Blackadder. Posted December 20, 2006 Author Share Posted December 20, 2006 Hehe lol, nice one Sinful Tony: He didn't mean it like that I think he meant that is Toreno getting into character (Because he's an asshole in SA ) Canoxa: Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 20, 2006 Share Posted December 20, 2006 Toreno's such an asshole It's called getting into the character! Good work adder. ...What? I didn't call Blackadder an asshole, if that's what you mean I didn't take it that way, don't worry buddy! No problem, my bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canoxa Posted December 20, 2006 Share Posted December 20, 2006 Toreno's such an asshole It's called getting into the character! Good work adder. ...What? I didn't call Blackadder an asshole, if that's what you mean I didn't take it that way, don't worry buddy! No problem, my bad. My post was kinda weak too, after a third read I concluded that it was a lame joke in a bad context. @ adder - No problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 20, 2006 Share Posted December 20, 2006 Pfft, its close enough to Christmas 5 Days, I'm getting the prezzie from Mum tomorrow, so give us something earlier! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 20, 2006 Author Share Posted December 20, 2006 I'm Santa not your mum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canoxa Posted December 20, 2006 Share Posted December 20, 2006 Are you sure your mom is actually giving it to you? She might call the cops... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 21, 2006 Author Share Posted December 21, 2006 Ok... I've decided, thanks to TNT, you only get two flashbacks! blackadder18 laughs evily BUT, you get a special suprise, I mean, it isn't christmas without suprises! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted December 21, 2006 Share Posted December 21, 2006 Ok... I've decided, thanks to TNT, you only get two flashbacks! blackadder18 laughs evily BUT, you get a special suprise, I mean, it isn't christmas without suprises! -/TNT\- gives blackadder a kick in the balls, sadly to find that none are there Christmas will amount to nothing without having your crappy storywriting skills to keep me company. kidding Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 21, 2006 Author Share Posted December 21, 2006 What? this is the current pack -Part 3 Synopsis -Two Flashbacks -Chapter 14 -Special Feature... (it's written stuff! ) So... you're getting more stuff from me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted December 23, 2006 Share Posted December 23, 2006 What? this is the current pack -Part 3 Synopsis -Two Flashbacks -Chapter 14 -Special Feature... (it's written stuff! ) So... you're getting more stuff from me! Ah, I did scare you enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 23, 2006 Author Share Posted December 23, 2006 (edited) No, that was my plan from the beginning!* *Not technically true Edited December 23, 2006 by blackadder18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted December 24, 2006 Share Posted December 24, 2006 No, that was my plan from the beginning!* *Not technically true Liar, you just got an arse whipping from me! Anyway tis Christmas Eve here so you better put work in, or else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rashon. Posted December 24, 2006 Share Posted December 24, 2006 Alright, blackadder. In your profile, your local time is in Christmas (Not for me yet, though) so post the chapter already! I don't care if it's 4:00 AM where you are now, I just want a chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 25, 2006 Author Share Posted December 25, 2006 Merry Christmas everyone! Chapter 14: The Last Johnson A Nevada lands at Los Santos International Claude: So uh, what’s the plan? Tim: Well, Cesar, you’re coming with me, you’re the only person who knows how to work the damn bomb. Everyone else will be parachuting into Grove Street, and causing a distraction, whilst Cesar and I sneak around the back and plant a bomb. Then when Carl comes home, we blow him up! Claude: Sounds like fun Tim: Sounds like it, but once your in grove street, your going to be swarmed from all directions, if I’m right there is about twenty Grove Street Members in each house! Vic: In Carl’s too? Tim: I’m not sure, just be careful! The Nevada comes to a stop Claude: You sound just like my mother! Claude gets up out of the pilot’s seat and walks over to the door. Claude looks at everyone Claude: You just going to sit there or what? Claude opens the door and hops out. The rest follow Cesar: How we getting the bomb to Carl’s ese? Just then man of Airport Staff on a Baggage Handler stops next to them Airport Staff: Can I carry your bags? Tim: I got a better idea. Get off that thing, and run, as fast as you can! Airport Staff: What the f*ck? Tim climbs back into the Nevada and picks up his shotgun. He hops out of the Nevada and points it at the man Tim: Run, and don't come back! The man jumps off the baggage handler and starts running Tim: Ok, you guys find a means of transport, we’ll meet you at The Jefferson Hotel Claude: Where’s that? Cesar throws a map over to them Cesar: Use it, and you won’t get lost ese! Claude: Whatever Claude starts to walk off. Soon after Tommy, Woozie and Vic walk off Tim: Let’s get the bomb Tim and Cesar walk over to the Nevada. Cesar opens the luggage compartment Tim: 3…2…1… They pick up the bomb and walk over to the Baggage Handler. They slowly lower it onto the back of it Cesar: That does it! Tim: Let’s go Cesar: Wait, they will see the bomb! Cesar takes off his jacket and put it over the bomb Cesar: That will do Tim and Cesar hop onto the Baggage Handler and drive it towards the Jefferson Motel On the street… Tommy: Let’s take that Greenwood! Claude: No that… car over there! Catalina: I think you are forgetting there is five of us! They all look at each other. A bus drives by Vic: I’m driving! Vic runs over to the bus and pulls the driver out Vic: Come on! The others run up and hop on the bus as pedestrians run off the bus Vic: Let’s stop by Ammunation Claude gets up and walks to the drivers seat Claude: You might want this Claude holds out the map that Cesar gave to him. Vic snatches it from him and puts it on the dashboard Vic: Thanks Claude walks back down the bus and sits next to Catalina Claude: What do you mean you fell off a boat? Catalina: You jumped on my boat then pushed me off! Claude: What? I shot you down while you were in a maverick! Catalina: No you didn’t! I swear you pushed me off the boat! Claude: If I didn’t kill all those Columbians… Catalina: Columbians? What? I had no connection with the Columbians! Claude: Does Miguel ring a bell? Catalina: Who is Miguel? Claude: I see what’s happening, you an amnesic! Catalina: No I am not! Claude: Just shutup! Claude gets out of his seat and walks back over to Vic Vic: Yeh? Claude: How much further? Vic: Just around this corner The bus slowly turns the corner Vic: There! The bus comes to a stop Catalina: Are we there yet? Vic and Claude: SHUTUP! Vic, Claude, Woozie and Tommy run off the bus and into Ammunation Sam: Hey what you guys need? Tommy: Give us all your heavy weaponry Sam: No can do Tommy: What do you mean? Sam: I don’t know you! You ain’t getting nothing! Tommy turns to Vic Tommy: Let’s push him over the edge! Vic: I get what you mean Tommy and Vic hop over the counter Sam: Hey what you doing? Vic: Not much Sam: Back off! Sam pulls out a Shotgun Tommy: Don’t point that thing at me! Tommy knocks the shotgun up as Sam pulls the trigger. The blast leaves a giant hol in the roof Sam: Get out! Vic: You’re asking for it! Vic grabs the shotgun and pulls it out of Sam’s hands Sam: Hey give that back! Vic turns the shotgun around and points it at Sam Vic: Where do you keep the heavy weaponry? Sam: What heavy weaponry? Vic points the shotgun right against Sam’s forehead Sam: Heavy weaponry? You can get it, but for a price! Vic cocks the shotgun Vic: I’m not playing games here! Sam: You know what? f*ck you! Vic: That’s it! Vic kicks Sam onto the floor. He then pushes the shotgun into Sam’s throat Vic: Where is the heavy weaponry? Sam: I’ll never tell you! Vic pushes the shotgun harder Vic: I said where is the goddamn heavy weaponry? Sam: You son of a bitch! Vic flips the gun around and hits Sam with the butt of the Shotgun Vic: Last Chance! Where are the heavy weapons? Sam: Arrgh! They’re out the back in huge box. The code for the box is 846! Don’t kill me! Vic: Thanks! Vic knocks out Sam but hitting him in the head with the shotgun. Vic then looks up at Tommy Vic: You heard him! 846! Tommy runs out the back and looks for the box. A green sheet is covering it Tommy: Smart son of a bitch! Tommy rips the sheet off as Claude walks towards him Claude: Thought you might need some help! Tommy types in the code. The door pops open as Tommy and Claude look at all the weapons Tommy: M60, M4, Woah! What’s this? Tommy picks up a gun and looks at the side Tommy: M4-2? When the f*ck were these made? Vic walks outside Vic: What guns do we have? Vic walks over to box and picks up a RPG Vic: We’ll stash these on the bus Woozie runs over to them Woozie: Woah! Nice weapons! Vic: Indeed, now help us carry them to the bus They grab three weapons each and walk back to the bus Vic: Catalina, could you open the door! Catalina: Fine! Catalina opens the door Vic: Thanks They walk onto the bus and drop the guns onto the seats Tommy: Now what? Claude: We go to the Jefferson Motel! That’s what! Tommy: Calm down! Vic: Well, what are we waiting for? Vic hops in the driver seat and slowly accelerates away On the Baggage Handler... Cesar: Nearly there ese! Just turn left Tim: Ok Cesar looks behind him and sees three Ballas following them onfoot Cesar: Oh no! Ballas! Cesar hops off and runs down the street Tim: Ballas? Who are th… Tim is dragged off the Baggage Handler and kicked in the face Tim: Son of a bitch! Balla: Our turf dawg! Tim spins on the road and trips over one of the Ballas. He is knocked unconscious when his head hits the road Balla: That’s it bitch! The Balla grabs Tim by his shirt and pulls him up. Before the Balla can do anything Tim punches him in the face Tim: That’s right! Tim turns to face the last Balla but sees no one there. He looks at the road and sees the last Balla Member lying on the floor Cesar: I got him ese! He didn’t stand a chance! Cesar throws a piece of wood to the side Cesar: Well let’s go! They hop onto the Baggage Handler and drive it around the corner. They see a bus at the Motel Tim: That must be them The baggage handler comes to a stop Vic: Hey, the bomb all safe? Tim: Yeh Tim throws away Cesar’s jacket Vic: Nice! A Remington pulls up. A man hops out Cesar: Thanks Jose! I owe you one! Jose: No problem, just back me up in the future! Cesar: Ok ese Tim: Hey, Cesar, help me with the bomb Cesar: Ok… 3…2…1… Lift! They lift the bomb and put it in the Remington Jose: See you later! Cesar: See you soon! Jose walks off down the street Tim: Ok, you guys find car’s meet us at Binco Tim and Cesar hop in the Remington and head towards Binco Tommy: Vic, we’ll take the sentinel Vic: Ok They walk up to the bus and grab their weapons Woozie: Claude, Catalina, you coming with me? Claude: I guess They grab their weapons then hop into a Sultan Woozie: Let’s go! Woozie heads out of the carpark and heads towards Binco. He sees the Sentinel and Remington there. He pulls up alongside them Tim: Ok, Woozie, your car will be going in first taking care of most of the Grove Street Members, then Cesar and I will go in and plant the bomb whilst they are in confusion as Tommy and Vic will be following us closely, once we are out of there, get out ASAP! Vic: Sounds Good! Tim: Ok, Woozie, you part now! Woozie accelerates down the road. He reaches Grove Street and slides the car to a stop Woozie: Let’s go! Woozie, Claude and Catalina hop out the car. AS Woozie hops out he is shot twice in the leg. He slumps down against the car Claude: sh*t! You ok? Woozie: Just get them! Claude stands up and sees thirteen gang members in front of him Claude: Holy sh*t! Claude shoots five of them with his MP5 Claude: How you like that you stupid f*cks! Catalina shoots another five with her AK-47 Catalina: AMERICAN PIGRO! Claude: Shut the f*ck up! Claude shoots the rest Catalina: NO! Tim and Cesar drive past them and stop next to Carl’s house Cesar: Cover us ese! Then Vic and Tommy stop next to Claude and Catalina. Vic kicks open the door and drops an RPG, he then gets out holding a M16. Tommy then gets out with a M4-2 Tommy: Let me at those f*cks! Just then ten Grove Street Members run down the long road leading out of “The Grove” Tommy shoots seven of them Tommy: Wow! Nice gun! Claude shoots two more and Catalina shoots the last remaining one Vic: Leave some for me damnit! Catalina: f*ck you American! Claude punches Catalina in the face Claude: JUST SHUTUP! Tommy: Calm the f*ck down! They continue shooting as more Grove Street Members flood towards them Next to the Johnson house… Tim: Hurry up we don’t have much time! Cesar: It’s nearly ready ese! I just have to connect these wires… There! Done! Tim: Let’s get the f*ck out of here! They turn to leave and see a single Grove Street Member facing them Grove Street Member: Hey what the f*ck is that? Tim: sh*t! Tim runs straight towards the Grove Street Member and tackles him to the ground Tim: Say goodnight! Tim smashes the Grove Street Member in the face. He then stands up Tim: Let’s go! Tim and Cesar run back over to the Remington and drive out of Grove Street Tommy: Vic, come on! Let’s get out of here! They hop into the Sentinel and drive out of Grove Street Meanwhile, in the Johnson House… Carl: Damn! What the f*ck is all that noise! Carl gets up and picks up his two Tec-9’s. He runs outside to see Woozie, Catalina and Claude shooting at his gang Carl: Catalina! You bitch! Catalina: American Pi… Before she can finish Claude shoots her in the arm Claude: SHUT THE f*ck UP! Woozie: Claude, let’s get out of here, grab the girl Claude: f*ck her! She made her choice back in 2001! Woozie: Fine you drive I’ll hel… Claude points his gun at Woozie Claude: Don’t even touch her Woozie: I have to help her! Claude: No you don’t Your making things harder than they should be! Woozie: Just let me help her! Claude: I can’t let you do that! Woozie: Wh… Claude shoots Woozie in the leg Claude: I warned you! Claude hops in the sultan and drives out of Grove Street. Carl runs up to them Carl: You idiots! Carl points his Tec-9’s at them and fires a whole clip at each of them Carl: Why did he do that anyway? Carl walks back to his house thinking about that when the house explodes, sending him flying across the street. He lands on the bonnet of a Voodoo Carl: Motherf*cking assholes! Carl gets off the bonnet and hops into the Voodoo. He drives out of Grove Street Outside Binco… Tim: Where’s Woozie and Catalina? Claude: Carl got them Tim: sh*t! Vic: We’ll meet you back at the hotel, we can celebrate! Vic and Tommy drive off towards the Jefferson Motel Claude: I’m gonna go with them, see you at the Motel Claude drives off Cesar: Just you and me ese! We did great back there! Tim: Yeh, I owe you one Cesar: No problems ese, he was starting to get on my nerves too Tim: Let’s go grab some be… Just then The Voodoo smashes into the Remington Carl: I’ve got you now! Cesar: What the f*ck man? We blew this pendejo up! Tim: He must have been outside when the explosion happened! Carl: And now I’ve come to finish you! Tim: You dickhead! Were supposed to say that dumbass! Carl: What? f*ck you! Carl revs the engine Cesar: Tim, get us the f*ck out of here now! Tim spins the car 180 and heads towards Los Santos Downtown. Carl quickly follows Carl: You can’t escape the Johnson! Tim: We escaped your dumbass brother! Carl: Motherf*cker! Tim goes flying over a ramp and lands on the back of a Packer Tim: sh*t! Tim accelerates and drives over the top of the packer Carl: I’m going to get you Vercetti! Cesar: Well you can’t catch me! Cesar turns towards Tim Cesar: I’m a much better driver than he is! Let me drive! Tim: Ok They swap seats as they pass through Pershing Square Cesar: Catch us now ese! Cesar slides around a corner and then slides around another Carl: Motherf*cker! Carl follows them as close as he can Cesar: Look, go in that building and go to top floor! We can ambush him! Tim: Nice idea! Cesar stops the car as they get out and run over to the building. They take the elevator to the top floor and run onto the roof Tim: Now what? Cesar: We wait ese! They wait there for a few minutes before seeing Carl walk up the staris onto the roof Cesar: Now! Tim runs over to Carl and tackles him to the floor Tim: This may hurt alittle Cesar walks over and starts hitting Carl in the ribs Carl: I’ll kill you! Tim: Oh really! Carl: Yeh! Carl manages to push Tim off of him and kicks Cesar in the face, knocking him out Tim: Asshole! Carl: See you later sucker! Carl grabs a parachute and runs towards the buildings edge Tim: Oh no you don’t! Tim runs after him and grabs onto him as Carl jumps off Carl: Get off Tim: No! Carl elbows Tim in the face Carl: Get off motherf*cker! Tim: f*ck you! Tim punches Carl in the guts causing him to loosen his grip on the parachute Carl: You’ll kill us both! Tim: No, I’ll only kill one person! Tim punches Carl in the face and pulls the parachute away from him Carl: Motherf*cker! Tim puts on the parachute quickly and watches as Carl plummets towards the Earth below him Carl: Motherfuccckkkerrr...... Tim: I did it! Tim slowly lands on the road and is greeted by Cesar Cesar: Hey ese! Tim: WE DID IT! Cesar: I know! Tim: I guess you came to huh? Cesar: Yeh, he gave me a blood nose though Tim: Let’s get back to the others They hop into the Remington and head back to the Jefferson Motel Back at the Motel… Claude: Where is he? Claude opens a bag of chips and starts scoffing them down Vic: Slow down! Leave some for Tim and Cesar! Vic snatches the bag of chips from Claude and puts them on the table Claude: Well where the f*ck is he? Just then the door bursts open. Tim walks in Vic: Tim! Hey! Tim: Hey! We did it! Vic: We did indeed! Then Cesar walks in Vic: Holy sh*t what happened? Tim: Well you see, the bomb didn’t kill Carl, so we went to the top of a building and fought him, he fell to his death Vic: Nice! Tim: Well, I’m going to have to go back to Vice, see how things are going Vic: What do you mean? You’re the owner of San Andreas! Tim: Well in that case…Let’s party! They turn the stereo on and celebrate the new leader of San Andreas, Tim Vercetti... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 Rawr! You finally posted it! VeryNo, EXTREMELY good B18! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 25, 2006 Author Share Posted December 25, 2006 "blackadder18, with the followup!" Enjoy the first flashback on Christmas! Flashback 7: The Harwood Butcher 1971, Liberty City Tommy Vercetti is sitting talking to Sonny Forelli in Saint Mark’s Bistro Sonny: So take out the Cholos leader, and I’ll make it worthwhile Tommy: What’s the guy’s name? Sonny: Carlos Doreteo Tommy: Sounds easy, where can I find him? Sonny: In Harwood Tommy: Ok Sonny: See you soon! Tommy gets out of his chair and walks outside. Meanwhile Sonny walks over to the payphone and dials a number Sonny: Hello? Is that you Carlos? Carlos: Yes it is, what you want, American? Sonny: One of my men is pissed and coming to kill you Carlos: I will round up my men Sonny: He’s going to Harwood Carlos: Thank you Sonny, I trust you with my heart Carlos hangs up. Sonny dials another number Sonny: Police please… There’s a gang war going on in Harwood, get there as fast as you can Sonny hangs up and walks back over to his seat Sonny: This is going to be great! Meanwhile in a Infernus… Tommy: Nearly there Tommy handbrakes around the corner to see Carlos standing there by himself. Tommy gets out of the Infernus holding a machete Carlos: Nice of you to arrive! Tommy: Hello, are you Carlos? Carlos: Always have been! Tommy swings the machete at Carlos. It hit’s him in the chest. Tommy then pulls the Machete out again and slashes him again Carlos: American… Pig!... Carlos falls onto the floor in his own blood Tommy starts to walk back to Infernus when he hears someone Cholos Member: Hey, you! Tommy turns around and sees ten men standing there holding baseball bats Tommy: Who are you? Cholos Member: Were associates of him! He points at Carlos Tommy: Oh sh*t! Cholos Member: Oh sh*t is right! Two of the Cholos Members start running towards Tommy. Tommy raises his Machete as they come towards him Cholos Member: Die! The Cholos Member swings his bat a Tommy. Tommy ducks and slashes him in the chest. The other Cholos swings his bat at Tommy’s legs. He hits them and Tommy falls on the floor Cholos Member: Go to hell! Tommy: Why don’t you? Tommy throws his machete at the Cholos Member’s face. He gets up and rips the machete from the Cholos Member’s skull. Tommy looks at the other Cholos members Tommy: You want a piece of me? Another Cholos Member runs over to Tommy. The Chlos member swings his bat but Tommy grabs it Cholos Member: f*ck! Tommy then uses the machete in his right hand and cuts off the Cholos Member’s head Tommy: Bring it on! Yet another Cholos Member runs at Tommy. He doesn’t have a bat, so he punches Tommy in the face Tommy: You bastard! Tommy elbows him in the face and saws off his leg Cholos Member 6: What the f*ck is he doing? Cholos Member 8: I Don’t know, but I’m going to stop him! The Cholos Member runs over to Tommy and tackles him to the ground. He then feels a sharp pain in his arm. He looks over and sees the machete sticking through Cholos Member: Holy sh*t! Tommy rips the machete out causing the Cholos Member’s arm to fall off Tommy: Jesus, you call yourself gang members? Cholos Member 6: Yeh we do! The Cholos Member runs over to Tommy and punches him in the gut Tommy: Don’t say I didn’t warn you Tommy cuts open the Cholos Member’s Stomach and pushes him onto the floor Tommy: Anyone else wanna die? Cholos Member 7: Me! Tommy: Step right up then Cholos Member 7: I was being sarcastic Tommy: Well I wasn’t Cholos Member 9: I’ll challenge you! The Cholos Member runs up and starts to punch Tommy in the face Tommy: Yo...u bas…tard! Tommy grabs the Cholos Member’s fist and slices his hand off. Tommy pushes the Cholos Member out of the way and runs up to the remaining three Tommy: Look over there! It’s Carlos! Cholos Member: Where? Tommy cuts both of his arms off and kick him into another Cholos Member. He then faces the last standing Cholos Member Cholos Member: I Don’t wanna die! The Cholos Member drops his bat Tommy: Too late for that Tommy cuts his throat and then stabs him in the chest. He then turns to the Cholos Member on the floor, struggling under the other Cholos Member Cholos Member: Pendejo! Tommy throws his machete at him. It hit’s him dead between the eyes Tommy: My work here is done Tommy starts to walk over to the Infernus but is interrupted by sirens Tommy: Oh sh*t! Five police cars come to a stop in front of Tommy. Four Police Officers get out of each car holding a pistol Police Chief: Freeze! Don’t move a muscle! Tommy: Ok officer! Police Chief: Put your hands where I can see them! Tommy raises his hands. A police officer slowly walks towards him Tommy: Hurry up! The police officer pulls out his handcuffs and puts them on Tommy. He walks him over to the police car and shoves him onto the backseat Police Officer: Have fun in the slammer, you will be staying there for the rest of your life Tommy: Thanks! The Police Officer gets in the front seat and drives the Police Car down the road Tommy: Thanks Sonny, just Thanks!… RAWR! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 Carlos Doreteo Where do you get these names from? very good B18! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 25, 2006 Author Share Posted December 25, 2006 It's a mexican name, I found a list on the net Synopsis! Synopsis-Part 3 After killing the owner of San Andreas, and the pursuer of his father, Tim looks forward to settling back into a peaceful life But after his mansion is destroyed after an attack on Tim, He turns to his old friends to help him out They will travel through Vice City, Liberty City, San Andreas and Amourica looking for Tim’s pursuers. It’s time for Revenge. It’s time for Vercetti Revenge… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 Yay! These just keep on coming! Pretty good, but IT BETTER COME SOON! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 25, 2006 Author Share Posted December 25, 2006 Flashback 8: Business Problems 1985, Vice City Vic is sitting at one of his Empire Buildings, waiting for his brother. Just then the door flings open Vic: Lance! You’re alright! Lance: Yeh brother, the drug deal went just fine! And with the money I bought me a suit! Vic: Looks great! Lance: I have to go soon though, a meet at the docks Vic: Again? You’re going to get yourself killed one day I swear! Lance: Come on, you can come too! Vic: Alright! I’ll just get changed Vic walks into his room and changes into his Casual Clothes Lance: Wear something respectable man! Vic: Do I tell you what to look like? They walk outside of the building and walk over to Lance’s new Infernus Lance: Check it out! Brand new, this is a prototype! Vic: Looks like a normal Infernus to me Lance lifts the hood of the Infernus up Vic: Woah! Lance: It’s one of their special engines, it’s a fuel guzzler though! Vic: I’ll drive Lance: Come on brother! Let me drive! Vic: Ok then They hop in the car and drive towards the docks… At the docks… Lance: That’s them, right there Vic: Those strange people in the black clothes? Lance: Yeh! Vic: They look suspicious, good thing I brought a pistol Lance: Are you crazy? No one likes a drug deal with guns! Vic: Then they will have to compromise Vic hops out of the car and starts walking towards the dealers Lance: Wait up brother! Lance grabs a suitcase and hops out of the car. He then runs over to Vic Vic: So, an open ground deal, near the water, seems pretty good Lance: Yeh, it will be fun! Vic: Why will it be fun? Lance: Because they are getting ripped off! Were paying only three hundred for a briefcase full! Vic: They are stupid! They finally come meet the dealer. He talks in a Hispanic accent Dealer: Hello there! I presume you have the money? Lance opens the briefcase and shows them the money Dealer: I think we have a deal my friend! The dealer laughs Lance: You could learn something from him brother! Vic: Oh really? Dealer: I said three grand, not three hundred! Vic: Son of a bitch! Vic grabs the dealer and breaks his neck. Just then two Admiral’s come screeching around the corner. Two men hop out of each one with an M60 Vic: Lance take cover! Vic and Lance dive behind some crates Lance: sh*t! My suit is ruined! Vic: Who cares about your suit? Vic leans around the corner and shoots one of the men in the head with his pistol Lance: I’m out of here! Lance grabs the briefcases and runs past Vic. He runs all the way to the Infernus and hops in Lance: I’ll ring you! Lance spins around and runs one of the men over as he escapes the docks Vic: Motherf*cker! Vic shoots the gas tank of one of the Admirals causing it to blow up. The last two men were caught in the explosion Vic: Now to get that f*cker! Vic runs over to the other Admiral and hops in. As he hops in his pager goes off Pager: Lance: Meet me back at your place! Vic: Time to get him! Vic drives off in his admiral back to his Empire Building… At the Empire Building… Lance: sh*t! What have I done? He could have been dead! Just then the door bursts open Vic: You! Vic points at Lance Lance: I’m sorry dude! I’m sorry! Vic walks up to Lance and punches him in the face Lance falls onto the floor Vic: Sorry doesn’t cut it! Lance looks up at Vic. He see’s him grabbing an AK-47 Lance: Please don’t kill me! Vic grabs the AK-47 by the barrel and smashes Lance in the head Vic: I could have died back there! You have to stop doing these goddamn drug deals Lance! Blood is dripping down Lance’s face Lance: I’ll try to stop! Vic: Try? Vic slams the AK-47 into Lance’s head again Vic: You won’t try! You will! Lance: I can only try! Vic rolls Lance onto his back. He then presses the AK-47’s barrel against Lance’s head Lance: Don’t do it man? PLEASE! Vic: Give me one reason why I shouldn’t! Lance: I’m your brother! Vic: I’m sick of this brother sh*t! You better grow up Lance! People have been telling you that your whole life! Lance: f*ck them! Lance passes out Vic: Motherf*cker Just then Tony walks into the room Tony: One of your businesses is being attacked boss! Vic: I’m going out of business, I have family related issues Tony: But boss! Vic fires his gun into the air Vic: Go! Tony runs out of the room. Vic drops his gun Vic: I swear Lance you are going to get me killed one day!... Kind of explains some loose connections between VC and VCS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 Very good, explains a lot of the Loose connections. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 25, 2006 Author Share Posted December 25, 2006 Lol, thanks, and now, on Page 20 of my topic, the unveiling of the secret! Carl Chapter 1: The Real Beginning The following chapter takes place before chapter 1 of Vercetti Revenge Carl and Sweet are sitting inside the Johnson house watching TV Carl: Hey this is getting boring Sweet: Well change the channel! Carl: You got the remote! Sweet: Well I like this channel! Carl: What? Sweet: Why you been at home alot recently? Carl: I’ve been studying this city, it’s called Vice City Sweet: And? Carl: Well I was thinking, we could maybe expand down their Sweet: We’ve got all of San Andreas! Carl: Yeh, but this is just filled with gangwars! Sweet: I guess so, but who is leader of Vice City? Carl: Some guy called Tommy Vercetti, he’s been owner for over a decade now Sweet: So it’s time for him to go? Carl: Yeh! They get up and walk outside. They walk over to a house, which is owned by Anthony, a weapon’s specialist. He is working on his car when Carl and Sweet arrive Carl: Hey, Anthony! Anthony: Hey Carl! Anthony finishes up and turns around Anthony: Oh hey sweet! Sweet: Hey! Anthony: So what do you guys want? Carl: You got any rifles? Anthony: Oh yeh! I just got this one in from Liberty City, it’s alittle old, but it still works Carl: Sounds great! Anthony: I’ll just go get it Anthony walks inside Sweet: So what’s the plan? Carl: I’ll go down there wearing a balaclava, you’ll be sitting in a tree nearby, if you see his son, shoot him! Sweet: Ok Anthony comes out of the house with a rifle Anthony: Will this do? Carl: Yeh, It will work! Sweet grabs the rifle Anthony: Remember, you didn’t get this from me! Carl: Yeh, we know Carl and Sweet walk down the street and hop in Sweet’s Greenwood. Sweet hops in the driver seat Sweet: Where to? Carl: Vice City, fool... Kind of short, but like Part 1 of my story, it will get longer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 WOAH! Carls side of the Story! RAWR! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 25, 2006 Author Share Posted December 25, 2006 And that my friends, is blackadder18's Christmas Pack! Hope you enjoy your present! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 Great chapters, mate. Hope you had a great christmas, too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rashon. Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 Lol. Great Christmas pack indeed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 Pretty good, pretty good. Merry Christmas... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serafim Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 Yea it's very nice. Merry Christmas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted December 25, 2006 Share Posted December 25, 2006 Great chapters, awesome flashbacks By the way, what is it? "C.A.R.L. The other side of the story"? j/k lmao Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 (edited) By the way, what is it?"C.A.R.L. The other side of the story"? Maybe 0_o, Merry... uhm... Boxing Day! Edited December 26, 2006 by blackadder18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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