Running Scared (1 of 2)

[jigsaws puppet]

Vice City

Little Havanna

1983

Outside the Haitian Gang Front

 

Grand Theft Auto

Presents

RUNNING SCARED Part I

 

A man is seen running out of the Haitian Gang Front covered in blood

 

The man is wearing a black t-shirt, with a rip in the middle, and dark blue jeans

 

He is running as fast as he can away from the Front

 

In the mist of it, he finds a cab leaving Kaufman Kabs, and he quickly jumps into it

 

The Cabby is stunned by the look of the man, all covered in blood

 

Cabby: Where, uh where to buddy?

 

(Silence)

 

Cabby: Huh?

 

Man:...........The Docks.

 

The Cabby nods his head and continues driving

 

Man:....Hey do you have a cigarrete?

 

the cabby reaches into his glove compartment and pulls out a Molborol red and hands it to the man

 

Man: Thanks.

 

The man quickly pulls out his lighter and lights his cigarrete up

 

He puffs half of the cigarrete up almost instantly, filling the cab with smoke

 

Man: (Narrating) My name in Fynne Connely.....I'm one of the soldiers for the "Kingpins".....A gang to heavy for it's rep......well aleast i thought we were.......We've been in conflict with the haitians for as long as i can remember.....I'm only 19, and i joined the gang 2 years ago so i don't know much......but what i do know is that we hate the haitians........and after years and years of violent trials for their acts, our warlord Jonzie Baker wanted to call a truce......and the haitians accepted.......we thought that too......And 20 soldiers came to the meeting, the baddest ones including me......but little did we know was that this was the perfect oppertunity for the haitians to move in on us and take us out....so they locked the gate and pulled out their SMG's.........16 of them were killed instantly, inluding Jonzie.....me and my pal Chris wen up the steps, but there was one waiting for us....Chris was shot dead, and i took two bullets.........Luckily i was packing a knife and luckily i was such a good aim, or else he would have finished me off.......I didn't stop to see what happend to the others, but this isn't over yet.....no.....not by a long shot

 

The taxi arrives at the docks

 

Fynne steps out

 

Cabby: Ok, thats $7.48 pal.

 

Fynne pulls out a $10

 

Fynne: Keep the change.

 

The Cabby drives off and Fynne walks into the payphone outside the docks

 

Fynne dials a number

 

a man on the other line picks up

 

Man: Hello?

 

Fynne: Vincent!

 

Vincent: What?

 

Fynne: Where the hell where you?

 

Vincent: What the hell are you talkin about?

 

Fynne: the meeting Vince....Where were you?

 

Vincent: I didn't show up.....Jonzie wanted me to hang back.

 

Fynne: So you don't know what happend!

 

Vincent: Obviously not.

 

Fynne: (Sobbing) They're dead Vince.....THE'RE ALL DEAD!!!!

 

Vincent: Holy sh*t!

 

Fynne: Except for Jimmie and Claude i think their alright........I took a bullet in my chest and in my stomach, but i think i'll live.

 

Vincent: Well try getting ahold of Claude.

 

Fynne: What the hell am i supposed to do?

 

Vincent: Well tell me where you are.

 

Fynne: I'm......at the docks, I'm gonna see Jethro and Dwayne....and i'm gonna see if they can patch me up.

 

Vincent: You're gonna ask two 19 year old stoner car mechanics if they can fix you up?

 

Fynne: I'm not left with alot of alternatives Vincent! I can't go to a hospital.....That's the first place the haitians are gonna look!

 

Vincent: True.....But look, hang low at the docks and i'll come and get you....I've gotta guy who'll come fix you up.

 

Fynne begins to sob once again

 

Vincent: I'm sorry Fynne, that must have been horrible........So all of them?.....Even Jonzie?

 

Fynne: Yeah, I'm pretty sure. i saw him run into a bunch of haitians and i didn't bother to look back, but i'm pretty sure.

 

Vincent: well look, hang low....i'll come and get you ok?

 

Fynne: Yeah....yeah that sounds good.

 

Vincent: Ok.

 

Fynne hangs up and walks into the warehouse at the docks

 

Jethro and Dwayne lye on the ground looking at the tiles on the room

 

Dwayne: 20, 35, no wait...............112

 

Jethro: wrong.

 

Dwayne: Screw you dude.

 

Jethro: That one in the corner is out, and the two up here are actually connected so your total amount is-

 

The two stoners see Fynne standing at the door

 

They immediatly jump up

 

Jethro: Fynne!

 

Dwane: Connely, tomalli haha.

 

Fynne has a small half smile on his face like he is releaved

 

Dwayne approaches him

 

Dwayne: Holy crap man, what the hell happend to you?

 

Fynne: I had a run-in with the haitians.

 

 

Jethro & Dwayne: HAITIANS MAN!!

 

They high-five eachother.

 

Jethro walks over to some crates and begins marking them off

 

Jethro: The haitians are why we still have out business bro.

 

dwayne: Yeah, if you were having problems with the haitians, you should have just talked to us.....They give us protection and in exchange they get some of the monthly shipments, wink-wink..

 

Jethro: Yeah man, i mean its supply and demand but on both ends....They supply us the protection so we can ship in our goods without the cops or any other gangs messin with us....and they demand a fair prophet. And we supply them the goods, and we demand protection....haha, so it all works out.

 

Dwayne: Come with me Fynne, i got somethin that'll calm your nerves.

 

 

10 MINUTES.......AND TWO JOINTS LATER

 

 

The tree men lay on the floor counting tiles

 

Dwayne: 115

 

Jethro: 113

 

Fynne:..............110

 

Jethro: Dude....he's right

 

Fynne: One tile is broken, and two are connected.

 

Dwayne: Wow man.

 

Vincenzo Cilli steps inside and notices the three men lying on the floor

 

Vincent: I should have known.

 

Fynne is stunned by the voice in the backround and he immediately stands up seeing Vincent

 

Fynne: Vincent!

 

Vincent: Connely

 

Jethro: Whoa man, I'm seeing like, Fynne and some creeepy guy with a lame suit on

 

Vincent: It's itallion.....dick.

 

Jethro: Oh bring it on woman.

 

Fynne: Ignore them....What took you so long?

 

Vincent: Traffic......Incase you didn't know, half of Vice city has already gotten tickets to see the Liberty Cocks....let's go.

 

Fynne: Ok, Later Dwayne, later Jethro.

 

Jethro: Asalam Alakm man......haha, we got him so f*cked up.

 

Vince and Fynne are driving in sentinal, Vincent driving, fynne riding shotgun

 

Fynne: Where are we going?

 

Vincent: i told you.....to get you a doctor, my friend Rosenberg's got the hookups.

 

Fynne: No....no take me to the haitian Front.

 

Vincent: No, hell no.....you're going to see Dr. Cipriani.

 

Fynne: f*ck you man, pull this car over i'll do it myself.

 

Vincent:.....You will die Fynne, don't you get it? You were lucky you got out of there, but you wont be able to take another bullet!

 

Fynne: Watch me...

 

Immediately Fynne dives out of the car

 

He runs as fast as he can away from the car

 

Vincent: (Yelling from the car) I warned you Connely, if you get killed out there i wont shed a tear........You'll die!!!!!!

 

 

TO BE CONCLUDED

 

That was part one of the two parts of "Running scared"

 

fynne Connely is an underground character as well as the "Minute Man"

 

Plz comment this and my other storys so i can write the end of the story

 

these are the storys i have written this past month:

 

Tommy Vercetti, or Alex Shrub?

 

Maccer wants implants?

 

Room 27.

 

Just another ride home.

 

Payin the price. (part I)

 

Vendetta (part I, II, & III)

 

thanx 4 lookin

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[gta player06]

I liked this story. Nice job man. Just I don`t think that a injured gangster would tell all his story to Cab driver.

[jigsaws puppet]

no, no, no....he's narrating the story....lol, he ksnt telling the cabby

[harri1990]

wow man u got some writing skills i liked that .. wanna see that ingame

[Mclenz]

SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was awesome dude, I like the proper usage of past characters. Very well done, you should post his in Writers Discussion though, it'll get more popularity.