GtaGangsta Posted January 24, 2007 Author Share Posted January 24, 2007 (edited) You know what maybe your right ill see what ill do. I was really excited to make this story but now never mind i mean you right so its over i guess. Edited January 24, 2007 by GtaGangsta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick Papagiorgio Posted January 24, 2007 Share Posted January 24, 2007 Sorry, bro. This story is not good. It lacks structure, and depth of characters. It's not like me to say a story is bad, but sorry, this story is bad. You need to work on writing skills a bit. I understand if English is not your first language. But you still must work on it, if you want to continue this. EDIT: Sorry, I posted this a little too late. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GtaGangsta Posted January 24, 2007 Author Share Posted January 24, 2007 thank you for not being harsh man but ddo you thinki should still continue or quit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vanilla Shake Posted January 24, 2007 Share Posted January 24, 2007 Dude, you got a red star. Shouldn't that be the deciding factor on whether or not you give up? I think Gman described it best. TC718 / <629 / CF5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GtaGangsta Posted January 25, 2007 Author Share Posted January 25, 2007 You know what. was retarted for stopping im not gonna let a simple criticizm bring down my story so i am gonna keep writing and believe me people my storys gonna go from bad to good you guys already told me what was wrong so i can fix it its still chapter 6 and i can make it happen so the storys gonna be the same but completely redone then after thatyou guys tell me what you think. Im not giving up yet red star oh no star Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 26, 2007 Share Posted January 26, 2007 You know what. was retarted for stopping im not gonna let a simple criticizm bring down my story so i am gonna keep writing and believe me people my storys gonna go from bad to good you guys already told me what was wrong so i can fix it its still chapter 6 and i can make it happen so the storys gonna be the same but completely redone then after thatyou guys tell me what you think. Im not giving up yet red star oh no star Then what you should first do is go back and fix your earlier Chapters and make them better instead of continuing. Also you're very, very close to two red stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WaltDisney21 Posted January 26, 2007 Share Posted January 26, 2007 WaltDisney21 thinks your story is ruthlessly bullsh*t. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GtaGangsta Posted January 31, 2007 Author Share Posted January 31, 2007 Its okay the story will get better im working on a new chapter now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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