[WIP] The Fall Of Tommy Vercetti

[gRiM-reapa]

Ok this is my story of Tommy Vercetti. Set between 1992 and 1994.

 

 

 

Chapters:

1. Introduction

2. Robbery

3. The Forellis Are Back

4. Arrival of Weapons

5. Manro's Revenge

6. Hit Attempt

7. Dead On Arrival

8. Apocalypse Now/Death Later.

 

Chapter 1: Introduction

 

 

 

March 19, 1992.

For almost 10 years, Tommy Vercetti has been running this city. For the Forellis, that’s too long. It was time to go to war again, but this time they plan to kill him.

 

Tommy Vercetti is sitting in Vercetti Realty in his office watching a television. The phone outside his door, on the secretary's desk. She answers it. "Hello Vercetti Realty, how may I help you?" A voice on the other end asks for Tommy Vercetti. "May I ask who is speaking, please?" The voice answered, "Tell him its Ken Rosenberg". The secretary asks Tommy to talk to a Ken Rosenberg. "Tell him, you don't know any Ken Rosenberg" Tommy replied in an angry voice. "I'm sorry, but Mr. Vercetti doesn't know a Ken Rosenberg". "WAIT! Don't hang up on...."

 

Tommy grabs the remote control and changes the channel. "Ken f*cking Rosenberg. That coke-sniffing prick. What the f*ck did he want?".

 

Chapter 2: Robbery

October 12, 1992.

Tommy walks up the steps of his mansion, only to be stopped by one of his gang members. "Tommy, there’s a robbery downtown at Vercetti Bank". "WHAT?". Tommy continues to walk up the steps of his mansion; he goes into his office and gets his M4 Carbine and Desert Eagle with plenty of ammo. He also puts on Kevlar. He runs back outside jumps in his car and takes off down the driveway.

 

Tommy pulls up in downtown Vice City, across the road from his bank. He sees the bank is fully surrounded by police and SWAT units. He leaves his guns in the car and walks over to the police Sergeant Johns. Who is practically working for Vercetti as well. "Tommy, we have a heavy situation here. Two heavily armed individuals. One a Mexican female in early 30s and a Caucasian male in late 20s. We have identified the male as Claude Spee...". "So what the f*ck are you doing to try and stop this Johns? Just negociating? I think I am better off handling this". "Well I suppose we could send a couple units in with you."

 

Tommy goes back to his car and grabs the weapons. "I'm f*cking locked and loaded". He tells Sgt. Johns. Tommy and 3 other SWAT team members are at the back of the bank. "Entry with C4, in 10 seconds" One of them says. Tommy holds his gun up ready to kill. They shield there eyes as the door blows open. Tommy goes in first searching for the two. He spots Claude and open fires, Claude jumps behind a desk for cover. "COME ON YOU PRICK" Tommy screams out. The Mexican woman appears out of a door and shoots at Tommy. Tommy dives for cover also and the bullets hit and kill the 2 SWAT members. Tommy jumps back up but receives a round to the shoulder. Claude grabs Tommy's Desert Eagle and the Mexican woman tells Tommy "You are lucky I didn't blow your f*cking balls off you pig" Tommy hears a car take off.

 

Enraged Tommy walks out the front door holding his shoulder and yells at the cops. "THANKS FOR THE F*CKING BACKUP YOU DUMB PRICKS. WHERE THE f*ck WERE YOU JOHNS? HUH?". "Tommy, we thought you could handle it". "You let them escape. Escape with my F*CKING MONEY". Tommy is put into the back of an Ambulance and driven to the hospital.

 

3 Days Later

Tommy is on the phone with Sgt. Johns. "Tommy we found them". "So you found Claude?". "Yes, he is in Liberty City". "Well maybe the Forellis will kill that prick." Tommy hangs up the phone. He lights up a Cuban cigar and thinks about his next move.

 

Chapter 3: The Forellis Are Back

Sometime in 1994.

 

A black Sentinel pulls up at the Escobar International Airport. A suspicious looking person walks over to it holding a suitcase. The driver winds down the window. “How was your flight?’ He asked. “Fine” the character replied. The boot opened and he placed his suitcase in the car and hopped in the passenger side. “Joe is waiting for us over in Prawn Island. We have much to discuss”.

 

The car pulls up out the front of a shabby looking house across the road from the Film Studio. They both hop out and proceed to walk up to the house to be greeted by a Mafia type man. “Jimmy, glad you made it. Hope you brought your stuff”. “Stuff meaning guns, Joe?”. They sit down at a table and Joe lights up a cigar. “Jimmy, as you know Vercetti won a war against us almost 10 years ago. When he killed Sonny in the process. He owns everything in this town, but its time for him to go. Most of the Forelli’s will be moving up to Vice City to take control after we take Vercetti out. They’re having a bit of trouble with the Leones, so why not make it big here. This is where you come in Jimmy. We want you to take Joey here and couple of the other guys and take out Vercetti. He usually checks up on his businesses, so I don’t care how you do it. Blow up his building, blow his head off, I don’t care. I want him dead.”

 

“Tommy there is a rumor going around that the Forellis are back, and they plan to take you out”. One of Tommy’s bodyguards said. “Yeah well tell them that they need a f*cking army to kill me”. Tommy hops in the back of his Limo and is joined by his bodyguards. “Driver, Vercetti Realty.” The limo speeds off into the distance. “I’m just saying boss, be careful. Those Forellis will do anything to kill you.”

 

“Alright, the bomb is wired to the C4 placed on and under the building. Lets go back to a big distance to watch to show Joey. This thing will blow in about 2 minutes.”. Jimmy has wired the bomb in Vercetti Realty. They hop into a Rumpo van and drive off. While Tommy’s limo pulls up.

 

Tommy hops out, followed by his bodyguards. Vercetti Realty was closed up. “Sh*t, I think I forgot my keys.” Tommy hops back into the limo. “Driver, head back to the mansion.” 1:30 is displayed on the bomb and Tommy is just reaching Starfish Island. 1:00 is displayed and Tommy is pulling into the driveway. Tommy hops out and runs up the stars. 0:15 is displayed and Tommy starts walking back to his limo. He reaches the door and stops because he heard a loud explosion. He quickly turned around to catch the last bit of it. Rage fills the look in his eyes. He quickly gets back in the limo and starts heading to Vercetti Realty.

 

When he arrives there is nothing left of it. “So the Forellis are back. They have no idea what there getting into.” Tommy heads back to the mansion and goes into his office. He pours himself a glass of whiskey, gets a Cuban Cigar out and lights it. “So its another war they want. Then that’s what they’ll get.” Tommy picks up the phone and dials. “Hello?” “Ken?” “Tommy is that you?” “Yes. Now you are off the coke right?” “Sure.” “Get your ass down to Vice City. I need your help”.

 

Tommy’s limo appears in front of Escobar International. An aged man walks towards it; he is wearing glasses with a black suit and is completely bald. He hops into the limo. “Jesus Ken Rosenberg.” “Tommy Vercetti. You still run this town?” “Yes. But the Forellis are back. They tried to kill me, they blew up Vercetti Realty. They seem to want another war and I need your help to plan it.” The limo takes off.

 

Tommy’s limo is heading through Little Havana and stops to turn left. A blue Sabre roars around the corner and a MP5 appears out the window. It fires on Tommy’s limo. “DRIVE BY!! KEN GET DOWN!” Ken and Tommy duck down while above them rounds tear through the limo. The Sabre drives off quickly. Tommy looks up to see the driver, dead. He took 4 rounds in the chest. “sh*t, lets get out of here before they come back.” Tommy takes out his Beretta M92 and points it a driver. “GET OUT THE CAR NOW!!” The frightened driver flees and they both hop in. The wheels spin and they take off back to Starfish Island.

 

Tommy and Ken are sitting around his desk. “Tommy, I’ve ordered in weapons, and armor. They will be here soon. There is enough to go around for the whole gang.” “Alright. You got a place to stay?” “Yeah, just down the street.” “Take this” Tommy hands him a Beretta with some clips. “Talk to you in the morning.” Ken walks out of his office and walks outside. He starts walking out of Tommy’s driveway to the street. He walks across the bridge towards Washington beach.

 

Joey one of the Forellis happens to see him. He stops and hops out his car. Ken doesn’t realize Joey is a Forelli and Joey pulls a gun to his head. “So you back working with Vercetti, Rosernberg?” “No..I…uh…” Joey cocks the gun and pulls the trigger. Ken goes down and the pathway is covered in blood and brains. He picks up the body and tosses it over the bridge. He hops back into his car and takes off. One of Vercetti’s gang members saw this. He jumps on a motorbike and follows after him. They both turn into Prawn Island. The thug keeps his distance and pulls over. He gets out a cell phone and dials.

 

Tommy is sitting in his office smoking another cigar. The phone rings. “Hello.” “Tommy its Will, one of the Forellis just capped Ken and I followed him back to Prawn Island. There in a house near the Film Studio.” “WHAT? sh*t ok. Get back here pronto. You know how to fly a helicopter right?” “Yeah.” The thug jumps back on the bike and turns around. Tommy walks up the stairs to the roof. He mounts an M60 Machine Gun to the side. And before he knew it the thug was up on the roof ready to go. “Alright, were flying over to this house. And I’m killing every motherf*cker there. Lets go”.

 

The thug hops into the helicopter with Tommy. The rotors start spinning and they take off. They start to approach the Island. “Which house is it?” “The one in the middle.” Tommy takes aim and prepares to fire.

 

Jimmy, Joey, and Joe and some other Forelli gangsters are sitting, playing poker and drinking. They hear loud gun fire coming from outside. Joey looks at Joe who is holding his bloody chest and falls to the ground. They all dive to the ground while Tommy shreds up the house. Jimmy manages to get into the basement for cover. Joey and the other Forellis are torn apart by Tommy’s M60.

 

“Alright, Lets get out of here.” The helicopter turns around and goes back to the Vercetti Mansion. It lands on the helipad. “Shooting out of a helicopter reminds me of another time.” Tommy walks down the stairs to his office and holds his face. “God damn it Ken. Those Forellis. THOSE F*CKING FORELLIS” Tommy screams out and some of the gang members turn and look up to the office.

 

 

Chapter 4: Arrival of Weapons

Empty bottles of alcohol sat on Tommy’s desk next to a hung-over Vercetti. A gang member walks in. “Tommy, your weapon shipments are here.” Tommy slowly glances up. “You know, the shipment Rosenberg ordered.” Tommy rises up from his chair and slowly walks to the door. He sees a delivery truck and Phil Cassidy standing with it.

 

“Well hey their Tommy. It’s been a long time.” Tommy looks at Phil confused. “Phil Cassidy? That you? Sh*t!” “Yeah I know. Ken gave me the order, you going to war Tommy?” Phil Cassidy walks towards Tommy with only one arm. “Say, how is that Rosenberg?” “Dead. Hope your staying off that boom shine.” “Yeah I am. Say when did Rosenberg die? I only got the order the other day?” “Well that’s about when he died. A Forelli blew his brains into the ocean.” Tommy walks towards the back of the truck opening the doors. He looks to see a lot of ammunition and weapons. “So what do I owe you?” “150G’s, you don’t need to pay now. I can trust you Tommy”.

 

Throughout the afternoon Tommy’s thugs take the arsenal of weapons inside while Tommy again hits the bottle. Tommy is staring into nothing thinking about what just happened. Then the phone rings, which alerts Tommy. He answers it slowly. “Hello?” “Vercetti right?” “Yeah.” “This is Jimmy, of course that’s not my real name. I’m a Hitman hired to take you out. That’s right. The Forellis hired me. Remember the house you shot up? You got everyone except me.” “Hired to kill me? Well you must be the one who wired up my Realty building am I correct?” “That’s right. And if you didn’t forget your f*cking keys I wouldn’t be in this mess. Now I am willing to make a negotiation with you Mr. Vercetti. If you can pay me double what the Forellis payed me. Well I just might not kill you.” “You’re trying to negotiate with Tommy Vercetti? Your working with the Forellis, I don’t give a f*ck about negotiation. YOU HEAR ME? I would rather just watch you die you pathetic f*ck.” “I’m a Hitman, Tommy. Not another regular criminal not another Forelli thug. If you want a war with the Forellis then that’s what’s going to happen.” Tommy hears dial tone and hangs up.

 

He walks outside and finds a young gang member. “Hey kid, go tell everyone to meet me inside in about 5 minutes.” “You got it boss”. Tommy walks back into his office and watches the security cameras. All the gang members are walking into the house. Tommy walks out onto the top of the staircase. “Alright everyone. The Forellis and one of their hired hitmen are going to war with us. As you know we have stocked up on weapons and Kevlar and ammunition. I want you to put on this Kevlar and grab plenty of weapons and be prepared for anything! There soon will be 2 mounted M60s on the roof for full protection and Sniper Rifles as well. Get yourself well prepared.” Tommy holds up a photo of Jimmy. “This is the hitman working for the Forellis. If you see him, you open fire as soon as possible. Do not kill this man just make him disabled. Blow his kneecaps and shins off. Just don’t kill him yet. I repeat DO NOT KILL HIM”.

 

Tommy walks back into the office followed by a gang member. Tommy sits down and looks over at him. “Hey, you should be getting your stuff.” “Well, boss. I was thinking could you put me on one of the M60s?” Tommy looks at him with a raised eyebrow. “How old are you pal?” “26, boss.” “Alright you can go one on of the M60s. Just be careful. What’s your name?” “Manro Vialpando. I just came in from San Andreas.” “Alright be careful Manro.”

 

Manro walks to the next set of stairs leading to the roof. He walks up to the front side of the house to find some gang members drilling the M60 into place. One of them hops up and walks over to Manro. “Hey man, this one is almost mounted for you. Do you know how to use an M60?” “Yeah.” “Ok, it’s all yours. Also there’s a rotating shift between us”. The gang members walk off leaving Manro to get settled. Manro attaches a fresh box of ammo to the gun. “Ok. Time to kick a**.”

 

Hours later one of the gang members returns and gets ready to take his shift. “Alright Manro, your shift is over. I’ll take over from here.” Manro eases off his tight grip around the gun and walks away. “See later man, I’ve got to get home”. Manro starts heading for the steps only to be stopped by hearing a load gunshot. He turned around to see the gang member drop to the ground. He pulls out his Colt M1911 and drops to the ground. He makes his way to the edge and stands up a bit to see two black sedans parked outside on the nearby road with people holding guns in cover around them. Manro gets to the M60 and slowly stands up.

 

Tommy is in his office chair with his eyes closed sleeping only to be woken up by a gunfight. “What the…?” Tommy rises from his chair and gets an M4 Carbine from his nearby weapon cabinet. He makes his way to the roof. Manro’s M60 is tearing through the cars killing these thugs. He stops shooting and Tommy makes his way up to the mounted gun. “MANRO! What happened?” “I don’t know, I went to leave and he got shot.” He pointed to the gang member. “Then I jumped on the gun and killed those pricks.” Tommy looks over the edge towards the road and sees that three more backup cars are coming this way. “Get ready to open fire”. Tommy opens the attached grenade launcher and loads in a grenade.

 

One of the black sedans screeches around the corner. One of the thugs point to Tommy aiming the M4. “GRENADE LAUNCHER! WATCH OUT.” Before they knew it Tommy shot the grenade out. It whirled in the air towards the car. A big explosion turned the car into ash and Tommy and Manro open fire on the rest. One of the cars is driving in around the small block on the island to avoid gun fire. It quickly stops and lets someone out. Distracted by the other car Tommy and Manro continue to open fire. A man who got out of the car is carrying a small compact rocket launcher he hops over a fence into a yard and crouches down and aims for Manro.

 

Tommy sees the man. “GET DOWN!!” Tommy and Manro dive to the ground as the rocket hit the mounted M60. Taking a massive chunk of roof out as well. Enraged Tommy gets back up and starts mowing down the people in the cars. Manro looked up at Tommy and saw this rage that he had never seen. Like Tommy was unstoppable and untouchable. It seemed impossible killing the people who were moving at a fast rate. Suddenly Tommy stops firing and drops an empty magazine onto the ground. He turns and looks at Manro. “You ok?” “Yeah Tommy, just fine. How’d you do that?” Tommy reaches into his jacket and pulls out a fresh magazine and loads it into the M4. “What?” “You killed those guys in the car. They were going pretty fast.” Manro hopped back up. Just at that moment Tommy had forgotten about the guy with the rocket launcher. But before he knew it Manro took a round to the back. Tommy quickly turned and shot him numerous times.

 

“sh*t. I’ll get an Ambulance here. Don’t worry Manro.” Tommy drops the M4 and takes out his cell phone.

 

Chapter 5: Manro’s Revenge

Tommy sits in the hospital. Next to Manro, who is sleeping. Tommy is holding his head with his eyes closed. He is stressed. He has 2 bodyguards standing near him and the mansion is on full security. Manro wakes up and looks over at Tommy. “Hey, Tommy.” “Sh*t Manro. You feeling ok?” “Yeah. Doctor says I should be fine soon ese.” “Don’t worry Manro, I’ll kill those pricks.” “No, Tommy I already got my revenge.” “Oh yeah? You prank call them? You can’t do much.” “No I had one of my bro’s to cover that house with bombs. Big f*cking bombs ese.” “WHAT? That next to the house I shot up?” “Yeah, they moved in next door.” “Oh sh*t.” Tommy quickly gets up and leaves followed by his guards. “Tommy? What the fu…?”

 

Tommy and his guards make there way to the car. Tommy jumps in the driver seat and the guards ride shotgun. The car’s wheels spins and takes off. Over at the house, a Cuban is seen leaving outside the house in a Sabre. “Tommy why we worrying about a bunch of Forellis been blown up?” One of the guards who is confused asks Tommy. A helicopter lands on its roof and Sgt. Johns and SWAT members hop out fully loaded. “That’s f*cking why”. Tommy jumps out and enters the yard. Johns sees him and signals him. Tommy tries to tell him about the bomb. Sgt. Johns shrugs his shoulders and Tommy rolls his eyes. “THERE IS A F*CKING BIG BOMB ON THIS HOUSE.” Inside a Forelli hears Tommy and pulls out his Mac-10 at the wall. “Look. Get out of…” A barrage of bullets sprays around Tommy and he dives to the ground. Tommy’s guards bust in the house only to be gunned downed by the Forellis. John’s SWAT team jumps down to the balcony on the second floor. They make an entry and slowly move to the railing. The Forellis are now distracted and Tommy pulls out a Beretta and open fires. He manages to take down two. But there is 5 left. “F*ck this.” Tommy heads around to the front of the house and prepares to enter. He creeps up to the outside wall near the window.

 

John’s team open fire and Tommy goes in and unloads bullets into the Forellis. Except he misses one. Jimmy The Hitman. But Tommy has to reload. Jimmy jumps around a corner for cover with a TEC-9 in hand. Tommy puts a fresh magazine in and approaches the corner. He stops and fires randomly. He hears Jimmy’s TEC-9 open fire on John’s Team. All 3 of them go down wounded. Johns is still on the roof. Tommy bursts round the corner to just see Jimmy run upstairs to the roof. He makes his way up and hears a gunshot and then 4 more. Tommy sees Sgt. Johns is down and Jimmy taking off in his Helicopter. Tommy runs over to Johns and picks up his MP5. He open fires on the helicopter that is almost a dot in the distance. He drops it and walks up to Johns. “You ok? Fine. Not really I’m sh*tting you. I’m a dead man.” Johns lets out a small laugh then coughs out blood. “SH*T! The BOMB.” Tommy runs towards the edge and sees water ahead. He jumps and the house blows up behind him.

 

Tommy swims back to shore and grabs a car. He speeds back to the hospital. Tommy stops out front and runs inside. Manro wakes up again to see Tommy standing in the doorway. “Tomm…” “What were you thinking? Trying to get your own revenge? I just lost my Police Sargeant. Do you know how many Sargeants accept bribes and practically work for you? I also lost my Bodyguards.” “Tommy I..” “No. You know what? Don’t bother coming back for work. F*ck off. And if you step foot in my mansion. I’ll pull a gun to your head and kill you.” Tommy walks out with his enraged look.

 

Manro lies in his bed. He reaches over for the phone and dials. “Hey, ese. Change of plan. I want that Vercetti prick dead. Meet me over in the hospital. Room 23.”

Edited December 8, 2006 by gRiM-reapa

[MidnightThief]

The chapters are too short, but keep going, I'll read it. Good job.

[eyeswideshut]

the stories look more like the little cutscenes before missions rather than chapters, maybe lengthen them up with some more detail and add more things here and there and it should make a good story

[gRiM-reapa]

***Chapter 3 UPDATED***

[Cypress Hill]

Good story, there's a lot of action in it.

[GM Dude]

Not bad.

Not bad at all.

 

[gRiM-reapa]

Updated with Chapter 4

[gRiM-reapa]

Trivia

What you might of missed.

 

Characters

Claude Speed - Claude Speed, the lead character in Grand Theft Auto 3 makes a stop in Vice City on the way to Liberty City in 92. He robs the Vercetti Bank with an associate.

 

Catalina Vialpando - Cousin of Cesar Vialpando. Associate of Claude Speed. She threatens Tommy in the bank heist.

 

Manro Vialpando - Cousin of Cesar Vialpando. After helping his cousin in San Andreas, Manro heads for Vice City for work. He is employed by Tommy Vercetti. But Tommy does not realise that Catalina and Manro are related.

 

Ken Rosenberg - Deceased coke head and lawyer for Tommy Vercetti in '86. Returns to Vice City after rehab. Assassinated by a Forelli.

 

Phil Cassidy - Phil makes an apperance as Tommy's Arms Dealer. His arm was blown off in 86 from BoomShine.

 

References to GTA: Vice City

Lance Vance - After Tommy kills most of the Forellis with an M60 on a Helicopter. Back at the mansion, he mentions "Shooting out of a helicopter reminds me of another time". This is a reference to a mission in Vice City with Lance Vance.

 

Forellis - The Forellis appear in this story. Though non of the characters have ever existed in any GTA Game.

 

Film Studio - The pornography Film Studio Tommy obtains is mentioned about once.

 

 

 

 

Thats about it.

NOTE: There seems to be some problem with the exclamation marks on this forum. They appear as this: �

[eyeswideshut]

did you post the story on another forum and then copy and paste...stuff like that only happens when you copy and paste.

 

see... !-exclamation "-quotations. all puncuation shows up as ?1/2 or whatever when you copy and paste. Not ripping are you? I'm just kidding. just take the story into Word,Works,WordPad and then copy and paste it into here.

[gRiM-reapa]

 

did you post the story on another forum and then copy and paste...stuff like that only happens when you copy and paste.

 

see... !-exclamation "-quotations. all puncuation shows up as ?1/2 or whatever when you copy and paste. Not ripping are you? I'm just kidding. just take the story into Word,Works,WordPad and then copy and paste it into here.

 

 

No. I didnt rip it . Just from when I copied it from Mircosoft Word.

[eyeswideshut]

Try WordPad next time. I was just joking

[gRiM-reapa]

Yeah I know dude.

[gRiM-reapa]

Chapter 5 inserted

[Archaon, Lord of End Times]

Good story, but, PLEASE DON"T KILL TOMMY!!!

[gRiM-reapa]

Maybe, maybe not

[gamerzworld]

Can't wait for the next chapter! Really nice job!

[Kippers]

It's been like...2 months, doesnt look like he's continuing it mate.

[gRiM-reapa]

Sorry I had been stuck with school work. And I still am now, I've got heaps of exams in the following weeks. Update soon!

 

Sorry for bump

Edited October 14, 2006 by gRiM-reapa

[Archaon, Lord of End Times]

Glad to hear you're continueing it. It's pretty good.

[gRiM-reapa]

Chapter 6: Hit Attempt

Tommy didn't know it but it was almost time for Jimmy's Hit Attempt. It is 2:00 AM. Tommy is in his office in his chair watching TV. Tommy has a sense of secuirity as the whole mansion is being constantly guarded by the gang. Plus you'd need an army to take Tommy down. Or so he thinks. Tommy picks up a Beretta and starts to take it apart to clean it. Across from Starfish Island lies the Forelli hitman Jimmy. He is holding a high powered sniper rifle. He views into the scope and just sees the top of Tommy's head. He prepares to fire until he feels a cold gun shaped object in the back of his head. He lets go of the rifle and slowly turns toward the gunman. He looks up to see a disgruntled Manro Vialpando. "You're that hitman after Vercetti right?" "Uhh..yeah...Don't you work with Vercetti?" "No. I'm the one who blew up some of those Forellis and his police sargeant." "This schedule may help you." Manro hands Jimmy a piece of paper containing Tommy's daily moves. "This is the key to your assassination." He removes the gun from his head and quickly jumps on a PCJ-600.

 

It was Tuesday. Tommy got up to get ready for his Tuesday routine. First order of buisness was to check up on his bank downtown. Of course Jimmy was already one step ahead of him. Sitting in an Infernus across the street was a furious hitman and an enraged Vialpando. "Got your boys ready Vialpando?" "Yeah. Vercetti should be here any second." Tommy's limo slowly pulls in out the front of the bank. A bunch of cars are heading towards the bank and stop out the front near the limo. Cuban gang members get out holding AK-47s and Shotguns. They start open firing on the limo. After suspecting they've killed everyone inside the limo one of them approaches the back left door. He looks in the window only to receive a bullet to the head. Tommy jumps out the limo and runs for the bank. Bullets fly right past him as if the bullets did not want to hit him and he dives into the doorway. Tommy gets up and heads up stairs. He grabs 2 M4 Carbines and heads to the balcony. He pulls both of them into the air and aims them at the door. He again gets his deranged and angered look.

 

He sees Cubans approaching the doorway and starts firing. The power of the 2 M4s send the bullets spraying all over the front wall. Tommy tries to gain control of the guns and takes down most of the gang members. The rest manage to get inside the bank. Tommy drops the guns and pulls out his Desert Eagle. The gang members are hiding behind desks and other objects. Tommy cocks the gun and one of them pops up. Tommy instantly shoots him in the head and picks up an M4. He has an M4 in one hand and Desert Eagle in another. He starts shooting down all the Cubans. He jumps down onto the ground and Jimmy gets out of the car with an AK-47. He starts walking to the bank and Tommy walks outside and tears up his body with his Desert Eagle. Manro watches as Tommy rips up his body. Scared, Manro takes off in the car. "He'll be back." He points the gun at Jimmy's head and splatters his brains all other the road.

 

Tommy jumps into an Inferno and takes off towards his mansion, knowing that Manro would not try anything too soon, Tommy pulls up at his mansion angry and heads inside.

 

- Ok. Sorry for a short chapter and the major bump. But people were waiting for the next chapter.

Within the next 10-20 minutes I will post Chapter 7.

[gRiM-reapa]

Chapter 7: Dead On Arrival

“I wonder how many people arrive in Vice City dead.” Tommy questions his bodyguard. “Obviously the ones that have anything to do with you boss. This is Manro’s work.” Tommy’s bodyguard tells him.

 

Tommy and his bodyguard are standing in a city morgue in front of the body of Thomas Vercetti’s new Security Advisor. A gaping hole sits in his forehead where a chunk of metal used to be. “You know I needed a god damn new Security Advisor, he probably could of upped my security massively. Come on, Joe. Let’s go.” Tommy and his bodyguard leave the morgue in a white limousine.

 

“Joe, I’ve got to get the f*ck out of this business. I’m so sick of it. I’m going to turn out like Tony Montana.” Tommy questions as Joe drives the limo. “Which one was he again?” “He was in that movie, he had the same interior as my mansion. He had a massive empire like me, but then was killed.” The limo slowly rolls at a set of lights. Then all of the sudden Joe is pulled out the limo and thrown to the ground. Tommy’s door swings open and Manro stands there with a Silenced 9mm.

 

“Listen, Manro. I cannot be f*cking bothered to kill you now. I’m too tired. Make an appointment you stupid prick.” “Tommy, Tommy. Now, I’m not going to kill you. Just not yet. I’m going to give you the only chance you’ll ever get to leave this city. To leave this country. All you have to do is hand over all assets to me. That means, your fronts, your mansion, your gang, your drugs and your money. You have 24 hours to comply, otherwise there will be a bang.”

 

Manro closes the door and Joe is pushed back into car. He comes back to senses slowly. “Hey..uh..Tom…Tommy? You want to get back to the mansion?” “Yeah, Joe.” The limo pulls up in the drive way and everyone is called to the bottom of the stairs outside the entrance to the mansion. “Ok, everyone listen up. I don’t know how many people Manro has. But I’ve heard he has a lot of connections, so in the next 24 hours. It might be an all out war. I need security upgraded to the max, everyone will have there own job and there will be no shifts. You will all be assigned different jobs momentarily. The whole concrete wall will have barbed wire placed over it. Not on the top, but on the sides. Two helicopters will be monitoring the whole mansion. Both will have Gatling Gun placements.

 

The boathouse will be heavily guarded as will the roof and outside near the driveway. The windows are been reinforced will bulletproof glass and there will be a Gatling Gun Placement inside on the top of the staircase. Some of you may not survive these 24 hours. And those that do or don’t. God bless. That is all.” Tommy slowly walks inside as everyone is given there jobs outside.

 

Down at the docks, Manro has just finished giving all of his troops his speech, all 250 of them. There are boats, there are cars, trucks. And there is a military helicopter. They all plan there attack in approximately 22 hours.

 

[simplyunkillable]

oh sh*t. i am so watching this topic.

[gatto]

are you planning to finish this thing?

[Danni]

This is worthy of a Red Ranger facepalm, but I'm afraid I'll get in trouble.

[rugbyrules]

wow this is old.....

[Wanted Assailant]

 

are you planning to finish this thing?

f*cking god, this is old. Not too mention grim has been dead hasn't been active for a year.

Of course he's not continuing it.

[gta phil gta]

People, if somebody bumps an old topic, please simply report the post and be done with it; there's no need to reply or create a further chain of replies.