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This is a new FanFic I've been working on and I think you guys will really like it and I will still be continuing GTA: Hawaii from time to time. Here is a summary.

 

Grand Theft Auto: (Working Title)

 

In Vice City, Tommy Vercetti was attacked by Forelli Gang Members. In Liberty City, Claude Speed was narrowly escaped a shootout by Leone Gang Members. In San Andreas, CJ fought in a gangwar against Sindacco Gang Members. The three protagonist plays detective and they all find out that the three Mafia Families have joined to make one elite gang and the leader is unknown. The three protagonists later teams up and fights their way through the states and to find the leader of operations, but many obstacles will stand in their way as old enemies will make their returns and the rise of a new one.

 

I know the summary needs work. I will post the First Chapter ASAP but for now I have to go, later.

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Thanks! Here is Chapter 1, Enjoy! smile.gif

 

Chapter 1: The Beginning

 

In Vice City.

 

Vercetti Gangster: Mr. Vercetti, phone call from a guy named Ken Rosenburg or whatever the hell his name is.

 

Tommy: When will he ever stop calling me?! Ah let em' talk to me.

 

Vercetti Gangster: Yes sir. (passes phone)

 

Tommy: Talk to me.

 

Ken: Tommy you finally answered my calls how long has it been two, three years?

 

Tommy: More like 15.

 

Ken: Wow, time sure did flew by huh?

 

Tommy: Yep sure did.

 

Ken: So hows it been man?

 

Tommy: Ah y'know same old, same old. Hows it been Rosie?

 

Ken: Good, its been good I now run a casino called the Caligulas Palace down here in Las Venturas.

 

Tommy: Wow, Las Venturas funny I heard that casino is run by the Mafia.

 

Ken: Well not anymore you see I took care of that problem a long time ago.

 

Tommy: Who helped you this time?

 

Ken: Ah, how did you knew?!

 

Tommy: I know you Rosie and I know you'll never fight a battle yourself.

 

Ken: This guy named Carl Johnson helped me.

 

Tommy: Carl Johnson why does that name sound familiar? Wait, he's the guy that killed my cousin!

 

Ken: Cousin?! I never knew you had a cousin.

 

Tommy: Thats cause I don't wanna talk about that point in my life. Chad took care of me when I was little after my parents died. We were put in an orphanage until we were adopted by this mafia tycoon named Joseph Vercetti. He only adopted us cause he never had children of his own to be heirs to his gang. Joseph died of a stroke when I was 18 years old and Chad was 23, so he Chad took control of the Vercetti Mafia Family and he ran it better than Joseph ever did. Then my cousin caught the Leukemia disease when he was 33 in 1985 and he promised me that I'll take control the Vercetti Mafia Family. In 1988 he was killed in a drive-by from a few Leone Family Gangstas and one of the witnesses took a picture of the man shooting and gave it to me and I found out that an African American man killed Chad. Sources told me that the man was Carl Johnson, but we were unable to locate him, but now I know where he's at thanks to you Rosie I owe you one.

 

Ken: Tommy no he's changed now he wouldn't kill a fly well unless its a very annoying one but you know what I mean! He helped me get rid of the Mafia in San Andreas,. He even killed Johnny Sindacco and you know how hard it was to kill that guy!

 

Tommy: I don't care Rosie he killed the person I loved with all my heart and took him away from me, but now I can return the favor! I'm going to San Andreas and you better meet me there Rosie!

 

Ken: But, Tommy..

 

Tommy: No buts Rosie I should be their in about a day. Later Rosie. (Hangs up)

 

Ken: But.. ah he hanged up! Ugh what am I gonna do now?!

 

In San Andreas.

 

CJ: Eh Sweet where you at?!

 

Sweet: Right here in the garage!

 

CJ: Homie what you doin' now?!

 

Sweet:(By a vehicle covered in a tarp) Y'know that Green Sabre Big Smoke and Ryder had before?

 

CJ: Yeah I'll never forget that $hit! What bout' it?

 

Sweet: I took it to a Mod Shop and got it pimped out to the max! It took half of my money, but it was worth it. Now I introduce to you the new and improved, lean, mean, green, Grove Street Machine! The GSF branded Green Sabre! (Takes tarp off)

 

CJ: Oh $hit homie thats one pimp car!

 

Sweet: This baby has a new paintjob, engine, lights, hidrolix, nitrous and all kinds of new $hit!

 

CJ: Lets take this baby out for a test drive homie.

 

Sweet: Oh yeah! But to where?

 

CJ: How bout to Las Venturas! I mean we could go clubbing, gamble and drink all we want!

 

Sweet: Lets take a road trip!

 

CJ: Aiight homie! We go through Red County, San Fierro, Bone County and finally Las Ventura!

 

Sweet: Sounds like a plan! We leave tomorrow.

 

CJ: Aiight!

 

Starts to rain.

 

In Liberty City.

 

8-Ball: Yo Claude you got the money bro?

 

Claude: (Shakes head)

 

8-Ball: Claude you're my dawg! With this money we'll be able to make our own Mafia Family!

 

Claude: (Shakes head continuously)

 

8-Ball: Soon I'll follow in my brother's footsteps as leader of a gang and not only that but finally I'll be somebody like my brother was.

 

Claude: (Stares)

 

8-Ball: So you wanna know what happened to my brother huh?

 

Claude: (Shakes head up and down)

 

8-Ball: My brother Will was once the leader of the Billiard Boiz and his street name was 9-Ball. He and his gang only lasted for a year and a half until gangs like The Southside Hoods and Triads came along and defeated them badly enough to put an end to their gang reign. Will died in a boat accident in 1996 in Vice City, but never found his body. Now I want to follow in his footsteps and make a gang better than his. Til this day I still miss him, but thats in the past and now its time to move on.

 

Claude: (looks sad)

 

At Vice City International

 

Tommy: Make sure you don't lose my stuff.

 

Vercetti Gangster: Yes sir.

 

Flight Attendant: Flight 746 enroute to Las Venturas is delayed I repeat Flight 746 enroute to Las Venturas is delayed.

 

Tommy: What the f*ck.

 

Vercetti Gangster: What do we do now.

 

Tommy: Lets ask the flight attendant.

 

Flight Attendant: May I help you sir.

 

Tommy: Yes, why is flight 746 delayed?

 

Flight Attendant: San Andreas is experiancing some bad weather right now and it'll be too dangerous to get there sir.

 

Tommy: Whens the next flight over there?

 

Flight Attendant: About four days.

 

Tommy: Four days?! Well I can wait for a little bit. Thanks for your help ma'am.

 

Flight Attendant: Your welcome sir.

 

Tommy: What to do now?!

 

Tommy gets to his limo and drives off. A Forelli Family car follows close behind.

 

Thats it for Chapter 1. I hope you guys enjoyed it and please feel free to comment. Chapter 2 up tomorrow.

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`It's Awesome!!! I love it!!! This kicks your other story right in the ass man! Greta job! Have a cookie cookie.gif = ]

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lol. I'm trying to change his personality and soon he will be a hardcore talking badass just6 like before. Here is Chapter 2, enjoy y'all! smile.gif This Chapter is mostly a CJ/Sweet chapter.

 

Chapter 2: Riot in Red County

 

CJ and Sweet are getting ready for their road trip.

 

CJ: Yo homie its pouring buckets out there I don't think its safe to go out in weather like this.

 

Sweet: Yo I promised you that we'll be taking a road trip to Las Venturas in my new Green Sabre and I'm not gonna break it aiight!

 

CJ: Fine then we go already!

 

Sweet: Now thats the kind of attitude I wanna see outta you. Hurry get inside already I wanna beat the traffic.

 

CJ: Aiight lets go.

 

Sweet: Next stop Red County! (Turns on the ignition)

 

OG Loc comes in front of the Sabre.

 

OG: Yo where you guys goin?!

 

CJ: Ah Geoffery get the hell outta the way!

 

OG: Where yo goin homies?!

 

Sweet: We goin' to Las Venturas now get the f*ck outta the way!

 

OG: Aiight then b*tches!(Gets outta the way)

 

CJ: Finally that @$$hole moved!

 

They drive off onto the extremely wet and damped road.

 

OG: Mother f*ckers!

 

A man approaches OG Loc.

 

Man: Excuse me sir but do you mind telling me where those two are going?

 

OG: The two [email protected]$$es?! They're heading for Red County going to Las Venturas!

 

Man: Thank you(grabs a 9mm and shoots Loc in the head) very much! (Grabs a cellphone) Mario to Sindacco Base the prey is heading for Red County, what should we do?!

 

Man on other line: Make sure the prey doesn't make it out of Red County alive! You know what to do.

 

Mario: Yes I do!(Hangs up and re-dials again) Eh Paulie put plan "Hunt" into action and once the prey gets there you know what to?!

 

Paulie: Yes I have a feeling that this party will start off with a big bang!

 

In San Fierro.

 

Woozie: What do you mean they kidnapped Ran Fa Li?!

 

Triad Gangster: Ran Fa Li has been taken by some guys in green. They took out a $hit load of our guys with their Rocket Launchers.

 

Woozie: Damn it! I've gotta do something Ran Fa Li's life is at stake! But what?!

 

Triad Gangster: We sent out more men to receive Ran Fa Li sir!

 

Woozie: Whats the point obviously the one we're dealing with has some cleverness and I can't that risk! Wait Carl he can help us I'll call him now.(Grabs phone)

 

CJ: Wassup?!

 

Woozie: Carl its me Woozie! Listen Ran Fa Li has been kidnapped by a gang of guys wearing green! I need some help Carl please come down ASAP!

 

CJ: Don't sweat Woozie I'm on my way I'm heading into Red County now and I should be there in a bit.

 

Woozie: Alright, but please hurry!(Hangs up)

 

CJ: Green?! The only gang that wears greens is GSF theres no way they would do this!

 

They reach Red County in ruins.

 

Sweet: What the hell happened here?!

 

CJ: This doesn't look good at all!

 

Sweet: $hit my car needs some juice we gotta find a gas station somewhere or else we'll get stranded.

 

They finally reach a gas station but its in ruins and the gas tanks has been blown up.

 

Sweet: F*ck now what are we suppose to do now?!

 

CJ: Hey look the light is on in that Mini-Mart!

 

Sweet: Lets check it out.

 

When they get inside a man with a shotgun pops out from behind a register aiming a shotgun at both CJ and Sweet.

 

Man: Put your hands where I can see em'!

 

CJ: What the f*ck is with you man?!

 

Man: Don't question me!(Shoots)

 

Meanwhile in Vice City.

 

Tommy: Ah finally back home in my mansion what more can be good?

 

A Forelli Mafia Member sneaks a bomb in Tommy's basment and the bomb starts to tick with the set off time set to 10 minutes.

 

Thats it for Chapter 2 I hope you guys enjoyed it. Next chapter coming up tomorrow.

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Sorry I didn't post any new chapters cause my computer was acting up and I had to get a new one. Anyways here is Chapter 3! I promise 4 chapters will be posted tomorrow to make up my absence.

 

Chapter 3: 8-Ball kidnapped and Tommy Vercetti... Dead?

 

In Liberty City 8-Ball is having a nightmare about his brother.

 

9-Ball: Ryan help me!

 

8-Ball: Don't worry bro I'm comin'!

 

8-Ball extends his hand to reach out to 9-Ball, but his hand sets up in fire.

 

8-Ball: What the f*ck!

 

9-Ball: Ryan help!

 

9-Ball catches on fire.

 

9-Ball: Why Ryan, why?!

 

8-Ball: NOOOOOOOO! (wakes up) F*ck what a nightmare! I gotta stop drinkin' booze before sleepin'.

 

8-Ball dresses up and heads towards his car.

 

8-Ball: Eh Claude hurry up I goin' bar you need to drive me there!

 

Claude gets downstairs and gets in the car with 8-Ball. They head yowards the local bar, but a Leone Mafia Car follows behind them.

 

8-Ball: Man that car is comin' up freakin' fast.

 

Claude speeds up but the car just speeds up more behind them. Suddenly, one of the men in the Leone car pulls out an Uzi and shoots continuously at Claude and 8-Ball.

 

8-Ball: I knew somethin' was goin' on!

 

Claude grabs an Uzi of his own and shoots out the window.

 

8-Ball: $hit a tires blown out!

 

Claude's car tilts and rolls over 3 times.

 

Leone Gangster: Yes we got em'!

 

Claude and 8-Ball manages to make their way out of the car.

 

8-Ball: Claude look its Leone gangsters!

 

Claude:*whispers* $hit.

 

8-Ball: Eh I thought you guys were outta here! Also Salvatore's dead you guys should be dead also!

 

Leone Gangster: Hmph you wish 8-Ball. We are now run by someone else. Someone smarter and more wiser than that bologna Salavatore.

 

The gangsters are about to shoot until a banshee pulls up and a man grabs 8-Ball and pulls him in the vehicle. Claude shootes at it to no avail.

 

Claude:*whispers* $hit 8-Ball!

 

The Leone Gangsters focuses their attention back to Claude.

 

Leone Gangster: Ah who cares you're the one we want!(Shoots)

 

Claude dodges and shoots back killing all the gangsters. More Gangsters arrives, but Claude runs out of ammo.

 

Claude:*whispers* F*ck!

 

Leone Gangster: You're comin' with us Speed!

 

Claude tries to run, but he's shot down.

 

Leone Gangster: Hurry get em' in the trunk! (Gets on the phone) Mister Leone we have Speed what should we do with em'?

 

Mr. Leone: Just bring em' here to me and I'll take care of it from there.

 

Leone Gangster: OK we'll be there in a bit.(Hangs up)

 

They get inside their sentinal and drives off.

 

In San Andreas.

 

Man: Don't question me!(Shoots)

 

Sweet: CJ look out!(Tackles CJ down)

 

CJ: Thanks homie I owe you one.

 

Sweet: Don't mention it.

 

Man: Hold the f*ck still!

 

Sweet and CJ tackles him down making him drop his gun.

 

CJ: What the f*ck is your problem?!

 

Man: I'm just protecting myself from those rioters!

 

Sweet: What rioters?!

 

Man: A riot broke out cause these guys in brown leather jackets gunned down a couple of people and then the towns folk defended themselves by using weaponsof their own. After that a huge riot broke out destroying this town and countless others!

 

CJ: How come you were in here?!

 

Man: This gas station has bullet-proof glass windows which gives me a chance of livin'!

 

Sweet: I guess your story checks out. Whats your name?!

 

Man: My names Mike!

 

CJ: Well Mike do you know wheres the next gas station from here?!

 

Mike: About ten miles from here!

 

CJ: $hit my car will only last for 25 minutes and we really need to get to San Fierro!

 

Sweet: We could go on our feet after the gas runs out.

 

CJ: You kiddin' right?! No way we're gonna survive out there! Also we have a situation in San Fierro!

 

Sweet: Its better than just standing here all night!

 

CJ: I guess you're right. Its a good thing we brung weapons. Eh Mike you in?!

 

Mike: I have nothin' else to do.

 

CJ: Aiight lets go!

 

They get in the Green Sabre and drives off into the foggy night.

 

In Vice City.

 

Tommy: I need to get some weapons from the basement for my trip to San Andreas.

 

Tommy goes in his baement where his weapon vault is at.

 

Tommy: (hears ticking) What the hell is that sound?!(Goes through boxes and finds the bomb.) Ah $hit!

 

The bomb explodes and destroys the mansion and everything in it. A Vercetti Gang member pulls up and searches the carnage.

 

Vercetti Gangster: Mr. Vercetti where are you?! Mr. Vercetti!

 

In Liberty City.

 

At the docks at about 10:23 p.m.

 

8-Ball wakes up in a daze and sees an African American man sitting in a chair.

 

8-Ball: Who the f*ck are you?!

 

Man: The name's Tenpenny, Frank Tenpenny.

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good story man

 

keep it up

 

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Here is Chapter 4, Enjoy y'all! smile.gif

 

Chapter 4: Survival

 

In San Andreas.

 

CJ: Sweet you sure this'll work?

 

Sweet: Am I ever wrong?!

 

CJ: There was that time we were betrayed by Smoke and Ryder and you just went ahead into their trap and got arrested.

 

Sweet: Ah shut the f*ck up Carl!

 

CJ: Whatever you say Sean.

 

Mike: I would love to listen to your conversation, but look ahead!

 

CJ and Sweet looks at where Mike is pointing at and they see three hillbillies with chainsaws.

 

CJ: $hit! Run them over!

 

The men manges to damage the car with their until they got hit head on by Sweet.

 

Sweet: F*ck that was close!

 

CJ: The remaining gas will only last us for 10 more minutes!

 

Sweet: We gotta make it last!

 

In Las Venturas.

 

Rosie: Where the f*ck is Tommy at he should be here already! His flight probably got delayed, yeah thats it delayed! *A man comes through the door*

 

Gaurd: Mr. Rosenburg the Vercetti Estates just called Mr. Vercetti is......

 

Rosie: What?! Spit it out!

 

Gaurd: Dead.

 

Rosie: Whoa you're pullin' my leg right no way he's..... Tommy NOOOOOOOO!!!! *cries* I hardly knew him! Wait I knew him for 15 years so, no my best friend!!!

 

In San Fierro.

 

Woozie: Damn it! CJ where are you!

 

Triad: Sir we found some evidence on who the perpetrator might be.

 

Woozie: What is it?!

 

Triad: We found this tape in Ran Fa Li's office in The Four Dragon's and its very disturbing

 

Woozie: Put it on!

 

Triad: Yes sir. *puts tape in VCR*

 

The tape goes on a man covered in shadows comes on. His voice sounds just like CJ's.

 

Man: As you may know your leader has been kidnapped by your's truly and you are wondering where he's at. Well he's in a closed location on the outskirts of town in Bone County in El Castillo Del Diablo and if you want to see him alive again you'll have to come down here and pick em' up yourself and watch your step.*Tape goes off.*

 

Woozie: That voice sounded so familiar, wait Carl! He'll pay for this! That explains why he isn't here yet. Send out search parties in El Castillo Del Diablo! Hurry!

 

Triad: Yes sir!

 

In Liberty City.

 

Man: The names Tenpenny, Frank Tenpenny.

 

8-Ball: Tenpenny huh? Fancy name. Why have you brung me here?!

 

Tenpenny: Simple I know who killed your brother and I'm here to help, Ryan.

 

8-Ball: How the hell did you know my name and how do yu know my brother?!

 

Tenpenny: I'm a former cop and one time caught you during a heist in 2000.

 

8-Ball: Huh?! It was you?! I'll kill you!

 

Tenpenny: Whoa there big guy I know who killed your brother on that boat trip in Vice City. His death was intended.

 

8-Ball: What the f*ck do you mean?!

 

Tenpenny: He was assassinated Ryan and I know who killed him, but to ring him into justice I need your help and besides the victim was your brother.

 

8-Ball: Grrrrrrr! What do you want me to do?

 

Tenpenny: Before that do you want me to tell you your brother's murderer?

 

8-Ball: I'm listening.

 

Tenpenny: His name is, Carl Johnson and he just so happens to know your friend Claude.

 

8-Ball: What do you mean?!

 

Tenpenny: They had a friendly encounter back in 92' during a street race after they became best of friends, until Claude's departure shortly after. Claude went to Vice City around the same time Carl did in 97'. They went on a crime spree and were hired by the local mafia to kill your brother and you know the rest.

 

8-Ball: No, Claude wouldn't do this! He wouldn't!

 

Tenpenny: Who are you gonna believe Ryan. Your brother's murderer or your brother's savior.

 

8-Ball: I swear I'll kill those two with all the rage at the bottom of my heart!

 

Tenpenny: Yes, thats the kind of anger and rage I wanna see in an apprentice.

 

In Bone County.

 

Triad:(On a cellphone) This is the place Mr. Woozie. What do we do?

 

Woozie: Find Ran Fa Li and kill Carl Johnson!

 

Triad: Yes sir.

 

The Triads enters the town, but secretly many bombs and underground mine bombs. are scattered throughout the town.

 

Triad: Sir, Ran Fa Li isn't here.....(bombs explodes)

 

Woozie: What happened?! Answer me! What happened?! Carl I will kill you!

 

Triad: Sir, all members of the search party are dead! It was a trap!

 

Woozie: Leave me alone I have planning to do!

 

Triad: Yes sir.

 

In Red County.

 

Sweet: Oh no not now!

 

CJ: What?!

 

Sweet: The gas is running out!*car stops*

 

Mike: $hit what do we do now?!

 

CJ: We go on foot. Hurry lets go!

 

Sweet: Aiight I got my weapons ready.

 

Mike: Me too.

 

CJ: Aiight lets do this $hit!

 

The run off into the dark foggy road.

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Chapter 5: Tenpenny's Origin

 

Liberty City Docks, 9:45 p.m.

 

8-Ball: Come on old man tell me what I have to do! I'm tired of waiting here doin' nothin'!

 

Tenpenny: *Comes out of shadows revealing he's in a wheelchair.* In due time Ryan. In due time. I need you to have some rest before I assign you anything.

 

8-Ball: Fine. In the meantime would you mind telling me how you became a paraplegic? Tenpenny: Don't mind if I do Ryan. It all started in Los Santos, San Andreas 1992. I used to be the head officer of an organization called C.R.A.S.H. along with my two asscosiates Eddie Pulaski and Henry Pendlebury. Our mission was to end gang violence in the streets of Los Santos, but it would come at a cost. Pendlebury was shot down by Grove Street Gangsters which Carl Johnson was co-leader of. After Pendlebury's death we were driven to a state of depression and soon the streets went into total hell, until our newest recruit Jimmy Hernandez came and inspired us to get back to work and the streets were settled again. Until Carl Johnson returned after five years of staying in Liberty City. He left because of his younger brothers death which his other brother Sean Johnson blamed Carl for their brother's death. Grove Street Families were rising back from the dead and becoming a major threat to us, so me and my gang of "Freedom Fighters" took action and killed most of the GSF members instead for Carl and Sean. Their best friends Lance and Melvin saw the light and helped us put Sean in the hospital and forced Carl to join us and made him do our dirty work for us. But CJ found some new friends and he rised up against us and brought his gang back to life and took down most of my forces. I tried to retreat in a brokened down fire truck but Carl made my truck derailed off a bridge thus making me a paraplegic.

 

8-Ball: Wow tough luck there old man.

 

Tenpenny: Ever since then I quit the force and made it my life mission that I'll end street violence and kill Carl Johnson for ruining my life!

 

8-Ball: Looks like we have something in common after all old man.

 

Tenpenny: Looks like we do Ryan. I think its time for you to make yourself useful. I need you to pick up two former asscociates of mines. Their names are T-Bone Mendez and Catalina Vialpando. They are both residing in Red County, San Andreas on Fern Ridge.

 

8-Ball: Don't worry old man I'll bring them here. Even if I have to use force.

 

Tenpenny: Also tell them Tenpenny sent you.

 

8-Ball: Aiight. *Gets in a limo and heads towards the airport.*

 

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Chapter 6: A Vercetti is Gone, but a Vercetti is Born

 

Starfish Island, 4:00 p.m.

 

Preacher: We gather here today to pay our condolences to Tommy Vercetti. He was great man and a loyal companion to his friends. He leaves behind his two adopted children Ricky and Jenny Vercetti. May us pay our final respects to Tommy Vercetti.

 

 

All of the people in attendance pays their final respects to Tommy. His corpse is badly burned. A Vercetti Gangster approaches the stage and grabs a mic.

 

Vercetti Gangster: Under Tommy Vercetti's last wishes he gives everything he owns to his adopted children and he wants the new leader of the Vercetti Mafia to be his son Ricky Vercetti. Ricky will you please come to say a few words.

 

Ricky: *Comes up on stage and takes the mic.* I am deeply saddened at my father's death. When I was young I was pushed around in that orphanage me and my sister. Until one day Tommy came to find heirs to his Vercetti Throne and outta all of the stronger, bigger kids he chose me and Jenny. *Tears up* He promised us that we will be safe with him and that he will always protect us even if he had to put his life on the line, and he did. He made sure we were safe and protected all the time. He made sure we were happy. Even though we weren't his real kids he treated us like we were his own. Now, today that great man is gone and he leaves us with some questions unanswered. I know his death wasn't an accident. No way! I promise to find the man that did this to you dad and I will make sure that the Vercetti name won't go to waste!

 

Just then a man in a black suit grabs his cell phone and dials in a number .

 

Man: Looks like we have another Vercetti Problem.

 

Man on other line: No, everything is comin' together nicely.

 

Man: What do you mean by that?!

 

Man on other line: I mean we could use this to our advantage and soon the Mafia Families will rule over Vice City soon enough.

 

Ganton, San Andreas, 7:21 p.m.

 

Cesar comes for a visit and notices Sweet's garage door is open.

 

Cesar: Eh CJ! Sweet! Anybody home? *Notices a leg sticking out under Sweet's Greenwood.* OG Loc?! What the f*ck is goin' on here?! Who could had done this?!

 

Suddenly the garage door closes behind Cesar and the man that shot OG Loc pops out of Sweet's Greenwood.

 

Sindacco Gangster: Finally we meet Mr. Vialpando.

 

Cesar: Who the hell are you ese?! *Takes out his 9mm Pistol* What do you want?!

 

Sindacco Gangster: You're the one that I want Vialpando. The boss has been requesting for me to get you and finally he;s gonna get his wish.

 

Cesar: Whatever holms do you think I'm just gonna go with you! Hell no ese!

 

Sindacco Gangster: You don't have a choice Cesar. You're comin' with me whether you want to or not. You wouldn't want to anger the Mafia!

 

Cesar: Wait a sec. You are one of Johnny Sindacco's b*tches. Me and my homie CJ took out all of you guys ese back in 92' in Las Venturas.

 

Sindacco Gangster: I won't for get that day! That was the same day your friend Carl Johnson killed our beloved leader! *Takes out an AK-47.* What happened to him is gonna happen to you!

 

Cesar: Really eh? Lets see what you can f*ckin' do *Shoots*

 

Red County, 8:47 p.m.

 

CJ: This place always f*ckin' creep the hell outta me.

 

Sweet: Whats with all this f*ckin' fog?1 I can't see $hit.

 

Mike: Once we get across the bridge ahead we should be about half way to San Fierro.

 

CJ: $hit what happened to the bridge?! Its blown up!

 

Sweet: How are we suppose to get across now?!

 

Mike: I know another way across, but we'll have to stay overnight to do it.

 

CJ: What?! That'll be f*ckin' suicide man! So where is the way across?

 

Mike: Its a trail somewhere in the forest and luckily I know the way there.

 

Sweet: Well what are we doin' here standin' in the dark? Lets head out!

 

Liberty City International, 10:37 p.m.

 

8-Ball: Can I have 1 ticket heading for Red County, San Andreas?

 

Flight Attendant: 1 ticket for Red County, San Andreas comin' up. Whats the occasion?

 

8-Ball: Just some personal business.

 

Attendant: Here you go. Enjoy your trip!

 

8-Ball: Don't worry, I will.

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I see nobody seems to be fans of this story, but I shall continue anyway.

 

Chapter 7: The Tales and Legend of Back O' Beyond

 

CJ: Where is this trail you were talkin' bout?

 

Mike: Just down this forest of Back O' Beyond.

 

CJ: Isn't this place suppose to have spirits, Ghost Cars, Big Foot and some other weird $hit?!

 

Mike: Yep, this place is the most supernatural place in all of Sa Andreas.

 

Sweet: You guys believe in this bull$hit?! All those stories are f*ckin' fake @$$ homies. Ghost Cars?! What kind of legend is that?! I could make up a better one than that!

 

Mike: I see you're quite a skeptic Sweet.

 

Sweet: You know I am. Just ask Carl.

 

CJ: Hey I believe in all the tales here ever since that @$$hole Tenpenny abandoned me here in 92' and I thought that was the last I'll ever see of that place.

 

Sweet: Right Carl.

 

Mike: Sweet, you won't be much of a skeptic anymore after our trip tonight. You'll believe.

 

Sweet: Whatever Mike. I'm not a [email protected]$$ like you.

 

12:00 a.m.

 

Mike: Here it is. Back O' Beyond. Gives you chills yeah?

 

CJ: This place always gives me chills. Hey what does that sign say up ahead?!

 

They approach a sign that say "STAY OUT".

 

Sweet: Hmph stay out my @$$! *Breaks the sign down and throws it a couple feet away.* Thats what I think bout this place. Well lets get a movin'.

 

Mike: Don't you think before you do stupid $hit?!

 

Sweet: Why?!

 

Mike: That sign had a map of Back O' Beyond engraved on the back!

 

CJ: $hit! Thanks alot Sweet.

 

Sweet: Hey I didn't know!

 

Mike: You guys are lucky that you have me cause I know where the trail is at.

 

Sweet: Whatever.

 

Mike: Follow me.

 

12:45 a.m.

 

CJ: F*ck it gets darker the more we travel into this place. Eh Sweet what time is it?

 

Sweet: Its... thats strange.

 

CJ: What?

 

Sweet: My watch is stuck on 12 and its already passed 12.

 

Mike: Told ya.

 

Sweet: Aw screw you Mike!

 

CJ: Aiight this no time for arguin'! Mike, just show us to the trail and Sweet, just shut up.

 

Sweet: Aiight.

 

Mike: Ditto.

 

1:00 a.m.

 

Mike: So, where did you guys come from?

 

CJ: We're from Los Santos. We're part of Grove Street.

 

Mike: Grove Street?! You're Carl and Sean Johnson!

 

Sweet: Yeah we are.

 

Mike: You guys are like gang legends from what I've heard.

 

CJ: Legnds?! I like the sound of that.

 

Sweet: Amen brother. amen.

 

CJ: Where did you came from Mike?

 

Mike: I came from Liberty City. In 2000 I used to work for a guy named Vinnie before he was killed. I also did some work for the local mafia families and some other gangs. After that I fled Liberty City. I was looking for a place to live where there was no crime and violence, so I came here to Red County hoping to make a new life, until now that is. It seems like my life of crime has caught up to me again.

 

CJ: Homie don't worry as long as you have friends everything will be aiight.

 

Mike: Let me guess you got that speech out of a movie huh?

 

CJ: Yes I did.

 

Sweet: F*ck this place is creepin' the hell outta me. It feels like somebody is followin' us.

 

Mike: Its a good thing I brung my flashlight.

 

CJ: You had one all this time?!

 

Mike: Yeah, I was saving it for an emergency and apparently this is an emergency. *Turns flashlight on.*

 

Sweet: Aiight lets get movin'. *Trips on something.* Aw what the f*ck was that?!

 

Mike: Let me look. *Points his flashlight at a headstone.*

 

CJ: What the hell is a headstone doin' here?!

 

Mike: Hey theres writing on it. It says "Here lies Ryan Brolin, died when the cops shot him down after a high speed chase, This is where he died."

 

CJ: Hey look heres another one. It says "Here lies Sue Lattendale, died after she was shot in the head by a Sniper Bullet. The killer was never found. This is where she died."

 

Sweet: Hey I found more. "Here lies Jack Thompson, died after an angry mob beaten him to death after he tried to get a videogame banned. Thus is where he died." Homies this is gettin' creepy.

 

Mike: Hey heres five more.

 

CJ: I found ten behind this rock.

 

Sweet: Three right here by this bush.

 

Mike: Now do you believe Sweet?

 

Sweet: Uuuh n... n...no.

 

CJ: Lets just keep on movin' shall we?

 

Sweet: Aiight. *Looks back at the headstones in fear.*

 

2:00 a.m.

 

Mike: Not much farther now guys.

 

CJ: Finally. We could get the f*ck outta here.

 

Sweet: Yes, I just want to go to bed, eat and watch some T.V.

 

A sound of a shotgun is heard.

 

CJ: Where the hell did that came?! Did any of you did that?!

 

Sweet: No, the only weapons we took was the 9mm Pistols.

 

Mike: Then who the hell did that?! *Points at a tree with a bullet mark in it with smoke coming out.*

 

CJ: Apparently we're not alone here. *Looks around with his 9mm Pistol in hand.*

 

Sweet: Lets hurry the f*ck the f*ck up!

 

2:45 a.m.

 

A shotgun is heard again.

 

CJ: Thats the 45th time we heard it!

 

Sweet: Really?! I lost count at 30.

 

Mike: Look! Theres a cabin!

 

CJ: The lights are on inside. Looks like someone lives in there.

 

Sweet: Maybe we could ask em' if we could spend the night.

 

CJ: I agree with Sweet. My legs are killin' me. I mean we've been walkin' out here for like about three hours without rest man.

 

Mike: Yeah me too. Alright lets go then.

 

CJ knocks on the door and a skinny woman with a baby in her arms answers it.

 

Woman: Yes.

 

CJ: Hello there. We're lost travelers lookin' for a place to crash for the night.

 

Woman: Ah yes we have enough room for the three of you. Please come inside and make yourselves at home.

 

CJ: I thank you kindly ma'am.

 

The group enters inside the medium sized cabin.

 

Mike: Do you have a phone we can borrow?

 

Woman: I'm afraid not. Please have some of my homemade tea.

 

Sweet: Aiight. I could use some.

 

Woman: Just stay here and I'll be out soon.

 

She goes inside the kitchen.'

 

Mike: That lady creeps me out.

 

They enter the living where another woman is sitting in a rocking chair watching T.V.

 

Woman 2: Why hello there. Are you friends of Muriel?

 

CJ: Uh no. We're just lost travelers.

 

Woman 2: My name is Agatha Hewitt. How do you do?

 

CJ: Its all aiight.

 

Agatha: Its all "aiight" here too.

 

In the kitchen Muriel is makin' the tea.

 

Muriel: This should help our guests. *Puts sleeping pills in the three tea cups.* Boys the tea is ready.

 

Sweet: Finally I'm ready for some tea baby.

 

Muriel: This should help you boys get some rest.

 

CJ: Its delicious ma'am.

 

Sweet: Best tea I ever tasted.

 

Mike: Scrumptious!

 

3:30 a.m.

 

The goup falls asleep about 5 minutes after they drank the tea. A telephone ringing is heard and CJ wakes up still a bit tired. He walks into Muriel's room where she is talking on the phone with her baby in hand.

 

CJ: I thought you said you had no phone!

 

Muriel: *Hangs up* You're just hallucinating son. You should have more tea.

 

CJ looks around her room and sees a photo of the baby and his family noticing that Muriel and Agatha are not in it.

 

CJ: Thats not your son. You kidnapped him!

 

Muriel: Calm down boy.

 

CJ makes his way to the living room where Agatha is still watching T.V.

 

Agatha: What are you doin' up boy? You should be gettin' rest..

 

CJ: I'm afraid not lady.

 

Muriel: Here is some more tea boy. You need your rest.

 

CJ: I don't want your f*ckin' tea! *Takes out his 9mm and shoots the tea cup out of her hand.*

 

Suddenly a man in a Sheriff uniform comes in with a Shotgun.

 

Sheriff: This boy givin' ya trouble hun?!

 

Agatha: Yes honey. He won't drink his tea.

 

Sheriff: Leave em' to me. *Shoots but misses CJ.*

 

CJ heads for the bed room where he, Sweet and Mike were sleeping at. He enters and locks the door.

 

CJ: Sweet, Mike get the f*ck up!

 

Sweet: Er.. Sea Monkey has my money.

 

CJ: What the f*ck?! Get up @$$holes! These people here f*ckin' psychos!

 

Mike: I'm up, I'm up.

 

Sweet: I knew there was somethin' strange bout these people.

 

Sheriff: Get out here now and I promise your death will be fast and painless!

 

Sweet: Lets get the f*ck outta here!

 

Mike: Look a window!

 

The group makes it out through the window, but a gang of Rednecks are patrolling around.

 

Sweet: $hit! Theres a cellar door maybe we could hide in there.

 

They enter inside and are surprise by what they see.

 

Mike: Look at all these corpses man. This is like a morgue!

 

Sweet: We have to do something! What these people are doin' is downright wrong!

 

CJ: But what?!

 

Man: H-Help me.

 

Mike: What was that?!

 

CJ: Look theres a survivor!

 

They approach a man who is crucified to a wall.

 

Man: H-Help me.

 

Sweet: Don't worry we'll get ya down.

 

They try to pull the man free but he is stuck.

 

CJ: $hit he's stuck there good.

 

Man: N-No grab that machete.

 

CJ grabs the Machete.

 

CJ: Aiight. You want me to cut you down cause I can, but..

 

Man: NO! S-stab me. I-I can't survive like this. Please do it.

 

CJ: Yo I don't know if I can...

 

Man: Do it!

 

CJ: Aiight, aiight. Keep a low voice indoors sheesh. *Stabs the man through the stomach.*

 

Man: T-Thank Y-You. *Drops dead.*

 

Suddenly a man in a Leather Face mask pops out with a Chainsaw and attacks them.

 

CJ: What the f*ck man!

 

Sweet: $hit lets run like hell!

 

Mike: I agree!

 

They run around the cellar room for a few minutes while being chased by Leather Face, until the Sheriff comes down.

 

Sheriff: Tommy boy! Did you kill those intruders yet?! *Sees CJ and the gang running for their lives.* I see that you haven't. Lemme give ya a hand. *Shoots*

 

Mike: F*ck what now?!

 

CJ: Back to the cellar door, but...

 

CJ takes out his 9mm and shoots the Sheriff square in the head, thus killing him.

 

CJ: Bullseye!

 

Sweet: Nice shot CJ!

 

Mike: Aiight lets kill that Chainsaw lovin' motherf*cker!

 

All three of them takes out their 9mm Pistols and shoots repeatedly at Leatherface til he falls down.

 

Sweet: Aiight we got em'!

 

Mike: Lets head out!

 

They exit the cellar room re-entering the cabin. Muriel and Agatha confronts them.

 

Agatha: You boys have overstayed your welcome.

 

Muriel: I think its time for you three to high tail it outta here.

 

CJ: Don't worry we're just about to go, but we always have time for this.

 

They all take out their 9mm and shoots down Muriel and Agatha, thus killing them.

 

CJ: Lets get the f*ck outta here.

 

They exit the cabin, but the Rednecks patrolling outside spots them.

 

Redneck: There they are get em'!

 

They get on ATVs and chase the gang, but they kill one of the Rednecks making him fall off their ATVs.

 

Mike: There take that ATV and get outta here. I'll hold them off.

 

CJ: What?! We're not leavin' without you Mike!

 

Sweet: Yeah you helped us alot tonight and we should in exchange bring you with us. We could get you a new home!

 

Mike: Its too late for me now! Just go! The trail is about a mile from here you can't miss it. Theres a huge rock with a number 1 on it right by the trail.

 

CJ: Hey you got that Its too late for me now speech from that movie.

 

Mike: Yes, now go.

 

Sweet: No!

 

Mike: You guys need to go now! I'm not gonna let more of my friends die because of me! Thats what happened to my friend 8-Ball. Now go!

 

CJ: You need to live just as much as us! What you're gonna do is suicide Mike!

 

Mike: Its my choice CJ and my choice is to help my friends. I have a way to get them off your trail. I might die, but please promise me that you'll end his madness once and for all.

 

CJ: What do you mean?! Who's madness?! Please answer us!

 

Mike: I'm sorry I revealed to much information that you shouldn't know. Goodbye my friends, til we meet again.

 

Mike gets on the ATV.

 

Mike: Hey Red$hits lookin' for someone?!

 

Redneck: Thats him get em'!

 

Mike rides off with the Rednecks hot on his tail.

 

CJ: Mike!

 

Sweet: Come on CJ its time for us to leave.

 

CJ: Not before we finish some unfinished business.

 

They go back inside the cabin and set it ablaze in an inferno of fire.

 

Sweet: Burn baby burn!

 

CJ: Speaking of babies. *Takes out the baby boy from behind a bush.*

 

Sweet: What are you doin' with that demon seed?!

 

CJ: He wasn't their real son. They kidnapped him from his real family and most likely killed them.

 

Sweet: Aiight. You're not thinkin' of keepin' him right?

 

CJ: Better by me than those psychos.

 

Suddenly a broken down car rolls down a hill and stops in fron t of CJ and Sweet.

 

CJ: Looks like this is our ticket outta here.

 

CJ notices a cellphone on the ground with a note on it. The note says "Dear Carl, I know what I did was suicidal, but that is not the point of this note. I'm warning you of a great danger that you'll encounter very soon enough. I can't reveal his name now, but in time you will. Hope I'll see you soon. With Gangsta Love, Mike. P.S. Here is a new cellphone that you'll need for your future endeavours."

 

CJ: Thank you Mike.

 

Sweet: CJ are we goin' or not?!

 

CJ: Oh.. of course lets go already.

 

CJ hands Sweet the baby boy and they get inside of the "Ghost Car" and drives off into the forest of Back O' Beyond. A mile later they find the Big Rock with the 1 on it and follows the trail ending up back on the main highway to San Fierro. A Sindacco Gangster spots them, but lets them continue onto San Fierro. They make it to their garage in Doherty.

 

CJ: Well we finally made it to San Fierro a little later than expected. Is your watch workin' now?

 

Sweet: Thank God it is! Its 7:18 a.m.

 

CJ: I thought we'll never get outta there.

 

Sweet: Thanks to Mike we did. Hey where did that car go?

 

CJ: *Looks at where he parked it and it was gone.* What the hell.

 

CJ and Sweet both here someone say "Thank You" and a man appeared in front of them wearing an old Tuxedo saying "Thank You".

 

CJ: Did you just saw and heard what I just saw and heard.

 

Sweet: Y-Yeah.

 

CJ: Are you a believer now Sweet?

 

Sweet: Y-Yeah I believe now. Hey CJ next time lets just go to the airport if we're goin' on vacation.

 

CJ: Ya got that right.

 

Suddenly the new cellphone that Mike gave CJ rings and CJ answers.

 

CJ: H-Hello.

 

Man: Yo CJ did you missed me?

 

CJ: You!

 

Man: Yes CJ its me in the flesh. HA HA HA! How was your little test CJ?

 

CJ: Test?! What test you f*ckin' snake in the grass?!

 

Man: My Back O' Beyond Test, CJ. I see that you passed since I'm talkin' to you now.

 

CJ: You orchestrated all of that?!

 

Man: HA HA HA HA no. That wasn't my work, but another's work. It appears that they were all real murderers and thanks to my spy Mike I got what I wanted.

 

CJ: Why you!

 

Man: Temper, temper Carl. If it wasn't for Mike risking his life to save you, you would have been a gonner just like him.

 

CJ: You always make other people do the dirty work for you.

 

Man: And thats what makes me famous. I'm here to tell you that I'm not the only one targeting you. It appears that the three Mafia Families has joined forces as one huge family and are gunning the ones that stood in their way down and as I remembered you sttodd in their in back in 92' in Las Venturas.

 

CJ: Bring it on I could beat them like I did before.

 

Man: Whatever CJ. Well it appears that our time is up so Au Revoir Carl and I will be watching you.*Hangs up*

 

Sweet: Who was that?

 

CJ: Tenpenny.

 

 

 

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Chapter 8: Mr. Dyed

 

San Fierro, 3:45 p.m.

 

CJ is exploring the San Fierro sights, but suddenly a huge boom came from a skyscraper above.

 

CJ: Oh $hit! What happened here?!

 

Man: A helicopter carrying Russian Forces came in and blasted the building with their MPG Rockets. After Russian Troops swooped down in the building and they're holding the people in their hostage.

 

CJ: What do they want?!

 

Man: They said they want some guy named Carl Johnson ore something. I highly doubt that Johnson guy is here.

 

CJ: I'm Carl Johnson!

 

Man: Really?! Well get in there! Thyose Russians said they're laying bombs all over San Fierro and knowing the Russian Mafia they are for real and mean business.

 

CJ: Don't worry. I'm gonna take out thise f*ckin' Russians no sweat cause I'm Carl Johnson, Leader of Grove Street Families!

 

As CJ walks in the building the man has a smirk on his face.

 

Man: I know you are Carl.

 

Inside the building the sound of screams and gunfire can be heard on the upper levels of the building.

 

CJ: These Russians do mean business, but what do they want with me?

 

CJ goes up to the seventh floor and is met by three Russian Gangsters.

 

Russian 1: Ah, Carl Johnson. The boss has waiting for you. Now come quietly and no one will get hurt.

 

CJ: Hmmm I got a better idea how if you dropped wasted on floor and I'll save these innocent people huh?

 

Rusiian 2: Wrong answer you American swine!

 

Russian: Now we're gonna have to use painful force! *They all shoot at CJ*

 

CJ manges to take cover and gets out his M-16.

 

CJ: Time to show these Russians what this American swine is all about!

 

CJ rolls and shoots at the three gangsters. He manages to kill one.

 

Russian 1: You filthy American!

 

The Russian shoots and nails CJ in the leg.

 

CJ: Ah! F*ck!

 

Russian 2: Any last words you swine!

 

CJ: One! *Shoots the Russian square in the head* Bullseye!

 

Russian: Why you little... *Shot dead from behind*

 

CJ: What the?! Show yourself whoever you are!

 

Man: Gladly! *In a Darth Vader-like tone of voice*

 

The man comes out of the shadows. He is wearing Black pants, Black overcoat, Black undershirt, Black top hat and a Black ski mask.

 

CJ: Who are you?!

 

Man: Thats for me to know and for you to find out Carl, but you can call Mr. Dyed.

 

CJ: How do you know my name?!

 

Dyed: Don't you remeber you little coward?! You and your brother Sean ruined my life back in 1987 and I want to finally exact my sweet revenge! Also how is your mum doin'? I heard she finally passed on.

 

CJ: Don't you ever talk about my family like that! Now tell me who are or I'll have to use brute force on you! *Takes out his M-16*

 

Dyed: Oh please Carl put that toy down. You could never handle a gun like that. I mean look ay you, your leg is injured due to your lack of gun handling. Just like before.

 

CJ: How do you know about me and my family?!

 

Dyed: Lets just say I was part of the family Carl. Like a close friend.

 

CJ: I never even meant you before nigga. Even Sweet doesn't know you.

 

Dyed: Come on, I'm closer to you than you know. But then again you and Sean were always the idiots.

 

CJ: You're gonna regret that you psycho! *Shoots*

 

CJ's bullets have no effect on Dyed.

 

Dyed: Body Armour does make a good bullet-proof vest. I thought we knew better than that Carl, but I guess I was wrong. Our time together has ended Carl and trust we'll meet again. Also there is bombs scattered all over this place so I strongly suggest you leave now. You have exactly 10 minutes. Til we meet again Carl!*Goes in his helicopter and flies off*

 

CJ: Who the f*ck is that guy?!

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Thanks for the comment! Heres Chapter 9! This is like a filler and short chapter. Enjoy!

 

Chapter 9: The Tokyo Conspiracy

 

Tokyo, Japan, 6:45 p.m.

 

A deal is being made between The Liberty City Mafia Families and the Kazama Yakuza. Toni Cipriani is representing the LCMF as their replacement Don. The Kazama Yakuza is being represented by Kazuya Kazama, their ruthless leader and rules over Tokyo as the most dominant Gang Leader.

 

Kazuya: So, Mr. Cipriani you want me to lend you some weapons and vehicles for drugs that will plague my territory of Tokyo, thus causing my citizens to go insane?!

 

Toni: Do we have a deal? *Extends hand*

 

Kazuya: I like your American style Toni very unique here in Japan so yes we have a deal! *Shakes Toni's hand*

 

Toni: I knew you couldn't refuse that offer. You'll have these people in the palm of your hand!

 

Kazuya: But you do know once you're an associate of The Kazama Yakuza you're services will be needed always.

 

Toni: Same with me and my Mafia Kaz.

 

Kazuya: We do have alot in common Mr. Cipriani so here take this deed to my old factory in downtown it will be your new base of operations here in Tokyo and please see the sights and meet some new people.

 

Toni: Before I go Kaz I have a proposition for you.

 

Kazuya: What kind of proposition do you have in mind?

 

Toni: There are these two guys who are giving me and my gang alot of trouble recently. Their names are Carl Johnson and Claude Speed. Here is how they look like *hands photos to Kaz* I want you to eliminate them and make sure they never get in our business again.

 

Kazuya: I know just the person who can do this and that person is my disgraceful son Jin. I'll make sure they'll never bother you again.

 

Toni: I know you will Kaz, I know you will.

 

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This is another filler-type and it continues where "Tokyo Conspriracy" left off. Enjoy!

 

Chapter 9: Prince of The Kazama Yakuza

 

Yakuza Gunman: Mr. Jin your father Kazuya has assigned you a special mission.

 

Jin: *Stops meditating* I know. My father can never do his dirty work so he sends me to do it for him.

 

Yakuza Gunman: You better watch your mouth boy! You maybe Kazuya's son, but he'll be more than happy when he finds out you're dead!

 

Jin: Why don't you then big guy?

 

Yakuza Gunman: I would, but IU don't want to be punished for my foolishness. Anyways your mission is to hunt down and kill these three men *hands Jin the photos* Their names are Carl Johnson, Ricky Vercetti, and Claude Speed. Apparently they have been thorns in our colleague's side for some time now and its our job to help our allies and we need you to kill them Jin.

 

Jin: No problem. I'll make this whole Yakuza know that I mean business and I will make father finally proud of me!

 

Yakuza Gunman: Ha ha ha! You'll have to travel to the U.S. Y'know!

 

Jin: You underestimate me you low rate scum! Gather a crew to accompany me and get the copters ready for take-off!

 

A man comes through the door and greets Jin.

 

Man: Ah nephew how are you?

 

Jin: I'm fine Uncle.

 

Yakuza Gunman: Mr. Heihachi welcome!

 

Heihachi: If you don't mind I'd like to speak to my nephew alone.

 

Yakuza Gunman: Yes sir. *Leaves*

 

Heihachi: Now nephew I know this mission for your father is the toughest yet, but I am going to accompany you as a guide and I promise you will be leader of this Yakuza one day nephew.

 

Jin: Thank you uncle. I really appreciate that.

 

Heihachi: Now lets head off shall we.

 

They walk out and are met by a huge army of Kazama Yakuza Soldiers lined up for them.

 

Jin: Finally my crew is here. Lets go!

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I won't be back til after school so I'll give this preview of Chapter 10.

 

Can CJ escape the exploding building?

Can Claude find a way out of the Leone Stronghold?

8-Ball meets up with T-Bone and Catalina

Mr. Dyed confronts Ricky Vercetti

The Triads attack Los Santos

Jin continues his mission to the U.S.

 

Hope you enjoyed.. sorta.

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I made an error, this is suppose to be Chapter 11 so yeah. Anyways heres a new chapter and thanks for all the comments. Enjoy.

 

Chapter 11: Triad Attack

 

Leone Stronghold, 5:47 p.m.

 

Claude is being carried in by two Leone Gangsters. One gangster gets on his phone and dials a number.

 

Leone Gangster 1: Sir we have Speed. What do you want us to do with him?

 

Toni: I want you to lock him up good and tight. Make sure he is watched at all times, I don't want him to escape us now.

 

Gangster 1: Tes sir. *Hangs up* Lets put him in the underground dungeon for now eh?

 

Gangster 2: Yeah its the best place to put this guy in.

 

They enter the stronghold and they go down an elevator going straight to the underground dungeon. They make it down there and stops in front of jail cell.

 

Gangster 1: Well Speed, it looks like this will be your new home for now.

 

Gangster 2: Enjoy your Claude! *Locks Claude in the cell and walks off*

 

Red County, 7:03 p.m.

 

8-Ball makes it to Angel Pine and heads off to Fern Ridge to find the cabin that T-Bone and Catalina are residing in. An hour later he makes it to Fern Ridge and heads up the hills.

 

8-Ball: How long in this freakin' place?! It goes on forever. Wait a sec what the hell is that?! *Sees a cabin up ahead* That must be it and the lights are on inside.

 

8-Ball approaches the cabin's doorsteps and notices three graves by the left of him and the blood stains on the porch.

 

8-Ball: Who are these people?!

 

8-Ball reaches the door and knocks on it to no answer. He knocks on it again and no answer. He knocks on it three more times and still no answer.

 

8-Ball: What the hell?! Are these guys even here?!

 

Suddenly a man grabs 8-Ball from behind and applies a sleeper hold on him. The man is wearing a blue and white striped shirt and appears to be Hispanic. 8-Ball struggles and breaks free and nails the man with a left hook to the face. 8-Ball catches his breath and finally questions the man.

 

8-Ball: *breathing hard* Are.. are you T-Bone Mendez?!

 

Man: Of course I am you mother f*cker! Whats it to you?

 

8-Ball: Cause... *Hit from behind by a woman*

 

Woman: Honey, is this man trying to steal from us?!

 

T-Bone: I don't know why he's here, but we're gonna find out!

 

8-Ball: Wait! Tenpenny sent me!

 

Woman: Who?!

 

8-Ball: Tenpenny, Frank Tenpenny! He sent me here to bring you to his base in Liberty City. He said you two could help us with our plan.

 

T-Bone: Tenpenny?! I thought that old fart was dead?!

 

8-Ball: He survived that car accident barely. He's in a wheel chair now cause of that punk @$$ Carl Johnson!

 

T-Bone: CJ?! Now hearin' that name makes me sooo angry!

 

Woman: Calm down honey. Maybe this nice man can help us.

 

T-Bone: But I will never forget that day Catalina. I will never forget it! That was the day my gang was destroyed, my associates were killed and that was the day my Loco Syndicate was disbanded into ashes holmes! I was almost killed by [email protected]$$hole CJ and your cousin Cesar!

 

Catalina: Well now is our to start life a new and with Tenpenny's help we can finally kill that wretch Carl Johnson!

 

8-Ball: Wait a sec. You two are T-Bone Mendez and Catalina Vialpando?!

 

Catalina: Its Catalina Mendez now. I finally found the man I've been looking for and this is him! T-Bone Mendez. We first met 2 years ago at a fabulous nightclub in Vice City. And that was the night that T-Bone killed five men to win my heart.

 

T-Bone: I will do anything for you babe. Now who are you?!

 

8-Ball: My names 8-Ball and I'm an associate of Tenpenny.

 

Catalina: You!!! You were one of Claude's friends you @$$hole! I will never forget that you little spineless bastard!!! *Hits 8-Ball again with the shovel while T-Bone holds her down*

 

8-Ball: Not anymore. That @$$hole killed my brother along with that Carl Johnson! So you coming or not?

 

T-Bone: I speak for the both of us when I say HELL YEAH!!!

 

Catalina: I still don't like or trust you, but if Tenpenny, CJ and Claude are involved I belive you. But if this is a trap I'll cut your freakin' balls off!

 

8-Ball: Don't worry it isn't you little b*tch.

 

They get in the Buffalo and drive off to the nearest airport.

 

This is only Part One. Part Two coming ASAP!

 

 

 

 

 

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Here is Part 2. Enjoy!

 

Chapter 11: Triad Attack Pt. 2

 

Somewhere in the Pacific Ocean, 7:05 p.m.

 

Jin and Heihachi are in a luxury Jet heading towards the U.S.

 

Jin: When are we getting there?!

 

Pilot: How am I suppose to know!

 

Heihachi: Please excuse my nephew please. He has sort of a bad tempur.

 

Pilot: Whatever old timer.

 

Heihachi: Jin, please control yourself because that might be your downfall one day.

 

Jin: Downfall my @$$! I am doing this for the family, for the Yakuza cause this is my destiny to bring myself to glory once again and to bring back honor to the Kazama Yakuza! This is destiny uncle!

 

Heihachi: Jin, I know that your father is a maniacal maniac, but you are not like him nephew you are his total opposite. You are free to do whatever you want.

 

Jin: You don't understand uncle! I already chosen my path its too late now. My path has been chosen and now its time for me to fulfill it.

 

Heihachi: But nephew...

 

Jin: Thats it uncle this discussion is over lets just enjoy the flight like you said.

 

Heihachi: Whatever you say Prince Jin.

 

Jin: I heard that!

 

A Vice City Cemetary, 7:27 p.m.

 

A man is at a grave with a bouquet of flowers and a picture of Victor Vance singing a musical tune.

 

Man: Swinging from the vines. Swimming in the river cold. Is my brave little soldier boy come marching home. Brave soldierboy, fighting for all thats right. Fending off the darkness with his mighty light. Brave soldier boy, marching into war. Protecting his family, thats who he is fighting for. Brave soldier boy, come marching home. Brave little soldier boy, please come marching home.

 

Vic, if only I had been there by your side you'll still be alive today. Instead I chickened out and left Vice City like a coward. You were a great brother and a true friend. I'll miss you always Vic and I shall become the Marine you wanted me to be. I promise you that brother. I promise you that.* Places flowers and the photo on his grave and leaves.*

 

Vercetti Estates, 7:35 p.m.

 

Ricky is in his office where he is met by a Vercetti Gangster.

 

Vercetti Gangster: Mr. Verctti, a huge squadron of our men have been taken out by the Russian Mafia!

 

Ricky: Make sure they don't leave Vice City alive!

 

Vercetti Gangster: Yes sir! *Leaves the room*

 

As the Gangster leaves the office a huge gust of wind blows inside the room and blows some papers from Ricky's desk. Ricky goes to pick it up, but when he turns around to his desk Mr. Dyed is sitting in Ricky's chair.

 

Ricky: *Takes out pistol* Who the f*ck are you and what are you doin' trespassing into my mansion and sitting in my desk?!

 

Mr. Dyed: Calm down Mr. Vercetti I am here to give a warning that is all.

 

Ricky: You still never answered my questions you prick!

 

Mr. Dyed: Alright, alright. You can call me Mr. Dyed and I'm here to give just a simple warning. Does that answer your questions?

 

Ricky: Alright now spill it!

 

Mr. Dyed: I am here to tell you that you need to watch your back cause hits from all over Liberty City are being called on you Mr, Vercetti. It appears that your adoptive father's past demons have caught back up to him again or should I say you. You see your father was once a trusted member of the Forelli Mafia Family and was sent here to do business. After a few adventures around the state things started getting out of hand. The Forellis have betrayed your father and a final showdown began with your father coming out as the victor, thus granting him control of Vice City itself as ruler. But, two other mafia familes the Sindaccos and Leones took this chance to strike a blow to the Forellis which succeeded. Now after years of gang wars these three mafia families have joined forces and formed a super mafia family, The Liberty City Mafia Families. They called a hit on your father and they sent Forelli soldiers to kill the man that killed their beloved leader, and unfortunately for you they succeeded in that goal.

 

Ricky: How do you know all this?!

 

Dyed: I have alot of connections Ricky and I think the only one that should be at fault for your father's death is yourself, you little smoocher.

 

Ricky: What do you mean?! I loved him like a real son would for his real father!

 

Dyed: Really?! A real son will help his father in that type of crisis. You're just like this guy I know who did the same thing to me many years back and now look at me Ricky!

 

Ricky: Screw you prick! *shoots*

 

Ricky seems like he killed Dyed but Dyed gets up and reveals he's wearing body armour.

 

Dyed: That tickled Ricky. To think you're a Vercetti.

 

Ricky shoots continuously but to no effect on Dyed.

 

Dyed: My turn. *Takes out an Uzi* Any last words?

 

Ricky: Yes I do. *Presses a red button*

 

Suddenly a Machine gun pops from the ceiling and shoots at Dyed and sends him out the window. But before Dyed could meet his end at the bottom pavement he activates his jetpack and flies back up.

 

Dyed: You won this round Ricky but I promise we shall meet again very soon! *Flies off*

 

Ricky: That was f*ckin' close.

 

San Fierro Hospital, 8:39 p.m.

 

CJ awakens and sees he's in a hospital bed with Sweet and the man he met before he entered the hostage building were by his side.

 

CJ: AH, what happened.

 

Sweet: You have a concussion and a real banged up arms and legs but they'll heal.

 

CJ: Wait?! You're that guy who was outside the building before I went in.

 

Man: Actually *Takes off fake moustache and goatee* Remember me Carl?

 

CJ: Toreno!

 

Toreno: I saved you Carl. I saved you and brung you out to safety before that building collapsed.

 

CJ: Is it true Sweet?

 

Sweet: Yep I even saw him carried you out.

 

CJ: Well thanks, I guess.

 

Toreno: Don't mention it Carl. I did promised you a favor back in 92 so I finally paid you off.

 

CJ: You never seize to amaze me Toreno. Wait that guy who shot was in the building covered in black. He told me that he knew me and my family. He also said something we did to him back in 87'. Do you know Sweet?

 

Sweet: First, who is this guy you're talkin' bout?

 

CJ: He said his name is Mr. Dyed or somethin' and he said we once knew him and he knew us. He said he was like part of the family.

 

Sweet: Nobody that I know of. Maybe he's psycho or somethin'.

 

CJ: But it feels like that I do know him, but it just doesn't ring a bell to me.

 

Toreno: Well, I'll try to investigate on this "Mr. Dyed" while you just rest Car. You can count on me.

 

CJ: Aiight Toreno.

 

Los Santos, 9:18 p.m.

 

A Triad is talking on a walkie-talkie with Woozie.

 

Woozie: Time to commence Operation: Demolition.

 

Triad: Yes sir. Send in the troops!

 

About 30 Hunters swarm Los Santos while many Rhino Tanks obliterates the streets. Then, an army of Triads swarm the entire city and causes mass destruction. Grove Street members try to stop the rampage, but are outmatched and outnumbered. Soon, mostly all the members of GSF are killed on the streets while the city is in ruins thanks to the Triads' mass attack.

 

 

 

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Here is a little preview for Chapter 12. Enjoy!

 

Carl finds out the GSF's fate

Woozie attacks Carl

Ricky goes to Liberty to fight the Liberty City Mafia Families

Claude finally escapes the Leone's grasp

Mr. Dyed confronts Claude

Jin makes it to Los Santos and confronts Cesar

Toreno attempts to find information on Mr. Dyed

Tenpenny's new plan

 

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Awesome story man, rated it good icon14.gif

Jin Kazama, Heihashi Mishima and Kazuya Kazama he he I love Tekken too. Keep it up cookie.gifcookie.gifcookie.gif

 

Jin also apears in my story cool.gif

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Awesome story man, rated it good icon14.gif

Jin Kazama, Heihashi Mishima and Kazuya Kazama he he I love Tekken too. Keep it up cookie.gifcookie.gifcookie.gif

 

Jin also apears in my story cool.gif

I kne somebody will figure that out soon. Anyways Chapter 12 coming ASAP.

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Here is a Thanksgiving Day Chapter! Enjoy!

 

Chapter 12: Fighting Temptations

 

San Fierro Hospital, 10:16 p.m.

 

CJ is lying in his hospital bed watching some T.V. A breaking news section comes on.

 

Reporter: We have some breaking news tonight as the city of Los Santos has been demolished by the local San Fierro Triads. At just about 9:00 p.m. the Triads stormed the city with helicopters and tanks destroying everything in their path. The death toll has come up to about 1500 while about 2000 are severely injured. We will update you on this story every hour by the hour. This is Tom Richards reporting.

 

CJ: What the f*ck?!

 

Suddenly Sweet bursts through the door to check on CJ.

 

Sweet: CJ, did you saw the news?!

 

CJ: Yeah I did!

 

Sweet: That is some total bull$hit man!

 

CJ: Why would Woozie do this man?!

 

Sweet: I knew somethin' was wrong with that guy! I'm gonna make sure he pays for what he has done!*Storms out of the room*

 

CJ: Sweet wait! $hit Sweet.

 

Leone Stronghold, 10:41 p.m.

 

A Leone Guard is patrolling the cells and giving out food to the prisoners. He approaches Claude's cell.

 

Leone Guard: Guess what time it is Speed? Its time for daily grool! *notices Claude aint there.* What the hell?! *Un;ocks cell door* Where the f*ck are you Speed!

 

Claude is holding himself on the top of cell by the shadows and jumps down on the guard.

 

Leone Guard: Aw! What the f*ck!

 

Claude takes out a 9mm and points it at the guard's face.

 

Claude: If you want to live you'll get me outta here!

 

Leone Guard: S-Sure I'll do anythin' just please don't kill me!

 

Claude: I think we got a deal.

 

Claude pulls the guard up and shoves him out of the cell.

 

Claude: I'm gonna need a distraction to hold all the Leone Guards down. Hey I want you to unlock every freakin' cell door now!

 

Leone Guard: Are you f*ckin' crazy?!

 

Claude: Don't you want, your head intact? Now unlock the god damn doors!

 

Leone Guard: Okay. okay! *Presses a button and all the cell doors unlock and all the prisoners escape*

 

Claude: You've done good soldier, but I don't want any witnesses to this so I'm gonna have to kill ya. *Shoots the guard* Now thats over I could finally get outta here.

 

Claude goes up the long stairs alongside all the other escapees. They make it to the main offices. More Leone Guards come and guns down most of the escapees.

 

Claude: Now what am I gonn do?! *Sees an open window* Thats gonna have to do for now.

 

Claude climbs through the window and has to jump about 15 stories below to reach safety. He sees a Trash Master pull up to take some garbage.

 

Claude: I can't believe I'm gonna do this!

 

Claude jumps into the garbage truck and gets covered by more garbage as the Trash Master leaves.

 

Vercetti Estates, 11:17 p.m.

 

Ricky and an army of Vercetti Gangsters are heading into a plane bound to Liberty City.

 

Ricky: Is everybody ready?!

 

Vercetti Gangster: Yes sir everything and everybody are ready to go.

 

Ricky: Lets head off then! *Gets into his private jet* Now I can finally get my revenge on those Mafia Pricks for killing Tommy! Now its time for me to take action and make Tommy proud. I'm gonna teach those Mafia Families to never cross a Vercetti and to prove to that Mr. Dyed that I am a Vercetti! *Plane takes off as Ricky readies his weapons*

 

Toreno's Cabin, Bone County, 11:47 p.m.

 

Toreno: I don't understand! Nothing about this Dyed character adds up! Its like he's playing mind games or something cause he seems to have no relations to CJ and his family. Its like he came outta thin air. There is absolutely no way he knows Carl. And that thing in 87' doesn't match up either. Nothing has happened to Carl that big in 87' except for the death of his brother Brian. It says here Dyed is co-leader of The Russians, but it doesn't say anything about the other co-leader. Its gonna be harder than I thought to figure out who this guy really is.

 

San Fierro Hospital, 12:13 a.m.

 

CJ is still awake after what transpired in Los Santos. Suddenly CJ heres someone come in the room.

 

CJ: Woozie!

 

Woozie: Hello Carl. *Pulls out Katana* Finally we meet again!

 

CJ: Why are you doin' this Woozie?! Why?!

 

Woozie: You wanna know why Carl?! I'll tell you why! *Puts in a video in the VCR*

 

Woozie plays the same video that had someone in the shadows that sounded like CJ giving threats to Woozie.

 

CJ: Yo Woozie that ain't me!

 

Woozie: Then who was that Carl?!

 

CJ: Definitely not me!

 

Woozie: I've had enough with your foolishness Carl! Its time for you to die!

 

Sweet comes in and tackles Woozie down to the floor, thus making Woozie drop his katana. CJ manages to get up on his feet and assists Sweet.

 

CJ: Thanks Sweet.

 

Sweet: Don't mention it bro.

 

Two Triad members charges in with Uzis and shoots at the two brothers.

 

Sweet: $hit!

 

CJ: I know a way outta here!

 

CJ points at an open window. CJ grabs Woozies katana and throws it at one of the Triad Gunmen, killing him. Sweet gets out his M-16 and shoots dwon the other gunmen. They climb out of the window and they jump three stories down to the pavement, but they weren't hurt. They call a taxi and they managed to get out safely.

 

CJ: $hit that was close!

 

Sweet: Yeah.

 

CJ: We have to watch our backs for sure now.

 

Sweet: Yeah I think so too.

 

Back at the hospital room Woozie regains consciousness and sees his two fallen comrades on the floor in a pool of blood.

 

Woozie: No! I'll kill both of you if its the last thing I'll do!

 

Los Santos International, 12:47 a.m.

 

Jin, Heihachi and their men has made it to Los Santos to see it in ruins.

 

Heihachi: It appears someone has beaten us here.

 

Jin: Its not thay uncle. I sense some survivors about north west from here that knows about the man we're lookin' for, Carl Johnson.

 

Heihachi: I see that your senses have become sharper than before nephew.

 

Jin: I've spent many days meditating for this moment and finally it comes to good use.

 

Heihachi: Lets head off then.

 

After about thirty minutes driving they reach Cesar's house by Unity Station.

 

Jin: This is the place and the sense is strong.

 

Suddenly a group of Aztecas pops out from behind bushes aiming their pistols at both Jin and Heihachi.

 

Jin: Here we go again. *Takes out Uzi*

 

Jin seems like he's gonna shoot, but he jumps in the air. He avoids and dodges all the bullets and drop kicks all the Aztecas. One Azteca tries to jump Heihachi, but Heihachi just elbows his chest and the Azteca goes down.

 

Heihachi: Piece of pie.

 

Jin: Cake.

 

Heihachi: That too.

 

They barge into Cesar's house and they see Cesar lying on his bed in very bad condition woth Kendl by his side.

 

Kendl: Who the hell are you?!

 

Heihachi: That is classified ma'am.

 

Jin: Now just back out of the way and let us speak to the man on the bed.

 

Kendl: FYI! He's in critical condition! He was stabbed 10 times by this Sindacco guy and he was shot 10 more times in the legs by those f*ckin' Triads!

 

Jin: It'll just take a minute.

 

Kendl: No you won't!

 

Jin: I guess we gotta do this the hard way. *Grabs Kendl*

 

Heihachi: Please excuse my nephew ma'am he has a really bad tempur.

 

Jin: Shut up uncle.

 

Heihachi: See.

 

They approach Cesar who seems to be on the verge of death. Jin has Kendl in his arms with a knife by her throat.

 

Jin: Ah Mr. Vialpando hello. Now you have some infio. on this guy I'm hunting down. His name is Carl Johnson.

 

Cesar: CJ?! I'll never tell you holms.

 

Jin: If you don't I'll be forced to kill the girl of your dreams right here.

 

Cesar: Please! Don't kill her she has nothin' to do with this ese.

 

Jin: Well tell me his location!

 

Cesar: He's probably in San Fierro by now. Plese let Kendl go!

 

Jin: Here. *Throws a crying Kendl ontop Cesar* You can take back your slutty girlfriend. Uncle, we're heading to San Fierro.

 

Heihachi: Sounds lovely. I can't wait to get there.

 

Saints Row, 1:22 a.m.

 

Claude finally climbs out of the Trash Master and heads to the street. A gust of wind blows an old newspaper in his face, but when he takes it off he sees a dark figure standing infront of him. Its Mr. Dyed.

 

Dyed: Ah Mr. Speed its about time we meet.

 

Claude: Who the hell are you?!

 

Dyed: You can call me Mr. Dyed.

 

Claude: Well Mr. Dyed what do you want?!

 

Dyed: I'm just giving you a simple warning Mr. Speed. It has come to my attention that someone is on the hunt for you. He was a former associate of yours and a very good friend. Now he wants revenge and he has ome major help to do it.

 

Claude: Who is he?!

 

Dyed: Your old friend 8-Ball.

 

Claude: No way he would never do that!

 

Dyed: You shall find out soon Claude, very soon.

 

Claude: Thats it! *Takes out 9mm*

 

But another gust of wind blows another old newspaper on him and when he takes it off Dyed is nowhere to be seen.

 

Liberty City Docks, 1:46 a.m.

 

8-Ball, T-Bone and Catlina makes it back to Tenpenny's base at the docks.

 

Tenpenny: Its about time you guys got here. I was getting a little lone. T-Bone how the hell are ya?

 

T-Bone: Its all good sir.

 

Tenpenny: I'm happy to hear that. Catalina, I see you're feistier than ever.

 

Catalina: You bet your @$$ thats right!

 

Tenpenny: You've made me proud 8-Ball.

 

8-Ball: Thank you sir. I know you would.

 

Tenpenny: My plan has been going perfectly. First I disguise my former Balla Boys to look like those Grove Street Scum and have them kidnap Red Gecko Tong Triads leader Ran Fa Li and bring Ran Fa Li here. *Ran Fa Li is shown tied up in a chair* The I used a voice changer to make me sound like Carl Johnson and lead those Triads straight into my mine trap in Bone County making them hate Carl more. Finally things heated up when the Triads demolished all of Los Santos and killed half of those GSF Scum! My plan is getting better by the hour and I have more plans to come.

 

 

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Here is a preview for Chapter 13. Enjoy!

 

Toreno continues to find some info. on Mr. Dyed

Tenpenny's crew attacks Claude

Ricky engages in a gangwar against The Liberty City Mafia Families

Mr. Dyed confronts Toreno

Jin hunts down CJ in San Fierro

Woozie attacks CJ again

Ken Rosenburg returns to Vice City

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Thanks for the comment Gaja! Yeah I gtave him some of his power,but not all like the Devil Gene. Anyways here is Chapter 13!

 

Chapter 13: Gangs of Liberty City

 

Toreno's Cabin, 5:45 a.m.

 

Toreno: Now this is a shocker it appears that the other Russians co-leader is someone named Richard Johnson. He has the same last name as Carl. I think I'm getting close to solving this mystery that I can taste it. But I'll need some more information to find out who Dyed really is.

 

Tenpenny's Base, 6:13 a.m.

 

Tenpenny is watching the Daily News.

 

Reporter: Breaking News! It seems like a break out has happened at the local Leone Stronghold causing many citizens to flee Liberty City as the Leones, Forellis and Sindaccos went on a killing late last night in a last ditch effort to hunt down the escapees. Among the escapees was notorious thief and hitman, Claude Speed. We shall update you more as this story develops.

 

Tenpenny: It seems like its time for 8-Ball to finally prove his loyalty to me. Oh Ryan I have a mission for you.

 

8-Ball: What is it sir?

 

Tenpenny: Its time for you to prove your loyalty to me by killing Claude Speed.

 

8-Ball: Claude?! Finally its my chance for revenge!

 

Tenpenny: Take Catalina along for the ride 8-Ball. She has a score to settle too. She also has some Clombian Cartel to help out too and bring along some Ballas for back-up.

 

8-Ball: Aye yaye sir!

 

Tenpenny: Now go! You have a score to settle.

 

8-Ball: Yes sir!

 

8-Ball and Catalina enters a Sentinal while an army of Ballas Colombians follows after them.

 

Liberty City International, 7:09 a.m.

 

Ricky Vercetti and his Vercetti Gangsters finally makes it to Liberty City to confront his father's past demons, The Liberty City Mafia Families. He gets into a Sentinal while his men follows in other Sentinals.

 

Ricky: Does everybody have their weapons?

 

Vercetti Gangster: Yes sir. All of the troops are ready for battle.

 

Ricky: Finally its time to make a name for the Vercettis and its time to make Tommy proud.

 

Ricky and his men are heading to the Liberty City Mafia Families Base in Staunton.

 

Toreno's Cabin, 7:54 a.m.

 

Toreno is searching for more information about Mr. Dyed, but a gust of wind blows down his files.

 

Toreno: Ah great. *Picks uo the files*

 

When he turns back to his desk he sees a dark figure up stairs.

 

Toreno:*Takes out pistol* Who the f*ck are you?! Are you Mr. Dyed?!

 

Man: No. *Comes out of the shadows and reveals himself to be an white American man in a black suit and a black eye patch* Don't you remember me Mike? I am Shallow Grave.

 

Toreno: Shallow Grave?! I would never forget you!

 

Shallow Grave: I knew you wouldn't forget me. I see you're researching on a close frien of mines, Toreno.

 

Toreno: How do you know Dyed?!

 

Shallow Grave: I knew him after years of business relationships between The Russians and M Corporation.

 

Toreno: M Corp?! You've been working for them this whole time?! Even you should know all the illegal experiments and testing they do!

 

Shallow Grave: Thats why I joined them Mike! I want a thrill of company to work with thats why I left the Government Agency! You can call me a thrill seeker.

 

Toreno: You're really corrupted Grave!

 

Shallow Grave: Well back to business I was sent here by M Corp to erase your memories from the last 12 hours and I'm comin' back with this mission completed.*Takes out Memory Eraser Device* Say nighty night Toreno! *Activates it*

 

Toreno sees the flash and drops to the floor. Shallow Grave then takes out a Tec-9 and shoots at Toreno's computer and burns all his paper files.

 

Shallow Grave: Now no one shall know.

 

San Fierro, 8:49 a.m.

 

Jin, Heihachi and their Yakuza Henchmen arrives in San Fierro to hunt down CJ.

 

Jin: I sense we're getting closer uncle.

 

Heihachi: I could sense it too. He's north of us.

 

Jin: Lets head out.

 

Escobar International, 9:33 a.m.

 

Ken Rosenburg arrives in Vice City.

 

Rosie: I never thought I'd be back here again, but I am here to prove that Tommy is not dead!

 

Gant Bridge, 10:15 a.m.

 

CJ and Sweet manged to steal a Greenwood and they are heading towards Bone County to hideout in. Suddenly a Hunter comes swooping down on their Greenwood.

 

Sweet: What the f*ck?!

 

CJ: I have a good feeling who that is!

 

Woozie: Come out quietly Carl and I promise you won't get hurt, much!

 

CJ: Screw you Woozie! Its a good thing I still kept this Rocket Launcher that the Truth gave me.

 

Sweet: What are you waitin' fo nigga?! Just shoot the down!

 

CJ: Aiight here goes! *Shoots*

 

Woozie: Ah $hit! *Jumps out of the Hunter with a parachute*

 

CJ: Aiight I got em'!

 

Sweet: Thats my my homie CJ!

 

They drive off into the desert of Bone County as Woozie falls into the ocean.

 

Woozie: I will get you Carl!

 

Saint Mark's Bistro, 11:01 a.m.

 

Claude is taking a rest by the allies.

 

Claude: I need to get outta here.

 

Suddenly 8-Ball, Catalina and their men storms in almost running over Claude.

 

Claude: F*ck!

 

8-Ball: I have you now Claude! *Comes out and shoots at Claude with a Tec-9*

 

Claude: No! 8-Ball you backstabbing mother f*cker!

 

Leone Stronghold, 11:27 a.m.

 

Ricky shoots an RPG at the building and an army of Leones, Forellis and Sindaccos charges at his army.

 

Ricky: Let the games begin!

 

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