xygtaxy Posted July 25, 2006 Share Posted July 25, 2006 (edited) *Update* Chapter One is out. July 24th *Update* Chapter Two is out. July 25th *Update* Chapter Two Updated. July 25th *Update* Chapter Three Is out. July 25th *Update* chapter Four is out. July 26th *Update* Chapter Five is out. July 26th *Update* Chapter One updated. July 26th *Update* Chapter Five updated. July 26th *Update* Chapter Six is out July 26th. *Update* Chapter Seven is out. July 27th. *Update* Chapter Eight is out. July 27th. *Update* Chapter Nine is out. August 13th. *Update* Chapter Ten is out. August 20th. *Update* Chapter 12 coming April 2007. Sunny Vice City : CJ's Story. Chapter one : A story, Never told before Vercetti Estates, Vice City, 2006, Summer. Tommy: What!?! Tommy: Are you f*cking kidding me!?! Tommy points a hand gun right to carl Johnson's head. Carl: Look, I'm sorry, it wont happen agian, I swear! Tommy: You better not be f*cking with me, yeah here! Tommy put's his gun back in his back pocket. Carl: I swear, I won't let you down this time. Tommy: Alright, fine, get your ass out of my face! Carl walks down the outside stairs of Vercetti estate. Tommy was crazier then ever, Being the fact that Tommy is now 50 years old. Carl, 38 years old, get's into his Chrome plated Silver Banshee. And carl takes off speeding down the Vercetti estate drive way and on to the road. Malibu Club, Vice City, 2006, Summer Carl parks his car in the parking lot and he walks over to the Malibu Club Front doors. There are two Vercetti guards on each side of the Doors. Guard: hey you! Carl: Who me? Guard: Yeah you! Carl: What "Chu" Want from me? Guard: Vercetti Wanted me to remind you, how much money you owe him. Guard: Don't forget, you only Two Weeks left. Carl: Yeah, yeah, I know. Carl walks inside the Club. The Club wasn't so populated. It was basically just old people remembering the old times. Carl walks up to the Bar. Bar Tender: Hello fine Sir. And what would you like to drink? Carl: Can I get some of "Dat" Booz yeah got? Bar Tender: Sure thing, Bottle, or glace? Carl: I will take it straight from the bottle. A few minutes later. After Carl had a few drinks, there was a few gun fires from outside the Club. Carl got right up from his chaire. He pulled out his desert Eagle gun, and he loaded it. Everyone in the club were Frightened. Carl: It's okay people, I am just gonna go outside and see what's wrong. When Carl walked outside the Club All four of the Vercetti guards were dead lying on the ground with blood all over them. Carl: Oh sh*t. Carl: "Dis" ant good at all. People were all running on the streets, screaming and yelling. Carl took out his Cell and he called Tommy. Tommy: Yeah, who the f*ck is this? Carl: It's Carl man. Tommy: Yeah, and you got my Drugs? Carl: No man, It's about your guards outside the Malibu Club. Tommy: Yeah, what about them? Carl: Well I was inside have a few Beer, when there were gun shots from outside the Club. Carl: And when I got out there, they were all dead lying on the ground. Tommy: What!?! Tommy: You better not be screwing me Carl! Tommy: You don't want to make me angry!!! Carl: Chill man, Chill! I got "Dis" iight? Tommy: Fine, You better find out who the f*ck did this you hear me? Tommy: If you kill this prick, I will forget about the Hundred grand you owe me okay? Carl: Sounds good to me Tommy. Tommy: Okay, I don't want to hear from you agian untill you find out who did this first. Carl: iight man, later. Tommy hangs up. Carl: f*ck yo! Carl: Now I gotta kill some f*ckin "Busta" Carl: Damn, I wish I just stayed in Los Santos, Because now Tommy could tell The Leone family that I'm here after what I did when we robed that Casino out in Las Venturas. Chapter two coming soon. Edited April 18, 2007 by xygtaxy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANANAMOOSE Posted July 25, 2006 Share Posted July 25, 2006 It is a nice story, in fact, I was thinking about something similar yesterday. I do have one question, where are you from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 25, 2006 Author Share Posted July 25, 2006 (edited) Chapter Two : Family is allways by your side Vercetti Hotel, Vice City, 2006, Summer. Carl: Yo Sweet! Carl: You just got off the Plane? Carl: Okay cool, I be there soon. Carl hangs up the Phone. Carl Walks outside the Hotel, and he see's A NRG-500 speeding down the road. Carl takes out his M-4, and he shoots the guy on the bike. The guy falls off his bikes on to the road with blood everywhere. People screaming and running all over the streets. Carl picks up the bike, and he hops on. Carl takes off speeding down the road. When a police siren is heard. Carl: Oh sh*t, the Police are after me! A Green VCPD car comes speeding down the road right after Carl. Carl takes out an SMG and he starts a Drive bye. Carl shoots right at the cops, bullets flying in the air, and bullets bouncing off the Police Car. Untill Carl finnally shoot the tires on the Police car, and they went flying off the side of the road. Carl finnally lost the cops so he started driving to the Air Port to pick up his Brother Sweet. Vice City Air Port, 2006, Summer. There was a Man in a green shirt and a green hat standing right by the bus stop from outside the Air port. Carl: Sweet, is that you? Sweet: Carl, What's up little brother? Carl: Not much Sweet. Carl: Hop on Bro. Sweet: Carl, where the f*ck am I gunna put my bag? Carl: Huh, fine. Carl leaves the bike in the street, A tanxi honked at them. So Carl walked up to the Cab, and he pulled out the driver and shoot him in the head with his Desert Eagle. Carl hoped in. Sweet threw his bags in the back seat, And he got in the passenger seat. Carl: So, Sweet, how's Kendl doing? Sweet: She got married to that punk she was dating! Carl: Yo, really? Carl: how come I didn't here about "Dis"? Sweet: Because it ant anything Special. Carl: Yeah whatever Sweet. Vercetti Hotel, 2006, Summer. Carl: iight, "Dis" is where we stayin "yo". Sweet: Fancy hotel we staying at here Little Brother. Carl: Yeah, well iight get some rest, I'll be back to pick you up later, so we track down this bitch! Sweet: iight, later Carl. Sweet gets out of the Cab and he grabs his bag and he walks into the Hotel. Then Carl drives off. Edited July 25, 2006 by xygtaxy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANANAMOOSE Posted July 25, 2006 Share Posted July 25, 2006 equally good. I' from MD, and was just wondering of you were American because I can't figure your name out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 25, 2006 Author Share Posted July 25, 2006 lol, Yeah I'm american it is : x y GTA x y but my username is closed into xygtaxy. So it must of been confusing for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GM Dude Posted July 25, 2006 Share Posted July 25, 2006 Great storywriting!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 25, 2006 Author Share Posted July 25, 2006 Thankyou, Chapter 3 is almost out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GtaGangsta Posted July 25, 2006 Share Posted July 25, 2006 well i rated your topic good so you better rate mine too lol good story dude ps dont kill carl jus kiddin but it would kinda suck but other then that great story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gutarjunky Posted July 25, 2006 Share Posted July 25, 2006 good story so far... but i would't have cj takeing out an m4 to shoot off a dude on a bike but hey...it's youre story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 25, 2006 Author Share Posted July 25, 2006 (edited) Okay everyone, You've all been waiting for this, so here it is. Chapter Three: No Guilt, No Heart ViceCity Streets, 2006, Summer. Vercetti Estates, Vice City, 2006, Summer. Tommy: Yeah, that sounds right. Tommy: Okay Mercedes. Tommy Yes yeah stupide Broad! Tommy: No, No I did not forget to buy some Chapange. Tommy: For the Last time Bitch! Tommy: I do not love you! Tommy: I only married you because you have a rich father! Tommy kept yelling and talking on his cell for awhile. Tommy finnally hangs up the bitch, and he slams the phone on the floor. The phone smashes into pieces all over the rug. Tommy: Yo Kate! Kate: Yes Tommy? Tommy: Clean up this mess now! The maid kneels down on the floor and she picks up the mess. After the maid leaves the room Tommy yells for his butler Claude. Tommy: Yo Claude, get your ass in here! Claude Walked over to the Living room. Tommy: Get me the bottle of Champagne I bought from the mini bar. Claude walks over to the Mini Bar not even but Ten feet from Tommy's couch where he is sitting. Claude wlaks back over with two glaces and a Bottle of Champagne. Claude puts the two glaces down and he poors the Champagne into the two glaces. Tommy: Alright, now get your ass out of here! Claude leaves the Champagne bottle on the tabble, and he walks out of the room. A few minutes later a Limosiune parks outside the Mansion. And Mercedes walks out of the back of the Limo, and two body guards walk out by her sides with M-16's. Mercedes tells the body guards to take the day off and she tips them each a hundred dollar biil. Body guard : Thank you mercedes. And the Body guard kisses her right hand. The other Body guard does the same thing to her left hand. Mercedes: Okay boys, that's enough now. And Mercedes walks up the outside staires and into the Building. Tommy is inside the Living room watching T.V. And drinking Some Champange. Mercedes runs into the living room and she jumps on Tommy's lap. Mercedes: Tommy! Tommy: What now Mercedes? Mercedes: Let's f*ck Tommy! Mercedes: We haven't made love in awhile. Tommy: No mercedes. Mercedes: I hate you! Mercedes get's off Tommy's lap and she takes of her shirt. Tommy: No Mercedes, Not this agian! Tommy: Mercedes, your not a stripper any more! Mercedes then unbuttons her bra revealing her medium sized breasts. Tommy starts to get angrier. Mercedes Leans over Tommy and She Reasts her Breasts On his face and she rocks back and fourth. Tommy(Very Angry): I told you to stop it now!! Tommy then Pushes Mercedes of him onto the floor where she hit her head on the table. Tommy: Mercedes, I am sorry. Mercedes: f*ck you prick! Mercedes get's up and feels all the blood on her head. Mercede's Blood was splattered all over the table. Mercedes Screamed. Mercedes: Ahh, Look it what you did you asshole! Tommy get's up of the Couch and he pulls out a Gun, and he points the gun to Her head. Mercedes: Tommy, No! Mercedes: what are you doing?!? Tommy: Look bitch, you can get away with calling me a prick. Tommy: But you can't get away with calling me an asshole. Tommy: And think your gunna get away with it. Mercedes Screams. Mercedes: My father will kill you if he finds out you are the one that kills me. With no Guilt Tommy Pulls the trigger on the gun. The bullet go's right through Mercede's head. And Blood splattered all over the walls and the floor. And Mercedes's dead body fell straight to the ground. Tommy: Kate! Tommy: Get your ass in here and clean this mess up! Kate: Yes right away Sir. Vercetti Hotel, Vice City, 2006, Summer. Carl: Yo Sweet, Sweet wake up Bro! Sweet: To tired to get up... Carl then Kicks his brother in the face. Sweet: Oww, you f*ckin bastard! Sweet: That hurt asshole! Sweet: I wonder why I ended up sleeping on the floor when where in a Fancy hotel. Carl: Proablly because I found seven Beer cans lying on the floor all of them empty. Carl laughs. It's funny, I leave You here to sleep for a few hours, and look it what happend to you. Sweet; Hahaha, very funny CJ! Carl: iight bro, let's get ready, we gotta gind this f*cker! Vice City Streets, 2006, Summer. Sweet: This is a nice ride yeah got here. Sweet: Why we still rideing in this f*ckin Caddy!?! Carl: Stop Conplaining Sweet! Sweet: So how we suppose to find this guy anyway? Carl: Oh, I got the perfect plan Bro. Sweet: And what's that plan? Carl: We fly buy Helicopter. Sweet: Your kidding right? Carl: No, i went to flying school back in the early 90's when I ahd to get you out of Prison. Carl: I know how to find a Helicopter. Sweet: Where the hell are we gunna get one?!? Carl: Tommy's Mansion, He has one at the top. Carl: I am sure he'll let us use it, I mean if he really want's us to kill this guy. Sweet: iight fine, let's do this then! Edited July 25, 2006 by xygtaxy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gutarjunky Posted July 25, 2006 Share Posted July 25, 2006 like how you wakked mercads vary stone cold killa type thing going thare story is staring to get intresting keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 25, 2006 Author Share Posted July 25, 2006 (edited) Thanks Dude, Okay here's Chapter four Chapter Four: Gun Fire at the Vercetti Estate Vercetti Estates, 2006, Summer. Tommy Walks up to his room. He sits on his bed. Tommy: Why'd I kill Mercedes? Tommy; Why!?! Claude walks in the room. Tommy: What the f*ck do you think you're doing? Tommy: Your lucky I don't Cap a Bullet in your ass! Tommy: Don't be walking in on me. Tommy: Learn how to Knock next time asshole! Claude( Angry ): Shut the f*ck up! Claude: I am f*cking tired of people bossing me the f*ck around! Claude: I was just here to let you know Carl is here. Claude: And you know what dick head, f*ck you! Claude: I quite, I shouldn't be hideing from the f*ckin Leones. Claude: I am out of here, good bye asshole! Tommy( Angry ): Nobody, And I mean Nobody yells at me you f*cking prick! Tommy Picks up his gun and he points it at Claude's head. Claude: Yeah what now Mister tough guy. Claude: What your gunna shoot me too now? Claude: Yeah I bet you are you f*cking pussy! Claude: Learn how to fight bitch! Tommy: I know how to fight Claude. Tommy: Say your prarys! Carl: Yo Tommy! Carl: Hey that bitch your talking to Tommy, What's his name? Claude: My name is Claude f*cker! Carl: Oh so Claude, your the Pussy that stole My bitch catalina away from me! Claude: That Crazy Bitch? Claude: She's long gone. Carl: What the f*ck you mean she's long gone!?! Claude: I killed her Dumbass! Carl: What!?! Carl:I outta f*cking kill you right now You dirty Bastard! Carl takes out a Switch Blade. Claude: What's with you wimps? Claude; Don't any of you know how to fight? Carl: Shut the f*ck up I'm tired of you! Carl: I liked you better when you wouldn't talk. Claude: Fine kill me bitch, It will solve all your problems! Carl puts his knife back and he takes out his gun. Carl Points his gun to Claude's head. Sweet: Carl! Sweet: Don't do this! Carl: It's called pay back back bitch! Carl pulls the trigger, but the moment he shoots, Claude jumps out of the way. Claude grabs sweet's gun and he grabs Sweet and he puts the gun to Sweets head. Sweet: You see what you Did Carl! Sweet: You made this rageing Luntik hold me hostege now! Carl: It's okay Sweet. Tommy: What Kind of Bullsh*t is this? Tommy Pushes the button on his watch wich alarms his guards to come. Claude: See, Now I am getting revenge for all the times people don't shut the f*ck up them selves! Tommy's guards come running in with SMG'S. Bullets flying everywhere. Carl: Sweet, No! Sweet got shot in the shoulder. And Claude got shot in the head. Sweet fell to the ground and so did Claude. Carl ran up to Sweet. Sweet: Carl, Get me to a hospital! Carl: Please, We have to use your helicopter! Tommy: f*ck No! Carl: Fine then shoot me and kill me too! Tommy: No, Fine take my helicopter, You better know how to fly it, Helicopters aren't cheap! Carl lifted up Sweet onto his shoulders, and he carried Sweet all the way to the Roof of the Mansion. Carl put Sweet in The back seat of the Helciopter so he could lay down. And Cark Got in the front of the Helicopter. Carl took off into the Night sky. Carl landed on the Top of the Hospital and he carried Sweet down the Roof Stairs to the Emergency Room. Now Carl must sit down and wait and hope Sweet makes it alive. Edited July 25, 2006 by xygtaxy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 25, 2006 Author Share Posted July 25, 2006 (edited) Chapter Five: Anger strikes Vice City Hospital,2006, Summer. Nurse: Carl. Carl: Yes? Carl: Is my brother alright? Nurse: I'm Sorry but... Carl: But what!?! Nurse: I'm Sorry he didn't make it... Carl: You take my brother away from me! Carl: Then I take your life! Carl pulls out a suicide belt with a bomb attached to it. He attaches the Belt to his chest. Carl Started to cry. Thinking about hsi brother. His mom, His two brothers, dead. Carl: I don't wanna wait Tell kendl Dies I will just kill my self now! Carl takes out an ak-47 and he starts shooting people. Gun fire, bullets, blood, everywhere. People started to scream and run all over the place. Carl screamed "Shut up"! Carl: If any body moves. Carl: Then I set this bomb off and where all dead! Every one stoped screaming and runninng. A baby started crying. Carl walked over to the women Holding her baby. The women was frightend and scared. Women: Please, I beg you, don't take her life! Carl: Oh, I'm gunna kill your baby alright. Carl: With no f*ckin guilt! Carl was becoming the man, no one thought he'd become. After the years off working for Tommy Vercetti, he's become more tough then he's ever been. Carl shuves the Ak-47 right in the baby's face. Carl Pulls the trigger. Bullet by bullet pounding right into the baby. Blood pouring out of the Baby's head. Carl laughed. The women scremed and cryed. People all around started crying. With No guilt, Carl starting firing at everyone on the bottom floor. Bullet by bullet shooting straight out from the gun. Bullet by bullet smaking into each Civilian and Medical Worker. When nothing was left but dead body's and blood all over the walls and the floor and the ceiling. Carl laughed, He never had so much fun. There was a whole bunch of siren's from outside the Building. Cop: Come out and put your hands up! Cop:We'll shoot! Carl puts the AK-47 on the floor, and he walks out of the Building. The Cops pause. Cop: Hey, get some men out there and disable the bomb! Carl: Stay the f*ck away! Carl: Or I hit the button and Instantly we all die! Cop: Stop, don't go near him. Carl: Let me go free or you all die. Carl: I can promise you I will never kill some one agian. Cop: Where not stupide you f*cking Dumbass! Carl's Life was just about to end when he had no choice but to hit the button. But before Carl could have a chance to hit the button. Tommy's gang came runninnng over shooting down all the cops. Most of the men that Tommy sent over were killed just a few survived. The gang member kept shooting. Untill all the cops were dead. Carl: Wow, Thanks guys. Gang Member: No problem Mister Johnson. The Gang members esscorted Carl to the Private Helicopter back on the roof. And they took off. Vercetti Estates, 2006, Summer. Tommy: Hey Carl! Tommy: What the f*ck is your problem!?! Tommy: Killing every f*cking Civilian in that Building! Carl: Actually I just killed everyone on the bottom floor... Tommy: I don't give a f*ck! Tommy: Huh, Want a beer? Carl: "Fo" Sure, why not. Tommy walks down to the Mini Bar and he grabs to beers. Tommy hand's a beer to Carl. Tommy: So, Have you got an idea on how the f*ck your gunna get my drugs back!?! Tommy takes a sip of the beer. Carl: Nah, I was thinking of flying over the city In your Helicopter. Tommy: Yeah know what? Tommy: Shut the f*ck up! Tommy: I am tired of this. Tommy: You have, and I mean it. Tommy: 48 hours to get my drugs. Tommy" Or your dead! Carl: Okay man chill, chill! Carl Finishes up his beer. Carl: iight, later. Tommy: If your not back by then. Tommy: Then you will be tracked down and killed! Edited July 25, 2006 by xygtaxy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GtaGangsta Posted July 25, 2006 Share Posted July 25, 2006 GREAT ITS AWSOME SO FAR AND PLEASE CARL NO DIE hes my fav character and its really making the story a twist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gutarjunky Posted July 25, 2006 Share Posted July 25, 2006 it was shocking to see that cj killed every one on the bottem foor now he is a strate up killa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 25, 2006 Author Share Posted July 25, 2006 (edited) Yeah he even killed A baby. Okay here's Chapter 6. Chapter Six: Tracking down the target As Carl walks out onto the stair case outside the Mansion it starts to rain. Carl: Ahh f*ck! Carl: Now I'm getting all f*cking soaked. Carl notices the Infernus in the drive way. Carl runs over to the Infernus, he trys to open the door, but it's locked. So Carl jumps over the door in through the window. Carl notices there's no keys, So he checks around the Car untill he find the key under the Drivers seat. Carl starts up the car and takes off out the driveway. *Ring* *Ring* * Ring* Carl's Cell phone started ringing. Carl Answers his phone. Carl: Hello, Who is this? Mysteriouse Voice: I got your Boss Tommy Haustege. Mysteriouse Voice: Just to make my self clear, You Can't escape this City. Mysteriouse Voice: Tommy will die tonight at 8:00 PM if you do not show up with 50 pounds of crack. Mysteriouse Voice: We'll be waiting. Carl hangs up the phone. Carl: haha, Like I care, I couldn't care less if Tommy dies. Carl: I mean really now, I don't have to worry about anything. Carl: I can enjoy my self now at my stay in Vice City. Vercetti Estates, 2006, Summer. Tommy: You're not gunna get away with this Claude! Tommy spits on Claude's left shoe. Claude slams a base ball bat right into Tommy's face. Tommy get's knocked out and he falls on the floor. Claude: Screw you prick! Claude: Pay back time asshole! Tommy's Body Guards were Looking at Claude. Claude: Look, you guys cane work for Tommy and get payed nothing and get treated like sh*t. Claude: Or, you can work for me, get payed a lot, and you'll have my Respect. Claude: What's it gunna be? The Body Guards looked at Claude and said We'll work for you! Pole Position, 2006, Summer. Carl walks into a Local Strip Club. Sexy women dancing topless. Carl walked up to the Bar. Bar Tender: What would you like to drink? Carl: A beer. A few minutes later Carl sat down and he started drinking his beer. A Hot women with huge Breasts walked over to him. Hot Women: Want a lap dance? Carl: "Fo" Sure Sexy. The women started dancing on Carl with her Breasts Giggiling in his face. Carl: So what's your name babe? Hot Women: Katie. Katie giggled. Carl laughed. Carl: iight I gotta go sweet heart, I'll catch you later. And Carl put a 50 dollar bill in her red thong and he touched her Woom. Katie giggled agian. Katie: See you around Cutie. Carl walked out of the bar. *Ring* *Ring* *Ring* Carl: Yeah whatchu want? Claude: It's 7:30 PM Claude: Where the f*ck are you? Carl: f*ck you! Carl: I'm coming now! Carl get's in His Infernus and he drives off heading to the Pawn Shop. Pawn Shop, 2006, Summer. Carl: Yo what's up? Store Owner: Yeah, whatchu want? Carl: I want that Sniper Riffle. Store owner: Okay, Eight Grand please. Carl: Nah, I'm okay. Carl takes out his Hand gun and he caps a bullet in the Store Owners head. Blood shoots out the back of the man's head and bloob splatters all over the wall. Carl Picks up the Riffle and he loads it with lots of Ammo. Carl walks out of the Store and he get's in His Infernus. Carl takes off heading to Vercetti Estates. Vercetti Estates, 2006, Summer. Carl parks his car right out side the wall of the Mansion grounds. Carl get's out of the Car with the Sniper riffle. Carl sits around untill 8:00 PM. Carls phone rings. Carl: Yeah hello? Claude: Yeah it's Claude agian. Claude: Where are you? Carl: I am heading to the Mansion right now. Carl: Can you come out side and wait for me? Claude: Sure, I'll be waiting. Carl climbs over the wall and he hides behind a tree. A few Minutes later Claude walks out with three body guards. Claude just stood there waiting for Carl to come. Carl: haha, what a f*cking moron. Carl aims right at Claude's head. Carl: Ready, Aim, Fire! Carl pulls the trigger and Claude get's hit right in the head. Claude falls to the ground, and the Body guards starting shooting at the direction of Carl. Carl puts the Sniper down on the ground and he takes out a hand gun. 1.....2......3..... Carl Shot all Three of them with no hesitation. Carl ran up to the Mansion. Claude was just lying there dead, with blood all over him. Carl: This time, Stay dead bitch! Carl took the katana sword from Claude's hands. And Carl sliced of Claude's head as a suviner. Carl Ran inside the Mnasion and into the Living room where Tommy was lying on the couch. Carl ran up to Tommy and he woke him up. Tommy: Carl, is that you? Tommy: Where the f*ck are the drugs!?! Carl: Shut the f*ck up man! Carl: I just saved "Yo" white ass Nigga! Tommy: Claude's dead? Tommy: For good this time? Carl: Yes, I sliced his head of to make sure. Carl: haha. Tommy: Okay, go get some reast. Tommy: You can stay in one of my Guesst rooms. Tommy: We'll talk in the Morning. Carl: iight, later. Edited July 25, 2006 by xygtaxy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gutarjunky Posted July 26, 2006 Share Posted July 26, 2006 nice!!!! like the wat cj set cluod up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GtaGangsta Posted July 26, 2006 Share Posted July 26, 2006 ooooo weee dam this is gettin good man have a cookie and make sure cj dont die but wat you could have done is let cj kill tommy and claude but letting them be friends is still cool because if cj and tommy become friends ill be one happ reader keep em coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 26, 2006 Author Share Posted July 26, 2006 Chapter Seven: Joining as One Vercetti Estates, 2006, Fall. *Loud Noices* Carl was awaken by Loud Noices. Carl: Ahh man, it's only 10:15 AM! Carl got up out of bed and he got dressed. Carl walked gown stairs to Tommy's Office. Carl: Yeah know Tommy, You could be dead right now if it weren't for me. Tommy: Yes I know that. Tommy: I give all my respect to you for that. Tommy: Because you have Helped me. Tommy: I am going to help you like you asked me when you first came to Vice City. Carl: Really? So your gunna help me take out the Entire Leone Gang? Tommy: Yes, I have a large Gang here. Tommy: In 2 Months We will be on our way To Liberty City. Tommy: I will have a large plane Ready for us. Tommy: Large enough to carry Ten Cars, and all of my Gang members. Tommy: And of course all of the Weapons Stock I have. Tommy: I my self have never like the Leones. Tommy: Did yeah know, there Sworn Enimies of My Old Gang the Forellies. Tommy: Okay, if you really want to take out all of the Leones, then where gunna need all of your gang members to join as well, or who ever's left of them anyway. Carl: Okay, I need a Private Plane Heading to Las Santos So I can group up all of my members and then within a few weeks I will be back. Carl: And then we can get ready. Tommy: Okay Carl. Tommy: Take the Day off I will make you a plane reservation for Tommorow. Carl: iight Later. *The Next Day* Tommy: Carl, Carl wake up!!! Carl: Whatchu want man? Carl: I'm tired! Tommy: Wake up asshole! Tommy: your plane leaves in Two Hours! Carl: Oh sh*t! Carl got right up out of Bed put his jeans on and he ran down outside the Mansion. Chauefuere: Hello Carl, Ready to go? Carl: Yes! Carl: Let's get going now! Carl get's in the back of the Limo. And he get's droven to the Air Port. Vice City Air Port, 2006, Fall. Carl: Damn, I'm So happy I'll be going back home for a little while. Carl: Ahh f*ck! Carl: What am I gunna tell Kendl!?! Carl( Angry ): To many f*cking people are dieing in this Family! Speekers: Flight 23, Los Santos, International Carl: There's my flight. Carl get's on the plane heading to Los Santos. A few Hours Later. Los Santos International, 2006, Fall. Carl: Damn, it ant as warm here as it's been in Vice City! Carl get's a ride by a taxi to grove Street. Carl: Kendl! Kendl: CJ!!! Kendl Jumps up on Carl, and Carl hugs his sister. Kendl: So how's Florida been? Carl: Great, It's hot down there! Kendl: Where's Sweet? A Small tear falls down Carls Left Cheek. Carl: I'm Sorry baby Sister, but he was shot. Carl: And he didn't make it... Carl started to Cry. Kendl: What!?! Then Kendl Started to Cry. Carl Hugged his sister. Carl: It's gunna be Okay. Cesear: Yo CJ, What's up man? Carl: Not much man... Sweet's gone... Kendl ram up to Cesear and hugged him. Cesear: What!?! Cesear: Aww man... Carl Pulls out his gun and he shoots an Old Bum lying next to a trash Can. Cesear: Yo Man! Cesear: Why'd you kill that old man!?! Carl: He would of died anyway, of starvation! Carl ran up into Sweets house. Carl: iight everybody, any body who wants to show me some respect Come join me where going to Vice City! A few of the Gang members Laughed and walked out of the house. But about The other 20 stayed. Carl: You all have my loyal. You guys will find out what were gunna be doing once we get to Vice City. Carl: Get as many members to join as you guys all can then come back here within two weeks, and then where going to Vice City. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GtaGangsta Posted July 26, 2006 Share Posted July 26, 2006 awsome this is gonna be good but dam cj became ruthless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 26, 2006 Author Share Posted July 26, 2006 haha lol, Chapter 8 should be out by 2 am. it's 1 am right now. so within an hour, you'll see a new chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gutarjunky Posted July 26, 2006 Share Posted July 26, 2006 a war invalving the leones? can't wait to see the results!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 26, 2006 Author Share Posted July 26, 2006 (edited) Good thing I Update Chapters so fast!!! Chapter Eight: Getting Ready for War Two weeks later Carl and his Gang members arrive in Vice City. Carl: iight here we are boys, Vice City. Gang Member1: Yo "Dis" sh*t is tight man! Gang Member2: Yeah, but it's to damn hot out here man! Gang Member3: No it ant, It's beutiful! Carl: Will you Niggas please, Just shut the f*ck up! *Three Limo's arrived* Carl: Finnally, Okay everybody get in the Limo's. Vercetti Estates, 2006, Fall. The Two Limo's come up into the Drive away of the Mansion. GangMember4: Yo this is tight! GangMember5: Yo "Dis" is like being in Heaven! Carl: iight, everyone get out! Around 30 gang members got out of the Limo's. Tommy: Good job carl! Tommy: I recruited around a hundred Members of my Gang. Tommy: Okay now, we gotta get a Gun that suites each Member depending on what they feel better using. And We gotta make sure all of them are Equiped with Armor. Carl: Okay, Everybody go to the back of the Mansion to get supplied. Tommy: AK-47 for you. Tommy: M4 for you. Tommy: Shotgun for you. Carl: Chest Vest for you. Carl: Chest Vest for you. Carl: Chest Vest for you. The Entire day Tommy and Carl were preparing there man with supplies. The next day They all went through Combat skills. And through the next few Months They Kept training untill it was time to go. Tommy: Okay All you guys stand in a staright line from that side of the grass to that side of the grass. Tommy: Okay guys, this past few Months has given all of us enough time to prepare and Train for the biggest gang war any of you will ever have. Tommy: The problem is my guys here are from Vice City and you guys Carl's gang are from Las Santos. Tommy: But the Leones are from Liberty City. Tommy: And the problem where all gunna have is the fact that Where all use to a warm Climate, there use to a cold climate. Tommy: And Because it is the beggining of Winter now. Tommy: It will very snowy and icey and hard to fight in. Tommy: But, that is another reason why we are attacking them during Winter. Tommy: Is the fact that we can attack them off guard. Tommy: Usually there aren't as many gang wars during the Winter in Liberty City because of the freezing cold and snow. Tommy: But, with all this Practice we've all had, I know we can take them all out. Tommy: What do you think Carl? Carl: I think we can do this. Carl: iight everybody go to your guest room and sleep for the day. Tommy: Tommorow, where going to Liberty City, so you'll better get your rest! Tommy: Alright Carl see in the Morning. Carl: iight Tommy, later Nigga. *The Next Morning* Vercetti Estates, 2006, Winter. A bell went off through the Entire Mansion. Tommy put that bell up when they first began training to make it easier to get everyone up and ready like training Soldiers. Tommy: Okay everybody, here are the Clothes you will be wearing for when we go to Liberty City. Tommy and Carl started handing out White T-Shirts, Blue baggy Jeans and And a Black Sweat Shirt to each gang member. Later on after everyone was done changing, Tommy Called for Five Limo's to pick them all up. And Tommy Called for a Delivery Truck to take all the weapons and Equipment to the Air Port. Vice City Air Port, 2006, Winter. When all Five Limo's arrived at the Air Port, All of the gang members got in the huge Plane and they all sat down, Carl's gang on the right side, and Tommy's gang on the left side. They all looked the Same except Carl's gang is Black, and Tommy's gang is white. Eventually the Truck came and the weapons were put in the bottom of the plane. Then Ten Infernuses came driving over and They were droven up the ramp into the Plane. And last but not least Tommy drove his Limo up the Ramp. Tommy: Okay Carl Let's get in the plane. Tommy: Okay Carl, you said you know how to fly planes. Carl: I do, I went to Pilots school back in The Desert of Las Venturas. Tommy and Carl got in the front of the Plane, The Side door closed, and then the Back ramp closed. And withing a few minutes they took off heading to Liberty City. Edited July 26, 2006 by xygtaxy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gutarjunky Posted July 26, 2006 Share Posted July 26, 2006 you said cj and claude were preparingthe men but you ment tommy ...cuz you killed claude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 26, 2006 Author Share Posted July 26, 2006 Thanks man I fixed the problem, but at first it said Tommy and Claude not Carl and Claude. And yes it is suppose to be Tommy and Carl, So thanks I fixed the problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GtaGangsta Posted July 27, 2006 Share Posted July 27, 2006 awsome chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted August 13, 2006 Author Share Posted August 13, 2006 The Long Awaited chapter is here!!! Chapter Nine: It's time for War! Liberty City, Portland, 2006, Winter: All of the Limo's were heading to a Portland Safe House. Tommy: Here it is, Welcome to our new home for now! All the Gang members were cold. Gang Member: Nigga, it's f*cking cold out here! Carl: No sh*t! Carl: Where in Liberty Now, it's the beggining of winter, of course it's f*cking cold! Tommy: Calm down Car. Tommy: okay everyone unpack all the weapons from the Truck. The Gang Members started unloading while Carl and Tommy walked inside the Safe House. Carl: Damn man, and I thought The Hood was Ghetto...it's like a sh*thole in here nigga! Tommy: Well, we gotta lay low Carl, untill where ready to attack. Tommy: Go get your self some rest, I'll help unload. Carl: iight fine, catch you later. The Next Day. Liberty City, Portland, Safe House, 2006, Winter. Carl had awoken. He got up to use the bathroom when his bedroom door wouldn't open. Carl: what the f*ck? Carl: Some body open the f*cking door! Carl Slammed the door open and he landed on some of the Grove Street members. Gang Member: Carl, what the f*ck man? Carl: Oh my bad, I forgot, there's only Three rooms in here. Gang Member: Can I take you bed? Gang Member: f*ck you man, I wan't his room! Then all the gang member starting pushing ans shuving to get in the room. Carl: haha, you guys crack me up. Carl walked into the bahroom. Carl does takes a leak. Flushes, washes his hands, and walks to the Kitchen. Carl: Man, there anything to drink around here? There's beer cans all over the kitchen floor. Carl Opens the Fridge. Carl: Empty, man screw you guys! Carl: I'm going to the store, any body coming? No body said a word. Carl: Fine Niggas, I'll go my self then. Carl Puts on a jacket and he walks outside the Building. Carl: Ah f*ck, it's a f*cking Blizzard out here! Carl walks over to the streets. Carl High jacks a Sanchez dirt bike and he takes off. Carl: Man, it's f*cking cold out here! Carl arrives at the Local gas station by the carl Dealer ship. Carl walks inside the Building. Store Owner: Welcome, anything you need from the Counter? Carl: nah, I'm just getting my self a six pack of beer. Carl walks over and grabs a box of beer. Carl: how much for the beer? Store Owner: That'll be 7.50. Carl puts the box of beer on the floor. And he pulls out a gun. Carl: Gimme your f*cking money Gypsee f*ckhead! Store Owner: Okay, calm down man, and I thought you were a good guy! Store Owner: Note to self, never trust a ni**er. Carl: What the f*ck you call me asshole! Store Owner: I was only kidding man. Carl busts a bullet in the Store Owners head. Carl takes off back to the Safe house. Tommy: Carl, where yeah been? Carl: Shopping, I got some beer, you want one? Tommy: No thanks, You enjoy. Carl takes of his jacket and he starts drinking a beer. Tommy: I'm sending some of the guys to attack as many Leones as possible. Carl: Sounds good to me. After 5 drinks carl passes out. A few hours later.... Carl: Where the f*ck am I? Carl: I can't see! It's all blury and Carl can't see right. Carl knocks over his sixth beer on the floor. Carl: What the f*ck??? Tommy: Carl, you okay? Carl: I can't see right!!! Tommy: Calm down man, sit down and relax. Carl falls back on to the couch. Tommy: After you had a few beers I druged you when you wouldn't notice to pass the time for yeah, I know how yeah don't like drugs taht's why I did it without asking yeah. Carl: f*ck you man! Carl: Thanks a lot! The Front door of the safe house slamns open. Gang Member: This is not good Boss! Tommy: What is it? Gang member: We tryed taking out the Don Joey Leone, but he got away. Some of the guys chased him to the air port, but he took off in a Private jet! Gang Member: We took out as Many Leones as we could, there was just to many of them! Tommy: What!!!???? Tommy: We did not just speand monts of training and millions of dollars to just loose these pricks! Tommy: Do you hear me!?! Gang Member: Yes Boss.... Tommy: Where are they heading? Gang Member: San Fiero Boss.... Tommy: Why San Fiero??? Gang Member: They got an Alie gang Down there, there getting back up Boss. Gang Member: And ther rest of the Guys are having shoot outs with the Leones on the streets. Gang Member: All the polcie are out there too, and many civilians have been killed, this is one of the biggest gang wars Liberty City has ever seen Since the Triad and Leone war back in 2001. Tommy: This is not f*cking good at all! Tommy pulls out a Gun and shoots the Gang Member in the chest. Carl: What the f*ck did you do that for??? Tommy: He's one of my gang members, I do what I want with them! Carl: Well, I don't wanna be seeing you pulling that kind of sh*t with my grove street members! Tommy: Don't you tell me what the f*ck to do! Tommy: I am so f*cking pissed of right now, it isn't even funny! Most of the Gang members are dead now! All the money I spent on all of this! Carl: Yo Man, Leave it to me, I don't need no more help man, My Brother Sweet is dead, Most of my whole Gang is gone, all the friends I ever knew are gone. Carl: I couldn't give a sh*t If I died right now! Carl: I am gunna fly to San Fiero and I am gunna kill that f*cking asshole Joey Leone! Carl: I use to work for him. Carl: He was a real prick too, I will kill him and make sure he learned his lesson! Carl: I need body armor and all the weapons you can give me. Carl: I need your private jet taking me to San Fiero. Carl: Will you let me do this? Carl: We've gone through so much, so why bakc down now? Tommy: Alright carl, Let me make a phone call and you will be on your way to San Fiero. To Be Continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted August 20, 2006 Author Share Posted August 20, 2006 Well, I felt bad that I gave you guys a very late Update last time, So I decided to give you an early update this time. The Chapter is a little short but that's what you get from an early update. Chapter Ten- An Old Girl Friend San Fiero, 2006, Winter Carl walks out from the San Fiero International. Carl: Damn, it's f*cking cold out here, Well, at least I'm out of Liberty Now. Carl calls for a Taxi. A San Fiero Cabby stops by the curve. Carl get's in the back of the Cab. Driver: Where to? Carl Hands the Driver a card of the Hotel Carl will be staying at. Driver: Nice place your staying at. The Driver hands Carl the card. A little while later Carl arrives at his destination. Driver: 12 bucks. Carl: f*ck you man! Carl pulls out a Pistol and shoots the driver in the head. Carl: See you around nigga. Carl checks in to his hotel and he walks to his appartment. Carl: Damn...Nice pad I got here. Carl opens the fridge and grabs a beer. Carls Cell phone starts to ring. Carl: Hello? Micheal: Heyy CJ, it's Micheal! Carl: Hey, long time so see. Micheal: Yeaah...You wanna come to my place for a little while? Carl laughs a little, takes a drink from his beer. Carl: Sure, why the f*ck not? Micheal: Okay cool, see you later babe! Carl: iight later. Carl Finishes up his beer. He walks outside the Hotel and he steals a Black banshee and takes off. Micheals Car Garage, San Fiero, Winter Carl parks into Micheals Garage, and he gets out of the car. Carl walks up to the door and knocks. Micheal walks to the door and opens it. Micheal: Heyy CJ!!! Micheal: How yeah doing baby? Carl: I'm doin fine what about chu? Micheal: Better then ever, now that your here! Micheal hugs Carl, and Carls puts his hands on her ass. Micheal Blushes and giggles a little. Micheal: Come on Carl, I wanna go to a fancy reasurant. Carl: Fine by me baby. Carls walks Micheal over to his car and he opens the passenger door for her. Micheal gets in the car and Carl gets in the from the driver's side. Carl hits the gas and the two take of to the nearest Restaurant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted September 12, 2006 Author Share Posted September 12, 2006 (edited) STORY TO BE CONTINUED IN APRIL OF 2007!!! Edited April 18, 2007 by xygtaxy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted April 18, 2007 Author Share Posted April 18, 2007 OPENING DAY Now that I have been on the forums once agian, I Have decided to finish my story....It's about time I finish the last few chapters. Through out this week You will be seeing more chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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