GTA-MASTA 56 Posted November 16, 2006 Share Posted November 16, 2006 when will u giv us the new chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 17, 2006 Author Share Posted November 17, 2006 (edited) Its here! I think it's the longest chapter to date Chapter 8: Mansion Exfiltration Tim, Tommy, Claude and Vic are sitting on their chairs. Their hands are tied to the back of their chairs Guard: What are you doing in Vice? The guard punches Tommy in the stomach Tommy: I OWN VICE! The guard hits him on the head, knocking him unconscious Tim: You bastard! Guard: And who is this, the little… Tim kicks the guard in the shin Guard: You asshole! The guard hits Tim in the stomach and walks over to Vic Guard: So what are you doing in Vice? Vic: I’m an ex-marine, I can do whatever the hell I want! Guard: Wrong answer The guard pulls out knife Vic: What the f*ck man! The guard stabs Vic in the arm Vic: You asshole! Guard: Now tell me, what are you doing in Vice? The guard pulls out a gun and points it at Vic Vic: Go on you don’t have the balls! They all hear a gunshot Tim: Vic no! Tim looks over and sees the guard lying dead on the floor, his blood poring onto the concrete floor. Cesar and Woozie emerge out of the darkness Tim: I’ve never been happier to see you! Cesar: Don’t thank me yet ese, we still have to rid the mansion of every living thing Tim: Wait a minute, why wasn’t your gun silenced? Cesar: The silencer is broken, so I took it off Cesar pulls out a knife and cuts Tim’s hands free. Tim gets out of his chair and walks over to the dead guard Tim: So how did you know we needed your help? Woozie: We didn’t, we just managed to come down here and see you guys in trouble Vic: So how many guards did you take down? Woozie: We didn’t find many, you must of distracted most of them, we only took 3 down Vic: We have a lot of work to do then Tim walks into an office just outside of the interrogation room. He walks back with his M249 SAW Vic: Where did you get that? And for f*cks sake, let me go! Cesar walks over and cuts Vic free, he then cuts Claude free Claude: About time asshole Cesar: What was that pendejo? Tim: Alright, just calm down, the guns are in the room behind me, go get your weapons Tim walks over and cuts his dad free. He then shakes him to wake him up Tim: Wake up! Tommy slowly wakes up Tommy: Where am I? Tim: You’re in the mansion Tommy: Oh yeh Tommy stands up and heads straight for the office. He comes back with his M60. Meanwhile Vic and Claude have already got their guns back. Tim notices a cloth on Vic’s cut Tim: Where did you get that? Vic: There was a cloth in the office Tim: Alright then Tommy: What are we waiting for? Lets get those bastards! They arm their guns and walk up the steps out of the basement Guard: Hey who the fuc… Vic blows the guard in half with his Spaz 12 Tim: Hey by the way, how did you rig the shotgun to go off back outside before? Vic: I used a piece of string, any good ex-marine would know to tie string to their gun during a battle in case of capture Tommy: Shutup and go! They walk into the main stairwell Tim: Wow he has re designed this place Tommy: I don’t like it Just then a bullet whizzes past Tommy’s head Tommy: YOU WANT A PIECE OF ME? Tommy turns around and shoots 10 bullets into the guard. The guard slumps down the stairs and ends up at Tommy’s feet Vic: Nice shot Just then another two guards rush in Guards: Freeze! Don’t move! Tim: Make us Tim shoots his M249 SAW into the guard. The other guard watches his friend’s body fall to the floor lifelessly Guard: Oh no, I don’t wanna die! Vic hits him over the head with his shotgun. They then walk into the main room with the grand staircase to their left Woozie: Impressive Tommy: Thanks, I killed a guy and got this mansion back in ‘86 Vic: Wait here, I have to do something Vic runs out the front door Claude: What was that all about? Cesar: Dunno ese Cesar then sees someone on the floor above Cesar: Look out, someone on floor above us! The man runs into the main office Tim: Tommy, lets take care of this Tim and Tommy run up the stairs into the room. The man inside has a shotgun Man: Get back! Tim: No Tim steps forward, and gets shot in the leg. He falls onto the floor Man: You stay there! Tim: I can’t move you asshole! Man: I wasn’t talking to you Tommy: f*ck this! Tommy shoots blindly into the room. He walks in and turns the light on Man: You can’t stop me! Tommy sees that the man has body armour strapped on Tommy: f*cking hell The man strips off his body armour and picks up a baseball bat Man: Who are you? Tommy: No, who are you! Man: Noone talks like that to Toni Cipriani! Tommy: Who the f*ck is Toni Cipriani? Tony: You asked for it! Toni swings the bat at Tommy. It barely misses his head Tommy: You’re f*cking crazy! Tommy dodges another swing as he trys to find something to hit back with Toni: Don’t mess with the Cipriani’s! Tommy: Don’t mess with the Vercetti’s! After not being to find anything to use as a weapon, Tommy charges at Toni Tommy: ASSHOLE! Tommy collides with Toni and knocks him onto the floor Tommy: I said don’t mess with the Vercetti’s Toni: That’s it Toni pulls out a small pistol from his pocket Toni: I didn’t wanna have to do this! Just then they both hear a loud noise Tommy: What the f*ck All of a sudden a man on a PCJ 1000 rides into the office. He stops and shoots Toni in the leg Toni: Motherf*cker! The man then looks at Tommy, and takes off his helmet Tommy: What? Vic: Told you I had to do something Tommy: Thanks, I owe you They look back and see a 20 men dead Cesar: We did it ese! We cleared out the mansion! Tommy: Yes we did Tommy helps up Tim and they all have a drink in the main office Tommy: Cheers! They all hold their bottles up Vic: So now what do we do? Cesar: My old country has some good weapons their, they make bombs their! Tim: Where? Cesar: Mericaion… Enjoy Edited November 17, 2006 by blackadder18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 One of your best chapters to date. A lot of the world @sshole going around though. You didn't disguise it. Anyway, I think 8 was great and it is nigh time for the final showdown. @spenc: to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 lmao @ TNT's post Good chapter B18! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 17, 2006 Author Share Posted November 17, 2006 Time for a showdown? Not yet, when they go to SA, that is when the final showdown will take place Expect some crazy stuff to happen in the last chapter of part 2. I know it's alittle early, but if anyone wants a Part 3, just say so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 I want a part three. @Brutuz: What is the joke on my post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 @Brutuz: What is the joke on my post? You wre saying how @sshole pops up everywere Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 17, 2006 Author Share Posted November 17, 2006 @TNT: Was I supposed to disguise it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 Nice chapter, but what happened to Toni?, just getting shot in the leg wouldn't do much to him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 17, 2006 Author Share Posted November 17, 2006 They just walked away from him, leaving him on the floor, I might explain it in the beginning of next chapter. And thanks for posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 @Brutuz: What is the joke on my post? You wre saying how @sshole pops up everywere I meant that there was a danger he might get a Verbal Warning. About Toni should we expect a later appearance? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 17, 2006 Author Share Posted November 17, 2006 But it's in the story, I think I will get off as long as I don't direct it at the members of GTAF. Also, it would ruin the feel if I put @sshole Anyway, expect Chapter 9 tomorrow EDIT: About Toni, maybe, maybe not, don't want to give too much away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 But it's in the story, I think I will get off as long as I don't direct it at the members of GTAF. Also, it would ruin the feel if I put @sshole Anyway, expect Chapter 9 tomorrow EDIT: About Toni, maybe, maybe not, don't want to give too much away I know it would ruin the feel, but I just mentioned it so you might avoid receiving multiple Verbal Warnings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rashon. Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 Speaking of Verbal Warnings, my Karma's clean. Great chapter, blackadder and cursing is part of GTA so I don't think it should matter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaon, Lord of End Times Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 Nice work, blackadder. @-/TNT\-:Ah, he won't get a verbal warning for that. He'd only get one if he were using it to insult someone. Even then, he might not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenc938 Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 You have to be swearing constantly, and at multiple people to get a warning. Great Chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 I got 2 Verbal warnings. One for bumping Brutuz's recruitment topic and the other when pointing out what ROFLMAFAO is and I bwrote the f word with a bold F and a asterisk. I still got a warning, even though I had disguised it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenc938 Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 That sucks. People say the f-word all the time. Who was it from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 That sucks. People say the f-word all the time. Who was it from? The Freak! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 18, 2006 Author Share Posted November 18, 2006 Damn, oh well, these things happen. Another good thing is that this is a secluded part of the forum Anyway I'm not going to ruin the feel of my story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 Has your magical typewriter broken down? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenc938 Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 How come my karma log shows up, and nobody elses does? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pranjal Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 I think that is the same for all. Even I can see my karma log but others can't see mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 Tis the way of the world. I can see all your Karma Logs though Let us stop spamming up blackadder18's topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 20, 2006 Author Share Posted November 20, 2006 (edited) It's here! Chapter 9: Escape from Vice City They are sitting in the office packing there gear Cesar: How are we going to get through airport security ese? Tim: We’ll just “borrow” a private jet Cesar: Ok ese They continue packing their bags Toni: What are you going to do with me? Tim: Oh we will find something to do with you They finish packing their bags Toni: Motherf*cker, what are you going to do? Tim: Shutup! Toni: Noone tells the Cipriani’s to sh… Tommy shoots him in the other leg Tommy: We told you to shutup! They grab their bags and leave the mansion. They walk out on to the street Claude: So what are we going to do with the idiot? Tim waves his hand. A taxi pulls over Tim: Well, we will leave him here, I locked the mansion… I think They then hear someone behind them Toni: Nobody move! Toni is holding a small uzi Tim: Haha, come on shoot me, you don’t have the balls! Tim walks right up to the barrel of the gun Cesar: What are you doing ese? You trying to get yourself killed! Vic pulls his gun out and points it at Toni Vic: If you shoot him, I shoot you! Toni: Haha! Toni pulls the trigger. The gun clicks, but no gunshot is heard Tim: Now who’s laughing? Toni’s eyes widen in fear Toni: You son of a bitch! Vic points his gun at Toni’s arm and fires Toni: You asshead! Tim walks over and grabs Toni by the neck Tim: I don’t want to see you again! Tim pulls Toni over to the trunk of the Taxi Tim: Hey you! Open the trunk! The driver gets out and opens the trunk of the Taxi Tim: Thanks Tim shoves Toni in and slams the trunk Toni: You asshead! Tim: Oh shutup! Taxi Driver: So you guys want a lift? Tim: Here’s $50, kill him anyway you want, ditch him in the ocean, I don’t care, just kill him Taxi Driver: Why shoul… Vic lifts his gun up at the taxi driver Taxi Driver: Ok, ok, I’ll kill him, just don’t shoot The Taxi driver gets back in the taxi and drives away as fast as he can Claude: Now what? Tim sees a bus in the distance Tim: See that bus, were gonna commandeer it, then drive it to the airport Claude: Whatever you say… The bus approaches them. Tim walks into the middle of the street, blocking its path. Vic walks onto the bus Vic: Alright everyone! This is a jacking! Bus Driver: Haha, you people amuse me Vic pulls out his gun again Bus Driver: Oh sh*t you’re serious! Vic nods Bus Driver: Everyone off the bus! Everyone mumbles as they walk off the bus. Vic nods at Tim Tim: That’s the signal They grab their bags and load the bus full. The bus driver pulls out his cellphone Bus Driver: Yeh there’s a jacking here, you better hurry, their nearly gone…… Starfish Island…… Thankyou Claude notices the bus driver put his cellphone away Claude: Who was that? Bus Driver: My wife, nothing important Claude: Don’t play games with me, who was it? Claude grabs the bus driver by the neck Bus Driver: I called the cops, I’m sorry, just don… Claude hits the bus driver in the head Claude: Guys, we’ve got company! Tim has just loaded the last bag onto the bus Tim: sh*t! Tim pulls a couple of crates out from the Bus Tim: Quick, get some weapons, were gonna need them, Woozie, you drive! Woozie: Alright Tim Woozie gets into the driver seat. Claude, Vic, Cesar, Tommy and Tim grabs their guns and hop onto the bus Tim: Go! Woozie accelerates as they see flashing lights behind them. Vic sticks his head out the window. The police officer in the car notices Vic Police Officer: We have a notorious Criminal on Starfish Island! I need a lot of backup! They then see five more police cars pull out from the road behind them Tim: Everyone get ready! They all load their guns and point their guns out of the bus’s windows Tim: Now! They start shooting their guns at the pursuing police cars Police Officer: Open fire! The police officers return fire at them. Tommy gets hit in the arm Tommy: Motherf*cker! He points his gun back out the window and hits a police car’s gas tank Tim: Nice shot! The bus turns sharply around a corner. Everyone is thrown to one side of the bus Tommy: Woozie, keep it steady! Woozie: Sorry about that Just then a police heli flys above them Tim: This is going to be tough Police Officer: We are the police, we have helicopters! Give up! Claude: What idiots Claude shoots a full clip into the heli. It slowly spins toward the ground Tim: Woozie, look out for the heli! Woozie: sh*t! Woozie swerves and narrowly avoids the heli Police Officer: Mayday! Mayday! The heli crashes into the ground and blows up Tim: Let’s just get to the airport now Woozie: sh*t there’s a roadblock up ahead, what should I do? Tim turns around and looks at the roadblock. There are fifteen cars with over fifty police officers standing ready to open fire Tim: Down that alleyway! Woozie swerves and heads down the alleyway as the police officers open fire Vic: Hey stop the bus! There’s an old Cholos Sabre, who wants to ride shotgun? Tommy: I will Woozie stops the bus and lets off Tommy and Vic. They hop in the Cholos Sabre and they all continue to head for the airport Vic: Follow us! Vic dries around the corner and inbetween two police cars Woozie: Hold on! The bus crashes into the two police cars. Everyone on the bus gets thrown forward Claude: sh*t! Vic then drives forward past a rhino. Woozie then sees the Rhino Woozie: Oh my god! Woozie trys to turn but the Rhino keeps heading directly at them Woozie: Bail Bail! They all jump off the bus and land on the ground Police Officer: Freeze! Tim looks back at the bus and sees it blow up as it collides with the Rhino ] Tim: Phew Tommy notices that they are in trouble Tommy: Turn around! Vic: Oh sh*t! A police car smashes into the front of the Cholos Sabre Vic: You dickhead! Vic turns around and heads toward the others Tommy: Keep it steady Vic drives straight for the police officer. Tommy leans out the window with a Colt Python Tommy: Slow down I can’t get a fix! Vic drives even faster, heading towards the police officer Tommy: Slow the f*ck down! Vic: Just get ready! Tommy: Ready for what? Vic hits the handbrake. The car slides along the ground. The car ends up right next to Tim Vic: Now! Vic pulls out his pistol and shoots the police officer standing right next to him. Tommy shoots the three other cops running towards them Vic: Quick, get in that cop car, and follow us Tim gets up off the floor and runs over to the Police Car. Claude, Cesar and Woozie do the same Tim: This time, I’ll drive They all hop in the police car and follow Vic and Tommy Tommy: So how fast can this thing go? Vic: Very fast, watch this Vic pushes down on the pedal Tommy: sh*t it’s fast, slow down! Vic: Ok Vic eases on the gas pedal In the police car… Woozie: What are we going to do about those weapons and clothes in the bus? Tim: They’re gone, I left some weapons at the mansion though Woozie: Ok then They reach the airport Tim: Damn their car is fast Tim taps the steering wheel, a small piece of plastic comes off. It reveals a button Tim: Wonder what this does Tim pushes the button. The police car surges forward, and pulls up next to the Cholos Sabre Tim: So that’s how the police keep up Tommy: How the hell did you catch up? Tim: NOS! Tommy: Police cars have NOS? Tim: This one does at least… Tommy: We’ll take that jet over there! Tommy points at a 04 Shamal Tim: Ok The police car surges forward again Cesar: Slow down ese! Tim presses down the brake pedal Tim: I can’t, it’s out of control! Claude: Ok, when we reach the jet we all bail Tim: Sounds good The police car comes closer to the jet Back in the Cholos Sabre… Vic: They better slow down Tommy: How the hell does it go so fast? Vic: How would I know In the police car… Cesar: Bail! Bail! They jump out of the car and watch as the Police car goes flying into the ocean Tim: We have to be extra careful The Cholos Sabre pulls up. Tommy and Vic hop out Tommy: What happened? Tim: Lost control of the car, the brakes wouldn’t work They hear sirens in the distance Cesar: We better go ese, before the police arrive! Tim: Ok They open the door of the Shamal and walk into it Cesar: Mericaion here we come! Have fun:) Edited January 17, 2007 by blackadder18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rashon. Posted November 20, 2006 Share Posted November 20, 2006 Nice and long chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 21, 2006 Author Share Posted November 21, 2006 (edited) Thanks, btw I'm at school atm In computer EDIT: I have Flashback 3 for you guys Just because GTAF is down doesn't mean I stop typing Flashback 3: Liberty City Aftermath 2001, Liberty City Claude has just killed Catalina, he is driving around Portland in a Yakuza Stinger with Maria Maria: So what’s happening now that you killed Sal? Claude: … Maria: Come on Fido, talk! Claude: … Maria: Fine be that way, just drop me off at my old apartment Maria hands Claude a map. Claude realises where it is. Claude’s eyes widen Maria: Don’t be afraid honey, just drop me off and go quickly! Claude drives faster as he passes the Portland Hospital Maria: Just there Maria points at her old apartment Claude drives through the intersection and pulls the handbrake. The car pulls a 180 and slides to a stop Maria: Ok, see you later, bye Maria hops out of the car. Just then a man hops in the back seat Joey: Well if it isn’t my old friend Claude hops out the car and runs Joey: Get back here you bastard! I’m not finished with you yet Claude notices that Joey has a baseball bat Mafia Member: Hey it’s that mute asshole! Joey: Well what are you waiting for? Get him! The Mafia Member pulls out a pistol and shoots Claude in the leg. Claude falls onto the road Joey: Thanks, here’s $20 buy yourself a beer The Mafia member walks away Joey: Now what to do with you Joey grips his bat tightly Joey: Say goodnight Joey swings for Claude’s head, but at the last minute Claude moves, it hits Claude’s neck. A piece of plastic fly’s out of Claude’s mouth Joey: What the f*ck? Claude: Ah, Finally! Joey drops his bat Joey: What the? I thought you were a mute! Claude: Was a mute, Now I’m not Joey: How? Claude: In 1990 I was interrogated, I wouldn’t speak, so they made me not speak permanently Joey: They made you silent by shoving a piece of plastic down your throat? Claude: I don’t know how it worked either, but I think it’s time for you to say goodnight Joey: Oh really Joey looks for his baseball bat. It has rolled all the way to the side of the road Joey: sh*t Claude runs over to Joey and knees him in the gut Joey: Arrgh, bastard! Joey pulls out a knife Claude: You wouldn’t Joey stabs Claude in the arm Joey: I would Claude: You dickhead! Joey: Say goodnight Claude runs towards the bat. He rolls to the floor and picks it up Joey: You can’t beat me, I’m a Leone! Claude: What about your father? Joey: I’LL KILL YOU! Joey runs for Claude. Claude swings his bat and hits Joey in the legs. Joey falls over Joey: f*ck that hurts! Claude: Now to finish you off Claude walks up to Joey and looks down at him Claude: Sayonara Joey Claude is just about to swing when he feels a sharp pain in his leg. He looks down and sees that Joey has stabbed him in his leg. Claude falls to the ground in pain Cluade: When I get up, you are dead! Joey: You won… Just then a police car pulls around the corner. Joey runs away along the street Claude: You dickhead! Police Officer: Freeze you are under arrest! Claude: What for? Police Officer: For killing over 100 people Claude: Evidence? Police Officer: We have you on tape Claude: f*ck! The police officer drags Claude to the police car and puts him in the backseat Police Officer: You’re going away for a long time… Edited November 21, 2006 by blackadder18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenc938 Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted November 21, 2006 Author Share Posted November 21, 2006 Mmm tasty, We have freetime at the moment, wrote abit of Chapter 10 Chapter 10 doesn't take place AT Mericaion, but on the way TO Mericaion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Good chap, Hope that chapter 10 comes soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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