GSF_Membuh Posted September 2, 2006 Share Posted September 2, 2006 This is a Fan Fic I recently made a few months ago and I really hope you guys enjoy this. Here is a summary. GTA: Hawaii This story is about our 21 year old protagonist Sosejo (So-Se-Pho) Padayao (Pah-Day-Yow) and his rockin' rollar coaster ride of a quest to gain his gang supremacy and to control the streets as the top gangs of hawaii. Sosejo's journey starts with the mysterious murders of his parents. He plays detective and finds out that his own friend Ben Georges and his gang murdered his parents. Sosejo sets out to kill Ben but is outnumbered and gets knocked out. Sosejo gets stowed away secretly into a plane and ends up on another hawaiian island. Now he must work his way to the Big Island where Ben is said to be at, but difficult obstacles will stand in his way. Can Sosejo avenge his parents and gain his gang supremacy? What do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel Constantin Posted September 2, 2006 Share Posted September 2, 2006 An intresting story idea, if not a bit stereotypical. Good none-the-less. I don't know much about Hawaii's Criminal World (I didn't even know it had one!), so this'll be a intresting and enlightening read. Can't wait for the first chapter. Going to rate the topic Good, just for luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kippers Posted September 2, 2006 Share Posted September 2, 2006 As said, it is a bit of an obvious plotline to choose, but i'll still be looking out for the first chapter. Good luck 習うより慣れろ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Thanks for the comments and sorry it took me long to post the first chapter cause I was busy today so here it is Chapter 1 of this epic story! Chapter 1: A New Beginning Our protagonist's journey begins in his home turf called Mililani Circle. Sosejo: Brah we need to get our names heard we need to get the Pacific Posse's name heard! But how? Soelli(So-El-Lee): Why don't we go take over some of Carribean Cartel's turf?! Sosejo: Brah we'll beat them easily. Soelli: Yeah you right lets recruit some homies and tag some turfs. The two brothers go inside their stationwagon and pulls in front of a house. Soelli: Aiight we hear brah. Sosejo: Damn, Noah really takes care of his house yeah? Soelli: He's such a neat-freak,but thats our Noah. Come on lets see if he's home. Sosejo: Aiight. They knock on the door and a Samoan comes out wearing Light Blue comes out. Sosejo: Noah whats up brah? Noah: Nothin' much. What you guys don' here? Soelli: We're gonna tag up some turf and we wonderin' if you'll come. Noah: Shoots, I'm in! Sosejo: Aiight lets go to Makai's(Mah-Kai) hut. They pull up in front of a small hut at the end of a dead end street. They go and knock on the door. Sosejo: F*ck @SShole open the door! The door opens and a hawaiian wearing the same color as Noah comes out. Makai: What the f*ck I'm here I was just nappin' y'know! Soelli: Braddah you always doze off after you smoke your weed! Makai: I wasn't smokin' crack you b*tch! I was just nappin' y'know! Makai secretly puts a cigar in an ash tray. Makai: Aiight what you guys doin' here?! Sosejo: We're about to tag some turf you comin'? Makai: For sure homie! Soelli: Aiight lets go to the mall. They reach the mall and they start to take out a couple of lght blue spray cans and they start to tag up the mall's back wall. Sosejo: Aiight, thats what I call taggin' Pacific Posse style! Soelli: That is a true piece of art right there don't y'all agree. Noah: Ya got that right braddah! Makai: Yeah I guess its cool, but I think we should had made it bigger. Sosejo: Homie we tagged up the whole wall how are we suppose to make it bigger?! Makai: We did oh I guess I didn't noticed. Noah: Brah you're high. Makai: Whatevah! Police sirens are heard. Sosejo: Ah $hit someone ratted us out! Soelli: Hurry get in the f*ckin' car! They all get in the car and they take out Uzis. Soelli: Aiight lets do this $hit! They shoot at a cop car causing it to explode. Noah: One down! A high speed chase ensues and The 4 Pacific Posse members car ends up catching on fire. Makai: Ah $hit we have to get out! Sosejo: On the count of tree get out! 1, 2, 3! They jump out just before the cars explode. Soelli: $hit that was my car! Sosejo: Lets split up and go back to our houses! Soelli: Shoots lets go! They spilt up and head to their houses. Sosejo: $hit! I gotta keep it low, for now. What do you guys think of my first chapter. It'll get more interesting later on trust me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 Thats very good, but lol I just rated the topic good and then your firdt chapter was there This is now a suscriped topic for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Thanks for the comment and I'll have Chapter 2 up shortly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kippers Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 Me and TD had many a funny minute reading that chapter. Can't wait for for chapter 2 習うより慣れろ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TenaciousD. Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 Yes we did, PP fo life Looking forward to Chapter 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 You said soon didn't you? Pressing F5 for some time now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Sorry I went to an MMA show and I just got back. Sorry. Here is Chapter 2! Chapter 2: Trap Sosejo, Soelli, Noah and Makai are hangin outside of Sosejo's house. Sosejo: $hit this is boring! Soelli: You said it brah. Hey Makai can we have some of yo weed? Makai: F*ck you @$$hole (He hides a cigar in his back pocket.) Noah: Brah I stay hungry! Sosejo: Eh lets go to McDimples and grab a bite to eat. Noah: Shoots lets go already! Makai: Whatever fat boy. Noah: Eh f*ck you crack boy! Makai: Whatever! They all go into Noah's car and heads to Windward City Shopping center where the nearest McDimples is located at. Noah: What you guys want? Sosejo: I'll have a Big Dimp with a medium Sprunk. Soelli: I'll have some Chicken Nuggets with a Diet Sprunk. Makai: And I'll have some Fries. Noah: Aiight I'll order. Orderer: Welcome to McDimples how may I help you? Noah: I'll have a #5, #7, some Fries, a Triple Double Buger, a Big Dimp, and a extra large Sprunk. (Turns to the others) what do you guys want again? The PP members are eating in their car. Noah: That was delicious! Makai: Whatever fat boy. Noah: Eh f*ck you you f*ckin' crackhead! Makai: You like trow then lets trow! Noah: Come on! Sosejo: Eh @$$holes shut the f*ck up! Soelli: You guys are only good at shooting not fighting! Makai: F*ck you fag! Soelli: Aiight lets trow right now get outta the car and we'll trow! Makai: If I do I'll make you cry for mercy just by stepping out! Soelli: Thats it! A rock is thrown through the wind shield and hits Makai in the head which knocks him out. Sosejo: Who the f*ck did that?! They spot a few LAX (Latin American Exchange) members in lowriders and they pull out their Uzis. Sosejo: Aiight lets do this! They drive off and shoot at the same time killing some LAX members. Sosejo: $hit we need to get back to The Circle! Soelli: Whats Makai doin'?! Noah: Dude he knocked out! Sosejo: What the hell happened to him?! Noah: That rock hit the fag in the head! Soelli: Atleast that was taken care of! They reach The Circle and they get away from the LAX members and backup comes to kill the LAX members. The PP members reaches Makai's hut to take shelter. Makai gains consciousness. Makai: Ah brah what happened? Sosejo: You got hit in the head by a rock! Makai's hut explode causing the others to get blown. Makai: F*ck my dollies were in there! (The others look at him weird.) uh I mean my weapons! Sosejo: Whoever did this wanted us killed. Soelli: But who would do this?! Sosejo: I don't know but we'll kill them Pacific Posse Style! A black car pulls up down the road. A guy gets on his phone and calls someone. Man: $hit they're not dead. Man on the other line: Well now we use Plan B and soon those annoying Pacific Fags will be out of our way for good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 Very good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Thanks for the comment! I'll post the next chapter tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Sorry for the double post but I promised to post Chapter 3 and I'm gonna live up to my promise and do it. Here is Chapter 3, Enjoy! Chapter 3: Crack The Dealers Sosejo is heading towards Makai's ruined hut for PP business. Sosejo: Yo Makai you here?! Makai: I right here in the kitchen! Sosejo: $hit homie you're place is really f*cked up brah. Makai: Once I find the mofo who did this I'll f*ckin' kill em'! Sosejo: Whoever did this really wanted us for dead. Makai: We should find out who this @$$hole is! Sosejo: Brah don't sweat we'll find out and kill em', but now we ave matters to attend to. Makai: Those f*ckin' Carribean @$$holes are saling their crack here in our turf and now we'll show them to never mess with the Pacific Posse! Sosejo: You got that right brah! Makai: Aiight lets go and blast some bitches! Sosejo: Aiight brah! They go inside their sabre and head towards their destination at a dead end street where a Carribean Cartel member is selling crack. Makai: That mother f*cker is gonna regret messin' with us the Pacific Posse! Makai: Gets out a molotov cocktail and throws it at the crack house of the Carribean Cartel member. Makai: Oh yeah burn baby burn! Lets go to the next house. Sosejo: Aiight! They get to the other house and Sosejo takes out a molotov and throws it at the crack house. Sosejo: Let it Burn! Makai: I think I hear sirens lets get the f*ck outta here! Sosejo: Aiight! A black car pulls up down the street with a siren on top. Man: We got them on the run boys lets get em'! The black car follows Sosejo and Makai and are hot on their trail. Sosejo: $hit whats with that black car?! Makai: I don't know brah but I have a feeling this is gonna be bad. A guy in the black car takes out an Uzi and shoots at them. Sosejo: $hit they are after us! Makai: You shoot and I steer! Sosejo takes out his Uzi and shoots back at them. Sosejo blows out one of their tires but he is shot in the arm and he drops his Uzi on the road. Sosejo: Ah f*ck I'm hit! Makai: F*ck hold on this could get bumpy! Sosejo sees a molotov and tosses it out of the window. The molotov lands on the road and the black car goes over it causing it to catch on fire and explodes. Sosejo: Aiight direct hit, kinda! They get away. A man gets out of the ruined black car. Man: Damn it!!! Next time we meet I shall succeed! Sosejo: Lets bail later brah. Makai: Later brah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted September 3, 2006 Share Posted September 3, 2006 wow, like the third chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TenaciousD. Posted September 4, 2006 Share Posted September 4, 2006 Wow, mega cool. cant wait for Chapter 4. You can ask kippers this to verify, i was bitting my nails all through the car chase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kippers Posted September 4, 2006 Share Posted September 4, 2006 (edited) Lol, he was in fear of his charater who was acting out dying. Great story, keep it up. Edited September 4, 2006 by kippers 習うより慣れろ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 4, 2006 Author Share Posted September 4, 2006 Thanks for the comment! Here is Chapter 4, Enjoy! Chapter 4: Downtown Showdown Sosejo is approaching Noah's house. Sosejo: Eh Noah you here?! Noah: I'm in the garage! Sosejo: Goes inside Noah's garage. Sosejo: Yo Noah what you doin'?! Noah: You'll find out soon brah. Sosejo: Seriously what you doin'?! Noah: Homie I'm not done with the surprise yet. Also I need some help doing an errand today you in? Sosejo: Fo' sure what is it? Noah: You see I'm in debt to the Russian Mafia and I think its unfair to pay them $1,000,000 just for some car parts and I'm gonna send a message to them today and I'm gonna need some help. Sosejo: The Russian Mafia?! How are we suppose to do that?! Noah: Simple we just go in their base, blast the bitches inside and we just get out before reinforcements come. Sosejo: We're gonna do that all by ourselves?! Don't you think we need to recruit some braddahs?! Noah: Trust me brah we can do this $hit! Sosejo: Aiight you better be right. Noah: Don't worry brah. They both go into Noah's F-150 and they head off downtown. Noah: Aiight this is the place brah. Sosejo: Damn this place is huge f*ckin' huge cuz. Noah: Aiight you ready? Sosejo: More than I'll ever be! They go inside the building where they are confronted by a Russian Mobster. Russian Mobster: What is your business here Noah?! Noah: Nothin' much just this! Noah shoots down and kills the mobster. An army of Mobsters comes to wage war with Noah and Sosejo. Sosejo: $hit, this was a bad idea! Noah: Don't worry brah just keep shootin'! Sosejo kills 8 mobsters one by one while Noah kills 7 mobsters simultaneously. They kill the other mobsters and heads towards the exit. Noah: Oh yeah thats my homie Sosejo! Don't ever mess with the Pacific Posse! They go out the exit only to find Russian Reinforcements. They fire at each other and Sosejo kills half while Noah kills the other half. An alarm is heard. Sosejo: Ah $hit lets get the f*ck outta here! Noah: Look a motorcycle! Sosejo: I shoot you drive aiight! Noah: F*ck! Sosejo: What is it?! Noah: This ain't one Harley! Sosejo: Who the f*ck cares just f*ckin' go!!! Noah: Aiight! They drive off into the streets but Russians on motorcucles follows them. Sosejo: $hit they're comin' on bikes! Noah: Just kill em'! Sosejo shoots at them with his Uzi and destroys a bike. He shoots the others and destroys them too. Sosejo: Aiight did you see that brah that was fly! The same black car bocks their way. Sosejo: Ah $hit not these guys again! Noah: What do we do now brah?! They are blocked on both sides one side by The Russians and the other side by the black car. Sosejo: F*ck I don't know it looks like we're dead! Suddenly gunshots from above destroys the The Russians bikes. Sosejo sees a gang on a building shooting. The gang comes down and backs up Sosejo and Noah. They kill all The Russians and the black car drives off Sosejo: Who are you guys?! Gangsta: We are The Luau Warriors and this is our turf and no one not even those Russians are allowed. Sosejo: No, who are you? Gangsta: My name Ben Georges and I'm the leader of The Luau Warriors. Who are you dude? Sosejo: I am Sosejo Padayao co-leader of The Pacific Posse in Kaneohe. Ben: Pleasure to meet you I've heard alot bout you guys. You guys better get the hell out before police comes. Sosejo: Aiight later brah. Ben: Wait, lets keep in touch with each other heres my card and feel free to drop by once in a while. Maybe we can join forces us and you guys. What do you say? Sosejo: We'll keep intouch and me and bro will talk bout that. Later brah. Ben: Later. Noah: Who the f*ck was that guy?! Sosejo: A friend brah. Noah: Whatever lets get home already I'm tired and hungry! Sosejo: Shoots lets go back to The Circle. They drive off into the sunset lit sky. Noah: Brah, I need to take a $hit! Sosejo: Now?! You better not $hit in my new car! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted September 4, 2006 Share Posted September 4, 2006 Nice Story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 4, 2006 Author Share Posted September 4, 2006 Thanks for the comment! Here is Chapter 5, Enjoy! Chapter 5: Prince of The Posse Sosejo and Soelli are outside of Sosejo's house coming up with a plan to find out who those guys in black are. Sosejo: $hit those guys are everywhere we go! Yesterday me and Noah ran into them but this guy named Ben Georges saved our @$$es before they shot us. Soelli: This Ben guy maybe a reliable ally but we'll have to keep an eye on him before we agree to anythin'. Soelli's cell phone rings and he answers. Soelli: Talk to me. Noah: Brah get here quick you won't believe this! Soelli: Aiight, aiight this better be good! (He hangs up) Sosejo: Who was it?! Soelli: It was Noah. He said something big happened. Sosejo: Lets check it out. They reach Noah's house about 5 minutes later. Soelli: Noah, so wheres the surprise?! Noah: Brah guess who's here?! Noah: No! Its someone we've known for a long time! A hawaiian comes out of Noah's house. Soelli: $hit! Prince what the f*ck you doin' here?! I thought you went to Vice City for you're new job! Prince: I quit that boring job! It was too dull for me! Sosejo: Brah I thought you'll never come back things hasn't been the same since you left brah. Prince: Brah alot of things changed since I left I mean whats with those Carribeans in our turf and those f*ckin LAX guys are taggin' over our masterpieces. Things have to change cuz thats why I'll be the new commander of our forces. Sosejo: Aiight! You'll do a better job than Makai has been doin'. Prince: Where is the fag? Noah: He said he went downtown to pick up some things and he won't be back til supper. Prince: I have to start unpacking now so I'll see y'all later. Soelli: Aiight later brah. Sosejo: Later homie. Noah: Later braddahs I gotta go to the supermarket. Prince: Aiight I'll go to my apartment. Prince gets a call from Makai. Prince: So did you get the crack?! Makai: I have enough ice to fill up three garbage trucks! Prince: HA HA HA HA our cartel shall become known and we will rule Hawaii as the top drug dealers of all time! Makai: We'll be the kings of Hawaii brah! Prince: Aiight so meet me at my apartment when you get back. Makai: Aiight brah, later. Prince: Later. Noah gets in his sabre and drives off to town. A black car comes out of a garage and follows him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 4, 2006 Author Share Posted September 4, 2006 Sorry for the double post again but I want to post this explosive Chapter, Enjoy! Chapter 6: Death of Noah Noah makes it to the supermarket while the black car follows from behind. Noah: Aiight I need milk, bread and butter. Man: The fat idiot is entering the market should we follow him? Man 2: Lets follow em'! They get out of the car and follows Noah in. Noah: Aiight I got everything I need. Noah as pays at the register the guys in black confronts him. Man: Noah Su'e Kepilino you must come with us if you want to live. Noah: What if I don't you @$$hole! Man 2: Then we'll be forced to deadly force on you! Noah: Just try and take me! Noah takes out his Uzi and shoots. He kills one of them and takes cover as the store is evacuated. Man: You'll pay for that you fat f*ck! Noah: Come on! They shoot at each other but niether is shot or hurt. Noah: $hit this guy is good real good. Man: Come out where ever you are! I have a piece of candy. Noah: F*ck you @$$hole! (he shoots violently.) Man: Screw this $hit this ain't worth it! The Man gets shot by Noah. Noah: Yes I got em'! Noah gets out but a man on the roof with the same clothes as the two other men shoots and kills Noah with a Sniper Rifle. A man manages to take a picture of the killer before he runs off. It was reported on the news later that night that a shootout in the supermarket took the lives of two people and left one in critical condition. They identifed the two dead ones as one of the guys in black and Noah. Sosejo and Soelli watches in shock as they saw this. Soelli: No, that can't be true it can't be true! (tears up) Sosejo: F*ck that can't be right it just can't be right! Noah!!! I swear I'll kill the @$$hole that did this I'll f*ckin' kill em'! They then shown the photo that the man took of the guy in black on the roof with a snipe rifle. Sosejo: Those bitches in black has gone too far! I promise Noah I'll kill every single one of them and I won't back down til I do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TenaciousD. Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 Wow, what a great day, all these chapters at once. Havnt read them yet, waiting for kippers to come online but im sure they'll rock P.S - Dont kill Soelli or Makia, there my charecters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 Nice Story still very good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 6, 2006 Author Share Posted September 6, 2006 Thanks for the comments! Sorry I haven't been on all day cause of school! but here is Chapter 7, Enjoy! Chapter 7: Funeral Sosejo and Soelli prepares for Noah's funeral at the graveyard down the road. Sosejo: Who would do this brah? Who would do this?! Soelli: Yo brah I know how you feel and I want to get back at the mother f*cka that did this but now is not the time. Now its Noah's funeral and after this we'll get back to business. Sosejo: Aiight. They go to the funeral where Makai, Prince and other PP gangstas are already there. Ben Georges is also there with his gang. Sosejo: Eh what you doin' here? Ben: I'm here to say my final goodbyes to Noah cause he was my friend too. Now you still need to answer my deal. Do you accept? Sosejo: Yo I don't know I mean my best friend just died. Ben: Look do you accept or not?! Sosejo: You know what Ben I'm gonna have to say hell NO! Now get the f*ck out or else I'll make you! Ben: You're gonna regret that Sosejo! You could had got power and fame and fortune! But on the bright side atleast I don't have to deal with your suck @$$ gang! Sosejo punches Ben. Ben: You're gonna pay for that dearly cause no one says no to me! PP gang members tosses Ben and his gang out. The funeral services start. It is 8:013 p.m. and everybody goes home following Noah's burial. Soelli: Lets check on mom and pap. Sosejo: Aiight. When they reach their parent's house they realize the house is covered in flames. Sosejo stares at the carnage with rage in his eyes. I know this chapter was short and I'll post the next chapter later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 7, 2006 Author Share Posted September 7, 2006 Here is Chapter 8. Enjoy! Chapter 8: Manhunt Sosejo stares in rage as he sees his parent's house burned down. Fire Fighters come to put out the fires. Fire Fight: I'm sorry to say this, but your parents are dead. Sosejo: No, no, no, no, NO!!!!!! Soelli: No way that can't be that just can't be! Sosejo: (Takes angry breaths) I'll kill those mother f*ckas that did this! I'll f*ckin' kill them ALL!!! Sosejo jacks a motorcycle from a guy and drives off leaving Soelli behind. Soelli: Sosejo! Sosejo drives off searching for clues on the where abouts of the Men in Black. As he passes a house a black car pulls out of a garage and follows Sosejo. Sosejo notices them and lures them to a vacant lot down by the Aloha Gas Station. He awaits for the MIB to come out of their car, but the black car just goes charging at Sosejo but luckily he dodges and jumps on the vehicle. One of the men puts their head outside the window and gets pulled on top by Sosejo. Sosejo uses his knife to kill the man. The other man in the car gets his pistol and shoots at Sosejo. Thinking that Sosejo is dead he stops to see the dead body but is punched out from behind. Sosejo takes his knife and puts it right in the man's face and interrogates him. Sosejo: Now tell me who are you guys and who do you work for?! And you bettah answer f*ckin' now or else I'll slit your red neck and make it redder! Man: Alright, alright! We are the Black Jacks we were hired to spy on you and your gang. Sosejo: For what?! Man: For information and battle skills thats it! Sosejo: What about the deaths of Noah and my parents huh?! It was reported that men in black killed them! Man: I swear that wasn't us! None of us killed anybody! Please have mercy! Sosejo: Did you show mercy to Noah or my parents?! Why should I?!! Man: Please I swear that wasn't us that killed em'! Sosejo: Aiight! Now who do work for?! Who hired you?! Talk!!! Man: We were hired by..... Before he could say the name he was shot in the head by a man on a helicopter. Sosejo: No! I swear I'll f*ckin' kill you! Sosejo heads towards the helicopter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 9, 2006 Author Share Posted September 9, 2006 Here is Chapter 9. Enjoy! Chapter 9: Manhunt: Part 2 Sosejo is chasing after the copter on foot until he sees a sabre. He takes out his 9mm and points it at the man. Sosejo: Get the f*ck out of the car!!! Man: Alright just please don't kill me! He gets out but is punched out by Sosejo. Sosejo: Now its time to get some sweet revenge! He chases after the copter and shoots his Uzi at it. The copter lowers down and Sosejo jumps out of the car and grabs the foot of the copter. The man that killed the man in black comes out and shoots at Sosejo with his 9mm. Man: Prepare to die @$$hole! Sosejo: You're the guy who is gonna die you mother f*cka! Sosejo grabs the man's foot and pulls him down upside down. Sosejo: Now you're gonna tell me who you work for or else you'll be takin' a nice fall down under! Man: Alright, alright! I'll tell you! We work for... Before he could say the name the copter shaked and Sosejo's had slipped and dropped the man to his death down below. The helicopter finally lands on a helipad ontop of a building while Sosejo hangs on for his life. Another man comes out of the copter and Sosejo chases after him with his trusty knife in hand. They enter the building and go through many diferent rooms. Sosejo: I'll find you @$$hole! OnceI do I'll slit your throat in half! Sosejo catches the man in an elevator and points is knife at him. Sosejo: Now who do you work for?! Tell me now!!! Man: Alright! We work for Ben Georges leader of the Georges Crime Family. He hires street gangs and other agencies to do his dirty work for him. Sosejo: That @$$hole! What does he do to gangs that don't join him?! Man: He kills the leader and gains control of the gang himself. Sosejo:Do you know where he's at?! Man: He said he was goin' to the airport to meet The Nunzio Crime Family. Sosejo: I thank you for your cooperation but I'm afraid there is no use for you anymore brah! Sosejo grabs his 9mm and shoots the man to death. Sosejo: I swear I'll kill you Ben! I swear on the name of Pacific Posse! Now how am I gonna get to the airport?! Sosejo remembers the helicopter on the roof and heads for it. He gets into the copter and flies off to the airport downtown. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 10, 2006 Author Share Posted September 10, 2006 Here is Chapter 10! Enjoy! Chapter 10: Betrayal After about 45 minutes Sosejo finally reaches the airport. Sosejo kills the gaurds and enters one of the hangars where Ben said to be at. Sosejo spots Ben and his crew waiting for the plane which is carrying his associates. Sosejo: Aiight Ben now its time you die! He uses stealth to kill one of Ben's bodygaurds. Ben spots him. Ben: Gaurds attack! The gaurds shoot with their Uzis. Sosejo: $hit! Its time to bring out the ig guns! (he takes out two Uzis) He kills all of them one by one leaving Ben by himself. Sosejo: Well, well, well how the tables have turned Ben. Now I'll make you pay for what you've done to me, my family and my gang! Ben: Please have mercy! Sosejo: Why should I?! Did you show mercy to Noah?! Did you show mercy to my family?! I think no!!! Suddenly the hangar's doors close and an army of Black Jacks are swarming over Sosejo. Sosejo: What the f*ck! Makai and Prince are held by two of the men. Sosejo: Makai, Prince! What have you done to them?! Ben: Nothing.... yet! Sosejo: What the f*ck do you mean?! Sosejo is shot in the leg by a 9mm gun shot. Sosejo: Who... did... that?! Makai has a 9mm in his hand. Sosejo: Makai?! Why you back stabbing mother fu... Prince shoots Sosejo in the arm with another 9mm. Makai: You are such a pathetic piece of pig $hit brah! Prince: You are a disgrace to the Pacific Posse! You and your brother! Sosejo: But... why?! Makai: You've held us back for too long brah. Prince: So we decided to take matters into our own hands! Makai: By striking a deal with Ben's crime syndicate and we are now the official Pacific Drug Cartel. Prince: But we'll need some extra help so we intend on takin' control of the Pacific Posse brah! Sosejo: Soelli will never allow you guys to do this! Makai: Y'know thats exactly what Noah said to us when we tried to convince him to join us, but he refused and if you're not with us you're against us so we did the next best thing. Prince: We took care of em' Pacific Posse style! Sosejo: It... it was you guys that killed ... Noah! Makai: Bingo! Its about time you catch on brah. Prince: We also took care of your parents real good while you and Soelli was away at the funeral. Sosejo: It... was you... too! I'll f*ckin kill you! Sosejo gets up to attack, but Ben takes out a baseball bat and knocks Sosejo out cold. Ben: HA HA HA! I am too good! Get rid of the [email protected]$$ now! His men takes Sosejo and stuffs him into a duffle bag and throws him into a plane cargo. The plane takes off with Sosejo still inside. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 10, 2006 Author Share Posted September 10, 2006 Man what happened to my commenters? I really don't want to sixtuple post. Anyways here is Chapter 11, Enjoy! Chapter 11: Takeover Ben: Now with that nuisance outta the way we can finally get back to business. Prince: Don't forget bout our deal! Ben: Yeah, yeah I never forgotten bout that. What did you two wanted again?! Makai: We want control of the Pacific Posse so we can get our drug cartel started! Ben: Drug Cartel huh? That might actually work. Say I'll also give you control of my Luau Warriors. How does that sound. Prince: Shoots the more the merrier! Ben: But in exchange for my men I get 25% of your profits when you get them and you two will get the other 75%. Do we have a deal? Makai: Sounds steep to me but shoots I'll agree. Prince: Me too. Ben: Aiight, now get down there and take control of the Pacific Posse already I am a very busy man! Prince & Makai: Yes sir! Prince and Makai leaves. Ben: They better get ths right cause if they don't I'll have both their heads in my display room! Prince and Makai gathers up their men and heads for The Circle. They reach their about an hour later and are met by a PP gangsta. PP Gangsta: What up Makai, Prince. Makai: Yeah what up so can we go through?! PP Gangsta: Go. Makai: I hope you don't mind if we brung a couple of friends with us! PP Gangsta: What do you mean?! A Luau Warrior comes fro behind and slits the gangsta's throat. LW: All clear Mr. Makai. Makai: HA HA HA! Mr. Makai I love that name! Soelli is in his house waiting for Sosejo to get back. He hears gunshots coming from outside and he sees an army of PP soldiers battling the LW's. Soelli: What the f*ck is goin' on?! Soelli takes out his Uzi and tries to go outside but about 15 LW's are outside of his door shooting at him. Makai and Prince comes in from the back door. Soelli: Thank god you guys are here! I'm being outnumbered out there and I seriously gonna need help killin' those guys! Prince: Don't worry brah we got yo' back! Soelli: Good now cover me! Makai: But I'm afraid we won't be able to do that! Soelli: What the f*ck are you talkin' bout?! Prince: You know exactly what we're talkin' bout! They get out their Uzis but are shot continuously in the chest by the men outside. They fall back and are dead. Soelli: You f*ckin' retards! $hit now I gotta do this alone! Makai & Soelli gets up like zombies and gets out their Uzis. Soelli: $hit what the f*ck! Prince: You really thought we were dead did you?! Makai: Brah we got em' good! Soelli: How the f*ck did you guys did that?! Makai: Its cool how body armour protects in gun battle! Soelli: Why are you guys doin' this?! Makai: You wanna know why we're doin this?! Its simple! We are tired of playing second bananas to you and your retarded brother! Thats why we made a deal with ur associate Ben Georges. He helped us gain our respect ack and now he's gonna help us get rid of you and turn this wash-up gang into a drug cartel! Soelli: You guys are f*ckin' psychoes! Me and my brother gave this gang so much and we treated all of our homies respect! Is this what we get in turn?! Prince: Hmph pretty much! He and Makai shoots Soelli in the legs and chest but he is still breathing. Makai: F*ck he's still breathin'! Lets finish him off now! Prince: No, I got somethin' bettah in store for him! They grab Soelli and throws him outside with his Uzi in hand in front of a dead body. Makai: Great now we arein control of this rundown gang! Finally our dream has come true! Prince: Shut up do you want the police to hear you?! They get in their car and leaves right before police arrives. They see Soelli still alive with the Uzi in his hand in front of a dead body. Policeman: This one is still alive! And look he's Soelli co-leader of the Pacific Posse! Policeman 2: Alright we're gonna be legends if we bring him in! This guy is gonna spend a long time in jail! They take Soelli and leave with other arrested PP members. Meanwhile, Sosejo finally gains consciousness and gets out of the duffle bag. Sosejo: Ah my head! (He notices he's in another airport) Where the f*ck am I! Chapter 12 coming later! Please comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 11, 2006 Author Share Posted September 11, 2006 Here is Chapter 12. Chapter 12: The Mission Sosejo asks a man where he's at. Sosejo: Excuse me do you know where I'm at? Man: You're in the Kauai Airport here in Kokaua Town. Sosejo: Oh thanks. Man: No problem. Sosejo: $hit how long was I knocked out?! He exits the airport and spots a guy with a motorcycle. Sosejo: Yo I'm gonna need to borrow your bike. Man: Says who?! Sosejo: Says me! (Takes out his 9mm and shoots the guy in the head.) I can't believe I'm in Kauai! Those f*ckin' @$$holes are gonna pay once I get back to the Big Island! He rides off into a neighborhood suddenly his cell phone rings. Sosejo: Talk to me. Ben: Hello Sosejo its been long since the last time I talked to you. Sosejo: What the f*ck do you want?! Ben: Listen douche I have your brother in jail as we speak and I decide whether his punishment is whether its life in jail, electric chair, drowning, decapitation or anything else I please. Sosejo: You can't do this! Ben: Ah but I can. I have taken control of the Big Island I decide the laws. I decide the punshments and anything else I please. Sosejo: You mad man! Ben: But you never let me finish. I'll keep your retarded brother alive if you do some errands for me. Sosejo: I won't! Ben: Well sat goodbye to your brother then. Sosejo: Wait! I... I'll do it. Ben: I knew you'll see things my way. Now your first mission is to go to the Kokaua town country side and dance a little dance for me. Sosejo: What the f*ck do you mean?! Ben: I mean to kill a former associate of mine he lives in an old hut by a farm yu can't miss it. Sosejo: What did the poor guy did to you? Ben: He denied to give me my share of the profits he got from his weapon selling business and he ran off like a baby to Kauai, but I was unable to find his exact location until I send my men out to separate locations of the island. One of them found his hideout and we spied on him with a hidden camera . There are documents of your mission by an old farmhouse about 25 feet away from the hut, but be careful he has men surrounding the place. Sosejo: Yeah whatever. Ben: Make me proud Sosejo. (hangs up) Sosejo hangs up his cellphone and heads toward the country side following Ben's map to the farm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 I like this. I'll sure read the whole story. One thing: In chapter 7, the firefighter comes out of the blue to the hero. Write a few more lines: The hero sees two firefighters carrying a person on a stretcher. They are shortly followed by another pair of firefighters and they too are carrying a stretcher with someone on it. The hero begins to approach but he is stopped by a few firefighters. They ask him if he has any relation to the residents of the house. The hero says yes and he is informed by a medic that comes to him that all the residents of the house are dead. Keep up the good work. -/TNT\- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted September 15, 2006 Author Share Posted September 15, 2006 Sorry I haven't been on in like forever but I had other things to do like schoolwork and other stuff like that. Anyways thanks TNT for the suggestions I'll edit it right away and here is Chapter 12! Enjoy! Chapter 12: Mission: Part 2 Sosejo is still on his motorcycle heading to his destination in the countryside. Sosejo: $hit what kine of place is this its like I've been riding forever! After about 2 hours Sosejo finally makes it to the farmhouse where the documents Ben said were at was. Sosejo: Where the f*ck are those documents?! (tilts over a barrel) Damn it! Sosejo spots the documents under a tractor and grabs it. Sosejo: Finally I found these crappy documents! (Opens them) He finds a picture of the man he has to assassinate. He sees that the man is actually his uncle. Sosejo: F*ck no way! Its uncle Danny! I can't believe he would do this! Sosejo gets on his motorcycle and rides towards his uncle's hut. Sosejo: I have t get him outta hea but how?! I just have to get him out! I swear Ben I'll f*ckin' kill you! Meanwhile back on the Big Island. Makai: I can't believe it! Look at how much moolah we're makin' brah! Prince: Yeah I know we are the kings of drug dealing! Ben comes through their mansion door. Ben: I see that you are enjoying your new mansion, well stop it! I didn't hire you two @$$holes to just relax and act like lazy retards I hired you two to sell my drugs and to spread my name across the state like a hurricane but now I see that you two are not living up to your end of the bargain! Makai: What do yu mean brah?! Ben: I mean that you two aren't giving me my part of the profits! So I'll just take all of these bags of money you have here and I'll be on my way! Prince: Grrr! Fine den take it we still have way more money where that came from! Ben: I knew you'll see it my way. Also you two better get back to work or else you're fired! (Ben takes his money and leave) Makai: F*ckin' @$$hole. Back in Kauai Sosejo makes it to his uncle's hut and takes out his Uzi. Sosejo: Aiight I can do this I need to get my uncle outta hea and get the hell out! He gets off the bike and heads towards the hut but gaurds are scouting everywhere. Sosejo: $hit how am I suppose to do this? He gets out his handy knife and carefully sneaks behind one of the gaurds. He grabs and covers the gaurd's mouth and slits his throat. Sosejo then takes the gaurd's outfit and puts it on. Sosejo: Aiight now they'll never know the difference. (Pushes the dead body down a pit) A gaurd approaches Sosejo. Gaurd: Anybody there? Sosejo: No but I swore I heard something down that hill. Gaurd: Come on boys we got a runner! The other gaurds charges down the hill on ly to fall into a pit that Sosejo dug with a shovel. Sosejo: Did you bois had a nice fall? Ha ha ha ha ha! Gaurd: When we get outta here we'll get you! Sosejo: Yeah right! (Gets his shovel and starts to bury them.) After about 30 minutes he fully filled the pit up. Sosejo: Now I need to get uncle outta hea. He goes inside the hut where his uncle is in and finds him tied up and looks like he was tortured for long period of time. Sosejo: Uncle, uncle Danny speak to me! Danny: Uh ah! Soelli is that you? Sosejo: No its Sosejo. I have to get you outta hea. What happened?! Danny: It was... about 3 months ago Ben.... and... and his men ambushed me and took me... here they have been treating like a slave and attacked me time and time again... I have been held prisoner here since. Sosejo: Did you work with Ben before? Danny: Y-Yes I did was his weapon seller and one day I refused to give him his share of the profits and he fired me for it. He then chased me down here then y-you know the... rest. Sosejo: I need to untie you! Danny: N-No it.. its too late for me now! Go and leave me... here! Sosejo: I can't just leave you here! Danny: I lived out the most of my life with things I regret and I know about your parents let me tell you that they love very, very much no matter what you do and I promise I'll tell them that you love them very much on the other side. Sosejo: Please don't please get up please! You're the only one that could guide me now please get up! Danny: G-Go now! A gaurd pops out and Danny pushes Sosejo out of the way of the gaurd's gunshots and lets it hit him. Sosejo: No uncle Danny! I'll kill you! (Gets out his Uzi) He shoots the gaurd to death at the bottom of his feet. Sosejo: Please uncle get up please get up! Danny: So-Sosejo make me proud and I don't let anyone as evil as Ben get these documents c-cause its the only way to put Ben to rest once a-and for a-all. Sosejo: No please! Danny: I love you So-sejo. (Drops dead) Sosejo: I promise you uncle I will do as you say and I shall avenge you and my family! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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