johnson. Posted July 17, 2005 Author Share Posted July 17, 2005 Welcome xxnofear617xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted July 18, 2005 Share Posted July 18, 2005 thanks i'll get workin on my story right away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forelli_Boy Posted July 18, 2005 Share Posted July 18, 2005 (edited) Holy whack, so many of them. x_x Could you sign me up for the Colombian Cartel, working at the Import/Export Garages? My first story will actually comprise the two stories I wrote for the last BUYG here. It never got graded. x.x I compiled my previous stories here with a makeshift title, so I know where I've kept them... Edited July 18, 2005 by Forelli_Boy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SloStenRacing Posted July 18, 2005 Share Posted July 18, 2005 (edited) I think like 5 of these are still open and running. This was a bad idea from the start and when I realized that they just breed spam I quit running the one I had. If you are going just copy and paste you might want to put credit where credit is due. I spent countless hours redoing the vehicle charts to accomidate for all the vehicles in the three games. Plus I was the one that brought back the drugs and coded the table and pricing for them and not to mention the time Barguast and myself put into making the hours of coding I made to work within the forums. If you were going to at least try and make it look like you putting some effort into being a good leader you would have added links to the one I ran plus the like 6 others that were opened between mine and yours. Edited July 18, 2005 by SloStenRacing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted July 18, 2005 Author Share Posted July 18, 2005 @Forelli_Boy: Ill add the Coloumbian Cartel for you. @SloSten: Sorry man, ill try and fix that up tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuma. Posted July 18, 2005 Share Posted July 18, 2005 My useless post.....El Corona/Unity Station. Mind if I make up characters? Oh well, here goes. Name: Hazer Age: 24 Mexican Bio: Hazer is a young low-rider, but has exceptional skill in the low-rider contests, winning nearly all of them. Main character. Name: Unknown (as of now) Age: Unknown Race: Unknown Bio: This mysterious low-rider can only be barely seen through his windscreen when he rides up for his first contest, in his custom Slamvan. He won the contest easily. The Aztecas don’t know who he is, but have been on the lookout for a Slamvan with a blue flame paintjob. More character bios to come, when new characters are introduced. Extra info: The Aztecas own some territories and are fighting with the Vagos. Prologue: Hazer and the other low-rider boys were waiting at the low-rider meet, for another low-rider. A man in black rolled up in his red Slamvan and requested a contest. The mysterious driver won easily and drove away, without telling the Aztecas who he was. The Aztecas have been searching for the driver for a week, but no one has spilled the beans. Hazer suspects he is involved with the Vagos or Ballas, to sabotage the Aztecas, and bring them down. All i got for 20 mins of typing. Thats all for now, ill post chap one in a few days..... it ended. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted July 18, 2005 Share Posted July 18, 2005 (edited) Main Characters Name: Ray Johnson aka "Ray-Ray" (Me in the story) Age: 19 Bio: Ray Johnson grew up in Los Santos where there was always bitter gang rivalry between the Ballas and the Grove Street Families. Ray's older brother, Cameron, was involved with the Ballas when Ray was growing up and since Ray always looked up to him he wanted to be just like him. So he joined the Ballas at the age of 11 and started low dealing drugs on the streets until he was arrested for dealing and for murder. He spent 2 years in juvenille detention. When he got out at the age of 13 he was back on the streets dealing for the Ballas. As he grew up he moved up in rank in the Ballas and gained more respect from the entire gang. But everything was about to change at 15 he was arrested and sent to jail for 4 years. Now at 19 he's moved out of Los Santos with his brother Charles and moved into the bright city of Las Venturas. Name: Charles Johnson aka "Crack" Age: 24 Bio: Charles Johnson grew up in Los Santos with his younger brother Ray and his older brother Cameron. 24 year old Charles was raised in Los Santos with his brothers, at the age of 18 he was jailed for 3 years for unknown reasons with his older brother Cameron. Ever since Charles has been known to use crack cocaine on a regular basis, which is how he got his nickname. When a child he was known to be a bully victim which lead to him joining the Ballas for protection, after joining he embraced his gang lifestyle and is thought to have been responsible for the killing of around 6 people, this without conviction. He moved out to Las Venturas with his younger brother Ray to get away from everything that happened in Los Santos and start over. Name: Cameron Johnson aka "Cam" Age: 29 Bio: Cameron Johnson is the oldest of the three Johnson brothers and was the first person in his family to get involved with the gang lifestyle at the age of 10, which led to his brothers Charles and Ray taking a similar path. Cameron started out dealing drugs at his school and moved up in rank until he basically was the leader at the age of 17. Cameron served time with his brother Charles for 3 years in a state penitentiary. When he got out he noticed that the gang lifestyle had sure had changed. Now 3 years later he still lives in Los Santos and is still involved with the Ballas, he is thought to be involved with smuggling and man slaughter although this cannot be proven. Name: Bryan Young aka "Smoke" Age: 25 Bio: Bryan Young is a well respected member of the Balla gang. Bryan aka "Smoke" got his nickname by smokin' over 30 rival gang members in a gangwar and for that the Ballas thought he deserved a nickname all his own. Bryan's younger brother Colton spent time with Ray Johnson in a state penitentiary. Not much else is known about Bryan because he's one of the more mysterious members of the Balla gang. Name: Colton Young aka "Colt" Age: 19 Bio: Colton Young grew up in Idlewood with his brother Bryan, When Bryan got involved with the Ballas so did his entire family including him. Both of Colton's parents died during a drive-by, His parents and him we're walking out of the new 24-7 store when Colton ran back in to buy a drink when he he turned around he saw a greenwood and 3 guys shooting at the store, he ran out the door but it was too late his parents lie dead on the concrete. At that moment Colton vowed that he would find whoever killed his parents and that is why he joined the Ballas with his brother. Colton aka "Colt" got his nickname because he is obsessed with his custom made Colt .45, he never goes anywhere without it. Introduction: Los Santos State Pen. 2 Weeks Ago "Ahhh! It feels good to finally be outta there!" I said "Hell yea dawg! I'd rather be out here than in that sh!thole..." said Colton "You got that right now let's get outta here and get back to our homies." I said "Yea Let's Roll..." said Colton "You mean walk, we aint got no wheels dumba$$..." I said "Shut Up man! you just ruined my good feeling..." said Colton "Whatever let's get walking...." I said 5 Minutes Later... "MAN! We've been walking forever man! Where the f*ck are we?" said Colton "SHUT UP MAN! anyways turn around..." I said "What!?" "Turn the f*ck around...You can still see the goddamn jail from here we haven't walked far and it's only been 5 minutes and - You know what?" I said "What?" Colton asked "Watch this!" I said I walked into the middle of the street and waited for a car, a pretty decent majestic pulled up with some old guy in the front seat. I walked over to his door, opened it and said "Get out of the car!" "Why?" he asked. "Cause i'm gonna take it, and because i said so, NOW GET THE F*CK OUT OLDTIMER!" I yelled "No!" he shifted the car into gear and said. I grabbed him by the shirt and tossed him out. The man landed a few feet from Colt and he laughed and said "Now that's what i'm talkin' bout we got the old Ray-Ray in tha house! Let's roll...HAHA Peace old dude." And we drove off. A few minutes later we could sirens in the background and then they got louder and louder until I turned around and saw a cop right on our tail... "OH SH!T! COPS MAN! WHAT THE?" I said. "PUNCH IT MAN! GO GO GO!!!" Colt yelled. Chapter 1: Car Chase Coming Soon! i hope you liked my intro and characters give me feedback johnson btw chapter 1 will be slow and probably by the weekend i'll post it i have to get my lifeguarding certification this week, be back later Edited July 22, 2005 by xxnofear617xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted July 19, 2005 Author Share Posted July 19, 2005 @Akuma:Sounds good mate, $15 @xxnofear617xx:Interesting, $23 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forelli_Boy Posted July 19, 2005 Share Posted July 19, 2005 (Okay, my stories from REC's thread never got graded, so here's the last one for you to read here. Or should I make the next chapter? Also noticed that the Cartel hasn't been added to the front-page tally?) Part II: Training The roads were virtually empty this late at night. An Elegance Cab cruised quietly among the boulevard toward Francis International airport, the glow of the nearby billboard lights and streetlights seeping into its darkened interior. Its punkish, tattooed driver had a grin on his face, his 'customer' dozing off in the back seat. Without warning, the cab swerved hard left, cutting through the opposite lane and onto an old dirt trail. The passenger was flung toward the right end of the cab, nearly hitting his head on the door opposite. The force almost woke him up. Almost. At the end of the trail lay the remains of an old wooden bridge that jutted out over the river that bisected Shoreside Vale. The bridge appeared to have worn away with neglect, slowly twisting itself into oblivion. The moonlight revealed several sets of tire treads on the remaining planks, fresh from amateur stunt drivers who tried to barrel-roll across the river. Blackened patches on the hillside opposite the river leading up to the projects indicated the frequent result. The cab pulled to a stop a few feet from the bridge. The driver lit a cigarette before stepping out of the vehicle, a sheepish grin on his face. He ran his fingers back through his spiky hair, then approached the adjacent back door. It opened with a muffled click. The cabbie pulled Zeno out of the car, sliding him onto the ground face-up. He pulled out a knife and straddled him, readying the knife with one hand and digging into Zeno's pockets with the other. "All right, let's see what you've got." Zeno opened his eyes as soon as the cabbie's hand reached his wallet. He grabbed the cabbie's knife hand almost instantly, sliding it out of the way before thrusting his knee straight into the cabbie's crotch. It wasn't the most masculine move in the book, but Zeno was no black-belt. The cabbie yelped as he dropped his knife and fell to one side, curling up in pain. Zeno picked up the knife and threw it aside, into the river. He withdrew his wallet and opened the cash pocket toward the injured cabbie to reveal...emptiness. Nothing to steal. He grinned at the surprised cabbie before kicking the punk's face in. Once the cabbie stopped moving he dragged the body down the hill and into the river, too. Zeno dusted off his bloodied sneakers on the ground before heading back to the cab. The keys were still in the ignition. He dropped into the driver's seat and sighed, trying not to inhale too much of the cheap air freshener on the dashboard. He shifted the car into Reverse and backed out of the old path. He gave a quick glance to either side as he hit the asphalt, no cops around, before cruising back up to the garage. The short trip was uneventful save for a little incident at the first red light. Zeno found himself sharing his side of the double-yellows with a tricked-out blue Cadrona. Neons, Angel vinyls, spoilers and bodykits, the works. What interested him most however, were its occupants. The well-trimmed male driver had spiky silver hair and a sleeveless leather vest. He appeared to be smoking pot. Riding shotgun was a smaller, more delicate redhead in a simple tee and jeans. The girl giggled at Zeno while the driver flashed a sneer. Trying to hold back a blush, Zeno tried to concentrate on the stoplight. He pushed the gas pedal back and forth, revving the Taxi's standard V-6 toward redline, but there really wasn't much else he could do. The Cadrona's tuned four could easily pull double the horsepower as the Taxi's V-6. And the fact of the matter was that being 18 years old and driving a Taxi was giving him as much confidence as delivering pizza on a Faggio. The green light had the Cadrona peeling out and speeding away before Zeno could shift the old automatic into Drive. The Taxi pulled smoothly into the Import/Export Garage. Marcos wasn't happy to see his new driver return. "Oh, great. Joo actually made it back." he scowled. "Got your taxi, too." Zeno replied as he stepped out of the car, tossing the keys toward Marcos. The stubby Colombian snatched the keys and stepped toward the vehicle. He looked it over before kicking the front bumper. "Well, it works." Marcos added with evident frustration, as he dug into his pocket to pull out a thin wad of currency. He walked over to Zeno and, reluctantly, handed off the cash. The new - and for the time being - only available driver took a quick glance at the cash. Barely $100. "Joor lucky, cabron. Cuz joor still my driver, and joor getting the night off. But no F***ING way I'm letting joo sleep here." Marcos continued. He dug into his pocket again and fished out a key and a pager, tossing them both to Zeno. He managed to catch both on one hand. "The boss managed to land you a place to sleep. Backroom of Eddie's Boiler Supply, in Portland." "Portland?" "Damn right, cabron. And don' give me that distance crap, joo still gotta be here when I call you to. AIGHT?" "Yeah...sure." Zeno looked down at the ground. It was very nearly sunrise by the time Zeno reached the Boiler Supply. And the young driver was already starting to feel quite drowsy as he strolled into the backalley that the boiler supply was tucked into. He fished about his pocket for the key. As he inserted the key into its respective lock he took notice of a garage door right beside him. He smirked softly, feigning hope that maybe he'd be lucky to find an old wreck inside. Sleep still took first priority though, as he turned the key and opened the door. It took some effort as the hinges had rusted slightly. Zeno stepped inside and found a single light switch, barely illuminated by outside light. He flicked it on and closed the door behind him, locking it for good measure. The place wasn't exactly a suite at a Venturas casino, but it would have to do. There was a microwave, an old TV set on top of a cardboard box, some old magazines and a mattress on the floor. Zeno walked toward the mattress, pocketing the keys. He kneeled before it, swatting the old mattress to clear off any dust. Then he slumped forward onto it, drifting back to sleep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted July 19, 2005 Author Share Posted July 19, 2005 Nice story Forelli_Boy,$60 @everyone: Im making it easier to make money, so your next story will have a slight raise in money then normaly. And i have joined The Columbian Cartel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted July 19, 2005 Author Share Posted July 19, 2005 johnson. kicks BUYG *Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pistol-P Posted July 21, 2005 Share Posted July 21, 2005 Ey Johnsen ... When are you going to put me at the Russain Mafia ( The Atrium ) .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 hey johnson a good interesting or bad interesting haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted July 22, 2005 Author Share Posted July 22, 2005 Good intereasting And ill updated the list in a few minutes pistol-P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 (edited) and i see you ditched us ballas, just playin man ok gotta do my story and i also see under emmet's in GSF the fear is me and that means u gotta take my name off i didnt notice that before or i can do two stories maybe i got time on weekdays haha not i'll only be Ballas so you gotta change the front page Edited July 23, 2005 by xxnofear617xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pistol-P Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 OKay. Should i Just begin makin my story now, or should i wait til the list have been opdated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 (edited) I learned how to change my colors haha oh well useless post Edited July 22, 2005 by xxnofear617xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnson. Posted July 22, 2005 Author Share Posted July 22, 2005 Ill update it as soon as you boys post your storys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pistol-P Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 okay Ill Begin At My Story Now .. But do you know any russain Names .. Because he gotta be russain if hes from the russain mafia though .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 (edited) look some up on the net bro Edited July 22, 2005 by xxnofear617xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 (edited) sorry for the double but i got my new story Chapter 1: Car Chase The flashing of red and blue lights were the only thing Colt and I could see when we looked back. Los Santos' Finest were right on our tail and we knew we wouldn't get away in our beat up Majestic we had to think of another plan or we were gonna be right back where we started...in the slammer. "I said punch it man, let's go, they're right behind us!" Colt screamed "Shut up Colt! And besides I am punchin it but the piece cant go any faster!" I replied "We never gonna lose these cats like this!" Colt said "We're gonna be right back in jail in the same cell and I just got done makin fun of all the 25 to life guys, I cant go back, i'll die!" "Calm down! I got a plan" I said I made a sharp turn and pulled onto the highway. We got on and immediately the bright white lights from the other cars almost blinded us. We drove histerically down the highway dodging cars. Left, Right, Left. Finally we couldn't hear the sirens or see the lights, we got off the highway at the Las Venturas exit. We parked the car in front of a 24-7 and walked in. "Whew! Man that was close! Remind me to never drive with you again." Colt said sarcastically "Shut up! I'm just glad we got away!" I replied "Yea well I wasn't going back to jail there woudda been a shoot out if they woudda pulled us over. BANG BANG!" Colt said in a tough voice "Suuuuuuuure you would've" I joked We came out of the 24-7 to see two cops inspecting our car. We froze for a moment then walked by them. "Hey" One officer said "Yes officer" I replied "Shut up! Is this your car?" He said "No it isn't officer we actually walked here." Colt backed me up "Whatever, get lost punks!" The other said. "Punks? who you callin -" "Let's go Colt" I grabbed him and we started walking again. After a half an hour of walking Colt finally stopped me. "Where the F*ck are we going?" He said "Wherever, we got no place to go man" I said "Let's go back to Los Santos man!" He persuaded "Why not! Let's get walking..." I started "Whoa! Who needs walking" he said as he pulled out his Colt .45 He aimed at a passing Banshee and shot the driver's window out. The driver stopped and fell onto the street bleeding. Me and Colt laughed and got in the car. "This is what i call driving in style" I said I started the engine and turned back onto the highway. "Man I need some sleep" I said When Colt didn't reply I looked over at him. he was asleep in the passenger's seat. "Next time, he drives" I said to myself and kept going. Chapter 2: Back to Los Santos That story was short but i didnt have much time to write it cause i'm booked no free time what so ever btw sorry there's a lot of dialogue and all it's still basically the intro and not present day yet so yea! everything will become clear and you'll get it more action coming soon And since Kerkan was Tril and all i'm the only member of the Ballas! awesome i guess Edited July 23, 2005 by xxnofear617xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychocream Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 hey can i make a gang?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 u can join one look at the front page and post what gang you wanna be in and where you'll be located then write a story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychocream Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 Ok Gang name: Miles family gang Locations: "The docks" Libitey city "The malabu" vice city The Dojo gym- San ferrio The camals toe- Las Venturas Story-The gang (introducing the gang and how they forumed) Name: Ben & Sam miles Age: 32 Home town- Atherstone, England They are both known as "The terrible tiwns" as they are identical tiwns and they have the longest crimanal records in SAPD (San Andreas police department) history. Since the age of 8 they have been crimanals just to support there mom after there dad ran off. When there mom died she left them enoght money to settle down in what was then the city run by the most powerful man called Tommy Vercety. Yes, its Vice city. After many years of loyal service for tommy the twins had built them selves a bit of a rep. They held the record for the fastest pick lock, a car door unlocked in 3 secands!!! As they grew there rep one of the biggest achivements so far was the Vice city bank robbery. This was done for tommy. They mannaged to get 5.2million out of the vault. As a rewerd Tommy gave them one of his well known places "the malabu" club. This was there first building they owned. Before then they were sleeping in a small room in Tommys Mansion. He also payed for the twins to go to driving school were they became able to be get away drives but the only time they could drive is when being tommys choffer. As a couple of months past and a small apartment built on to the Malibu they started to be more inderpendent if they needed a car they used one of tommys as they still never had enoght money to buy one. This was becuase tommy got 99% of the profit made by the malibu. They were happy and settled down in vice city and thought they would live and die there...... Name: Jacob porter Age: 29 Home town: Cacer City From the age of 14 Jacob or "jake" as his friends called him delt in drugs. He lived in a small apartment in cacer city, working for the local Cluck in bell. He had only met the miles twins once thought a drug trade of 100kg of crack !! It has took him a very long time to get it. But he was payed alot for it. So he deiced to put all his money on a 1:2 bet just to double it. The horse he bet on triped over and broke his neck. He was so ferireos he knocked out the police man standing next to him pick up his gun and shot the jocky in the arm with the police mans gun. This gave him a 6 year inprizenment. 1 year after he was out of jail he had a phone call off a unkown man saying that he had paided fro him to travel to vice city to be part of an important project. How could he refuze!! He got on the plane the next day and arrive at vice city. He could see a man dressed in a suit holding up a sign saying " Porter". he walked up to the man and said "im jacob porter, is that who your after" "yes, a limo is waiting for you out side sir" said the man "oh, ok" he said with a confuzed look on his face. He was a bit excited as he had never been in a limo before the best thing he had been in was probly a washinton and thats not that specail. "Were are we gonig??" he asked "To the malabu" the driver replyed. Jake had seen the malabu on a torist program about vice city before so he knew what is was. When he got out the limo he swore 2 familar faces standing on the steps. "Is that Ben & Sam, Ben & Sam miles??" He said "Yer it iz" ben replyed "oh i havn't seen you since the drug trade, how you bin" asked jake "Well, we have are own place now, and we got quite a rep" said sam As soon as he finished speaking a black rancher came speeding past and 2 men lent out the windows firing guns at them. "take cover!!!!" shouted ben. Suddenly a man in a white suit behind them got hit with a bullet straight thought his chest. A police car was just passing as this happend and the police man inside quickly phoned for a amulance. 10 mins later they would rushing down the corridor in the hospital getting to the A&E room. "Whats his name?" asked the doctor Ben qucikly replyed " Colin Wood"...... Name: Colin Wood Age: 34 Home town: ??? He had only joined the Miles family gang 2 years ago and had been a top dog there from the start. He is a x-tank driver for the English army and started in the world of gangs just at the age of 28. So he is a preety newbie to the things that happen. Not mutch is known about his past, he has many secrets not yet been told. Colin Was still unconusis as they enterd A&E. Ben, Sam & Jake were not aloud to enter as they weren't related to him. "So why did you ask me to come to Vice??" Jake said "We would like you to join the Miles Family Gang, We canr't tell you mutch here as there are people around but when we get back we will" replyed Sam. As they entered the appartment they talked over a couple of botles of wine and a couple of spilfts. It wans't till a few days later untill colin was releasted and they started there investigation...... End of story 1 So What do you think?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 no no no at the front page those are the gang's you join ahhh johnson i need help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychocream Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 What !!!??? But you sed.. So I write all that for nothing !!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxnofear617xx Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 not really when johnson puts you in a gang you can do that story go to the front page and scrool down to the gangs any gang that has an empty spot you can ask to be in there and btw arent we suppose to get $50 every story or w/e from our club Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReDeemer Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 Can I take the "Grey Imports" that's russian mafia. I'll take it because I know some russians. In my country they are lot. I will try my best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buzz blast Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 hey, i heard killer ape got banned so can i join grove street and take LB's lock up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychocream Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 can't i make up my own gang tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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