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[GlockWorkz]

EDIT: I acciedentally put the wrong title, supposed to be "The Ganton Samurai". Sorry ;(

 

 

Hey, I have made a fanfic before but decided to close it because Ihad enough work to be done. Though, since it's summer, I have all the time in the world to write a fanfic, and pondered on a crazy fanfic idea. So, enjoy!

 

Chapter 1: Happy Beginnings

 

Setting: Ganton 10:45 A.M

 

14-year-old Condre was sleeping on his bed, fairly early in the morning, As his 6-year-old little brother, Garret, woke him up from a delightful sleep. Garret takes his pillow and wacks it on Condre's head very strongly, shocking Condre.

 

"What the hell? Man, why you have to do that!?" Condre shouted, as Garret ran away giggling. Condre searched around his room for decent clothing, though the mess on his floor made it harder to find.

 

Though Condre lived in a gang riddened city, a corrupted area surrounded with arms and drugs, he was different from the rest. Condre's first weapon he ever held wasn't a gun, or a bat, but his first real weapon he holstered was a Katana.

 

This started when his 16-year-old brother, Eric, were walking home from work. Condre, as a 10 year old, always looked up to his brother, and he always looked through window that led to the drive-way of his house, waiting for Eric to come in. Though, one day, while Eric was on the drive-way, a purple Tahoma stops, covering the drive-way's front, and 4 Ballas rush out, walking to Eric agressively.

 

They pulled Eric back, and start cussing about how he "dissed their families", and "the Grove is goin' down", then they beat Eric with bare fists. Condre, the one who was always happy to see Eric comming home, saw Eric being savagely beaten. The cries of horror steamed Condre, and then his adrenaline picked up. He quickly stashed the longest and sharpest knife he could find in his kitchen, and he headed out. The 4 Ballas stopped beating Eric, and stare at the knife wielding boy starring at them.

 

They threw Eric to the ground, and head towards Condre slowly. As they proceed slowly, Condre rushed towards, slashing a Balla through the mouth, and made him drop to the ground, blood gashing out. The 3 other Ballas finally start to rush in after Condre killed the the first Balla, and stabbed the closest Balla from the stance he was in. He left the knife in the Balla, and sliced the Balla through the gut, blood sprayed all over the other 2 Balla's. The 2 were intimidated as the blood from the 2nd Balla was all over their body. As they were distracted from the blood pouring from both Ballas, Condre quickly kicked the knee of the 3rd Balla, and made him kneel, as the other Balla stood still for a second. Condre appeared from behind the Balla after the kick, and stabbed him through the backside of his head. The knife poked through to the other side and out of the mouth, it looked as if the Balla were puking out blood. The 4th Balla, extremely intimidated and disturbed, runs away from the young killer.

 

Condre ran to Eric, finding a blood covered brother, and knocked out. Condre looked at the knife he used to kill the Ballas, and started to cry. He only had one thing in his mind,

 

 

"Kill that last Ballas...."

 

 

Chapter 2 comming soon...

 

Imagine, you need to write that much just for an off-topic morning, and the way he killed 4 people, nice.

Edited June 27, 2006 by GlockWorkz

[Parky.]

It seems more like a script than a Fanfic. For example "They throw Eric to the ground" Present tense, it needs to be past tense. Take a look at President Killer's "Decline of Liberty" the leading Fanfic on here for tips on correct grammar etc.

[GlockWorkz]

It seems more like a script than a Fanfic. For example "They throw Eric to the ground" Present tense, it needs to be past tense. Take a look at President Killer's "Decline of Liberty" the leading Fanfic on here for tips on correct grammar etc.

Sorry, I knew you had to put present tense, I was just in a hurry to finish up because I was going somewhere, and I didn't want to keep my computer on for that period of time. Editted it all to past tense.