Oddsock Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 Stezza, your stories are slower than molasses. Or any part of a mole, really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 (edited) Nice story Stezza, but next time try to add more chapters to one part, so it's not as easy to aquire points and gives a us a bit more to read. Explosive Situation Pt. 3 (Story picks up from me tripping on wire and 3 minute timer starting) Bryce: sh*t, I must have triggered some sort of time mechanism. Mike_Toreno: No sh*t. I don't know if I'm going to have enough time to stop this thing. Bryce: Mike can we unhook the rest of these barrels safely? Because as long as we don't cut that electric line, the barrels will still think they are in place. Mike: Yeah I think we can. (Bryce picks comms in on the ROSA Command Station) Bryce: You need to get everyone out of LSX now. Leave anything you can't carry and get everyone the hell out of here. I need a chopper over here immeadiately with at least 400 feet of steel cable. Command Center: sh*t, we'll do our best. Get the f*ck out of there. 2:45 Left I looked around at everything that could help me get these barrels out of this hanger. I looked over to the wall and spotted some nylon cable, with metal tie-offs, used for holding down tarps on grounded aircraft. I quickly ran over to them and began hooking them through the handles on the barrels, while mike untethered the barrels from the ground. 1:42 Left. As I hooked on the last barrel, I could heard hear the chopper overhead. 1:23 Left The cable was being lowered down, but it couldn't be fast enough. Once it got down I quickly wound it around both sides of the tethered off barrels and locked the cable in place. I then got on top of one of the barrels and told the chopper to take off. The chopper was a CH-47D Chinnok. It was well capable of hauling these 150 LB barrels as well as me. 1:01 Left. We began to lift up. Mike got himself up at the very last second and began to hold on for dear life. The pilot commed into my headset. Pilot: Where the f*ck are we going?! I need to know right god damn now! Bryce: Take it as far out over that ocean and gain as much alititude as possible. Be ready to eject on my mark! I cut him off so I wouldn't have to hear his bullsh*t anymore. 25 Seconds Left We were about 100 feet in the air and about 800 meters from shorline. I commed into the pilot. On my mark, eject and set this thing to climb at max speed. Pilot: Ok. 11 Seconds Left Bryce: On my mark in, three......two.....one...EJECT EJECT!!! Mike and I both jumped. We were so god damn high up in the air, I didn't think I would live from the fall into the ocean. We were falling fast. Finally we hit the water, my legs buckled under me and my head slapped the water, giving me the worst pain I had ever felt. Everything went black. I woke up, soaked and in the back of a small Coast Guard helicopter. I then blacked out again. (Military Hospital) I woke up, in my hospital bed. I couldn't even turn my neck, I was in a god damn neck brace. I looked down at my feet, both were medically taped up, but I was assuming, not broken. I tried turning my head, but I couldn't. Someone was in the bed next to me, I could hear them moaning, I hoped to god it was Mike. I sat there, trying to remember what happened after I hit the water. All I could remember was being underwatter and seeing the biggest god damn explosion I had ever seen. When I woke back up, I was blindfolded. I heard a voice speak to me. It was GOA Arbusto. GOA Arbusto: I've had you blindfolded for a reason Bryce. You've never seen my face and you probably wont ever. It's for security purposes that bound almost everyone but my family. Bryce: What the hell happened? Were we successful? GOA Arbusto: Well, sort of. Aside from my 45 million dollar helicopter being blown to hell, the Pilot died, and a 35 foot wave that was so damn big, it made it up all the way into Rodeo. Other than that, you saved alot of peoples lives Bryce. No casualties other than the pilot. The only injuries were your own and Mike's. Bryce: How is he? How long have I been asleep? GOA Arbusto: He's fine, he's in the bed next to you with a few broken ribs and a sprained ankle. You on the other hand are a bit more serious. You've broken both feet and have severe whiplash in your neck. You're honestly lucky to be alive. You've been asleep for a little over four days now. Bryce: Jesus, how long am I going to be out? Have we learned of who these "Separatists" are? GOA Arbusto: Well, right now, all I can tell you is that we think one has died. He went by the name of Mainland Marauder. Sources tell us that there was a power struggle and that he was killed by his other half, gillies. Bryce: Have we sent out a team to find these bastards? This sh*t won't fly Arbusto, we need to put every god damn soldier with a gun looking for these guys. GOA Arbusto: It's being taken care of Bryce. Just get your rest and I'll speak to you in a couple days. As I lay there, succumbing to my heavy eyes and achy body, I heard someone speaking to Arbusto. The last things I heard we're a young man speaking to Arubsto. He whispered, "Sir, we've just recieved some reports that something big is going to happen in San Fierro within the week. We've also learned that MI7 has resurfaced..." The End. Edited April 22, 2006 by Bryce. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ottae Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 that was sh*t -------------------- JOKE! LOL! Nice story man, I loved it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 Thank you Ottae. I made a few changes and made it a bit more legible. That was by far the longest story I have ever written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexrw Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 (edited) Nice story Bryce The following information in property of rebel operations: The original plan cannot be carried out do to threats by the Seperatists. We(I) have decided that the top of Mt.Chiliad will be used as our Base of Operations. Enclosed you will find our next operation to protect the people of San Andreas from their Government. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MISSION BRIEFING: Location: Missionary Hill Objectives: Drive down Mt.Chiliad then cross the bridge. Park the car in the missionary hill car park (so not to arouse suspicion). Sneak into the station. Disrubt the radio communications. Meet back at Mt.Chiliad outpost. Troops: Alex91: Leader of Operation. (Confidential): Disrupter of Communications. More troops to be picked at random if noeone volunteers. PROTECT THE DISRUPTER AT ALL COSTS -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This has handed to all soldiers at the new base. This is just a lead up to my next video (Yay i have a plan now ). So due to it's smallness and insignificany and the fact it's not really a story I have not sent it to my faction leader for checking. Edited April 22, 2006 by alexrw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Thank you Alex, hope to see your video soon. Well people, next weekend, or the week after next, I should be back to my video making again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lochie_old Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Nice stories folks... Sorry, this one has no action but Pt. 2 will. ======================= "Its a left here" Mainland said from the passenger seat. Phusion pulled into a giant mansion, as he drove down the winding driveway he was stopped at the end of it, "Password ples..." The guard asked, he starred at Mainland in the passenger seat, "So sorry sir, drive right through" Phusion continued, as they reached a garage, Phusion heard a click. The garage door opened and a Bobcat was parked inside. "Just park your car next to mine" Marauder yelled over the blasting radio. "What?" Phusion said loudly. Mainland turned the radio down, "Park your car next to mine" Mainland smiled. Phusion turned the keys and the engine shut off, they both got out. "What is this?" Phusion asked curiously, "Its a cover... This use to be Maddog's recording studio, but after Maddog and his manager CJ were killed, accidently in a Repubilc vs. Rebel fight, we decided this would be an brillant cover for a hideout" Marauder replied. "Follow me" Mainland told Phusion, they walked around the house and into a studio. Inside was gillies and several other men. "Good to see you gillies" Mainland smiled and shook his hand, "You to sir, Me and an operative took care of that photos" gillies grinned, he turned to Phusion. "Ahhh! This must be your new bodyguard!" gillies exclaimed, he grabbed Phusion's hand and shook it. "Its good to have you on the team!" "Thanks... So why are we here?" Phusion said. "We are here it is time, after my faked death and the Rebel photos destroyed, Los Santos shall be ours! But first, I need you and gilles to take care of the men who ratted us out..." The meeting went on into the night. As morning came Phusion woke up early, he grabbed a bucket of icecream and ate some, a voice startled him. "Well, you know the plans" it said, Phusion turned around and saw gilles standing in the doorway with his equipment and his disguise on. Their plan was to pretend to be Rebel agents and meet the traitors for their weekly pay. They had found all this information out after the laptop they took off the men. "Just let me change" Phusion dashed to his Picador and shoved on his disguise. They both jumped into the car, "We are meeting them in the Burgershot in Idlewood" gillies told him, Phusion turned the engine on and away they went. To be continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Nice work Phusion, a good second story indeed. Point added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lochie_old Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Im trying to save up for the sniper rifle + bipod. ====================== They pulled into the Burgershot, "Keep it calm, don't do anything that could give away our real identities" gillies said from the side of his mouth. They could see the rogue agents sitting in a booth, Phusion held the suitcase with their "bribe". Little did they know that the suitcase had a fake compartment, Phusion would open it, with the bottom over the table and the top hanging over my lap, Phusion would then punch the weak-spot and point his gun through it. "Its about time you guys got here, the Sep's are thinking we are trying to infiltrate the rebels camp on that giant mountain" One said, Phusion had heard his voice before but he couldn't put his finger on it. They sat down, the two men pulled out a briefcase, one pushed it over to us. "Now, show us the money" he ordered. Phusion opened the briefcase, punched the hole and pointed his gun through it. "You f*cking move you shall die, you traitor's" Phusion told them calmly, one went to make a move for his pocket. "I wouldn't think so" gillies pulled out his gun. "You Sep scum are f*cked!" One yelled, and thats when all hell broke loose. Men came pouring out from the kitchen, the customers pulled out their guns aswell. "How the...?" Phusion was stunned. "We are the only rogue spys in the Seps, but we are always one step ahead of you" one man said, gillies was pissed off. He pulled out his gun and popped a bullet into one of the mens skulls, several guns clicked. "You f*cking rebels think you are fighting for the right cause? You f*cking think you will rule San Andreas properly? Think again you dirty pricks" He bellowed. He let off round after round around the room, men went diving behind counters and whatever sheilds could be found. Phusion pulled out his Tec-9 and started spraying bullets everywhere. They went through a magazine each, and then ducked under the table. "On the count of three I'll make a dash for the counter, you cover my ass" gillies whispered, the rebels still recovering from the surprise attack. "1..." "2..." "3..." gillies made a break for the counter, Phusion jumped up and just started shooting randomly, but then *Boom!* Everyone turned around, a rocket had gone right through the wall. "This the ROSA Corps, come out with your hands up or we will storm the building" a loudspeaker wailed. Phusion saw his chance and ran to the counter, but most of the rebels were already paying attention to him again, bullet after bullet was shoot as Phusion ducked and weaved, he dived over the counter and saw gillies breaking open a back window. "We should let these rebel motherf*ckers die" he was still angry. "But we didn't get the traitors!" Phusion yelled. As if on cue, the traitors made a break for the back door. "We can get them now" gillies smiled. To be continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Nice story Phusion, though I'm bit confused as to why they called themselves Separatists, but later on were referred to as Rebels. Other than that, good story. Pts. updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lochie_old Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 I don't really remember what I write, so that is probably why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snares Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Can I ust point out some things that should be edited. I now reside in the Flint Range county, after raiding it and taking control.I no longer have the MP5. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gillies Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 I will update the roster for you Snares, I might as well do that since the other guys that can aren't here at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snares Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Cheers man. Expect a story.... as soon as Tom posts his damn video Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brad Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 I, i'm going to do a story on Mass Destruction. It involves the Rebels but nothing to do with the seperatists. Then I will go on to do the seperatists. COMING SOON! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Cheers man. Expect a story.... as soon as Tom posts his damn video Snares lets try not to move around so much though, it's really a pain having to log in and change things every few days. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snares Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 This is the first time I've moved, and I'll be here for a good while, if not ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Interdiction Pt. I I flew in as soon as I could when I heard about the LSX bomb threat. I didn't get there in time, whenever that may have been, but I was able to watch the explosion from a distance and escort the Coast Guard home. A few hours later I was speed-walking up to Bryce's room. It had taken forever to get clearance to land my Rustler. I finally got to his room and saw them both. Mike and Bryce. Both were awake and watching TV, their beds upright. Mike was happily eating as he watched "The Planet's Funniest Animals," a show I despised for being corny. Bryce had a sour look on his face. I couldn't tell if it was the lack of food, movement, or entertainment. I said "hi" to both, and mike responded mindlessly, completely incapacitated by the show. Bryce looked at me, so I got closer. "Well, you look like..." hell? I thought. "a million bucks." "Compared to what could have happened, this is a million bucks." Bryce responded. He was right. Some nastier stuff coulda happened. I twisted my ROSA cap I carried around. He was hurting, and I couldn't do much of anything. Well, I could do one thing. I snatched the remote from mike's bedside table and flipped through channels until I found something about San Andreas's history on the History Channel. Bryce gave a small smile and thanked me. mike booed me. "Bryce, I know you're outta action now, but I got an idea for me. What if I try to infiltrate the Seperatists?" I asked. He tried shaking his head instinctively and winced at the pain. "No, no, it's a good idea, but it's a tad too risky. We've already got some spies out there, and things are really heating up between the Seps and Rebels. It would be hard to cover." He said. I frowned and started watching with him. About a minute later he said something. "Wait, I got it! Cover! OdDsOcK, I am going to send a convoy out from Area 69, through Las Venturas, down into the county, through Los Santos, and then end it at Angel Pine. I want you and two others to fly cover for them. It will be pretty much a decoy convoy, but real men and real supplies are needed in Angel Pine, so we're sending them along. The route goes through unmarked territory very close to Rebel and Sep hotspots, so there will be attacks. Hopefully, the Rebels and Seps will reveal some things, and even better, fight each other. The convoy leaves in two days. Find pilots and get on it. "Yessah!" To Be Continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Great story sock, glad to see you back man. Point added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baptiste Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 INTRO: ROSA. So im strolling down the street near palomino creek hedding for my shack to have my daily nap. Im noticing a black SUV coming up behind me, im noticing it speeding up behind me, im noticing it parking right behing me and im noticing 4 guys in suits that come out of the car. I knew they were coming for me, why I had no idea but it they were coming for me. "-Baptiste? -Uh....yeah thats me, as I said that I opened my knife. -If you would please come with us. GOA Arbusto has a word to say to you. -Me? Why? Im just a clean citizen. -We know youre past. -My...past?.....well lets go see this Arbusto guy. -Get in the car, and if he wanted you dead, it would have been done a long time ago. -Right..gotya." The car drove up to the embassy in SF. There I entered a large bureau. A man sitting in a chair was facing me. "-Uh...hi, you arbusto. -Nobody sees arbusto. -Who are you then. -My name in Bryce. -oh...nice name. -Shut youre mouth and listen very closely. -Yes sir. -I know all about youre past, all youre missions and everything you know how to do. I also know you could kill me righht now and get away from security. -... -ROSA goverment needs you, I need you, Arbusto needs you. -Do you accept? *Stands gagly at Bryce*. -Sure, sounds like fun. -Go home, I will contact you there. -Bye dude. -Bye......dude." I went home driven in a white limo. I sson as I got there, I sat on the coutch and drank a soda. I was back in business. ------------------------------------------------------------------- Yeah im back, for long I hope. I did not feel the need to PM M17 because its just an intro and nothing happens but i will in the future. Like it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snares Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Actually, you would PM Bryce. Just remember dude, it's better to be safe than sorry, and PM to your faction head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lochie_old Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 Meh... He probably won't get a point added if he didn't PM Byrce. But next time always PM even if it is a intro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 Yeah Bap, you are not exempt from the rules. You need to PM every story to me. Then once you become trustworthy, you won't have to do so. I will add a point though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gillies Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 I was going to make this one story but I decided to expand the ending, so now it's two parts. I might get the other part finished later today. Bling-bling Scramble Part 1 Despite The Separatists' being extremely well endowed with finance from many wealthy concerned citizens who were accessible thanks to the Presidente's connections, gillies had been thinking for a while that performing a hit on a ROSA payroll truck would be something they could easily handle and would make things difficult for the government at the same time. He decided to give Col. Ottae the task of performing recon on the payroll trucks that are frequently seen driving the streets of San Fierro, usually with one or two police outriders for protection, and to report back on any locations they stopped at for any reason which could make the hit even easier. Maj. kippers was able to find a mole in the ROSA Corps who supplied The Separatists with some route maps for different days of the week which would also simplify the task of choosing an appropriate target. The plan was hatched. Ottae had discovered that one payroll truck drove into the city from the south near Avispa Country Club early in the morning on Saturdays, and it would frequently be held up by the heavy traffic at an intersection in this area. gillies decided to take that opportunity so as to avoid himself and his soldiers getting caught up in a big firefight in the middle of the state capital, with the enormous police presence that would entail. They would hit any police protection then rush the truck before its occupants had a chance to react. To complete this job the ranks of The Separatists bundled into Col. Ottae's Journey to make the long trip to San Fierro. For such a daring attack all of the members were involved, Maj. kippers, Col. Ottae (who supplied the vehicle), Pfc. gta_player5, and Cpl. D2TK (sniper). The Presidente had been informed of the plans and was waiting, along with his bodyguard ~PhusioN~ at a secure location, to hear that it had been a success. The marked truck was spotted at 07:05 stopping at an intersection just outside the city. Cpl. D2TK who had been hiding in a tree on the roadside acted first, taking the heads off both of the police outriders very quickly. The Separatist legion dashed out from where they had been hiding along the roadside, Gen. gillies dragged the driver out of the truck and cut his throat. Once the legion had got the back doors of the truck open, and after the guard inside was killed by a single Deagle bullet to the face, delivered by Cpl. gta_player5, what they found inside was not what they were expecting, "holy sh*t would you look at this!", gillies heard from the back of the truck while he dropped the corpse of the driver to the ground. The government had apparently been helping to finance its operations by taking part in the supposedly illegal trade in uncut diamonds. The truck was loaded to the brim with them in small sacks piled up around the interior. While they inspected the contents of the truck they began to hear sirens, the ROSA pigs were onto them, "that took longer than I expected", thought gillies. Two of the legionairres jumped in the back of the truck to secure the doors and merchandise while gillies took the wheel and hit the gas, spinning the truck around to drive south again, hoping to be able to shake off most of the heat on the long journey back to the safehouse in Mulholland. The other Separatists sprinted to the Journey and began driving in the opposite direction, towards San Fierro, and a heavy police presence, so as to help divert police attention from the stolen truck. Making such a long drive in a vehicle with no acceleration and handling, and with so much police attention would not be an easy task. Maj. kippers had been informing gillies of what was going on in the back through a small window in the back of the cab. "We're gonna try and secure some of this stuff then open the doors and try to take out some of these cops" he shouted, barely audible over the wail of the sirens on the police vehicles that were still gaining on them. gillies felt the truck shake as they opened the back doors, and began to hear gunfire and a lot of shouting, kippers and gta_player5 were firing on the trailing police cars. gillies heard them celebrating hitting a police car driver in the head, but his attention was soon drawn to a police road block that was coming up fast. Looking at either side of the road there was no alternative but to run straight through it, he swerved the truck to avoid one of the cars in the road block, running over a ROSA cop who was standing between the cars, and, as he found out later, spilling diamonds all over the road. He had been expecting the truck to come under heavy fire from the road block but it didn't, "amateurs", he thought as the truck continued to speed away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GOA Arbusto Posted April 23, 2006 Author Share Posted April 23, 2006 ~From The Desk of Arbusto~ Eddie Sindacco's execution has been arranged. The execution will take place within the week. Details of why he is being executed will later be released to the public. Territory Map and Roster are being updated. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 Great story gillies, I really enjoyed it. You'll pay for all of the blood you have shed! Points updated, working on some stuff now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lochie_old Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 I think theres a few people who will need to be killed soon. They are on the ROSA and Rebel team, there's a few who haven't written anything. Anyway, yay! the Seps have a truck full of diamonds! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gillies Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 You'll pay for all of the blood you have shed! I just got away from your state capital in a slow truck full of diamonds. You can't stop me. Anyway, yay! the Seps have a truck full of diamonds! We're not quite there yet. Technically we have a six star wanted level and have to get back to my place in Mulholland before we're safe, we're still somewhere on the highway in Flint County I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 Okay, the roster and everything else seems to be complete. I think there are a few rule changes that I would like to discuss with gillies and MI7, but other than that, we're pretty damn up to date. New Territory Map: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lochie_old Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 Damn, thats a pretty different territory map. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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