da gta master Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 (edited) Ok I was going to post it in the other thread which is just below this one but I thought it would seem like im trying to nick his thread so I made this one. OK this is my first proper attempt at Pixel Art, I used paint and took about half an hour All ive got to do is shade it, take out the black lines and do some other stuff. And could people comment on how I could make it better? Thanks Ok here it is: Small Warehouse type of thingy: EDIT: Improved: SECOND EDIT: Even more improved: Edited September 20, 2005 by da gta master Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike_Toreno Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 Well, I think it's cool, Maybe add a background and a doormat and put something inside the windows Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilentM Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 Pros: The Garage door looks nice. What you could do to improve: Try removing the black lines and replacing them with a dark color of the shade ( IE, make the black lines on the tan part a darker tan ) Maybe add some details, such as grunge. Fix the windows, they're ugly as it is. Make them a lighter blue and have some illustration of what's going on inside through them. It's really not bad, keep working on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da gta master Posted August 30, 2005 Author Share Posted August 30, 2005 OK ive shaded it and taken out the black lines. The wondows are a bit to small to draw detail in them, i might change the colours of the windows, not sure yet. Yes I know the sign looks... weird. Ill have to redo that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
king surfer Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 The glasss on the door needs darkening as its a darker area to the other glass. Doorframe and doorhinges? Other than that its good. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da gta master Posted August 30, 2005 Author Share Posted August 30, 2005 OK I spent some more time on it, ive extended the building, sorted out the sign etc. Now I need to put wheels on the vehicle and put some more stuff on the roof. Updated: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike_Toreno Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 Man that looks awesome, The end result will be amazing for sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da gta master Posted September 1, 2005 Author Share Posted September 1, 2005 Who rated my topic bad? Just the thanks I get for showing off my artwork. Please, for my gran, rate the topic good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilentM Posted September 1, 2005 Share Posted September 1, 2005 The left side is great now. Then I look over to the right side and am dissappointed. Work on it, you're getting pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da gta master Posted September 5, 2005 Author Share Posted September 5, 2005 OK here we are again. Ive redone the right part, but itsn not much different from the left part, added a skywindow or whatever they are called. And now ive started the road and a car park is going to be next to the builidng. Hope youll like it when its finished! Taster: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pierce Brosnan Posted September 6, 2005 Share Posted September 6, 2005 That's looking great so far, da gta master. Make that one above into a street. But so far it's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
niteangel´ Posted September 6, 2005 Share Posted September 6, 2005 The building looks pretty good, but the street really doesn't. It looks waaay too big, compared to the building. So you should definitely change that, and finish it before you upload it. Now it's just a big gray zone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da gta master Posted September 6, 2005 Author Share Posted September 6, 2005 OK it is a bit too big. And that was just a taster of what ive done so far. So its wasnt supposed to be finsihed in that picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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