Clown. Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 (edited) this is my first go at making a sig: could you please tell me what you think. happy criticising (could you please be quite 'in depth' with your comments so as not to get a warning for spamming.) Edited April 24, 2005 by Clown. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/189419-this-is-my-first-try/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigitalChaos Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 The animated pic is cool but I do not really like the background. It would be better with an animated background to blend in with it. 5/10. And it is to big for a sig. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/189419-this-is-my-first-try/#findComment-2784060 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clown. Posted April 24, 2005 Author Share Posted April 24, 2005 yeah, i realised it was too big for a sig about 5 minutes after i posted. and i was just messing with the background, so i'm not sure how to do animated ones. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/189419-this-is-my-first-try/#findComment-2784129 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canoxa Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 1) Too big. 2) Stay out of filters, you filter whore 3) Not bad for first try. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/189419-this-is-my-first-try/#findComment-2785649 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Macintire Sniper Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 1) Too big.2) Stay out of filters, you filter whore 3) Not bad for first try. could you please tell me what you think.happy criticising colgate.gif (could you please be quite 'in depth' with your comments so as not to get a warning for spamming.) I think he meant post helpful comments and tips as to how he can better himself rather 3 lines of stereotypical half-assed crap. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/189419-this-is-my-first-try/#findComment-2785670 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clown. Posted April 25, 2005 Author Share Posted April 25, 2005 (edited) It would be better with an animated background to blend in with it. i'm not sure what you mean here is my second try with the same pic. i personally think it is a lot better than the first edit: now i'm wearing my third try. i think it is definately the best. critisise at will.(constructively) Edited April 25, 2005 by Clown. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/189419-this-is-my-first-try/#findComment-2786162 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DiVaio Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 The second one definately looks better. Did you make the drawing yourself? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/189419-this-is-my-first-try/#findComment-2786785 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GroveStGangster Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 The second one looks alot better than the first one.The only thing i saw wrong with your first try it the background. Good job Clown. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/189419-this-is-my-first-try/#findComment-2786860 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clown. Posted April 25, 2005 Author Share Posted April 25, 2005 @divaio, no i did not do the drawing myself (i'm not that good an artist!) @grovestgangster, thanks for your comments, i'm trying and learning as i go along. thanks for all your comments everyone. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/189419-this-is-my-first-try/#findComment-2787082 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazlowrocks. Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Not feeling the scanlines. Try the scanlines in Dex's tutorial in the Tutorial section. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/189419-this-is-my-first-try/#findComment-2787141 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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