Mxyzptlk Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 (edited) Pulaski update his stuff already. CJ24 and everyone, PM Officer Pulaski when you need something updated. Edited March 29, 2005 by Mxyzptlk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 Don't gimme that look, mister!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlJohnson24 Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 (edited) Ok here it is Agent: Carl Johnson Alias: CJ HQ: Grove Street Residence: Johnson House Weapons:Ak-47,Micro-SMG (Mac-10),Molotovs,Shotgun,9mm Pistol,Spray can. Funds: $0 Miscelleneuos:Scope and Camera. Car: Greenwood. Can agents use dual weapons? That can be put on the 1st page,Hey Martini i'll write a story in a minute with you in it of course as you are my partner. Edited March 29, 2005 by CarlJohnson24 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Officer Pulaski Posted March 29, 2005 Author Share Posted March 29, 2005 (edited) Pulaski update his stuff already. i wasnt reading anything i was writing my own story ill rate your story in about 10 mins cuz thats pretty long Edited April 1, 2005 by Officer Pulaski Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mxyzptlk Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 CJ24, where's the desert eagle come from? You can probably use Sweet's Greenwood to get around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 Mission--Levithian power. Somehow I woke up this morning in the aircraft garage.I got up and headed over to the main building of Verdant Meadows to see I Oddsock was up but he was sound asleep so I fired off a round from my micro smg.He jumped up and yelled "Awwww!What the heck man"! "Wake up dude".I said. We have to get in the levithian right now and head over to the sherman dam and set c-4 on It.We then headed out to the levithian and packed up with two PCJ-600s, four c-4 packs,two colt 45s,a micro smg,and two kevlar vests.We were off to blow up the dam.We got there with a hard packed landing causing the two PCJs to fall on there sides. "You get one side of the dam Ill get the other".I said. "Alright".Oddsock said. Oddsock grabbed two c-4s and one colt 45,he ran over to the generator to set the two c-4s,then he ran back to the heli and covered me while I planted the other two c-4s.Good,We then started to lift off,everything was good until our back rudder was hit by an rpg shell "Mayday mayday,were hit were hit"!I yelled. We got ready for a hard crash landing.Once we hit the ground Oddsock flew to the back of the heli and landed hard on one of the PCJs.Somehow his colt 45 hit the carberator causing it to break. "Damn there gos one of the getaway bikes"!I said. Oddsock pulled out his colts and I pulled out my micro smg,then we put on our kevlar vests.Oddsock peaked out of the side door and spotted three armed men with tec-9s running up oddsock shot 5 rounds into the first man and pulled himself back in the heli. "There two left what are we gonna do"?Oddsock said. Me and Oddsock then nodded at eachother and walked out side by side firing taking both of them out. We hopped on the last PCJ and speed of dodging rpg shells and 5.56 rounds. Both of us looked back while Oddsock pushed the detonate button.The explosion was beautiful,watching all the gaurds fly off and all the armored cars blowing up.We got back and got ready for the next mission. THE END Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 Excellent story man! While it was incredibly short, I still enjoyed it. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 Thank you I'll try to make them bigger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 You don't have to man. You know though, that many short stories tend to be boring and lacking in explanation. You did well though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martini Racing Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 This is that profile thing everyone(Two people) did Name:? Origin:France DOB:?/??/???? Parents:? Notes:Became rather succsessful(sp?)In France, then moved to Vice City in the '90's. Goes by Martini, after the racing company he worked for as a teen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 France? Bleh....whatever, your choice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 hehe... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Officer Pulaski Posted March 29, 2005 Author Share Posted March 29, 2005 $85 for Oddsock and $35 for sickness could someone rate my story on the last page? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 1.) I'm not done with my story yet. 2.) ONLY 85 bucks? MI7 gave me $100 bucks for my first one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mxyzptlk Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 Back to Shady Cabin I would give $40, I liked the part of drowning the dude, ruthless. And you didn't get shot up yet! Lighten up Oddsock, OP isn't MI7 (he actually reads the stories). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Officer Pulaski Posted March 30, 2005 Author Share Posted March 30, 2005 i might give you more you jump back and forth a bit too much like at the beggining you didnt need to repeat everything that was said just before you get $10 more because it was good quality and the length... its all about quality rather than quantity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 MISSION--Apache Caos When we were getting ready from our last mission we got a call from the HQ.They said "You and Oddsock need to get the hunter and cause mass caos over at the SanFierroPoliceDepartment".He said. We hopped in the Hunter and started off.On our way there we did some target practice on some cars and pedestrians with the miniguns. We got there and saw a parade of cops celebrating,so Oddsock open fired with the miniguns and I shot the rockets.The only thing we were equiped with if we crashed was we both had a colt 45 and vest.We shot up all of the cops exept we missed one and he called the Army and requested air support. Two hydras flew extremely fast past us.On there second time around they both fired one rocket each,one missed,and one hit but it only clipped us so we put the heli down in a patch of grass. We got out of the heli and grabbed our colt 45s and started running towards an abandon building,we hid there for a while till the hydras reported that we crashed but we didnt.When they left we walked out of the building and headed back to the airfield,but we had to be unoticed because the cops were still all over us. We were half way there,then a cop stoped us and said "I need to see some I.D please". "Ok".I said and Oddsock pulled out his colt 45 and shot him in the head. We threw his lifeless body out of the car and hopped in. When we got back We went inside to get recovered and we heard over a megaphone "Come out with your hands up"! "Damn the cops"!Oddsock said. I told Oddsock that we would go out the back door and head to the train tracks,so we did.We got there and spotted a police chopper coming,then we looked to the left and saw a train coming.The train got there before the chopper did so we flaged down the train and hopped on.Next stop LOS SANTOS.We got there and stopped by the old Johnson house and got some sprunk and clukin'bell,we also got some sleep. The next morning we were ready to go back to the airfield.We got there and passed out.(Fell Asleep.) THE END Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mxyzptlk Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 All those poor poor peace officers! Their wives receiving a horrifying phone call in the middle of the night... their children having to walk to school instead of riding with dad.... no one to throw the stick for rover to fetch.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 owell there dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MI7 Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Back to Shady Cabin I would give $40, I liked the part of drowning the dude, ruthless. And you didn't get shot up yet! Lighten up Oddsock, OP isn't MI7 (he actually reads the stories). HEY!! I read them (just couldn't be assd to do anything, heh ) Get Connected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 CURSE YOU MI7 I HATE YOU!!! hehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Ahhh, whatever, I suppose I'll continue my story.. I'm listening to that cool song again...yay. Sickness hopped onto the PCJ-600 in the small garage and left immediately, tearing across the harsh desert land. It was nearing morning now. The sun was just starting to peek over the unforgiving terrain, like someone looking over a fence. Within a matter of seconds the powerful superbike jumped from out of the cloud of dust it had created and onto the small old cement road, cutting off a Tanker. Sickness was hell-bent on getting to the HQ as soon as possible. He reached it around 0600, when the sun was fully visible on the horizon. He parked his dust PCJ-600 in the parking lot and ran inside. The lady at the front desk stared at the ruffled and heavily breathing Sickness. Quickly she regained her position. "C-Can I help you....sir?" she asked politely. "Yeah, I'm here for MI7, I'm Agent Sickness." he responded. "Oh, yes, MI7 is out on vacation. He has been replaced by Agent Officer Pulaski. Meet him in the briefing room. The briefing room was in the back of the country club, separated from the rest of the luxurious rooms. Around it was the Armory and infirmary, as well as a few other related rooms. Sickness headed to the briefing room. Upon reaching it, two guards stood at the door. He held up his agent ID card and spoke his mission: Meet Agent Officer Pulaski for briefing on the upcoming raid and rescue mission. They cleared him and opened the door. Inside were many venerated members of the SASN, huddled around a table with several large photos on it. They all stopped and looked at Sickness. He stared back, then joined them. There were maybe twelve agents there. He knew a few. Of course, there was Officer Pulaski, but also Mxyzptlk, GTAFool12, Pandazoot, The Truth v2.0, Simon Crowne, and Martini Racing. The others could not be identified. Officer Pulaski spoke. "So good of you to join us, Sickness. Unfortunately, MI7 is on vacation, so I'm taking over for him. Now look here..." He pointed with a stubby finger at a satellite image. "This is where that transmission from the PA came from. He is definitely in here somewhere. What is baffling is that the triangulation points into the water, by where the tubes are! "Now," he continued. as he drew several scribbles on the photo. "We are going to come in from the directions that the two arrows point from. There is no use coming from the other side. However, from there, we will have an agent launch a remote control airplane fitted with a blue smoke bomb. If it is clear for insertion, it will drop the blue smoke onto the top of the building. This may also blind any guards on top. At this point, a second agent with the remote control airplane will radio in to us. We will be nearby two Raindances. The copters will come in close and we will have to fast rope down to the ground, then assault. Upon securing the entrance, we will split up and fan out, searching for our lost comrade. If you find him, radio in and wait for us. If you find anything worth taking, radio in and take it with you. When we're ready, I'll call the signal, and we'll meet up outside. The Raindances will come and pick us up. Any questions?" There was silence for the most part. Then Myxzptlk spoke up. "Sir, what if something happens to the RC airplane? What if the smoke malfunctions?" "In that case, the RC team will radio in and tell us that this happened. Then we'll go in anyway." "What if we can't go in? If it's too crowded with enemies?" Martini Racing asked. "Then we'll call it off and wait until enemy activity is lowered." "When are we attacking?" Sickness asked anxiously. "In thirty minutes we're going to get suited up in the armory and head out. Any more questions?" he was greeted by silence. "Alright, don't forget, here's the front of the building. Good luck." He said as he pointed at the last picture. As they walked out, Sickness counted 11 agents. So, there would be 12 agents assaulting. Mxyzptlk was walking next to him. Sickness turned to sit on a bench in the lobby. Mxyzptlk followed him. Sickness sat down and faced Mxyzptlk next to him. "Mxyz" spoke. "Hey man, I bet you're real anxious about this. Worried about OdDsOcK too. Don't worry though man. He's fine. If he had enough energy and free movement to get to that PA system, no way in hell could he be in any deep trouble. I feel sorry for the guys who capped him. Anyway, just don't worry, and don't go get yourself killed over this. We don't need renegades going out and disobeying orders and risking our lives. I know you won't but I'm just saying, keep your head. I'll see you in 30 minutes." He got up and started walking away. Sickness poked his head up. "Hey, Mxyz, thanks man." he said gratefully. Mxyzptlk turned around and smiled. TO BE CONTINUED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MI7 Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 CURSE YOU MI7 I HATE YOU!!! hehe Ah hates you too. Get Connected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oddsock Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 i might give you more you jump back and forth a bit too muchlike at the beggining you didnt need to repeat everything that was said just before you get $10 more because it was good quality and the length... its all about quality rather than quantity Well, a lot of people like how I skip from Sickness to myself. It adds two sides of the story, both imperative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mxyzptlk Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 I like the parallelism Oddsock, but as an occasional thing, hopefully not for all the upcoming stories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 MI7 it was a joke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MI7 Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 MI7 it was a joke. Sickness it was sarcasm. Get Connected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 SHES SOME KINDA WONDERFUL YA YA YA YA!!! sorry im bord... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mxyzptlk Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 (edited) MI7 it was a joke. Sickness it was sarcasm. You two are a sarcastic joke. Here's an old video that never got me any cash, OP you don't have to rate it since it's old/uses weapons/cars I don't own. Project BSM Edited March 30, 2005 by Mxyzptlk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickness Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Hey... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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