Eddies Police

[Oddsock]

 

Wait....wtf is happening? -Cheeburger, Cheeburger!

[Sickness]

Me and Eddie are going to Glasgow for our anniversery party. OdDsOcKs here cool.

[Oddsock]

Whoa whoa whoa. This is not cool.

 

Eddie, you gotta take this seriously. This "Glasgow anniversary party" is a nice little idea to keep you from saying the word "excuse" to not pay attention to this.

 

If you really want to make this interesting, don't make your force so powerful, with all those awards and years. It should be starting out new. -Cheeburger, Cheeburger!

[Oddsock]

Whoa whoa whoa. This is not cool.

 

Eddie, you gotta take this seriously. This "Glasgow anniversary party" is a nice little idea to keep you from saying the word "excuse" to not pay attention to this.

 

If you really want to make this interesting, don't make your force so powerful, with all those awards and years. It should be starting out new. -Cheeburger, Cheeburger!

[E.A.B.]

I stumbled into this topic out of sheer boredom. But I have a small suggestion, I don't know if it's been done before:

 

What you could do is make it like the whole "gang territory" thing. Get a map of the whole of Los Santos (minus the countryside unless you could fit it into the map and want to take this that far) and mark every area. Like in the game, mark up gang territories, purple being the ballas, green the grove etc etc. Hell, put in more gangs if you want, how about the gang cesar was in? The one you join in "Los Desperados" with Cesar. That one shows up a lot but doesn't have any territories. Point is, fill the map up with gangs. All you have to do is take a screenshot of the one in the game, or google it.

 

 

You could leave some areas blank and label them as simply "run down area with high crime rate". Or others as "High sales of narcotics". Point to this whole thing is to take back Los Santos, make it a better place for its citizens by taking over all of these "territories". You take over areas little by little, when an area has very fewer gang members or when its reached a lesser amount of crime and its safe for the cops to drive through, get out the map of San Andreas and put a sheriffs badge over the colored area. A sheriffs badge like this one:

 

 

(just google "sheriffs badge" and you'll get a ton of these)

 

The area is now the police departments. It works just like the game, only instead of trying to take other gang territories for your own gang, your trying to reduce crime in all of San Andreas. When the crime rate has lowered, mark it down, it is now the police departments.

 

 

Then get a map of Las Venturas. Las Venturas didn't have that many gangs, so lets make the problem in this state all about corrupt officers and the mafia. Anyway, its basically the same as the last one, only with corrupt officers and the mafia. Whoever the hell is in charge sends out street cops, officers, whoever the hell you can to check out certain areas or take care of a gang fight taking place. They come back here, and they report back. Heres their chance to use their imagination. Right up a report, make it sound as a report, first person perspective. It could look something like this:

 

 

Area: Train Station, Doherty

Rank: Street Cop

Officer:Clown.

 

We have reason to believe that this area is where narcotics are being sold. Me and my fellow teammates (blah blah and blah blah) were investigating the area. We heard gun shots fired in the air etc etc.....

 

Theres only one problem, some people might make exagerated stories and such. They might say that 10 guys came down the street and start shooting at them. That's where the map is useful yet again. On the map you will mark down how bad the area is. Kind of like in the game. So if an area is the color purple, Ballas are in that area. How many Ballas is the question. That's why, on the map, you will color it dark purple or light purple. The darker the color, the more gang members. This will control some of the absurdity in some stories. So instead of reporting that "20 guys came and chased me down the street, while shooting their AK's and 50 police helicopters backing me up" we will get "I saw 2 ballas, got into a car chase with them but they got away". But this presents a problem. How about the areas with no gang activity, the ones that are simply poor and have crack dealers there. On the map, the areas are simply left white. Well, here you can exagerate the story as much as you can, but don't make it unbeliaveable. Say you went into an abandned apartment were you found a guy smoking crack on the stair case, use your imagination.

 

Make up a chart or something. For each gang member incarcerate +$100.00 which can go towards weapons, enhancements for your car (if you have one) a bike or you might be able to use it for something else. Bribe a politician, whatever you want.

 

So there is an end to this, but I know that with a leader like this:

 

 

Listen I`m going to be out of town for two days, I have to go to Glasgow for the our anniversity party, I have to say a few words, I`m alloud to take someone, so iff you want to come please tell me before I leave for the airport. This means Sickness is in charge, but if Sickness comes OdSoCkS is in charge.

 

I know it's gonna end before it even finishes.

 

Other things that could go into this little game:

 

-You have various ranks in the game. We all know that inspectors and street cops won't be writing up similiar reports (stories). As far as I know, street cops don't have AK-47's and get in the middle of drug busts. So obviously, depending on your rank, your stories will be different. A bit of variety, if you wanna read an action story filled with helicopters, read the SWAT's reports. Wanna read about a high speed chase or a small scale gang war, read the street cops stories. Like CSI? I think the inspectors reports will be to your liking. Of course, everyone has to start somewhere, you might not like what you start as. But you do get promoted, if you're at a certain spot and don't want to move any further up the ladder, just refuse the promotion.

 

-Just because your an inspector doesn't mean that something crazy won't happen to you. Remember, "sh*t happens". You might be investigatin the scene of the crime (think that's what they do) when a gang member starts shoting or maybe a gang war occurs right in front of your eyes. I know it sounds kind of stupid, but maybe investigators can go under cover. Get more information about these gangs. Inspectors have the most dangerous job, so their stories should be...interesting. Or you could just make a new branch called "undercover cops". The undercover cops reports will be all about the gangs affairs. This way, you can still have "gang stories" and it'll make this a bit more entertaining. They'll still keep contact with the officers and nearby precincts, but, obviously, not much.

 

-Seeing as how you'll be operating in Los Santos, San Fierro and Las Venturas, you should have three commisioners. Each controlling either Los Santos, Las Venturas or San Fierro. I mean, I highly doubt one commissiner can handle three states. Of course, the commissioners always keep contact and write to each other on the state of their...state.

 

 

 

okay, maybe it wasn't a small suggestion. But there is no actual plot. It just seems like a little "tell us your cop stories" type of thing. Just get some, you know, solid ground for this whole thing here.

 

I've done a lot of typing and editing, I don't know if any of it makes sense, but I'm hitting reply anyway.

Edited March 1, 2006 by E.A.B.

[Sickness]

Ummm, good Idea, I like tit...s

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

Me and Sickness arive at Easter Bay Airport and get a coach back to Los Santos Docks, we are picked up by the loyle OdSoCkS in his police car that has the words Chief OdSoCk written on it,

 

we headed back to the station but passing the brige over Grove Street we seen 12 Ballas fighting 8 Grove Streets we couldn`t call for the S.W.A.T team because there not big enough so we took a life risking stunt,

 

OdSoCk stopped the car and we quickly ran towards them and 3 Ballas ran away.

 

that left 9 Ballas and 8 Groves, they didn`t take much notice of us, they kept fighting, five Groves were murderedso the two Groves left ran, the other Ballas tied running because there were to tired to fight because of the fighting, we called for a van, after 5 minutes they turned themselves in because they were badly wounded and needed treatment, we had Brrad0 take them in the van and OdSoCk kept the car behind the van the whole way back to the station just incase something happened, we pulled up outside the station and Sickness and Brrad0 took them to cells, I just gave OdSoCk some bonus money for looking after things.

 

and the Ballas that were wounded are ok and recieved treatment and are now doing 6 months in the cells

Edited March 4, 2006 by Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die

[Sickness]

That sucked, learn better English, and his name is OdDsOcK, not OdDsOcKS...

[MI7]

PLAN

So, in other words....just about the same as ROSA?

[E.A.B.]

 

Me and Sickness arive at Easter Bay Airport and get a coach back to Los Santos Docks, we are picked up by the loyle OdSoCkS in his police car that has the words    Chief  OdSoCkS written on it,

 

we headed back to the station but passing the brige over Grove Street we seen  12 Ballas fighting 8 Grove Streets we couldn`t  call for the S.W.A.T team because there not big enough so we took a life risking stunt,

 

OdSoCkS stopped the car and we quickly ran towards them and 3 Ballas ran away.

 

that left 9 Ballas and 8 Groves, they didn`t take much notice of us, they kept fighting, fifve Groves were murderedso the two Groves left ran, the other Ballas tied running because there were to tired to fight because of the fighting, we called for a van, after 5 minutes they turned themselves in, we had Brrad0 take them in the van and OdSoCkS kept the car behind the van the whole way back to the station just incase something happened, we pulled up outside the station and Sickness and Brrad0 took them to cells, I just gave OdSoCkS some bonus money for looking after things.

Now there were only three of youy and 5 of them. I ask you

 

why in the hell would they turn themselves in when they outnumber you? "Tied of fighting" isn't a good enough excuse. How about "they were fatally wounded and had no ammo left",

 

 

 

 

PLAN

So, in other words....just about the same as ROSA?

who ?

Edited March 2, 2006 by E.A.B.

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

That sucked, learn better English, and his name is OdDsOcK, not OdDsOcKS...

sorry I`ll try to improve it.

[Sickness]

Continued...

 

 

Before, I headed to the house that had just been robbed, Eddie asked if he could tag along. I told him it would be ok, but just this time. We walked down the stairwell, leading to the police garage. I opened the passenger door for Eddie, seeing as he is a girl and all.(JK haha)

 

OdDsOcK, flipped the switch that opened the garage door, unfortinatly, he didn't do it soon enough and we crash into the door. Only a few scratches, and a HUGE dent. I had a leftover apple from lunch, laying in my cruiser, so I threw it out my window and hit OdDsOcK in the head. Eddie and I drove to the house.

 

We got there, and a a women was standing outside crying. Apparantly the robber, stabbed her in the arm with a butter knife. (Hahaha, OdDsOcK...) I called for an ambulance to come pick her up. Before, she left she said the robber, left towards San Fierro. Eddie and I said a quick thanks, and drove towards San Fierro. I was pretty sure he would take the side roads leading there.(Those dirt roads allover the countryside.)

 

We got to the beggining of the road, and began driving. I drove about 6 miles, until we pulled up to an abandoned farm. As we pulled up, we knowticed a car, it was a red buffalo, with a white stripe down the sides. I saw a man sitting inside the car. Eddie and I pulled out our handguns, and walked slowly towards the car. The man quickly slammed the car in reverse, and back up into Eddie. I shot a few rounds, as he drove off down the dirt road again.

 

I grabbed Eddie, and put him in the car. I threw it in drive, and drove after the man.

He was almost to San Fierro, but at the end of the dirt road there was a BIG boulder. He slammed on his brakes, now sliding helplessly towards the rock. He slammed head on into the rock, and I knew after that he was dead. We called for assistance, from OdDsOcK and Bradd0. They arrive, and so did an ambulance.

 

Eddie: "Sickness, you did good today, you can go home now."

 

Sickness: "Thanks, you did good yourself." I said with a smile on my face.

 

I drove to my house. I walked inside, and saw and called up OdDsOcK. We argued about his foolish mistake back at the garage. He promised to get my cruiser fixed the next day.

 

 

 

Teh Endzors...

Another one, coming soon.

Edited March 4, 2006 by Sickness