Eddies Police

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

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Administration

Commissioner - Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die

Deputy Commissioner - Sickness ( Los Santos )

Deputy Commisionor - OdDsoCk ( San Fierro )

Deputy Commisioner - baptiste ( Los Venturos )

Chief -

Inspector -

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SWAT Team Leader - brrad0

SWAT - UFATCOW

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Captain -

Sergeant -

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Detective -

Lieutenant -

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Senior Patrolman -

Officer - Clown.

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in the 70s when we patroled the streets and wipped out every gang in Los Santos but after some money trouble and wage cuts officers left and joined other police forces, but none of the other forces could match up to what we did, so gang trouble came back out of it`s black hole while we held low for 20 years saving money to bring back the greatest police force Los Santos has ever seen, the S.A.P.D

 

San Andreas Police Department

 

now we are back but only have three officers, so we need to fill out our ranks and whip out the gangs of Los Santos once again

 

How We Got The Facilities

 

With the money we had we bought out the L.S.P.D there for meaning taken everything they own, unfortunatly not the officers, the first thing we did was re-sprayed the cars, boats and helicopters to our colours thats full dark blue with a glow in the dark yellow line through the middle ( safety first at night ).

 

We have plenty of vehicles but not enough people to work them, when we fill out our ranks we`ll put half in the inpound garage for back up incase some get wrecked and the other half we sell for back up money ( we don`t whant to be shutdown for the same reason we did before do we ).

 

 

S.A.P.D

 

 

bank balance -$ 4.000.000

police cars - 100

police boats - 50

police helicopters- 20

police bikes - 150

SWAT Vans - 45

SWAT Tanks - 15

 

 

History Of The S.A.P.D

 

year formed- 1935

origanil reason for being formed- we were made to help clear streets in the war

 

place formed- Glasgow, Scotland ( moved to Los Santos in 1957 )

 

 

honours

 

clearing Glasgows sheme hoodlums from Crosspictill

 

best force in Glasgow for helping when the war was on

 

best Glasweigin force 12 times (1940 ) to (1950 ) (1952) (1954 )

 

best Scottish force 5 times ( 1940 ) ( 1941 ) ( 1951 ) ( 1952 ) ( 1955 )

 

defussed 12 bombs in Glasgow streets

 

we were granted a fare well party before going to Los Santos from the

Glasgow City Council.

 

were relied to clear every gang in Los Santos

 

best Los Santos force 8 times ( 1960 ) ( 1965 ) ( 1967 ) ( 1968 ) ( 1975 ) (1976 ) ( 1977) ( 1980 )

 

best San Andreas force 4 times ( 1975 ) ( 1976 ) ( 1977 ) ( 1980 )

 

best force in America 1 time ( 1975 )

Edited March 2, 2006 by Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die

[MAcSandNinEs]

Is there a point. Explain a little more.

 

And while using tags, use [/size] and [/color]. Also, lose the caps. -JD

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

Well If I think your doing a good job at your current rank I will promote you, the way I would know if you`ve been doing good is you will tell me what you have done. plus when you get to Head Sargent you can recruit anyone lower than you to help you, if there willing to.

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

sorry I meant when you get to Head Luitenant to recruit.

[MAcSandNinEs]

Don't double post. Is there a point though?-JD

[Oddsock]

This is NOT organized, sorry.

 

First off, it would be good to organize the ranks in terms of authority order.

 

Sergeants are not ahead of Lieutenants. There are many types of "Officers." Officers usually include Sergeants and up.

 

There is no inventory. Do we all use the same gear? Wouldn't a Deputy or Sergeant use a Glock 9mm, while a PI can use his own weapons? What about vehicles?

 

What do we do for stories, and what do we get out of it?

 

Where is your police station, and where does it cover? -Cheeburger, Cheeburger!

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

well I just thought it would be fun to have a police force and have offecers like you if you want to keep streets happy. I like your style, you seem strict, do you want to be Deputy Commisioner.

[Oddsock]

Don't get me wrong, this looks plenty fun. It just needs to be refined.

 

Fix it up a tad, and I'll be happy to be Deputy Commissoner. -Cheeburger, Cheeburger!

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

well we are the local police force of Los Santos and we cover anywhere in Los Santos, our uniform is blue all-a-round aprt from a glue in the dark yellow stripe across he chest and all officers have hand cuffs, 9mm, and a baton.

[Original GTA Master]

well you know this is the kind of stuff we do in my Real Estate game so there isnt a point of having two games like it

but go ahead and keep it up i dont have a problem with it i just said that cause i didnt know if you knew about my game

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

Commisioner- Eddie_Ballas_To_I_Die

Deputy Commisioner-OdDsOcK

 

Head Sargent-

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Head Inspector-

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Inspecter-

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Head Luitenant-

Luitenant-

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Luitenant-

 

Head Officer-

Officer-

Officer-

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Officer-

 

 

and I read the real estate game but I found it hard to understand so I made this as a kind of more simple version of that kind of game, anymore others , I have plenty to fill.

[gta_player5]

Is this a gang of some sorts? If so shouldn't it go in the PGC? If not, I'll figure it out. ANd just like what everyone else sai. Tweak it a bit and it'll be good.

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

We are the local police force of Los Santos, how would I tweak it up, I can`t think of anything, how about I set parts of Los Santos for Luitenents and there groups to patrol.

[guitarrocker]

 

At least try to spell this stuff right man! Try a little more organization. -GR

 

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

sorry what spelling mistakes did I make, I don`t mean to ne annoying but how would I organize it.

[guitarrocker]

 

sorry what spelling mistakes did I make, I don`t mean to ne annoying but how would I organize it.

I suggest talking to some of the mods to see if they would lock this topic and let you start it over. Try writing your first post in Microsoft Word or Works, and read over it. Be sure to use spell check. Thats about it for me. -GR

 

btw, Your not being annoying.

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

one problem, I don`t have microsoft word.

[e717]

HOW PATHETIC

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

or at least I can`t find it.

[Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die]

listen it`s clear that I`m not doing a good job of this so if he likes OdDsOcK can take over as he is the Deputy below me.

[MI7]

Lieutenant

Inspector

Sergeant

Head Commissioner

Deputy Commisioner

 

Change those spellings, get some tables, rules and a banner. I can do these if you ask. Good luck with this.

[Original GTA Master]

hey M17 are you still interested in the GTA Real Estate thing because i got a job for you if you want one

and Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die go and claim on of the districts in my Real Estate game and make a police squad for your area

you are allowed to have your own company/business out of your own districts so the police station could be that company/business.

[Sickness]

Please speak to other people in pms'. If this is still going on Ill be a seargent. I'll write stories after my hand heals, I broke it.

[guitarrocker]

listen it`s clear that I`m not doing a good job of this so if he likes OdDsOcK can take over as he is the Deputy below me.

Just letting you know something. Do you see that button in the top right hand corner of your post that says "edit"? Click that and you can change your first post without having to post twice. You can do this to correct your spelling mistakes in your first post. -GR

[Oddsock]

hey M17 are you still interested in the GTA Real Estate thing because i got a job for you if you want one

and Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die go and claim on of the districts in my Real Estate game and make a police squad for your area

you are allowed to have your own company/business out of your own districts so the police station could be that company/business.

I thought your game was all about:

 

*OdDsOcK steal Sickness' car*

 

And stuff like that. This is different.

 

We are going to write actual stories, instead of small emotes. Please don't try and swallow any or all other RPG games. Yours is different from this. -Cheeburger, Cheeburger!

[Oddsock]

hey M17 are you still interested in the GTA Real Estate thing because i got a job for you if you want one

and Eddie_Balla_to_I_Die go and claim on of the districts in my Real Estate game and make a police squad for your area

you are allowed to have your own company/business out of your own districts so the police station could be that company/business.

I thought your game was all about:

 

*OdDsOcK steal Sickness' car*

 

And stuff like that. This is different.

 

We are going to write actual stories, instead of small emotes. Please don't try and swallow any or all other RPG games. Yours is different from this. -Cheeburger, Cheeburger!

[Original GTA Master]

lol we didnt even start the active city i had you guys state your opinions on that and none of you guys liked that so we didnt add that in the game

and plus our website has missions and stuff we are trying to at least get 100 missions for each location

so far we have Vercetti Crime Family missions and Leone Crime Family Missions these are supposed to be based in years a little further then VC and LCS but i think you guys will like the finished product its coming along great

if you guys want to just post what type of stuff you want in the Real Estate game and we will work it into the game

[the only king]

f*ck it

throw me in this game

[Original GTA Master]

ok i have no problem with this game but how does it work and why is it if you could have this same stuff in my game and has a lot more things to do why would you guys play this

i let you guys even add stuff into the game and no-one requested anything

so why do you guys come here

im just wondering

[Bryce.]

We are going to write actual stories, instead of small emotes. Please don't try and swallow any or all other RPG games. Yours is different from this.

 

Sounds exactly like ROSA, in which case I'm voting bad. Why do we continue to make topics of no substance like this? ROSA is a much better substitute for this type of genre of RPG.