mboss Posted April 10, 2006 Share Posted April 10, 2006 (edited) This is my first fan-fiction and it is really my first piece of proper fiction writing and just chose and easy subject for any GTA fans to follow, it is a follow on from the end of GTA:SA. If i enjoy writing this and i receive a positive feedback i may write more stories. (BY positive i mean constructive as my main objective is to do something i enjoy and learn from your advice) I will update every 2/3 days as it may take a lot of editing. Anyway here goes. Chapter 1 “Another day, Another Dollar” Thought CJ signing a contract with his black business pen to buy a local limousine company. CJ was on top of the world in control and everyday expanding his businesses and increasing size of his bank account. Everything was perfect for CJ, no thoughts entered CJ’s mind ever that it may be too good to be true. CJ rang Kendl to confirm the deal had been made as he entered his newly purchased limousine to drive him back to his Car Showroom “Welcome Sir” said the polite limousine driver, “Where to today” “My car dealership, I’m sure yano where dat is” replied CJ. “Of course” Exclaimed the Limo driver in a light and happy toned voice. Roughly half an hour later they arrived at the car dealership and the Limo driver neatly parked in the car park close to the door. “Gimme 5 minutes homie” said CJ in a dominant yet polite tone. CJ strutted into the Car Dealership and spoke to Cesar who was working on a car. “You sign CJ?” Asked Cesar. “You know it” CJ said while laughing and clearly proud of himself. “I got to go home anyway its getting late”. “No problem bro” Cesar and CJ applied a hood style handshake and CJ strutted out of the Dealership and entered his limo once more. “Can you take me home please” CJ handed the limo driver a piece of paper with his address which the driver inputted into the GPS system and they set off once more. On the way through the countryside to Los Santos to CJ’s Vinewood home the driver stopped at some traffic lights. All of a sudden shots were heard which triggered CJ to duck and the driver immediately sped off down a long country lane with both of them not knowing clearly what had just happened. “What the HELL was that man” exclaimed CJ in a nervous yet again dominant voice. “I don’t know sir” Nervously said the driver pulled over at the side of the road in what he thought was a safe spot. Sirens were heard after 30 seconds of sitting in silence and 3 or 4 patrol cars sped past the Limousine however one stopped beside the Limousine on the drivers side of the Limo and asked the Driver to roll down his window. From the back of the Limo CJ could hear the conversation taking place with the Cops asking the Driver questions and the driver insisting he knew nothing and only heard shots. CJ could hear a familiar voice however and looked out of his window to see who it was. He couldn’t see from the angle he was at and could only see the other officer who weren’t talking. Eventually the driver said “Thank You officer” and rolled up his window. CJ peered out of his window again as the patrol car cruised by and he saw a face he also recognised but not knowing where from or why he remembered that face. “What’s going on?” asked CJ ”I don’t know” replied the driver as he started up the limo once more, “they had received calls of gunshots being heard and wondered if we knew anything” “They just let us go like that?” Laughed CJ “Just like that” “You can bet if you would have been black we would be getting searched right about now!” Exclaimed CJ in a humorous tone. CJ and the limo finally arrived home having being delayed only 5 minutes due to having a white driver, he tipped the driver $100 as he was feeling in a generous mood and in a wealthy state of mind having just an hour ago extended his business and strolled into his large yet lonely and empty house and took a seat in his living room. He stared at the picture on the wall of his Mother and started to think. He regularly did this after achieving something. “All the money in the world” he mumbled, “Yet love and true happiness evades me” He felt him getting worked up and decided to go to bed. Alarm Bells could be heard and CJ awoke to look at his black alarm clock as it read 8:30 in a bright red light. He looked in his diary and found he had an appointment with his accountant at 9:30 in the business district of Los Santos so he proceeded to get dressed and performed his usual morning activities. Including phoning the limousine company to arrange one to pick him up. 9:00 he walked outside of his home an awaiting him was a beautiful black shiny limousine and as he opened the door a red interior fit for arguably the most successful businessman in San Andreas at the moment. “This is nice” Said CJ “ I think we are going to have to hurry Bro, you know what the Business district is like at this time of day” A silence occurred and CJ stared at the back of the driver’s head and could see the shine off the light onto his hair, which he obviously had plastered with Gel. “Dude, hurry up man we going to be late” Said CJ impatiently however still trying to sound polite. Still no reply… “Man hurry up Come on!” Exclaimed CJ CJ moved forward towards the drivers seat and looked into the rear-view mirror of the limo at the drivers face and then fell back with horror and immediately jumped out. He went to the drivers door and opened it to find the driver with a blood-soaken suit with his eyes hanging out of their sockets, blood trickling from the drivers noise, and a huge slit across the front of his neck with blood seaping out like a waterfall down hi s suit over his tie and onto his now red shirt. Extremely loud bell could be heard now, and all went black for a short period time however with a Bell ringing throughout. CJ awoken in his bed with his phone ringing loudly, he looked at his alarm clock as it read 12:30am. He got out of bed still extremely freaked out by his nightmare he just had and got to the phone. He picked it up and heard a loud women’s voice cry “Carl, come quick its Cesar” Edited April 10, 2006 by mboss Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240900-my-first-piece-of-fiction-writing/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
mafiaking Posted April 10, 2006 Share Posted April 10, 2006 not bad for a first fanfic i'll be writing mine so look out for them Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240900-my-first-piece-of-fiction-writing/#findComment-3632929 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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