The Keeper is Kept.

[Paco]

A clash of television commercials, a mans murmur, and the hiss of a radio is all you can hear, here we are in a grave keepers home.

 

It was but not an eerie night, too cliché the man thought for anything to go wrong, but wrong was the last word to describe something like this.

 

Sounds are heard from through out the grave, alarming the grave keeper who then reaches for his flashlight, once more he thinks its nothing but coincidence to this horror cliché night.

 

Stepping through bushes, cricking and cracking, the man hears the sounds get louder as he walks further.

 

A big marble grave about 6 feet in height stands over the man, and noise comes from behind it, around it he goes and then he trips.

 

The man goes down, down and on his way there he hits his head on another grave plate, not feeling much pain the man begins to walk off to find the disturbance.

 

The noise is at its peak as the keeper reaches a tomb, one whom he’s never seen before, one that couldn’t have possibly be added in such short notice, the man is quite boggled as he decides to step in.

 

As the door is open the man walks into the dimly lit room, only able to see by the flickering of worn out candles, people were all surrounding something as the man inched to see what it was.

 

There lie a man, bleeding from his head, the man looks unconscious but his face is covered in blood so this corpses identity is still unknown, or so he thinks.

The man wipes the blood, but he feels as if he is being scrutinized, he turns to see the people behind him and them being there once before vanished at an instant, the keeper rushes out.

 

 

The keeper is in shock as he runs back to his home, exiting the tomb and as he exits he notices there is blood trailing all the way back.

 

Going over to the spot from where he has tripped, and a man is there with a camera.

 

“Whats going on?!” The grave keeper asks.

“Seems to be a dead body here, except its been moved and only blood has been left” says the man with the camera.

The grave keeper closes his eyes for a few minutes to think.

 

And so it was pieced together, but if this man is dead, how is it that he speaks to this man? As the keeper opens his eyes the man with the camera is no longer a man, for he is a demon in disguise!

 

Pearly white eyes, all red skin, and no nose is what this demon possessed, this man was scared to death!

 

The keeper tries to run from the reaper, run very far away, and he makes it back to his home. Opening the door and slamming it shut sure to lock it, the man sits down and makes a cup of coffee.

 

He turns on his TV and switches to the news station hoping to get his mind off things, there was something about a dead man in a tomb, and as it zoomed to the face this dead man was actually the keeper!

 

 

The camera zooms out and it goes to the news reporter, this news reporter is the demon from before!

 

The whole world goes into slow-mo for the keeper and the man slowly transforms into the demon from before, now the camera is focused on the demons deathly white stare and the keeper is looking right into his eyes.

 

The keepers world began to spin and his TV began to slowly be sucked into some sort of black hole, and everything froze and the area changed.

 

The man was in the tomb, looking up at the news reporter, and the same white stare came to the mans mind, and then it faded to black, the keeper has been kept.

 

C&C please.

[Drizz]

 

Huh? I didn't find this story horror . and you kept repeating man too much, repititions doesnt sound really good, maybe u wanna change it? - Dri'z Up.

 

[Paco]

Yeah, well I see what you mean about repitition. I got the idea of it from a story I read in class the other day, some guy dies but he thinks he's alive till he finds out he's been dead the whole time. I tried to do somethin' like that, seems I screwed up.

 

I'll fix it when school work isn't so bad.