Snares Posted April 27, 2006 Share Posted April 27, 2006 That's really good alex, though the text is hard to read at times, but a really good effort. You deserve a point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 28, 2006 Share Posted April 28, 2006 (edited) It was a pretty good vid Alex, though the driving around got a bit tedious. But don't worry, almost all of my vids have suffered under too much driving. Nice work though, you've improved greatly since your first vid. Edit: Oh and I did a new ROSA avatar if anyone wants to use it. I will be making a few others shortly. http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/1715/animation27ay.gif Edited April 28, 2006 by Bryce. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brad Posted April 28, 2006 Share Posted April 28, 2006 made my way north from my Vortex I had parked. Walking for an hour and a half I came to a small town. It was deserted but it was near the big ear. It was in the centre of a canyon it was hard to describe. I remember once I was captured here and it was a sure suspicions feeling I had that the nerve gas WAS here. I scanned through and through until I found a metal hatch. I got my gas mask on so I was clear of bio. I went inside… There was a metal ladder leading down this man hole. There was a corridor. I loaded my silenced 9mm and walked down the it. It quiet at first until I heard footsteps coming. There was no where to hide. It was getting louder, louder and louder. I got ready to shoot… “Hey Pete sort out maintenance in Section B!” “Ok, ok” The footsteps weakened and shortly they were gone. By existence in this place was denied. It was top secret. I carried on my campaign down the corridor. When there was another Rebel looking at a board of notes. I silently crouched and moved to strangle to sucker and then I put him around the corner of the corridor. I walked down like a cat stalking its pray. I turned my eye around another corner and there was a door. With a window on top. I looked through it and my horror was complete. The point was done. They wasn’t messing around. There were15 HUGE nerve gas machines all going and secured by Rebel soldiers, there were all wearing gas masks so it was active in there. I had a plan. I opened the air lock and went in. A guard was stupid enough to just lean on the wall. How foolish. I went up behind him and stabbed his spine and then removed his mask. To be sure the place was active I checked for side effects. His body began to sweat hard. There was nerve gas in the room. So I wasn’t safe for putting my gas mask off. I sneaked through the tankers and got to the other door, thus sneaking past the guards. Successfully of course. I was then greeted by many corridors, however I opened one huge airlock and I was in what can I say the “posh” bit of the factory. Perhaps the man behind this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 30, 2006 Share Posted April 30, 2006 Great story Bradd. I will update points a little later on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted May 1, 2006 Share Posted May 1, 2006 Interdiction Pt. III The sun was setting and more possibles had shown up for my offer, but I was waiting it out for a possible godsend. Possibly. Unfortunately, the first recruit and first guy that showed up, the farmer (whose last name was Ghallager), had given me high hopes for finding another instant success. A lot of the other pilots, though, were simple folks and unused to low-level flying with fast aircraft. Some Shamal pilots came by, but they didn't fly low. Day turned to night and I was about to call it a day when a nice Turismo, cool gold, drove up the dusty path from the snake farm to my airfield. A slightly pudgy (but tall) man stepped out, revealing blue kahki pants, a striped shirt, bushy moustache, and aviator glasses resting on a masculine face. He had dark hair, too. He approached me and I came down the AC tower steps to greet him. He extended his hand right as I hit the last step, and I took his offer. He introduced himself. "Brigadier General OdDsOcK, I'm Republic of San Andreas Army Air Force Bruce Stable. Retired, of course." He said. I smiled. My lucky day. "Good to meet you. You here for the job?" I asked. "Yep. Anything you need to ask me?" "Just go ahead. Tell me about your experience." "Well, I'm 55, but still in flying condition. I flew with the ROSAAAF for about 24 years, worked as a technician and eventually became a pilot. I've used all sorts of aircraft, and the new Hydra. I am also a civilian pilot and have the necessary credentials to allow me to fly military aircraft without specific permission, and I do so regularly. I hate both Rebels and Seperatists -- the pretenders -- but I promise I can follow orders correctly. Here's my record, if you wish." He said and gave me a manila folder. I looked in it quickly. Plenty of commendations. "Looks good enough to me already. Welcome to the team. Report here tomorrow at 0800 hours. You will have an assigned aircraft." I explained. "Will do." He said. He then shook my hand and left me in the dust, literally. To Be Continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted May 1, 2006 Share Posted May 1, 2006 Nice story Sock, I will update the points tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GOA Arbusto Posted May 1, 2006 Author Share Posted May 1, 2006 (edited) Points updated. Most everyone is approching weapon or vehicle upgrades. Furthermore, awards will be discussed with your faction leaders this weekend, so keep the stories coming. As for the inactives, i.e. Mike_Toreno, SatanOnFire (presumed gone), and MacSandNines, they will be discussed as well. The deadline for the *one month no activity cut* is two weeks from Wednesday. Do not begin to think you will be exempt from this. Members Current Points Total Points Last Story ROSA Bryce. 3 3 April 21, 2006Last Posted Story OdDsOcK 3 3 May 1, 2006Last Posted Story Bradd0 3 3 April 27, 2006Last Posted Story Baptiste 2 2 April 25, 2006Last Posted Story Mike_Toreno buttmonkey 1 1 April 21, 2006Last Posted Story Rebels MI7 SatanOnFire Stezza 4 4 April 24, 2006Last Posted Story Alexrw 1 1 April 27, 2006Last Posted Video Snares 2 2 April 18, 2006Last Posted Story MacSandNines Separatists gillies 3 3 April 23, 2006Last Posted Story Mainland Marauder 1 1 April 19, 2006Last Posted Story kippers 2 2 April 18, 2006Last Posted Story Ottae 1 1 April 19, 2006Last Posted Video gta_player5 3 3 April 26 2006Last Posted Story D2TK 1 1 April 17, 2006Last Posted Story ~Phusion~ 4 4 April 22, 2006Last Posted Story The new points table will make it easier for us to see who has been active and who hasn't. Also, the way in which points are earned is also going to be discussed with faction leaders. Videos are most likely going to earn you more points. Small stories that are less than two paragraphs long will also most likely not earn you a point. Thank you. Edited May 2, 2006 by GOA Arbusto Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gillies Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 kippers, here's your rescue. I agree it's a bit weak, but it's something... Shanghai Chicken The Sentinel sped past the rusty gates of the abandoned factory where Mainland Marauder had ordered Gen. gillies to park the van that had the new recruit in the back the night before. gillies pulled the car to a stop right next to it and he and Mainland Marauder disembarked. The van appeared to be normal, gillies said "how do you think he'll have liked being stuck in there for a day?", "not a lot, I imagine" replied Mainland Marauder. "Well the info we got on him makes him an excellent candidate, do you really expect he will play along?" asked gillies. "Perhaps not at first, but we'll work on him", replied the Presidente. gillies opened one of the back doors of the van and stepped back so the Presidente could get a look inside. kippers appeared to have done himself a mischief by banging his head against the wall of the van one too many times and just a little too hard and he was lying on the floor of the van, moving only slightly. "Now why would he do a thing like that?" asked the Presidente. "I dunno, although a lot of time in solitary can mess with your head y'know" replied gillies. "Nonetheless we can't wait around here forever" said the Presidente, "get him out of the van". "Right" said gillies, and proceeded to climb into the van and drag the partially conscious kippers towards the doors at the back. The Presidente leaned into the van and attempted to bring kippers to some state of awareness by hitting him in the face a few times, this was partially successful but gillies had to restrain him for a moment before he and the Presidente could get him out of the van and standing up outside. The Presidente approached him, and held up his Desert Eagle. "You're a pretty tough guy kippers, that stunt of hitting your head against the inside of the van could have made things difficult", he said, "we know you wanted out of the game, but I'm here to make you an offer you won't be able to refuse". "Really, and what is that then?" replied kippers, smuggly. "Well you see, it's rather simple. You have been selected by The Separatists mostly due to your dissatisfaction with the government, and for the experience you would bring to our group", said the Presidente. "Unlike the other rebellious organisations we have strategy, and organisation, and the wealth of our supporters allows us to make bolder attacks as well as remunerate our members handsomely for their contribution to the struggle". "What if I refuse to join your 'struggle'?" kippers asked. The Presidente looked to gillies, "then it's the end of the line for you" was his response. gillies drew his Desert Eagle and took a step towards kippers. "OK, OK, relax, relax" said kippers, motioning to them both to lower their weapons. "You're right, I do hate the government but what you guys did to me is sick". "Really?" asked the Presidente stepping right up to kippers. "Do you know that before we intervened it was likely a hit would be performed on you in the club last night?" he asked. "No I didn't know that" was the response. Far off, gillies could hear a helicopter approaching. The chopper would either be ROSA or the news, both of which were as bad as eachother, or so he thought. "Presidente, we have to get moving", he said. "Yes, you're right" replied Mainland Marauder, "this way, kippers" and the Presidente began to lead him towards the Sentinel parked nearby, and opened one of the rear doors for him to get inside. "I'm not feeling too well" complained kippers. "Nonsense, we'll be at a safe location soon enough and you can get all the rest you need for the tasks we have ahead", replied the Presidente. gillies had worked out where the chopper was coming from and had thought of a route to take to avoid being spotted, so he dashed towards the car and got in the driver's side, started the engine, and began driving out of the abandoned lot. He looked to the right and saw the Presidente take out a small switch, then heard the tremendous explosion of the bombs under the van detonating and saw the fire in the background. kippers had already fallen asleep in the back of the car and never got to see just how easily they could have killed him had they so wished. Two hours later they arrived at the Presidente's beachside residence, and gillies helped kippers inside where his initiation into The Separatists would commence presently. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Great story gillies. You gave me a bit of an idea with it. There kippers, you've been set free you scum. Points updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gillies Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Thx man. Cool that it gave you a bit of an idea too. I will take this opportunity to mention to anyone that wondered, this story should have been written a while ago and probably happens before any of the stories written by all of the Separatists except kippers. There needed to be a break in the continuity because kippers wanted someone else to write what happened to him after his last story which is quite a few pages back now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lone_Soldier_D Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 I will fight... for the freedom... of my mind... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brad Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Massive Destruction Part III I don’t know but I felt like I was in a palace. Passing the nerve agent facilities was heart pounding enough but now this scenery will put me off. With the Silenced 9mm down to a safety position down to my waist I hurried along to a board room. On the board there was a map of San Andreas. I looked closely and noticed there was an X on… ROSA parliament! But there’s more. There was also one planted on The Ministry of Defence. But to my horror there was one to OdDSoCk’s airbase and Angel pine but the deepest one of all was Area 69 next to that it said X3. I heard footsteps. Again I knew what to do. Footsteps: Yes Alex you have my word. Yes, the whole of ROSA will be collapsed. Yes the VX is ready too. Sarin yes that too. Ok bye. *Beep* The man enters the board room while Brrad0 is pointing a gun at them. Silently: Brrad0: Hands above your head. Who are you? Man: I am Alex’s chief and right hand man. Brrad0: What is your name. Man: Viski Rouse Brrad0: Russian? Viski: Yes, I moved here to San Andreas to see your petty government destroy this place. My parents grew here until they departed to Russia! Brrad0: Where did you get the nerve gas from? Viski: Me tell you? Brrad0: TELL ME WHO SOLD IT TOO YOU! Viski: You can shoot me. DO IT! DO IT! Brrad0 gets a knife and points it to his eye. Brrad0: I will easily take out your eye. And I’m not joking, you won’t be blind but you wont be able to see the world like you used to. Viski: You hard? Please. Brrad0 gets the knife. He points it to his eye. It gets closer until it slightly touches his eye ball. He cracks. Viski: OK OK STOP I WILL TELL YOU! Someone in your organisation I don’t know who he sold me it. Brrad0 gets his phone and looks through the contacts while he is doing this Viski gets a gun and shoots himself in the head. Brrad0: NO! The facility is alerted by the noise. An alarm is raised immediately. Secruity: All personal, we have an intruder all report to Section C. This is not a drill intruder alert! Brrad0 is stood in his shooting stance ready for the apposing guards… To be continued. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snares Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Good story I can't be arsed waiting for Tom to post his vid, expect a story tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 (edited) I will fight... for the freedom... of my mind... No you won't. You're banned from this topic. You've also made multiple accounts. Don't post in the topic again, thank you. Great story Braddo. Edited May 2, 2006 by Bryce. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 I will fight... for the freedom... of my mind... No you won't. You're banned from this topic. You've also made multiple accounts. Don't post in the topic again, thank you. Great story Braddo. Saywha? Why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 OdDsOcK if you'd like to know please PM, but I had a legitimate reason and MI7 also supported my decision to ban him a while back. I'm sorry you either weren't here to see why or you weren't paying attention. I should have a video done by this weekend or next weekend. And that's a guarentee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie Sindacco Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 Rage Against The Machine! Death to Arbusto and his army. Ipledge myself to the Separatist movement in the hopes that one day the state of San Andreas will be free of the foul stench of decay and corruption that the Republik has brought with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GOA Arbusto Posted May 3, 2006 Author Share Posted May 3, 2006 Roster updated, territory map soon to be updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie Sindacco Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 I will have a Separatist story soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ottae Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 why would you do that when your part of the republik? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brad Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 why would you do that when your part of the republik? Republic V Sepratists maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ottae Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 perhaps.... But surely he would have said "I have a Republik story" Or some sh*t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gillies Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Hang on it looks like Eddie Sindacco asked to be added to the Separatists but Bryce. added him to the ROSA roster, was there some reason for this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie Sindacco Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Who needs to approve of my story? I used to be in the ROSA but i quit cause i was in the middle of my college exams. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lone_Soldier_D Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Let me fight, I’m loyal to Arbusto, my allegiance is to the Republic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie Sindacco Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 “The Blackfield Chapel Massacre” Chapter 1: “Treason?” Darkness had settled across the tall trees of the Panopticon. The lonely country road was all but silent, apart from the echoing chirps of crickets from within the grass and bushes by the roadside. That chirping was soon joined by the loud hum of a motorcycle speeding through the countryside road as if it was an inner-city highway. Its single passenger was on a sole mission, a mission of destruction… “ Damn, I’m going to be late,” I thought as I sped by the single countryside road leading from the Panopticon to the Easter Bay Chemicals compound. As I got nearer to my destination my thoughts started to drift back to how I’d gotten myself into all this…How I joined the Separatists. It was the 15th of June and I was stationed in Palomino Creek as a soldier of General Arbustos ROSA army. Our squad had gotten a tip that the Rebels were planning to overrun the town and we stationed ourselves on the hills over looking Fisher’s Lagoon. Sure enough at midnight, several Squallo boats broke through the misty screen of fog settled on the Lagoon. We counted 20 rebels in all armed with mainly pistols and Tec-9’s. The Rebels has greatly under-estimated General Arbustos resolve to control Palomino Creek as they were hopelessly outnumbered by about 3:1. As soon as the rebels landed on the small beach of the lagoon, I, as the squad’s commander, issued the signal to open fire on the rebels. What followed was a complete massacre. All around, the night sky filled with the sound of firing M4’s and the panic stricken screams of the men and women of the rebels. Within minutes the beach was strewn with the blood and bodies of the rebels. “Two of them have taken cover in the cabin on the beach sir,” my second in command informed me. I signalled for four of my men to accompany me down to the dilapidated cabin. As we neared the cabin I raised my hand and quickly pointed left, then right. Two of the soldiers took up position either side of the cabin’s door. The remaining two crouched down and trained their M4’S on the door. On the count of three I kicked in the door and instantly saw a woman crouched over a man whose camouflaged pants were now stained with blood. Almost immediately the woman started to beg for mercy but was quickly silenced by a blow to her head by one of my men. I angrily reacted by shooting him dead where he stood. The rest of the men backed off instinctively when they saw what I had done. I motioned for one of them to take the woman and wait outside. He dragged her out of the cabin kicking and screaming. I bent down beside her companion who was struggling to breathe and stay alive because of the several bullet holes in his chest. I reached into his pocket and pulled out a passport with the name “Michael Teale”. I quickly pulled out a list of wanted rebel leaders my superior officer had given me and sure enough the name was on it and without hesitation I put a bullet in his head. The shot echoed throughout the lagoon. “Jackpot,” I said to the rest of the soldiers in the cabin. “ Ok, guys, bag him and get him ready for identification,” I ordered. As the men set about doing the task I headed outside to the beach where the rebel woman was being held. The soldier holding her handed me her driving license with the name “Claire Robins” on it. I instantly recognised the name from my list. “You rebel scum are more stupid than I thought,” I sneered at her. Well Ms. Robins your life is about to get a whole lot worse. I took out my cell-phone and dialled my commanding officer. “ Yes?” said the harsh voice at the other end of the line. “Lieutenant, I have just got two of the rebel leaders we are hunting: Michael Teale and Claire Robins. “ Are they alive Sindacco?” said the commander anxiously. “ The woman is sir, but I regret to inform you that I killed Teale…”I said hesitantly. “ Not to worry commander, bring the girl to my “office” in the Randolph Industrial Estate immediately, I will make her see sense and reveal the locations of the rest of the Rebel leaders,”said the lieutenant menacingly. “Jesus Christ!” I thought. Lieutenant Frank Kelso’s “office” was not an office…it was a torture chamber...a place of pure evil where this monster of a human being committed acts of unspeakable evil on his enemies. Claire Robin was one of these enemies and it didn’t matter a damn that she was just 22 years old. “ Hand cuff the girl and put her in my patriot,” I said to the soldier who knew what was going to happen and like me didn’t like it one bit. I started to walk up the hill to where my patriot was parked and I noticed that I was fearing for the girl’s safety. I blanked out these thoughts quickly. I was a commander of the army of the Republik, what do I care if a rebel leader dies? But as I opened the door to my patriot, I knew deep in my soul that I could not lead this girl to her death, even if she was my enemy. As I started up the patriot’s engine, I started to question my loyalty to the Republik. When we were halfway over the Mako Span I reached a decision that would change my entire life. I turned to the girl in the backseat,“everything is going to be ok,” I said… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gillies Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Let me fight, I�m loyal to Arbusto, my allegiance is to the Republic. You're banned from this topic. You've also made multiple accounts. Don't post in the topic again, thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lone_Soldier_D Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Do you think I care??? They can ban me, wont do any good any way. And it's over a month ago, drop it. I am not like I was back then ether. Even if I don’t care what you say, I wont be as stupid as I was back then. Let me fight... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gillies Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Lol the guy that runs the faction you asked to join has told you not to post in this topic anymore, and it wasn't a month ago that he said it, it was about three days ago. What do you expect, that badgering him will make him change his mind? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snares Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Eddie, make sure you have that story checked. I have no idea what faction you are in, Bryce screwed the left-side of my brain up Just look at the front page, it tells you who you can check with. Looks like Mike's gone. Bryce, reminding you of the PM I sent? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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