How Sweet turned sour

[cherry_lowlow333]

This is my FIRST fanfiction that is based on the events after San Andreas.

Hope you like it!

 

HOW SWEET TURNED SOUR

 

Act I: Chapter One 9:30 a.m, Los Santos, 1995

 

"Hello? Cousin? Its Salvatore here and I'm just calling in from Las Venturas."

 

"Sal? Hey how are you?"

 

"I'm fine thanks, Fabrizio how would you like to kill off the Grove Street gangstas?"

 

"But.. Salvatore wouldn't you want Joey or yourself to do it? I mean.. its the Grove Street OGs after all..."

 

"Look Fabrizio, I don't have time to waste okay? Theres three Columbian Cartels waiting in Shoreside Vale that I have to kill."

 

"Okay, okay Salvatore I'll do it."

 

Fabrizio hangs up and tells three of his Leone mobsters to follow him into his white Patriot. They get in and Fabrizio turns on the radio. He drives down the steep road from the countryside hills of Los Santos and into the bustling city.

 

A crazy taxi smashes into the side of the patriot and quickly steers off. The mobsters try to retaliate and drive-by the taxi but it is already gone. Fabrizio yawns and makes his way into Idlewood, Ballas' hood.

 

He approaches four Ballas standing in a group outside the local Fully Stacked Pizza place and asks for directions to Grove Street.

 

"Hey buddy, would you know where this place, uhh, Grove Street is?"

 

"S*** n***a this fool's lookin' for trouble y'all," a Balla says.

 

"Hey look I don't have time for this you know," replies Fabrizio.

 

"Aiight n***a I take you on, one on one" the Balla folds his arms and all the Ballas in the group stare at Fabrizio.

 

Fabrizio shoots the gangsta with his 9mm and drives off at a 90km/h speed.

 

"Damn boss, you didn't need to do that you know" a mobster says.

 

 

Meanwhile, inside Sweet's house, Sweet is making hot love to his partner, Rachel. They finish what they started and Sweet gets out of bed. He brushes his teeth and walks into the kitchen to make himself some breakfast. Suddenly, he sees a white car pull up outside his house with Leone mobsters coming out.

 

In another house, CJ runs out the door loaded with a AK-47 and shoots the men. Sweet runs outside as well and surprisingly, OG Loc does the same too in a nearby house. The gangstas know wat is happening and fire thier weapons.

Sweet, still dressed in his pajamas, runs back to his backyard to grab his 9mm.

 

He comes back but the mobsters have already killed CJ, some Grove Street OGs and OG Loc is sprawled on the ground with a Tec-9 in his hand. Sweet falls to the ground on his knees and hangs his head in shame. The white Patriot has amzingly killed all of the remaining Grove Streeters and also speeded off to the local Pay'n' Spray.

 

"What have I done?" Sweet shouts and starts crying.

 

"I failed my brother who rescued the Grove Street Families and saved my life.."

 

Rachel runs out and finds Sweet crying on his knees and tries to comfort him.

 

"Rachel, baby, I'll be right back tonight, I need to take my revenge."

 

Sweet opens up CJ's garage and finds a modified black Huntly and cherry-red lowrider. He picks the SUV and finds a note in the driver's seat.

 

"Sweet, If you're going to exact revenge, please take my regards and use this car"

 

He lifts up the car seat and finds the car keys there. Sweet gets in and finds an array of weapons in the back seat. Desert Eagles, grenades, shotguns, SMGs.. you name it. He turns on the radio and tunes it to Radio Los Santos which has the song- Deep Cover by Dr. Dre ft. Snoop Dogg playing on it.

 

He backs out of the garage and Rachel runs up to the car.

 

"At least tell me where you're going, Sweet"

 

"I'm goin' to Las Venturas to find Fabrizio Leone."

Edited June 16, 2006 by cherry_lowlow333

[cherry_lowlow333]

Chapter II: 11:00 a.m San Fierro

 

Sweet is determined to kill Fabrizio Leone, the man who had destroyed his family and killed his brother whom he had treasured all his life. He is still travelling in his black Huntly and opens up a tin box. Sweet grabs a lighter and lights his weed.

 

Sweet stops at a traffic light in Angel Pine. He reloads his SMG and takes a smoke out of his joint. A police car drives by and Sweet puts out the light. The police get out of their vehicle and question Sweet.

 

"So isn't this Sweet Johnson of Grove Street?" the officer appears to be holding a nightstick and a silenced 9mm.

 

"Hell naw, boy you ain't never seen me. I'm Steve Harrison from Rodeo, a uhh businessman."

 

"Don't f*ck around with me Sweet, I know who you are."

 

"Son, who are you to tell me what to do, huh?"

 

"Sweet, this is Ryder's brother, Ray, now get out of the car!"

 

Ray opens the door and grabs sweet by the collar. He slams him down on the dusty ground and punches him. Sweet kicks him and raises his SMG. Ryder's brother raises his hands but roundhouse kicks Sweet down to the ground, yet again.

 

The SMG is knocked to the ground beside Sweet. Ray stomps his foot on his back and gives Sweet a message he won't forget.

 

"You Sweet, are about to die very slowly and painfully in three days. I will allow you to run but you won't be able to hide you stupid motherf**ker."

 

Ray gets back in his car and drives off. Sweet gets back on his feet and gets back in the car.

 

Sweet keeps on driving and soon reaches Doherty. he parks the vehicle in a garage at an abandoned gas station and walks in the door.

 

Cesar Vialpando and Kendl Johnson are working on Cesar's lowrider. Sweet runs in through the door and yells out Kendl's name.

 

"KENDL!!"

 

"Oh my gosh Sweet, what are you doing here?"

 

"S**t Kendl, I don't know how to break this to you but... CJ's dead."

 

"Yo esse, Sweet is this true man?"

 

"I'm damn straight sure... and I couldn't even save him"

 

"Was everyone else okay?"

 

Sweet shakes his head.

 

"Sweet, please be careful if you're going to take revenge, I don't wan to see another sibling dead okay?"

 

"Aiight, then I see you later"

 

"Yo Sweet, bring that car in I'll fix it up man"

 

Cesar drives the lowrider out first then Sweet hauls in the SUV.

 

"Damn man, this ride got smashed pretty bad.. here take my lowrider, eh carrone?"

 

Sweet gets in the Savanna and starts it up.

 

"Hey yo esse, we still on good terms right?"

 

"Yeah Cesar, of course just as long as you don't hurt Kendl okay?"

 

"You got my word, brother"

 

Sweet drives off and heads into the street. He stops just outside the Martial Arts Dojo and five Rifa gangstas approach the car.

 

"Yo he's that punk that killed Mike and T-Bone right? Man you're dead."

 

"What the f*ck is this? I ain't got time for this s**t no more!"

 

He opens up the door and fires his SMG.

 

"DIE YOU PIECES OF S**T! DIE!"

 

A couple more Rifa run up to him and suddenly it seems he is fighing a one man war. The clip runs out and Sweet grabs the AK47. Soon enough, three ambulances arrive along with two police cars.

 

"Man i gotta get out of here..."

 

Sweet enters his vehicle and speeds off.

 

"I hope this s**t ends soon..."

 

 

The Strip, Las Venturas 12:30 p.m

 

"Hey boss, I hope you really killed him coz' Salvatore is really going to kill ya if you don't!" a mobster asks Fabrizio.

 

"Don't you remember what i did after that?"

 

"What did you do?"

 

"I TOOK A F*CKING PICTURE OF THE GUY DEAD OKAY NO-BRAIN?"

 

"Okay boss, just asking..."

 

Fabrizio opens up the door to Salvatore's office. Salvatore is sitting in his chair talking to a white, skinny man.

 

"So you see Toni, I hope you could come with me to... Hey Cousin! How you doing huh? Long time no see!"

 

"Too long Sal, too long"

 

"Fabrizio, meet one of my new partners, Toni Cipriani"

 

"Nice to meet you Toni"

 

"Good afternoon, Mr. Leone"

 

"Toni, here was a young man I met in Shoreside just a few hours ago working in a restaurant in St. Marks with his mother. I needed somewhere to hide from the cops and he gladly offered. I asked him to join me with the respected Leone family and he positively answered with polite manners. Its good to see that in a young boy."

 

"How old are you son?"

 

"I'm 20, thanks Mr. Leone."

 

"So back to business, umm so have you killed them all yet?"

 

"Its done Salvatore, and I've even got proof."

 

Salavtore looks out a window and sees sirens glowing red and blue and hears the sounds of a police car.

 

"FABRIZIOOO! WHAT DID YOU DO?"

 

"i DON'T KNOW COUSIN, I SWEAR!"

 

"You set me up, you bastard! I'm gonna tear your f*cking heart out..."

 

Several bullets cascade along the window and narrowly miss Salvatore and Toni. Salvatore draws a Colt .357 out of his jacket and shoots at Fabrizio. Fabrizio brandishes a machete and slashes at Sal. He manages to break the glass of the window. Toni, confused runs out of the room and steals a hitman's Uzi. He kills all the mobsters and jumps back into the room.

 

"DO IT NOW SON!" Salvatore yells, currently trying to push off Fabrizio's machete with his meat cleaver. Toni unleases a fistful of bullets at Fab and Sal ducks for cover. Fabrizio is dead and a SWAT Team come in through the window loaded with SMGs.

 

Toni kills them all with incredible aiming skill as Salvatore crouches and ducks out of the room. More SWAT units are in the hall way but Salatore kills them all with a stolen M4. He looks behind him but Toni isn't there. He runs out of the casino and suddenly, it explodes. Salvatore jumps and shratnel explode into his leg.

 

It's a searing pain but Sal doesn't care and hijacks a nearby coupe.

His mobile rings and he picks it up.

 

"Hello, Mr. Leone, are you there?"

"What am I f**king dumb, kid I'm right here!"

"Sal, I need to hang low for a bit okay? The cops are on my ass and I need to get to somewhere safe."

"Sure kid i'll see ya round."

"Okay Mr. Leone"

"Just one more question though,"

"What is it boss?"

"Did you plant that bomb?"

"Yes I did"

"It takes a genius to do it in fifteen seconds"

 

Toni laughs and hangs up.

[GtaGangsta]

FOOOL HOW COULD YOU KILL CJ NO COOKIES FOR YOU

[cherry_lowlow333]

umm thanks, keep the caps lock off noob

[Viva Gta San Andreas.]

Don't call him a noob. It doesn't make you any better by saying that.

 

 

 

Nice story. I got a bit bored though, but that's me.

[cherry_lowlow333]

Thanks, new chapter comin' up soon.

[Sixdust]

Your tags arent closed, if you dont know how to, go back to your previous posts, and press the button that says close all tags, that should take care of all that.

[cherry_lowlow333]

What do you mean by tags? Please reply but here goes the next chapter.

 

 

 

Chapter III: 2:45 p.m, Las Venturas

 

Sweet is driving down the highway and into Tierro Robada. Several times he has seen a men wandering down the road. Sweet shakes his head and thinks he is hallucinating.

 

Nearby, a man dressed in homeless people clothes opens up a cell phone.

 

"Boss, he's heading down Highway 69, I'll meet you at the fourth intersection."

 

Sweet stops at a red light and reaches out to get his SPAS-12 shotgun. He grabs it, just in case anything like the Ray incident. Sweet feels hungry and grabs a packet of chips to snack on.

 

Just as he opens it up, another hobo walks past his car. Without warning, the hobo lifts out a 9mm pistol from his torn jacket and fires. Inside the chip packet is a knife. Sweet immediately grabs the weapon and launches it straight at the man. People run out of cars and start screaming.

 

Sweet picks up the 9mm and reads the side of the barrel.

 

'Zaibatsu & Leone Facilities and Co. '

 

Inside the jacket is a business card. Sweet picks up the card and reads it.

 

'ZMTF- Zaibatsu Medical and Testing Facilities'

 

There was a phone number on the card but the knife seemed to have cut most of it.

 

"Oh s**t, this is a guy from the Leones!" Sweet looks around him and sees a sniper on the top of a nearby building. He ducks behind a tree and hears three loud shots.

 

He looks around, slowly figures emerge and his vision becomes blurred. There isn't any pain but he feels like he needs a long nap. Quietly, He falls down on the hot sand leaving him drowsy and weak. Two familiar faces appear, CJ and Brian. They extend their hands toward him in a kind way as to help him up but Sweet cannot move his arms. Their faces slowly depart....

 

 

Suddenly, he wakes up. He is lying in a hospital bed and has a tight chest pain.

 

"Oww damn that hurts."

 

A nurse comes in with Rachel, Sweet's girlfriend and the nurse gives him his medicine.

 

"Sweet, you're awake! Its been two months baby, you were in a coma."

 

Sweet swallows the pills and the nurse walks out. Rachel explains that an assasin was hired to kill him and bring the body back to the Leones. Rachel says that she was there when it happened and managed to kill the guy.

 

Sweet smiles to himself. "Its a good thing you know how to work a Mac."

 

They hug and Rachel tells Sweet that she'll be back tommorow. She also tells him that three presents are hiding under his bed.

 

She walks out and Sweet puts his hands behind his head. He relaxes, takes his time to rest and thinks about the future.

 

 

 

Sorry, its a short chapter but the next is gonna be good. I guarantee that.

[cherry_lowlow333]

Chapter IV: 4:20, Las Venturas Hospital

 

Sweet wakes up. His head hurts as if he had drank two six packs at once. He remembers Rachel leaving the room and falling asleep soon after. He glances over at the clock. The digital device reads a illuminted 4:20.

 

Suddenly, Sweet hears a big bang and several screams. There are another couple of metal clangs and Sweet jumps out of the bed. He remembers that Rachel had left some presents underneath the bed.

 

He quickly glances down and sees three items. The first is a packet of six grenades. There is a note attached to it.

 

'Sweet, its Carl, i'm not dead and I knew you would come to Las Venturas. Meet me in the Four Dragons Casino. I'll be waiting there at 4:30.'

 

The next package was what looked like a M4. Sweet ripped open the paper concealing it and loaded it. Sweet looked behind him and saw a man in a black suit with neat, thin yellow stripes coming down from the side. He was holding a machete, the blade thin and deadly-looking.

 

Sweet grabs him by the waist and hurls him down. It was a good thing that he had been working out in the Ganton Gym with Carl over the past couple of years. Sweet wrestles with him and grabs the 9mm out of the man's pocket.

 

Sweet draws it, cocks it and tells the man who sent him.

 

"Who hired you? Was it that Zaibatsu? What do they want with me?"

 

The man in the suit drops the machete and runs. Sweet follows him and shoots him in the back. The hitman falls on the ground and Sweet grabs hold of his machete.

 

"Are you going to tell me? What is Zaibatsu?"

 

Sweet slowly slides the machete across the mans neck. A trickle of blood flows down the hitman's neck.

 

"Its.. its the Leone mafia, they, they wanted to..."

 

The Zaibatsu man passes away.

 

Sweet runs out of the hospital and into a nearby Infernus. He grabs the passenger out of the seat and quickly glances at his watch.

 

The passenger flees and Sweet jumps in the supercar. He checks his watch again and turns the key in the ignition.

 

 

On a nearby rooftop, a Zaibatsu hitman reloads his sniper and fires. It has automatic firing and an extra long sniper scope.

 

The hitman shoots and narrowly misses a black man with a fresh cut Cesar wearing a white t-shirt with tattered jeans.

 

Sweet drives off in the car and hears a soft thud hit the roof. Sweet grabs his M4 and shoots out of the window and sprays a shower of bullets at the sniper.

 

The hitman is hit straight on the face and falls down on the ground. Sweet spots another on the other side of the road and unleashes his weapon upon his enemy.

 

The Infernus crashes into a traffic light and swerves around the corner. Sweet is a gangsta but he was also a hitman at one point in time. He expertly glides through the city whilst aiming at enemies and finally stops at the Four Dragons.

 

Sweet gets out, caps a few more hitmen and finally opens the door into the casino.

Edited June 12, 2006 by cherry_lowlow333

[Nate Baker1]

What he means by caps is when you just insert a it wont do anything

 

At the end you need to insert an / before the i in the parenthesis. So like if you wanted to bold and you already did te first tag at the start, you insert a [/b] at the end.

[Lochie_old]

Or you can press "Close all Tags" It's really your choice.

[cherry_lowlow333]

Chapter V: 4:32, Four Dragons Casino

 

Carl, Cesar and Woozie are all standing in the office of the Four Dragons. Woozie asks Carl what time he wrote down on the note.

 

"You should've given him some more time, it is the Zaibatsu of course."

 

"Yea I know, but Sweet is strong he can take care of himself."

 

Sweet bursts into the room and hugs Carl. Cesar sighs with relief and sits down on a comfy leather chair.

 

"Carl! I thought you were dead! What happened back there?"

 

CJ tells Sweet the whole story. He says that he managed to run away and hide in the garage, leaving him a note and heavy artillery in the back of the black Huntley.

 

Sweet got into that car but CJ was hiding in the lowrider's boot. CJ thought that Sweet would take the lowrider but he didn't.

 

So after Sweet had left, CJ ran after Sweet but he was already too far away. Rachel saw him and he explained it to her. Carl immediately took the lowrider and drove up all the way to the Four Dragons and phoned Cesar about it after Sweet had visited him.

 

Sweet looks at Carl. He feels angry but at the same time happy that he is with his brother. Woozie steps into the conversation and explains the current situation.

 

"Okay so we're all glad that Sweet has found his way back but now... the current situation. The Leones have made a deal with the company Zaibatsu, which specialises in pharmaceutical medicines. They are now currently processing a new form of drug that will kill and stun the enemy ten minutes before death. They are planning to use the formula in bullets, calling them 'Z10L' bullets.

 

"They have also made a deal with the Coloumbian Cartel, and the Leones do not have any idea of this. My informant has also said that the Colombians' deal was that the Zaibatsu had to create a new addictive drug that they could use to make a lot of money or else they would tell the Leones that the Zaibatsu were planning escape to Vice City and ditch the b*tches. Lets just say that the Zaibatsu are in deep trouble. Oh, and this is old news, probably when Fabrizio attacked you."

 

"So... why do the Zaibatsu want Sweet then?" asks Cesar.

 

"Because the Leones want him. To be the first test subject of the..."

 

"WHAT?"

 

"... Z10L bullets. I'm sorry Sweet but... they have already treated you with it while you were in the hospital."

 

Carl interupts and says

 

"Sweet, right now you have 56 seconds to live. I want you to quickly inject this formula into your skin."

 

Cesar hands him a syringe with a light blue liquid in it.

 

Sweet grabs it and injects it into his skin.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Salvatore is speeding down the Mulholland intersection and into East Los Santos- the Ballas' hood. He is furious that Fabrizio has betrayed him and now he needs to finish off the GSF once and for all. He loads a Chrome Shotgun and steps out of the Leone Sentinel.

 

He hasn't forgotten the Caligula's incident when Carl had betrayed him...

 

BAM!! reload. Two GSF OGs down.

 

BAM!! BAM!! reload, reload. Five GSF OGs down.

 

"DIE YOU FAT C**KSUCKERS!"

 

Usually Salvatore was quite calm and peaceful but since Carl had robbed his casino, he felt life itself had betrayed him and the whole world was against him. Leone veterans would comment on how calm he was in tight situations and never swore but since 1992...

 

BAM!! reload. Twenty two GSF gangstas down in total.

 

Salvatore sensed a quietness in the neighbourhood and he sat down. He took a handkerchief out of his pocket and wiped off all the sweat off his forehead. Then he dialed a number and told his fellow Leones to jump out of the car.

 

Grove Street is finally history.

Edited June 14, 2006 by cherry_lowlow333

[cherry_lowlow333]

Positive/Negative feedback would be good.

[cherry_lowlow333]

Thats it, no more chapters until someone gives me a comment.

[cherry_lowlow333]

Okay then, on with the story, hopefully someone will reply then.

 

Chapter VI: 3:32, Four Dragons Casino

 

Sweet wakes up sprawled over the red asian carpet of the Four Dragons and notices bloodstains on his shirt. His vision is blurry and he can't seem to concentrate on one object.

 

Woozie, Carl and Cesar walk over to him and help him up.

 

"Sweet, are you okay man?"

 

"Yeah, CJ, I'm fine.."

 

"Sweet! We have to explain to you that... Grove Street has been taken over."

 

"WHAT??!!"

 

"Calm down esse, just be happy that you're still alive okay?"

 

"How, how... when did this happen?"

 

"You were asleep for about 22 hours. The Zaibatsu attcked while the Leones took over your territory in Los Santos. I had to sacrifice some of men and more importantly, my customers but I did manage to save the casino's riches gained over the past cuople of years."

 

"WHAT?? YOU ONLY CARED ABOUT THE MONEY, NOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN TO GROVE?"

 

"Sweet, bro we goin' to go back, don't worry. And if we don't get back the Grove then at least we got some mo' cash to fight back."

 

CJ hands Sweet a package.

 

"Here, you forgot to take this from underneath the hospital bed."

 

Sweet unwraps it and loads the weapon. Its an army-issued Mini-Gun with about 2000 rounds.

 

Cesar interupts and says

 

"Eh, sorry holmes but I gotta go take care of Kendl, see if shes aiight."

 

"Okay then, I need to stay here and take care of the Casino, good luck boys."

 

 

 

 

Salvatore reloads his shotgun again, after capping Purple Devil, one of the Ballas' head leaders.

 

He orders some Zaibatsu hitmen with him and busts down the Johnsons House's door. They storm the building and start breaking down all the doors. A Zaibatsu hired killer (more so of a soldier) runs up to Sallvatore.

 

"Sir, we have secured the building, its ready for you to demolish..."

 

Salvatore nods and calls the demolition team outside.

 

"Boys, its already to go."

 

The Zaibatsu team run out of the building and throw a couple of molotovs. The house is strong and isn't burning down to the ground yet. One of the demolishers starts planting a C4 on one side of the garage and yells

 

"FIRE IN THE HALL!!!"

 

The Johnson House explodes and rubble surrounds the area.

[cherry_lowlow333]

WARNING: The end is not for those who are light-stomached and weak-hearted.

Or in other words, this chapter is f*cking gruesome.

 

 

 

 

Chapter VII: 6:00, Grove Street, Los Santos

 

Sweet gripped the handle of his Minigun and sprinted towards CJ, crouched behind some bushes. CJ was holding a walkie-talkie and was ready to receive a transmission from another Grove Street OG on top of the bridge above.

 

“Aiight CJ, I got my 45 and my sniper so whatchu want me to do?”

 

“I want y’all to take out all them Zaibatsu muhf*ckas and me and Sweet’ll handle the rest.”

 

“What?! But theres goddamn millions of them!!”

 

“Okay easy, then just kill as many as you can.”

 

“Aiight.”

 

Sweet and CJ waited for a couple of seconds before they heard three silent snipes. They had supplied the GSF with a PSG-1 with a laser scope, stand and one hell of a silencer.

 

“Okay then lets go.”

 

Sweet once again, tightly gripped his auto-firing weapon and sprinted up towards Ryder’s house, waited for a few more snipes and then fired.

 

 

 

Salvatore called two of his Leones over to run over to the Los Santos Police Department and give Officer Ray ‘Lil Ryder’ Wilson a note and a special package. They quickly ran over to a nearby Greenwood and jammed on the gas all the way to Commerce.

 

Salvatore walked over to his Zaibatsu counterpart. They decided to try and take over most of the East Los Santos and Ganton area, most controlled by gangstas, over the next couple of days.

 

 

The Zaibatsu man – Mr. James Shibuki, had other motives… different to those of Salvatore’s. A creepy smile came over his face as he slowly walked into a Black Huntly with fresh yellow stripes. The driver, adjusted his rear view mirror, smiled to Mr. Shibuki and his bodyguards.

 

They did a U-Turn and soon they were heading out of Grove Street. Salvatore stroked his moustache and told his men to fire. They fired with Heckler & Koch MP5’s straight at the Zaibatsu’s car. Simultaneously, two black men with green bandanas, white tees and green pants. He instantly recognizes the two figures. It was CJ and his brother, whom his name he had forgotten.

 

Sal told one of his capos to gather some more men to focus on the two GSFs.

 

“Fabrizio!!!!” thought Salvatore

 

“I thought you killed them all!!!???”

 

Salvatore furiously grabbed an M60 off from the back of a military vehicle one of his men had stolen. He aimed at all the Zaibatsu men and killed them. He heard a sharp bang in the near distance and realised it was the Huntly exploding. He threw the M60 away and reached into his grey suit for a 9mm.

 

He followed a few of his capos and ran over to the vehicle on fire. There was CJ and his brother to kill but now he had to take care of the Zaibatsu.

 

“You there, stay here with you men and kill those son of a b*tch, Grove Streeters!!”

 

He sprinted towards the vehicle, his light-blue tie caught in the breeze of the Los Santos wind. He cocked the hammer of his 9mm and clasped it with two hands. James, trapped in the car on his side, desperately tried to escape.

 

Salvatore grabbed him by his hair, full of soot and black rubble and pushed his gun to the man’s temple.

 

“You bastard, I’m gonna enjoy this!”

 

“No please Mr. Leone, I can explain SPANK, I can explain the drugs, I can do anything for you…”

 

“Anything? Okay first thing, explain to me why you double crossed me with those f*cking Colombians!!??”

 

“I, I… I just…”

 

“Just, just f*cking shutup then!!”

 

He slammed Mr. Shibuki’s head on the ground and fired his 9mm through the back of his head. Brains and grey matter were strewn across the sidewalk and pavement.

Salvatore heard two ambulance sirens and three more cars coming.

 

“Salvatore! Duck!”

 

Sal clasped his hands over his head and rolled away. Overhead he saw a sniper pointing straight at him. He took out a .45 and duel-wielded the two different handguns. The 9mm felt lighter but the .45 was definitely stronger. The sniper was actually an expert and took out his nearby capo.

 

Salvatore took cover from the burning vehicle and crouched down. He felt a quick bullet narrowly whip his hair. Salvatore took his chances and ran. He leapt up with two handguns in his hands and fired whilst sprinting.

 

 

 

Overhead, the GSF hitman reloaded the PSG-1’s clip and felt a sting in his arm.

Damn! A bullet had just ripped the tip of his shoulder but didn’t enter his flesh.

Then he also felt another sharp tingling feeling, one that was slowly sliding across his throat.

 

The man fell and dropped the PSG-1. A Leone mobster had come up from behind and slit his throat with a knife. The mobster grabbed his Colt .45 and jumped down onto Grove Street.

 

 

A police sedan, a blue Greenwood and two ambulances pull up outside the demolished Johnson house. Officer Ray Wilson and Officer Charles Pendlebury, both members of C.R.A.S.H, get out of the car and head over to CJ and Sweet.

 

“Man that’s Ray! He’s Ryder’s bro!” says Sweet.

 

“Aww sh*t man we in trouble…”

 

Sweet throws a Molotov cocktail and backs away. Most of the Leones are dead now, the majority of them on fire. Sweet attemps to throw his Mini Gun at the two officers but fails poorly.

“Man, Sweet you’re so gonna pay right now.”

 

Lil’ Ryder dodges the Minigun and brandishes a crowbar. Pendlebury, grabs a katana and they start fighting. CJ, runs and grabs a shovel from Ryder’s backyard and swings it at Lil’ Ryder.

 

Sweet, grabs a katana from the ruins of the Johnson House. He lunges at the officer and they engage in an all-out samurai battle. Pendlebury pushes Sweet into a large crater, obviously where the C4 was planted. He trips and falls face-first into the large hole. The officer takes advantage of this and slashes Sweet’s back.

 

Lil’ Ryder grabs CJ by the arms and slams him down. He brings down the crowbar on CJ and keeps hitting him.

 

“YOU MOFO! YOU KILLED MY BRO AND NOW I’M GONNA KILL YOU.”

 

CJ is bleeding from his nose and blood is coming down from chest, arms and shoulders. Lil‘ Ryder stops for a minute and wipes his sweaty brow. CJ grabs the shovel and hits him from the side of head. He runs clear of him for a few feet and grabs the Minigun.

 

“ARGHH!!”

 

Sweet feels like a tiger has scratches his back as hard as it could. He regains control and grabs his green-hilted samurai sword. He swings down and slashes Pendlebury’s arm. The limb drops off and blood splashes out like a sprinkler being turned on at full blast. Pendlebury falls down, holding his stump where his limb was connected before.

 

Lil’ Ryder looks over his shoulder and sees Pendlebury. He yells angrily, mostly out of hate and maniacally at CJ with his crowbar.

 

“I’M GONNA KILL YOU!!!”

 

CJ turns the Minigun on full blast and fires the remaining rounds straight into Ray’s torso. Ray’s stomach now literally, has a hole right through it. His brain however, doesn’t get the signals his nerves are telling him and continues running for about five seconds. CJ stabs the Minigun through the Ray’s hole and runs. Sweet follows CJ and dodges some bullets fired by Salvatore.

 

[cherry_lowlow333]

I need some replies, people.

[dre1218us]

That chapter was exceptionally gruesome, lol. But I like the way it's going. Maybe if you somehow made the action more clear to the reader, it could get better. I mean, I like it, but I found myself a bit confused.

 

But good job, keep it going. Don't worry about doing it for us, do it cause it's what you want to do.

[BlOoDStReAm101]

 

That chapter was exceptionally gruesome, lol. But I like the way it's going. Maybe if you somehow made the action more clear to the reader, it could get better. I mean, I like it, but I found myself a bit confused.

 

 

Yeah it was kind of confusing...And yes...it was gruesome! Write more please.

[cherry_lowlow333]

More comin' next week. School just keeps on butting in.

 

Thanks for the replies anyway, its good to know that people enjoy my work.

[cherry_lowlow333]

Chapter IX: 6:50, Ganton - Marina

 

Sweet and CJ keep running until they reach the end of Grove Street where CJ calls a acquintance on his cell phone.

 

"N***a get yo' whack ass down here quick, bitch!"

 

Salvatore and two Leones try and catch up to CJ and Sweet.

 

Soon, a black Voodoo parks along one of the intersecting roads and the Grove Street crew get in.

 

"F*ck, n***a we gotta go get Rachel man!"

 

"Aiight I got it"

 

The driver turns the car around and head straight down Grove Street.

 

"WHAT THE F*CK??!!"

 

Splat.

 

Two Leone mobsters splattered. Salvatore rolls out of the way and fires a few rounds.

 

"N***a watch the f*ckin' road!!"

 

The remains of Mr. Shibuki's car lies slanted on the road. CJ's Voodoo revvs up and they fly.

 

"OH SH*T!!"

 

They land safely on the court and quickly run to get Sweet's girlfriend. The driver, Pharoah, one of CJ's close friends, loads a 9mm and waits in front of the car.

 

Salvatore, now in a fury, runs with anger straight up to Pharoah. He begins to shoot wildly in all directions with his Colt. Pharoah is caught unaware and is shot at least a couple of times in the torso.

 

 

Sweet navigates through empty beer cans, ciggarette butts, junk, junk and more junk.

He punches a couple of drugged Leones and Zaibatsu men. Soon he and CJ reach the bedroom. Rachel is sleeping in the bed, safely and peacefully. Sweet lifts up the blanket and finds a stash of weapons and knives under one of the pillows.

 

Sweet smiles and slowly wakes up Rachel from her sleep.

[MidnightThief]

I like your fanfic a lot! next chapter please!

[cherry_lowlow333]

Thanks i'll keep writing more as soon as i can.

[cherry_lowlow333]

Here's another chap. comin' right up.

 

Chapter X: 7:00, Marina

 

Sweet grabs a stash of cash, guns, ammo and melee weapons and tells CJ to start up the engine of the car.

 

Rachel follows the two brothers and they get in the car.

 

"Sweet, I'm really glad that you made it through all this alive..."

 

"Its okay baby, we're safe here."

 

 

CJ looks into the rear-view mirror. He sees Sweet, one of his last brothers, hugging his girlfriend. He smiles to himself and is glad that he also has made throught it all.

 

He navigates his way through traffic, gangsters and the drug dealers of the hood and stops at a Burger Shot in Marina.

 

"Okay, Sweet and Rachel, y'all can stay here while I go in and get another homie, aiight?"

 

"Okay man just be careful"

 

 

CJ walks up to the counter of the store and asks if he can see Lil' HoundDawg aka Jordan Bryan.

 

HoundDawg greets CJ and they shake hands. CJ explains the situation. They tell the manager that HoundDawg's shift is over.

 

"Okay n*gga, my shift is up so can I go?"

 

"What do you mean your shift is up??!!! It's f*cking 7:00!! You know damn well that the shift ends at 8:30!!"

 

"N*gga I ain't gonna play around wit this sh*t..."

 

"What the hell are you talking about? Get back into the kitchen right now you asshole!"

 

"Hell naw, bitch I'm done wit dis sh*t!"

 

"Don't you f*cking leave me you motherf*cker!"

 

HoundDawg rips off his Burger Shot badge and hat.

 

"I MOTHERF*CKIN' QUIT, N*GGA!!"

 

HoundDawg proceeds to walk out of the room until...

 

WHACK !

 

The Manager hits Hound with a Fire Extinguisher.

 

CJ engages in a wrestling match with the boss and finally kills him with a fatal blow to the skull using the back of his Glock 9mm.

 

"Thanks, bruh I really need ta' thank ya fo' dat"

 

"Its okay man we need to get to the San Fierro garage right now..."

 

"Yeah okay so what we waitin' fo'?"