GTAFool12 Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 (edited) Sickness nice try on the ending with me showing up at the door but I would have done something like this: After Oddsock and I have gone thru yet another day of Spycraft, we came home to watch tv and kick back. I sat down on the couch and turned on the tv. I flicked the news on to see what was goin down in SA and see the reaction of our latest mission. "Hi, Mike Rotch here with the daily SanAndreas News. Today Citizens were terrified as a crazed pilot crashed into a Brown Streak Train Tunnel. Local Citizen Ivanna Tinkle said that there was an old man hanging onto the plane. But as of the moment only one body has been found." Oddsock was grabbing some Sprunk from the fridge and said, "Sickness what happened." I replied, "Some retard crashed a plane into a train tunnel." "Oh." There was a knock at the door. "Oddsock could you get that." "Fine," he retorted. Oddsock opened the door. It was agent 009. "Hey, 009, what brings you around here?" I looked over, he looked pretty stange. He mumbled something that was to hard to hear. "Are you alright?" Oddsock asked. 009 collapsed to the ground. He was flick away from being wasted. "Holy Sh*t." I said. I got up and phoned the SASN as Oddsock dragged him in. 10 minutes later. Two white vans arrived and took 009 away. I looked to Oddsock and said as the cars pulled away, "I wonder what happened to him?" We walked back in and sat down to chill and watch LCS. Edited March 30, 2005 by GTAFool12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Look dude you asked me to finish the story with you in it and I did If you dont like my work dont ask to be in my storys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 I like the parallelism Oddsock, but as an occasional thing, hopefully not for all the upcoming stories. You need not worry about that. However, my story can not function without my two views, as you can see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlJohnson24 Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 My story:Sindiacco drug trade at Downtown LS warehouse. I woke up with the sun shining through the window and in the next room lay my best freind and my partner Martini,"get up we got a another job to do Downtown,we have to stop the Sindiacco Family Mafia from selling drugs to their suppliers at a warehouse" i said.So we got dressed and ate breakfast then hoped into the Greenwood and went on driving,so i turned the radio on to RLS rap music,i said "we gotta take out the Sindiacco people" while Martini was getting his stuff ready. When we got traffic lights a grey van pulled up next to us and the both me and Martini recognised it then Martini said "OH sh*t its the Sindiacco guys",so when when the lights turned green we followed the van to a warehouse.Both of us got out of the car and we pulled out our 9mm pistols and we saw men in suits holding Sawn-off shotguns,me and Martini got as much info as we could. I took photos of what was happening then i ran inside the warehouse and carrying my pistol in my hand i shot three men down quickly as possible without geting hit, then i shot two more.Martini was staying away from this for now,so i stashed my nine away and picked up two sawn-offs and took out every other guy who was shooting and not geting shot,then Martini pulled out a grenade then yelled "DIE F*CKERS" then i took cover and then only two men remained.And Martini said "DAMN THAT FELT GOOD". Johnny and Andras the supplier were remaining so we took them into interrogation and drove back home to Grove Street and had a few drinks met Sickness at a bar and we got drunk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Truth. Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Ok, my second and only stand-alone mission - next lot will be tied into each other. Mission Briefing – There is a container ship anchored in San Fierro Bay. The people on the boat have taken innocent people in speedboats and yachts captive for going near. Many Operatives have tried and failed to infiltrate the ship, but all have been captured, tortured and killed. Now it’s time to send in a 00 agent. We want you to clear the ship, and leave it empty. Maybe take someone captive so we can get some answers. To do this, you will have your usual SMG and Sniper Rifle, but as it’s in water, you won’t be able to use your car. We’ll have you parachuting from a plane and dropping into the water near the ship, then swimming on. Above The San Fierro Bay, 1900 hours – “Right, 006, we’re at 500 feet above the container ship. You’ll jump out the back and start falling at 90mph. The cold wind will tear apart your face, so we’ve given you this helmet. Count down from 20 and then open your parachute. Glide down to the sea next to the container ship and swim aboard. Good Luck, Ugly.” “Thanks.” I said, opening the hatch. Interlude – Wind rushing up to meet me – hands numbing from the cold – countdown – 14 – can’t think straight – lost count – will drown – got to open chute – pull cord – gliding down slowly – San Fierro Bay, 1910 hours – I landed on water safely and slipped off my parachute. The container ship loomed menacingly above me, like some sort of daemon. I swam towards the boat and looked up and down the side, then found what I was looking for – a ladder. I swam to the ladder and began to climb up the side of the huge ship. The Ship, 1920 – I finally hauled myself up over the railing after what seemed like an age. I glanced around quickly and saw no guards, but I took out my SMG anyway. I began making my way to the bridge of the ship, but a guard was suddenly standing in my way. He raised his gun to shoot me but I kicked him in the abdomen. He fell back and I hit him with the butt of my gun, and he blacked out. I rummaged through his pockets and eventually found an ID and a key card. I’d need them later. I crouched down and carried on through the colourful containers, on my way to the bridge. At the next corner I stopped, because I heard voices. They were getting louder and louder, and I began to hear footsteps as well. I climbed up onto the containers and set up my sniper quickly, then lay down and followed the pair with my cross hair. They turned the corner and I took my chance. Bang, through one, then into the other. Taking out two birds with one stone. I packed up my Sniper and put it back in my backpack, then carried on again. I reached the bridge in no time; there were no guards around. But then I heard voices coming from below, 9 or 10 by the sound of it. I tracked back and reached a ladder leading to the compartments below deck. I slid down and took out my SMG, crouched down and crept along through another set of containers. Eventually I reached the voices, and saw about 8 guards sitting around a fire, smoking and playing cards. Vietnamese, by the look of them. I got my Sniper from my backpack, and set up. I put it on a stand then aimed. I glanced around for an aid that’d take them all out quickly, and I noticed a few barrels of explosives. I picked up the sniper and took a few steps back, then fired a single bullet into on of the barrels. There was an almighty explosion and a fire spread around the containers, several containers were smashed open, revealing small groups of immigrants and Vietnamese gangsters. I saw a few more barrels so I shot them too, taking out the guards. I took aim and killed the gangsters, and left the immigrants, then I rushed back to the ladder and made my way to the bridge. The Ship’s Bridge, 2000 – 3 guards came rushing at me so I took care of them quickly. I tried to get into the cabin at the top of the bridge, but it was locked. Then I remembered the key card. I fumbled for it and got it out, then swiped it in the machine. The door swung open and sitting on a chair, asleep was a Vietnamese man in a pinstripe suit and hat. I bound and gagged him then used his phone to call 2.0. He sent in a helicopter and within minutes I was being airlifted away with my captive. Mission Accomplished Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
51L3N7 4554551N Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Agent: 005 Alias: 51L3N7 4554551N Headquarters: El Corona Train Station (Above tracks) Residence: $120,000 house in mulholland Funds: $1,000 Weapons: silenced pistol, automatic shotgun Vehicles: sentinel, feltzer Miscellaneous tools: golf club (for the fun of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAFool12 Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Ok sickness then delete the part of me showin up at your airfield in your story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Real Gangster no. 14 Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Hey guys I am now gonna Reprint my First few Stories (For money ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mxyzptlk Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Agent: 005 Alias: 51L3N7 4554551N Headquarters: El Corona Train Station (Above tracks) Residence: $120,000 house in mulholland Funds: $1,000 Weapons: silenced pistol, automatic shotgun Vehicles: sentinel, feltzer Miscellaneous tools: golf club (for the fun of it) Agent 005 is taken, you start with $0 funds, and only use weapons/vehicles/tools available in the game at your chosen HQ. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 What Mxyz said, so, this is what you would get... Damn! Oh well, you get... Weapons: AK-47, Golf Club Vehicles: Kart, Sea Sparrow Misc: Body Armor, Flowers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mxyzptlk Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 What Mxyz said, so, this is what you would get... Damn! Oh well, you get... Weapons: AK-47, Golf Club Vehicles: Kart, Sea Sparrow Misc: Body Armor, Flowers Just the blank map... where is this Corona station? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Beats me. Hey, how do you show the SAM pictures? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mxyzptlk Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Beats me. Hey, how do you show the SAM pictures? Mark what you want, and click "IB image link" from the bottom, cut and paste to here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Oh...whoops. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Is Pulaski gonna update?I made a story on page 7 lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexrw Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 (edited) The dead man's back! Agent: Undertaker Name: Alexrw Alias: R.I.P H.Q.: The church in Palomino Creek Cars: Romero Weapons: Nightstick,shovel Funds: $0 Edited March 30, 2005 by alexrw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Officer Pulaski Posted March 30, 2005 Author Share Posted March 30, 2005 yes im updating ive only read yours Sickness and you get $30 not very "spy" like and it wasnt that exiting most of it you just shot from the heli ill read the rest of the stories in a minute and whoever wanted to join on the last page, get a new number Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlJohnson24 Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Cool some updating, have you read my post yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Officer Pulaski Posted March 30, 2005 Author Share Posted March 30, 2005 (edited) YES if you had read the first post instead of being lazy you wouldnt have to post this and annoy people by PMing them for no reason sry i gotta go right now ill update the other 3 stories later tonight Edited March 30, 2005 by Officer Pulaski Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 dude Pulaski you should shut up! You werent here in the begining were you?No!You just think that because MI7 let you make a new topic about the SASN your the boss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Well he sort of is... I diagree with you on that, but I agree that he isn't making too much sense of stories. Sickness's is really great and I enjoyed it. Maybe I need to make a SAN thread...you seem to only accept stories if they were made by....you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 I only accept stories if they were made by me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 I was talking to Officer Pulaski... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 oh k.hehe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Officer Pulaski Posted March 31, 2005 Author Share Posted March 31, 2005 it was a pretty good story but i dont like that all you did was a fly-by like i dont mind if it was action packed and your trying to get through a building of people but yours lacks details you just said you went over a bunch of cops and killed a lot of them if you said you like shot 2 of them then the shot back whatever yadayadaytada more detail Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 31, 2005 Share Posted March 31, 2005 ok 14 year old. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Officer Pulaski Posted March 31, 2005 Author Share Posted March 31, 2005 ok probably a nine year old so doesnt say his name i seriously dont want to have a retarded internet fight with you anyways $25 to Oddsock i think ill give more once you to the real thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 31, 2005 Share Posted March 31, 2005 that made no sense at all ok probably a nine year old so doesnt say his name. thats what you said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Officer Pulaski Posted March 31, 2005 Author Share Posted March 31, 2005 ooooppps all right i meant age to carljohnson $25 really short and not much detail and id understand if you picked guns up from a dead guy but you just found them on the ground and to the Truth $40 it was good except they were sitting around a fire in a boat? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 31, 2005 Share Posted March 31, 2005 Were you trying to say im nine?If so Im not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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