Canofceleri Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 (edited) Life such a pity, I hate it so bad, my life is falling all around me, it makes me so sad. I'm at the bleakest point I got in trouble wiht my parents cuz I was smoking a joint. But there's her, the love of my life, she'll save me from the things that have been hurting my life. We'll have a nice apartment and a dog named Skip, if I stick a pin into a condom we might even have a kid. Edited December 12, 2005 by Candarelli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Killer Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 It's good, although it is a little short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted December 12, 2005 Author Share Posted December 12, 2005 It's good, although it is a little short. Point made. Someone, please lock this thread. I can't believe the brains on some people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonywob Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 Hmmm, seems kind of deep, but short, seems to have meaning, but then means f*ck all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F-s-X Posted December 13, 2005 Share Posted December 13, 2005 Uhm people; poems don't have to be long. Sometimes it just makes them worse. Anyway, pretty nice. I like the childish rhyme at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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