AndyGanteks Posted August 4, 2005 Share Posted August 4, 2005 there are some things i want you to know before posting here 1.I will now post IN THE BEGGINING, and first mission OPERATION:TONGUE 2.You can submit yours missions here.But not like "MISSION #2........ blahbbhxbjbbxccd after that you get a phone call..Blahblahblah You just submit a mission,and i will consider it.make some changes(MAYBE),and eventualy put it somewhere in the storyline,if Good enough.Shourly,the storyline i have made up will be changed 3.after a post i will inform you if i consider it.and if i do that , i will inform YOU if i accept it and is it going to be in the storyline 4.My mum is standing above my head and she is so boring at the moment 5.when i post a mission by you.i willwrote like this IDEA AND MISSION DESCRIPTION BY.............. 6.if there is not a mission submission by 2 days i will continue the storyline with second,third mission and more...... 7.Now for the missions GTA 4 the game tooks place at 2003... in LIBERTY CITY(NYC) in VICE CITY(MIAMI) in FLORIDA KEYS in SAN ANDREAS(CALIFORNIA) in MEXICO CITY in RIO DE JANEIRO in LONDON in MOSCOW in DETROIT (CARCER CITY) in AUSTRALIA in ASIA(JAPAN,KOREA,CHINA,Other states..) +Deserts,countrysides,oceans..... CLAUDe Speed.a gye without tongue.he travels to Vice City on a holiday trip with his friend,Don Love.the same day he returned to Liberty City,unknown people have broken in your girlfriends office(MARIA's office) and killed her.just as they exit the building an unknown HYDRA CRASHES INTO THAT BUILDING. he needs to travel all over the world to find who orderd her assasination,and to distroy corupted cops who frame him for homicides all of popular people allover the world in the beggining......... after they return from airport.they go to his apartment in S.vale.Maria is not there.they go to s.island to hers office.suddenly an airplane(HYDRA) crashes into the building leaving no survivors.in police came a Video tape that shows Claude kills maria and puts a bomb while calling a suicide in HYDRA to check everything is okay.They start chaseing them ,but they succesfuly escape to Vice city and they look for help by jamie carrington,the son of Avery. J-jamie location:House next to TommyV mansion mission:Operation Tongue His doctor almost kill Avery on heart operation. Now Jamie wants a little payback.after Claude ends his Tongue operation.he finds the doctor and kills him.he returns to Jamie's mansion. Respect+ 2500$ Tongue earned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyGanteks Posted August 6, 2005 Author Share Posted August 6, 2005 J-Jamie Location:Jamie's mansion Mission:Tornado blow he Go inside jamies mansion.after a cutscne where J wishes you welcome,save to progress storyline. after you exit the mansion,you automaticly start a mission.suddenly a tornado comes and blowes the heck of Vice city.he has to see did anyone survived.He go to tommy mansion,to Colonel C ship,to kaufman cabs,and to airport.after he do that,he sees that only Cortez survived,and airport is closed.a cutscene came where he heard on radio"all the bridges are severly damaged and closed due to the weather in Vice city,airport and many buildings downtown are blowed to the ashes.WHAT A HECK IS HAPPENING!!!!!!!!!!!!1 He returns to Jamies mansion. Mission complete Respect+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F-s-X Posted August 6, 2005 Share Posted August 6, 2005 Pleasy try and type with capital letters and space after , . Otherwise, the story is a little confusing, but I like the way it is going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyGanteks Posted August 8, 2005 Author Share Posted August 8, 2005 J-Jamie Location:In front of his mansion Mission:An old friend Tommy Claude go to Jamie's mansion,but J tells him that there is no buisniss due to the dissaster of the Vice City. He then tells you to mett Old gangsta and his dads pal Tommy V.He go to V's mansion. TV:'Hey kidd,listen,khm,some,khm triads came to mi town and they are using the tornado dissaster to rob Vc and,khm,Print works,sunshine autos.Get mi the money they stollen.Stop them by any meanings.There is an UZi and a shoutgun in backyard,and as the bridges are closed you can take my boat, to travel to downtown. CS:'kay Claude took the guns and the boat to the other side of the city.Then he killed 7-8 triads and took the stolen money.Suddenly a gye on PCJ-600 cames by behind,and shouts him.C is bleeding.He tooks the car and does a drive-By on Triad fool and kill him. Mission passed Respect+ 5000$ Airport is opened,so you can go to LC Claude go to the hospital to take the bullet out and then he travels to Tommy V's mansion for more job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyGanteks Posted August 15, 2005 Author Share Posted August 15, 2005 V-vercety location-Veretti estate Mission:Making the triads pay Tommy is pissed on triads,so he sends Claude to deal with him.after Claude asks him why to kill them ll.He sayd''They wrecked my store in chinatown.Kill them all of them.Vlaude travels to airport,and to liberty city.He goes to chinatown and kills about 20 triads left in the town.He tooks the money they stole from the shop and returns to Vice City. Mission passed Respect + no more triads in Liberty city Mafia shouts you when you are on foot not in car. Tommy called,and h said he has news about Maria hommicide and building dissaster in Liberty city Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kankle Posted August 15, 2005 Share Posted August 15, 2005 Nope no i dont like it, the idea of tonas of citys all over the world, id much rather prefer one country that you could stay in and mess about in in the one area after the games finnished, and the whole idea of carrying on stories frm previous characters i don t like either i thing gta 3 vice city and san andreas make a great delecatly woven together trillogy and i this for the ps3 a whole new 1 whith new characters never seen before and a new area is the better way to go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyGanteks Posted August 17, 2005 Author Share Posted August 17, 2005 well there are one who like ,and one who dont like.i like he storyline.but yes there are much towns.Rockstar did tell the point is making it bigger and better. i will continue mission 5 later.if you want to close the topic-ok but some say that s.Houser is looking here 4 ideas so ... if this is going to be the storylline ...um... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyGanteks Posted August 19, 2005 Author Share Posted August 19, 2005 i wil continue writtib=ng this storyline because i dont have ideas on new trilogy + rockstar is full of suprises. 2.after making GTa 3 they know the next game is going to be Vice City and the trilogy conclusion San Andreas(LOKK AT THE Ray's mission from Gta 3 ''See you in Vice City".They knew it will be in vice and later in San andreas as they mebtioned it earlier.So i think they l make a trlogy in their heads and then lokk for ideas how the game to be better and better before concluding the trilogy. next post will be Continue of my storyline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyGanteks Posted August 22, 2005 Author Share Posted August 22, 2005 V-ercetti location:In front of his mansion misson:Driving the ladies after he returns Tommy gives him information about Marias death where he says that She owed some money to Joei Leone the leader of Mafia.Then his mens killed her and took the money but the money stays in the destroyed building.Who distroyed the building i dont know-says tommy.But please can you just drive my wife and kid to shop i will be thankfull. Claude drives Tommys wife to North oint mall ,and his daughter Anna to ocean Beach hotel.After he droped her she kissed him saying he's a good driver and great lover.Claude is confused but acepts date with her. Mission Passed anna is your storyline Girlfriend respect + Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrrhus Posted August 22, 2005 Share Posted August 22, 2005 No offense, but all of your ideas and your storyline suck major ass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brad Posted August 22, 2005 Share Posted August 22, 2005 too much action at the start of the game... and going to liberty city should be a reward so you MUST put it furthur in the game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyGanteks Posted August 23, 2005 Author Share Posted August 23, 2005 i thought all towns from GTa 3,vice and SA are opened from beggining then you bye a ticket at the airport and get there , and an airport ticket 4 other towns opens later as you progress the storyline. Every town-like London should have its own countryside and be bigger than SA 2 times,and when you get to london(4exple) everything is opend allparts of the town.Later if eventualy a storm hits the town bridges are closed and you can acces all the other towns And Pyrrhus i like this storyline so i dont care what you think about me. : PS:nothing of this has nothing to do with the topic so i'l just continue writing storyline later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brad Posted August 23, 2005 Share Posted August 23, 2005 (edited) yer but theres too much action early in the game. i cant see you as a leval designer ethier. its not very good. use consideration in your ideas and make it build up and reflect the other gta games. your spelling is poor and grammer and mistakes. plus you have been double posting. and DO NOT USE ATUAL CITIES. Name me one game except for the GTA1 2 london. name me one atual city from GTA:3 and up. Edited August 23, 2005 by brrad0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
niteangel´ Posted August 23, 2005 Share Posted August 23, 2005 You gotta put more effort in this man. You make loads of mistakes. And put all of your posts in 1 post ! wth :S I suggest you: Read This Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redarmy Posted August 27, 2005 Share Posted August 27, 2005 Didnt you say Vercetti died in a tornado? Then Claude takes missions from him? Also..how can Maria be killed by someone else when Claude popped her at the end of GTA3? Just wondering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyGanteks Posted August 28, 2005 Author Share Posted August 28, 2005 my mistake.Tommy didnt die after a tornado. by the way i know claude shutd up Maria with a shotgun at the end of GTA3 but i think this i just about humor,and that she isnt dead acctualy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redarmy Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 Oh..so Claude and Maria were just pulling our legs at the end of lll. Ok..got it. Nice to see Tommy didnt die as well. Also...seeing as how Florida is kind of hurricane country..why not replace the tornado with a hurricane? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gtabmx Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 (edited) I have literally absolutely definitely no idea what is going on... Also I read some of your other posts on gtaforums.com and to be honest, I have no clue what you are talking about... ever... No capitals, no sentences are complete, yet no setences are ended, a great paradox. Punctuation is trown out the window, as well as any form of proper sentence structure, grammar, and spelling. My eyes flow through your post while my head is still stuck trying to disypher the first line. All I can say is, "Where did all the spaces go? " If English is not your first (or second) language, then I can understand... maybe... But I'm just giving you a heads up that some of us can get mixed up and not know what you are talking about. Plus, it is very difficult to take this thread seriously or put any effort into it. I guess it's a good idea, whatever you are trying to do exactly, but then again, I'm not sure... Edited August 28, 2005 by gtabmx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gta_crazy Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 v-ercetti Location: Vice city Docks Mission: Mafia or Mouse Tommy and Luigi Goterelli have met at the docks and are thinking of a way to take out Joey and Toni Cipriani coz they're planning to kill Mullan (8-ball) Robson. You meet them there and they decide that you couldsnuff both joey and toni out. You fly luigi's chopper back over to liberty and you are to save at your hidout. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gta_crazy Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 this is it you creep into joey's house and use his girlfreind misty as a hostage, then you find him and kill him. you are told to kill misty. dont. take her to the airport and put her on a plane to carcer city. Then go to toni's house. kill all his guards and his momma. then find toni in the restaurant...DO NOT KILL HIM! take him to luigi's club and he will be sorted out by 8 ball. He decides to let him live. respect+ you're now a member of the mafia $7000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redarmy Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 Location:vice city animal shelter Mission:Vercetti Charities Inc. Tommy goes to the VC pound and buys all the dogs and cats that are about to be euthenised. He then takes them to a hospital for sick children. Perhaps he helps an old lady across the street. mission passed Reward:A warm fuzzy feeling that comes from knowing you have done something good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hogey_bear Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 (edited) V-ercetti Location: vice city airport Mission: this sucks Tommy vercetti walks out of the game because the stroryline is so crap. Reward: no longer having to play this game Edited August 29, 2005 by hogey_bear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyGanteks Posted August 31, 2005 Author Share Posted August 31, 2005 i hate making a storyline... i'm not as good as i thought Rockstar's not going to hire anyone for writing the storyline so why bothering. too bad this topic sucks same as all the other topics with this type why spendingvaluable time for topics like this?? and i m requesting close Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Berkley Posted August 26, 2008 Share Posted August 26, 2008 I love those ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ottae Posted August 26, 2008 Share Posted August 26, 2008 I love those ideas. ... Thanks for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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