take a boat out with that? Tim: No, I’m going to board their boat Claude: I’ll help Tim: Get ready then Claude: I don’t have a pistol Tim: Use Vic’s then Claude walks over and picks up Vic’s pistol Tim: Tommy, Vic, open fire! Tommy and Vic open fire at the pursuing boats Tim: Keep at it! A boat then pulls up beside Tim’s. He sees the driver point a gun at them Tim: Claude, now! They jump onto the boat Boat Driver: Get off my boat! The boat driver shoots at Tim. He hits him in the shoulder Tim: f*ck! Claude, kill him! Claude pulls out Vic’s Equalizer. He points it at the driver Claude: Hey, don’t I know you? Boat Driver: No, you do not Claude: Ok, see you in hell! Claude shoots three bullets at the driver. All three hit him in the neck Tim: Nice Claude: What about the other boats? Tim sees some C4 hidden behind under the seat. Tim picks it up Claude: What are you doing with that? Tim plants it on the boat and pulls out a remote Tim: When I say, we are going to jump back onto our boat, ok? Claude: Ok Tim turns off the engine Tim: Now! They jump back onto the boat Cesar: Welcome back! Tim: Everybody take cover They all crouch down. Tim presses the trigger. A huge explosion is heard Vic: What the f*ck was that? Tim: Just some C4 Vic: Sweet! Tim: Now let’s just keep going Cesar: Mericaion, here we come! Oh, and try clicking the logo in the first post, you will be suprised Edited November 24, 2006 by blackadder18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 That looks good, even more for the trailer! That looked soooo good! Peds, here we come! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 24, 2006 Author Share Posted November 24, 2006 If anyone wants me to take a shot at Chapter 1 Video version, say so! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 I think it would be great. I'm sure the others will agree , so go ahead and do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 Loved the Flashback chapter, will read Chapter 10 when I'm not busy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 I loved that chapter Black! Can't wait for the next one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rashon. Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job, blackadder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 I'm still trying to get SA MP working if I can get it working I'll try to make some movies with a couple of friends Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 25, 2006 Author Share Posted November 25, 2006 (edited) Ok everyone, I'm preparing to shoot Chapter 1! EDIT: VC is being a bitch, don't expect it for awhile, I might take another shot at it tonight Edited November 25, 2006 by blackadder18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTA-MASTA 56 Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 (edited) When Will We Get The Video Of Chapter 1?? ( in your opinion ) Edited November 26, 2006 by GTA-MASTA 56 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 Probably not for awhile, I'm only just learning the ropes and Camhack is a bitch. Does anyone know a version of CamHack that DOESN'T have the speedometer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewaytahgo2 Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 hey, im learning the ropes for San Andreas Studio, & i wanted to know if i could help with stuff. im very new at it, but i love ur story. pm me if u wanna chat... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 Yo B18 I might try, I'll give you the seperate vids and you can put them as one, I might use The Sims 2 for parts of it as Its got the animations for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 thewaytahgo2: That would help, but only when we get up to the SA chapters Brutuz: I want to keep this top the GTA Engine as much as possible If VC will stop blue screening me then I'll try again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 Probably not for awhile, I'm only just learning the ropes and Camhack is a bitch. Does anyone know a version of CamHack that DOESN'T have the speedometer? I think that if you press a button (NUM 3 in my setup) the speedometer will go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 Is that for VC Camhack? Thanks then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewaytahgo2 Posted November 27, 2006 Share Posted November 27, 2006 I also have vice city for the PC. mabye i can learn about the stuff for that.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 27, 2006 Author Share Posted November 27, 2006 I fixed my Vice City! The problem was a sound issue, I switched the sound device and the crashes stopped! I will be using the LC Mod for the LC parts (If I get that far Anyway, I'm sure you will be happy to know that Flashback Video is on the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted November 27, 2006 Share Posted November 27, 2006 I can get GTA3 if you want, but it doesn't matter. Brutuz looks at old GTA3 cd in the corner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 27, 2006 Author Share Posted November 27, 2006 Finally done it! Longer than the other one High res soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted November 27, 2006 Share Posted November 27, 2006 Ok, readed all chapters now. Liked everything but... You know, I think the way they get the guns, C4 and the boat is all too easy... I mean, they're falling from the sky (btw, he grabbed the wing? What's that? SA mission? lol), and then there's an empty boat full of guns there?!? @logo video- can't download it... filefront anyone? @trailer- It was more like a teaser, but I liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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