Rashon. Posted December 7, 2006 Share Posted December 7, 2006 CJ can't do anything right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 7, 2006 Author Share Posted December 7, 2006 Lol, thanks, got School in a few minutes, were the last school to finish in WA After that chapters should come ALOT faster, that is, until I go to Tasmania Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
warthog 15 Posted December 7, 2006 Share Posted December 7, 2006 (edited) This is a good idea I am gona post a topic on why Rockstar dont make a GTA where you fly from the three city airposts like in SA and see who agrees. Edited December 7, 2006 by warthog 15 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 8, 2006 Share Posted December 8, 2006 Lol, thanks, got School in a few minutes, were the last school to finish in WA After that chapters should come ALOT faster, that is, until I go to Tasmania Ha, I've finished school I love the Holidays, can I move to your house? It seems like Victoria is going to turn crispy soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 8, 2006 Author Share Posted December 8, 2006 No, you can't live with me I've done about 1/3 of Chapter 13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted December 8, 2006 Share Posted December 8, 2006 No, you can't live with me I've done about 1/3 of Chapter 13 Hurry up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewaytahgo2 Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 its saturday! i cant wait till u post the next chapter.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 10, 2006 Author Share Posted December 10, 2006 Sorry, but this chapter seems to be going for real long, expect a long decent chapter, and an old chracter reintroduced! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 Ooh Clause from GTA2? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 10, 2006 Author Share Posted December 10, 2006 Quiet you!It's a character that has appeared in TWO 3d GTA's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 Maria from GTA3 and LCS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 Kent Paul or Ken Rosemberg? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 10, 2006 Author Share Posted December 10, 2006 This is fun! No and No! Well I have to go, keep guessing! HINT: SHE was in GTA3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 CATALINA!!!! If that ain't it I give up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 10, 2006 Author Share Posted December 10, 2006 Yes! Congrats! But now I have to go, bye! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 I GOT IT YAY!!!! Bye, now GET ONTO THE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 11, 2006 Author Share Posted December 11, 2006 I... Finally... Finished it... LONGEST CHAPTER EVER! Chapter 13: On the Run Cesar speeds out of the pipe Cesar: Now to the airport! A Police officer sitting in a police car notices the bomb on the back of the bike and pursuits Cesar Cesar: sh*t! Cesar handbrakes into a small alleyway and heads down it. The Police Car does the same Cesar: This is one pendejo! Cesar points the uzi over his shoulder and fires blindly at the Police car Police Officer: sh*t! The Police Officer ducks under the steering wheel as the bullets penetrate the windshield Cesar: Haha! Don’t got big balls now! Cesar rides out of the alleyway and up the back of a Packer Cesar: Who put this here? Cesar flies off the end of the Packer and onto the top of a small shop. The police officer does the same and lands behind Cesar Cesar: Stupid Pendejo! Cesar drives off the building and lands on the road. The Police officer follows but flips his car Cesar: Take that you stupid pendejo! Cesar rides off as the police officer climbs out of the flipped car Police Officer: I need backup here! Cesar continues to ride into the distance In the Blista… Tommy: Shoot those f*cking Tarkers! Vic: Ok! Calm down! Vic shoots the tire of a pursuing Tampa Woozie: Nice shot! Tommy turns the Blista onto the wrong side of the road Claude: Are you crazy? Your going to get us all killed Tommy: Trust me it will work! Claude looks out the back of the Blista and sees another Tampa crash Claude: I guess you’re right Woozie: Turn down that alleyway! Tommy: Ok Tommy swerves at the last second and drives into the alleyway Woozie: Nice driving! Tommy: Well nice directions! Tommy points at a Tampa blocking the way Woozie: How was I supposed to know? Tarker 1: When they come, we will make them surrender! Tarker 2: Yeh! Tommy continues driving the Blista towards the Tampa Tommy: Now what? Claude: Go faster Tommy: Faster, now you’re going to get us killed! Claude: Just do it damnit! Tommy: Fine The Blista accelerates towards the Tampa Claude slides the Blista’s door open Claude: Ok, everyone get ready to bail! Tommy moves out of the drivers seat and gets ready to bail Tarker 2: What the f*ck are they doing meng? Tarker: How would I know Tony? Tony: You know everything! Claude: Jump! They all jump out of the Blista at the same time. The Blista crashes into the Tampa and crushes one of the Tampa’s Tony: Get up meng! The other Tarker lies there still. Tony then hears a gun cock Vic: He’s dead, and so are you! Vic shoots the Tarker in the head Tommy: Let’s get out of here They all start walking down the alley to the street Outside the pipe… Tim: Finally! Daylight! Tim sees a black Cheetah speed past him. It then brakes and heads back towards him Tim: Not this sh*t! The car drives towards Tim. Tim dives out the way just as it’s about to hit him. The car stops and the driver gets out Man: Why won’t you die? Tim: Because I’m the best! Man: Stop kidding yourself, Carl Johnson is! Tim: He sent you? Man: Yeh! Tim: Do I know you from somewhere? Man: You don’t know? I’m Madd Dogg! On the TV! On Billboards, I’m everywhere! Tim: You seem to be in the wrong place at the wrong time Madd Dogg: You’re about to die! Madd Dogg reaches for his Uzi. He then remembers he left it at the hospital Madd Dogg: Oh sh*t! Tim: Oh sh*t is right! Tim punches Madd Dogg in the face Tim: Don’t f*ck with the Vercetti’s! Madd Dogg gets up and kicks Tim in the shin Tim: Motherf*cker! A Police officer on the other side of the road sees them fighting, he runs across the road and holds his badge at them Police Officer: You’re under arrest! Tim: No I’m not! Tim kicks Madd Dogg in the gut and then hits him over the head Tim: Have fun in jail! Tim runs over to the Cheetah and gets in it. He speeds off down the road Police Officer: I need backup on Rander Street! Back on the Rager… Cesar is being chased by five police cars Cesar: sh*t! Those f*cking pendejo’s wont give up! Cesar turns left and at the last second hits the handbrake and turns right. Three police cars crash in the confusion Cesar: Now gotta shake these other cops! Cesar looks ahead and sees a Linerunner driving across the intersection with a tanker behind it Cesar: sh*t! Cesar turns left and then right. The Line Runner stops right in the middle of the intersection, stopping the last two police cars Cesar: Haha! Can’t catch me! A Police car comes out of nowhere and stops infront of Cesar. He hits the front of the police car and flies over the bonnet onto the road Cesar: You f*cking pendejo! Cesar stands up Police Officer: Freeze! Don’t move! Cesar points his gun at the Police Officer Police Officer: I said freeze! Cesar shoots ten bullets into the police officer’s chest. He falls over next to the police car. Cesar picks up the bomb off the Rager and puts it into the police car Cesar: Now to the airport! Cesar hops into the police car and heads towards the airport On the streets… Tommy: Let’s take that Sentinel Just then a black cheetah stops next to them Claude: Who the f*ck? Tim steps out and walks over to them Tim: We’ve gotta meet Cesar at the airport, now! Vic: Ok! Tim: Tommy, you come with me, you guys, follow me! Tim and Tommy run over to the Cheetah and hop in. Vic runs over and breaks into the Sentinel Vic: Claude, Woozie come on! Tim drives off as Claude and Woozie hop into the Sentinel Vic: This is going to be one hell of a ride! Vic starts the engine and follows Tim down the street. All of a sudden a Tampa lands right infront of them Claude: Holy sh*t! Vic: Take the gun! Vic throws the gun into the back seat. Claude fires two bullets through the windshield. It hits the front wheel on the Tampa Woozie: Go go go! Vic reverses and spins the car around. He then reverses into the Tampa Claude: Why did you do that? Vic: Can’t I have some fun? Vic then turns around and speeds past the Tampa Claude: We lost them! Vic: No we havn’t! Vic slides around the corner and hammers on the gas pedal Claude: Face it, because of you, we lost them! Vic: Well at least I know how to get to the airport! Claude: How? Vic throws a piece of paper onto the backseat. Woozie picks it up and looks at it Woozie: It’s a map! Vic: Yes, and you’re navigating! Claude: This is bullsh*t! Where did you get that? Vic: I found it under the seat Woozie: Take a right here Vic turns at the last second and just misses a taxi Vic: Look up there! They look up and see the black cheetah that Tim and Tommy are in Vic: I told you we havn’t lost them! Claude: This is f*cking ridiculous! Vic continues driving towards the airport In the Police Car… Cesar: I hope they find their way to the airport! Just then the police car is rammed from behind. Cesar looks behind him and sees a black Infernus right behind him Cesar: f*ck off you pendejo! Cesar points his Uzi out the window. He presses the trigger but nothing happens Cesar: No ammo! Cesar throws the Uzi out the window. The Infernus drives over the Uzi and loses control. The Infernus smashes into a wall Cesar: Woah! Cesar stops his car and gets out. He runs over to the Infernus and looks inside Cesar: Holy sh*t! Sitting inside the car is Catalina Cesar: Catalina, are you ok? Catalina: Do I look ok? Catalina gets out of the car and slowly walks over to Cesar Cesar: I thought you died back in Liberty City! Catalina: I almost did! I was on a boat or something, then I fell and got chopped up by the propellers! Cesar: Boat? I thou… Oh nevermind Catalina: So where are we going? Cesar: Were going to San Andreas Catalina: Why you going back to that stinko place! Cesar: My friend, he needs to do some business Catalina: Your friend Carl? He is some stupid ass pigro! Cesar: No, were going there to kill him Catalina: Really? Wow Cesar: I thought you died in Liberty City though! Catalina: I didn’t! When the heli was going down, I jumped into the river! Cesar: Nice, but we have to go, come on! Cesar and Catalina hop into the police car and drive down the road In the Cheetah… Tim: They’re still behind us right? Tim turns a corner quickly Tommy: Yeh, I think I see them! Tim looks up and sees a plane coming towards the airport Tim: Not much further now! Tim overtakes a taxi and turns around another corner Tim: Just there! Tim looks down the road and sees a police car there Tim: sh*t! It’s the police! Just then Cesar steps out of the police car Tim: Were here! Tim slides the Cheetah to a stop and gets out Cesar: Hey ese! I got the bomb here! It’s ready to go! Tim: Good, now we have to get out of here Just then Catalina steps out of the car Tim: Who that? Cesar: It’s my cousin! Just then the Sentinel comes to a stop behind them. Claude steps out Claude: Now that was the worst dri… Claude looks at Catalina Claude: Oh sh*t! Catalina: You can talk now? You stupid American! Why didn’t you tell me? Cesar: Wait, you two know each other? Catalina: Yes! He tried to kill me back in Liberty! Cesar: You f*cking pendejo! Cesar lunges for Claude, but Tim holds him back Tim: Cesar! Cesar! Calm down! Cesar: He tried to kill my cousin! He might turn on us too! Claude: What? Your cousin stabbed me in the back during a robbery! Cesar: Catalina? You did that? Catalina: It’s true, I shot him, then went off with Miguel Tim: Who the f*ck is Miguel? Catalina: We were working together, then Claude surprised us! I ran off, and Asuka killed him! Tommy steps out of the Cheetah Tommy: Enough of the reunions we have to go! Claude: Ok! They hop back into their cars and drive onto the runway of the airport Tim: We need to find a Jet Tommy: That will be easy… wait, what’s that noise? Tim looks to his left and sees a AT-400 coming straight at him Tim: Holy sh*t! Tim reverses the Cheetah backwards and spins it round. The wheel of the AT-400 crushes the back half of the Cheetah Tommy: Get out! They get out and start to run. Cesar: Holy sh*t, what happened over there? Cesar drives over and stops next to them Cesar: Get in quick! Tim and Tommy hop in as Cesar hammers the gas pedal. The police car just misses the back wheel of the AT-400 Cesar: What the f*ck where you doing? Tim: How were we supposed to know that an AT-400 was taking off! Catalina: You shouldn’t of been there you stupid American! Cesar: Calm down! Tim notices a Nevada 2007 across the runway Tim: Over there that Nevada! Cesar: Ok ese! Cesar drives the police car over to the Nevada Cesar: Hey Tim, could you help me put the bomb on the plane? Tim: Sure They get out as Vic slides the Sentinel to a stop once again. They all get out Vic: Why are we taking a Nevada? Tim: Best plane to put a bomb onto Tim and Cesar pick up the bomb and walk over to the Nevada Tim: Vic… open the… luggage compartment Vic: Ok Vic walks over and opens the compartment Tim: Thanks Tim and Cesar put the bomb on the plane Tim: Ok everyone on Tommy: I’ll be back in a second Tommy runs over to the police car and looks through it. He turns around holding a shotgun. Tim and Vic are staring at him Tommy: What? They all hop into the Nevada Tim: Who’s flying this? They all look at each other Claude: I will! Claude walks over to the pilots seat and sits down Claude: Let’s go! Claude starts up the engine and taxi’s onto the runway. Cesar looks out the wndow and sees two Tarkers hop into Rustlers Cesar: They are in rustlers ese! Claude: Oh f*ck! Claude takes off and turns left Cesar: What are you doing? San Andreas is that way! Claude: Shutup! Cluade turns the Nevada to the right Tommy: I’ll take care of the rustlers Tommy breaks the window and points his shotgun out the window Claude: What are you waiting for? Tommy points the shotgun at one of the Rustlers Tommy: I have to wait for them to get close, f*cking shotgun! Claude: Just shoot! Tommy fires at the engine of the Rustler and hits. The Rustler spins out of control into the ocean Tommy: One down! Tommy points the shotgun at the other Rustler. He pulls the trigger and nothing happens Tommy: It’s jammed! Vic: Use this pistol! Vic throws the pistol over to Tommy Tommy: Now how is this going to work? Vic: Shoot out the engines! Tommy shoots the Rustlers engine. The rustler loses control and spins out towards the ocean Vic: Nice shot! Tommy sits back into his seat Tommy: Thanks APV: This is the police! Stop right there! Tim: Who the f*ck? Tim looks out the window and sees a Police Plane following them Tim: Holy sh*t! APV: Turn around now! Tim: Make me! Cesar: What are we going to do ese? Tim: Were going to board their plane Cesar: Woah ese, that’s crazy! Tim: Life’s crazy, Tommy give me that gun! Claude: Your paranoid! Tim: f*ck you! Tim grabs the gun and walks over to the door Tim: Cesar, you coming? Cesar: Ok ese! Tim opens the door as the police officer on the APV opens their door Police officer: Freeze, don’t move! The police officer has a MP5 Police Officer: I said don’t move! Tim pulls up his pistol and shoots the Police Officer three times in the chest. He watches as he falls down into the ocean Cesar: Now what? Tim: We jump Cesar: This is f*cking crazy! Tim backs up before running towards the edge. He jumps and barely reaches the APV. He pulls himself up into the plane Tim: Come on Cesar! Cesar backs up and jumps. He just reaches the APV. Tim helps him onto the plane Cesar: That was crazy ese! Tim: Yeh it was Police Officer: Freeze! Tim: How about no! Tim kicks him in the balls and hits him over the head Pilot: Hey, what are you doing here? Tim shoots him in the head Tim: Let’s send this thing to hell! Tim walks back and picks up the Police Officer’s MP5 Tim: Say hello to my little friend! Tim shoots a whole clip into the controls Cesar: Let’s go ese! Tim and Cesar run back to the door Tim: You go first this time Cesar backs up and jumps. He lands in the Nevada Cesar: It’s easier going from their! Tim: Ok! Tim backs up and jumps over to the Nevada. He closes the door as the APV heads towards the ocean Cesar: To San Andreas!... Chapter 14 might be shorter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 That was a cool action packed Chapter blackladder! Here are some cookies for energy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 11, 2006 Author Share Posted December 11, 2006 Oops, I got hungry, and opened a packet of cookies But I'll have those ones too! blackadder18 scoffs down all the cookies Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serafim Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 Nice chapter dude, with a lot of action and very long I didn't notice the old chapter, so I had to read it too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 11, 2006 Author Share Posted December 11, 2006 Lol, thanks, expect the last chapter by... ooh lets say, Friday? Thursday if you're lucky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 4 days, 4 days until the world ends....... Great chapter B18! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 Nice chapter bud I think Claude should backstab Catalina this time around Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 Lots of broken windshields in the chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 Tarker 2: What the f*ck are they doing meng? Tarker: How would I know Tony? Tony: You know everything! Haha, that reminds me of "tonymontana100" LMAO Plus, there's also that sentence Tim said: Tim: Say hello to my little friend! Lots of Scarface references, huh? Anyways, great chapter, dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 Nice chapter bud I think Claude should backstab Catalina this time around KILL THE B*TCH!!!! Yeah lotsa Scarface references, and I got to see like 7 sentices of it before it was posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 12, 2006 Author Share Posted December 12, 2006 Yeh, I thought, he went out with a bang, so I kind of made him die (just like he did on the forums ) Catalina MIGHT die, I could keep her alive, or kill her Chapter 14 might be later than expected, but do expect it before Christmas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenc938 Posted December 12, 2006 Share Posted December 12, 2006 Kill her! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rashon. Posted December 12, 2006 Share Posted December 12, 2006 Great chapter, blackadder. A nice, long, action-packed one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted December 13, 2006 Author Share Posted December 13, 2006 (edited) Thanks, and I've told a few people this, but to you that don't know... On Christmas Day I will be releasing a "blackadder18 fanfic pack" Included in it you will find... -The last chapter of Part 2, closing up series 1 -The Synopsis for Part 3 -Two flashbacks Hope you enjoy your Christmas present EDIT: Something went haywire Edited December 13, 2006 by blackadder18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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