Clown. Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 Friggin hell you have small type baptiste. I'd quite like to help on this one to. I've posted in two other topics saying how to improve, so I guess I should put my money where my mouth is otherwise i'm gonna start looking like a hypocrite. And I like you, eddie. I was gonna offer some help on the other one but wots-his-face turned out to be a total prick. I can do some graphics for you guys (I have photoshop cs) and I could help out with the plot/storyline, if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 Yes help us out a bit, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die Posted February 17, 2006 Author Share Posted February 17, 2006 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Commisioner- Eddie_Ballas_To_I_Die Deputy Commisioner-OdDsOcK Head Sargent-Sickness Sargent- Sargent- Sargent- Sargent- Sargent- Head Inspector- Inspector- Inspecter- Inspecter- Inspecter- Inspecter- Head Luitenant- Luitenant- Luitenant- Luitenant- Luitenant- Luitenant- Head Officer- Officer- Officer- Officer- Officer- Officer- There`s still ranks up for grabbs. well for a story, we are running low on officers and are struggling to match up to the gang wars unlike in the 70s when we patroled the streets and wipped out every gang in Los Santos but after some money trouble and wage cuts officers left and joined other police forces, but none of the other forces could match up to what we did, so gang trouble came back out of it`s black hole while we held low for 20 years saving money to bring back the greatest police force Los Santos has ever seen, the P.A.G.V Police Against Gang Violence now we are back but only have three officers, so we need to fill out our ranks and whip out the gangs of Los Santos once again How We Got The Facilities With the money we had we bought out the L.S.P.D there for meaning taken everything they own, unfortunatly not the officers, the first thing we did was re-sprayed the cars, boats and helicopters to our colours thats full dark blue with a glow in the dark yellow line through the middle ( safety first at night ). We have plenty of vehicles but not enough people to work them, when we fill out our ranks we`ll put half in the inpound garage for back up incase some get wrecked and the other half we sell for back up money ( we don`t whant to be shutdown for the same reason we did before do we ). P.A.G.V bank balance -$ 3.500.000 police cars - 100 police boats - 50 police helicopters- 20 History Of The P.A.G.V year formed- 1935 origanil reason for being formed- we were made to help clear streets in the war place formed- Glasgow, Scotland ( moved to Los Santos in 1957 ) honours clearing Glasgows sheme hoodlums from Crosspictill best force in Glasgow for helping when the war was on best Glasweigin force 12 times best Scottish force 5 times defussed 12 bombs in Glasgow streets we were granted a fare well party before going to Los Santos from the Glasgow City Council. were relied to clear every gang in Los Santos best Los Santos force 8 times best San Andreas force 4 times best force in America 1 time -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clown. Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 If you give me details of all the graphics (sigs, avas, what should be in them, what pictures, what size etc) if you want i'll do them for you tomorrow (I have a day doing nothing) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clown. Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 (edited) My pc gave me a double post so I might as well make use of it and say that that looks a lot better eddie, cleaner and more thought out. You ought to get someone to put it in tables for you, and if you read my other post i'll do you some graphics. Edited February 17, 2006 by Clown. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baptiste Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 Eddie did you receive my PM? Anywat, I could incorporate tables, and i would like to join this. You should remove oddsocks as i dont think hes planning on doing this. And if you remove him, put me at his spot. Respond to the PM with youre answer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 I woke up early, to the sound of my alarm clock ringing. I hopped out of bed and got ready for my first day out on the field. I hopped in my police cruiser, sitting in my garage. My police cruiser was running low on fuel, so I had stopped at a nearby gas station, while I was filling up, I knowticed two thugs beating up on a civillian. I quickly ran up, wipped out my baton, and beat down the suspects. They were unconsious, so I turned them over an slapped handcuffs on them, and threw them in the cruiser. We headed to police station. I arrived, pulling into the police garage, parking the car in the newly made parking space, it read Head Sargent Sickness. I hopped out of the car and drug the suspects over to the elevator. I pressed the button, that lead to the Commisioners office. On my way I threw the thugs in the cells they would be staying in, for a while. I got to the commisioners office,and sat down quietly. Eddie the commisioner was on the phone, arguing to the San Fierro SAPD. The commisioner quickly slammed the phone down. It seems, some the SAPD's officers were killed, and they were blaming it on us. Of course it couldn't have been our falt, because we only had three, people in the force. The commisioner sent me downtown, to check out a house that has just been robbed. To Be Continued... I didn't have much to work with...Well nothing at all to work with. My next stories will be much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Original GTA Master Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 ok i posted this OdDsOcK when did i bad mouth peopleand you said that i should have my site up 100% when i post it well i said that the game is at a pause and had to mention that it was going to be up because people need a reason why the game was paused and i said that it wasnt finished yet and in my sig it says GTARealEstate.com coming soon.... wonder what that means huh plus you said that people look inexperienced when they post that something is going to be out soon before it is out well that right there doesnt make any sence what about Rockstar they make commercials about their game coming out soon but they arent inexperienced your just stupid why should someone be banned for that i called someone stupid get over it just because i called someone stupid doesnt mean they are dont take things seriously Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brad Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 why should someone be banned for that i called someone stupid get over it just because i called someone stupid doesnt mean they are dont take things seriously Get over it!!! You heard admacs back to ontopic your sure to have a note your name. BUSTED! Eddie I will get started on making banners for your first page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Original GTA Master Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 what do you mean heard i didnt hear sh*t what are you people talking about is there like a voice on the forums that says sh*t cause my speakers dont work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike_Toreno Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 (edited) Original GTA Master: Well if you didn't mean to call someone stupid then why did you say it in the first place? I'd advise you not to post in this topic unless it's not spam. Another thing; try not to be a smartass when you know full well what people mean. An admin on this forum even said, no, for you, even posted in here that he wanted no more off-topic posts. Back on topic here - I'll see what I can cook up in Photohshop for you, Eddie. You might want to present it a bit better and fix grammatical errors too. Also, some tags are left open. Type this at the end of the first post to fix and close them: [/color][/size] Edited February 17, 2006 by Mike_Toreno Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brad Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 2 times ive reported GTA BLAH BLAH BLAH... On topic again.. I think Mike_Toreno will own me in making a banner. But im new to Photoshop. I just want to know how to merge images... Then i'll be able to cook something up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ottae Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 If you want this to lift off, stay here for three months, then go here you probably shouldn't even do that TBH. This isn't gonna work, it's just so random Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindancer Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 ok i posted thisOdDsOcK when did i bad mouth peopleand you said that i should have my site up 100% when i post it well i said that the game is at a pause and had to mention that it was going to be up because people need a reason why the game was paused and i said that it wasnt finished yet and in my sig it says GTARealEstate.com coming soon.... wonder what that means huh plus you said that people look inexperienced when they post that something is going to be out soon before it is out well that right there doesnt make any sence what about Rockstar they make commercials about their game coming out soon but they arent inexperienced your just stupid why should someone be banned for that i called someone stupid get over it just because i called someone stupid doesnt mean they are dont take things seriously Did you not read Adamcs post? Why have you come along and tried to hijack ithis thread. You have just got yourself a 3 day temp ban matey. @ Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die Keep up the work mate. Edit your first post with some tables and put some depth into this and it will work out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike_Toreno Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 ok i posted thisOdDsOcK when did i bad mouth peopleand you said that i should have my site up 100% when i post it well i said that the game is at a pause and had to mention that it was going to be up because people need a reason why the game was paused and i said that it wasnt finished yet and in my sig it says GTARealEstate.com coming soon.... wonder what that means huh plus you said that people look inexperienced when they post that something is going to be out soon before it is out well that right there doesnt make any sence what about Rockstar they make commercials about their game coming out soon but they arent inexperienced your just stupid why should someone be banned for that i called someone stupid get over it just because i called someone stupid doesnt mean they are dont take things seriously Did you not read Adamcs post? Why have you come along and tried to hijack ithis thread. You have just got yourself a 3 day temp ban matey. @ Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die Keep up the work mate. Edit your first post with some tables and put some depth into this and it will work out. That was long needed. He was starting to get on my nerves. Thanks RD. But why didn't you just permanently ban him? Banner in the works right now Eddie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clown. Posted February 18, 2006 Share Posted February 18, 2006 (edited) I did A quick banner for you, but I see you have others doing them too. I don't mind wether you use mine or not, didn't exactly take me long to make. oh yeah, Thought I might as well get involved. Can I be a good old officer? I was bored so I wrote a little story myself (assuming I get in) I get off the plane and step into the bright sunlight beating down across los santos. Huge planes roar overhead as I wander through the airport, a new and unfamiliar territory. My first day in Los Santos. Two weeks ago I get a call at my flat in glasgow, telling me i'm being moved. No promotion though. I've been stuck in this goddamn officers uniform for five years without hope of an upgrade. I step off the kerb and nearly lose my feet to a speeding taxi, roaring past the airport on the way to a collection. In glasgow he'd be followed by a rush of red and blue, but here no-one even takes a second glance. I can see its going to take a while to adjust. I am picked up by a battered car, blue with a bright yellow stripe slicing it in half. The guy inside is wearing Head Seargents uniform, and his badge denotes him as Head seargent sickness. Odd name for a policeman. He drives me back to the station, throught the sprawling urban hood of los santos. Just as we get near the station I see a young african american break into a burning house and run out with a young girl. And I thought everyone in the hoods were gangsters. We pull up at the station, a place as battered as the car i'm sitting in, and I walk up to the door. Behind me the Head Seargent speeds off into the sound of muffled gunfire. I step into the station, And am directed by a young receptionist to go straight to the office, a small plaque on the door reading 'commisioner Eddie'. I step inside. Eddie is spitting down the phone, something about some dead police officers. I get the impression the eddie is not a man to be messed with. He gets off the phone, grunts at me and throws me a uniform and a badge. I quickly exit, not wishing to be subjected to his bad mood. Just down the hall an old phone crackles with static before the Head seargent comes onto the line, requesting immediate backup to a small house robbery that just turned nasty. I run through the station, hastily pulling on my jacket, grab a set of keys and jump into the nearest available car, and hit the sirens. To be continued. That was actually quite fun, These things act as a pretty good creative outlet. Edited February 18, 2006 by Clown. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die Posted February 18, 2006 Author Share Posted February 18, 2006 (edited) Commisioner- Eddie_Ballas_To_I_Die Deputy Commisioner-OdDsOcK Head Sargent-Sickness Sargent-Baptiste Sargent- Sargent- Sargent- Sargent- Head Inspector- Inspector- Inspecter- Inspecter- Inspecter- Inspecter- Head Luitenant- Luitenant- Luitenant- Luitenant- Luitenant- Luitenant- Head Officer- Officer-Clown Officer- Officer- Officer- Officer- and how do I use the banners Edited February 18, 2006 by Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Birdcage_999 Posted February 18, 2006 Share Posted February 18, 2006 O.k now just edit your first post. I will have a go at a banner later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brad Posted February 18, 2006 Share Posted February 18, 2006 Eddie can I be head Lieutananet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die Posted February 18, 2006 Author Share Posted February 18, 2006 Commisioner- Eddie_Ballas_To_I_Die Deputy Commisioner-OdDsOcK Head Sargent-Sickness Sargent-Baptiste Sargent- Sargent- Sargent- Sargent- Head Inspector- Inspector- Inspecter- Inspecter- Inspecter- Inspecter- Head Luitenant-Brrad0 Luitenant- Luitenant- Luitenant- Luitenant- Luitenant- Head Officer- Officer-Clown Officer- Officer- Officer- Officer- ok now how do I put the banner up because I copyed and pasted it and nothing happened. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clown. Posted February 18, 2006 Share Posted February 18, 2006 [img=http://img334.imageshack.us/img334/6845/policebanner6ni.png] Edit your first post and put this where you want your banner to be. If you want it in the center use this: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted February 18, 2006 Share Posted February 18, 2006 Eddie did you receive my PM? Anywat, I could incorporate tables, and i would like to join this. You should remove oddsocks as i dont think hes planning on doing this. And if you remove him, put me at his spot. Respond to the PM with youre answer. I will choose to leave only if I say so. lol...you and your tables. -Cheeburger, Cheeburger! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die Posted February 25, 2006 Author Share Posted February 25, 2006 actualy I say, plus he has a point, what are you doing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brad Posted February 25, 2006 Share Posted February 25, 2006 Signature of support... Copy this. http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/1631/signaturepolice15ug.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MI7 Posted February 25, 2006 Share Posted February 25, 2006 (edited) The SAPD is as old as the state of San Andreas itself. With different departments operating in Los Santos, San Fierro and Las Venturas, along with extensive Motorbike Units, Aerial Units, FBI, SWAT Teams and the Army, the SAPD is able to keep the state relatively safe and properly corrupt. Will you help us in our task? Sign up for the SAPD today!Commissioner - Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die Deputy Commissioner - Sickness Chief - OdDsOcK Inspector -baptiste Inspector - Inspector - Inspector - Inspector - Team Leader - SWAT - SWAT - SWAT - SWAT - SWAT - Captain - Sergeant - Sergeant - Sergeant - Sergeant - Sergeant - Detective - brrad0 Lieutenant - Lieutenant - Lieutenant - Lieutenant - Lieutenant - Senior Patrolman - Officer - Clown. Officer - Officer - Officer - Officer - Avatar 1Avatar 2Avatar 3Sig - InspectorSig - OfficerSig - LieutenantSig - SergeantSig - ChiefBlank Sig 1 (For Other Ranks)Blank Sig 2 (For Other Ranks)Blank Sig 3 (For Other Ranks)Blank Sig 4 (For Other Ranks)Support Signature [tableb] [/tableb][tableb] OK I'm Commissioner Eddie and I have ranks to fill! If you want into the force, please choose a rank and tell me why you deserve it, and I will tell you if you get it.[/tableb][tableb]StoryThe SAPD is as old as the state of San Andreas itself. With different departments operating in Los Santos, San Fierro and Las Venturas, along with extensive Motorbike Units, Aerial Units, FBI, SWAT Teams and the Army, the SAPD is able to keep the state relatively safe and properly corrupt. Will you help us in our task? Sign up for the SAPD today![tableb]Administration Commissioner - Eddie_Balla_to_I_DieDeputy Commissioner - SicknessInspectorsChief - OdDsOcKInspector -baptiste Inspector - Inspector - Inspector - Inspector - SWAT TeamTeam Leader - SWAT - SWAT - SWAT - SWAT - SWAT - SergeantsCaptain - Sergeant - Sergeant - Sergeant - Sergeant - Sergeant - Vice SquadDetective - brrad0Lieutenant - Lieutenant - Lieutenant - Lieutenant - Lieutenant - Street CopsSenior Patrolman - Officer - Clown.Officer - Officer - Officer - Officer - [/tableb][tableb]Police UniformAvatar 1Avatar 2Avatar 3Sig - InspectorSig - OfficerSig - LieutenantSig - SergeantSig - ChiefBlank Sig 1 (For Other Ranks)Blank Sig 2 (For Other Ranks)Blank Sig 3 (For Other Ranks)Blank Sig 4 (For Other Ranks)Support Signature[/tableb] Edited February 25, 2006 by MI7 Get Connected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted February 25, 2006 Share Posted February 25, 2006 actualy I say, plus he has a point, what are you doing. I don't know what the hell I'm supposed to do. Just assign missions, or do something? Plus, we barely have anyone. brrad0, sorry, but that sux0rz. -Cheeburger, Cheeburger! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die Posted February 26, 2006 Author Share Posted February 26, 2006 Listen I`m going to be out of town for two days, I have to go to Glasgow for the our anniversity party, I have to say a few words, I`m alloud to take someone, so iff you want to come please tell me before I leave for the airport. This means Sickness is in charge, but if Sickness comes OdSoCkS is in charge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 (edited) w00t!!! I'm incharge. Awsome. Wait...Wtf? In real life, or in this game? If it's ingame, then Ill go. Edited February 26, 2006 by Sickness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die Posted February 27, 2006 Author Share Posted February 27, 2006 it`s in-game, so your coming, OdSoCkS your in charge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted February 27, 2006 Share Posted February 27, 2006 When do we leave? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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