GTA San Andreas: The Second Part of the Story

[GSF_Membuh]

Here is the First Chapter of this epic trilogy.

 

Chapter 1: A New Beginning

 

CJ and Sweet gets ready for a road trip across San Andreas.

 

CJ: Yo Sweet get the f*ck up man its 8:00 a.m. and Cesar will be here soon!

 

Sweet: Alright I'm up you fag!

 

CJ: Who you callin' fag you bitch?!

 

Sweet: I'm just jokin' with ya.

 

CJ: Yeah you're a real comedian Sean.

 

Sweet: I know I am Carl.

 

Kendl: Yo @$$holes get down here already breakfast is ready!

 

Sweet: Yeah, yeah we'll be down there!

 

Carl is looking at an old picture of his family.

 

Sweet:" What you lookin' at? (Sees the picture Carl is staring at) I miss them very much Carl.

 

CJ: I know its just that I nver had the chance to say a proper good bye to mum and Brian before I left and now look at them.

 

Sweet: Don't blame yourself for what happened homie.

 

CJ: But if I was there I could had changed what happened and mum and Brian would be alive today.

 

Sweet: CJ listen to me don't blame yourself it wasn't your fault.

 

CJ: I guess you right, but I always wondered, What ever happened to dad?

 

Sweet: Mum told me his plane crashed while on a business trip to Liberty City.

 

CJ: I never had a chance to even meet dad but you did. How was he?

 

Sweet: Carl our dad was a good man and was loyal to us.

 

CJ: I just wish I have another chance to meet him.

 

Sweet: Let me tell you this he is in a better place now along with mum and Brian staring down at us with big smiles on their faces.

 

CJ: You right and I will make them proud again someday.

 

Cesar's horn beeped and CJ and Sweet went down with their bags to meet him.

 

CJ: What up Cesar?

 

Cesar: Nothin' holms.

 

Sweet: You want some breakfast?

 

Cesar: Fo' sure ese!

 

Kendl: So, wher you boys goin'?

 

Cesar: I'm thinkin' of going to Las Venturas to gamble and stuff.

 

CJ: Thats cool!

 

Sweet: So which route we gonna take?

 

Cesar: I think we should go through Red County, San Fierro and Bone County then go to Las Venturas to rent a hotel and we go clubbin' all night long!

 

CJ: I'm down with that!

 

Sweet: Me too.

 

CJ: Cesar your guys will take care of Kendl right?

 

Cesar: Don't worry Hector, Julio and Jose' got it covered for two weeks only The Aztecas are the new Grove Street.

 

Sweet: Aiight we should be goin' already don't y'all think?

 

Cesar: Yeah we have to beat the traffic.

 

CJ: Aiight later Kendl be safe and if anything happens just call us on our cellies aiight?

 

Kendl: OK CJ.

 

Sweet: Later Kendl.

 

Cesar: Later baby!

 

Kendl: Later guys, and Cesar don't be flirtin' with other girls aiight?

 

Cesar: Don't worry babe I won't. (Cesar crosses his fingers) Alright holms lets get the f*ck outta here!

 

They drive off and all the Aztecas gang members come to protect Kendl while the guys are away.

 

Later that night a Balla in a glendale pulls in front of Kendl and tries to abduct her but an Azteca member sees this and shoots The Balla. Later, a huge army of Ballas comes to Grove Street to battle the Aztecas. The battle lines are drawn and the two gangs charges at each other.

[baptiste]

Hey it looks pretty good, I like the dialogues but the narrating could be done abit better. Other than that I like it.

 

 

[GM Dude]

I started a story like this a while ago........

 

Anyway, not too bad.

 

{Some of those lines I was going to use for my story............ah well.}

[GSF_Membuh]

Thanks for the comments and I will work on my narration (If thats how you spell it) anyways here is a new chapter enjoy!

 

Chapter 2: The Riot

 

The Ballas and Aztecas gang war has escalated into a city wide riot causing dismay in Los Santos and destroying the once beatiful town.

 

Radio: The gang war between The Ballas and The Aztecas beenb ongoing for 8 hours now and the police has advised that all residents should evacuate Los Santos immediately!

 

Mayor: I can't let those damn street hoodlums ruin my entire town because of their stupid war! I am mayor of Los Santos damn it and I shall take matters into hands and I know exactly who to call.

 

In downtown Los Santos a team of highly trained S.W.A.T soldiers called G.A.N.G (Guys Against Notorious Gangs) are preparing for battle against the two enemy gangs.

 

Ryan: It looks like The Ballas and Aztecas are up to no good again.

 

George: I thought they learned their lesson from the last time we met?!

 

David: Guess not. So what we have here?

 

Matthew: A gang war between two of the most notorious gangs in Los Santos The Ballas and The Aztecas. The Ballas used to be led by Big Smoke one of the most notorious crack dealers in Los Santos, until his death on September 9th, 1992. Now we have The Aztecas, a mexican gang currently led by Cesar

Vialpando and one of the most deadly gangs in Los Santos.

 

Ryan: Lets roll guys we can't let those street hoodlums ruin our beautiful town!

 

Currently in the hood of Los Santos, the gang war between The Ballas and Aztecas rages on.

 

Hector: Kendl you alright?!

 

Kendl: I think so.

 

Julio: F*ck those Ballas just won't quit! No matter what we throw at em' they just come back for more!

 

Jose': We can't hold em' back much longer they're closin' in!

 

Suddenly: The police comes with choppers and an army full of SWAT soldiers.

 

Julio: Ah $hit the police is here and they got some back up holms!

 

Hector: Damn it all to hell ese! We can't take them all down!

 

Jose': Those F***in' SWAT just took down a truckful of Aztecas and Ballas!

 

G.A.N.G. makes it to the war zone and takes down a bunch of Aztecas and Ballas.

 

Ryan: Its go time boys! G.A.N.G. Battle Stations!

 

CJ, Sweet and Cesar are heading into Angel Pine, Red County.

 

Cesar: Holms my ride need some gas ese.

 

CJ: Aiight, lets go to Angel Pine and we'll get some gas there.

 

Cesar: Aiight holms.

 

They drive pass a couple of wrecked cars and burning forests.

 

Sweet: Whats up with this $hit?!

 

Cesar: I don't know but it doesn't look good holms.

 

They reach a Angel Pine only to find it in ruins.

 

CJ: What the f*ck happened here?!

 

Sweet: This looks bad, very bad.

 

Cesar: I wonder what happened here?

 

They reach the gas station but the gas pumps are completely destroyed. The light in the mini mart is on so they go in.

 

Sweet: I'm gonna grab me a candy bar. You guys want any?

 

CJ: No thanks homie.

 

Cesar: Same here.

 

Sweet: Whatever, more for me.

 

CJ: Whatever.

 

Suddenly a man with a shot gun pops out and aims at them.

 

Man: Freeze you bastards!

 

CJ: F*ck what the hell is wrong with you?!\

 

Man: Put your hands out where I can see em'!

 

Sweet: Look we don't want any trouble.

 

Man: Well you just got yourself trouble!

 

The man pulls the trigger.

 

End of Chapter 2

[Vanilla Shake]

I like it! Good Job!

[GSF_Membuh]

Thanks for the cooment! Here is the third chapter!

 

Chapter 3: Riot in Red County

 

The man pulled the trigger, but his gun is out of bullets.

 

Man: $hit! I need more ammo!

 

CJ manages to take the shot gun away from the man and hits him with it.

 

CJ: Now, tell us who are you?!

 

Man: Alright, alright! My name is Mark Rogers.

 

Sweet: What happened here why is this place all banged up and $hit?!

 

Mark: A huge riot broke out here following the evacuation of Los Santos.

 

CJ: Evacuation? What evacuation?!

 

Mark: The news reported that a huge citywide gang war between The Ballas and Aztecas broke out and that they evacuated everyone in the city here, but a huge riot broke out due to the congestion and thats why this place and all of Red County is ruined.

 

Cesar: Why were you shooting at us holms?!

 

Mark: I thought you were some rioters and I had the gun for my own protection.

 

CJ: $hit we should be heading back to Los Santos right away!

 

Mark: You crazy?! Besides they are blocking all entrances in and out of Los Santos.

 

Sweet: F*ck there must be some way in! If not we'll just have to head towards San Fierro and find some shelyer there.

 

Cesar: Sounds like a plan but I need some gas for my ride. I only have little bit left!

 

Mark: My gas station is destroyed and the next gas station near here 15 miles from here.

 

CJ: I guess we can only ride for a couple of minutes and make the rest of the trip on foot.

 

Sweet: Homie are you high, cause theres no way we'll be able to make it out of Red County alive!

 

CJ: Its our only hope of making it to San Fierro Sweet, trust me!

 

Sweet: Fine we'll do it but we need some weapons and ammunition.

 

Mark: Theres an Ammunation nearby, we could steal some weapons there.

 

CJ: Aiight lets do this!

 

Back in Los Santos.

 

Ryan: Keep hammering em' guys!

 

George: What the hell do you think we doin'?!

 

Ryan blasts a Balla's head off with a sniper rifle.

 

Ryan: I hope Dave and Matt knows what to do!

 

Dave and Matt are up on the roofs shooting down gangsters.

 

Dave: Oh yeah! Can you feel the heat?!

 

Matt: Aiight 1,2,3,4,5 man this is too easy!

 

Hector: $sh*t those SWAT guys are really takin' it to those Ballas!

 

Julio: And our Aztecas!

 

Jose': Holms if we don't do anythin' we're screwed ese!

 

Hector: But we have to keep Kendl safe holms, Cesar's orders!

 

Jose': Well Cesar ain't here and I'm not gonna just sit here and watch our crew die!

 

Jose' pounces into action killing a couple of Ballas but was gunned down by Ryan.

 

Ryan: Looks like I killed another one!

 

George: Another body for the mass grave!

 

Hector and Julio watches in horror as Jose' slowly dies.

 

Hector: Jose'!!!

 

Julio: That idiot! That f*ckin' idiot! (tears up)

 

Hector: I'm gonna kill that motha f***er that killed him! I'm gonna f***in' kill em'!

 

Julio: Its too late! He's dead now and theres nothin' we can do about it!

 

Hector: There is one thing! Watch Kendl til I get back!

 

Julio: Holms don't do it, holms!

 

Hector runs to into the war zone and charges towards Ryan and George, but once he is about to shoot his head gets blasted right off from a sniper rifle shot by Dave and Matt.

 

Ryan: $hit that was a close one!

 

George: $hit yeah!

 

Dave: Alright we just killed another one!

 

Matt: This is a snap!

 

Dave: No kiddin'!

 

Julio and Kendl are left alone in the house. Julio watches in horror as Hector got his head blasted off.

 

Julio: No Hector!!!!!

 

Back in Red County.

 

CJ: Aiight looks like we're ready!

 

CJ and the others gets into Cesar's ride and drives off into the dark, foggy road.

Edited August 30, 2006 by GSF_Membuh