striker2511 Posted April 28, 2006 Share Posted April 28, 2006 hey all, this is my first forums story, please note, im not natively english! i got this idea from the games, counter strike, us navy seals and a covert ops book h and a very good pair of movies, the thin red line, and the hunt for eagle one, oh and air force one!) So without futher to do.. Covert MI: American HERO 1530 hours, deep in the the swamps of Northern Vietnam there is a terrorist jail. This jail is un-known to ALL but the COVERT MI squad of Amierica, or at least they thought... *crack* a twig snaps as three men walk clutching AK-47's they have camoflauge heavily placed, and Iranian flag patches on. <translated from Iranian> man 1: <koosa! keep to the left! no the left no the left yes your left.. oyy... okay, monsa, you got to get to the log, snipe the machine gun nest clear, or were finished.> Koosa: <you got it Jkarmia, we will soon get hiamriash Kptebar back!> BANG! the marshy swamps silence is shattered as Monsa, clears the MG nest. Jkarmia: <alrigh move in move in now now now!> The men storm silently into thjail and dive in through a sewer pipe. Jkarmia: <this way hiamriash is this way!! hurry there suspecting us!> Koosa: <right here this cell!> *smashes sewer screen open and shows flag to Hiamriash. Hiamriash: *grin, dives down into sewer* The men dash out of the sewer and the jail, after getting a couple hundred yards away, the sirens go off, and patrol jeeps, mounted iwth heavy machine guns begin to search the swamp. just as Koosa is getting into sniper position, BLAM!!! he gets lunged fowards as three jeeps come and surround the men.. Chapter two coming soon (im trying to kep chapters short) what do you think so far. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/243081-5-days-long-days-very-long-days/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
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