Stezza Posted April 27, 2006 Author Share Posted April 27, 2006 (edited) Chapter 5 CJ was sitting at a booth in the Well Stacked Pizza shop in nearby Idlewood. He always sat on the left wall, second from the counter; it was Denise's favourite spot. Tears were trickling down CJ's cheek. He couldn't believe it. He lost his mum, his brother and now his lover. All was heading to the s---s for CJ. "Boo!" A man surprised CJ from behind. He had a blue jacket, dark pants and a red tie. His brown hair was gelled out completely and pushed towards the back of his head. CJ recognised this man. It was Toreno. "Oh Toreno, what the f--- you want this time?" CJ said in a disgusted grunt. "I heard what happened. My condolences." Toreno sat at the booth opposite CJ. "Now, I need you to do me a favo-" "NO!" CJ scremed as he stood up. All the people in the shop were now staring at him. "I am NOT doing anything for you Toreno. I'm in a s---ty situation here man-" "Calm down kid-" "I lost my mum, my brother-" "Dude, just chill-" "And now my lover!!! And...n-now you want me to do a job for you? Well," CJ exited and started walking for the door "F--- YOU TORENO!" CJ stormed out of the shop. 15 minutes later... CJ was driving along in his Hustler through El Corona. He decided he would go see Cesar to calm him down. He was really pissed. He just wanted to grab a gun and shoot Toreno 10,000,000,000 times with it. He stopped at a red light infront of a liquor store when his phone rang. "Hello?" "Madd Dogg's mansion. No time for talk...NOW!" It was Toreno. CJ sighed. "...Alright man...whatever you say...SIR..." There you go. Please provide comments! Edited April 27, 2006 by Stezza Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick000 Posted April 27, 2006 Share Posted April 27, 2006 Lol, in that chapter, I would have just wanted to kill Toreno right then and there, he has no heart, nor soul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FelipeVinhao Posted May 6, 2006 Share Posted May 6, 2006 Sorry I'm just replying today. But damn good story by now. What's Toreno up to? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stezza Posted May 8, 2006 Author Share Posted May 8, 2006 Chapter 6 (Another short one...) CJ pulled up to his mansion in the Mulholland hills. He saw Toreno's car was parked there. As he walked inside, he realised there was a musty smell in the air and followed it's trail. It lead him to the bar where he saw Toreno standiong there with a cigarette in his mouth. "You're late," Toreno barked as CJ sat at a bar stool. "No I'm not, and by the way, can you give me a better greeting next time?" "No," he barked again. "What's wrong?" "I hate men," "What, are you gay?" "No, I'm more of a homophobic than you are?" "That means, are you saying I'm gay?" "Exactly," Toreno said as he chucked his cigarette away. He gave CJ a rolled up piece of blue paper. "Read it." Toreno said as he walked away. "'Ey bitch, what's this?" CJ asked as Toreno kept walking like he was deaf. "Bitch," "I heard that!" CJ unrolled the paper and found it was the blue-prints of The Big Pointy building in San Fierro. CJ had no idea what it was for so he decided to give Toreno a call again. "What the f--- is this?" "Bomb it. I don't care how you do it, just BOMB IT. I'll tell you later why. Call me tomorrow." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FelipeVinhao Posted May 9, 2006 Share Posted May 9, 2006 What the hell Toreno a terrorist? Waiting ur next chapter tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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