johnson. Posted April 6, 2006 Share Posted April 6, 2006 While I am sure many of you have seen these topics around, whether on GTAForums or otherwise, I am sure there are some of you who have no idea what this is. Basically, this is a "Game" in which you pick a gang and property, then write stories about what happens in your business. This is not a "Own These Places" topic. The main goal is not to write about how many hamburgers you sold, but to tell about the gang-related activities that go on in your business. Based on the stories you write, I will tell you how much money you earned. With that money you can then buy weapons, cars, boats, and even more businesses for your gang. Keep in mind, better stories = more money.___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Rules for the Build Up Your Gang thread 2. In addition to rule 1, please don't post half of a story and say you will be back to update it later as this can cause confusion to those that have to grade your stories.3. To make it easier on The BUYG Staff please check your spelling and grammar carefully as it makes it harder for us to read and grade them with multiple errors.4. Please refrain from "flaming" other members as this will get this topic one of those neat, but unneeded, locks.5. Most importantly if you need any help or assitance with writing/brainstorming/developing stories or if you feel the need to comment on the thread then please contact The BUYG Staff members with your opinions/expressions/concerns/problems. In addition to this if you feel that rule 4 had been broken please contact us before taking any action yourself.Some general guidelines to follow when participating in this thread1. DO NOT use weapons that your gang doesn't own and the same goes for vehicles. However keep in mind that when you purchase something for the gang anyone that is in that gang can use that item now.2. Any property you wish to purchase will cost the gang you are in or wish to join $200. If you are joining a gang make sure that it is alright with the current members that you use their hard earned cash to buy the land you want.3. If the entire gang is idle for a week then so become their assets and their assets will look like this (Distillery (Alcohol)(daily Income $10) a idle asset means that the daily income will not be given until someone in the gang becomes active again. Active being an actual posted story that meets the rules above.4. You can also take over property but it will cost you triple($600) what it would for a regular property. Also needed is the consent of the person who owns it and if no one owns it then you need the consent of the member of the gang who has been there the longest. Half the money will go to the gang the other half will just be taken away.These guidelines and rules have been brought to you by the BUYG Staff. You can reach us here... Johnson. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Previous BUYG threads Run By Build Up Your Gang Liberty Neotrix Build Up Your Gang Liberty V2 (Not recognized with the story counts found here) Rear End Collision Build Up Your Gang Vice Chunky Lee Chong BUYG USA TEoS BUYG II The Sicilian BUYG III MI7 BUYG IV/New Era 9jkearse3 Build Up Your Gang Remix SloStenRacing Build Up Your Gang: Trilogy Tril ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ !NEW! Story CountsStory Amount Prize(s) 20+ stories $100 with your next story 50+ stories Car of your choice under $400 100+ stories $115 bonus dollars with your next story and you can choose a free property even if a another gang owns it(unoccupied ONLY) 300+ stories $500 dollars and two vehicles of any value (excluding the Hydra and Hunter) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Gang Wars1.) The gang that was attacked must form some solid reason (in an official post, in total character) about who they believe did it and why or how they're going to retaliate. This will be a Declaration.2.) The two gangs meet with someone assigned to make all the formalities, write down what assets can't be blown to hell, what characters they don't want dying, anything agreed upon. But, at the same time, the other person must agree and get another favor in turn. Say if The Haitians don't want a specific drug-factory destroyed, the Purple Nines must accept it and not have one of their assets destroyed in return. Each gang is given a total of FIVE REQUEST'S before the war begins. The lead characters will automatically be safe from being killed or from serious injury (unless agreed upon before the war starts).3.) They go to war in their next story (that's right ONE story per person per gang), a panel of judges (The BUYG staff) will judge on a combination of four things: 1. Who writes the best story 2. Whose is the most reasonable 3. Who ploted theirs out strategically 4. Who made the clearest victory within their story If it's close, the decision will be given to an independent source for the tie-breaker. Any current gang wars (pending or in process) will be listed belowNo Gang war in process at the moment___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Posted April 6, 2006 Author Share Posted April 6, 2006 (edited) The Gangs Leone Family MafiaLocation Property Gang Member Story Count Liberty City Salvatore's Mansion D Jones 0 Liberty City Joey's Garage mark-2007 0 Liberty City Sex Club Seven --- 0 Liberty City Cipriani's Ristorante MMFF 0 The Badlands Chiliad Hideout --- 0 Las Venturas Caligulas Palace baptiste 0 Weapons Colt.45, Baseball Bat,Sawn-Off Shotgun Vehicles Mafia Sentinel, Stretch Money $3054 Assets --- Drug Facilities --- Items --- The TriadsLocation Property Gang Member Story Count Liberty City Belly Up Fish Factory --- 0 Liberty City Mr. Wong's Launderette --- 0 Vice City Links View Heights --- 0 San Fierro Wu-Zi-Mu's Office ThugLife 0 Las Venturas Four Dragons Casino --- 0 Weapons Baseball Bat Vehicles Triad Fish Van Money $148 Assets --- Drug Facilities --- Items --- Grove Street FamilyLocation Property Gang Member Story Count Los Santos Sweet's House The-Exploited 1 Los Santos The Johnson House Bjyounggotti 0 Los Santos Emmet's --- 0 Los Santos LB's Lockup --- 0 Las Venturas Four Dragons Casino Ottae 5 Weapons Colt .45, Tec-9, Spray Paint Vehicles Greenwood, BMX Money $697 Assets --- Drug Facilities --- Items --- Balla'sLocation Property Gang Member Story Count Liberty City 8-Ball's Bomb Shop (Harwood) --- 0 Vice City Cherry Poppers Ice Cream --- 0 Los Santos Idlewood Crack House --- 0 Los Santos Glen Park --- 0 Los Santos B-Dup's House --- 0 Los Santos The Pig Pen Cuban Warlord 1 Las Venturas The Visage --- 0 Weapons Colt. 45, Uzi 9mm, AK-47, Vehicles Majestic Money $1065 Assets (Strip Club=$20) Drug Facilities --- Items --- Los Santos VagosLocation Property Gang Member Story Count Los Santos East Los Santos Gang House --- 0 Los Santos East Los Santos Basketball Courts --- 0 Los Santos Unity Station --- 0 Weapons --- Vehicles Tornado Money $152 Assets --- Drug Facilities --- Items --- Varios Los AztecasLocation Property Gang Member Story Count Los Santos El Corona Low Rider Meet --- 0 Los Santos Willowfield Tattoo Parlor --- 0 Los Santos Caesar's House --- 0 Weapons --- Vehicles Remington Money $47 Assets --- Drug Facilities --- Items --- Russian MafiaLocation Property Gang Member Story Count Los Santos Grey Imports Arthazzz 0 Las Venturas V-Rock Hotel Newbie41 0 Weapons Chromed Shotgun, 9mm, Combat Shotgun,Grenade Vehicles Sentinal Money $95 Assets --- Drug Facilities --- Items --- San Fierro RifaLocation Property Gang Member Story Count San Fierro Doherty Crack Lab --- 0 San Fierro Pleasure Domes No Escape? 0 Weapons --- Vehicles Stallion Money $0 Assets --- Drug Facilities --- Items --- Da Nang BoysLocation Property Gang Member Story Count San Fierro Pier 69 --- 0 San Fierro Easter Basin Docks --- 0 San Fierro Bay Cargo Ship --- 0 Weapons Colt.45 Vehicles Esperanto Money $76 Assets --- Drug Facilities --- Items --- Sindacco FamilyLocation Property Gang Member Story Count Las Venturas The High Roller --- 0 Las Venturas Meat Plant The Bone County Butcher 0 Liberty City Bitch'n Dog Food eyeswideshut 2 Weapons Desert Eagle Vehicles Mafia Sentinel Money $837 Assets --- Drug Facilities --- Items --- Columbian CartelLocation Property Gang Member Story Count Liberty City Import/Export Garage Forelli_Boy 2 Liberty City Panlantic Construction co. johnson. 3 Liberty City Cartel Mansion --- 0 Liberty City Spank Boat --- 0 Weapons 9mm,Knife Vehicles Cartel Cruiser, Kuruma,Saber Money $1960 Assets --- Drug Facilities Large SPANK Lab=$85 Items --- Weapons=CostBrassknuckles=$5Screwdriver=$6Hammer=$10Pool Stick=$10Golf Club=$15Night Stick=$15Baseball Bat=$10Knife=$8Cleaver=$7Machete=$15Katana=$25Chainsaw=$25Colt 45.=$30Silenced 9mm=$35Python=$50Desert Eagle=$50Tec 9=$45Ingram Mac 10=$55Uzi 9mm=$70MP5=$90Sawn-Off Shotgun=$30Chromed Shotgun=$40Stubby Shotgun=$60Combat Shotgun=$80Rugger=$100AK-47=$125M-4=$150M-16=$200M-60=$300Mini-Gun=$400Flamethrower=$300RPG-Rocket Launcher=$300Stinger Rocket Launcher=$400Hunting Rifle=$50Sniper Rifle=$75PSG-1=$100Moltov=$10Tear Gas=$50Gernade=$75Satchel Charge=$100Thermal Goggles=$75Night Vision=$75Parachute=$50Flowers=$10Double-Ender=$20Vibetator=$40 Vehicles LandVehicle Availability Price Admiral 3 $300 Alpha 3 $350 Angel 3 $500 Banshee 3 $800 BF-400 3 $600 BF Injection 3 $450 Bike 3 $35 BMX 2 $45 Blade 3 $450 Blista Compact 3 $350 Bobcat 3 $200 Bravura 3 $350 Broadway 3 $350 Buccaneer 3 $300 Buffalo 3 $500 Bullet 3 $800 Burrito 2 $200 Burrito, Gang 3 $300 Bus 3 $375 Cadrona 3 $500 Cartel Cruiser 3 $500 Clover 3 $150 Cheetah 2 $750 Club 3 $450 Comet 3 $550 Elegant 3 $450 Elegy 3 $500 Emperor 3 $550 Euros 3 $450 Faggio 3 $100 FCR-900 3 $700 Feltzer 3 $450 Flash 3 $600 Fortune 3 $500 Freeway 3 $500 Glendale 3 $300 Greenwood 2 $200 Hermes 3 $275 Hermes, Cuban 3 $300 Hotknife 3 $500 Huntley 3 $450 Hustler 3 $500 Infernus 3 $800 Intruder 3 $375 Jester 3 $600 Landstalker 3 $400 Majestic 2 $250 Manana 3 $175 Merit 3 $350 Mesa Grande 3 $275 Moonbeam 3 $300 Mountain Bike 3 $50 Nebula 3 $250 NRG-500 3 $775 Oceanic 3 $300 Patriot 3 $650 PCJ-600 3 $650 Perennial 3 $225 Phoenix 3 $600 Picador 3 $350 Pony 2 $300 Premier 3 $400 Previon 3 $400 Rancher 2 $375 Regina 3 $250 Remington 3 $400 Rumpo 2 $200 Rumpo, Hoodz 3 $250 Sabre 2 $500 Sabre Turbo 3 $575 Sanchez 3 $500 Savanna 3 $450 Sentinel 3 $550 Sentinel, Mafia 3 $600 Slamvan 3 $575 Solair 3 $300 Strattford 2 $300 Stallion 3 $400 Stallion, Diablo 3 $550 Stinger 3 $700 Stinger, Yakuza 2 $500 Stratum 3 $375 Stretch 0 $600 Sultan 3 $600 Sunrise 3 $550 Super GT 2 $800 Tahoma 2 $350 Tampa 3 $400 Triad Fish Van 3 $400 Turismo 3 $750 Uranus 3 $550 Vincent 3 $350 Virgo 3 $200 Yardie Lobo 2 $400 Voodoo 2 $275 Voodoo, Haitan 3 $300 Yosemite 3 $300 Wayfarer 3 $400 Walton 3 $250 Washington 3 $500 Willard 3 $350 ZR-350 3 $750 BoatsVehicle Availability Price Coast Guard 2 $200 Cuban Jetmax 2 $400 Dinghy 2 $150 Jetmax 3 $350 Launch 2 $775 Marquis 2 $600 Predator 1 $650 Reefer 2 $200 Rio 2 $500 Speeder 1 $500 Squallo 1 $600 Tropic 1 $700 Vortex 1 $850 AircraftVehicle Availability Price AT-400 3 $3,000 Beagle 3 $950 Cargobob 3 $1,000 Cropduster 3 $775 Dodo 3 $700 Hunter 1 $12,500 Hydra 2 $25,000 Leviathan 1 $1,100 Maverick 2 $850 Nevada 3 $1,125 News Chopper 3 $1,000 Police Maverick 3 $1,250 Raindance 2 $825 Rustler 5 $1,200 Sea Sparrow 5 $1,000 Shamal 3 $1,800 Skimmer 5 $875 Sparrow 5 $700 Stunt Plane 5 $600 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Drug FacilitiesType of Business Cost to Build Daily Profit Scientist $700 $85 Cattle Pasture $450 $45 Cocaine Importation Center $450 $45 Crystal Meth Lab $375 $40 Crack Lab $300 $30 Poppy Field (Opium) $250 $25 Marijuana Farm $150 $15 Distillery (Alcohol) $100 $10 BusinessesType of Business Cost to Build Daily Profit T.V. Station $12,000 $975 Radio Station $11,800 $670 Newspaper Press $10,500 $865 Garbage Company $825 $75 Construction Company $750 $70 Underground Casino $700 $65 Nightclub $600 $60 Strip Club $575 $50 Whore House $550 $55 Bar/Saloon/Pub $500 $50 Protection Ring $400 $45 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Drug Trading Rules1. You can only sell once a day per product of drug.2. You can only sell the amount of product directly below your current amount to make a profit.3. The money you make will go into a seperate bank account for drug money. This money can only be used to purchase drugs as of right now and nothing else. However, to get your foot in the drug door you have to use the money from your gang so choose wisely on when you want to enter the trade.Units of DrugsProduct Amount of Product Cost Marijuana 3.5 grams $40 Marijuana Ounce (28 grams) $240 Marijuana Pound (16 ounces or 448 grams) $2,000 Marijuana Kilo (2.2 pounds or 998 grams) $3,800 Mushrooms 3.5 grams $40 Cocaine 1 gram $100 Cocaine Teener (1.5 grams) $175 Cocaine Ball (3.5 grams) $250 Cocaine Ounce (28 grams) $1,000 Cocaine Pound (16 ounces or 448 grams) $8,000 Cocaine Kilo (2.2 pounds or 998 grams) $14,000 Crack Cocaine 1 gram $50 Heroin 1 gram $65 Amphetamine 1 gram $75 MDMA (ECSTASY) 1 pill $25 MDMA (ECSTASY) 100 pills $1,000 MDMA (ECSTASY) 1,000 pills 6;5,000 MDMA (ECSTASY) 10,000 pills(Club Owner's DREAM) $20,000 LSD (Acid) 1 paper hit $5 LSD (Acid) 10 strip $45 LSD (Acid) Book (100 hits) $350 LSD (Acid) Bible (1000 hits) $2800 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Gta Gamer.'s Guide To A Successful Story. �2004So ya wanna be a wiseguy storywriter eh? You think you gotta the balls?Hmm riiiight. I just thought seeing as my stories are so fantastic and all I'd write up a little quide for the new comers, maybe some of the veterans but generally we all write pretty well. Um I don't advise that any teachers on the board try to use it in their classes. Without permission of course. See copyright ^^ Step 1: Storyline - research key elements. Use tried and tested ideas. We've all seen the occasional gangster flick, so remember the sort of stuff you see in that, then come up with your own elements. I drew alot of inspiration from The Sopranos and GoodFellas which makes sense seeing as I was writing for the mob. Make it interesting but don't make up a heap of unbelievable bullsh*t. For eg. 'I pulled out of the parking lot and 50 niggaz with AK rocked up and started attacking me" is not going to win you any awards.Step 2: Location - Visualise the location you're writing in. For example in the story where my characters attacked a Triad convoy I (in San Andreas) looked for a good place to do it that made sense. I drove around Venturas figuring out routes for the characters to travel, I went and looked at the layout of Caligula's, where the other casinos were, I looked at maps of the city for pieces of writing.Step 3: Typing - I used MS Word to type up all my stories. It highlights spelling mistakes and bad grammar, so we don't get anything like this: -So CJ is back on the block but whit bad news.Apparently he was gambling in LV at the 4 Dragons Casino and lost all of his money.Now he returns whit 15$."What the hell nigga!Whats this f*cking candy bar money!?" -Sweet ravaged."I told you Sweet , I lost the money gambling! THere was this ho and she wanted me to..""WHAT NIGGA!You lost our money over a ho!!?!Damn whose dick is getting us into trouble now." -Sweet getting even more pissed ,"Yeah i no bro ,..But she had killer knockers!" - Cj replied."Damn you nigga , damn you to hell..." -Sweet said and walked away leaving cj whit a confused look on his face.Sweet asked me to go hit on a Balla dope spot whit some OGF Members.So i took Curly Joe , Fat Sugga and Lil Fox and we headed out to the balla dope spot round the corner.Obivously we had no heat so we had to use our fists.Then Curly noticed a drug dealer whit a heater!.We walked up to him and i said :"Yo homie whatya doin?":The yayo pusher replied"I got what you need brotha pure stuff".When we were chatting curly and suga sneaked behind him and grabbed him.We dragged him behind a tall wooden fence and gave him a beating he wont forget.I picked up his Colt 9mm and checked the ammo."Shiit only 6 bullets" well we decided i would go in and blast on those fools.So i went to the door and knocked .A balla came to the door , obivously he was high on weed."You sup homie?" He said."F00L YOu're and your ballas broz are going down.Curly and the posse grabbed him and beat him up while i went in.Inside there was a broken down wall.No furniture at all expect for a rusty iron bed and a toared up sofa.There were 6 ballas in the room all whitout a strap- How convinient.I pulled out the Colt and popped a bullet in each of theyr head.No resistance as they were too high.We headed back to grove and grabbed some beers. Now that is shocking. Step 4: Layout - I found that the best way to do it is to have all action sequences in separate paragraphs. For example when going from one day to the next, leave a space between paragraphs. Put speech onto a new line unless it's the same person talking e.g. "So anyway he says he wants to whack this guy," Jason said. "And that he reckons he'll do it soon." Oh, just a note by the way, with speech brackets " " the correct way to portray a sentence is, "insert writing here," he said. The comma goes before the close speech bracket and the fullstop after he said or any other suitable adjective. Don't use he said, she said all the time either. Stuff like he asked, she replied, Joe shouted, Jane yelled. Put adjectives to describe the way they said it, or what they're doing as they say it. e.g. "F*ck that," he said loading his gun. "Are you joking?" He replied, shocked. Um so yeah. Just doing my part to try and help. Just another thing, no matter what your mother says, length is everything. Thanks to Slo StenRacing for the design Edited July 13, 2006 by johnson. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624082 Share on other sites More sharing options...
baptiste Posted April 6, 2006 Share Posted April 6, 2006 Alright, put me up for Leone Family Mafia, in the Caligulas Palace. Il have a story up soon. And uh...you better update . Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624137 Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted April 6, 2006 Author Share Posted April 6, 2006 Yea don't worry man, it was just a problem with the users. Now that its under my username things should run smoothly. Added. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624156 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie Sindacco Posted April 6, 2006 Share Posted April 6, 2006 (edited) Hey johnson man, put me up for the Sindacco Family in the High Roller, only fit as im Eddie Sindacco? Edited April 6, 2006 by Eddie Sindacco Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624290 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ottae Posted April 6, 2006 Share Posted April 6, 2006 Ottae takes the Four Dragons Casino for GSF and writes 5 chapters I woke up with enthusiasm that morning. I got changed into my "Grove Gear" and headed for the door, not eve thinking about breakfast. I got into my black and green Greenwood and set off down the Las Venturas Strip. I felt my tummy rumble so i stopped at a nearby Chilli Dog Stall and bought my breakfast. Continuing down the Strip, i eventually came to the big golden ring which was the entrance to my new Casino, "The 4-Dragons" It was originally the Triads but they left so i got it on be half of Grove Street. I'd been fixing it up for months but today, it was finally ready, the start of Grove Street in Las Venturas. I pushed open the giant doors and looked around. It looked gleaming, Golden and Ruby paint covered the walls, giving it the Oriental feeling i'd hoped for. There was still a bit of work to do but it would only take 5 hours, plenty of time. Suddenly the doors flew open, i turned arund to see Wu-Zi-Mu standing at the doors, smiling down at me. One of his Triads helped him down the steps towards me. When he came closer, i could see a big bruise around his cheek, it was probably from walking into something. "Ottae! This is your big day. Don't , what ever you do, mess this place up like i did." Wu-Zi-Mu Said, he then muttered something along the lines of, 'Midgets, honestly'. "Hi Woozie" I said warmly, "Nice of you to drop by, i wanted to ask you a favour. As you know, it's the opening night tonight and i need a little extra security. Don't get me wrong, Grove Street is tough, but two gangs are better than one, catch my drift?" "I understand, The Mafia seem to have a vendetta against any new business in the area, expecially when it's a local gang running it. I'll be happy to help, anything to assist your success." Woozie beamed at me. "May I have a look round?" "O..k..you have a LOOK round, If that'll work." After the tour, wesat down at the bar and talked about Gang Territory, the conversation then drifted onto the opening. "It's good times for Grove Street Ottae, I can see this Casino being the best in Las Venturas." Said Woozie, taking sip of his Martini. "So long as we can keep the Mafia at bay. I've got a few homies here with me in Las Venturas, they should be here soon. I've still got some work to do." I "What time is the opening" asked Woozie "20:00 sharp, we're expecting most of Vinewood, including Madd Dogg and i suppose Salvatore Leone" I sighed "I just hope it goes smoothly and nothing kicks off" I added "I'm sure with your security, everything will be ok." Woozie finished off his Martini and stood up, "see you tonight Ottae, good luck." At this, Woozie walked to the door, with the help of some Triads, and left the Casino, leaving me sitting at a bar stool, staring at the bottom of my Beer glass, Thinking of what the evening ahead. 19:30, Half an hour to go before the guests arrive for the opening night. I was sitting at the bar again, enjoying the 8th beer of the day. I had to admit that i was nervous about the evening. Not only were the rich and famous coming, there was the probably going to be Salvatore Leone, the leader of the Leone Family Mafia. It would of been ok, but Woozie's Triad's that he had promised had not turned up yet and now it was 19:45. I had 30 Grove Street homies with me but the Triads were for outdoor security and they wouldn't go a miss. "Ottae!" Shouted a Grove Street member, "Look up dawg!" i did as he said and looked at the glass dome that was the roof and saw Triads were walking over it, guarding the top. "Finally! There here!" A wave of relief went though me and i sat down once again on my bar stool."Woozie should turn up soon" I said hopefully. 5 minutes late, there was a knock at the door. Expecting it too be Woozie and stood up opened the door. To my surprise, Madd Dogg was standing in front of me, holding a bottle of expensive looking wine. "These Triad fools are trippin' do they know who I am?" Said Madd Dogg. "I wouldn't moan, it means they're doing a good job! Hows it goin' Dogg?" I asked while showing him some "homie love" "It's good Ottae, I'm in the studio these days, recording with CJ" announced Madd Dogg happily. "Great! How is CJ? Haven't seen him in ages! Is he comin' tonight?" "He's fine G, but he ain't comin' tonight, Girl issues, y'know." I looked at my watch, 19:55, people should start arriving soon, including Woozie, who turned up 5 minutes later followed by another guy who was dark, slim and tall, he said his name was "Bobby Renno" and he was a personal friend of Woozie's. After they came, so did everyone else, Vinewood Stars such as "Prad Bitt" and "Com Truise" There were also business men like "Bichard Ranson". Every thing went without a hitch, even my speech went well, every joke, people laughed at and they understood everything i said. It was a great evening until a Triad came smashing through the Domed Roof. "Ey! Don't-a-crease-a-ma shirt!" They Italian accent rattled through the deadly silent casino. Then at least 30 Mafia jumped through the hole, including the creased-suit man. All the guests ducked under Slot Machines and Roulette tables while Grove Street open fired on the tresspassing Mafia. I crouch below the bar and looked round the shelves for a Tec-9. Just after i found it, the Budweiser mirror above me shattered and bits of glass covered my back. I shook off the debris and stood up. I opened fired on the Mafia, killing at least 3 of them, another bullet flew past my head, breaking a bottle of Tequila on the shelf behind me. I duct under the bar once more and after 10 seconds, the room went silent. Confused i stood up slowly to see that Grove Street had surrounded the Mafia with guns pointing at them. "What is the meaning of your Intrusion?" I asked. No one answered until the doors flew open, Salvatore stood at the top of the steps, half-expecting the Mafia to have taken control, but he was taken aback to find Grove Street in control. "Ottae! A pleasure to meet you!" Salvatore frowned, as he looked round to see more Grove Street standing around the edge of the Casino. "sorry i was a little hard coming in, my boys tend to get a bit upset to see Triads so they, well, you can see the damage." Salvatore looked at the smashed ceiling. "What do you want?" I repeated. "To join the party of course!" Salvatore answered. "Sorry, invitation only." This didn't seem to please, Salvatore as he clicked his fingers loudly and a second later, there was a loud bang on the roof somewhere & more glass dropped from the dome. This gave the encircled Mafia a chance to grab their weapons from the floor and point them at Grove Street. I duct behind the bar again expecting gun fire but the room was silent again. "The tabled have turned Ottae! Now i shold get outta here within the next 5 minutes, it's gonna get a bit dusty." Salvatore smirked at me from behind his bodyguards. All i could do was stare at the beautiful chandelier above and, without thinking, i stood up and covered the chandelier with Tec-9 bullets. The huge glass structure broke from it's hold and fell to the floor, crushing at least 10 Mafia. Salvatore took this as a sign to leave and him with the rest of the Mafia, left in an instant. I expected for everyone to leave after that, but they didn't, they just carried on like nothing had happened, I guess they are used to this kind of stuff, living in San Andreas and all. I sat down at the bar and a man dressed in green walked up to me, i figured he was Grove Street but as he walked closer, gun in his hand, i saw that it was Bobby Renno. Before i could say 'hello' he pointed the gun at my face. I stayed motionless, until the trigger was finally pulled... Fortunately, the gun didn't fire at me, it was fired at Bobby Reeno, who instantly fell into a heep at my feet. "Thanks for that Woozie." I said, wiping the sweat from my face. "I make it a priority to kill traitors." said Woozie through gritted teeth. "You came pretty quickly!" "Well we had a hunch that he was up to no good, he kept going to the bathroom and looking around to check that no one had followed him, Chong Woo told me he that Reeno was walking up to you with a gun so i follow him and as he held the gun up to your face, i shot him in the back." Woozie sat down at the bar stool and ordered a Martini. "Thank you Chong, if there's anything i can do for the Triads, don't hesitate to ask." I ordered a Whisky and sipped it slowly to get my nerves back. I was still shaking from the shock. The rest of the night went perfectly. People from all kinds of different faces walked up to me and complimented me on the party and how well i had dealt with the Mafia breaking through. Slowly, everyone left, including Madd Dogg who insisted on donating some money to replace the dome roof, in the end I gave in and he handed me a cheque. I looked up at my broken dome roof that had been covered in a red and gold glittery cover so it wasn't too much of an eye saw. Woozie stood up and shook my hand. "Thankyou for a lovely evening" He said kindly "Thankyou for saving my life" I joked. We both laughed and i shook Chong Woo's hand, he smiled and said, "It was a pleasure to be Mr. Wu-Zi-Mu's eyes sir" he bowed and they both headed for the door. "Remember," I shouted after them, "If you ever need me, just ring." Woozie bowed as did Chong and they both walked out the door, followed by several Triads. I stayed there for another 2 hours after my guests had left, as did some Grove homies. We were cleaning up the little that the guests had left and we were also cleaning up the broken glass left on the carpet. It was now 3:00 am and I sat at the bar and had another Whisky. The shock had gone now but was still going over the situation in my head until a homie called 'Explo - Zae' bid farewell and left. After all of Grove Street Families had gone, i walked out the door and padlocked it. opened the door to my newly dented Greenwood and headed down the strip. after I passed the now closed kiosk that i bought my breakfast at that morning, i heard a faint ticking. Extremely troubled, i looked in the glove compartment to see a time bomb with 3 seconds left until it 'expired'. "sh*t!" I screamed. I picked up the bomb that now read '2' and hurled it out of the window. It landed in the a plant pot in front of Caligula's Palace and in my mirror, i saw soil spread everywhere along with a huge 'bang'. My heart was racing once more. What made things worse, was the flashing blue lights speeding up behind me. "Aw crap!" I shouted. And changing into forth gear, i put my foot to the floor and turned into an alleyway, backwards. Reversing with all my dented Greenwood could take, i finally reached the end of the alleyway and just as i spun out of the opening, the pursuing Police car collided with another that had just zoomed past me and they both ended up upside down. "Nicely done" I thought to myself and i sped of back to my safe house, where 4 more police cars waited for me... Chapter 4 - In Cuffs I sped up to penetrate the road block, unfortunetly my Greenwood wasn't fast ennough or powerful enough to smash through the Police cars and next thing i knew, i was hugging my green airbag. A cop ran upto my door and pulled it open. "You are under arrest for using illegal explosives, you may remain silent, but anything you do say may be held against you in court" Said the Cream-Uniformed officer, pointing his gun at me. "sh*t" I said simply and put my head back into the air bag. The cop grabbed me, pulled me to the floor and cuffed me.As i was dragged towards the Police car, i saw my Greenwood being towed away. I cursed again and ducked my head into the cop car, resting my head against the head-rest provided. The sirens went and i looked out the back window to see the Tow-truck, carrying my car to the police impound yard. "Your in a lot of trouble boy." Said the arresting officer from the front. "Blowing sh*t up like that ain't good for the economy. You gonna get locked up for a long time" "Not if i can supply the evidence i need, I got a lawyer you know" I scowled at him. "Well you kinda boys don't normally got Lawyers" He replied "What do you mean 'you kinda boys'?" I asked. "You know, Gang folk, you normally just shoot people and expect the cops not to chase you." "I'm a bit more civilised than that, it's not like I threw a bomb out my car with pleasure, if i didn't, it would have blown me up, along with the car." I looked out the window and saw that we were nearly at the police station. "So your saying it was planted?" The cop asked "I can't say, I don't know. All i know is that i didn't leave a timb bomb to go off in my car, with me in it." "So what one of these Gangs are you from? Wait, lemme guess, Ballas?" "f*ck off man, you know sh*t" I shouted. the journey was silent until two minutes later, we arrived in front of Las Venturas Police Department.The cop got out and opened the door, i stepped out and head towards the door, the cop followed and grabbed my left arm. "Slow down boy, we've got all night" He wheezed. "Lets just get this over with" I said as the cop pushed the door open and pulled me towards the enquiries desk. "Got me a gang member" the Cop said joyfully "Well done Ed, what's that, 4th one this year?" Joked the receptionist. "Very funny Barbara" he replied.He took a key of her and pushed me towards a door marked 'Cells' a little while down the corridor he pushed me into an empty cell and locked the door. "You get your phone call in five minutes." At that he walked off and left me sitting on the single bed, staring at the wall. 'Not again' I thought, 'This time it wasn't even my fault, Rosenburg should be able to sort me out, if not i'm firing his ass" The five minutes past slowly as i thought about what to say. At last the guard came and opened the cell door and led me off down the corridor. "One phone call" he muttered. I picked up the hand set and dialed Ken Rosenburg's number from memory. My heart sank as he didn't pick up, after another four seconds, he picked up with the familiar greeting, "H..Hello?" He said "Rosenburg, I'm at the LV police station" "aw geez! What have you done now Ottae?" "Shutup and listen, The Mafia planted a time bomb in my car so i chucked it out the window, blowing up half the sidewalk. The cops saw me and chased me. I thought i got away but they blocked off the road and my Greenwood wasn't strong enoough to bash through" "So lemme get this straight, you blew up the sidewalk and then crashed into a road block, ARE YOU CRAZY?" "I thought i may as well try and escape" "I gotta be honest Ot, it's not gonna be easy, 2 - 3 months minimum" "2 - 3 MONTHS?" I shouted "Keep it down Ottae! You'll wake Kent Paul!" "What's he gonna do? Pop me? I'm annoyed Rosy! I can't run a Casino from behind bars!" "Well your going to have to find a replacement, get the Tri-ads to run it again" "You have to arrange it, one phone call, remember?" "Tommy, calm down I'll sort it all out!" "Tommy? Who the f*ck is Tommy? Anyway, sort it out, or I'll get Grove Street to sort you out" "Bye Ottae" "Ye, Bye" I was lead back to my cell where I sat for at least 3 hours before a riot broke out. It started when a punk was allowed out his cell for a phone call, he grabbed the phone and snapped it off the line. The Police man reached for his gun but was clobbered round the race with the phone. The punk reached for the keys and opened a few of the cells, including mine. As four of the prisoners and me ran for the door, five cops blocked the way and battered the front couple of prisoners with their night sticks. I saw a gap between the cops and dived for it, to my delight i stood up on the other side of the cops. I headed for the door but a beafy guard tackled me to the floor, cuffed me and smacked me his nightstick. It's been 3 months since i was locked up. I woke up on the morning of the trial with a headache. A bent cop called R. Machowski had slipped the prisoners some beers. I'd been dry for 3 Months so as soon as I'd finished my fourth pint, I was wasted and now i am lumbered with a hangover. "What the hell is up with tyou this morning Ottae?" Asked Dave, the friendliest cop, ever. "I slept funny and hit my head on the bar, now I've got a headache" I lied "Big day m'boy! After today you'll either be free or have 20 years in prison" "I've got a guy called Rosenburg defending me, lets hope he holds up" "I'll be prayin' for you" Dave said kindly "Thanks Mr. Works!" I said, rubbing my head, it did feel like I had been hit with a steel bar. I got up from my bed and looked in the mirror at my rough reflection. I was the only white Grove Street member, but no one seemed to care." An hour later, two prison guards turned up with Rosenburg behind them. "This is it" said Rosenburg, he was sweating buckets. "Lets get it over with" I sighed amd stood at the opening of the cell door while the beafy security guard that had tackled me 3 months before, handcuffed me. I was extremely nervous about the trial, the journey to the courtroom seemed to take no time at all, and before i knew it, i was sitting in a wooden chair next to Rosenburg and another cop. "All rise, Case 233, illegal use of explosives outside a casino on the Las Venturas Strip. How do you plead?" asked the Judge. "Not Guilty" I said at once, even though it was a lie, I was guilty but it probably wouldn't go down well if I pleaded guilty. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624305 Share on other sites More sharing options...
B Rob Posted April 6, 2006 Share Posted April 6, 2006 (edited) I'll take the Ballas, The Pig Pen . I'll have a story up in a couple hours. I gotta go to wrestling right now. Edited April 6, 2006 by Cuban Warlord Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624390 Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted April 6, 2006 Author Share Posted April 6, 2006 Ottae i love you<3, 78$ Cuban Warlord, added. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624405 Share on other sites More sharing options...
B Rob Posted April 6, 2006 Share Posted April 6, 2006 Ballas - The Pig Pen - April 6th, 2006 Chapter 1: B-Dup's Bitches! The scene opens up in the parking lot of the Pig Pen and night time is upon us. The only lights in the area are the few streetlights surrounding the street and the neon lights coming from the club. The wind picks up a little and vehicles begin to arrive at the Pig Pen. It’s no secret that the Pig Pen is the center of Drug activity and Prostitution when it comes to the ballas. The cops would never bust them though because the Pig Pen is heavily guarded with local ballas trying to prove themselves. Local pimps can be seen walking inside with their ho’s and drug dealers may be seen making deals with local addicts. The camera pans around into the back alley. Its very dark and one vehicle can be made out of the darkness. 5 ballas can be seen leaning on a Red Majestic. They pass around a joint and a couple of them have a beer. The Warlord of this crew’s name is Cuban. He stands with a joint in hand and a red bandanna wrapped around his arm and forehead. “Oh man that bitch was banging dog” shouted Big D. Big D is known around Cubans grew as the muscle. He’s very big but, also very dumb. His parents died at a very young age so he turned to the ballas and the streets for love. “Hell Yea she was! She got it going on nigga” Cuban says. “Fo Real Bro, dat ass was tight” shouts Big D again. The gang continues to chill out for a moment and the Warlord Cuban begins to speak again. “Listen fools, you know if we get caught out here not patrolling, that B-Dup will kick our asses.” “You got that right man” comments Tigger. Tigger was only 16 and the youngest member of the gang. He was young but had a lot of heart. His brother Charles stood next to him awaiting orders. The last member of the smokey was a real joker. All he did was pull pranks and goof around. Cuban hated having Smokey in his Pig Pen crew but what B-Dup says goes. Out of nowhere the side door to the Pig Pen opens up and out walks B-Dup. With a hard look on his face he turns and stares at all of his individually. Behind him walks Jerome (The Clubs Head Bouncer). Jerome throws the lifeless body of a black man onto the pavement beside us. “What the f*ck yall niggas doin? Yall wouldn’t be happening to take a break would ya? I pay yall niggas and for what? Goofing off?” B-Dup sees the joint on the ground and he begins to laugh. He lowers his head and then hits Charles in the groin. Charles falls to the pavement and B-Dup kicks him. “Yall niggas think I’m playin?” B-Dup continues to assault Charles as Tigger out fury runs at B-Dup. Cuban snatches tigger and warns him that it wouldn’t be smart. “Please quit it B-Dup! My brother is very sorry, and he won’t do it again” shouts Tigger! Jerome picks the lifeless body of the black man and puts it in the backseat of the Red Majestic. “Why don’t a couple of you dumb niggas be useful for once and dump the body of this fool in the ocean. He hasn’t paid up for his drugs so he had it coming.” Cuban, Smokey, and Big D get in the Majestic with the dead drug dealer. Tigger stays with his fallen brother Charles as B-Dup and Jerome go back inside the Pig Pen. The Majestic drives away as Tigger holds his brother. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624519 Share on other sites More sharing options...
blindsk8er6d9 Posted April 6, 2006 Share Posted April 6, 2006 I got dibbs on Emmets for GSF. I PMed Ottae asking if I could take it. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624544 Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted April 6, 2006 Author Share Posted April 6, 2006 Cuban, try and make it more of a story. Insted of a script, It was great and full of detail, just try and make it more of a story. 65$ Blind, added Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624591 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ottae Posted April 6, 2006 Share Posted April 6, 2006 WTF? $78 for 5 stories!? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624712 Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted April 6, 2006 Author Share Posted April 6, 2006 146$? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624808 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryce. Posted April 7, 2006 Share Posted April 7, 2006 WTF? $78 for 5 stories!? That's what happens when you play make believe gang leader. I'm glad this is back, it use to seem pretty cool, though I never got into it. Is everybody starting from fresh? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624927 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ottae Posted April 7, 2006 Share Posted April 7, 2006 146$? that'll do @Bryce - Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3624947 Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted April 7, 2006 Author Share Posted April 7, 2006 Bryc, you mean as in a gang that is starting from scratch. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3625064 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lochie_old Posted April 7, 2006 Share Posted April 7, 2006 I'd like to join the Columbian Cartel... Spank Boat please! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3625549 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snares Posted April 7, 2006 Share Posted April 7, 2006 Sign me up for the Russian Mafiya! I remember this. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3625660 Share on other sites More sharing options...
drive- by Posted April 7, 2006 Share Posted April 7, 2006 drive- by joins the triads at the four dragons casino Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3625669 Share on other sites More sharing options...
B Rob Posted April 7, 2006 Share Posted April 7, 2006 So exactly how do you want us to write these stories?What goes on that day at the Pig Pen? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3626416 Share on other sites More sharing options...
No Escape? Posted April 7, 2006 Share Posted April 7, 2006 (edited) In short, Warlord, yes. I've done this before long ago on a forgotten forum, and the basic idea is just to write a story on the events that your gang encounters. Hope I helped with my vague description. Also, I'll take the San Fierro Rifa, Pleasure Domes, just because I like the challenge of building a gang from the bottom up. Johnson, it seems that you already have 3 stories up for the Rifa, despite the fact they have no money and no one is currently in the gang. You'd best change that. P.S- For the record, I'm trying out a new font color, just for the fun of it. Thoughts? Edited April 7, 2006 by No Escape? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3626728 Share on other sites More sharing options...
D Jones Posted April 7, 2006 Share Posted April 7, 2006 Hey Johnson., I'll take another shot at this. So give me the Leone Family at Salvatore's Mansion. I'll try to write up as story. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3626790 Share on other sites More sharing options...
B Rob Posted April 7, 2006 Share Posted April 7, 2006 Yea it kinda helped man, thanks. I'm going to start my story now. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3626792 Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted April 9, 2006 Author Share Posted April 9, 2006 Front page Updated! Snares, you have to choose a asset. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3629147 Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted April 9, 2006 Author Share Posted April 9, 2006 Columbian Cartel "Introduction" Shoreside Vale, March 16 2001. "Mayor Frank Tompson, Crime in Liberty City is on the rise. What do you plan on doing to stop this?" comes from the small speakers on the T.V. "There is only one way to stop this sort of thing, we have to place more police officers on the street" Replied the mayor "But sir, you said that last month, and Crime has still risin?!" barked the reporter. "Well, I" I hit the remote and the T.V goes off. Shoreside Vale I sit up from the couch and scan the room, "tap tap tap tap" comes a noise from the window. It's pouring rain outside, I stand up and approach the window. And scan the city of Liberty City, my appartment sits in the projects of Shoreside Vale, the slums run by teenage and young adult black males dealing narcotics. But there are two sides to them the Red Jacks and the Purple Nines, have been close friends for a small time. Neither of them trust eachother, the Jacks are run by a carasmatic young adult named D-Ice, and the Nines are run by a large pimp name Thrice. Both crews don't trust each other one wrong move and all out war can break out on the projects. The Nines are planning to expand there territory over the rest of Shoreside Vale. And the Jacks are just trying to look after there assets. Stauton Island The Yardies and The Yakuza run Stauton Island, The Yardies biggest assets is Crack and Marijunna. The Yakuza are very defensive of what they have now, and are ready to take on any man of a diffrent race who attepmts to move in on there Territory, they have plans on building a Casino, but are also big on illegal street racing and prostitution. A Yakuza Lieutenant has just been murderd and all fingers point towards the Yardies. Both clans are ready to go to war. Portland Run by a Mafioso Meatball by the name of Salvatore Leone and the rest of The Leone Family. They own a strip club called, Sex Club 7 and small resturant that goes by the name of. Mamas Resturant and a garage near the docks called Joey's Garage. The whole family doesn't touch drugs except Joey often dips his hand in the cookie jar and takes some of the drug money home with him. On another side of Portland, a young Latino gang going by the name of The Diablos, run by a large man named El Burro he owns a small Sex Shop in the Red Light District, he also does alot of Drug Trafficing across Portland. And in Chinatown, yes you guess it is run by The Triads. The Triads have a large amount of assets that go from Liberty City to the state on San Andreas. There largest asset in Liberty City, there is a large fish factory that does well for it's self. My name is Antonio Rodrgez, my crew is a small time Cartel. Dealing here and there, boosting cars. And any other sort of the matter. But now it's time to go legit. And take over Liberty City. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3630857 Share on other sites More sharing options...
iknowevrything Posted April 9, 2006 Share Posted April 9, 2006 i'll take leone mafia family: joey's garage if it's not taken i'll write a story the now Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3630961 Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted April 9, 2006 Author Share Posted April 9, 2006 added. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3631068 Share on other sites More sharing options...
iknowevrything Posted April 9, 2006 Share Posted April 9, 2006 (edited) JOEY'S GARAGE Tuesday, 9th, 951pm Joey's Garage, Libert City, Portland It was Paul "iknowevrything" Logan's first day at his new job at Joey's Garage. As Paul was fixing one of the Mafia Sentenials that had been damaged in a crash he noticed some tall amn entering the garage. Paul stands up Paul: Hello, who's there Toni: You must be Joey's new mechanic then Paul: Yeah, i started today Toni: The names Toni Cipriani am a close friend of joey's, is he around. Paul: Yeah he's in the office sorting out the papers. Toni: Thanks, i'll see you later Paul: Later man. Toni walks off with a swagger into joey's main office. The office was only a small space it was painted a tuckish yellow and most of the paint had started to peel off. Paul watched as Toni and Joey talked hell knows what about but must be something important. Paul went back to work on the Sentenial. Picks up torque Wrench Paul had nearly finished the car with only now needing to torque the wheel nuts left. As he finished he pplaced the wrench back into the box and took it back to the store room. Toni comes out of the office with Joey. Joey: I can see your'e a regular at this work, youv'e done a pretty damm good job.looks brand new. Paul: Well, Thanks i tuned up the engine a bit for you ading an extra 20 bhp. Joey: Nice, you can take it a spin later. Paul: Oh Cool Toni: Right c'mon we better be moving. Joey: Oh, yeah....Paul going to lock up for us i'll not be back so when your finished ay. Paul: Ok Joey: Cya tomorrow Toni: later kid. When Toni and Joey left Paul was left alone he was excited cause he worked for the Mafia. As it drew nearer closing time Paul started to clean up things he cleaned the floor moved all the cars to the back and drove the Mafia sentenial outside. got out and started to pull down the shutters they jammed half way so he gave them a hard slap to unjam them. Paul locked the garage up, he then jumped into the car, turned on the iginition and listened to the loud thrum sound it gave off. He pulled away and headed home Paul stayed in Hepburn Heights Across forom the petrol station. Paul drove along fast wanting to test out the newly moddified car. He looked at his dash and noticed he needed Gas Paul: Dam nearly out, betta go and fill her up. Paul pulled up next to gas port 3 and stepped out of the car. He went round to take off his fuel cap, then took the gas hose and started to fill her up. He spent just over $30 on fuel Enough to get to work and back home. Paul walked over to the pay station when he noticed a robbery taking place. Paul: What the f*ck......sh*t he's got a gun Paul ran back over to the sentenial to colect the bat that was in the boot. He crept over to the shp and quietly snuck in. Not knowing to the robbers atention he was present. The shopkeeper noticed paul standing behind the masked robber but didn't give it away. Robber: Give me the f*cking mmoney nigga. Shopkeper: No you egt out of my shop now.or i call the police. Robber: GIve me the money or i'll blow your ficking brains out. Shopkeeper: NO The robber and the shopkeepr kept on argueing when the robber noticed paul in one of the mirors behind the cashiers desk. Robber turns around Robber: What the f*ck Paul belts him across the head twice bursting his head open in the proccess. Robber: Arrrrg my f*cking haed Paul attacks him another five times knocking him out. Paul hone the cops and get rid of the tapes..ok. Shopkeeper: OKAY. Paul ran abck out side and got in the sentenial and drove off home. Edited April 9, 2006 by iknowevrything Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3631187 Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted April 10, 2006 Author Share Posted April 10, 2006 iknowevrything, try and edit it a bit before you post it, there where quite a few spelling errors. 21$ Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3631390 Share on other sites More sharing options...
baptiste Posted April 10, 2006 Share Posted April 10, 2006 Alright story time: Introduction. Things were going well for the don at the calinguas palace, eveything was all nice and clean. No durty cops coming snooping around smelling for illegalness, no f*cking chinese trying to Rob youre Casiono, things were going well for him. But the fact is, he missed the hit, he missed how he hung the traitors in his group, how he skirmished inside other casinos to mess things up. He had done his best to reatore peace and quiet, but now he regrets it. So with his little brain hes gonna find a wat to create sh*t, without it comming back on his Casino... Chapter 1: "WTF do you mean?" The don was sitting in his big leather chair looking at old papers when all of a sudden "Knock Knock". "-Come in, who is it? -You called for me? -Oh, its you, yes I did call for you. Sit down sit down, coffe? Cigar? -Cigar. -Alright, the point is I need sh*t to happen, thats all, I need sh*t involving me, other casinos and little rich motherf*ckers. -So? WTF do you mean? -Im gonna have you kill a few guys. -Thats what I do. - Il call you with a list of guys and instructions for the kill. -Okay, you dont contact me for 24 hours. -Very well, I did not get youre name. -That is classifeied information. -Ahh I see, au revoir. -Bye. The don stayed perplex as the man exited. As soon as he did another man entered and the don said this very quickly, "-Follow him, kill him with 5 9mm bullets in his head. Now. -Yes don. -Go." The person exited as the don looked at himself in satisfaction. Chapter 2: "What??" "-Uhh don....we have a problem. -What kind of problem? -A dangerous one. -Well? -You you know youre guy that you send out yesterday to kill that other guy? -Well....... -Come on now -We...we found his head in the mailbox. -What?? -And on his forhead was written in blood "Don, I shall get you, by life or death.". -Hmmm, interesting, i was looking for sh*t and sh*t found me. Perfect. -Perfect? -Yes, thank you for this valuable information, turn security mode to red. -Sure boss. -Before you go, make sure that that guy knows it was me that tried to kill him. You understand? -Yeah." --------------------------------- Alright I know each chapter is very small but I start a chapter at each different scene. Hope you liked it. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/240504-buyg-build-up-your-gang/?do=findComment&comment=3631776 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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