Andyzoot Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 I was recently browsing my hard rive when I came across a script I wrote some time ago. I wrote it as a prequel to Pulp Fiction. It has references to some of the main characters plus an appearance by Marcellus Wallace. If you read this script then watch the first scene with Jules and Vincent in the motel you will see a few links between the film and script. Please enjoy and reply with your comments. Scene opens with Frank Green in his convertible driving down a quiet road at night. His Mobile rings and Frank answers it Frank: Yello? Marsellus: Yo ma man Frank. I was just ringing to see where you are. Frank: I’m just on my way back from a job, why, everything up your end fine? Marsellus: No Frank. It’s full of **** right now! I got some **** been playing with my wife and I’ve got problems with some punk*** boxer who I trusted money on. What happened to the days when I could get a **** with my wife in peace and I could trust anyone with my money? Frank: Hey you know what life these days is like. Back in the 80s you could do anything man. Kill, Drugs, Hookers. The Lot! Marsellus: Yeah I hear you man. Listen, I need you to do something for me? Frank: Shoot? Marsellus: Listen you know us two go back a long way. We were kicking *** together while still in diapers. It’s not a hefty job, just a little visit. But if you want some more Ben Franklins in your hands, you can start with this. Now remember that ***** I said was running around with my wife? Frank: Yeah, go on? Marsellus: It seems he’s been hiding his sorry *** in some motel down in Kings. It’s called the Seven Suns Motel. If my sources are right, he’s on the 4th floor in room 4F. I don’t want you to kill him Frank. That’s my job! Just go in there, have a talk, run him up a bit then tell him I will be paying a visit to him in the not so distant future! Frank: Yeah sure Marsellus. Hey Marsellus say Hi to your brother for me. I haven’t seen Carl in a while. Marsellus Laughs to himself Marsellus: Yeah that SOB has been getting into a lot of trouble lately. Anyway, I want this job done by midnight. I’ll see you Frank. Frank: Yeah sure Marsellus. Scene Cuts to Marsellus in a warehouse Marsellus opens up a freeze box to see a cut up body. The head remains unscathed though. Marsellus: Hey Carl. Guess who I’ve just been talking to? Silence Marsellus: That’s right Carl. It was good old Frank. You see Frank. He a good man. He kept his nose out of my situation with the local police. He shut his mouth and didn’t mention a word to anybody. Unfortunately you did say a couple of things that got your *** into a spot of bother. You paid the price. That’s how my business is run. (shouts) When you **** with the big man AKA ME! You **** with this! (Marsellus holds up his fist) But when you **** with this, you **** with THAT! (Marsellus holds up a blood drenched butchers knife) Anyway Carl. Frank just wanted to say Hi to you. Hi Carl. Bye Carl! Marsellus closes the freeze box Scene Cuts to the Seven Suns Motel neon sign. Camera moves down to see Frank getting out of his car. Frank (To himself): Seven Suns Motel. A bit trampy for someone who ****s my boss’s wife for a living. Frank moves to the boot of the car and looks inside for some weapons. He changes between shotgun, Silenced Uzi, Close combat samurai sword, and eventually sticks with his 9mm. Frank sticks his pistol into his trousers then walks towards the front entrance while whistling. Frank walks through the front door and turns right toward a set of stairs. As he walks around he see’s scantily clad women, rats on the floor, wallpaper falling off etc. Frank climbs the steps until he reaches the fourth floor. He walks slowly down the corridor until he reaches room 4F, the door is already open. He creeps in and hears a women’s laughter coming from the bathroom. Frank slowly opens the door to see a women and man having fun. Frank sticks the gun into the back of the man’s head. The woman notices it and then runs out the bathroom. Man: Listen Marsellus. It doesn’t have to end like this. Why don’t we talk about this like normal civilised pe…….. Frank: Shut the **** up fool! The man slowly turns around so that his nose is right next to the cannon of the gun. Man: Who the **** are you? Frank: I’m Marsellus’s *****! Frank hits the man in the face with the gun and he drops straight away, Frank drags the man out of the bathroom and throws him next to the TV Frank: Wake up pretty boy……………………….I said wake up!.................................... Frank points his gun at the man and he immediately sits up straight in fear Frank: Now then what’s your name? Man: Antwon Frank: What kind of name is that? Don’t you have a second name as well? Man: Rockamora Frank: Say your name in full *****! Antwon: Antwon Rockamora Frank: Now then Mr Rockamora. You know my boss Marsellus Wallace Antwon: Yeah. Frank: You also know Marsellus’s wife too don’t you? Antwon: No. Frank: Don’t mother****ing lie to me you son of a *****! You know everything about that woman. You know her hair type, hair colour, whether she’s white, black, yellow or red, you know her eye colour, breast size, pussy size, pussy colour, you even know where her goddamn birth mark is! Now you’re saying to me you don’t know Marsellus Wallace’s wife!? You better start telling me the truth. Because for every white lie you tell me, I will make sure you have cap in your *** that will stop you from having a **** again! In this room I am God! In this room, I am the dog and you are the cat, I am the fisherman and you are the fish. I have more power than you could ever imagine. When I talk you look at me because right now I am going to treat you like some stray dog off the street. Get up! Antwon: What? Frank: Get up! For God’s sake don’t make me say something twice. I ****ing hate saying stuff twice! Now are you going to comply with me now? Antwon(Nervous): O….K Frank: See Antwon. Now we are on the same term. Now what the **** did you do with Marsellus’s dearly beloved? Antwon: It was nothing I swear. I’ve only met her once and that was at Marsellus and Mia’s wedding! Frank: Did you eat her pussy out? Antwon: What the hell? Frank: Oh for ****s Sake! Frank holds his gun right up to Antwon’s head again Frank: What did I just say? Antwon: Not to make you say something twice! Please don’t kill me! Frank pauses then shoots Antwon in the kneecap. Antwon drops to the floor then starts cursing and crying in pain. Frank: I didn’t want to have to do that Antwon, but you forced me to! Now can I use your bathroom? Antwon continues to scream. Frank assumes yes and walks in to the bathroom Frank(To himself): Damn that was one easy mother****er. I shouldn’t get paid for that. I could do that with my eyes closed. Frank finishes having a piss on the toilet the starts to wash his hands Frank (To himself): Damn I’m missing Worlds Scariest Police Chases for this ****. Now I better get paid for that! Frank walks out the bathroom to see Antwon crawling towards the door Frank: Where you going Antwon?........Oh you want to get out and call for help right? Damn Antwon. If I let you do that I would have Marsellus breathing down my neck with some big old shotgun in his hand. Frank pulls a knife out of his sock and cuts one of Antwon’s fingers off Frank(shouting): Now you’ve really pushed your luck Antwon you little worm. I am up to ****ing here with your ****! Frank shoots Antwon in the other kneecap then drags his body over to the door that leads to the balcony, he opens the door then throws Antwon onto the balcony Frank: Oh boy Antwon. That’s quite a drop for a man with no kneecaps. Hold on a minute…………is that a greenhouse down there? Well that’s ****ed this up for you. Hey Antwon, let me give you a choice. You can either jump down 3 floors and have a whole load of glass in your already crippled body. Or you can have Marsellus Wallace burst through that door and massacre you. It’s your choice Antwon. I’ll leave you to it. Frank walks back through the balcony door and locks it up leaving Antwon on the floor locked outside. Frank leaves the motel and gets in his car then drives off Scene cuts to Frank on mobile to Marsellus Frank: Marsellus? Marsellus: Yeah speak. Frank: Listen the Antwon situation is under control. Marsellus: Good man Frank. It's what I've come to expect from you. Listen if you want you can take it easy for a couple of weeks. I got Vince coming in from Holland in a couple of days. Frank: Vince as in Vincent Vega? Marsellus: That's the one. Frank: Well I'll be damned. I wonder what that SOB has been up to in Holland. I should have asked him for some **** bars. Anyway man, I'll call in 2 weeks! 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Super Rockin' Mr. Magic Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 it's ok but heres the things i didn't like, Hi Carl. Bye Carl! Dosn't sound like something Marsellus Would say. Frank moves to the boot of the car and looks inside for some weapons. He changes between shotgun, Silenced Uzi, Close combat samurai sword, and eventually sticks with his 9mm. Frank sticks his pistol into his trousers then walks towards the front entrance while whistling. If Frank is a contract killer then he'd know what weapons to take into that type of situation. you don't need to show loads of weapons. Frank: Don’t mother****ing lie to me you son of a *****! You know everything about that woman. You know her hair type, hair colour, whether she’s white, black, yellow or red, you know her eye colour, breast size, pussy size, pussy colour, you even know where her goddamn birth mark is! Now you’re saying to me you don’t know Marsellus Wallace’s wife!? You better start telling me the truth. Because for every white lie you tell me, I will make sure you have cap in your *** that will stop you from having a **** again! In this room I am God! In this room, I am the dog and you are the cat, I am the fisherman and you are the fish. I have more power than you could ever imagine. When I talk you look at me because right now I am going to treat you like some stray dog off the street. Get up Sounds alot like Jules' speech to Bret in Pulp Fiction Marsellus: It seems he’s been hiding his sorry *** in some motel down in Kings. It’s called the Seven Suns Motel. If my sources are right, he’s on the 4th floor in room 4F. I don’t want you to kill him Frank. That’s my job! Just go in there, have a talk, run him up a bit then tell him I will be paying a visit to him in the not so distant future! Marsellus wasn't the person who supposedly threw antwon over tyhe balcony it was somebody he sent round there this can be heard in Pulp fiction when Jules and vincent are going upo in the lift at the beginging of the film. It's an ok script but I think it strongly resembles the opening scenes of Pulp Fiction when Jules and Vincent go to collect the briefcase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Guitarded Dude Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Well... It Entertained Me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ganjaflamez Posted April 28, 2005 Share Posted April 28, 2005 there is acutally rumors of a prequel called the Vega Borthers with Micheal Madson character in Resevior Dogs and John Travola's character in Pulp Fiction, yes they were both brothers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darthYENIK Posted April 28, 2005 Share Posted April 28, 2005 there is acutally rumors of a prequel called the Vega Borthers with Micheal Madson character in Resevior Dogs and John Travola's character in Pulp Fiction, yes they were both brothers. Just about to say this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Rockin' Mr. Magic Posted April 28, 2005 Share Posted April 28, 2005 there was a rumour about a Vega brothers film Tarantino has said that he always wanted to do one but he hasn't got round to doing it, and he would only want Micheal Madsen and John Travolta to play the character but as they both died at the end of their films and as they've both become older and look it, I can't see it being made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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