ROSA: Republic Vs Rebellion

[Lone_Soldier_D]

I hope for forgiveness. It was on the first ROSA topic, I was fighting with some dude ‘cuz he only said that my grammar where wrong and I misspelled to many times (I think it was 97 errors in that story), and with only the words of “I’m not your teacher” I got mad and started to argue and… oh… I‘m not gonna use the word “God“, what an idiot I was.

[gillies]

I have updated the roster to reflect the current situation by moving Eddie Sindacco from ROSA to The Separatists, however as this leaves The Separatists with 8 members and ROSA with only 5 expect some changes to happen when Bryce. or MI7 are next online.

 

I have removed Mike_Toreno from the roster as he has been banned, he will have to be executed sometime but I will leave this to Bryce. to arange.

 

Eddie Sindacco checked his story with me Snares, it appears to be building to something that will happen in a subsequent chapter, however I think you (Eddie) should hold off on any future chapters for now until the situation with the faction numbers has been resolved.

 

Lone_Soldier_D I suggest you take this up with Bryce. privately since he is the one that said you shouldn't post in here anymore.

[Lone_Soldier_D]

Tried some days ago, but he ignores me, but he can't do that in public.

 

[gta_player5]

Chapter 4:

 

"Oh sh*t, damnnit, hows Kippers' leg?" I ask Ottae

 

"Its not looking to good, its still bleeding like hell. Where are we right now, we need to get him to the hospital."

 

"We're coming into Los Santos right now, but then we have to get through traffic. sh*t, its rush hour!"

 

"Are you serious?!" exclaims Ottae "We have no time, he needs to get there now or he'll lose his leg!"

 

"Ahh..." yells Kippers. "Whats gonna happen? I don't wanna lose my leg."

 

"You're not going to lose your leg Kippers, we'll get you to the hospital." I say as I start to speed up. "Damn traffic"

 

"GTAP, Kippers' leg can't afford to be like this for much longer, how the hell are we going to get there in time, theres all this traffic."

 

"Don't worry we'll get there. What the hells all this traffic for? Is there an accident?"

 

For as far as the eye can see there are red brake lights on the road in front of us. Stop and go, bumper-to-bumper traffic.

 

"Ok, here next exit I see, I'll get off there and take the city streets. Sounds good, I think we'll get there faster."

 

We go for about 10 minutes until we get to the exit.

 

"sh*t, what the f*ck?! The exits blocked by LSPD, and theres LSPD choppers all over the place to."

 

"Think this could be 'cause of what you did back at that compound?" asks Ottae.

 

"Probably" I reply. "It looks like this is a police detour. I think they're going to search our car."

 

Kippers lets out a yell and the LSPD pull us over to the side and start to speak.

 

"This is an Arbusto ordered detour, there apparently was an attack on one of his buildings in Whetstone, and all of the cars that cross into Los Santos will be checked. Now please step out of the vehicle so we can search the vehicle."

 

"We can't" I say.

 

"Now why's that?"

 

"My friend here was shot in the leg and we're rushing him to the hospital."

 

"How'd he get shot?"

 

"We were hunting and the bullet ricocheted off of a rock and caught him in the thigh. Now please let us go so we can get him to the hospital."

 

"I'm sorry either way I can't let you do that. Now you're going to have to step out of the car, or I will have to arrest you for obstruction of justice. This was issued directly from Arbusto to all Los Santos Police Departments, that means its huge. Now step out or be placed in jail. You decide."

 

Before I speak to the officer I whisper something to Ottae. "Ok, now when I get out of the car you hop into the driver seat and go. Get in lcok the doors, shut the windows, and bolt to the hostpital."

 

Ottae nods, he knows Kippers' leg is in a bad way and realizes he needs medical treatment

 

"Ok officer, I'm stepping out of the car." I disarm myself very discretely. "I'm currently wielding no weapons."

 

I step out of the car and shut the door, the officer then says something.

 

"Your friends tell 'em to get..." Before he can finish his sentence Ottae is booking it down the highway to the hospital. "...What the f*ck?!"exclaims the officer. "We have a 10-107 code 3, suspect last seen speeding down the highway traveling Northbound. Suspect is thought to be carrying weapons. He is traveling in a blue 2 door."

 

The cop then cuffs me, put me in the back of the squad car and all of the other police cars speed off after Ottae. I then think to myself, damn how am I going to get out of this?

 

To be continued...

[Bryce.]

First off LSD, I did NOT ignore you.

 

Second, I am removing you from the ROSA roster until you can learn to do things properly. Don't come back until instructed to.

 

Anyway, my CDRW/DVD drive isnt' working so I have to get a new one this weekend. However I have final exams coming up so I probably won't be able to do anything until after the 22nd. I'm sorry, but I just don't have enough time. I can still write and all, but I can't make any vids.

 

LSD, I am warning you, if you come back and spam or so much as contest what I am doing, I will make sure you are banned from GTAF. I spoke to you via PM and you never wrote back. Do not post in the ROSA Topic again.

 

Great story Nick, can't wait for the next part. Points and roster soon to be updated.

[GOA Arbusto]

 

~From the desk of Arbusto~

 

From now on, until I speak to all three faction leaders, any person posting without PMing their story will recieve an automatic deduction of points. As well as any person that spams this topic will be reported, and banned permanently from the ROSA thread. Ignorance is not an excuse.

 

I've moved Eddie Sindacco back to the Republik and I have removed SatanOnFire for the time being off of the roster. He has not posted in almost two and a half months. I sent him a PM.

 

All these decisions are temporary until I speak to MI7, gillies, and Bryce. If you have any questions, PM MI7, Bryce., or gillies. Otherwise, please keep all administrative decisions or authoritative questions to yourself and out of the topic.

 

Rule revisions will be discussed this weekend.

 

Thank you.

Edited May 5, 2006 by GOA Arbusto

[Eddie Sindacco]

When will this be sorted? Cause i really wanna do ore stories.

[Brad]

I just want to know were Bryce. is. im waiting to post my story here!!!!

 

and here we go

 

 

In my position, I was about to be killed. But… If I could release all the nerve gas in the factory then everyone would be killed. Right? I went for my plan. I put my gas mask on and went out the into the corridor. I had to get this right. I killed anyone who got in my way, all were guards. I was lucky for the most part, then I got to the chemical making room. I shot all the generators. All 10 of them and then the gas was released. I could tell it was good since the gas stopped the guard from getting me. I exited through the ladder and then came out into the desert. I shut the hatch for the rebels to be trapped in misery in bio. I took a several thousand paces north until I got to the gates of area 69.

 

Guard: Second Lieutenant Brrad0

 

I went downstairs to GOA Arbusto’s office.

 

Brrad0: GOA Arbusto

Arbusto: Yes Brrad0…

Brrad0: I have information regarding rebel activities.

Arbusto: Yes?

Brrad0: I managed to close one of there nerve agent facilities. I think some gas was shipped out this morning.

*I hand him Viski’s document*

Brrad0: As you can see the plots are in the heart of San Fierro. I also believe that Mike Toreno is also behind this due to his inactivity to the ROSA.

Arbusto: Good work but you must the rest of the gas before they are deployed.

Brrad0: Yes sir, I’m doing what I can. I will also take care of Mike Toreno……

Hold on. Sir, I don’t think the Rebels will just be doing building….

Arbusto: What do you mean?

Brrad0: I mean that, there starting chemical warfare. There enough to take out the whole city! Many of our soldier will die including Field Marshal Bryce. What can we do?

Arbusto: Order an evacuation.

Brrad0: We can’t do that. Many citizens will get scared. In the meantime sir we can take all ROSA troops to San Fierro and begin searching checks.

Arbusto: Ok, dismissed I want this nerve agent found.

Brrad0: Yes sir.

 

I exited his office. Took a deep breathe and my mission was clear. Find that shipment!

Edited May 6, 2006 by brrad0

[Bryce.]

Eddie, you are back on the Rebels. It was a misscommunication with gillies and I. PM all of your stories to me from now on.

 

Braddo, I PM'd you. I've been at school all day.

 

I may have an idea for a vid, but I'm not sure yet. I will think about it.

[Brad]

Eddie, you are back on the Rebels. It was a misscommunication with gillies and I. PM all of your stories to me from now on.

 

Braddo, I PM'd you. I've been at school all day.

 

I may have an idea for a vid, but I'm not sure yet. I will think about it.

Hehe Bryce I am looking for a promotion soon, prehaps you could update my roster to I don't know.. Lieutenenat? I haven't got a promtion for 6 monthes!

[Bryce.]

You sure as hell won't get it when you as for one, but it promotions are being discussed among other things.

 

I will post something later tonight maybe.

 

250th post baby!!!

[Brad]

I wasn't really asking I looking and interested never asked for one. And i'm showing my history on ROSA

 

Plus you havent said hey good story brrado

 

 

 

[GOA Arbusto]

 

Promotions, Awards, and Rule Updates
New Rules, Ammendments
I.All approved videos are now worth three points each. Ottae's, and Alexrw's points have now been changed accordingly.   II.New ranking systems will be added to each faction, allowing more allowences of promotions and demotions. From now on promotions and demotions will take place on the 17th of each month.   III. Any contestions of the rules or the way situations are being handled are to be dealt with only via PM. Any infraction will result in sever consequences.   IV. ROSA now reserves the right to remove you from one faction and place you in another if;   Faction leaders see it fit Sides are over-populated Faction leaders not willing to put up with you   V. ROSA video archive will be added this weekend. Sorry for the wait.   VI. As well as the monthly rewards, there will also be awards every month in the follwing catagories:   Best Video Best Story Most Creative Story or Video Most active Most Improved
Awards
ROSA   Bradd0 has been awarded a star for his persistance and for his dedication to his country.     The Revolucion   Alexrw has been awarded two stars for his deciation to his legion and for his persuit of liberty. Stezza has been awarded one star for his dedication and for his superiority over in survival. Snares has been awarded a star for his addition of new strength and intelligence to the Separatists     The Separatists   gillies has been awarded a star for his excellence in battle and for his courage. gta_player5 has been awarded a star for his persistance and for his unwavering strength in battle.

Eddie Sindacco, please forgive me for allowing Bryce. to confuse you. You are, and have been, in ROSA, sorry for the trouble.

 

Braddo, you're stories are great, I really enjoy reading them, as does everyone else.

 

Also, the front pages are maxed out on images, so it will be a while until you see your stars next to your name. Sorry but I have alot of rearranging to do.

 

Another Update: Stars have now been replaced with •. Gillies came up with the idea and to be honest, it looks pretty damn good and it wastes less space. So hats of to gillies.

Thank you.

Edited May 6, 2006 by GOA Arbusto

[Bryce.]

Hey guys, please take the time to read the new ammendments on the first page as well as the post above this, gillies MI7 and I really worked hard on all the new stuff. Thank you.

 

I think I will have a vid by tomorrow or sunday, but no guarantees.

[gillies]

Nice work on all the updates Bryce., and the "badges" will definitely avoid that problem with the number of images in the posts.

 

I hope you do get a video together, I will be looking forward to seeing it.

[Lochie_old]

Wheres Mainland? I need him!

 

Anyway, grats to those with new, stylish badges!

[alexrw]

Yay! 2 Stars! Yay!

 

I may make a story by the end of the weekend. And could start making the plot for my next vid. I already know how to start it.

 

It all depends opn if sa:mp beta3 will be out this weekend and if my City of Villains character makes it to lvl20.

[baptiste]

CHAPTER 2: infiltrating diherty.

 

I was ready, I drove to my shack in the mountains to get all my equipment, I had to hurry, time was running out and the meeting was close. I got ready as fast as possible, black leather suit, heavy duty knife and colt. i was all ready. I took out the Hummer that Bryce hyad lended me and drove to san fierro near doherty. I hid the hummer under the freeway and decided to walk from there. After 20 minutes I reached Dohery. I checked my equipment and moved quickly in the shadows, the meetng was drawing near and I had to do fast, in a few minutes I was crouched on the Top of the garage. they were everywhere. Guards here and there and I could see a few snipers around, this was a dangerous mission just like I liked them. I saw a black limo pull up the garage, it was about 7:30 PM, the meeting started around 9. Along the hours more and more people entered he garage, this meeting must be heavy duty seeing more and more guards crawling around.

 

At 9, some light wet up in the building and someone started to speak, I could not hear anything so i tried getting a better position, I ended up behind the building where I could see and hear throught a small hole,^even though there were guards nearby this was probably the best oposition I could ever get, so i stayed in position. In the begginign nothing big happened, I supposed the fat man in the middle was Gillies himself, the others must be other Terrorist leaders.

 

They started rambling about theire territories and nothing that the embassy did not know. Then it got interesting, I took out a small piece of paper and sarted noting down everything I heard, new bombings, territory attacks and most inportantly, they were planning on killing Bryce. Thhe meeting ended and I recopied the paper I had and put one of the copies in my pocket and hid the other inside the wall somwhere they would never find it. I looked around and the next thing I saw was a baseball bat crashing into my face, I felt blood dripping down from my nose and then nothing.

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Good?

 

[Bryce.]

That's fine bap, good work. I will update points later on tonight.

 

My video should be done by tomorrow, as long as no unforseen mishaps come across my way.

 

Tom, well, I'm not sure when his will be ready. He's not on MSN now so I'm guessing he's gone for the day.

[MI7]

 

That's fine bap, good work. I will update points later on tonight.

 

My video should be done by tomorrow, as long as no unforseen mishaps come across my way.

 

Tom, well, I'm not sure when his will be ready. He's not on MSN now so I'm guessing he's gone for the day.

Hey! I need by beauty sleep .

 

All my super-secret work that's kept me busy for the last month will be revealed soon, so God willing I should finally get that video out .

 

By the way can I PLEASE remind people to OK their stories past me before posting? My PM Box has been bereft of stories yet more are posted every day...just a little reminder. I know the rule may seem pointless but trust me, it isn't. I'll let all those who haven't checked stories out off because enforcing the rule on those already posted would be dumb...but anyway, it's a rule you should follow. So please send your stories past me, Bryce or gilles! Thanks.

[alexrw]

Yeah, i know what you mean Tom...

 

It is my fault for this PM thing anyway (i think). I posted a story where i blew up big ear a while ago. I think Mxy was planning to do something there or whatever...

 

SA:MP is not out AND my CoV character is never going to make it to lvl20 so expect a vid from me soon. And maybe a story.

[baptiste]

Im glas I took interest in this again, so I got 3 stories atm right? Sounds good.

 

btw, whoever it was that crahed that bat into my face is really a f*cker.

[Brad]

Whoever deployed nerve gas in... OHHHH Spoiler alert my next story. I won't reveal. Expect it tommorow. People read this before reading part V.

 

Brrad0's Diary- Season 2

[Bryce.]

Well I probably won't be able to finish the whole movie this weekend so I cut the movie in half. Sorry, but next weekend I may be able to finish the second half.

 

I will post the video once it is done uploading. It's damn good file size.

 

Edit: Ok here it is.

 

Edited May 6, 2006 by Bryce.

[Brad]

Hey Bryce may I post my story now. I'm very excited to post it!

[Bryce.]

Bradd could you re-PM it please? Thanks.

 

I'm not sure about having part 2 for you guys next weekend, but maybe. I have alot of school work next week.

[Oddsock]

Hey, Bryce, you told me before you were OK with my not PMing you stories. Does this new law include me?

[Bryce.]

Hey, Bryce, you told me before you were OK with my not PMing you stories. Does this new law include me?

You're exempt sock. Just keep doing what you've been doing.

[Oddsock]

Hey, Bryce, you told me before you were OK with my not PMing you stories. Does this new law include me?

You're exempt sock. Just keep doing what you've been doing.

Yes! w00t!

 

Too many stories are confusing me. Can some people post tiny intros, like "where I left off" sorta things?

[Bryce.]

 

No.

 

 

I will do so from now on, but if you read enough, it's not that hard to keep up.