jigsaws puppet Posted May 30, 2006 Share Posted May 30, 2006 (edited) San Andreas Las venturas 1997 4 dragons Casino VENDETTA Part 1 of 5 A San Andreas Story Wu Zi Mu (Leader of the Triads) sits in his office Having a conversation With Ran Fa Li (Red Gecko Tong Triads) Woozie:-And thats why we had to kill him. You have to understand that if we don't do something now, and i mean now, we'll have 2, maybe 300 Leone's on our ass.....And on behalf of that we need to expand turfs....I'm talkin ALL Triads in San Fierro watching Las Venturas incase those italion pricks decide to declare war on the strip...No lousy-spaggeti-eating-morons are gonna try to step in and wave their pieces at us!......So what do you say Ran?.....can we cut a deal? Ran: (grunts) Woozie: Marvelous, absoloutly brilliant. Int. Outside the Casino A man steps out of a taxi Man: (to the cabby) Keep it runnin. He walks towards the door The man walks into the joint like he owns the place. The man is revealed as the minute man (his dark suit and briefcase gives it away) His face (as usual) is never revealed because a shadow manages to block his face. The most recommended Hitman in the business he approaches the door leading to Woozie's office, but is interfeared by a body guard Guard: Excuse me sir, where do you think your're goin? MM: I'm here to see Woozie. Guard: Do you have an appointment? The Minute Man shows him the briefcase Guard: Oh....my bad....um yes sir, come right in. The Minute Man steps inside Woozie stops his conversation with Ran and immediatley hears The Minute Man coming in Woozie: Oh M, I'm so glad you could make it MM approaches the table, placing the attache down on it Woozie feels around for the tabs, opening the briefcase Whats inside the briefcase is not shown, but Woozie is excited by what he is feeling Woozie shuts the briefcase, handing it to Su Xi Mu Woozie: i'm very impressed Mr. M, you have done me a favor, that i don't think Carl Johnson could have done, god rest his soul.......But anyway, i think we have found a motive to end the Leone's in San Andreas once and for all. MM: What the plan? Woozie: I'm glad you decided to join the conversation........we managed to find all their fronts in San Andreas- Woozie snaps his fingers, and Su Xi Mu immediatley hands him a set of blueprints He lays it out on the table, with red circles on the fronts Woozie: As you can see, i cant see.....So i think you can see for yourself where they are: A Cluckin' bell in Los Santos A car wash in Los Santos A burger shot in San fierroAnd the Camel Toe casino across the strip Woozie: we should strike ASAP. MM: Well where shall I begin? Woozie: Your the hitman....use your imagination! MM: How much? Woozie: $50 grand each front. MM: Make it 60. Ran Fa Li pulls out his magnum Su Xi Mu: Mr. Fa Li, calm down Ran grunts and sits back down and places his gun on the table Woozie: are you insane? MM: Most definatley, now either you pay me 60 or i walk. (Silence) Woozie:.......Deal. Woozie puts his hand out, to shake his hand but he's pointing it in the wrong direction. MM moves to where his hand is and shakes it MM: Consider it done. MM walks out of the building and gets into the cab Cabby: Where to buddy? MM: The Camel toe..... TO BE CONTINUED That was part one of the five parts of the story.....i will post part II within the next couple of days For those of you who don't know, the Minute Man is an underground character in the series. take a look at my past scripts iv written the past month: Tommy Vercetti, or Alex Shrub? Maccer Wants Implants? Room 27-Featuring Minute Man Just Another Ride Home-featuring Minute Man Payin the price (1 of 3) Plz comment them if ud like....if u have any recomendations plz let me know.....thx 4 lookin PART 2 (Edited by Raindancer) WARNING!!!!! If you haven't read the previous vendetta, i recommend you read it first, or else you will have no idea of whats going on in the story San Andreas Las Venturas 1997 Outside the Camel Toe Casino Grand thefy Auto presents VENDETTA Part II (Room Service) The cab pulls up outside the camel Toe Casino Cabby: Ok bud, including the last fair, thats $12.29 man. Minute Man: Keep it runnin again man. Cabby: Look, i can't keep doin this, i'v got other fairs to attend to. The Minute man pulls out a large roll of $20's MM: You let me take care of my business here, and a couple more stops you get that same amount again The Cabby counts the money Cabby: Holy sh*t man....there must be like 600 bucks in here. MM: If you take me to the places i need to go, you'll be gettin 1,200 bucks... The cabby grins MM: What's your name? Cabby: Luigi....Luigi Goterelli. MM reaches out his hand MM: Nice to meet you Luigi. Luigi shakes his hand Luigi: You gotta name? MM: just call me M. Luigi: Well.....ok M, i'll be waitin. MM: Much obliged. MM steps out of the car and walks into the casino He pulls an envelope out of his pocket showing 3 Leone thugs in the casino: Arnie Lopez Johnny Cavanaugh Vito Leone He puts the envelope back in his pocket and approaches the front counter A lady clerk behind the desk with the nametag "Millie Perkins" stares at MM as he approaches the counter Millie: Welcome to the camel toe Casino, and hotel resort, may i help you? MM: Yes, I'm looking for a couple people. Millie: Anyone in perticular? MM: Yeah, Arnie Lopez, John Cavanaugh, and vito Leone....Ring a bell? Mille: Let me see.... Mille looks up the three gentlemen Mille: Why yes, actuall Mr. Leone is staying in the sweet upstairs, room 413. MM: What about the other two? Millie types the other two in Mille: Mr. Lopez and Mr. Cavanaugh are staying in room 209 together. MM puts a $50 on the table MM: Thank you. MM winks at her She smiles back (Flirting) MM takes the elevator to the 4th floor He looks around at the numbers on the doors He finds room 209 and stands there for a moment and picklocks the door quietly He unlocks the door and slowly/quietly makes his way in. He notices Cavanaugh standing at the balcony with a pair of binoculars looking directly at the 4 Dragons MM smiles and approaches him He quickly grabs the binoculars out of his hands, wraps the strap around his neck, and kicks his legs out making him hang over the ledge with the binoculars around his neck the only thing keping him from falling The strap hangs on a pole on the balcony Cavanaugh is turning blue already MM: Johnny we need to talk. Cavanaugh grunts and squeels for breath MM: Oh i'm sorry, how rude of me The strap begins to tear MM: Well would you look at that?......No wonder Jimmy Silverman told you to lose weight....but did you listen to him?.......Hell no Lopez steps out of the bathroom and sees the Minute Man Lopez: OH sh*t! Lopez attempts to pull out his pistol, but MM outsmarts him and pulls out his Black Silenced Desert Eagle (Silence Deagle) and shoots him straight in the head, before Lopez even had a chance to take the safety off his gun MM puts his gun away, and continues like it's no big deal MM: So where were we? Cavanaugh is as blue as a cloudless sky MM: Oh sorry. MM pulls Cavanaugh up over the balcony johnny falls to the ground immediately gasping for air MM crouches MM: You answer me one question and i make this quick and simple.....Can you do that for me? Cavanaugh: ye.....Yeah. MM: Ok.....how many people are upstairs? Cavanaugh:............5. MM: Thank you MM stands up and streches his legs Cavanaugh stands up, holding his brused neck Cavanaugh: Can i atleast get a drink or somethin? MM quickly pulls out his double silenced deagles and blows Johnny to the floor without him even having time to notice it MM:..........No. MM walks out of the room, and places a "do not disturb sign" on the doorknob MM takes the elevator to the 6th floor He looks around the strip of suites and sees to body guards standing out side room 413 MM without hezitaion pulls out his double silencers and blows both if them to the ground MM: 2 down...3 to go. MM bursts through the door and sees vito standing at the window and his two other body guards watching him MM and the body guards pull out their guns at the same time: Mexican stand off: The two body guards point their pistols at MM, while MM is pointing his 2 silencers at both of them Vito is not surprised Vito: Well, i thought you'd never come. MM looks at Vito (a fat old timer, with suspenders and a cigar) Vito: Boy's, is this how we treat our guests? The bodyguards are confused Vito: Weapons down boys. The bodyguards begin to lower their weapons MM lowers his as well Vito: Good.....Have a seat young man. MM: I'll stand, i'm gonna be outta here any second so sitting down's probably a waste of time. Vito: All regular badass eh? MM: It certainly appears so. Vito: So.....You're the Minute Man everyone's been talkin about. MM: I don't think anyone lives long enough to talk about it. Vito: Hehe.......Dirty Harry wannabe aint ya? MM: Dirty Harry aint got sh*t on me except for the license to kill. Vito: If only salvatore could see you.....You've got some real potential kid....and your throwin it away for a bunch of yellowskinned chinks, when you could be putting makin real money, and makin somethin of yourself with the Leone's MM: Look pal, the only person i work for the man on the hundred dollar bill. Vito: Don't they all.....Well it's a shame that you'll have to die......you could have put your gun-slinging to good use to......You've got bad karma kid. MM: Who said I'm dyin? MM pulls out his double silencers and blows the two bodyguard's heads off MM: How's that for karma? Vito:......Wow kid.......How much?....How much do you want for your services? MM: 3 bullets in the chest. MM rises his gun and fires 3 shots at him Vito falls to the ground bleeding like a stuck pig MM: You still wanna make a deal Vito? Vito gasps one last breath and falls dead MM picks up an envelope on the table filled with $100's MM: What a shame old man, you should have just given me this. MM puts the envelope in his pocket and walks out of the room, ignoring the dead bodies lying outside the door As MM begins to walk out, he approaches Mille MM: Hey, i think room 413 needs some towels....a big mess up there. Millie: Ok, i'll have the bellboy bring some up. MM: Thanks. MM begins to walk away, but then runs back to the table MM: Um- Mille see's MM blushing MM: -I haven't done this in a while but...are you busy tonight? Mille: Hehe, no why? MM: Well I was kinda wonderin if you'd like to see the premere of Badfellas with me tonight, because I've got 2 free tickets and i was just, kinda wonderin if- Mille: (giggling) I'd love to. MM: Well, great......Where will you be? Mille: I'll be here. MM: Well ok great....I'll see you tonight.....bye. MM exits Mille smiles Mille: Bye. MM gets back in the taxi Luigi: Where to now? MM: The Burger Shot in San Fierro..... TO BE CONTINUED That was part two of the five parts of Vendetta....Part Three will be posted within the next couple of days Plz comment my scripts and i will write part three For those of you who don't know The Minute Man is an underground character in the Grand Theft Auto series.....and plus it has to do with my best friend james bein a minute man (lol) Plz comment my previous story's: Tommy Vercetti, or Alex Shrub?-Vice City Maccer wants implants?-San Andreas Room 27.-San Andreas-Minute Man Just another ride home-Liberty City-Minute Man Payin the Price (1 of 3)-Vice City Vendetta (1 of 5)-San Andreas-Minute Man Vendetta (2 of 5)-San Andreas-Minute Man Thax 4 lookin San Andreas San Fierro 1997 Outside the Burger Shot Grand Theft Auto presents VENDETTA Part III (Takeout) The Minute Man sits in the backseat of the cab and stares through the window He doesn't see any bodyguards or Leone's outside......it might be easier than her thought Luigi sits in the front seat MM: Ok Luigi, wait here......this shouldn't take long. Luigi: Whatever you say Mr. M MM steps out of the car and walks inside the burger joint MM immediatley sees 2 Leone thugs sitting at the table having a conversation MM ignores them and approaches the counter Employee: Welcome to Burger Shot sir....may i take your order? MM: Yeah- MM lowers his voice, and points to the thugs MM: -how long have those two gentlemen been here? Employee: Oh....um, well i'm not supposed to- MM pulls out a $100 dollar bill MM: You wanna stutter now Peewee? The employee lowers his voice as well Employee: Ok......This is their front ok?....they bought out the place for the weekend.......they said their cunducting an experiment on somethin, i dunno....You'd have to ask Ronald the manager MM: Where's Ronald? Employee: He's talkin with one of them in the back room. MM:...............You don't say.......you want $500 bucks? 5 MINUTES LATER The Employee bursts through the managers office The manager is sitting at his chair, with Vincenzo Cilli Employee: Mr. Loopis, some kids are taggin up the back of the store! Loopis: f*ckem, this place needs to be decorated anyways. Employee: With the words "Ronald Loopis sucks big hard cock"? Loopis: SONOVABITCH Loopis bursts out the door and takes the employee with him Vincenzo sits in his chair not giving a damn MM approaches the door MM walks in and sits down in the chair Vincenzo: Do I know you? MM: Doubtfully. Vincenzo: well what the hell are you doin here? MM: Just doin my job Vincent......just doin my job. Vincenzo: Oh.....you're the exterminator.....The Minute Man MM: good guess. Vincenzo: So what?....You're here to kill me? MM: It depends. Vincenzo: It depends on what? MM: It depends on what information you give me. Vincenzo: I'm not gonna tell you where we're hiding out in. MM: I already know. Vincenzo: Is that so? MM: If he's still alive, you can ask Vito Leone Vincenzo's smirk lowers Vincenzo: You killed Vito? MM: Most likely. Vincenzo: f*ck......That was unexpected. MM: The odds are that he's still alive....On the 6 o'clock news, you'll probably see 5 dead, one wounded......i don't get a kick out of killing VIP's of gangs....just thugs. Vincenzo: Well then what does that make me? MM: Unfortunately you'll have to ask that to the barrel of my guns. Vincenzo: Is that right? the two men pull out their guns at the same time and have each barrel touching each others face (mexican standoff) Vincenzo's 357 magnum at MM MM's silenced Deagle at Vincenzo Vincezno: So..... MM: So...... Vincenzo: How's this gonna go down? MM: You tell Salvatore Leone to back off the Triads.. Vincenzo: Or? MM: Or i splatter cherry pie all over that f*ckin wall behind you. Vincenzo doesn't know that at anytime MM could pull out his spare deagle and blow vincenzo's guts out.....but no....he wants to enjoy this Vincenzo: What exactly do you need to know? MM: What's Salvatore's beef with the Triads? Vincenzo: (Smirks)....Those lousy yellow-skins didn't bother to tell you did they? MM: Obviously not.... Vincenzo: Well if you MUST know, one of the triads made a dal with Salvatore's nephew Frankie Giovani......and What Frankie didn't know was that the triad was using him to obtain information for the triads in Liberty. MM: If they were in Liberty, why are you gunnin for the Venturaz Triads? Vincenzo: That wasn't the end of the story.....As it seems, Frankie eventually found out what was goin on and the triad whacked him......Little did he know was that Frankie was watched like a hawk 24/7 by Salvatore's orders......And they suspeced the Liberty Triads......But the chink took a plane ticket to Las Venturaz.....And he's been hiding out in the 4 Dragons Casino.......Coincidence? MM: I guess not.. Vincenzo: And you're helping them? MM: I guess so. The manager walks in Manager: WHAT THE HELL IS GOIN ON HERE? MM: Calm down Loopis, we're in the middle of a conversation. Manager: Well you can finish it in the back of a patrol car because i'm callin the f*ckin cops on your- Before he gets a chance to finish MM pulls out his other silenced deagle and shoots him right in the face Vincenzo sees his other gun, and dives out of his chair Vincent takes 4 shots at MM and misses all of them MM takes his pistols and shoots a bullet out of each gun into Vincent's stomach Vincent screems in agony, alerting the two thugs in the loft Vincent holds his bloody wound MM grabs a towel off the shelf and throw is to Vincent MM: get up. Vincent just lyes there MM grabs Vincent and places him back onto his chair MM: Now lets finish this conversation like gentlemen, and quit bein such a pussy....I barely shot you. The two thugs come in and see MM Thug 1: Holy sh*t Vincenzo: HILL HIM!!! The two thugs lift up their cannons and rapidly begin to fire bullets at MM.....Once again not one bullet touched him After the thugs have emptied their clips they notice Mm has not been hit once Thug 2: You've got to be kidding me... MM pulls out his deagles and blows them to the floor MM puts the guns back in their holsters and sits back down MM: Now where were we? Vincenzo: Look if you're gonna kill me.....you better do it now, because i swear to f*cking god, if i ever see you again im GONNA f*ckIN KILL YOU!!!! MM: (smirks) I'd love to see you try....Do you know anything about "divine intervension"? Vincenzo: What the f*ck is that? MM: You'd have to watch Pulp Fiction to fully understand it....But to make it plain, simple, and kindergarden.....It's the ability to not die.......Are you a Christian Vincent? Vincenzo: I'm Roman Catholic. MM: Sucks to be you........but you see Vince, I was born a very special boy.....I was born with a tatoo on my back Vince........The holy cross.........I'm a messanger, i was sent here to do the deeds people aren't doing....I'm serving and protecting. Vincenzo: If that's so....then why'd you kill Loopis? MM: He rapped and strangle a 6 year old girl at Mount Chillard Vincent: (Laughs) sh*t. MM: But you Vincent......I wasn't sent to kill you.......You're not worth anymore bullets........But i can promise you this, that within the next year you will be brought down in a hale of bullets from someone you f*cked over, and it will be your responcibility to accept that. Vincenzo: f*ck you.. MM: Sorry, but I've got a date tonight. Vincenzo: Look, man what do you want from me? MM: Nothing.....My business is finished here... MM begins to walk out the door MM: Oh, and Vincent? Vincent looks at MM MM: Keep your friends close.....And give Salvatore my regards. MM exits the office and walks through the kitchen and runs into the employee MM: Hey bub? Employee: What the hell went on in there? MM: Take the rest of the day off. MM walks out the door laughing and steps into the cab Luigi: What the hell went on in there? MM: Customer got the wrong order. Luigi: Oh....Where to now? MM: The car wash in Los Santos. TO BE CONTINUED plz comment my story's and i will finish part IV thanx Edited June 4, 2006 by GTA3Freak-2001 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindancer Posted May 30, 2006 Share Posted May 30, 2006 Have added part 2 to your first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jigsaws puppet Posted May 30, 2006 Author Share Posted May 30, 2006 wow, thanx.....i guess it kind of killz 2 birds with one stone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FelipeVinhao Posted June 3, 2006 Share Posted June 3, 2006 (edited) This is gold. Nice story! Btw, this beginning is marvelous: Woozie: So what do you say Ran? Can we cut a deal? Ran: (grunts) Woozie: Marvelous, absoloutly brilliant. ***** Edit ***** Btw2, can we know why CJ is dead? Edited June 3, 2006 by FelipeVinhao Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jigsaws puppet Posted June 4, 2006 Author Share Posted June 4, 2006 yeah, that will be explained in another story....but 2 worn u, someone locked my Vendetta part III, so i may have to quit on this but dont worry, there will be plenty more gta story's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTA3Freak-2001 Posted June 4, 2006 Share Posted June 4, 2006 yeah, that will be explained in another story....but 2 worn u, someone locked my Vendetta part III, so i may have to quit on this but dont worry, there will be plenty more gta story's As I said in the other topic your story wasn't blocked it was binned because we want you to post all of your stories in the one topic so I've added the 3rd Part to the first post here. When you complete Part IV just post it in this topic as a new post so people can read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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