mafiaking Posted April 11, 2006 Share Posted April 11, 2006 (edited) OK I'LL UPDATING IT ONCE A DAY SO CHECK BACK THEN HERE'S THE FIRST THREE FOR YOU AND THE OTHER CHAPTERS ARE BETTER THAN THESE ALOT BETTER LIBERTY TAKES OVER VICE NAVIGATION CHAPTER 1CHAPTER 2 CHAPTER 3 CHAPTER 4 CHAPTER 5 CHAPTER 6 CHAPTER ONE Gentleman's Club Portland,Liberty City Everyone was gathered at Salvatore's Old mansion in Portland for a meeting. the were talking about how they wanted to expand the family. Joey: Thank you for all coming tonight as this is a special evening. Everybody claps and says "no problem Joey" Joey: as you know this is the 2nd anniversery of my fathers death and he wanted me to lead the family to success over the years. He left me everything but he wanted us to take over Vice City. Toni: How we goonnae do that Joey when the Cubans and Haitians own most of it. Joey: Well we wil have to make them an offer they can't refuse. Luigi: Yeah but what about The Vercetti Family. Joey; Oh, yes the great Tommy Vercetti am sure he'll agree with us. Luigi: yeah he better. Toni: Were gonnae be big real big. A time passed throuhg the meeting eventually finished at 11 o'clock sharpish. Joey and Toni were left alone in the mansion. Toni: So when we going to do this thing then. Joey: We'll head over to Vice in the next couple of days after we get sorted. Toni: Ok Joey Cya later. Joey: Cya Chapter 2 joey was left thinking about the day his father was killed outside Luigi's club by Claude Speed and how he Killed claude for revenge. Joey went off to bed for a night's rest. It was now Thursday afternoon and it was a bright sunny day. Joey called up Toni to make arrange ments for there trip. Joey: Yo it's Joey i need you to make arrangements for our little trip to vICE. Toni: Yeah sure anything man, Joey: Right i have aboat down at the docks go and see if you can book it for today. Toni: Okay.but i thought we'd be hitting Vice tomorrow. Joey: No today i done some thinking last night and it made me realise. Toni: Okay am away to do it now..bye. Joey puts his phone back onto the holder on the wall. Joey starts to get ready he puts on his black suit that cost over $3000 and armed himself with a 9mm and a pocket knife. Joey set off in his Mafia Sentniel down to the docks. After a 5min drive he arrived there. Joey: So you get it done. Toni: Yeah w ere ready to go. Joey: Go get some men to meet us over there. Toni: Right Joey walked aboard the boat and it set sail for Vice City. Toni on the otherhand went to Vice on a Private jet. They arrived in Vice two hours later. Joey clambered off the boat and walked over to where some workers were. Joey: Yo des anyone have a map of this place. Worker: Hey i got one but it'll cost ya $50 Joey: What am not paying $50 for a fricking map. Worker: Well $50 or nothing Joey draws his 9mm handgun and points it towards the man's face. Joey: Now give me the f*cking map bitch boy. Worker scared for his life. Worker: Oookkay here take it. Joey: Thanks. Joey walks out of the boat yard looking at the map pinpointing the main locations of where he could attack. Joey waits for Toni arriving witht he men ihe waited 20min then Toni arrived. A black sentinel pulled up and out came Toni. Joey: Yo you made it i got a map so we no where to go. Toni: Good good so where we heading first. Joey: Well am going to try and buy over this buisness here. Joey and toni walk back into the boatyard and ask the men about buying the property. Joey: Whats this place worth. Worker: Well the previous owner bought it for $6000 but i guess i'll sell it for $3500 if you want. Joey: Got your self a deal then buddy. Worker: Thanks the place is all yours. Joey was glad he now had bought his new buisness. Joey had a look around his new place admiring the boats and the view. Joey: It's good out here Toni: Yeah nice and quiet Joey and Toni walked out of the boatyard and climbed into his awaiting car. AS they drove along past the airport Jjoey noticed a car company called Sunshine auto;s for sale Joey: Driver stop in there Driver: Ok Sir. The driver pulled into the building carpark. Joey got out of the car and went to look at the price. CAR COMPANY SUNSHINE AUTO'S FOR SALE $20,000 OFFERS ONLY THE SIGN READ Joey: Hey can i buy this garage. Salesman: Yeah got the money. Joey: Heres a cheque so, thats it then i give you money and it's mine . Salesman: yeah CYA hope you like it man. Joey walked inside and saw there was some cars. Senteniel, infernus, cheetah and a sandking and a go-kart. joey told some of his guys that he wanted this pace sorted up. Thug: Ok boss i'll do that. The thug called some some help to get the place sorted and back to it's old shape. Joey and Toni headed out of Sunshine auto's looking pleased with themselves. They got back into one of the awaiting Mafia Senteniels which drove them off to Little Havanna. It was only a 5min drive which then they stopped outside which looked to be an cafe. Joey and Toni and two of there goons stepped out with them just incase anyone tried something. They headed inside the cafe which had a sign ontop that said "UMBERTO'S CAFE" Toni: Umberto's Cafe i like it. Joey: Yeah it's nice here i might consider this Umberto guy an offer. Joey and Toni walked inside CHAPTER 3 Joey and that took a seat over at the window. A old man came over and took there order. Man: Can i get you anything sirs? Toni: Yeah i'll have a coffee Joey? Joey: No am fine thanks? Old amn brings over coffee and places it on the table. Toni picks it up and takes a sip. Toni: Ahh this is good better than Back home. Joey: Right enough about the coffee i want to speak to the owner of this joint. Joey walks over to the desk and aask the old man behind the counter if he knows where the owner is. Man: he's thorugh the back i'll go get him for you. Joey: okay hurry up though i don't have much time. A medium sized mexican man came though and introduced himself. Umberto: My name's Umberto i own this joint i hear your interested in buying it. Joey: Yeah wondering if your selling...Oh ma name's Joey Leone. Umberto: Okay...(thinks) I dont think i want to sell up as i have been running this buisness for years now and i don't want to lose it. Joey: I see what if we made a deal i give you $50,000 for this place. Umberto: No am not selling up. A couple of Cubans enter armed with mac 10's. Joey: Hey guys am not looking for trouble. am only looking to buy the place. Toni walks over and stands next to Joey. As they continued talking the sound of car could be heard screching round the corner Umberto: Get down stinky haitians are here everybody DOWN. Joey: Oh f*ck Toni: Holy sh*t this is f*cked up. Everbody hit the ground with fear as the car drove away some cubans started b blasting the fools with uzi's. But no bullets hitting the Voodoo car. Umberto: They bastards have wrecked my cafe....Am going to get them back. Joey: Who the f*ck were they? Umberto: Our rival gang The Haitians....There black and we f*cking hate them. Toni (interrupts): Do they do this stuff all the time. Umberto: Yeah lastweek they killed five of my men. Joey: Your men? Umberto: Yeah i lead the Cubans. Joey: So what you going to do about this? Umberto: Well am going to round up some men and attack them back. Joey: You need some help? Umberto: If your offering? Toni: Well they just about killed us so were going to get them back one way or another. Umberto: Ok listen they've got a warehouse over in Little Haiti so thats where were going to hit them as thats where they produce the drugs. Joey: Ok man i'll cal some of my boys round and tell them to meet us there OKa see ya there? Joey and Toni left the cafe and headed towards the Haitians Drug factory. When they arrived Toni called some guys and told them to meet them here. 10min later two mafia senteniels puled up and out came ten guys dressed in black armed withh shotguns and some with ak-47's. Next arrived The cubans witht here Cuban Hermes blasting out flames from the side. Joey: Yo so we going to do this or not? Umberto: Yeah i've got two plastique bombs in the car Umberto tells one of his men to colect them. The man returns sharpish with the bombs. Umberto: Right i'l plant the bombs inside the factory But i'll need cover fire. Toni: Right we'll give he cover fire when your boys can back us up ok. Umberto: Ok.........Ready. Joey: Lets do this? The mafia and the cubans ran up next to the front gate where two Haitians were standing armed with Tech 9's. Umberto; Die you stinky Haitians Frrrrrgh..................bullets flew into the bodies of the gang members. the me moved through the gate by ramming it with a nearby voodoo. Umberto asked some men to cover him while he tried to plant the bombs. Umberto: Right give me cover am going in? Bullets flew through the air hiting some Cubans and knocking them down. Arrrrgh am shot said one Haitians Take that you stinky Haitians die f*ckers. Joey and Toni Moved behind a nearby van and stayed there blasting some Black Bastards. The yard was cleared of gang bangers and Umberto moved in to plant the bombs. Umberto: You two cover me m going in? Joey: Watch out? After a couple of mins Umberto returned with only one of his men. Joey: Where's the other guy Umberto: He got shot he's dead. THEY ALL RAN TOWARDS THE ENTRANCe WHEN BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMM BRGGGGGGGHH The drug factory collapsed to the ground with only some rubble being left there. Umberto: Yeah take that you bastards Umberto's abck and black. Joey: Holy sh*t that was f*cking awesome man Who. Toni: Yeah lets do that again. They all started to get back into there cars and make there way back to Umberto's cafe. Chapter 4/5 being written as you read this Edited April 13, 2006 by mafiaking Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/241062-liberty-takes-over-vice/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
mafiaking Posted April 12, 2006 Author Share Posted April 12, 2006 CHAPTER 4 When everybody arrived back at Umberto's Cafe The all ahd a laugh about what had happened back there at the haitian Drug Factory. Umberto: Wooo.i've wanted to do this for ages adn i just did it.Woooho Joey: Yeah that was some awesome sh*t.i done soemething like that once Umberto: Where? Joey: triad Fish Factory in Liberty City. Umberto: What happened? Joey: Well....we were at war with the Triads and this guy that used to work for us called Claude Speed sugested this and it was perfect. We stole a garbage truck and placed a c4 bomb inside and parked it next to fule containers at the fish factory and watched it go up in smoke. Umberto: Whoa man thats crazy stuf. Toni: Yo Joey don't you think we better be going now we still have buisness to take care of. Joey: Oh yeah sorry man.....well cya around Umberto nice working with you. Umberto: Take care Joey son. Toni: Cya around. Joey and Toni walked out of the cafe and got back in the awaiting car. They drove to a nearby hotel called Ocean View Hotel. Joey: This place looks good.Toni go book two rooms i think we'll stay here the night then continue our buisness tomorrow. Toni: Ok man whatever. Toni went over to the sign-in desk and asked the lady for two rooms. Toni: Is there any rooms available. Lady: Yes two left do you want to book them. Toni: Yeah sure here heres $3000 keep the change. Lady: Oh thank you sir. Toni and Joey walked up the stairs to there rooms. They arived and the rooms were amazing Brightly coloured wallpaper, expensive furniture laid out everywhere and a cabinet full of liqour. Joey: Oh yeah......his is what i call a room. Toni: Yeah it's quality. Joey: Right man a off to bed cya in the morning. Toni: Okay cya........good night man. Everything was quiet no sound at all. Smash A smash was heard by Toni downstairs in the hotel. Toni: What the f*ck? Footsteps where heard climbing the stairs get closer to the room. Bang They knocked down Joey's room door . Toni: Oh f*ck Joey NOOOO. Toni Jumped out of his bed and armed himself with a Desert Eagle. f*ck Fyck man what sh*t is this Toni looked round the corner to see two men standing dressed in Hawiin shirts and armed with Smg's. Toni: f*ck man what am i going to do. Toni grabbbed one man and shot the other that didn't have a clue who he was. BANG BANG BANG BANG The guy hit the door and then slumbbered to the floor in a pool of blood. One guy was now shooting at Toni while he other Tied up Joey. BNG BANG BANG BANG BANG...THRRRGGGGH BULLETS FLYING EVERYWHERE BUT MISSED THE INTENDED TARGET. Guy: You dead man. Toni Don't count on it mate. the man that was tieing up Joey now finished and hauled onto his back and smashed the room window. CSSSSSH (WINDOW SMASHING) The guy flung Joey out and landed in the back of the jeep. Guy: 'mon leave him we gotta go c'mon THRRRGGGGH........ARRRGH. Toni shot the man that was firing at him the guy hit the bed and slumped to the floor. Toni: Gotch ya.....Oh sh*t Joey NO. The other guy jumped out of the window and drove off into the night with Joey in the back of the jeep. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/241062-liberty-takes-over-vice/#findComment-3637031 Share on other sites More sharing options...
B Rob Posted April 13, 2006 Share Posted April 13, 2006 Keep writing, I'm reading and its decent. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/241062-liberty-takes-over-vice/#findComment-3639116 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lochie_old Posted April 13, 2006 Share Posted April 13, 2006 Its decent yes, but spell check it please! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/241062-liberty-takes-over-vice/#findComment-3639427 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mafiaking Posted April 13, 2006 Author Share Posted April 13, 2006 sorry for spelling just that i can't use ms wrd or that as they freeze alot and am using wordpad to write them but wait till the last three chapters there the best Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/241062-liberty-takes-over-vice/#findComment-3639449 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mafiaking Posted April 13, 2006 Author Share Posted April 13, 2006 CHAPTER 5 Toni sat on the edge of Joey's bed wondering where the hell they took Joey and what they wanted with him. Toni decided he should call Luigi and tell him what had happened. Toni picks up Joey's cell phone. Toni: Luigi it's Toni can we talk it's important. Luigi: Yeah sure what is it. Toni: It's about Joey. Luigi: What's happened to him.....is he okay. Toni: Some guys broke in the hotel and kidnapped him. Luigi: Right am on my way over meet me at the arport in a couple of hours. Toni: Right cya there. Toni got ready and went outside and saw that his car wasn't there. Toni: Where is my f*cking car. Toni noticed a silver motorbike parked across the road Toni: Whoa that'll do. Toni jumped on the bike and started to hotwire it. 2min later he got it and drove off to the airport. After a half hour drive he reache Escobar International. Joey parked the bike just outside the entrance and went in to wait on Luigi. After a hour wait Luigi arrived looking not at all pleased. Luigi: So tell me what exactly happened. Toni: Well me and Joey booked a couple of rooms and we went up went to slep and all i know some guys with heavy armoury busted in and kidnapped Joey. I shot Two of them dead. Luigi: Right we've got to find him. Toni and Luigi hopped on the bike and drove off to Umberto's Cafe. After 10min drive they arrived at Umberto's. Toni walked inside with Luigi trailing behind. Toni asked where Umberto was. Toni: Yo, wher's Umberto is he here. Guy: Yeah through the back man. Toni walked through the back and spoke to Umberto. Toni: Sup...i've got a roblem and wondering if you could help me with it. Umberto: Sure ess'a wat iss it. Toni: You know how i can yesterday with Joey. Umberto: Yeah? Toni: Well he......got kidnapped by some guys last night. Umberto: WHAT JOEY GOT KIDNAPPED WE GOTTA FIND HIM. Toni: Yeah i know so do you know where and who took him. Uumberto: No i haven't got a clue...but there is one guy who might have took him Toni: Who? Umberto: Tommy Vercetti he runs this town and hates the Mafia. Toni: I know that son of a bitch.......he killed one of my close friends Vance Lance. Umberto: he stays over in Starfish Island somewhere. Toni: Ok CHAPTER 6 Toni left Umberto's cafe quicly and sharply. Toni told Lugi where Joey might be. Toni: I think i know where Joey is being held. Lugi: Where, Where. Toni: Some where on Starfish island some guy named Tommy Vercetti is holding him. Luigi: Right we need to go over there and storm the place. Toni: Yeah we need to do......but shouldn't we round up some men first from liberty and get some decent weapons. Lugi: yeah true but we need to hurry up about it. Toni made a phone call to liberty and asked for someen to come to Vice to assist him in a job. Toni: Right the men are sorted so all we need is some guns. Lugi: What about Phil Cassidy he owns a weaposn abrn not far from here. Toni: Okay but he betta not be dodgy. Lugi: He's not just he blew his arm of while trying to test boomshine. Toni and Luigi headed off to Phils place to get some weapons. They arrived 15minutes later and walked casualy inside to speak to Phil. Luigi: Yo Phil are you here man. Toni; I don't think he's here man. Minutes later? Phil: Yo is that you Lugi man what yo doing here. Lugi: We need some weapons for a job we need doing. Phil: Right......come on in and see what you wnat. Lugi walks inside with Toni following behind. They had a lok around and then picked the weapons they wanted. Luigi: Ok we want: two pistols, two sub-machines guns, two assault rifles and five grenades and two desert eagles Okay got that. Phil: Yeah got that man........here's your weapons. Luigi: Thanks cya later man hopefully. Luigi and Toni walk out of Phils yard and hopped back onto the motorbike outside. Tthey drove off to Starfish island wanting to get Joey back. Toni: Right stop here w'll probaly need to walk from here and plus the guys are meeting us here. Luigi: Right, okay. They stop just on the bridge at the west side of Starfish island. They now wait for there back-up to arrive. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/241062-liberty-takes-over-vice/#findComment-3639535 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanney Posted April 15, 2006 Share Posted April 15, 2006 Spell Check is a must, but nice read. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/241062-liberty-takes-over-vice/#findComment-3644012 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mafiaking Posted April 15, 2006 Author Share Posted April 15, 2006 the rest will be up next week as i am really busy with stuff. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/241062-liberty-takes-over-vice/#findComment-3644262 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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