The Teflon Don Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Chapter 1 : Balla for life « Wake da f*ck up! » Jason yelled from across the room. « Don’t make me beat your ass Ben. » « I’m up! I’m up! » « It’s about time. You got school in case you fugot! »I got out of bed and went to the bathroom. On the way there I passed Sammy. « How come he don’t have ta go to school ay Jason? » I said. « Cause’ I did’nt find a school that would let him in yet! » I walked into the bathroom during Leroy’s shower. I began to brush my teeth. « Two stoned out niggaz goin’ crazay! » sang Leroy.I finished up and went to breakfast.I took out a boul and my favorite cereal Kernel Krispy. I put some in the boul and then poored some milk in. It came out in big chunk’s. « Jason!!! » « What? » « We need new milk. » There was no answer so I started to walk to school. When I got into the school yard I saw my friends waiting for me. « Double B, Double B!!! » That’s what all my friends call me. « What is it? Wassup? » « Yo man, Sisco slaped Veronica in the face! » I started getting mad. I meen after all, Veronica is my girl friend. « I’M GONNA KILL THAT DIRTY MUTHA f*ckA!!! » I began to walk towards Sisco with my fists clenched. « Here he comes now! » said a voice coming from Sisco’s little posy. « Sisco! Get your Latino ass ova here! » « Why? Joo gonna hit me hor somesing? » « I’m gonna do alot than hitchou bitch! » He got up and walked towards me. He hit me in the gut. I grabed him and threw three punches at his face. He fell to the ground and I began to stomp on his ribs. « Next time you hit Ron or anyother girl I’m gonna paralise you! » I said and horked a lugy all over his face. I began to walk away threw the croud when I felt something grab me and pull me back « You’re in alot of trouble young man! » It was my principal Mr. Malony. He brought me to his office. When we got there he closed the door and began to talk to me. « Well, Well, Well! I knew if I gave you another chance you would screw it up! Now I’m going to have to expel you from this from this school. » « Oh my good! Could it be I actualy give a sh*t? » « See! That’ the kind of behavior that is unexecptable. I have no choice but to send you to St. Anthony’s… » « Wha-what! » I gasped. « St. Anthony’s is the only place that woud have you. » I was scared. « Please sir, please let me have another chance! » « I’m affraid not. Now leave the school premises emidiatly! » I walked out the doors of the school and almost started to cry. Normaly I woul’nt care but this…This was different. It’s was a Grove school. It was Grove territory. Not one Balla. Execpt me. When I opened the door I saw Jason standing in front of me. « What da f*ck were you thinkin’ » « But… » « There aint no buts besides me kickin your’s! » I ran outside and all the way to Veronica’s house. She was a pretty little white girl with blonde hair and blue eyes. I knocked on the door and her big brother Georgy walked out. « What the f*ck you want? » « I’m looking for Veronica! » « VERONICA!!! It’s youre boy friend! » Veronica came russhing out and asked me « Why did you hit Sisco? » « Cause’ he hit you! » « I know that but why did’nt you just wait till school let out? » « I don’t know. I had to hit him then! » « I want you to stop fighting cause your gonna get hurt. » « Ok. I’ll stop. » I did’nt know how to tell her I got kickedout and I’ll probaly be dead when I started school. So I did’nt. We said our good byes and she went back in to her house. I started to walk home when I saw these three Grove street G’s ganging up on a Balla. They were beatig him badly when I jumped on one of there back’s and began to bash the back of his skull. I jumped of as he fell to the asphalt. The two other’s stopped beating on the other kid and ran at me. One of them got me in a headlock while the other was throwing blow’s to my stomach. I elbowed the one that had me in a headlock in the chest, and went after the other. He pulled out a knife and before I knew it I felt the cold blade ripple down my stomach. All three of them ran away and I began to hear sirens as everything went black. I was sure I was gonna die a Balla Chapter 2 coming soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BUYG Posted August 24, 2005 Author Share Posted August 24, 2005 timstapels: Interesting, $46 Ottae: Nice seconde story, $52 pistol-P: thats kool, $51 MI7: Gimme Gimme never gets dont you know your manners yet Forelli_Boy: Hope to see some new matterial sometime soon, maybe we can put a story togheter soon, $34 The Teflon Don: I like how you add Grand Theft Auto iorny to your story's, $67 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SloStenRacing Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Wow I forgot about San An chat altogether. If I were to join back up would I be able to make my own gang again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Well this is a bit active now, so I might consider adding a new gang. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 we should still get more people to join the existing gangs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SloStenRacing Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Well this is a bit active now, so I might consider adding a new gang. Alright then. If I ever get the motivation needed to write like I used to again then I will come back and build up another badass gang. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
51L3N7 4554551N Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 If you need a new gang, then the ICA might be a good idea. Alot of people wanted to be in it on my thread. Maybe if we move it over here, then more members can get in Its basically a contract agency. If your interested, then I'll make some locations for you too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Teflon Don Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Chapter 2 : Back to school As I opened my eyes I saw Jason looking down on me « Wha…What happened? » « You beat the f*ck outta some Grove street OG’s! » I started to remember a bit about that Balla gettig beatup and how I went in and help him. I got up to go to the bathroom and felt a stinging pain in my stomach. « AH f*ck!!! » I yelled out. « Shush. You must a fugot about gettin cut. If was’nt for me sendin’ Leroy for milk you would’a been road kill. » I began to remember about getting sent to St. Anthony’s and I began to cry. « Wassup Benny Boy? » Asked Jason « You okay? » « They’re tryin to send me to St. Anthony’s! » « What? That ain’t right! They know you’re a Balla! » « It’s on purpose! They want me dead! » « Well they can’t send you to no school wit out my permission. So you good! » Jason always made me feel better when I needed to. He’s my favorite brother, especialy because he knows how to do when someone get’s cut. During the course of the week I was of I got alot of visiter’s. Mostly Ballas coming to say hello and how much of a hero I was for rescuing that kid. Even though I never saw the kid again I knew if he could he would thank me. I got up to go to the bathroom and overheard Jason on the phone with Mr. Malony. « Mr. Malony please let him back! I’ll make sure he shapes up! Please! » « I’m sorry but I can’t let him come back. He’s a delinquant. All the Smith boy’s are! » « C’mon, boys will be boys! Hello. Hello! » Jason hung up and walked into the living room. When I got to the bathroom Sammy was taking a sh*t. I walked in and began to brush my teeth. « Get out!!! » yelled Sammy. « I’m only brushing my teeth, I’ll be out in a second! » « Jason!!! » Cried Sammy « Shut up you little sh*t! » I said as I punched him in the arm. I got dressed and went to work. The pig pen is a gentalmen’s club that I’m not even aloud in but for some reason they would let me baretend. When I got there Leo was waiting for me in the parking lot. « Hey kid, sorry to hear about the stabing. You sure you could work. I’ll let you take anotherday of if you would lik… » « No thank’s. I’m fine. » I said interrupting him. « Good, good. » I went in side and jumped over the counter. « Hi. I’ll have a burban on the rocks. » I started to make it and began to talk to the man. « So, what’s you’re name? » « Victor. Victor Leone. » « Nice to meet you Victor. What bring’s you to the pig pen. » « I lost my buissness, my home, my money and everything I own. » « Sorry. Here this drink’s on me. » « Thank you young man. It’s much appreciated. » « No prob’s. » The man finished his drink and left. A couple hours later my shift ended and I went home. As I walked up to my house I saw Jason in the window. It looked like he was on the phone so I went in. « Yes, Yes. I know, they won’t dissapointe you. » He put down the phone and turned to me and Sammy. « Good news boys. » « What is it? » I asked « Mr. Malony is letting you both back in to his school! » « YES!!! » yelled me and Sammy at the same time. « But on one condition. » « What is it? » I asked « You both have to sign a contract. » « What kind of a contract? » « It say’s you gotta obey and sh*t, but I’m sure there won’t be no problem there. » I thought about and realized it could’nt be that hard.« No problem here! » I said « Me neither! » Sammy. It was five minutes later when we got a call from Ottis. He said he was coming home. The bad news could’nt have come at a worse time. Chapter 3 coming soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pistol-P Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 (edited) Yo Johnsen When are you gonna update the front Page And Story Count's My Story Count Is 5 Now .. Edited August 24, 2005 by pistol-P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 what he said we need our $110 again. My story will be up tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xanarki Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 (edited) Story 2: Drugs + Hot dogs + Selling at stands + Cheese puffs = ? Okay, listen, this morning was crap. I fell out of my f*cking bed again. I had that nightmare, you know, that one. Oh wait…I didn’t tell you before. Oh well. Anyway, I woke up all groggy and crap. I couldn’t walk a straight line, even if it was the size of Gary’s sister’s big fat ass. I felt that freaked up. I dunno why, maybe a drink from the night earlier? Who knows. I heard my brother, Sid, walk out the door once I got up. I slowly walked to the bathroom and looked in the mirror. Me: “Dang…looks like my eyes got raped by a few beers.” I washed my face up and changed my clothes. The regular blue jeans and yellow t-shirt, with my awesome white socks n’ shoes. Okay, so I got my shoes for fiddy cents at Binco, they still look good. I picked up my keys and walked out the door. I noticed I forgot to lock the doors on my yellow Tornado from the night earlier. I’m a lucky sonvabitch. Vagos Gang Member: “Hey holmes! I gotta talk to ya!” I saw a Vagos Gang Member, running after me. He had black basketball shorts on, white tennis shoes, a yellow headband, a yellow watch and no t-shirt. Me: “What man?” Vagos Gang Member: “Listen homey, muthaf*ckas are at us again. Some unknown attackers. Don’t know who da f*ck they are, but their messin’ wit the wrong homies dawg! What should we do mon?” Me: “Calm yourself. Where are they at?” Vagos Gang Member: “Uhh, Pride Station…Group Station…Virgin Station…” Me: “…Unity Station?” Vagos Gang Member: “Yeah, dat!” Me: “Sh*t!” I dove into my car and started it up. I sped down the road, passing up the Vagos Gang Member. I arrived at Unity Station in no time. But, everything seemed normal. No gun fights, no cussing, no anything. I saw a black male enter a train with nobody on it. I pulled into the area and got out. Suddenly, four black males with black t-shirts and white shorts came out of nowhere. Two from the train and two from the doors. Me: “Oh boy…” They all walked towards me with their 9mm pistols pointing directly at my head. Now, I don’t know about you, but when I have FOUR guns pointed at me, I’m not exactly feeling the best of myself. I had that gut hammer…gut screwdriver…gut wrench, whatever, feeling inside my stomach. Attacker 1: “Listen punk, drop yo guns.” Attacker 2: “Hey, don’t move, or we’ll pop yo ass. Got dat dawg?” Me: “Okay, listen, what if I don’t have any guns on me? And hell, you, I think your holding my gun. And it’s empty. And I have your gun, and it’s full. Attacker 3: “Huh? Oh wow, dat’s not coo.” Attacker 2: “Man, you better check yo gun.” Me: “And you, I think somebody is pointing a sniper rifle at your head. Your special.” Attacker 4: “What? Me? Special? Ahh c’mon now, ya really mean dat?” I found their weakness. I dove my hand into my pocket and quickly pulled out my…cellphone. I ducked, and the four idiots thinking I pulled out a gun, shot their 9mm pistols. Luckily, I ducked, and Attacker 1 shot Attacker 3, Attacker 3 shot Attacker 1, Attacker 2 shot Attacker 4 and Attacker 4 shot Attacker 2. Confusing? Not really if you paid attention. Me: “Retards. This is a cellphone. A CELLPHONE! My god, am I going to shoot out of it or something?” I picked up their 9mms. Sadly, only a few bullets were left in each. Me: “Useless.” I walked inside the building. I saw six Vagos Gang Members tied up with ropes. Me: “C’mon now, this is pathetic?” I untied them. Then, my cell phone rang. I saw the caller ID but it said “Unknown Caller”. Cell Phone: “It’s a low…rid…er. A lowrider…” Me: “Yo?” Voice: “Listen…I’m a Vago homey aight’? Meet me down at our hidden HQ in Los Colinas. Bring nobody but yourself. You hear?” He shut off his cell phone. I sighed and put mine back. I went back to my yellow Tornado and drove to our hidden HQ. It’s simply a rundown apartment. Nobody lives there, nobody cares. Hell, we don’t even have any Vagos around it. Just our little secret, teehee! Erm, sorry. Anyway, I arrived there and the front door was closed and no cars around. Me: “Hmm, nobody here yet.” I got out and opened the front door. Inside was a large living room. To the left was a boarded up wooden door. Straight was another wooden door, but this time closed. To the right was another wooden door, but with a rectangle peek slot. I walked over and knocked. Suddenly, the peek slot opened up. I saw a hand move away. Me: “My god? Is it you?” The Leader: “Indeed. I am The Leader, boss of the Vagos. You may not know me personally, but I see good trust in you. I have a job for you Jon.” Me: “Well, sure.” The Leader: “Aight’, listen amigo. Motherf*cking gang members tryin’ to get my car. It’s a blue Tornado with yellow stripes on the sides. I don’t know which gang is tryin’ to ruin my ride, but they gotta me stopped. I’m snapped! Earlier today, those asswipes made my tires flat and cracked my side windows! Now these f*ckers are dealin’ drugs in hot dog stands over at Rodeo! Make sure they don’t forget the mustard and ketchup this time…” Me: “I’m on it.” I had to obey the bosses’ order. It was an honor to do something for him. I went back into my yellow Tornado. I arrived at Rodeo in no time. I already spotted a hot dog stand at a street corner. Easily, the guy looked like a drug dealer. I drove my car at full speed and ran over the stand. Unknown Gang Member 1: “Hey asshole! Stop dat shiz!” Me: “Sure, I’ll stop the car.” I stopped and got out. The punk didn’t have any weapons, so it was fist to fist. I easily connected with an uppercut punch on his jaw. I kicked him into the gut and gave him a hard neckbreaker. His neck hit hard on the ground. I stomped on his head until he laid motionless. I grinned. Me: “Well, let’s find the next vendor.” I walked to my car, when suddenly, down the street. I noticed the next vendor at the next corner. I got inside my car and sped at him. Suddenly, I hit a parking meter. My car spun and inside of smashing the hot dog stand, I smashed HIM. Me: “Oops, sorry. You forgot the onions.” I then noticed the last. But he noticed me first. He came running at me, full speed. Me: “I don’t have time for this sh*t.” I simply sped at him. He dove onto my hood. He clung onto the hood. I kept going until I reached 55 MPH. I decided to visit my car’s break peddle. The guy screamed and flew off. His back hit hard on a building. He laid on the ground…and just laid there…doing nothing. I redialed the number in which The Leader used to call me. Me: “Well, I smashed the pickle jar on them.” The Leader: “Ah, good job Jon. I’ll have more work for you in the future. Go back to the Unity Station and take care of things.” Once I hung up, it rang again. This time, the caller ID said “Gary”. Gary: “Hey man, listen, it’s Juan. Idiot broke his Tornado again. Ran into a light pole and then broke the brakes. You can imagine what happened after that.” Me: “Ohh…not good. Well, listen, I’ll come over in a sec. You won’t believe what just happened.” Gary: “Okay, coo. Oh, and your brother wanted to see you down at Unity Station. He may have a lead on who attacked earlier. Me: “Okay, thanks.” I hung up and sped out of Rodeo before the cops came. As I was driving, 3 Police cars sped passed me. I shrugged. Me: “The truth sometimes hurts eh?” ++++++++++++++++ Contact points for Jon (kinda like contact points for missions in GTA): The Leader (hidden apartment almost by the bar at Los Colinas) Gary (small house near arena at Playa Del Seville) Sid (Unity Station) Edited August 24, 2005 by Xanarki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blindsk8er6d9 Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 what he said we need our $110 again. My story will be up tonight Yes, I look forward to seeing how we do. Yeah, my story count is 4 and have you added the money for them yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 yes but dont worry read blind i'm not killing your guys once again story will be up shortly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
namechanged170311 Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 (edited) Chapter 1 | Come as they do Screaming, horror spreading everywhere, the look of uncertainty on everyones faces, houses were burning, people were getting threatened with high-powered weapons, there were James's parents, by themselves, no one in the world to help them, a gun was pointed at them, a flash of light, James awoke. James was screaming, sweat was covering his face, a loud sound of an engine was all around him, where was he? What had happened? A calm voice spoke, whispering almost. 'It's alright, it will be the after-affects of the gas I'm afraid,' Spoke the kind voice. James then got a sense of where he was, he was flying inside a heli-copter and himself was lying on a so-called bed. It was really just an uncomfortable wooden seat with a tiny matteress on it. Beside him, sat a face of hope, the one you'd imagine to see when you pass away into another world. She had long brown hair, deep blue eyes and her skin was as pale as I'd ever seen. The woman got up from her kneeling possition and went to the other side of the heli-copter where she got some hot chocolate and brought it back over for James to drink. He said thank-you and gulped it up desperately. 'Please miss,' James asked, still being cautious 'Why am I here?' The lady sighed. 'I am part of the Leone Family Mafia, I thought you whould have known why you're here, after all that you did at Caligula's, but I suppose the gas has given you some amnesia, dreadful thing that is. Anyway, we're taking you back home, despite what my master says, you're so young, I can't let that go to waste,' She explained, looking drowsy yet happy, she was an interesting looking person, despite what James originally thought. James started to speak, he planned to explain that it was all a big mis-understanding, that he never did... whatever they thought he did. But his saving speech didn't even get past the word 'But,'. The heli-copter suddenly started swaying violently. A voice from behind the curtain, the captains supposebly yelled something about heavy turbulence. Even though the woman from the mafia (James hardly knew they existed in Las Venturas) seemed kind, he miserably admitted to himself that she did't really care if he died, when it came to this turbulence, the only thing she did was hold on to something tightly not giving a care in the world to James. Still, James was no child anymore, his fast thinking made him jump as far away to the door as possible and hold onto the railings that were surrounding the outer edges of the heli-copter. The woman, on the other hand, was almost right next to it. The two were holding on frantically, at one stage, James got knocked against the ground, then struggled up, falling over again as he did. More shouting came from the cockpit. 'Chiliad's near here, I'm going to try and land atop the thing,' the captain hurriedly yelled. Surely he couldn't mean the mountain Chiliad, thought James. 'Are you friggen crazy Enzo! That's impossible,' The woman yelled back to the captain, Enzo. The turbulence was getting worse by the second and all of a sudden, the door flew open, the person that James still didn't know what to think of got dragged out, she was holding for her life but there was no point, before James could try and get her to safety, she lost her grip in the ever spinning heli-copter and fell out of sight. At that exact moment, the captain appeared from behind the curtain for the irst time. He lugged a wooden box across the compartment and without any warning, him and the box left James's sight out from the heli-copter. Not knowing what he was doing, James threw himself out of the wrecked copter. The air was cool as James fell, though he didn't last in the air for very long, he could see he was heading for a grim looking ground, it didn't really matter though, he didn't expect to live. Though with a painful thud, he hit the ground, solid as concrete, he couldn't feel a single place in his body that didn't hurt, some places, he couldn't feel at all, liquid was dribbling down him, sweat or blood, he did not know, he wanted to pass out, die even, anything to get rid of what he was feeling now. He did not lose conciousness, just lay there, struggling for his life. James started coughing, blood coming up with it, he needed to do something but the pain was un-bearable the moment he tried to move. So he lay there, on the hard dirt, who knows how long, James guessed hours. Eventually, he atempted to get up, but the truth, he soon realised, was that he couldn't. He needed help, he shouted out a couple of times but no answer. A few minutes later, he could make out a figure in the heavy clouds, it was getting closer, 'I'm saved,' James whispered to himself, feeling optimistic for the first time since the whole ordeal started. 'You,' the figure said. With closer inspection, James realised it was the pilot from the heli-copter, Enzo. He was fairly tall, jet black hair, and had unusually green eyes. Compared to James's condition Enzo looked like a god, of course, he still had a dirty and roughed up suit and was bleeding in one arm. 'I'm amazed you survived, quite a fall we had there, for someone so in-experienced as you as well, hope old Georgia's alright, not putting my hopes up for her though, she wasn't the most tough of types,' continued Enzo, he also had an Italian accent. The way he spoke made the whole ordeal sound like a Sunday walk in the park, this actually made James feel better and more willing to speak, after all, he was still lying in the dirt half-dead. James didn't really know what to say but he came out with something. 'I feel like my whole bodies broken,' 'With good reason, we need to get you fixed up, looks like you've broken both of your arms, you've got a huge gash in your leg as well,' Enzo said in reply 'I'll go back and get the first aid kit that I managed to get out of the heli-copter, that box is going to save us you know,'. He walked away to leave James by himself again who then realised the amount of blood coming from his leg. Horrible thoughts filled his head, What happened to Spike? Will Enzo come back? How long has it been since the event at the casino, seems like weeks ago. Though Enzo did come back, lugging the same box he'd thrown out of the heli-copter with him. He got out all sorts of different things, mainly for his leg, and they mainly all stung like hell. His box turned out to have some food which was meant for the trip in the heli-copter. In it was a small water-barrel and a couple of drink bottles, Enzo gave James a small amount who drunk it up gratefully, after that he reaslised how hungary he was. He managed to get a piece of French stick, god, were they planning to go on a picnic or drop some person they threatened to shoot off some place? 'Can't waste everything you know? It's not over 'till it's over, Mt. Chiliad hasn't seen any visitors for years, not since mountain biking was banned because of the injuries,' Enzo exclaimed, reminding James of the Lectures and his family back in Las Venturas, they were on the other side of the state right now, James wondered if his parents would come visiting him to find him not there, or if Spike somehow got in contact with them, who knows, everything went crazy the moment they walked into that casino. Then Enzo and James heard shouting, it was the woman, Georgia as James now knew, she came into view. The moment she saw the two men, she smiled, then collapsed. Everything caught up to James then, whether it was the lack of food and water or tieredness, or pain, or all of them, James did the same as Georgia, falling asleep, not knowing when, if, he'd wake up. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Story Count: 2 Ungraded Stories: 1 Next Chapter: within 48 hours Edited August 25, 2005 by timstapels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAFool12 Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 No killiing other peoples characters without their consent. It could give you a permanent ban Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 You dont see me killing blindsk8er's dudes. Unless you ask you can't kill no one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Teflon Don Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 Chapter 3 : Rumble at high noon #ALARM CLOCK# « Ah sh*t. » I said in a calm voice to my self. « 8 :00 already, f*ck. » I got up and went to the bathroom. I began to brush my teeth. For once I had the bathroom all to myself. « Yo, Benny Boy. Phone for you. » said Jason walking into the bathroom to shave. I picked it up « Hello? » « Hey double b, it’s G-Dog. How sh*t goin? » « Good. You? » « I’m fine. You got stabed apparently? » « Ya man. Just a flesh wound. » « Yo man, we’re gonna get’m back fo what they did ta you homie! Me, you, Jason, D, Mack daddy and some boy’s from the hood. » « What about Leroy? » « Sammy needs a baby sitter. Know give Jason the phone niggga. » I handed Jason the phone and started eating. Sammy came into the room and sat down next to me. « What’s fo breakfast? » « Cereal. » We finished and then we were off. School went great, and I never heard any more abot the contract, but there were rumours that Sisco and his Homies were gonna get me back. When the last bell rang I looked out the window and saw at least ten mexicans standing outside waiting for me. Sammy went running outside but before he could go very far I stretch my arm out, grabbed him and pulled him back in. « What the f*ck nigga? » shouted Sammy. « See those spics? » I said « Yeah. » « They want to kill us! K so shut the f*ck up when I’m helping you. » « K » Me and Sammy walked to the payphone. When we got there I put a quarter in and called G-Dog. I walked outside and all of them began to waalk towards me. Just then, three majestics drove into the parking lot. The Ballas began to chase the mexicans. They were so scared they were out of ther within seconds. G-Dog came up to me and Sammy. « You wanna lift home gangsta? » « Sure! » I said as the three of us began to walk towards the parking lot G-Dog asked « Why you beefin’ wit dem spics? » « Cause’ I leyed hands on ther boy. » « Why? » « Cause’ he was dissrespectin’ my girl! » « Ha ha! Prop’s nigga, prop’s. » He gave me prop’s and kept walking. Me and Sammy got in the back and G-Dog and some other Balla OG got in the drivers seat. « Double b. » said G-Dog « This here’s my boy B-Dup. He’s comin’ tonight, he can lay quiet a beatin’ on people. Now, Grove street wants revenge for you layin’ hands on there boys and we want revenge for the stabin’ so we’re gonna have a rumble in Glen Park. » We pulled up to our house and got out. When we walked inside the car drove away and I could see G-Dog waving, so I waved back. When we got inside Jason, D and Mack daddy were talking and laughing and remenesing. They said hi, I said hi and I went to my room to get some rest before the rumble. About an hour later Jason came in and woke me up. « Yo Ben let’s go! » I got up and put on my shoes. Glen park was within walking distance so we walked. When we got there, there were at least nine majestics parked on the curb. It was dark and it was starting to rain when about nine greenwoods came in and parked on the curd. I couted thirty five grove street homies. This was the definition of a rumble. The Grove street boys began to walk towards us. I looked at G-Dog who was cracking his knuckles, then at Jason who was stretching. « Grove street puss’! » one of the Ballas yelled. « What you say you dope ass Balla OG. » When they got close enough B-Dup jump out of the crowd of Ballas and hit one of the Grove’s in the face. It had began. I saw one coming at me so I nailed him in the gut « Take that you stupid c*nt! » I yelled. I got hit in the back and I hit the groud face first. I sat up and saw the face of the guy that stabed me. He was about to kick me in the face but I rolled out of the way in time. I got up of the ground and held him away by his neck. I began to punch him as hard as I could in the face when I got put in a head lock by one of his friends. G-Dog grabed his friend and brought him to the ground followed by a kick in the face. Suddenly the Grove street guys started running for there cars and drove away. When they were all gone everyone was cheering « Idlewood, Idlewood!!! » Me and Jason started walking home. Everybody else were going to hit the bar. The walk home was quiet exept the sound of our footsteps. When we got home Leroy was sitting in the kicthen going over some lyrics he wrote while Sammy was asleep on the couch. « Looks like no sign of Ottis tonight. » said Jason « Good. » I muttered as I walked to the bathroom to get washed up. I was so muddy from the fight so I took of my close and took a shower. When I got out I wrapped a towl arround my waist and went to my room. I got dressed and went to the kicthen. When I got there I saw Ottis staring at me. « Thanks for puttin’ me in juvee big bro. » « It was your own damn fault for goin afta that Vago wit that broken pop bottle. » « Ya, well it was you who told them that I lived here! » « the popo’s followed me home. Get over it. » I made myself a sandwich and Ottis went to his room. He went to sleep. « Don’t worry bout him. » said Leroy « He’s just pissed of cause’ he’s been locked up for a year. » « Yeah. » I responded. I went to bed and hoped Ottis would be sent back soon. End of Chapter 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SloStenRacing Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 You dont see me killing blindsk8er's dudes. Unless you ask you can't kill no one Well that is one sh*tty rule. Since each persons story run in parallel dimensions it should not matter if you kill someone in one story because they are not dead in the other persons stories. Who instated this one? It never mattered when I ran it and I don't think Kearse or Sicillian cared either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAFool12 Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 You dont see me killing blindsk8er's dudes. Unless you ask you can't kill no one Correct, I mean if you kill anyone's characters. I'm not saying anything, I'm just letting everyone know the consequences. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
namechanged170311 Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 You dont see me killing blindsk8er's dudes. Unless you ask you can't kill no one Well that is one sh*tty rule. Since each persons story run in parallel dimensions it should not matter if you kill someone in one story because they are not dead in the other persons stories. Who instated this one? It never mattered when I ran it and I don't think Kearse or Sicillian cared either. I agree man, though I'm not planning on killing someone from another story it would be nice to have the oportunity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 no one wnats to see their characters die so that's why there's that rule. Because one story could kill every person in your story then you have conflicts and people start fighting and spam up the thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAFool12 Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 Exactly^ Now get writing. KOLC I am having extreme writer's block so you can feel free to write the next one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted August 26, 2005 Share Posted August 26, 2005 thanks for backing me up GTA ok no more chatting back to stories, btw blind feel free to post your story before mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blindsk8er6d9 Posted August 26, 2005 Share Posted August 26, 2005 thanks for backing me up GTA ok no more chatting back to stories, btw blind feel free to post your story before mine To be honest, I havent been working on one. I was going to let you go and then I would continue my story where you left off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted August 26, 2005 Share Posted August 26, 2005 (edited) ok then i'm almost done anyways it'll be up in like 15 minutes Speak of the devil here it is now. I bring you... Chapter 7: Uninvited Guests *click* *click* The sounds of guns loading filled Tony's car. He looked back to see Sammy and John both loading their D. Eagles. He then looked to his right to see Jimmy taking two Tec-9's out from under his seat. "Woah there junior! You know how to use those?" Tony asked "Shut up and drive" JImmy replied loading his gun. "All right then. Let's lock and load" Tony said making a sharp right. They headed towards the Portland Docks. The Triads had a meeting there once a month. Little did the Triads know that this meeting wasn't going to be a normal meeting. They'd have an unexpected visitor. Jimmy looked around the car. Sammy and John were looking at their guns and talking about business concering the Dog Food Factory. Jimmy looked at Tony. He was tapping on the steering wheel treating it like a drum. There was no music playing but Jimmy guessed that Tony was nervous. Suddenly, the car grew quiet. Sammy and John had stopped talking and were brushing off their suits and Tony had stopped tapping and Jimmy just sat there looking at everyone. He turned back around to see a Triad Fish Van right in front of them. Tony, Sammy, and John were staring at it while Jimmy looked at everyone to see their reaction. "Follow them Tony" Jimmy said quietly. Tony turned to Jimmy then back towards the road. The van stopped at a red light and Tony stopped the car right behind them. Tony looked behind him. Maybe the Triads didn't suspect that there were 10 plus Mafia Sentinels following them with a bunch of men inside loading guns. Tony looked around and then couldn't take it anymore. He opened his door and stepped out of the car. "Where the f*ck do you think you're goin Tony?" Jimmy asked "Those son's a b*tches are done Jimmy. I've had enough of people pushing us around. We own this town Jimmy, now get out and back me up." "You sound more like ol Salvatore everyday Tony, ya know that?" Jimmy said and opened his door. Jimmy got out and ducked his head back inside the car and saw the surprised faces of Sammy and John. They looked at each other then back at Jimmy. "Stay put. Ok?" Jimmy said "Uh-uh no way. We work together now. Nobody gets left behind" Sammy said and opened his door "Yeah that's right kid, I mean how many people could be inside that can anyway. 2 maybe?" John replied and got out of the car and slammed the door shut. The four of them walked up to the van and Tony walked up to the driver's side door and opened it up. He pointed the gun at the man inside and then threw him out of the van. Jimmy did the same on the passenger's side. Tony looked down at the man and he didn't appear to be a Triad at all. "Mickey! What the hell are you doin?" Tony asked "We're infiltrating the Triad meeting. We're your back-up" Mickey replied "Dammit! You're lucky I noticed or you would've already had a bullet in your head! I'm so mad at these Triad bastards that if I didn't look at you you wouldnt be talking right now" Tony said angered "Yo Tony these aint no Triads" Jimmy said looking across the van at Tony "Yea I know." Tony said "Open the back Mick" Mick got up and walked around to the back of the van. He opened it slowly and it revealed more than a hundred cases of TNT. "What the-" Tony yelled "Mick you got enough sh*t in there to blow half the city" Jimmy replied "Gentlemen. This is your back-up" Mick said happily Jimmy, Tony, Sammy and John stared in amazement at the explosives in the back of the van. "Ok guys I got a new plan" Jimmy said and walked back to Tony's Sentinel. He reappeared with a map and pointed to the Portland Docks. "That's where they're gonna be so we're gonna sneak up on em" Jimmy started "Then what..." Sammy asked "Ok Me and Sammy will be in the back of the van getting the explosives ready. Mick you're going to drive inside the warehouse and park the van inside. Me and Sammy will make sure everything's good inside the van. The rest of the guy's will surround the outside and kill anyone who escapes. We're gonna blow those motherf*ckers heads off" Jimmy said "Yea let's do this" Tony said and ran back to his car "Let's kill these bastards" John replied running back to Tony's car They both got in and Tony started the car. Jimmy and Sammy looked at each other then hopped in the back of the van. Jimmy got in and sat against the wall and Sammy did the same on the other side of the van. They sat there in silence until they heard a bang on the wall in front of them. It was Mick's signal telling them to get the explosives ready. Jimmy got up slowly and grunted. Then moved towards the explosives and set the timer for 30 minutes. Sammy did the same on the rest and then walked back and leaned up against the wall again. "Hey Sammy. Even though I've known you for about an hour. If I don't make it outta here -" Jimmy started "Shut the f*ck up!" Sammy yelled "We're gonna make it outta here and we're gonna have a party and celebrate us beating the sh*t outta these no good bastards" "Yea you're right. Let's get these f*ckers and then go back to St. Mark's and get a drink" "I'm with you" Sammy replied Another bang rattled the two. It was Mick telling them they were close and get ready to pounce. Jimmy picked his guns up off the floor and turned the safety off. Sammy slid down against the side and picked up his D. Eagle. They both got ready. Sammy glanced at the timer and so did Jimmy. 10:00 it said. They had time. The van came to a hault and they could hear a door opening. The car moved slowly forward and then came to another stop. Another bang from Mick told them that they had to wait 5 minutes then jump out of there. Both of them waited in silence. Jimmy and Sammy looked over at the bombs again. 2:00. Time to go. Jimmy ran to the hatch and flung it upwards opening the back. Sammy jumped out and Jimmy heard gunshots. Jimmy jumped out and turned around to see two Triad men waiting for him. He pointed his Tec at them and shot. Bullet casings hit the floor making a loud sound. Jimmy turned to see Sammy ducking for cover behind the van. "Let's get the f*ck out of here" Sammy suggested "Yea" Jimmy replied out of breath. "Follow me!" Jimmy came out of hiding and started firing again. He hit two more Triads and Sammy took out one behind him. More Triad men came out yelling in some other language Jimmy and Sammy couldn't understand. "Leones! Leones! Kill them!" One shouted Sammy and Jimmy understood that and made a run for it. They saw an opening but it was blocked...for now at least. Jimmy re-loaded and made his way for the door. He took out the four men guarding the door. They made their way out to see the other 10 Mafia Sentinels in a heated gun fight with the Triads outside. Jimmy and Sammy ran towards the Sentinels taking out any Triads they could find. "Ah!" A voice said Jimmy turned around to see that Sammy had been shot in the forearm. "You alright?" Jimmy asked "Just a scratch" Sammy replied looking down at this arm. Sammy switched the gun to his other hand and kept firing. Jimmy looked ahead and saw some Triads taking cover behind a van. Jimmy ran up to one and knocked him out with his gun and shot the rest. Him and Sammy made their way to the other Sentinels and took cover. They came out of cover to total silence. All gunfire had stopped. The night was quiet and still. Jimmy looked around to see the other Mafia Men coming out of cover. He also saw Tony and John leaning on Tony's Sentinel. It looked like Tony had a broken arm and was cut up probably from falling. He also saw John, Sammy's friend, it looked as though he had some minor cuts and scrapes. He looked around at the others there were about ten guys on the ground, dead. He looked at Sammy and his arm was bleeding pretty bad from getting shot. Jimmy then looked over himself, he had some scrapes on his arms and legs and his pants were ripped at the knees because he dove behind the car. The night was quiet and it seemed the war was over. Then Jimmy remember, THE BOMB "Get down everybody!" Jimmy yelled and everyone hit the floor. They looked out from behind the cars and saw about ten Triads come out of the warehouse. Then it happened. *BOOM* The whole warehouse went up in flames. Pieces of wood from the warehouse flew everywhere and everyway. People were ducking for cover and wood hit the cars and some smashed through windshields. Jimmy looked up to see Triad men flying in the air and some Triads dove off the dock into the water for cover. Then it was quiet again. Instead of being dark though the flames illuminated the night sky. There was nothing left of the warehouse and no Triads in sight except for the ones that lie dead on the cold pavement. Jimmy limped over to where Tony and John was and Sammy followed still holding his arm. He walked over to Tony's Sentinel and fell onto it with a loud thud. "I'm gettin too old for this" Jimmy said trying to liven things up "Shut up" Tony said with a chuckle "Hell of a good job you guys did tonight" Sammy applauded "Yea nice working with you fellas" John said "Anytime, the Leones have your back all the way" Jimmy said "Just gimme a ring if you got any problems" "Yea i'll be sure to do that" Sammy replied extending his hand "Same if you got problems, k?" "Yea" Jimmy said shaking Sammy's hand "Hey can you boys give us a ride back to the Dog Food Factory" John asked "Yea sure just hop in" Tony answered and opened his door Jimmy and John walked around to the other side and both got in and slammed their doors shut. Sammy opened his door and also got in. "You wanna go to the hospital for that?" Tony asked Sammy "Nah man it's just a scratch" He replied "Well here then use this towel I don't want blood on my interior" Tony said grabbing a towel out of the glove box Tony put the keys in the ignition and started up the car. He backed out onto the street and headed for the Dog Food Factory. It was a pretty quiet ride until they got there. No one said a word except for Sammy and John. They briefly discussed tomorrow and such for a little then stopped. When they arrived Tony stopped at the gate "This'll be fine. Thanks for the ride" Sammy said "Ditto" John replied "That's no problem at all. We both got each other's backs now. We'll see you guys around. Drop by Joey's Garage in Trenton if you need us." Tony said "Yea we already talked to him. Nice guy, His girl Misty lives right near me. We watch out for her ya know" Sammy replied "That's good. She's a good girl keep her safe" Jimmy said looking over at the two "See you guys around" Tony said and backed out The sound of screeching tires filled the streets and then slowly dissapated. "Ey Tony. Ya think you can drop me off at my place?" Jimmy asked "Sure whatever ya say" Tony replied Jimmy looked down at the floor then at the radio and turned it on. Double Cleff FM filled the car and Tony and Jimmy both sat back and relaxed. By the time they got to Jimmy's apartment, Jimmy was half asleep and Tony had to wake him up. "Yo we're here kid" Tony said shaking Jimmy "What!?" Jimmy said surprised "We're here dont ya hear anything" "Oh sorry Tony. Well thanks for the ride." Jimmy said opening his door He shut it and looked back inside the car "I'll be seeing you Tony" "Yea see ay tomorrow" Tony said Tony's car backed up and quickly accelerated as soon as he hit the street. Jimmy smiled as he watched Tony drive off. He turned around and walked up the stairs to his apartment. He wondered why he ever took the place on the second floor and not the one on the first floor. He took his key out of his pocket and put it into the keyhole and turned. He opened the door and took his keys out of the lock. He looked around, the room was pitch black. He walked over to the light switch and flicked on the lights. A dim glow filled the room. Jimmy wlaked over to the kitchen tossing his keys on the table and hanging up his jacket. He walked into the kitchen and headed towards the fridge. He opened the fridge to find nothing but some cold chinese food and a soda. He grabbed the soda and popped it open. He walked back towards his bed and set the soda on his nightstand. He took his shirt off and threw it on the floor. Taking off his hsirt revealed a scratch that went from his right shoulder to his left hip. He didn't even bother to check it and instead finished his soda and flopped on his bed. It'd be another long day tomorrow and he needed some sleep. He glanced at the clock it read 2:34 am. That's the last thing he saw as his eyes clossed and he drifted off to sleep. The Triads had been taken care of and tomorrow would just bring more problems. Another gang to take out or some dirty work for Salvatore whatever it was he'd be ready because tonight was the last time the Triads messed with anyone in Liberty City... The End Chapter 8 Coming Soon I hope you liked it...Feedback is welcomed and I can't wait to see your side blind. And johnson. the Leones would like $220 form 2 days of assets...thanks in advance Edited August 26, 2005 by xxnofear617xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blindsk8er6d9 Posted August 26, 2005 Share Posted August 26, 2005 Chapter 5- Fish food As the Mafia Sentinel drove out into the street, I just thought about what was going to happen tonight. I looked in the mirror to try to get a glance at Jimmy or Tony’s faces. I could see Tony’s face. It was stiff. He didn’t look scared but just concentrated. Jimmy looked back at me and I tried to force a smile but I wasn’t sure if I made one at all. My insides were turning. I wasn’t scared either but everything was happening so fast, I just wasn’t sure what was going on. All I knew was that some Triads started a fight and that the Mafia was going to finish it. I couldn’t stand the silence anymore so I turned to John seeing as he was the only guy I really knew. We started talking about the factory and how things were running smoothly. A silence fell between us for a moment and John whispered to me that he wishes that Joey was here. I though about it for a moment and realized that it would make me feel better. I just nodded to him to let him know that I did too, I knew he understood. Sammy looked around again but Tony’s eyes stayed locked on the road. I could tell that he was gripping the steering wheel tightly. Tony began tapping the steering wheel and I kind of liked it. I wished the radio was on but I wasn’t going to say anything. John and I checked over our deagles and Jimmy was loading two tec-9s. After a minute the tapping went dead and everyone stopped breathing. I could see that Jimmy was looking back at us but I couldn’t look at him. After Jimmy turned around he had the same dead stare as the rest of us. There was a triad fish van right in font of us. Jimmy was the first to speak and he told Tony to follow them. Tony turned to look at Jimmy and then back at the truck and drove. I had the feeling that something was going to happen. As the truck kept driving at it’s own pace, the streetlight ahead of it turned red. I was half expecting it to drive right through it, but it stopped dead right in front of it. Tony stopped behind the van and turned to look at Jimmy. I was looking at him. As I looked into his eyes I got goose bumps. The face he had on was unlike any expression I had ever seen before. He looked back towards the van and after another second he stepped out of the car. Jimmy yelled asking what he was doing and he said that he was sick of getting pushed around and that they were going down. Jimmy made a joke about him sounding like Salvatore and then he got out of the car and shut the door. He leaned back into the window just as John and I had started to get out and told us to stay put. It hit me like a 10 pound bag in the stomach. I got sick to my stomach at what I had just heard and I could see the look on John’s face and he clearly felt the same way. I wasn’t going to let that stand so I spoke up and said that we were in this together and that no one gets left behind. John agreed and we both stepped out of the car. Jimmy had a look on his face that looked happy. I think he really wanted us to go but said to stay put to let us know that we didn’t have to go if we didn’t want to. I wanted to go though. Even though we had only just met, I felt close to him and Tony too. We all walked up behind the truck. I went around to the driver’s side with Tony and John went with Jimmy. We all had our guns in hand and at ready. Tony and Jimmy pulled out the men in the front and through them to the ground. I looked down at the man with my gun pointed at his head and I could see the red glare turn to green on his face. Then Tony realized it was his buddy Mick and not really Triads at all. They talked for about 20 seconds but I wasn’t really listening. I was just thinking about what had happened. Then we walked to the back of the big van and Mick opened up the rear. There was so much dynamite my eyes almost exploded just looking at it. We were going to ambush their building and then get out before the fireworks. It was mine and Jimmy’s job to ride in the back and get the bombs ready. Mick was going to drive us into the warehouse and we would have to fight our way out. Tony and John would lead the rest of the Mafia outside the warehouse to fight. Tony walked back towards the car and John walked over to me. He shook my hand and then I realized that I wouldn’t have my best friend with me while I was doing the most dangerous thing I had eve done. He then turned around and started walking to the car to meet Tony. He looked back at me. John: Goodbye. Me: No, not goodbye…..I’ll see ya later. He half smiled and then hopped in the car and shut the door. Jimmy and I hopped in the back of the triad van and sat opposite to each other against the walls of the van. We then heard a knock and started setting the bombs for a half hour. After we set them all we both leaned against the wall. Jimmy: Sammy, even though I’ve only known ya about an hour, if we don’t make it outta here- Me: Shut the f*ck up! We're gonna make it outta here and we're gonna have a party and celebrate us beating the sh*t outta these no good bastards. Jimmy: Yeah, let’s get those mother f*ckers and go to saint marks and have a drink. Me: I’m with ya! I had not liked the idea of him thinking we might not make it but I did feel a lot of love for him for what he was going to say. Right then I knew that he would be my friend for the rest of my life. We heard another knocking and knew that we were getting closer. My heart started to beat faster and faster as time went by. We both grabbed our guns and then looked at the time. Ten minutes. We knew we had time and we sat there not saying a word. The van stopped and I didn’t even flinch. I knew I was ready for this. We kept checking the time and when it said two we both looked at each other and with our eyes, we told each other let’s go! Jimmy flung the door open and shot two men that were waiting there. I took cover behind the van. We knew we had to get out of there and Jimmy led the way. I watched as Jimmy shot two more Triads. Then a guy stepped out behind another van behind Jimmy and pointed his gun at him. My eyes widened and I shot my desert eagle fight into his back. He fell to the floor on his face and lay there lifeless. I heard a man yell to attack us and we just kept moving. There was a way out, but it was blocked. Jimmy took the men at the opening while I shot at the men coming up behind us. We saw the Mafia Sentinels outside the gates and ran towards them killing any Triads we could see. Then a bullet hit my arm and I screamed in pain. It didn’t hurt that bad. I looked down to see that it was a small cut. Jimmy asked if I was alright and I told him yes. I switched over to my left hand and began shooting again. We continued our run to the Sentinels and both dove behind them. I scrapped myself up pretty bad and noticed many others were as well. I glanced around and saw many men dead on the ground. Some Mafia and even more were Triads. I couldn’t see John and hoped he was alright. It got kind of quiet and only screams and a few gunshots could be heard. Jimmy yelled for everyone to get down and we all did. It was then that I noticed John. There was an explosion and sh*t went everywhere. Wood, metal, body parts were flying through the air. The warehouse was finished. We all laughed and joked around celebrating our victory. I shook Jimmy’s hand and we congratulated each other. I asked if he and Tony could give us a ride to the factory and he said yeah. When we were in the car Tony asked if I wanted to go to the hospital and I said no. He handed me a towel for it so I wouldn’t drip all over his car. I talked with John a little bit about what to do tomorrow and other than that the ride was pretty quiet. They dropped us off at the factory and we said thanks. I grabbed a bandage from the office and then gave John a ride to my apartment. He collapsed on the couch and I went to my room and slept in my bed. I could hear John in the living room on the phone telling Joey about our night and then I fell asleep, awaiting the events of tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
9jkearse3 Posted August 26, 2005 Share Posted August 26, 2005 (edited) Well i havent got around to writing another story yet but i dont have a story line that i like so once i get tiem I'll sit down and write one. It probably wont be till sat/sun though Edit: I lied ....Had more tiem then thought so i was able to put this together Moving Day I woke up to the firing of gunshots. In Santos that’s not surprise, but I didn’t plan on staying in Santos much longer. The smell of coffee lured me out of bed. “Good morning mitch.” I said as I walked past Mitch to get a cup of coffee “Were going to san fierro.” I nearly spit my coffee out not because of what Mitch said, but because it was hot. I’m not much of a morning person so I tend not to think things through. “Why are we going to san fierro” “Well last night when you went to bed I was able to get in touch with Catalina who informed me Gary Is being shipped from liberty city all the way out to Las Venturas. Now seeing as Las Venturas is a high profile place and Gary is a high profile man. It wouldn’t be long till the pigs sniffed him out via word of mouf. Catalina proposes we head out to SF and try to set something up there. San fierro is ripe for the picking. You and Gary could go right to the top. All we have to do is wait for Catalina and the Colombians to kidnap Gary then they will bring him to San fierro where we will be waiting and from there its all uphill.” I put my coffee down and pondered the idea. During my days working for the cartel Miguel had showed me the ropes and quite frankly looked out for me. How was I to know this Gary fellow wasn’t a power hungry cartel man looking to get power from someone else’s work. How was I to know that when we get to the top he wouldn’t turn around and try to do me in? Although it had its risks. Getting out of Santos was my first priority. I figured I should worry about Gary later “I’ll go pack my bags.” I said to Mitch as I picked up my coffee and headed towards my room. Ten white shirts, fifteen purple shirts, twenty pairs of jeans, and Kearses bandana were all shoved in a duffle bag in a matter of minutes. I reached under my pillow and grabbed the nine-millimeter I slept with. I thought of it as a security blanket. I gave it a quick look over and tucked it in my pants as I always did. Reaching under the mattress I pulled out a silencer and shoved it in the duffle bag. Looking back on things I never thought I would leave Santos. I mean sure I’d been to Liberty City, Las Venturas, Vice City, and SanFierro, But I always came back. This time there was no coming back. I was leaving Santos for good. I zippered up my duffle bag and heaved it over my shoulder. I walked out the room and out to the car where Mitch was waiting for me. “So how are they gonna know where to find us?” I asked Mitch as I opened the back seat and tossed my duffle bag in. “They will contact us when they get in Fierro. Just leave all the details to me. All you gotta do is use your street instinct bullsh*t and figure how we are gonna make it big in Fierro.” I picked up a pebble up off the street and tossed it at Mitch’s head. It bounced off and landed on the book he was reading. “Asshole” he mumbled rubbing his head while he continued to read. I climbed in the drivers seat and shut the door. It was never so hard for me to start a car in my life. I sat there and stared at the keys that where in the ignition. I wanted to turn them so bad, but all I did was stare “Today would be nice” Mitch said not even glancing at me but keeping his nose in the book. I chuckled and put my hand on the keys. Taking a deep breath I turned the keys and heard the engine start up. “Say hello to a new life” I said to Mitch as I put my foot on the gas and headed towards the train station. The train ride was extremely dull. Mitch fell asleep reading his book. I was just about to fall asleep when a little kid came up to me and asked if he could have my peanuts. I gave them to the little tike and sent him on his way. He reminded me of myself when I was young. Outgoing not a care in the world. I looked over to see if he was alright. He climbed in the lap of his mom and handed her the bag to open. I couldn’t help but smile at the family. Looking back down at my watch there was still another four hours till we would reach San Fierro. I figured I should get some rest so I reclined and closed my eyes. It was the best sleep I had in quite awhile. The shrieking of the train coming to a halt awoke me from my slumber. I looked over to where mitch was and found he had been staring at me “where here” “no sh*t” I said as I stood up and stretched my legs. “Lets get the f*ck off of this thing” I said grabbing my duffle bag from the over head and making my way off the train. Stepping off of the train I /looked across the street and saw the sh*ttiest garage I ever saw. “so what do we do from here.” Mitch aksed me “I though you were the one with all the plans.” I said as I looked around. About 5 yards away was a group of five to six people huddled in a group. I slowly approached them and as I got nearer I realized what they where doing. “ I grew up as a young dude, chillin wit them old cats Couldn't cop crack so I had to slang Prozac f*ck being broke, I'm trying to cop a tan four chop you up like niggaz did pussy in The Sopranos” I stood there and continued to listen to them freestyle, but there was one man in particular that I had my eye on. I could tell he was different form the others he seemed like h had a good head on his shoulders. After awhile they all broke up and I approached the guy I had my eye on. “Hey do you know a good place to stay in this town.” The man looked at Mitch and me “Well I know of a couple of places, but you to look like some cool cats. If you want you can come to my place for a couple of beers. How long ya staying here?” “Well for good, but a couple of beers sounds good right about now” “Alright Im parked right over here” he said as he pointed to a light blue merit. Little did I know this was the start of one hell of a friendship Edited August 26, 2005 by 9jkearse3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted August 26, 2005 Share Posted August 26, 2005 *applause* i liked it blind way to go again, blending the stories. You should've been a Leone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BUYG Posted August 27, 2005 Author Share Posted August 27, 2005 (edited) Update...Stories Graded The Teflon Don: $62 for the first, $60 for the second Xanarki: $68 Tim: $52 for killing someone...you know the rules Nofear: $72 blindsk8er6d9: $72 same story kind of same money 9jkearse3: $68 front page update also i will update story counts later Edited August 27, 2005 by BUYG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pistol-P Posted August 27, 2005 Share Posted August 27, 2005 When are you gonna update the Russians you O-Me-93$.. And My story Count is 5 .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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