jigsaws puppet Posted May 30, 2006 Share Posted May 30, 2006 WARNING!!!!! If you haven't read the previous vendetta, i recommend you read it first, or else you will have no idea of whats going on in the story San Andreas Las Venturas 1997 Outside the Camel Toe Casino Grand thefy Auto presents VENDETTA Part II (Room Service) The cab pulls up outside the camel Toe Casino Cabby: Ok bud, including the last fair, thats $12.29 man. Minute Man: Keep it runnin again man. Cabby: Look, i can't keep doin this, i'v got other fairs to attend to. The Minute man pulls out a large roll of $20's MM: You let me take care of my business here, and a couple more stops you get that same amount again The Cabby counts the money Cabby: Holy sh*t man....there must be like 600 bucks in here. MM: If you take me to the places i need to go, you'll be gettin 1,200 bucks... The cabby grins MM: What's your name? Cabby: Luigi....Luigi Goterelli. MM reaches out his hand MM: Nice to meet you Luigi. Luigi shakes his hand Luigi: You gotta name? MM: just call me M. Luigi: Well.....ok M, i'll be waitin. MM: Much obliged. MM steps out of the car and walks into the casino He pulls an envelope out of his pocket showing 3 Leone thugs in the casino: Arnie Lopez Johnny Cavanaugh Vito Leone He puts the envelope back in his pocket and approaches the front counter A lady clerk behind the desk with the nametag "Millie Perkins" stares at MM as he approaches the counter Millie: Welcome to the camel toe Casino, and hotel resort, may i help you? MM: Yes, I'm looking for a couple people. Millie: Anyone in perticular? MM: Yeah, Arnie Lopez, John Cavanaugh, and vito Leone....Ring a bell? Mille: Let me see.... Mille looks up the three gentlemen Mille: Why yes, actuall Mr. Leone is staying in the sweet upstairs, room 413. MM: What about the other two? Millie types the other two in Mille: Mr. Lopez and Mr. Cavanaugh are staying in room 209 together. MM puts a $50 on the table MM: Thank you. MM winks at her She smiles back (Flirting) MM takes the elevator to the 4th floor He looks around at the numbers on the doors He finds room 209 and stands there for a moment and picklocks the door quietly He unlocks the door and slowly/quietly makes his way in. He notices Cavanaugh standing at the balcony with a pair of binoculars looking directly at the 4 Dragons MM smiles and approaches him He quickly grabs the binoculars out of his hands, wraps the strap around his neck, and kicks his legs out making him hang over the ledge with the binoculars around his neck the only thing keping him from falling The strap hangs on a pole on the balcony Cavanaugh is turning blue already MM: Johnny we need to talk. Cavanaugh grunts and squeels for breath MM: Oh i'm sorry, how rude of me The strap begins to tear MM: Well would you look at that?......No wonder Jimmy Silverman told you to lose weight....but did you listen to him?.......Hell no Lopez steps out of the bathroom and sees the Minute Man Lopez: OH sh*t! Lopez attempts to pull out his pistol, but MM outsmarts him and pulls out his Black Silenced Desert Eagle (Silence Deagle) and shoots him straight in the head, before Lopez even had a chance to take the safety off his gun MM puts his gun away, and continues like it's no big deal MM: So where were we? Cavanaugh is as blue as a cloudless sky MM: Oh sorry. MM pulls Cavanaugh up over the balcony johnny falls to the ground immediately gasping for air MM crouches MM: You answer me one question and i make this quick and simple.....Can you do that for me? Cavanaugh: ye.....Yeah. MM: Ok.....how many people are upstairs? Cavanaugh:............5. MM: Thank you MM stands up and streches his legs Cavanaugh stands up, holding his brused neck Cavanaugh: Can i atleast get a drink or somethin? MM quickly pulls out his double silenced deagles and blows Johnny to the floor without him even having time to notice it MM:..........No. MM walks out of the room, and places a "do not disturb sign" on the doorknob MM takes the elevator to the 6th floor He looks around the strip of suites and sees to body guards standing out side room 413 MM without hezitaion pulls out his double silencers and blows both if them to the ground MM: 2 down...3 to go. MM bursts through the door and sees vito standing at the window and his two other body guards watching him MM and the body guards pull out their guns at the same time: Mexican stand off: The two body guards point their pistols at MM, while MM is pointing his 2 silencers at both of them Vito is not surprised Vito: Well, i thought you'd never come. MM looks at Vito (a fat old timer, with suspenders and a cigar) Vito: Boy's, is this how we treat our guests? The bodyguards are confused Vito: Weapons down boys. The bodyguards begin to lower their weapons MM lowers his as well Vito: Good.....Have a seat young man. MM: I'll stand, i'm gonna be outta here any second so sitting down's probably a waste of time. Vito: All regular badass eh? MM: It certainly appears so. Vito: So.....You're the Minute Man everyone's been talkin about. MM: I don't think anyone lives long enough to talk about it. Vito: Hehe.......Dirty Harry wannabe aint ya? MM: Dirty Harry aint got sh*t on me except for the license to kill. Vito: If only salvatore could see you.....You've got some real potential kid....and your throwin it away for a bunch of yellowskinned chinks, when you could be putting makin real money, and makin somethin of yourself with the Leone's MM: Look pal, the only person i work for the man on the hundred dollar bill. Vito: Don't they all.....Well it's a shame that you'll have to die......you could have put your gun-slinging to good use to......You've got bad karma kid. MM: Who said I'm dyin? MM pulls out his double silencers and blows the two bodyguard's heads off MM: How's that for karma? Vito:......Wow kid.......How much?....How much do you want for your services? MM: 3 bullets in the chest. MM rises his gun and fires 3 shots at him Vito falls to the ground bleeding like a stuck pig MM: You still wanna make a deal Vito? Vito gasps one last breath and falls dead MM picks up an envelope on the table filled with $100's MM: What a shame old man, you should have just given me this. MM puts the envelope in his pocket and walks out of the room, ignoring the dead bodies lying outside the door As MM begins to walk out, he approaches Mille MM: Hey, i think room 413 needs some towels....a big mess up there. Millie: Ok, i'll have the bellboy bring some up. MM: Thanks. MM begins to walk away, but then runs back to the table MM: Um- Mille see's MM blushing MM: -I haven't done this in a while but...are you busy tonight? Mille: Hehe, no why? MM: Well I was kinda wonderin if you'd like to see the premere of Badfellas with me tonight, because I've got 2 free tickets and i was just, kinda wonderin if- Mille: (giggling) I'd love to. MM: Well, great......Where will you be? Mille: I'll be here. MM: Well ok great....I'll see you tonight.....bye. MM exits Mille smiles Mille: Bye. MM gets back in the taxi Luigi: Where to now? MM: The Burger Shot in San Fierro..... TO BE CONTINUED That was part two of the five parts of Vendetta....Part Three will be posted within the next couple of days Plz comment my scripts and i will write part three For those of you who don't know The Minute Man is an underground character in the Grand Theft Auto series.....and plus it has to do with my best friend james bein a minute man (lol) Plz comment my previous story's: Tommy Vercetti, or Alex Shrub?-Vice City Maccer wants implants?-San Andreas Room 27.-San Andreas-Minute Man Just another ride home-Liberty City-Minute Man Payin the Price (1 of 3)-Vice City Vendetta (1 of 5)-San Andreas-Minute Man Vendetta (2 of 5)-San Andreas-Minute Man Thax 4 lookin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saintdave Posted May 30, 2006 Share Posted May 30, 2006 I'm sure your fanfic is good but you didn’t need to make separate topics, and I wouldn’t recommend making 3,4 and 5 in separate ones either. Instead have this one closed and put it all in your previous topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindancer Posted May 30, 2006 Share Posted May 30, 2006 I have moved your first post in to the part 1 thread. please update that in future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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