Eagleheart Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 GTA: San Andreas, The Untold Chapter Chapter 1: Things get started 5:25pm, June 15 1995, Sweet’s house It’s the middle of the afternoon in Grove Street as a black banshee comes racing down the street. The brakes of the banshee are pressed as the car starts to drift down the road and into place on the curve of Sweet’s house. The door opens slowly as CJ climbs out of it and looks around. He seems out of place wearing an expensive Didier Sachs suit while everyone else is either wearing GS colors or some other raggedy ass clothes from Binco. A few GSF members walk up to CJ as he closes his door. GSF #1: Damn CJ you looking clean cut up in here, what you doing back in Grove Street. CJ gives the GSF member the Grove Street handshake and starts to talk. CJ: I came to see my brother you know, check up on everything. I’ve been on the road with Madd Dogg lately and haven’t had much time on my hands. Now that the tour’s ended though I can finally relax. GSF #2: sh*t man Madd Dogg is ballin, I haven’t seen a rapper that good in a while, how’d you get lucky enough to be his manager anyways? CJ: It’s a long story, look is sweet home? GSF #1: Ya CJ he’s home, where he always is nowadays. CJ: Straight, I’ll kick it with you guys later. CJ walks over to where Sweets house is and rings the doorbell. The house looks as sh*tty as ever and the bucket of a car that Sweet has is still parked close by. Ten seconds go by and there’s no answer. CJ knocks harder and starts to yell. CJ: Sweet, open up, it’s me, Carl. The door opens. Sweet: CJ what the f*ck you want, look at you, all clean and sh*t, you’re a disgrace to the hood! I ain’t got time for no perpetrator like you, get outta here. CJ: Sweet hold up man, what the f*cks wrong with you, still givin me sh*t after all I’ve done for the hood. Man I can’t believe you. Sweet: CJ you’re right, I’m sorry, I’ve had a lot of sh*t to deal with since you been away that’s all. CJ: Well I’m back and the Johnson brothers are here to stay. Sweet: Ya whatever CJ, lets pick some sh*t up to eat I’m hungry. CJ: Alright Sweet what you want, chicken. Sweet: Man remember the last time we ate chicken, f*ck no lets get pizza. CJ: Uhh, I had a bad experience with the pizza shop over here, Ryder kinda tried to rob it and the pizza guy pulled a shotgun on us. Sweet: f*cking sherm-head Ryder, that dumass always got us into trouble. Fine let’s get some burgers then, or did you get into it with the transsexual working there too. CJ: (Laughing) No Sweet, I’m good over there, let’s go. Sweet: Oh ya CJ, since you been gone I had to have one of my best boys take your place as my 2nd, now that you’re back he can be my lieutenant again, hey DT, get your ass over here. A man wearing green jeans and a green hoody walks up to CJ and Sweet. He has cornrows and is quite skinny almost as much as CJ when he got back from Liberty City. Sweet: CJ, I’d like you to me Devon Terrace, we call him DT. Without him the hood would’ve fallen apart while you were gone. DT: Nice to meet you CJ, I heard a lot about you. CJ: Ya another boy who goes by his initials, I can dig that. So you coming with us then. Sweet: Ya DT come with us you can use some meat on your bones. DT: Not this sh*t again Sweet, I’m tired of it. Sweet: All I’m saying is if you ate a little more then this sh*t wouldn’t happen. So c’mon get in the back, CJ ain’t driving cause he scares the sh*t outta me, so I’ll drive. CJ: f*ck you Sweet, I drive fine. Sweet: Ya, fine for a demolition derby maybe. Let’s go bitch. CJ, Sweet, and DT all drive over to Burgershot and pick up some food. CJ, now getting a little fatter, orders three combos, Sweet gets two as he also is putting on weight, and DT gets a kid’s meal. They drive back to Sweet’s house the whole time Sweet and CJ are poking fun at DT for getting the kid’s meal. Once at Sweet’s house they all eat their food and start playing cards. At one in the morning DT decides to go home. CJ watches as DT goes over to his old house apparently now living there. CJ goes back into Sweet’s house and goes to sleep, Sweet does too after a little while. 2:00am, June 16 1995, Sweet’s house It’s a quite night Ganton, not even the regular sound of gunfire can be heard as it seems peace has finally come over all of Los Santos. Soon the quiet roar of motors can be heard as three black sentinels approach Grove Street. They quietly come to a stop close to Sweet’s house. The doors open as men dressed in fine black suits emerge, in total 12 of them step out, including the drivers. Each one of them are carrying an AK-47 and a desert eagle under their coats. Mafia Thug Leader: This is the place, everyone get into position. Mafia Thugs: Yes sir. The Mafia thugs create a perimeter around Sweet’s house each taking aim at a weak spot in the foundation. The thug’s leader gives the command and they start firing. The bullets drive straight through the building which quickly gives way to the overwhelming fire-power. All of the houses lights turn on as GSF family members quickly wake up and go outside. It’s a massacre as all of the GSF family members are slaughtered on the street. DT wakes up soon to and peers out his bedroom window to see. He quickly goes for his pistol under his bed and takes aim at the mafia members from his room. *Blam* he shoots and hit’s a mafia thug square in the head. The others notice and all turn their fire on him. DT runs downstairs and out the back door. The mafia thugs quickly get back into their car (minus 1) and drive off quickly. DT comes out of hiding and looks around, Groves Street is ruined, dead GSF members litter the streets. DT is horrified as he stares around seeing everything destroyed. He kicks the dead mafia body and as it rolls over he notices something. The desert eagle he carried with him has Leone Family Mafia written on it. DT takes the gun and holsters it in his belt, he then runs over to Sweet’s ruined house to see if anyone survived. As he walks in he notices that the building is completely ruined with bullet holes through everything. He goes up to the main bedroom to see Sweet dead. DT then rushes over to the other bedroom and sees CJ half dead on the floor. CJ groans as DT struggles to pick him up. He’s able to get him inside the a car and starts to drive off for the hospital. Please post any comments you have. This is the pilot chapter so if you think I have a good thing going and want me to continue just say so. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/249358-gta-san-andreas-the-untold-chapter/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
palaric8 Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 CJ, now getting a little fatter, orders three combos, Sweet gets two as he also is putting on weight, and DT gets a kid’s meal. They drive back to Sweet’s house the whole time Sweet and CJ are poking fun at DT for getting the kid’s meal. it was good only this part of the story i didnt liked it but it great keep it up Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/249358-gta-san-andreas-the-untold-chapter/#findComment-3766521 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quadropheniac90 Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Nice. Finally I see those f*ckers suffer. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/249358-gta-san-andreas-the-untold-chapter/#findComment-3766867 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parky. Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Top job Looking good so far! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/249358-gta-san-andreas-the-untold-chapter/#findComment-3767363 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaon, Lord of End Times Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Nice Job, lord of sa, keep up the good work. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/249358-gta-san-andreas-the-untold-chapter/#findComment-3767452 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eagleheart Posted July 4, 2006 Author Share Posted July 4, 2006 Thx for the comments guys, I'll keep posting as many chapters a week I can. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/249358-gta-san-andreas-the-untold-chapter/#findComment-3767643 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eagleheart Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 Sorry for double posting, here's the next chapter. Chapter 2: The Other Side Of The Spectrum 3:30pm, June 16 1995, Caligula’s Casino Salvatore Leone is sitting at his desk smoking a cigar looking out the window. A bird fly’s by and draws his attention, it’s freeness from the hardships of life keep Salvatore in awe as it dances across the sky. Maria, a cocktail waitress of the casino, is also in the room smoking a cigarette. She looks over at Salvatore’s seemingly depressed face and walks over to him. Maria: Sal are you ok? Sal: I’m fine Maria, I’ve just got a lot on my mind. Maria: Tell me about it honey. Maria crosses over behind the desk and sits on Sal’s lap and starts stroking him affectionately. Sal: It’s just, ever since the casino’s been hit by those bastards I feel empty, like I’m not a real man for letting that f*cker Carl taking me for a ride. Maria: Well the hit you’ve placed on him should’ve made you happy right? Sal: I guess, but I don’t know if they even killed him. Suddenly the door opens, Mickey Hamfists walks in the room somewhat disheveled. Maria jumps off Sal’s lap and goes back to the couch to finish her cigarette. Sal: Mickey you asshole can’t you knock, this better be important. Mickey: It’s about the hit on CJ Mr. Leone, it didn’t go as well as we thought, Alonzo got shot in the head. We didn’t even have enough time to check if CJ was dead but the house had bullets every which way and we killed every member of his gang. Here, check the news. Mickey walks over to the T.V. and turns it on. A reporter comes on and behind her tons of police and other emergency workers can be seen in Ganton. T.V. reporter: As you can see here the scene is absolute chaos with the death toll near the 30’s. Apparently this was some type of revenge hit against the Grove Street gangsters who had just recently solidified power in the slums of Los Santos. The Grove Street Family leader who was known as “Sweet” was found dead in the bedroom of his house. While unconfirmed the police suspect the old street gang known as the Ballas for this hit although strangely another man was found on the scene very finely dressed… Salvatore clicks off the T.V. and let’s out a sigh of relief in his chair. Sal: You better f*cking hope you got him Mickey, I don’t want any f*cks ups in my Vendetta. Next I want to take care of this little punk named Zero, he helped then apparently, he has a little hobby shop over in San Fierro. After that we f*ck over the those fish-head triads, good thing we don’t have any of those bastards in Liberty. Mickey: Ya boss, uhh, Vincenzo’s here to see you. Sal: Lucky’s here, well send him on in. “Lucky” Vincenzo Cilli enters the room. He is an up and comer in the Leone Family Mafia and is currently one of the Don’s favorite associates. Mickey exits after Lucky enters, Maria looks up and glances at him then picks up a magazine and starts to read. Sal: Lucky, how the hell are you? Lucky: I just got off the plane from taking Mr. Cipriani into hiding, man he’s going to make a great capo one of these days. Sal: Yes I know, he did a great thing for me that boy, you’re lucky to have a boss like him, get it lucky?. Lucky: Yes I get it Mr. Leone but I’d still prefer to work for you instead of him, don’t get me wrong he’s a great guy but it’s just… Sal: What Lucky? Lucky: He treats me like I’m some type of dog, like I don’t belong in this family. That’s why I want to prove my worth to you Mr. Leone. Sal: Well you’re going to get to prove your chance to me Lucky, I’m going to take out all the triads in San Andreas and you’re going to help me. Lucky: Anything for the family, Mr. Leone. 6:00pm, July 16 1995, Los Santos Hospital DT is sitting in the waiting room of the hospital nervously twiddling his thumbs waiting for news on CJ’s health. He turns on the T.V. for a second then quickly turns it off as they show the massacre that happened at Ganton. A nurse walks into the room over to where DT is sitting. DT: Is he okay, can I see him. Nurse: He’s pretty banged up but other then a few bullet holes nothing life threatening. He should be fine in a week or so. You can see him now if you wish but not to long, he needs his rest. DT thanks the nurse and quickly walks over to CJ’s room. He goes over to the bed to see CJ looking terrible hooked up to an I.V. DT: CJ how you doing man. CJ: They f*cked me up pretty bad DT, where were you? DT: I heard the gunfire from my room so I got out my pistol and picked one of them off, I found out they were some people called the Leone Family Mafia or something but the stupid ass police think it’s the dam Ballas. CJ: Did you say Leone? DT: Ya, why? CJ: f*ck, he’s the guy who’s casino we robbed. DT: Casino, which one? CJ: Caligula’s DT: You don’t even worry about a thing bro, I’m going to handle this one for the Grove, to make you and Sweet proud. CJ: Sweet, I almost forgot where’s Sweet anyways? DT: He’s dead, the whole gang’s gone. There’s no one left but me and you. CJ remains quiet and closes his eyes, DT knows this must come as a shock to him so he leaves him alone to rest. DT: Remember CJ, I’ll handle this, just rest up, building Grove Street back up’s going to need you. CJ: Here, see this man, he’s a good friend of mine, tell him what happened, he’ll help you. CJ hands DT a business card which reads Four Dragons Casino, Las Venturas, Woo Zi Mi. DT leaves the room knowing now he’s now going to be taking a trip to Las Venturas. Comments are welcome, as always. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/249358-gta-san-andreas-the-untold-chapter/#findComment-3768239 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quadropheniac90 Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 Nice chapter, mate, but I discovered a plot hole: Toni was away for three years before he came back to LC. Vincenzo then was Sal's righthand man, but Toni clearly said that he was doing big stuff for Sal when Lucky was still in diapers. So I don't think Vincenzo was that important to Salvatore yet, but the rest is really good. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/249358-gta-san-andreas-the-untold-chapter/#findComment-3768300 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eagleheart Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 Well Vincenzo's not important yet just that he's an up and comer, more like the favorite of the noobies. Guess I should've made that more clear but basically Vincenzo used to work for Toni until he had to go into hiding and now Vinnie's trying to be important by helping Sal. I know I made it seem like Lucky was already important but I forgot that part of LCS. Don't worry I'll keep it as close to the story as I can from now on. But I definately remember Vincenzo being important when Toni came back, at least I won't screw that up. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/249358-gta-san-andreas-the-untold-chapter/#findComment-3768361 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archaon, Lord of End Times Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 Keep up the great work, lord of sa. psst, put Tommy in it. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/249358-gta-san-andreas-the-untold-chapter/#findComment-3769210 Share on other sites More sharing options...
xygtaxy Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 Nice job Lord Of SA. Looking forward to more. I don't like how Sweet died though.... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/249358-gta-san-andreas-the-untold-chapter/#findComment-3799636 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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