GSF_Membuh Posted November 24, 2006 Author Share Posted November 24, 2006 Here is a preview for Chapter 14. Toreno's fate is seen Claude's battle with 8-Ball ensues Ricky's battle with LCMF ensues CJ and Sweet meets up with Toreno Cesar warns CJ of Jin Jin makes it to Bone County Woozie meets up with Jin Mr. Dyed confronts CJ and Sweet Claude and Ricky meets up and teams up against 8-Ball's crew and LCMF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted November 25, 2006 Author Share Posted November 25, 2006 Here is Chapter 14! Enjoy! Chapter 14: What a Team Toreno's Cabin, 12: 26 p.m. Toreno finally awakens from his slumber after his encounter with the rogue agent Shallow Grave. Shallow Grave knocked out Toreno after he used a pen-like memory erasing device on Toreno. Toreno: Where am I? Why am I in my cabin ranch? What happened to my computer and my files?! Wait a sec these aren't my files are they? I last remeber saving Carl from that building and now I'm here! This is weird. Saint Mark's Bistro, 12:48 p.m. Claude is being chased by 8-Ball and Catalina who are still in the Sentinal. Claude: Can't.. keep... this ...up...any...longer.*Drops on the floor* 8-Ball: Stand down soldiers! *Walks up to Claude's body* Well, well, well. Look what the cat dragged in! Claude, I'm gonna make you pay you @$$hole. Claude: What did I ever do to you 8-Ball?! 8-Ball: You know well what you had boy! You killed my brother Claude, my brother! You killed the man who cared for me and I cared for him back! Claude: Who told you that bull$hit?! 8-Ball: My new mentor, the man who witnessed the crime Claude! Frank Tenpenny! Claude: Whatever he told you is total buul man. Total bull! 8-Ball: *Punches Claude in the face* Don't you ever talk about Tenpenny like that! Now I'm gonna teach you a major lesson on not to mess with 8-Ball! *Tries to punch Claude again but Claude blocks and nails 8-Ball in return* 8-Ball falls to the ground with blood coming out of his nose. 8-Ball: You're gonna regret Claude. You're gonna regret that! Claude: How huh?! 8-Ball: Like this. Troops attack! Claude: Ah $hit. All the Ballas and Clombians aims their 9mm, M-16, and Tec-9's at Claude. They fire in a hellaciouse fury. Claude is shot a couple times but still manages to run as fast as he could. Claude: F*ck I gotta get outta here! *Gets shot at again* 8-Ball: Run, run Claude as fast as you can. You cannot hide cause I'm 8-Ball man! Leone Stronghole streets, 1:27 p.m. Ricky and his Vercetti Forces engages in a Gang War against LCMF. Ricky takes out three waves of Mobsters and enters the building. Ricky catches a guard and applies a sleeper hold on the guard. Ricky: Tell me where is your leader at! Guard: I'll never tell you! You're just a Vercetti scum! Ricky: Scum am I?! *Slits the guard's throat* You'll regret saying that to a real Vercetti you Forelli prick! Ricky venture more and more into the building with three Vercetti Gunmen by his side. he reaches the downstairs offices where more Sindaccos are guarding. Sindacco Guard: Theres that Vercetti wannabe! Kill em'! Ricky: Get down! * Ducks under a desk* Alright on my signal we jump out and shoot like we shot anyone before! Vercetti Gangsters: Aye yaye sir! Ricky: On my signal, NOW!!! They pop up and shoots down the remaining Sindaccos. They head to a door that leads to the backrooms and the Fortune Vault. Ricky: You two guard the door and you come with me! Ricky and the Gangster heads downstairs of the building as the other two are shot down my more Sindaccos. Bone County, 2:23 p.m. CJ and Sweet heads towards Toreno's cabin where he is researching on Mr. Dyed. CJ: Yo Toreno! You here! *Notices that Toreno's computer is demolished and his files are burned* What the hell happened here?! Sweet: Whoever did this really wanted Toreno to stop his research. CJ: Where is Toreno?! Suddenly Toreno comes from behind and apples a sleeper hold CJ. Toreno: What the f*ck are you doin' here?! CJ: Its me CJ remember?! Toreno: Oh its you CJ. I thought you were in the hospital? CJ: I was but those Triads came and wrecked the place. Toreno: I thought the Triads were our allies?! CJ: Didn't you saw the news? Now Woozie wants to kill me! He tried twice. So did you found out anything about Mr. Dyed? Toreno: Who is that?! CJ: What?! I told you who he is. He is some kind of deranged psychopath trying to kill us! Also what happened to your computer and files?! Toreno: I don't know. I don't even remember how I got here. Sweet: What?! You came her ealier last night. You must be high or something. Toreno: No I'm not! I last remembered bringing CJ to the hospital and then blank. CJ: I think Dyed has gotten to Toreno Sweet. Sweet: Look theres a surveilance camera! Maybe it recorded what happened to Toreno and the files. CJ: Lets take the tape out. Thats its for Part 1. Part 2 coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted November 25, 2006 Author Share Posted November 25, 2006 I have came up with a title for this story that I think fits it. Grand Theft Auto: End Game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted November 25, 2006 Share Posted November 25, 2006 (edited) Great chapter yet again man. Can't wait for the next one. End Game realy fits. Edited November 25, 2006 by Gaja 90 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted November 25, 2006 Share Posted November 25, 2006 (edited) Ups double post. Edited November 25, 2006 by Gaja 90 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 (edited) Chapter 14: What a Team Part Two Sweet takes the video tape out of the camera and puts it in one of Toreno's monitors. CJ: Aiight lets see what happened to Toreno. The tape shows Toreno doing his research much to Toreno's surprise. After fast forwarding the tape a little they get to the part when Shallow Grave attacks Toreno and uses the memory erasing device. Toreno: What the hell?! I don't remember any of this! But I do know who that other guy is. Sweet: Who is he? Toreno: His name is Hallow Grave. He is a traitor to the Government Agency after his betrayal against me back in 85' and after he then since joined with M Corporation an agency that conducts illegal experiments and testing. They also have a long criminal record ever since the 70's. And that thing he's holdong in his hand is a MED. CJ: Like medication?! Toreno: No you idiot! A Memory Erasing Device. Thats why I can't remember anything since last night at the hospital. CJ: Well this Shallow Grave guy really doesn't want you to find out any information about Dyed. But maybe theres a connection between them. Sweet: That is somethin' we're gonna find out soon Carl. CJ: You're right Sweet. We are, together. Sweet: Now that sounds like a plan bro. Toreno: Now inform me on this Dyed guy. CJ: Aiight it all started... *CJ's cellphone rings* Hello. Cesar: Yo CJ its me Cesar. CJ: Wassup Cesar. Whats the prob. Cesar: CJ you have one price on your head holms. CJ: What do you mean?! Cesar: This Japanese guy is on the hunt for you ese and he's headed for San Fierro and he's probably there already! You have to get outta there! CJ: I am cause of Woozie. Cesar: Woozie! I swear I'll kill him for what he did! CJ: I'm onto him and don't worry I'll keep an eye on this "Japanese Guy" aiight. Cesar: I'm serious CJ this guy means business! He had me and Kendl hostage earlier just to find you! CJ: Aiight I'll keep on watch and I'll kill this guy! Cesar: Where you guys at?! CJ: In Bone County why? Cesar: I'm coming along for back-up holms! CJ: No please stay with Kendl she needs all the help she needs after that Triad Attack. Cesar: Aiight holms I'll stay, but if anything happens let me know aiight! CJ: Yeah I will. Later. Cesar: Later ese. Meanwhile back at the Gant Bridge. Jin, Heihachi and their men are on a ship to seek out CJ. Jin: We're getting close uncle. Very close that I could taste it. Heihachi: I sense that too. Suddenly they hear a scream of help coming from the bay. Its Woozie. Jin: Who is that?! Wait a sec thats Woozie! Get him in the ship you idiots! Yakuza Men: Yes sir! They get a hook and pulls Woozie onto the ship. Jin: Woozie you okay! Woozie: J-Jin. My old friend help me. After giving Woozie a warm meal and decent clothes Woozie and Jin has a conversation. Woozie: Jin, why did you do what you did in 99'? Jin: I had to do it for my family and my gang. Woozie you wouldn't understand. Woozie: I understand clearly on what you did that day Jin and that was distasteful man. Jin: You wouldn't understand Woozie! You wouldn't understand! Woozie: You breing shame to yourself and your family Jin and that was an all time low! Jin: Shut up Woozie! I oughta throw you out for this Woozie! This is all in the past now just let it go! Woozie: I will never forget or let it go! I can turn the tables on you just like you did me! Jin: You've overstayed your welcome Woozie! Its time for you to leave. Guards get this wretch off my ship! Guards: Yes sir! They throw Woozie back into the bay. Woozie: You'll pay for that Jin! Now how am I suppose to get outta here? Part Three will be up later. Edited November 28, 2006 by GSF_Membuh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 4, 2006 Author Share Posted December 4, 2006 I'll be posting Part Three tomorrow! Stay tune and plz comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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