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NismoBNR32

[WIP] A-Tecks Spectical

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NismoBNR32

Hi guys! tounge.gif

This is the first car i'm going to show to ya, i'm makin' it for the Arden City TC Mod, this is also one of my first cars and it's about half done so don't be hard on me, just tell what you think about it and make some suggestions please

here are the pics

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Pumpkin Zone
Very awesome, what kind of car is it? I'm not a car person, so I wouldn't know. Is it an A-Trecks, or is that the name you gave it? Edited by Scottendo

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Stefaan

It's a concept of some sort..

Anyhoo, the front looks ok, but work on the back it looks way too roundish.

 

Keep up the great work.

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NismoBNR32

@ Scottendo -> it's a made up car with a made up name biggrin.gif

@ Stefaan -> which part of the back do you dislike? just the bumper or the whole back part of the car?

Thx to both of you for the feedback

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choofa

It looks like a prelude x with a civic x with an R34.. Sorry but I don't like it confused.gif .

 

=Ch00fA=

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Duders

Not to impressed with the design really. You couldh've just made a civic, then modify the rear and front lights. Right now, it just looks wierd in my opinion. The model itself is great though. Great job

 

-duder

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NismoBNR32

@ choofa -> where do you see the prelude in it? confused.gif

@ duder6131 -> it was suposed to be just a "civic like" but it ended up lokin' this way, i'm probably gonna change the rear end atleast a bit

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NismoBNR32

ups! double post, sorry blush.gif

Edited by y4kuza

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Jumper
Great one, front is kinda Supraish for me but it`s advantage (i like supra biggrin.gif)

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choofa

I got the prelude from the back lights... tounge.gif .

Ehh its just me... now I see that the rear lights look more civicish... I only took a quick glimps at it the first time blush.gif .

 

=Ch00fA=

Edited by choofa

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NismoBNR32

@ Jumper -> at first i was thinking about making a car that will be similar to Honda Civic, but the front end really looks Supraish because latter i decided to make it that way because in the last few months i've really started to like Supras very much, it can be a very fast and powerful car, by the way, this just reminded me that i have a video where a guy with supra leaves all kind of that "super cars" like Viper SRT-10, Corvette Z06 and similar miles behind, it was even much more faster then Murcielago, that video was the main reason i started to like supras that much biggrin.gif , ops, i've went of topic a little blush.gif

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D-Structo
Great one, front is kinda Supraish for me but it`s advantage (i like supra biggrin.gif)

what? it looks more like Honda Civic to me. or maybe prelude. but not supra... whatever.

 

nice car man, you're doing it good, keep up the good work. smile.gif

 

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bit_hell

The front bumper is too long in my oppinion mad.gif

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NismoBNR32

@ Destructo -> thx

@ bit_hell -> i like the front bumper the way it is now i wont change it

here are two new pics of trunk audio for ya:

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and a preview pic of a hand made audio accesories textures:

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Mista_G

the car looks ok, the system is cool, but you might wanna fix the space between wheels, they remind me of a bus, the wheels are to close together, you need to spread them out to make it longer so the wheels are closer to the front and rear bumpers, looks really funny how you have it but other then that its not bad, reminds me of a concept civic smile.gif great work!

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NismoBNR32

I've taken Mista_G's advice and made the distance betwen wheels longer,

here's how it looks now

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and the wireframe

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I've also made a small change on the hood, it reminds me of a stock celica hood, here are the pics of it:

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and the wireframe

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the polycount is 5606 so far for the body and the sound system without wheels, they're not final, they're just one of my wheels biggrin.gif

Thx to ImageShack for free image hosting

 

::EDIT::

I won't be making any updates here till tommorow night because I wont be online, I'm gonna work on the car so I hope there will be somethin' to show when I'm back biggrin.gif

Edited by y4kuza

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Bumper3D

Hrmm... It looks it is completely out of proportions.

 

You have to make the wheels bigger. A lot bigger. Not many "sportcars" have that much space between the bonnet and tire. blink.gif

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.::evil inside::.

good work, the front isnt bad, i dont like the back tho, could be a bit more 'defined' and the spoiler doesnt look right, but appart from that it looks the goods, especially comin straight from ur head and being ur first model, or one of smile.gif

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NismoBNR32

@ Bumper3D -> made the wheels bigger

@ ::evil inside::. -> what's wrong with the spoiler?

just a small update, made a part of the interior and made the wheels bigger, here are the pics

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Bumper3D

Looks a lot better now.

 

Keep it up. smile.gif

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.59 Reverse

 

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big wheels dont solve proportion problems.. they really just make the car look more cartoonish and out of proportion..

 

what you should have done is cut down a bit of the body (after making the wheels small again) to make the gap smaller and at the same time make the wheelbase look longer.. shorter bumpers and a rear-shift in the b-pillar would help the sleekness of it too.. along with lowering the rear wing and sharpening up the shape of it, and the rear of the car..

 

a BB prelude blueprint would help the shape of this car a lot.. since that's what the shape is reminiscent of.

 

what are those 2 gills on the rear bumper for? they look to be air outlets... but they also look to be facing the wrong way..

Edited by .59 Reverse

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NismoBNR32

@ .59 Reverse -> thx very much for that suggestion but i think i would be a lot of work, it would maybe be easier to rebuild the car form the ground up, and I really don't feel like doing that, i will finish it the way it was now and I'll use the blueprints for the next car i'm going to make so it'll end up looking better hopefully, about that air outlet, i've forgot to retexture it after mirroring, my bad

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.59 Reverse

it's actually far less daunting than it looks.. all it requires is moving, scaling and uniting..

 

i could do it in an hour or so if you were to trust me with it...

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NismoBNR32

finnaly i've taken some time this weekend to work on this car, .59 Reverse made the changes he draw on pic 2 posts above and I want to thank him a lot for that, here's how the car looks now

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and i've did some interior job, not much but it's something

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hope u guys like the way that interior looks

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NismoBNR32

hi guys, sorry for bumping this one up, but i had to do it, finally some updates, eh? i know it's been a long time since last update, but i'm busy and don't have much of free time to spend on modeling till the school is finished (only five more weeks, can't wait), i went offtopic, anyways, here are the pics:

engine: i'll maybe add some more details, if polycount limit allows me to

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the wheels (finaly, these ones are final):

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build some more of the interior:

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and a new, 3D rear lights:

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please post some comments, suggestions etc.

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choofa

I like the interior and how many polys is the rim? your getting better I see smile.gif .

 

=Ch00fA=

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NismoBNR32

@ choofa -> thx biggrin.gif

the rim with this brake disc like on the pic below is 478 polies

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also did this steering wheel last night, still needs texturing though, i'll create something for it later today, what do u guys think about it?

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it has 250 polies (steering wheel)

:: EDIT ::

please give me some suggestions on how should i texture the interior, leather texture or maybe i should leave it in the color of the car since this one is more somethin' like showcar than race car and i've seen showcars that have interiors painted in the same color as exterior, so I would like yours opinion about that, thx in advance

Edited by y4kuza

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choofa

I quite like the rims... maybe make them textured though... textured is always better smile.gif and the steering wheel is ok smile.gif .

 

=Ch00fA=

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NismoBNR32

I'd like to see them textured too, but i have no texture for them, they are from my head, just like the car, maybe some chrome, gun metal or aluminium texture, I dunno really with what should I texture it, maybe I'll try to make some texture, but it probably wont end up looking good sad.gif

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